Ok, I thought I'd go ahead and post a first draft of Blood Ties, just cause I've been working on it and want to get some feedback. I'll probably go back and do more visual stuff, some more comments on looks, touches, clothing and such. But here's my first attempt. Wanted to see if I'm kind of on the right track, though:
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Blood Ties: S5 Ep13 Basic Storyline: Another Buffy Birthday Debacle. The fact that Dawn's the key is finally revealed to Willow, Tara, Xander, Anya, Spike, Ben... and Dawn herself.
This ep has a ton of W/T togetherness. Very couply and sweet. Playfulness, tenderness, concern and danger. A joint Buffy birthday gift from Willow and Tara. And, best of all...TARABUTT!!!
So, on to the W/T goodness:
TEASER
The Scooby gang is gathered at the Magic Box, discussing the Glory sitch. Buffy suggests it might not be the best time for a party with all that's happening.
WILLOW
-- this is exactly what you need! A twentieth birthday party with presents and funny hats and candles you can't blow out! (An adorably cute aside to Tara)
Those used to scare me.
TARA
Me too! (They share a very sweet smile)
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(Later in the same scene)
WILLOW
You know what they say. The bigger they are…
ANYA
The faster they stomp you into nothin'.
BUFFY
She's right. I've thrown everything I got at her, and she just shrugs it off.
WILLOW
Then we have to find something heavier to throw.
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GILES
The way I see it, living in our world is affecting her mentally. She's only able to
keep her mind intact by extracting energy from us - from the human, well, from the
human brain.
TARA
(horrified)
She's a brain sucker?
GILES
She absorbs the energies that bind the human mind into a cohesive whole. But once drained, all that's left behind -
BUFFY
(getting it)
-- are crazy people.
GILES
I'm afraid that's why there's been a marked increase in the ranks of the mentally disturbed here in Sunnydale.
TARA
(haunted)
At least vampires just kill you.
BUFFY
We have to come up with something to stop her.
WILLOW
Tara and I could work on some tactical spells. (In shooting script but not in the aired version) If she's not too punchable, maybe she's not totally invulnerable to magic. (At the time, a lot of people picked up on the "Tara got awfully nervous about the brain suck thing." vibe. Personally, I didn't believe they'd go there. I just thought it was too obvious. This was back in the days when I had those kinds of illusions about ME.)
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Buffy and Giles tells Willow, Tara, Xander and Anya that Dawn is "The Key" that Glory is looking for. Willow and Xander seem especially hurt that Buffy didn't confide in them.
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ACT ONE:
Outside the Magic Box. Willow and Tara are working on a spell, making symbols on the sidewalk. Tara's bent over, wearing a very skirt that, shall we say, accentuates her assets nicely

(TARABUTT!!!... um, yeah, where was I? Sorry, got distracted for a moment there...)
DAWN
Hey! You guys doin' a spell?
WILLOW
Dawn, hey. Yeah, it's an early warning incantation. If anything Hellgod-ishly
powerful comes within a hundred feet of the shop, screechy Siren things'll, you
know - screech.
TARA
That should give us enough of a heads up to hide - the, uh, Key.
WILLOW
We already put one up around your house.
DAWN
Cool. Can I help?
WILLOW
I don't think Buffy would like the Black Arts bumping auras with littlest Summers.
DAWN
Yeah, whatever. My sentiments exactly. Dawn goes inside.
TARA
How can she not be real?
WILLOW
She's real. She's just kinda… new.
More Dawnie bitchin' that everyone treats her like a kid. More Glory looking for her key. Yada Yada Yada.
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Birthday Party Time!!! Evening at the Summer's house.
WILLOW
See? Just what you needed.
BUFFY
You are very, very wise. Now gimmie gimmie gimmie!
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Buffy opens the gift from Willow and Tara- a dress.
BUFFY
Pretty! Thank you!
TARA
We thought you'd get a lot of crossbows and other killy stuff.
WILLOW
So we figured, less killy, more frilly. I just love the fact that they gave her a joint gift. I love how often in this ep we hear them saying "We". They are just such the couple here, and it's great to see.
Dawn gives Buffy a picture of the two of them at the beach, telling Buffy she put the shells on the frame herself. (Digressing for a moment- did this remind anyone else of the movie Dark City, with all the false memories of shell beach?) Everyone's acting all weird around Dawn, it's driving her nuts, and she basically throws a temper tantrum. (way too prove how mature and *not* a kid you are, hon.) Dawn storms out of the room.
Willow, in true Willow fashion, tries to break the tension by picking up the plate near her and asking "Cake?"
So, Dawn sneaks out, runs into Spike, breaks into the magic shop. They read Giles diaries and learn that she's the Key.
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ACT TWO: Buffy, Willow and Tara are discussing the fact that she hasn't heard from Riley since he left town.
WILLOW
Not even a card, huh?
BUFFY
I wasn't really expecting one. No contact with civilians. I'm sure there's a code
name for it. Like "radio silence." It's "greeting card silence."
WILLOW
Sorry.
BUFFY
Maybe it's time for a new tradition: birthdays without boyfriends. It can be just as fun.
WILLOW
Preaching to the choir, here, baby. (Can I just say I love this exchange. Willow's so cute here.)
TARA
Yeah, some of my best - (seeing something)
Oh my God… Tara stops mid-sentence, having seen Dawn in the doorway, holding a knife and bleeding. She's cut herself, hoping to prove by that she is, indeed, "real" if she can bleed. She can't be The Key.
Everyone leaves. Willow hugs Buffy warmly, offering "Whatever you need, just..." Giles offers to stay, but Buffy tells him it's a family thing. (I know it wasn't meant this way, but this line always rubbed me wrong. It just sounds kind of dismissive... anyhoo...)
Joyce and Buffy try to talk to Dawn, who shrieks the infamous "Get out, Get OUT, GET OUT!!!" line.
Dawn's having a hard time dealing with this huge revelation- getting in trouble in school, etc. She overhears Buffy and Joyce arguing about how to handle things, and Buffy saying she's not real. She freaks, burns her diaries, and runs away.
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ACT THREE:
The Scooby Gang are gathered to try and help find Dawn. They split up, hoping to cover more ground.
There is a cute W/T scene that is in the shooting script but didn't make it to the final aired version:
EXT. WOODS - NIGHT
Willow and Tara are searching the woods at the edge of town. Willow scans the night.
WILLOW
Maybe - maybe that way.
TARA
(gently)
We looked that way. And this way, and
the other way. She's not out here.
Willow sags, knowing she's right.
WILLOW
Where would you go? If you felt lost
and alone? Where would you go?
TARA
(a beat)
To you.
Willow takes Tara in her arms and hugs her tight.
Sigh. I wish we'd gotten to see this one.
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Dawn, knowing mentally ill people can sometimes sense/see what she really is, ends up going to the hospital hoping to gain some insight. She runs into Ben, tells him she's the key, and sees Ben transform into Glory.
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ACT FOUR:
Glory and Dawn are trying to gain info from each other. Yada yada. Glory gets bored and decides Dawn doesn't know anything about where the Key is after all (

) and decides to brain suck Dawn instead.
The Scooby gang decides to check out the hospital. They arrive just in time to save Dawn.
Major fight ensues, everyone gets involved in fighting Glory. Tara and Willow do a spell that teleports Glory far away.
(from the shooting script )
GLORY
Is that the best you little crap gnats could muster? 'Cause I gotta tell you - so not impressed.
Before Glory can reach Buffy, Willow and Tara suddenly spring into action, throwing colored dust at Glory from either side. It hits her and clings, staining her skin and clothes. She drops Buffy, livid.
GLORY
Look what you did to my dress, you little -
WILLOW
(Latin)
Discede!
(Be Gone)
Willow slams her hands together, activating her spell. Glory suddenly disintegrates. Willow collapses to the floor, her nose bleeding.
TARA
Willow!
Tara rushes over.
BUFFY
(stunned)
What did you do to her?
WILLOW
(weakly)
Teleportation spell… Still working out the kinks…
BUFFY
Where did you send her?
WILLOW
Don't know. That's one of the kinks…
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GILES
(helping Willow)
That's an incredibly dangerous spell for
an adept at your level.
WILLOW
(wiping blood from her nose)
Yep. Won't be trying that one again soon.
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I love that Tara's first reaction is, of course, to rush to Willow's side. I love the concern and tenderness Tara shows here. On the other hand, like Tara's reaction to the brain suck concept, it's also a portend of darker times ahead. This is really the first time we see spellcasting taking such a tangible, physical toll on Willow. Yes, Magick had backfired in the past, but this ep really seemed to up the "magick is dangerous- physically dangerous" vibe. Willow gets a nosebleed and is physically weakened by the spell.
On a brighter note, this is really a period of the calm before the storm in the series, and particularly in the W/T relationship. Things just couldn't be much better between them. Every look, every touch, every smile, shows how in sync they are. So in tune to each other's feelings and needs. Tara, more and more, acts like and is treated like, a real Scooby. She's found her family *and* her soulmate. Willow's happy, confident, and clearly very much in love. If there was a golden age in the W/T 'ship, this was it... from about Family to, say, Tough Love.
Tracy
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VILLOV
I troost yuu. Hurty flurty schnipp schnipp!
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Tara. Accept No Substitutes.
Edited by: Wiccagrrl313
at: 7/15/02 9:04:40 pm