General poetry and short stories

[pacou]

Awww, that was just two sweet



Yes, a little thuddable too, like mainer said, but sweet and romantic in the first place



Sam, please keep posting and you were right, I really liked this one



Take care Sam



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[pikescoob]

Sam!! hehehe I verrrry much enjoyed this one and I agree with Spence to keep them coming



**Michelle

[ExtraFlameyWT]

Hi! Just wanted to say that I really like your poems, SJ...I wish I had half the talent you do...my poetry is crap...lol. I really liked your last poem, and this one:

Swept away by your stare

Moonlight shines upon your hair

Glistens on your milky skin

Flames of desire lie within

Ready to engulf my soul

I once was empty

But now am whole



I'll keep my eye out for more...



Aimee

It's hard to be precise, though. Alternate universes don't stay put. Sending him to a specific place is like, like trying to hit a puppy by throwing a live bee at it. Which is a weird image and you should all just forget it. -Willow in Triangle

[daydreamer777]

hi sam

thanks for sharing your poems with us

once more i must say that you are a truly

talented poet

glad you've been inspired to write such lovely,

romantic poetry that makes me go

please keep on posting new poems

[SJ]

Thanks for the feedback

Mainer: Thanks I thought it was pretty thuddable too

pacou: It's pretty romantic,glad you enjoyed reading it

pikescoob: Big yay for the little thuddy man

ExtraFlameyWT: Thanks for reading,glad you liked them

daydreamer777: Glad you found it thuddable

[SJ]

Hey Viv you twisted my arm

Here's another poem,a couple of my friends can relate to this too



Amazing

Beautiful

Just a few words to describe

The way I feel about you

This love I cannot hide

Didn't know that I was looking

Didn't know that I would find

A love that burns like fire

The embers I hope will never die

[pikescoob]

Sam!! You have a way with words girl I loved this poem! I'm so happy for you Sam, that you have what you wrote about here *hugs*



**Michelle

[Mainer]

Sam you were so right, I love this poem. I'm so glad that we've all found someone to love, and someone who loves us back. Now let's keep hoping Michelle is right about this million.





~Spencer~

"You can't type what a lesbian is. We're anything and everything. The one thing in common is that we make love to other women. So give up trying to limit us." - Amanda Bearse -

[pacou]

Hey Sam



That was awesome



It's so cool that you guys have all found some real love and very nice poetry, fitting to that



Thanks for sharing Sam



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[Wytchi Grrl]

lovely poem Sam, invokes all sorts



Keep them coming



Wytchi

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Toujours, Pour toujours, Élément essentiel - Saule et Tara

Witchcraft Grrls

[daydreamer777]

hi sam

i like this poem very much. you know that.

i can relate to it

thank you for sharing your poetry with me

i think i'm very lucky to have such a wonderful, talented poet for a girlfriend

i'm very proud of you and your work

i love you sam

[SJ]

Thanks for the feedback

Michelle: Glad you liked the poem

Spencer: Yeah lets hope Michelle is right too

Viv: Your feedback is always appreciated,thanks for reading

Wytchi: Thanks for reading it,glad you liked it

daydreamer 777: I'm so glad you liked it but then you did get a preview

[SJ]

Hey everyone,new poem



Dazzled by your beauty

Captured by your grace

In candlelight

I find myself

Lost in desire

The rapture

Etched upon your face

As shadows dance upon the walls

Our bodies become as one

Moving in a steady motion

From a whisper to a moan

[Mainer]

Wow Sam. I loved this poem, it's so romantic and beautiful. I'm thinking I know exactly who it was written for. and she's a very lucky lady. I can't wait to read more. All your romantic poems are reminding me of Tara, not that she ever leaves my mind, but you know what I mean.





~Spencer~

"You can't type what a lesbian is. We're anything and everything. The one thing in common is that we make love to other women. So give up trying to limit us." - Amanda Bearse -

[SJ]

Thanks for the feedback

[pacou]

Ahem, Sam...



Well, that was a... nice...poem I really liked it...



Seriously, I really liked the words that you used



Thanks for sharing Sam



-Viv

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[pikescoob]

Ummmmm....wow Sam! I loved the imagery of shadows you used Very nice poem! Thanks for telling me you posted



**Michelle

[SJ]

Viv,thanks,glad you enjoyed reading it

Michelle,your feedback is always appreciated,thanks for reading

[daydreamer777]

hi sam



great poem!

very romantic

thanks for sharing your poetry

[SJ]

Hey daydreamer777 glad you liked the poem

[SJ]

Hey everyone

New poem



Sunset over distant shores

Hills and valleys I long to explore

Ripples on lakes of blue

Cloudy skies

Obscure my view

Sandy beaches that stretch for miles

An oasis

When I see you smile

Lightning crackles overhead

Thunder rumbles

And clears my head

As mountain peaks are slowly climbed

Thawing snow as time ticks by

[BethanyB3]

Nice imagery, hope to read more.

*******************************************************************************

"In the evening of life we shal be judged on love."

~Madeleine L'Engle~

[pacou]

Hey Sam



GREAT poem, liked it a lot



Keep writing stuff like that



Thanks for sharing



-Viv-

Yes, I have Keyboard Dyslexia!

[SJ]

Thanks for the feedback

[pikescoob]

Hey, just wanted to pop on here to let you know I liked your poem...my brain isn't worth much recently with all the move plans so here's my boring can't think feedback...I like it!!!!



**Michelle

[SJ]

Thanks Michelle

Your feedback is always appreciated,glad you liked the poem

[Mainer]

Sam, this poem was so beautiful. I'm sorry it took so long to leave you some feedback. I guess all your friends are moving. I really liked this poem, it was wonderful. I can't wait to read more.





~Spencer~

[SJ]

Thanks for your feedback

Glad you read the poem and liked it

[kiwi6969]

great poem loved it......more please





kiwi/teresa

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

[SJ]

Glad you liked the poem,thanks for reading

New poem



Warm summer breeze

Like kisses on my skin

Naked and soft

Like velvet within

Caressing your body

The cool summer rain

Leaves me thirsty

I long to drink from you again

Quench my desire

Devour my soul

Consume my everything

Till I'm no longer whole