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Re: Gwauppo!!!

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 10, 2002 10:19 am

ally: heh, i think i get the picture. glad you liked it! heh, you thought i was kidding when i said i was gonna post this, you shouldn't have put it past me.



thewhiz: hee, i'm glad you liked it. you like beks or think she is a massive bitch? (i personally wouldn't be one teensy bit offended if u said she was...) :D



fidds: glad you liked it, too. i'm getting so many laughing smilies, *happy sigh*





update should be later tonight,

steph





"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Who sponsered career day this year, The Brittish Soccer Fan Association?!" - Xander - What's My Line?
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Gwauppo!!!

Postby TheWhiz » Wed Jul 10, 2002 12:00 pm

Hey Steph!

I didn't think Beks was a massive bitch, how could I fail to like someone who shares my name!! :D

Was great to chat to you!! I should be around later to read the update if you post it!!

B :)



Edited to add: Yipee!! I've gone up to Willowhand!! About time! :grin

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

Edited by: TheWhiz at: 7/10/02 11:02:18 am
TheWhiz
 


update

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 10, 2002 2:25 pm



sorry about that, here's the update, back:





Tara sat silently in the dingy waiting room, not saying anything, or moving at all. All traces of the spell had long since disappeared, now everything was as clear to her as it could have been, under the circumstances.



Being in the hospital was making even more depressed; the sharp smell of disinfectant and bleach stinging her nose. The walls were painted cream, just as most hospitals were and there were those ugly, polystyrene tiles on the ceiling. There were about twenty chairs scattered around the sides of the room, but there was no-one in them. After all, it was, she checked the clock on the wall, 11:56 pm, and eerily silent. Everyone must be in bed, she assumed.



She stared down at the dark green carpet, thinking about that night’s events; Oh, god; let her be ok. I should never have taken her outside, I knew the dangers! Especially after doing that spell. It was like sending a flare gun signal to any magical demons. Stupid. It’s my fault she got hurt.



“Tara?” Buffy asked softly. She was getting worried about Willow’s friend. She was way too quiet and Buffy had spent the last ten minutes watching the Wiccan stare at the floor. Why is she so upset? It’s not like her and Willow are that close.



When she got no answer, she moved to the blond, putting her hand on Tara’s arm and repeating; “Tara?”



“It’s my fault. We did a spell and it went wrong. Then I took her outside,” Tara admitted, her eyes glistening with welled up tears as her body trembled, slightly.



Seeing Tara was at breaking point, Buffy leaned over and wrapped her arms around the blond in a friendly, reassuring hug. Tara pulled back slightly, but then returned the motion.



“Hey, I’m sure it’s not your fault. And she’s gonna be ok. She has to be,” Buffy attempted comfort, though her own worry for the redheaded hacker was almost overwhelming.



After a minute or two of the two blond girls rocking back and forth slightly in a motion of silent comfort, someone barged loudly into the waiting room, followed shortly by a disgruntled voice calling after them.



“Stop running, Xander! This is a hospital, no place for your antics!” the voice scolded. The voice with a distinct British accent and exasperated tone that could only belong to one person.



“Giles!” Buffy cried, a clear note of relief in her voice, “You made it. We haven’t heard anything yet,” she extracted herself from Tara and rushed over to her Watcher, now hugging the tweed-clad man.



“What happened?” asked Xander. “And who are you?” he questioned Tara, not bothering to be in any way polite.



Buffy answered for the shell-shocked blond,



“She’s Tara. And she’s Willow’s friend. She was there at the attack.”



“Really? What happened?” he asked, sitting down on the low wood-grain coffee table in front of Tara, eager to know the details of why his best friend in the world was currently in the hospital.



“Xander, do leave the poor girl alone. She’s already been through enough,” Giles interrupted, watching the scene before him. The girl was obviously distraught and she looked very worn out, although the dull appearance of the waiting room wasn’t improving anything, of course. His Slayer was dirty and she had a small rip on the middle section of her shirt that had a little blood seeping out. She also had a few more marks on her jeans and her hair was tousled. It would be obvious to the most naïve person that she had just been in a fight. And there was Xander, well, he was just irritating. He’d had to put up with him all the way on the car drive over and the boy had been jabbering on ever since they had received the worried phone call from Buffy. Mainly, the Watcher just hoped Willow would be alright. He, too, wanted to know the details of the attack, after all, Tara had been there before Buffy arrived at the scene but he wasn’t going to push.



“She’ll tell us when she’s ready, won’t you, Tara?” he enquired in a gentle tone.



Tara could only nod mutely at the man’s question, her hair falling over her face, slightly, in the motion. He must be Mr. Giles, she deduced from conversations she’d had with Willow. And that would be Xander, she thought, watching the young man get up, exasperated, and pace the length of the waiting room.



On about his eighth pace of the room, a middle-aged, grey haired, plump woman entered the waiting room.



“Relations of Miss Rosenberg?” she asked, everyone in the room paying full attention to her at those words.



“Yes, we’re relations,” Giles spoke the convincing lie, “do you have any news of her condition?” he asked, calmly.



“Yes, would you like me to talk to you in a more private area?”



“Here is fine,” Buffy cut in impatiently from Giles’ side.



“Very well; as you might know Miss Rosenberg took a nasty blow to the head,” the woman started.



Tara just continued to look to the floor, her hands in her lap as a tear cascaded down her cheek to the floor and landed on the carpet with a small splash.



“From what we can tell,” the woman continued, seeing no-one had anything to say in response to her first comment, “there is no permanent damage from this, but you are going to have to keep on eye on her to make sure there is no particularly unusual behaviour or infection in her stitches. She also received a blow to her shoulder and a scrape to her left side. The shoulder isn’t broken but she’ll need a sling to rest it up for a little while. The scrape will be sore, but nothing too serious as long as it doesn’t get infected. All in all I’d say she was very lucky tonight.”



Everyone in the room relaxed, visibly.



“But…” the woman continued, her good natured manner becoming a little pensive. She looked straight at Giles.



“There’s a ‘but’?” Xander interrupted, “What’s the ‘but’?” he demanded, his face once again contorting with concern for his friend.



Tara tensed immediately at the word. She knew what was coming.



“She’s been showing some strange responses. At first, her body didn’t seem to be reacting to anything at all; it was like Miss Rosenberg was in a trance. Then, a little while ago, she began to respond to us, claiming she could see again and telling Dr. Lewis that she could ‘see his true colours’ and ‘don’t worry, she wouldn’t tell anyone’.”



Tara literally breathed a sigh of relief, lifting her head to the woman, her mood brightening intensely.



The spell wore off! She’s gonna be ok! She felt like getting up and dancing around the room, though she didn’t feel it would be appropriate, it being a hospital and all.



“Yeah,” Buffy responded, assuming the woman was talking about side-effects of the spell Willow had done earlier that evening, “She zones out sometimes, but it’s nothing to worry about; we know what to do. Can we see her, now?” she tacked on.



“Yes,” the woman looked a little unbelieving of Buffy’s explanation of Willow’s ‘zoning out’, but said nothing of it. After all, stranger things had happened in this town, “But two at a time. And don’t push her into anything. You’ll probably be able to take her home in the morning; we just have to do a few more tests. Right this way,” the woman walked through the door, Tara and the Scoobies following right behind her.





"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Who sponsered career day this year, The Brittish Soccer Fan Association?!" - Xander - What's My Line?
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Edited by: Loco2 at: 7/11/02 9:12:41 am
Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby Jennpurr » Wed Jul 10, 2002 4:15 pm

Glad Willow is gonna be okay. Pheewww... :)



Thanks for the update, Loco. I'm looking forward to more. I'm interested to see how Willow acts when she sees Tara again. More, soon?



You write Giles very well, BTW. ;)



Jen

-----------------------------------


Willow:
I had too much nog

Tara:
Oh, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Jennpurr
 


Re: update

Postby TheWhiz » Wed Jul 10, 2002 5:09 pm

Great update Steph!! :)

Glad Willow is gonna be ok, poor Tara though-feeling so gulity, it wasn't her fault!

Xander being told off by Giles :lol

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: update

Postby mollyig » Thu Jul 11, 2002 1:52 am

Poor Tara was so worried. I'm glad that Buffy wasn't her usual self-absorbed self and could see that Tara need to be consoled.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: update

Postby ally02 » Thu Jul 11, 2002 2:16 am

Great update but why'd u have to go leave it there!? I hope Willow's not all kind of insane or anything! Grrr Xander is quite annoying at times. Ach well, I wait patiently for more...where's that coffee??



love Aly xxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Re: update

Postby shootingstar » Thu Jul 11, 2002 6:25 am

Wow, I missed two updates darn it!



Yay! You did 'Crappo the retarded shame of the underworld!' man I've never laughed so hard. I think it was the squeaky voice that got me...



Oh and the update was great. Willow's gonna be okay :) Loved the way you managed to get little digs in at Xander through Giles' thoughts teehee very clever :)



Luv Star x

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Re: update

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:26 am

jennpurr: your welcome :) hmm, the more, i have to say, i do actually have a couple more updates, but im too lazy to type them up right away....;)



the whiz: i know it wasn't her fault, you know it wasn't her fault, but she always seems to think it is....



mollyig: well, i thought, 'i've had enough of self centred buffy, i want the old buffy back, godammit!' hense. :D



ally: i left it there because i want to steal away your title! naw, only kidding, i'm not that mean.....what?!.....i'm not!!! *shudder* urg, the coffee, don't remind me.



shootingstar: i couldn't resist his charms! and i couldn't help it; xander's just so diggable...;)



steph





"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Who sponsered career day this year, The Brittish Soccer Fan Association?!" - Xander - What's My Line?
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby fidds » Thu Jul 11, 2002 11:21 am

great update!

poor Tara- i'm glad Willow's gunna be okay :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: update

Postby willntlover » Thu Jul 11, 2002 3:31 pm

No!! you can't stop there! I want to see will call out for tara :)

update soon? i loved the story by the way.



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: update

Postby witchbitchwillow » Thu Jul 11, 2002 5:46 pm

oh okay ive only just had the chance to read this fic. i love the storyline so far and am really enjoying the fact that its mainly Willow and Tara based, as in there isnt very many other scenes with other people in.



im relaly glad that i did read it now. its really enjoyable an i can't wait for the update. thing that i am worried about is, will Willow be well enough to go on that coffee date with Tara?



love ellie x x x x

*thats me as a vampire im so evil and skanky and i think im kinda gay*

*no candles? well i brought one its extra flamey!*

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: update

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jul 13, 2002 5:20 am

fidds: poor tara, indeed, but im sure will won't let her put herself down for long, :)



willntlover: i can and i have, so there! aw, calling out for tara, how sweet.:)



witchbitchwillow: hey, thanks for deciding to read.:D hmm, there may be a few other character parts, but not too many i hope,*g* heh heh, i'm sure they aren't gonna let a demon and a hospital stay get in the way of their coffee date!



steph



i'm a little busy, so i can't really update for a day or two, but it will happen, godammit, it will!

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Who sponsered career day this year, The Brittish Soccer Fan Association?!" - Xander - What's My Line?
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


update

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 17, 2002 1:04 pm

ok, here you go, enjoy:





Tara and Giles now sat in a separate waiting room, this one smaller, with white walls, hospital type lino covered floor and hard, plastic chairs against the walls. They were waiting for Buffy and Xander to come out of Willow’s room as they had insisted that they see Willow first. When they returned, Tara and Giles could enter.



Tara sat on the hard, plastic chair closest to Willow’s room, anxiously waiting to see the redhead who had twanged her heartstrings. They had so much to discuss, and she was worried sick despite the fact that she knew Willow should be fine.



Giles sat next to her, his facial expression giving the impression that he was in deep thought.



If I tell him what happened, I might not have to tell everyone, he might do it for me…. Tara thought, and anyway, it might use up some time while we are waiting, if nothing else,



“Mr. Giles?” she asked.



The older man blinked twice before lifting his head to Tara, “Yes?”



“U-um, tonight, me and W-Willow did a spell. One to see a-auras,” Tara stuttered, but kept going; if she didn’t say this now, she would have to speak to the whole group about it, and there were more than just Buffy and Xander, even if they weren’t here now. She began to wring her fingers, “And the spell’s supposed to make you feel a little, er, h-high. But Willow was r-really out of it, so I started to take her back to her dorm room and this demon thingy jumped out in front of us. Will tried to stun it, magically, but something went wrong and she just zapped this tree, that’s how she got hurt: a branch b-broke off and hit her. Buffy saved us.” Tara exhaled, the story was told.



“Dear Lord! So this demon may have rendered Willow effectively powerless against him? Ill-treated her magics? What did it look like?” Giles asked, his eyes lighting up the teensiest bit, this was his territory.



“It was kind of, um, greeny-brown, with horns. And a tail. It had these blue s-spikes running down it’s back. And it teleported.”



“It teleported?” Giles repeated, his well-trained mind already thinking up explanations and possibilities. “When we get home, we must research this. Thank you for sharing the events with me, this may prove to be vital.”



When he saw the requesting, slightly pleading look in the girl’s eyes, he realised what she wanted of him. “I’ll tell the others, don’t worry about explaining to them,” he offered with a small smile.



Tara felt very relieved. She slumped slightly in the chair and stopped wringing her fingers. “Thank you,” she told him, truly grateful.



“You are quite welcome,” Giles replied.



"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby TheWhiz » Wed Jul 17, 2002 1:15 pm

Told you I'd reply, see you aren't the last person to have posted now :grin



Lovely update- as they short but sweet!! Nice interaction between Tara & Giles. Hope they find the demon... Go Giles, go & research!!

Look forward to reading the upcoming parts!! :)

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: update

Postby Jennpurr » Wed Jul 17, 2002 1:43 pm

I loved the Tara/Giles interaction. I wish we could have seen more of it on the show. I like how he assumed what Tara wanted him to do and just called her on it.



But... more, soon?? I can't wait for Tara to talk to Willow. :( I hope she's okay.



Jen

-----------------------------------


"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

Jennpurr
 


update

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 17, 2002 1:53 pm

ok, what the fuck? how did this happen? urm, i'll just, erm.....





"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Edited by: Loco2 at: 7/17/02 12:58:31 pm
Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby shootingstar » Wed Jul 17, 2002 2:11 pm

A good (although slightly short) update. I agree with Jen I wish we could have seen more Giles/Tara interaction..



And how did what happen?



Luv star x

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Re: update

Postby fidds » Wed Jul 17, 2002 2:22 pm

great update :)

i also liked the Tara/Giles interaction :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: update

Postby jdcioffi » Wed Jul 17, 2002 2:24 pm

Good interaction -- I like Giles. He's very ... uhm, English.



LOL

JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


Re: update

Postby spazz07 » Wed Jul 17, 2002 3:09 pm

I would like some more Tara and Giles interaction but i would also like to see Tara going to see Willow. Keep up the good work :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: update

Postby ally02 » Wed Jul 17, 2002 3:17 pm

Ahh noo! That's a teeny weeny update!! I STILL dont know if Willow is going to act weird around Tara now or if she's gonna have like any mental problems cos of the blow to her head....argh too many questions!! Need more soon, like soon soon!!



love Aly xxx

"This whole us things is...bleh!" Willow to Xander in Lover's Walk

ally02
 


Re: update

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 17, 2002 3:28 pm

wow, lots of replies, and it was short. thank you all;



thewhiz: yay! not last anymore, :D erm, did you just say 'go research'? now that's just not normal....



jennpurr: glad you liked it. i, too, didn't feel there was enough of it on the show, hense. tara will talk to will soon, i promise, :D



shootingstar: i know...the shortness, but i couldn't really drag that one out too much. ;) and 'that' was that it double posted, with like a half hour's difference! hmm, curious....;)



fidds: glad you liked it. but soon there will be tara/willow interaction, honest, :)



jdcioffi: yeah, i also like the uh, englishness of him. i mean, how often do you see that in a person? ;)



spazz07: the seeing of willow will commense shortly. thanks, i'll try, :)



ally: ech, i'm too tired to reply to that! i'll try again tomorrow. ;)



thank you all for reading and replying, it is muchly appreciated,

steph









"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby willntlover » Wed Jul 17, 2002 3:37 pm

Awww. Tara was all stuttery. :sigh Anyway, nice update, but I'm still waiting for Willow calling out for Tara!



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: update

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 18, 2002 2:25 pm

willntlover: ach! my fic results in sighs. *sigh* :grin and you'll get your willow waking moment....soon, i promise...:D



ally: :shock you sure are hard to reply to...... erm. hee hee, next update will be teenier! urm, you mean like you/me mental problems? 'cos i couldn't do that to her :grin







and becky, yeah, you, if you read this and laughed...then...well.....i show you my angerhands!!! :rage



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Jul 18, 2002 2:42 pm

Quote:
jennpurr: glad you liked it. i, too, didn't feel there was enough of it on the show, hense. tara will talk to will soon, i promise




Yes, I did. :)



I just miss Giles, period. I hope he's in season 7 for more than one episode. :(



Good. Willow and Tara need to talk. I'm curious to see how they are with each other. Thank you.



Jen

-----------------------------------


"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

Jennpurr
 


Re: update

Postby ally02 » Thu Jul 18, 2002 3:20 pm

Mental problems!! Me!! Pah!! no you must be mistaking me for someone else...Alysandro...she's my evil insane twin...in leather :p hmmm where did I get that from???



love Aly WHO IS STILL WAITING FOR AN UPDATE not that im hinting or anything.



Also anger hands: What the fuck!!??



Wooohooo I'm Willowhand!!

"This whole us things is...bleh!" Willow to Xander in Lover's Walk

Edited by: ally02 at: 7/18/02 2:22:07 pm
ally02
 


Re: update

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 18, 2002 3:35 pm

jenn: hee hee, am i to take it that you miss giles? well...me too. and he so better be in season 7, or i will...er...glare angrily at the screen or something...hmm....leaving. :grin



ally: wonderful smilies! congrats on the willowhand! and hee hee, i already explained angerhands! you would have thought it was something out of the ordinary or something! :spin and i think this will get people even wearier of us.....hmm....well at least i haven't been drinking coffee made with half a jar of granules again....



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: update

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Jul 18, 2002 4:12 pm

Yes, I miss Papa Giles. :cry But, it's okay. I'm getting my fix of Giles in the lovely RW's fic. :) He's kinda essential, I think.



And I'll glare right along with you. Damn Joss!! He needs his ass kicked.



Hee.. I'm with Aly. More, More, More, More, More, More!!!! :p



Jen

-----------------------------------


"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

Jennpurr
 


Re: update

Postby xita » Thu Jul 18, 2002 5:39 pm

Oh I just caught up with all this, I must say I loved Gwauppo :p . And the last updates were great, poor Tara feeling guilty but Willow's ok. Still want to see how Willow reacts to Tara now that the spell has worn off.

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"Oooh Xita!" - Amber Benson

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