The Kitten, the Witches and the Bad Wardrobe Willow & Tara Forever

by **tommo** » Tue Mar 19, 2002 11:52 pm

quote:
Originally posted by The Rose:
I guess I'm not into the voyeurism.

But you still read it.

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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...quote:

by **Rally** » Tue Mar 19, 2002 11:58 pm

Thank you Ruth, it was very very nice.

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No, please. I mean, tell me if I said something wrong otherwise I know I'll say it again. Probably often and in public.

by **dreiser** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:04 am

i'm more into the cages but voyeurism, especially written by the ruth is spiffy.

nic

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clique me, baby. clique me hard.

by **maudmac** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:09 am

Fantastic. Awesome. As ever.

I totally get the dancing on the bondage/not bondage line. It worked for me. Yep. The entire whole point being the eroticism of the barrier that keeps them from touching and how it not only doesn't diminish their bond, but actually strengthens it.

And I always have thought that Willow and Tara got up to some distinctly nonvanilla stuff. (I mean, shy smiles and all "Baby" and "Sweetie" on the streets and sweating, groaning, and "Fuck me!" in the sheets.)

Ruth, I love the way you use teeth. I don't have any idea if it's intentional, or if it's just my own sensitivity to teeth issues. I love the way someone's always chewing on her lip with desire or frustration or concentration. Oh, and, um, the finger biting.

I, uh, really like teeth. I love how they introduce a counterpoint to the softness of lips, necks, nipples,...(ahem)... etc. It's naughty.

*gasps, realizes she has yet again outed herself as a biting freak, and commences to relurk*

by **neta** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:11 am

OMG. *sitting at desk with mouth wide open staring at the comp. screen.*

by **SciFiAcid** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:52 am

Bloody hell. That's simply fabulous Ruth. I love how you show the trust in their relationship. Gawd I love them... I love you... I love this fic... I love my cat... but she's dead now... I love reading Willow watching Tara f*** herself... ah the joys of excellent fics.

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"Oh, man. I wish I WAS a lesbian. I would get laid every night for the rest of my life." ~ Amber Benson, Loveline 3/14/02

by **capricornmist** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 2:40 am

ahem, probably shouldn`t have read this at work!

*wow, woah, ahem*

*shouts* I need to take a break!

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"I want you, but i`m not giving in this time.
Goodbye to you, goodbye to everything that I knew.
You were the one I loved, the one thing I tried to hold onto."

by **wiltar** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 3:42 am

*wiping off the drool of her keyboard*

Ruth, now look at what you've done to me! Damn, you are the queen of smut, you really really are.

Patricia

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"What are they looking at?"
"The hotness of you, doofus!"

by **TheWombat** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 5:18 am

Cool. Drool. Happy happy cage scene!

Wombat

by **Brynn** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 5:40 am

WOW! That was worth the wait. Thank you...

by **Brynn** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 5:42 am

WOW! That was worth the wait. Thank you ... hmmm now I have to go to jury duty ... I wonder if they can excuse me for a day because I can't concentrate on anything but tommo smut?!?

by **Ange** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 6:22 am

The cage!! god! I need a cigarette now.

Once again, i love this new chapter Ruth.

Thanks.

Ange.

by **Sheila** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 6:42 am

Goddess, that was hot! I will never see that cage with the same eyes again... ;-)

I just love your writing! You're really the smut queen!

What about a change of sides in the future? I like the idea of Willow teasing Tara, maybe some bondage involved... uhmmm... :-) But then, I like any idea that involves sex and our two gorgeous witches!

by **Charlie** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 7:11 am

I gotta stop reading this stuff in the middle of the day... in public. Ruth, you turn me into a bibbling idiot. This scene was my favourite so far I think... I love no-touching play, and this was brilliantly written.

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“You’re my wife now…” Papa Lazarou
-The League of Gentlemen

by **Shadowcat** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 7:55 am

I read this a while ago, and forgot to tell you how much I yuv you, Ruth. Fic helps sooth the pain. *sniff*

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Kitty Trauma Victim #123

by **Dumbsaint** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 8:04 am

Why, oh why do I keep reading Ruthfic after my girlfriend leaves for work in the morning?

*sigh*

Magnificent, Ruth. Really. So freakin' erotic, the description of Willow as having achieved a feral state as she watched Tara, unable to act. Jesus. That was WAY hot. Like... fiery, smoldering, seething hot. Ridiculously, mind-numbingly hot. Is there more coming after this, or was this the last? *tries not to whimper and beg for more*

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Shiver me timberless.

by **CaptMurdock** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 8:05 am

Ruth, reading smut like this right in front of the computer carries certain dangers...such as having to replace keyboards when they become immersed in...

I think I'm going to leave that right where it is.

But anyway, I love this story! Proof that Willow and Tara are cute at just about any age.

BTW, slight nickpick here, Tara is allergic to shrimp (ref. "Triangle.")

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"How's that cramp doing, Spike? Why dontcha put some ice on it?"

by **Dumbsaint** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 8:24 am

LoL Cap, at first when I read the comment in the fic about Tara not being allergic to anything, I almost thought Ruth might be setting us up for future shrimp allergic reactions, for instance, on the aforementioned sleepover. Heh. But she wouldn't do that, would she? Ruth isn't evil. No, no. Not our Ruth.

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Shiver me timberless.

by **Pudds** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 11:04 am

Jesus Tara is hot in this chapter!! My keyboard BUTTONS took a good beating through this.

by **tommo** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 11:33 am

quote:
Originally posted by CaptMurdock:
BTW, slight nickpick here, Tara is allergic to shrimp (ref. "Triangle.")

Oh yeah, heh. Silly me. But that's okay. Most Jewish people I know don't eat a lot of shrimp, so no fear of allergies at the Rosenbergs. Hey...what a great chapter title...Allergies At The Rosenbergs...heh heh.

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You know I've been through hell...Joss can't you see, there'll be nothing left of me. You made me believe...quote:

by **CaptMurdock** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 11:40 am

quote:
Originally posted by Dumbsaint:
LoL Cap, at first when I read the comment in the fic about Tara not being allergic to anything, I almost thought Ruth might be setting us up for future shrimp allergic reactions, for instance, on the aforementioned sleepover. Heh. But she wouldn't do that, would she? Ruth isn't evil. No, no. Not our Ruth.

Y'know...I didn't even think of that.

"Smooth move, Ellery Queen!" he says, hitting himself over the head with a wet frying pan.

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"How's that cramp doing, Spike? Why dontcha put some ice on it?"quote:

by **Kieli** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 11:45 am

Ummmm....you know...I had something all intelligent to say before I started reading the 2nd chapter....then I read the rest and all thought went straight out the window....and it is bloody HOT in here! *frantically fanning herself* I think I need the iciest shower I can think of.

*opens a can of energy drink* Cheers to Ruth's prolific imagination and damn good smut.

[edited to add: Ok forget EVERYTHING that I just said. I need an oxygen mask, I need my heart jumpstarted again (because it most surely stopped when they got into that cage) and damn it ALL to hell, I need to change my underwear....reading this at work was so not a good idea )

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"Sometimes, we just can't make it on our own. We all need someone to love us, to help remind us that there's good in the world, to keep us from going crazy."

Willow from Dacia's The Dreamer Awakes

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by **wizpup** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:03 pm

Ok - I decided a little while ago that I should stop lurking and start contributing. Umm... Then I forgot about it again *g*

But, if I don't start with the praise here, when will I ever start?

This is great writing Ruth, please accept my fawning admiration for your smutty goodness. Oh and if you're looking for any more ideas, I seem to recall that an older version of Tara expressed her admiration for Giles's bathroom...

by **The Big I-T** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:05 pm

Good Lord, Ruth...have mercy on my poor soul!!

I've really got to stop reading your stuff when I'm at work, what with the deadlines and all --

(On the other hand...whether they realize it or not, they're actually paying me to read your fic. ) Now who says I don't have the world's greatest job! Which I better get back to right now before I don't anymore...

Thank you Ruth...thank-you thank-you thank-you....

by **Karzia** » Wed Mar 20, 2002 12:31 pm

quote:
Originally posted by tommo:
Um, the whole point of this chapter was that they couldn't touch one another. It was intended to be erotic. There's a whole idea about voyeurism that I really wanted to get across, plus the trust that they have for one another already. I'm sorry you didn't read it that way.

Trust me I read it that way. Wow I think I had to keep telling myself, "breath Virginia breath".

Cool a game and smut, gee ya got ta love a writer that gives you smut and feeds your brain. I saw three uses of diologe the first one is really cleaver in that in flips the the girls,a) W: "I want my house to be Tara freindly."------ FMR T: "I want my room(dorm) to be Willow freindly." b) T: and in the story later W: "I am you know......yours." c)W: Everyone's getting spanked but me."

So did I win?????? so on to part four, hint hint hint hint.

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"As God as my witness I thought Turkeys could fly." L.Nesman, WKRP

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