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FIC: London Rayne

Postby WiccanBex » Sun Sep 02, 2001 3:13 am

the first part of a fic that i'm writing to pass the time.

London Rayne. Part One.
Author: WiccanBex
Rating: PG-13 for this part (NC-17 for the whole thing).
Spoilers: Set after The Gift. So if you haven’t seen it and don’t wanna know…
Summary: Willow and Tara take a well-deserved holiday… things never go as planned, huh?
Disclaimer: Not mine. None of it’s mine except, maybe, the plot. Sue me if ya dare – it’ll cost ya more than I got to give.
Feedback: yes please! Pretty please? Love ya forever…
Author’s notes: Set in England.

*****

Willow stepped out of the white taxi and grimaced, “Raining.” She stated, seemingly to herself. “Nice lack of surprise.”

“It’s England, Sweetie… that’s what it does here.” Tara replied as she crept from the taxi into the downpour.

It was dark. Not because the sun had set, but because it was hidden from view by thick black clouds. Willow took her lover’s hand in her own and moved away from the car as it drove into the thick fog behind them.

“Remind me why we’re here again?” the red-haired witch pleaded as they sought shelter from the elements.

“Um… the experience?” the blond witch ventured. Willow raised her eyebrows questioningly. “OK… the, um… the weather?” Tara giggled. She didn’t care where they were, or how Mother Nature chose to greet them. She was with her Willow. Away from Sunnydale and everything that plagued them. “Look on the bright side --“

“No Hellmouth… I know. And thank you… for convincing me to come here.” Willow finished, looking into Tara’s deep blue eyes. She smiled, placing her right hand behind her lover’s head and pulling her close, allowing her fingers to become tangled in the blond hair. She caught the other girl’s full lips in her own and kissed her gently.

“You’re welcome.”

They gazed into each other’s eyes for a moment, oblivious to the rain, before lifting their luggage from the wet pavement and carrying it to the door of the building in front of them. It was tall and wide, but so was every other building within view. The walls were covered in a think layer of soot, disguising any beauty that may hide behind it. Willow lifted her hand to the door and knocked on the dark wood.

“Miss Rosenberg? Miss Maclay?” the voice came from behind them, and Willow jumped when she heard her name.

The two young witches turned to face the man who had addressed them. He was dressed in a smart black suit and wore a pair of thin, silver-rimmed glasses. He spoke with a British accent that was fairly relaxed, especially compared to the one they were used to hearing from Giles, and he had a warm smile. He removed his glasses and polished them against his sleeve before slipping them into his pocket and holding out his hand to the two girls. Willow shook it gently as Tara shifted from one foot to the other, trying not to draw attention to herself.

“Mr Stuart?” she asked, her voice full of hope. She sighed with relief when he smiled and nodded.

“Please, call me James.” He smiled and looked at them both for a second before gasping and shaking his head. “Oh! Look at you both! You’re drenched… and here I am keeping you on the front step.” He reached between them and pushed the door open. “You’d think they’d lock the damn thing once in a while…” he muttered as he ushered them inside.

The interior of the house was completely different to the exterior. The walls were elaborately decorated and ornate sculptures stood on tall antique tables. Willow gasped. “It’s beautiful. I’ve never seen so many…” she didn’t finish her sentence. Instead, she took Tara’s hand in her own and a wide smile crept across her face.

Tara shook her head slowly, “There’s… there’s magick here…”

“What did you expect, Miss Maclay?” James asked slowly. “The Watcher’s Council learned long ago that the only way to fight magick is with magick itself. It’s purely preventative, I assure you.” He promised hurriedly, noting her apprehensive mien.

Willow nodded, “See, baby - preventative. There’s nothing to worry about… OK?”

“Yeah… um… yeah… I just…”

“It’s OK, Tara.” Willow promised, nodding her head and stroking her lover’s hair. “This is just what we need - a holiday away from the Hellmouth. Away from fighting evil.”

“Ah… well… actually, there’s something I need to talk to you about.” The Englishman ventured gingerly.

The two witches turned to look at him.

“There’s something that we may need your help with. Just a slight… demon… problem. It’s nothing… really. It’s just… with your experience of the Craft, I’m sure you’ll be able to deal with it in time to still be able to enjoy your holiday. London has quite a bit to see...”

“Demon.” Tara repeated in a whisper. “So, the magick…”

“I didn’t lie. It *is* preventative. It’s imperative that the demon in question doesn’t gain access to the information held within these walls. If it did --“

“The end of the world.” Tara’s eyes were directed at the floor. She could barely speak; her voice was low and strangled. Willow reached for her, but she backed away, her hand raised and shaking by her face.

“Perhaps. If they knew our secrets, there’d be no stopping them.”

Willow looked at James, her eyes wide. “Why didn’t Giles say anything? He said…” she sighed. “This was supposed to be a holiday away from the Hellmouth. Giles said that you were his friend and… and that we could stay with you for a while. He didn’t say --“

“He didn’t say anything about demons.” Tara finished. “Willow…”

“It’s OK, Tara… we’re leaving…” the red-haired Wiccan looked at James. “We’re sorry… but we just can’t do this. I don’t know what you’ve been told, but we --“

“Friends of the Slayer, I know.” He stepped towards them. “I was very sorry to hear of your loss… the Slayer… Miss Summers… she was instrumental in the fight against the forces of darkness… she died a noble death and will be sorely missed. She can’t help us now, but *you* can. Together, you can prevent the apocalypse.”

“Not interested.” Tara looked up at the anxious Watcher, no longer quite as nervous. “We saved the world… and we lost a friend.” She looked at Willow, tears forming in her sombre eyes. “I won’t do that again.”

end of part one

WiccanBex
 


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Postby Forrister » Sun Sep 02, 2001 3:31 am

The Watcher's Council certainly asked for that one. Why can't anybody have a peaceful overseas holiday anymore? (Particularly anywhere in Great Britain it seems.) Send 'em Down Under, we'll show them a good time!

I'll be interested to see if the Council or the holiday wins out!


Scis quod dicunt, "id quod circumiret, circumveniat."
(You know what they say, "What goes around comes around.")

Forrister
 


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Postby Warduke » Sun Sep 02, 2001 8:14 am

Good fic Bex, can't wait for more

Our poor girls, they can't seem to go on any vacation without having to fight demons or vamps...*sigh*

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Postby Dr.G » Sun Sep 02, 2001 8:25 am

Oh I love it, it's very well written Bex, I can picture it quite clearly.
To me it seems a little unlike Tara to be unwilling to help them fight that demon. Just my own feeling about Tara, which is as subjective as it gets, I am curious to see where this will go.

Please hurry with the next part, I look forward to it, which of course has nothing to do with the promise of NC-17.

Dr.G
 


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Postby Katharyn » Sun Sep 02, 2001 10:12 am

On behalf on my country (to coin a phrase) let me just say "Hey!"

*LOL* what is it with recent fics, anyone would think we had our own Hellmouth?

But seriously I too am keen to know why Tara is not keen to help... and also if there is an ulterior motive for the council asking? Seems to me they could secure their own magick users if they wanted to but maybe I am just being paranoid...

Katharyn

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Postby Scarecrow » Sun Sep 02, 2001 10:38 am

Like it a lot!

I wonder why Tara is reluctant to help... So many questions raised in so little time; always a sighn of good fic.

Can't wait till part 2!

Scarecrow
 


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Postby tommo » Sun Sep 02, 2001 3:51 pm

Good to see you writing Bex. Ah London...bloody awful place. Ahem. So why the alternate spelling of 'Rayne'? That caught my eye.

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"She looked across at Willow, whose face was filled with light. She had never felt so calm and happy, and strong..." ~ Unseen: Door To Alternity

[This message has been edited by tommo (edited September 02, 2001).]

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Postby KittyKo » Sun Sep 02, 2001 3:56 pm

huuuu... this looks like fun! Great fic Bex! ^^ *kittyko hops* More please? *^^*
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Postby xita » Sun Sep 02, 2001 4:03 pm

A peaceful holiday, with our girls? I think not hehe. And you know they'll end up helping anyway.
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Postby wiltar4evr » Sun Sep 02, 2001 9:49 pm

I totally understand why Tara is so reluctant to help...Hello!!!...Glory ...brainsuckage...black eye'd Willow(worried about her baby's run in with dark magick)...death of Buffy. Who can blame the poor girl. And Willow too. Her girlfriend just got her sanity back, her best friend just died saving the world from yet another apocalypse and her girlfriend is already concerned about her rapidly growing magick abilities.

And to totally agree with xita, I too, believe they will end up helping. Our girls don't have it in them to just leave knowing they are needed...to save lives by fighting evil.

WiccanBex, I love this so much. I am eagerly awaiting the next part. I am glad you chose to write a Willow and Tara fic., just to pass the time. Thank you

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WILLOW: ...I'd totally be blowing off classes if I was in Dawnie's shoes.

TARA: Sweetie, you wouldn't blow off class if your head was on fire.

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Postby Dr.G » Sun Sep 02, 2001 11:15 pm

Damn, I had forgotten all about the brainsuck.

It still feels a little unTaralike to me, but it doesn't matter, just a personal feeling. I love the fic Bex, let that be clear.

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Postby Forrister » Mon Sep 03, 2001 3:32 am

Actually, I can think of another reason why Tara might be reluctant to help.

We all know what a good judge of character she is. We also know that she knows what the Watcher's Council has put Giles and Buffy through. (And I'm sure Willow would have had a thing or two to say on the subject as well!)

I have no doubt that Tara would jump in boots and all if innocents were involved but the Watchers aren't even remotely innocent. She's been through an awful lot recently and what's more she's seen her friends go through an awful lot. Combining these two reasons would give anyone a justifiable excuse for saying no!


WiccanBex, this one's for you.

Nullum magnum ingenium sine mixtura dementiae fuit!
(There has not been any great talent without an element of madness!)

Forrister
 


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Postby nika » Mon Sep 03, 2001 8:36 am

Poor girls, even on vacation the song playing in the back groud is "it's raining demons"(bad joke I know...I know.)
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Postby Puff » Mon Sep 03, 2001 9:01 am

Hey WiccanBex cool fic I'm looking forward to reading the next part. And it doesn't always rain in London...infact it is nicer down south than up north
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Postby tommo » Mon Sep 03, 2001 11:26 am

And since when have you ever spent time in the north eh Puff? I seem to remember last time you were here it was bloody hot and sunny. Grrrr. Southerners...I ask you...

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"She looked across at Willow, whose face was filled with light. She had never felt so calm and happy, and strong..." ~ Unseen: Door To Alternity

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Postby WiccanBex » Mon Sep 03, 2001 11:55 am

the tara issue will be revealed within time...

i know it doesn't always rain in london... it just does in this fic (i love southern weather - don't have much to compare it to, mind you... heehee)

and the alternate spelling of "rayne" was very deliberate and that will be explained soon... i expect the next part to be finished soon.

oh, and thanks for all the nice stuff you've all said - makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. lol

WiccanBex
 


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Postby WiccanBex » Mon Sep 03, 2001 3:36 pm

London Rayne. Part Two.
Author: WiccanBex
Rating: PG-13 for this part (NC-17 for the whole thing).
Spoilers: Set after The Gift. So if you haven’t seen it and don’t wanna know…
Summary: Willow and Tara take a well-deserved holiday… things never go as planned, huh?
Disclaimer: Not mine. None of it’s mine except, maybe, the plot. Sue me if ya dare – it’ll cost ya more than I got to give.
Feedback: yes please! Pretty please? Love ya forever…
Author’s notes: Set in England.

*****

“Willow,” Tara’s head was hung low, her eyes aimed at anywhere but her lover. “I’m sorry.”

They were standing in the room that James had taken them to after the episode in the hallway. Willow had asked if her and Tara could have some time alone to think about what they were going to do next. There were too beds; Willow had wondered whether he knew about their relationship prior to their arrival; and the wallpaper looked as though it would peel off at the slightest touch… so she avoided going anywhere near it.

Willow smiled and took a step closer to the other girl. She lifted her hand to Tara’s face, caressing her cheek. Tara raised her head so that she was looking into Willow’s beautiful eyes. “I understand, Tara. You don’t have to apologise.”

“But those people… the W…Watcher’s Council… they need you --“

“Us, Tara. He said they needed *us*. But we don’t have to stay; we can just…” she sighed, realising what she was saying. She couldn’t just walk away from someone who needed help, and Tara knew it; the look in Willow’s eyes had already her girlfriend what she was afraid to say.

“You want to stay.” Tara nodded, the disappointment evident in her deep blue eyes.

“I just want to do what’s right, Tara… I don’t want to hurt you, but… I can’t just turn my back on this because of what happened to Buffy… with Buffy gone, someone’s got to fight the good fight…”

“I don’t want to lose you. I’m scared that if we do this…”

“We can do it, Tara! You know we can! We’ve handled much worse than this…”

“I just… there’s just s…something Mr Stuart hasn’t told us.” The conviction on her face told Willow that she wasn’t kidding. “I just think that maybe this isn’t as safe as he makes it sound… Why do they need *us*?”

“Well… I guess they…” Tara raised a good point… Why *did* they need the two young witches, when they obviously had a tight enough grasp of the Craft to fill the Council with so much magick that Tara could sense it as soon as she stepped inside. Willow had to admit that it didn’t make sense. “Well… I don’t see why he would lie… I mean --“

Before she could finish, she was interrupted by a knock at the door. “Huh… I thought James said he was going out…”

Willow slowly turned the handle, stepping backwards as she opened the door. Standing in the hallway was a short, waif-like girl with thick black hair piled on top of her head in a scruffy ponytail.

“Hey. You two look pretty scared for the witches who are supposed to save the world. Did I scare you? Because I dread to think what you’re going to be like when you meet the thing you’re up against. They’re putting a lot of faith in you… you up to it?” her accent was British and high-pitched, and she looked younger than Willow and Tara, a lot younger. She looked as though she had seen much more than was suitable for a girl of her age; she looked as though nothing scared her anymore. She smiled and extended her hand, waiting for the perplexed-looking red-haired witch to take it. “James said you were having doubts…” she said simply, lowering her hand to her side when Willow ignored that it was there.

“We just didn’t know… this was supposed to be a holiday. About a month ago, we --“

“Your Slayer died, huh? Shame… she was stronger than most…” the girl shrugged. “Guess we’re lucky we’ve got you two.”

“Us? Well… we’re not… we’re not Slayers…”

“No shit.” She laughed. Tara gasped and Willow glared at the small girl, looking more than a little bit hurt. “No offence… you’re just…dainty.”

“Buffy was hardly butch! I mean, she was really…” Willow held her hand level with her shoulder, “really tiny… and her arms - I’ve seen pencils with more--” Tara cleared her throat, bringing Willow out of her babbling. “And… that’s… really *not* the issue here…”

“Who *are* you?” Tara asked gingerly, speaking for the first time.

“Me? I’m The Third.” she replied shortly, smiling widely.

“Oh… huh?”

end of part two

i hereby promise smoochies in part three...

WiccanBex
 


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Postby tommo » Mon Sep 03, 2001 6:00 pm

Oh Bex, I love how you've got Willow's character here. I always struggle so much with that. The speech is really natural and flows quite feely. Nice work.

And yes, smoochies would be good.

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"She looked across at Willow, whose face was filled with light. She had never felt so calm and happy, and strong..." ~ Unseen: Door To Alternity

tommo
 


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Postby Ed Wood » Mon Sep 03, 2001 6:22 pm

Like where the story is heading so far. Great job! Two thumbs up! (for both parts)

Ed Wood
 


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Postby Rane » Mon Sep 03, 2001 6:33 pm

i'm very interested!
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Postby WiccanBex » Mon Sep 03, 2001 9:28 pm

hey, thanks guys

next part will be finished and posted soon...

and ruth, you write willow brilliantly - so i guess the struggle is worth it!! i like writing willow... the speech flows naturally because that is how i speak. lol. my mother calls me "rosenberg"... well, when she's in a good enough mood to remember buffy stuff. lol.

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Postby Forrister » Tue Sep 04, 2001 4:37 am

Willow-babble, there's nothing quite like it!

I enjoyed this part and will admit to a growing curiosity as to what is going on. Will anyone tell them the truth (the whole truth and nothing but the truth)?

Nam Et Ipsa Scientia Potestas Est
(For knowledge too is itself power.)

Forrister
 


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Postby WiccanBex » Tue Sep 04, 2001 7:01 am

all will be revealed, forrister... eventually.
WiccanBex
 


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Postby nika » Tue Sep 04, 2001 7:12 am

Todays piece of obvious advice is: Never trust The Council.
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Postby Scarecrow » Tue Sep 04, 2001 1:38 pm

Loving this fic!

Can't wait to see what happens next and how this other girl fitsd in; seems she may be at odds with are fave witches.

Can i take a guess and ask if Ethan Rayne may be involved? heh...

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"Liberate tutemet ex inferis"

"She's my everything"

"It only takes one tree to make a thousand matches; it only takes one match to burn a thousand trees"

"There are worlds out there where the skies burning,
Where the sea's asleep and the rivers dream,
With people made of smoke and cities made of song,
Somewhere theres danger, somewhere theres injustice,
somewhere else the teas getting cold.
Come on Ace,
We've got work to do"

Scarecrow
 


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Postby WiccanBex » Wed Sep 05, 2001 2:02 am

uh uh uh... a woman never reveals her age or her writing committments! (wonder where i've heard that before!) heehee
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Postby WiccanBex » Wed Sep 05, 2001 2:03 am

London Rayne. Part Three.
Author: WiccanBex
Rating: Just short of NC-17.
Spoilers: Set after The Gift. So if you haven’t seen it and don’t wanna know…
Summary: Willow and Tara take a well-deserved holiday… things never go as planned, huh?
Disclaimer: Not mine. None of it’s mine except, maybe, the plot. Sue me if ya dare – it’ll cost ya more than I got to give.
Feedback: yes please! Pretty please? Love ya forever…
Author’s notes: Set in England.

*****

“The Third.” The girl repeated, seemingly shocked that they were so confused.

“We heard… we just don’t…” Willow wasn’t sure what to say. She looked to Tara for back up, only to find that her blond girlfriend was backing away from the door, her eyes wide and her arms wrapped around her waist for comfort. “Tara…? Honey…? What’s wrong?”

Tara stood still and shook her head. “You… you can’t b-be The Third… it’s not possible…”

“Sure it is… I don’t know what you’ve been told, but --“

“Willow, this is bad.” Tara’s voice was low and broken. Willow placed her hand on her lover’s shoulder and looked into her eyes, desperately trying to find what it was that was scaring her so much. “The Third is a legend passed through Wiccan circles… t-they say the… they say The Third is… is supposed to rid the world of it’s final evil…”

“Final evil? Then… surely she’s one of the good guys, right? I mean… why are you so scared…?”

“Because she’s smart.” The two witches turned to look at the small girl still standing in their doorway. “Sounds like your little girlfriend knows what she’s talking about… thank the Gods one of you does…”

Willow said nothing; she wasn’t really sure what she was supposed to say. Tara swallowed and inhaled deeply. “The Third is supposed to save the world with the help of two others… t-two witches who don’t know about their destiny…”

“Bingo! We have a winner! Tell her what she’s won!”

“Who are you? Why are you here?” Willow was confused. She didn’t understand what was happening; all she knew was that if Tara was so scared, she should be, too.

“You still don’t get it, do you?” the girl sighed. “OK. The name’s Rayne. I’m The Third… bought here to help the Watcher’s Council save the world from the biggest bad ever seen. You are Willow. She is Tara. You are here to help me.” She spoke in short, sharp, impatient sentences. Willow was shocked. Her eyes grew wider and a frown appeared as she struggled to find the right words to react to this. “Look. I can see that you’re going to need a little time to let this sink in. That’s cool… I’ll just come back later.”

With that, Rayne left and closed the door behind her. Willow and Tara stood in silence, each waiting for the other to speak.

“This isn’t good, huh?”

Tara shook her head, “No… it’s not good…”

*****

“Tara, we can just go home…”

“No, Sweetie… that isn’t a option anymore. If Rayne is The Third… and she’s here… and *we’re* here…”

“You mean, we’re the other two?” Tara nodded. “Oh. OK… well… this isn’t so bad… I mean… we rid the world of the final evil, right? So we succeed… right? I mean, that’s what we’re here for… our destiny. We get to save the world!”

Willow sounded so excited. Her voice was lilting and her eyes were brighter than Tara could remember them ever having been before. She couldn’t bear the thought of watching those bright eyes fade and she hated knowing that she would have to. “Willow… legend says… it… it says that we… we don’t…” she couldn’t say it. She couldn’t bring herself to tell the woman she loved that by saving the world… “We don’t survive.”

“Oh.” A beat. “There’s a downside…”

“You’re taking this better than I expected…”

Willow smiled and nodded slowly, “Well… you know… prophesies always say that someone’s going to die saving the world… we’ve beaten hundreds of prophesies that say that. Well… some… We’re not going to die, Tara.”

Tears began to form in the corners of her previously bright eyes and she began to sob between words. “There’s a way around it… right? I mean… we don’t… we’re not going to… we… we can’t…”

Tara shook her head, “I d-don’t know… I’ve never… this isn’t something that I know much about… I just…”

“No. Tara, there *has* to be another way! We only just found each other… we can’t…” the tears escaped her eyes and cascaded down her cheeks. She shook her head slowly from side to side, still not completely believing what she was hearing.

Tara went cold, feeling the other girl’s turmoil, and lifted her hands to Willow’s face to wipe away her tears. She stepped closer and pulled Willow in until her head was resting against her lover’s. She closed her eyes and caught Willow’s lips in her own, kissing her passionately. Willow wrapped her arms around Tara’s hips, pulling the girl’s body towards her own until she could barely tell where her body finished and Tara’s began.

Tara trailed her fingertips from the back of Willow’s head down to the small of her back, sending shivers down her spine. She pushed her hands slowly beneath Willow’s green shirt, stroking the soft skin and letting her fingers explore her back and abdomen; goose pimples erupting all over Willow’s body.

Willow planted soft kisses around Tara’s neck, slowly unbuttoning the deep red blouse and making her way towards the soft breasts that hid behind it. She lifted her gaze away from the beautiful body before her and looked into Tara’s cobalt eyes.

“Let’s think about it later…”

end of part three

[This message has been edited by WiccanBex (edited September 05, 2001).]

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Postby tommo » Wed Sep 05, 2001 4:23 am

Oh dear lord. Come on Bex! Don't do this! You know by the love of all things holy (and unholy) that this is just...look, I'm putting on my resolve face here. No, okay?

Damn you and your over active imagination. On the upside, you managed to squeeze in some smoochies there. Excellent.

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"She looked across at Willow, whose face was filled with light. She had never felt so calm and happy, and strong..." ~ Unseen: Door To Alternity

tommo
 


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Postby nika » Wed Sep 05, 2001 4:30 am

I like it, I hope there's more soon. The third seems like a good spunky character.
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Postby Forrister » Wed Sep 05, 2001 4:47 am

Prophesy only means what it says when you look back on it with 20/20 hindsight. It never means precicely what it says before it happens. Bit of a rum deal all round, what.

This reminds me of the motto of my (now-defunct) role-playing group. Every week we'd get together and every week we'd chant at some point "So this is it! We're going to die!" And blow me down if we didn't! (But we did get better!) (Except for that time we got swept into the nine hells, but that's another story!)


Hic quoque transiet.
(This, too, shall pass.)

Forrister
 

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