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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:24 pm

this is like a delicious cheesecake I just keep wanting more more more more more :party
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby wimpy0729 » Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:10 pm

Hi there! Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this, and the more I read, the more I'm getting totally drawn into it. Thanks for the quick updates. Can't wait to see what happens next!


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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby willowandtaraforever » Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:12 am

loving the story and how you're working the twilight angle. more soon please and some :wtkiss too please
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Nov 19, 2009 2:39 am

Yay for good update-y goodness... I hope there is no Buffy & Co interruptions to their "study date"...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby LittleBit » Thu Nov 19, 2009 2:05 pm

I like tortured Tara - please keep writing! :D
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - Chapter 7 is now up! 11-19-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:13 pm

Chapter Seven

“Giles?” Buffy said, busting through the doors of the Magick Box…a small shop that Mr. Giles owned and operated in addition to teaching at Sunnydale High. “Giles!” She yelled, looking around, somewhat frantically.

“Maybe he’s in the john, Buff…give the guy a chance…” Xander said, playing with some of the knick-knacks on one of the shelves.

“Giles?!”

“Good lord, Buffy…I’m right here!” Giles said, emerging from the back storeroom. “Now…what is so pressing that it has you yelling like some kind of banshee or something?” He asked, stepping behind the counter, pouring himself a cup of tea. “Tea?”

“No thanks, G-man…trying to cut down.” Xander said, jokingly.

“We’ve got a problem with the Maclays.” Buffy said, bluntly.

“Define ‘problem’.” Giles said, taking a sip of his tea.

“The girl…Tara…she’s taken a major interest in our friend, Willow.” Buffy explained.

“And…?”

“And nothing…Giles! We can’t just let them hang out with humans…I mean…hel-lo! They’re supposed to be ‘veggie-vamps’…” Buffy said, somewhat annoyed.

“Well…never quite heard it put that way…” Giles said. “Now…has Tara done anything that would make you think that this Willow-person is in danger?”

“She’s…she’s just really…and I mean REALLY interested in her…she pulled her from the surf yesterday…” Xander added.

“Pulled her from the surf? What happened?” Giles asked.

“She just moved here and we took her out to the beach for one last ride for the season…got hit by a double set…and Wills got caught in the undertow…” Xander explained.

“So Tara rescued her?”

“Yes…but…” Buffy started.

“So you’re here…claiming the Maclays broke the treaty because one of them rescued your friend from what could have been certain death…” Giles said, still not understanding what the girl’s problem was with the situation.

“It’s more than that!” Buffy said, angrily. “It’s the way she looked at her…like…like…I don’t know…it just wasn’t right! You tell me to trust my senses…and my senses are telling me that there is something definitely wrong with this whole situation!”

“Buff…maybe we are overreacting a little…” Xander said, starting to feel a bit silly about the whole thing. “I mean…she did save Wills…why would she have done that if all she wanted to do was…”

“I agree, Buffy…we’ve had this treaty with the Maclays for years, and they’ve never violated it. In fact, William is a doctor…he actually helps people every day…I just think you may be a bit hasty…”

“I don’t like it…” Buffy said, suspiciously.

“I understand that…and it’s normal for you to feel this way…but the Maclays are different…and unless we have reason to believe that they’ve done something against our agreement, you must leave them alone.” Giles explained. “If there were some indication that this Willow was in danger or something…of course we would do something.”

“So you want me to wait until after the fact…” Buffy said, sarcastically.

“He’s not really saying that…are you Giles?” Xander asked.

“No…most definitely not…keep an eye on things…and if something more happens…we’ll consider taking action at that time.” said the Watcher.

Meanwhile…

Willow fidgeted nervously on the couch, having picked up as best as she could with her rib injury still fresh. She wanted to put something more presentable on; however, she found, much to her dismay, that it was not to be. All that she could manage to pull on was a pair of sweatpants and a hoodie.

Tara stood just outside Willow’s door, trying desperately to control the urges that were growing stronger with every second…she swallowed hard, holding her breath as she knocked on the door.

Knock! Knock!

Willow’s heart skipped a beat, jumping up into her throat as she heard the knock at the door.

“Just a sec!” She said, trying to get up from the couch, wincing at the sharp pain in her side.

Willow hesitated briefly before opening the door.

Easy Rosenberg! She’s just coming over to work on her paper…nothing more…don’t be a spaz!

Seeing the blonde on the other side, she couldn’t help but smile.

“Hey!” Willow said, excitedly.

“H-Hi…” Tara said, hesitantly.

“W-wanna come in…or…something?” Willow said, nervously.

Tara smiled, “Kind of why I-I came here.”

“Can I get you something to drink…or munch on…or…” Willow babbled.

Tara couldn’t help but chuckle at the absurdity of her questions…all things considered...



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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Nov 19, 2009 3:29 pm

Yay for good update-y goodness... Good that Giles & Xander :smash some sense into eager-beaver-Buffy... I hope Tara talks with Giles before asking Willow to become a vampire so that there will not be unnecessary bloodshed...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Thu Nov 19, 2009 5:12 pm

Buffy needs to butt out already Tara is so adorable yearning for her soul mate and Willow is in head of heals already again loving it more soon my friend Dia :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby LittleBit » Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:45 am

“Can I get you something to drink…or munch on…or…” Willow babbled.

Tara couldn’t help but chuckle at the absurdity of her questions…all things considered...


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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 8 IS NOW UP! 11-23-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:57 pm

Chapter Eight

“Um..no…th-thanks. I’m fine.” Tara said, trying desperately to not stare incessantly at the object of her obsession.

“So…you’ve got a research paper due? I can help with that…I’m all about the research, actually…what did you say it was on again?” Willow asked, feeling suddenly a bit out of breath. She held her side, heading back to the couch.

“I didn’t…h-here…let me help…” Tara said, reaching out and helping to ease the smaller girl down into a sitting position on the couch.
Willow couldn’t help but notice how cold Tara’s touch was, but she didn’t flinch…all she could think about was the fact that the beautiful enigmatic blonde was touching her…and although the touch was cold…it set the skin beneath on fire.

Tara felt the familiar energy tingling all of her senses as her skin made contact with the seemingly firey hot s

“Thanks…still a little sore…” Willow said, her emerald eyes not breaking contact with the sapphire-like eyes before her.

“I-I’m sorry about th-that…I…” Tara began.

“Now…see…didn’t we talk about that before? Nothing to apologize for…unless you’re sorry you saved me…which I really hope you’re not…because I’m not…” Willow babbled, smiling softly.

“N-no!” Tara said, louder and more enthusiastically than she had intended.

“Well allrighty then! So, we’ve established that you didn’t tell me what your paper was about…but I’m kinda gonna have to know if I’m gonna help you with it…you know?”

Tara hesitantly sat down on the couch, making sure to keep her distance.
“It’s on…umm…paranormal mythology…” Tara said, trying to judge Willow’s reaction.

“Oooooh! I love anything about the paranormal…ghosts…goblins…things that go bump in the night!” Willow said, enthusiastically.

Yeah…if she only knew…

“A-actually…it’s more about other p-paranormal beings…” Tara stammered.

“So what kind of beastie are we talking about?” Willow said, excited at the prospect of helping Tara with anything.

“Um…v-vampires?”

“Ahhhh…vampires, eh? Sexy…” Willow said, wiggling her eyebrows, smiling widely.

“Wh-what?!”

“Sexy…vampires are all gorgeous, suave, debonair…able to render their victims helpless with their charm and magnetic personalities…”

Okay…not exactly the first thing I thought she’d say…

“I-I never really th-thought of u-us…them like that.” Tara said, hoping Willow didn’t catch her slip.

“Yep…you know…immortal…young forever…pretty good gig, if you ask me!” Willow said, typing ‘vampire mythology’ into her laptop.

“What d-does it s-say about leanan shithe?” Tara asked.

“Boy…never heard of that…how do you spell it?” Willow asked.

“L-e-a-n-a-n S-h-i-t-h-e” Tara spelled, waiting for a response.

“Hmm…hey…this is interesting! It says that is a beautiful woman of the Aos Sí (or fairy folk) who takes a human lover.” Willow said, surprised as she felt her cheeks blush. “… it says that this faerie mistress seeks the love of mortals. If they refuse, she must be their slave; if they consent, they are hers, and can only escape by finding another to take their place. The fairy lives on their life, and they waste away. Death is no escape from her. Hmmm…kinda a different twist on things, I guess.”

“Um…I…I think that th-they’ve got it a bit w-wrong though…” Tara said.

“Really? Maybe it’s just this darned Wikipedia…can’t trust anything on here…” Willow said, her brow wrinkling slightly as she continued her web search.

“They’re more l-like…a cross between that a-and…well…s-something a bit d-different…”

“Sounds like somebody’s already done their research!” Willow said, mischievously.

“K-kind of…”

“So…are you going to keep me in suspense…or are you going to tell me?” Willow asked.

Goddess…what is she talking about? She can’t already know…

“T-tell you?” Tara said, hesitantly.

“What they’re like…you said they’re a cross between that and something else…” Willow said, waiting.

“H-how about we watch a m-movie…” Tara said, getting up and looking at the DVDs on the entertainment center.

“Oookay.” Willow said, somewhat confused. “What about your paper?”

“I’ll just f-finish it later…what do you want t-to watch?” Tara asked.

“How about ‘Interview With A Vampire’?” Willow said, jokingly. She saw the uncomfortable look on the blonde’s face and immediately back-pedaled. “Heh…just kidding! What do you like?”

Tara looked through…taking a DVD from it’s case, putting it into the player. “T-this is one of my favorites…”

“Then I’m sure it’s great…” Willow smiled as Tara sat down on the couch.

The movie started, it was an older one, but Willow instantly recognized it.

“Ooooh! I love ‘Somewhere In Time’…it’s so romantic…and Jane Seymour…talk about beautiful!” Willow said, enthusiastically. “But I’m kinda…well…partial to blondes, myself.”

Tara couldn’t help but smile, and if it were still possible, she would have sworn that she felt her heart flutter at Willow’s words.

Later…

Tara looked over at Willow and noticed that the tears flowing down her cheeks.

“Are you okay?” Tara asked, moving closer.

“Yeah…” Willow said, snuffling. “…that’s just…so…I don’t know…they both waited so long to find each other…and then it was all taken away with that stupid penny! But then they got back together in Heaven…and it’s so sad…but it’s kinda happy, you know?” She said, breaking down into full sobbing.

Tara moved instinctively to Willow’s side, taking the girl’s hand in her own, then gently wiping the tears from her cheek with the other…
Willow looked into Tara’s eyes, leaning in…and just as their lips were about to meet…

“Stop!” Tara said, leaping across the room.

“I-I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to…” Willow said, panicking at the blonde’s response.

“No…I…you didn’t…I w-want to…I-I just c-can’t…I’m sorry.” Tara said, hurrying out the door, leaving Willow behind.


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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:42 pm

Tara moved instinctively to Willow’s side, taking the girl’s hand in her own, then gently wiping the tears from her cheek with the other…
Willow looked into Tara’s eyes, leaning in…and just as their lips were about to meet…

“Stop!” Tara said, leaping across the room.

“I-I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to…” Willow said, panicking at the blonde’s response.

“No…I…you didn’t…I w-want to…I-I just c-can’t…I’m sorry.” Tara said, hurrying out the door, leaving Willow behind.



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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby ashcrash71590 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:13 pm

aw :aww poor willow and tara

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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby love_2003 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:47 pm

Love the story so far. Hope Buffy will eventually realize that she wont be able to keep Willow and Tara apart no matter how hard she tries. Looking forward to more. You have me hooked.
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:25 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... I hope Willow soon figures Tara's "secret" from the little clues she told Willow...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby taranwillow4ever » Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:39 am

Aw you stopped just when it was about to get good. You also got me hooked. Better than he original
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby willowandtaraforever » Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:21 am

Awwww poor girls. I hope tara realizes soon that they are meant to be together. this is way so much better than the original version of twilight. :wtkiss soon please.
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby AmberGoddess » Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:29 pm

oooh fascinating. i like it! so much better than the real one. a splash of w/t and gay love spices up anything
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby LittleBit » Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:24 am

I love it when girls play hard to get! NOT!!!!! I hope Tara response is not a permanent thing!!! :D
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:35 am

Hey, this Twilight version is way better than Meyer's! I hope Willow and Tara don't run away from their feelings for too long...
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 9 IS NOW UP!!! 11-30-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:06 pm

Chapter Nine

Willow hurried to the door as quickly as she could, but much to her chagrin, Tara was gone.

“Damnit!” Willow cursed, slowly beginning to close the door, but it wouldn’t shut. Looking down, she saw a small tennis shoe stuck between the jamb and the door.

“Hey Wills…what’cha doin’?” Buffy said, working her way through the door and into the house.

“Hey Buff…sure, come in…” Willow said, a bit miffed.

Buffy plopped down onto the couch, making herself comfortable.

“Thought you might enjoy a bit of company while you’re on the mend…wanna watch a movie or something? Looks like you’ve got a pretty good collection!”

Willow closed the door and decided to join Buffy on the couch.

“Eh…not bad…Buffy…can I ask you a question?”

“Sure…go for it! I’m all ears…” Buffy said, attentively.

“Why are you so stuck on me not being around Tara? And don’t say that you aren’t…and it’s just because she’s weird…because I don’t buy it…there’s something more that you’re not telling me…and I want to know, now.” Willow said, a determined look on her face.

“Look…it’s like I told you before…she and her family…they’re just different…I know that’s not what you want to hear, but…”

“Buff, pardon my French, but that’s bullshit! You’re different, too! So am I! So what does that have to do with anything?” Willow said, getting angrier by the minute.

“Okay listen…when Tara’s family moved here, they sort of pretended to be something that they really weren’t…”

“Who doesn’t? I mean…it’s never easy moving to a new place, Buff…I know that first-hand. We all put on a show for others until we’re comfortable with them…and with who we are…you know?”

“It’s not like that with them…” Buffy grumbled. “…you don’t understand.”

“So enlighten me…” Willow said, not giving an inch.

“You want the truth?” Buffy asked.

Willow said nothing, just maintaining her look of resolve.

Buffy took a deep breath to steady her nerves.

“Okay…so…things here in Sunnydale aren’t exactly…well…normal…”

“Yeah…kinda picked up on that already.” Willow said, sarcastically.

“Um…you know…on second thought…maybe Xander should be here for this…” Buffy said, backpedaling.

“Are you serious?!”

“Just give me five minutes…I’ll call him right now…” Buffy said, opening her cell phone and hitting the speed dial.

“You’ve got to be kidding me…” Willow said, exasperated. She sank back into the couch, her arms crossed, waiting.

“Xan? Listen…I need you over at Will’s…like yesterday...get your butt over here!” Buffy said, hanging up rather abruptly. “He’ll be here in a minute.”

“This better be good…” Willow warned.

Five minutes later…

Xander knocked on the door as he opened it, letting himself in.

“Ladies! What can I do for you on this fine Sunnydale day?” he said, cheerily.

“You’re gonna want to sit down for this one, Xan…I think we’re gonna have to tell her…” Buffy warned.

“Giles told you to just chill about this, Buff…we really shouldn’t.”

“Hey! Right here!” Willow said, her anger ready to boil over. “First of all…I don’t care if you should or shouldn’t…you’re going to…secondly…why would Mr. Giles be telling you to chill about anything…and thirdly…what is the big frilly deal…I mean…really?”

“Where do you want me to start?” Buffy asked.

“At the risk of sounding like Julie Andrews…let’s start at the very beginning…” Xander said.

“Okay…you asked for it…okay…see there’s this little legend that says unto every generation a Slayer is born. A chosen one.” Buffy began, only to be interrupted by Willow.

“Are you kidding me?!” Willow yelled.

“Wills…just listen, okay? She’s telling the truth…” Xander said, seriously, placing his hand on Willow’s shoulder to calm her.

Buffy continued “…and she alone must stand against the evil in the world…and well…”

“…let me guess…that ‘chosen one’ just happens to be you…am I right?” Willow said, sarcastically.

“Well…actually…yeah…it is.” Buffy said, getting a bit peeved by the redhead’s response.

“Even if that was true…what are you doing here? I mean…it’s not like the place is running amuck with evil blood-sucking vamps or demons or anything…is it?” Willow said, looking to Buffy and Xander.

Neither of them said a word.


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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby arsyadriani » Mon Nov 30, 2009 1:20 am

you have to stop there?? :shy
don't do it missy..I'm begging you..post more pleeeeaaseeee :pray :pray
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:01 am

Yay for good update-y goodness... Good that Willow is pissed at Buffy's constant breaking up Willow & Tara... I hope that when Willow knows the truth she goes to Tara and still wants to be her friend and more...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Mon Nov 30, 2009 3:55 am

Oh, Willow's going to know the truth... I can't wait to read what's next!
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 10 IS UP!!! 11-30-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:02 pm

Chapter Ten

She ran, the panic still stabbing her like a knife…the thought of spending eternity with this constant craving for something that she couldn’t possibly have was mad…if she had known this before, she would never have agreed to it. There was only one thing that might calm her…so she hunted.

Running past a small trail, she caught scent coming from the East. Instinctively, she changed her course, leaping into the canopy above, gliding effortlessly from tree-to-tree, faster and faster, until at last – she sprung. The cougar screamed, only briefly, as her teeth ripped into the flesh of it’s muscular neck, quickly ending it’s suffering. The warm coppery liquid trickled down her slaked throat, bringing with it a brief respite from her cravings for the red-head. After drinking her fill, she gently laid the beast aside, taking a moment to honor her kill before continuing on her course. A few moments later, she sat perched above a cliff, looking down upon the ocean below…the same cove where only days before, she had pulled Willow from the surf. How long she had been there, she didn’t know, but she was pulled out of her haze by the snapping of a twig and a familiar smell on the wind.

“You went hunting without me?” Anya said, sitting down next to Tara on the limb of the tree, dangling her legs over the edge.

“S-sorry.” Tara said. “Needed something to take my mind off of it…”

“Don’t you mean…take your mind off of her?”

“It…her…whatever this is…it’s d-driving me crazy, An…I…I d-don’t know
if I can take it much longer.” Tara confessed.

“So give in to it! I’ve already seen it, Tare…it’s going to happen sooner or later…why do you insist on putting yourself through this? She wanted you today…I saw it…and you want her...”

“More than you know…” Tara sighed. “I’ve never felt so…so out of control! She’s like a drug to m-me. The more I’m around her…the more I crave it…a-and I’m not sure what w-would happen if…if…”

“If you actually had her?” Anya asked.

Tara nodded her head yes.

“Tara, you have more self-control than any of the rest of our family, with the exception of maybe William…you can handle it. Even if Willow chose to stay the way she is…you could still have a life with her…” Anya said, putting her arm around her sister.

“…and w-watch her grow old and get sick and d-die? I don’t think I c-could bare it, Anya…having her with me, knowing th-that someday…I w-would lose her again?”

“You know…a famous person once said that it’s better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all…” Anya reminder her.

“Do you r-really believe that?”

“Yes…I do…” Anya said, taking a moment to think about it. “I really do…I only wish I had the chance that you have…”

“Be c-careful what you wish for…” Tara warned.

Meanwhile…

“Will? Will…you okay?” Xander asked.

Willow felt numb. Everything that she had known only a few hours before,
now seemed insignificant. The world was still round…but that was about the only thing that was the same.

“Will!”

“What? Yeah…just a lot to take in all at once…sorry…”

“So you see why you can’t hang out or anything else with Tara Maclay…it’s just not safe.” Buffy explained.

“But you said that the Maclays aren’t like the other vampires…they don’t hunt…us…right?” Willow asked.

“They haven’t since they came here…since the agreement. But Will, the chance is always there that they might…and Tara’s the youngest one there…she might not have the control that William and the others have developed.” Xander explained.

“Listen Will…if you start hanging out with her, and things get out of hand…I’m going to have to stake her…so if you care about her at all…you’ll stay away from her…don’t even put her in that position…okay?”

“You know…I’m feeling kinda tired…would you guys mind? I just want to rest for a while…ribs are aching.” Willow said, trying to get them out of the house.

“Yeah…sure Wills. If you need us for anything, give us a call…k?” Xander said, getting up.

Willow nodded.

Buffy turned just as they were about to walk out the door.

“I’ll be watching…” she said, closing the door behind her.

Willow wondered if her words were a promise or a threat…


To Be Continued...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby perchiper » Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:13 pm

Ha ha ha!

Who knows Anya = Alice ?
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Re: TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER FIVE IS NOW UP!! 11-17-09

Postby Vamp_Willz » Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:30 am

Catching up on reviews!!

Chapter 5:
FIRESIGN wrote:Try as she might, she could not deny it’s existence, and as night fell, she stood watch outside the girl’s window until she was sure that Willow was asleep, slipping silently inside to stand watch…

I read that and immediately thought: Stalker Tara!!


CH 6:
FIRESIGN wrote:*Smacking self* DOH! You idiot! You asked her how she’s doing?!!


It's so Willow its spooky.

Ch 8:
FIRESIGN wrote:“Really? Maybe it’s just this darned Wikipedia…can’t trust anything on here…” Willow said, her brow wrinkling slightly as she continued her web search.


*snickers* that is soooo true! I tried looking up some stuff when i was doing a paper, then went back to look at the page and it was totally different!
*mumbles* piece a junk

Chapter 10:
FIRESIGN wrote:Buffy turned just as they were about to walk out the door.

“I’ll be watching…” she said, closing the door behind her.


>.

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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:18 am

Yay for good update-y goodness... I hope Willow goes to see Tara now that she knows that she is a vampire... I kinda hope that Willow says to Buffy & Co Screw you guys I'm making my own decisions...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby AmberGoddess » Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:19 am

Why is it that in all of these fics Buffy is extremely unlikeable? Oh well, I like this one. More please!
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby willowandtaraforever » Tue Dec 01, 2009 5:51 am

Yay Update!!!!!!!! I hope buffy stays out of willows life already. shes a big girl that can make her own decisions. I hope tara realizes that she can't change what's meant to happen. more soon please. :pray
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 11 - 12-2-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:07 pm

Chapter Eleven

Willow’s mind was reeling, so much so that she didn’t even hear her father return from work.

“Wills? Hon, are you okay?” He asked, sitting a bag of groceries on the kitchen table.

“What?” Willow said, snapping out of her daze.

“You okay? You seem like you were off in another world just now.” He said, concerned that maybe they had released her from the hospital prematurely.

“No…I mean…yeah…I’m fine, Dad…just thinking…”

“So what’s the topic of discussion in that brain of yours? I can see the wheels turning…” He said, jokingly.

“What are you talking about?”

“When you were just a kid…you’d get that same far-away look on your face…and whenever I’d ask you what you were thinking about…you’d say that your left brain was having a discussion with your right brain…you were such an odd kid!” He laughed, as he started unpacking the groceries.

“Dad…can I ask you a question?” Willow said, examining the contents of the grocery bag.

“Sure hon…what’s up?” He said, continuing to take the contents out of the bag.

“Say…you knew someone who liked this person…and her friends were telling her all kinds of bad things about the person…but that person has only been nice to you…but her friends are telling her not to hang out or do anything with that person…what would you do?” Willow babbled.

Ira looked at his daughter, smiling...the red-head had been a babbler since the moment she started talking.

“Well…I’d tell your ‘friend’ that her friends are probably trying to look out for her…but that she should judge a person based on what her experience with the person has been…not just on heresay.”

“Geez, Dad…heresay? You’re starting to sound like a lawyer!”

“Hey, no need to be mean!” He joked. “So who is it that Buffy and Xander are trying to turn you against?” He said, smiling.

“I said it was a friend…”

“Uh-huh…right. So who is it?”

“Tara…Tara Maclay.” Willow said, intently studying his reaction.

“The girl who pulled you from the surf? Seems real nice…wonder what the kids have against her.” Ira said, picking up a jar of spaghetti sauce. “Spaghetti okay by you?”

“Sure…” Willow said. “They…um…well…she’s just…different…”

“Everybody’s different...” Ira said, filling a pot with water and placing it on the stove. “…different doesn’t necessarily mean bad…”

“I agree…” Willow said, pulling a box of spaghetti from the grocery bag.

“You know…there was a time not-so-long ago that people like us were considered different…” Ira said, raising his eyebrow.

Willow knew exactly what he was talking about. Her grandmother had been a little girl in Warsaw during World War II. She had survived Birkenau only because she had what the Nazi’s had considered a ‘useful skill’… she made beautiful pottery, and because her hands were smaller, they could create more intricate patterns with the wheel. It was for this reason that she was spared the gas chamber. She had first told a young Willow the story when, she noticed the number tattooed on the inside of her Grandma’s arm. Even if what Buffy and Xander were teller her about Tara was true…she couldn’t turn her back on her.

“Tara was here earlier…a-and I think I did something that kind of upset her…” Willow confessed.

“So…what are you going to do about it?” Ira asked.

“Dad…can I borrow the car?” She said, a look of resolve spreading across her face.

Ira reached into his pocket, tossing her the keys.

“The Maclay’s live on that private drive off Oceanview Drive…you know where that is?” Ira asked.

“Yeah…that’s not too far from the beach, right?” Willow asked.

“Yep…just go past the beach and keep going…you’ll see the drive. You want me to hold off on the spaghetti?”

“Nope…I like it cold anyhow.” Willow said, giving Ira a quick kiss on the cheek. “Thanks, Dad!” She said, hurrying towards the door.

“Good luck, kitten!” Ira said just before the door closed.

Meanwhile…

“So…race you back to the house!” Anya said with a smile as she nudged her younger sister’s shoulder.

“Nah…I’m not really in the mood…readysetgo!” Tara said, springing to her feet, she disappeared through the woods, laughing.

“No fair!” Anya said, sprinting to catch up to her.

The two weaved through the forest effortlessly and had almost reached the house when Tara caught a familiar scent on the wind that stopped her mid-stride.

Anya stopped as well, catching the same scent as Tara.

“What is she doing here?” Tara wondered, out loud.

“Who is it?” Anya asked, not recognizing anything in particular about the scent, other than the fact that it was human.

“It’s her…” Tara said, looking to her sister. “It’s Willow.”

“You have to talk to her.” Anya said, putting a comforting hand on Tara’s shoulder. “It will be alright…I promise…”

Tara looked deep into Anya’s eyes. If Anya had even the slightest shred of a doubt, Tara would have seen it…but there was none to be found. She nodded, and they both continued their path to the house, arriving just as Willow pulled up to the house.

Alright, Rosenberg…what the hell were you thinking? If what Buffy and Xander said is true…you could very well be walking into a proverbial bee’s nest here…or should I say, vamp’s nest…

The Maclay’s house looked like it had been cut from the pages of an architectural magazine, something designed by the likes of Frank Lloyd Wright. The exterior was a collage of glass, with field stone borders keeping it all from crashing to the ground, surrounded by woods for as far as the eyes could see.

“Wow…” Willow said, putting the car into park. She sat there for a moment, just taking in the sight of it. She was startled by a light knock on her driver’s side window…it was Tara. She opened the car door, stepping outside.

“W-what are you doing here?” Tara asked, backing off, crossing her arms protectively in front of her, in a feeble attempt to hold herself back from Willow.

“We need to talk…” Willow said, surprised by the fact that she probably should be afraid…but oddly, she wasn’t.

“You shouldn’t b-be here…”

“Can we please just talk?” Willow asked.

Tara turned, walking away towards the trees. “There’s n-nothing to talk a-about.” She said, continuing down the path.

Willow tried to walk faster, but the ache in her ribs wouldn’t allow it.

“Ouch!” Willow said, holding her side. “Can you hold up for just a frilly second?”

Tara turned, her look softening as she saw that Willow was in pain.

“You n-need to go.”

“I’m not going anywhere…” Willow said, grimacing. “I know what you are.”

Tara moved closer, her eyes narrowing, somewhat taken aback by what Willow had just said.

“What exactly w-would that be?” She said, purposely getting closer in the hopes that the red-head would feel uncomfortable or intimidated and would go away. “Say it!” She said, sternly.

“Vampire.” Willow said, somewhat weakly.

Goddess! She does know!

“I’m not afraid of you, Tara…” Willow said, standing her ground.

“You should be.” Tara said, almost too calm as she circled Willow as though she was her prey.

“I’m not.”

“Then ask yourself the m-most basic question about me…what do I eat?” Tara said, plainly.

“I know what you’re doing…and it’s not going to work…you’re not going to scare me away, Tara!”

“Come with m-me.” Tara said, reaching her hand out to Willow. “You n-need to see something.”

Willow put her small hand in Tara’s, and the moment that her fingers intertwined with the other girl’s, they were off. Tara pulled Willow onto her back, running like the wind through the forest once again. The action took Willow by surprise and she clung tightly to Tara’s body. They continued for a few minutes until they came upon the cliff overlooking the ocean below. Tara eased Willow off of her back and walked near the edge by herself.

“Y-you need to see what I really am…” Tara said, pulling her sleeves up, exposing the skin of her arms underneath.

Willow’s mouth hung agape as she saw the creamy white skin of Tara’s arm sparkle like diamonds in the sunlight. The sparkling stopped at her wrists, as though she had put on a pair of gloves.

“You’re beautiful!” Willow said, mesmerized. “Not saying that you weren’t before…because you were…or I mean…you are! I thought you were gorgeous from the moment I saw you…but this…you look like diamonds! Why doesn’t your hands and face…?” Willow asked, reaching out to touch Tara’s arm, only to have her pull it defensively away.

“Theatrical m-make-up…covers it s-so it doesn’t show.” Tara said, quickly pulling her sleeves back down, as if ashamed of what she was.

“So sunlight doesn’t make you go ‘poof’? I thought that was a rule or something…” Willow babbled.

“Not my k-kind…there are others who are photosensitive, though…” Tara said, turning her back on Willow. “I tried to stay away from you…but I c-can’t.” She confessed.

“Then don’t!” Willow said, feeling the pull between the two of them.

“You’re like a drug t-to me…my own personal brand of heroin…” Tara explained. “…and even though I’ve never… I…I crave you...constantly.”

“Then quit running away from me!” Willow said, moving closer to the blonde once again, taking her cold hands in her own.

The two stood that way, hand-in-hand, gazing into each other’s eyes.

“S-so…the lioness fell for the lamb…” Tara said, smiling weakly.

“Stupid lamb.” Willow said, returning the smile.

“Crazy masochistic lioness.” Tara countered.


To Be Continued...
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