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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:17 am

Inlerf: Damien is the name of the Antichrist in the film trilogy The Omen. Technically, Cain is the antichrist, being the son of Satan, but he's a sweet little boy rather than an evil vessel.

the Bell rang for Eliza (Luc's wife) and Sophie (Kel's adopted daughter). Both of them are human. The Bell is NEVER wrong. Eliza and Sophie are dead.

As for Buffy/Faith...I dunno, there's a lot of anger between them. But then again...hate, passion, fine line...plus their future selves weren't exactly at each other's throats...who knows?

WillowRulez: I got so annoyed with Buffy's sanctimonious attitude about Faith way back in S3/S4 and then through most of S6 & 7. She's getting put in her place, finally. Go Kel!
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Aug 06, 2006 7:57 pm

*Whew* Finally caught up, and I say Wow!

You continue to amaze me with the twists and turns. Buffy and Faith? I just don't know...... Guess I'll just have to hang out and see what you're up to. ;-)

Sorry to hear about the surgery, aren't you a bit young for that kind of stuff? Take it easy.

I will taked VERY good care of your Amazon's until you need them again! :banana

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Tue Aug 08, 2006 5:21 am

I'm VERY young for that sort of stuff which is why it's taken them so long to do something about it - they were hoping it would go away on it's own. Obviously it didn't.
No, I don't hear from Ashley, unfortunately. I might send her a message.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Tue Aug 15, 2006 3:02 pm

Okay Kittens, here's the deal. I'm writing the next chapter, but the muse is being childish and stubborn. I'm off on holiday on Sunday for two weeks, so I'll try and have a chapter done by then. If not, I'll write it over the hols and post as soon as I get back. Promise.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:20 am

Change of plan. The hospital just called, my operation is on monday. (Didn't ya just know they'd time it to screw up my holidays?)

Update therafter, but I'm hitting pause again.

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby mole » Fri Aug 18, 2006 4:26 am

Sending you good thoughts for a speedy recovery. Take care,
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby WillowRulez » Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:19 pm

Good luck and a speedy recovery from me too ;)
We can wait, health comes first. But you knew that already :smash
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Aug 18, 2006 5:24 pm

Don't worry about the story sweetie, we'll be waiting patiently.

Take care of yourself!!

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Sat Aug 19, 2006 4:17 am

Hey, you've still got those Amazons, right? It can't all be bad. Thanks for the support, guys. The next chapter's gonna be a doozy, just for you.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:01 pm

My operation was canceled at the last minute. The next few days I'll be running around trying to get organised, so it'll be quite a while, but it's on it's way. Honest.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Aug 23, 2006 12:19 pm

TEASER!!!!!!


Alternatives

Chapter 2
Rating:NC17 to be safe
Spoilers: All of it. Even the crappy bits.
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All hell broke loose. Sirens blared over the fading note emanating from the Bell. People sprinted into the building, looking around to see who was missing, then, once they realised, waiting quietly for instruction.

After a moment Luc reappeared, tears racing down his bloodstained face. When he spoke, however, it was with icy control.

“Kel,”

The former angel looked up.

“It’s the Watchers.”

She looked back with a terrible blankness in her eyes, then turned to the assembled throng.

“Arm up.”
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:42 pm

Edited 'cause of double posting. My bad.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:43 pm

Alternatives

Chapter 24
Rating:NC17 to be safe
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All hell broke loose. Sirens blared over the fading note emanating from the Bell. People sprinted into the building, looking around to see who was missing, then, once they realised, waiting quietly for instruction.

After a moment Luc reappeared, tears racing down his bloodstained face. When he spoke, however, it was with icy control.

“Kel,”

The former angel looked up.

“It’s the Watchers.”

She looked back momentarily with a terrible blankness in her eyes and turned to the assembled throng.

“Arm up.”

Luc strode to a large cupboard against the far wall and opened it, revealing a massive arsenal of semi-automatic machine guns. He passed each person a weapon and they checked and loaded it with military precision. The Scoobies marvelled at the ease with which each person handled their gun. They had no time to ask questions, however, as the last person was handed their firearm and the room shimmered out of being.



Quentin Travers bent over the limp form of the woman and inspected her. Satisfied that she was dead, he turned back to the wet team accompanying him.

“Good work. We’ll proceed to the village and destroy the other targets, then return – “

Behind him, a voice spoke angrily.

“Quentin, what have you done?”

He turned slowly and saw Rupert Giles, accompanied by the two Slayers and the civilians. He ignored them, however and focused on Kel.

“I’m here to destroy an abomination,” he said.

Kel looked at the bodies of her sister-in-law and daughter with detached interest. A terrible calm had settled in her mind as she realised that this wasn’t a random attack. The Metatron had warned her that the Authority would send human agents. She could hear a low buzzing in her ears. Vaguely, she registered that the Watcher was speaking again.

“The Slayers will return with us for assessment and retraining, if it’s possible to break her hold on them. The civilians will be returned to the Hellmouth. We must take the witches and their…offspring for testing. God only knows what they are,” Travers said with disgust.

“Abomination?” Kel said softly, not realising her accent had lost all trace of Gaelic and was back to the clipped control that made her sound remarkable like her father.

“I’m the abomination? You’ve just murdered a child.”

Her voice was mild, as though genuinely interested in the distinction. Her thoughts seemed to float across her mind as she watched.

She’s just a little child. A little human child, barely born. She wasn’t part of this. All this, just because I love her? All this to warn me off saving these humans?

The choice the Authority was presenting was clear. She could save Tara, save the world, change the Plan, but she would lose her family. Again.

The air began to thicken and press in. Massive clouds built up, obscuring the sun and plunging them into semi-darkness. The trees around them seemed to tower maliciously, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. The humans looked around fearfully, but Kel stood, oblivious, watching the bodies with that same disinterested curiosity.

Luc chose that moment to reappear, his son in tow. Cain looked at his mother’s body for a moment, closed his eyes and morphed. His forehead sprouted dangerous-looking horns, his incisors descended to below his jaw line and his hands became clawed appendages well suited to tearing flesh. His skin was a mottled grey and his hair the colour of old blood. He let out a soft keening that rose into a murderous howl and dived for the Watchers, only to rebound against an invisible force.

“Kel, you’ve got to revive them!” Luc urged her, his voice frantic.

Revive them? It was possible, of course. Heal their bodies, retrieve their spiritual being and reintegrate the two. But it was forbidden, and she’d broken so many rules already. The prospect of further intervention was unpleasant. Distantly, she heard Luc’s voice again.

“Kel please! Listen! Eliza’s pregnant!”

Kel looked at the corpse, noting the dark stain spreading across the seat of her jeans.

“Was pregnant,” she corrected, only a second before the Bell tolled out a third mournful note.

The sound rolled through the fog in her mind, enabling her to focus her thoughts.

My child is dead. My brother’s wife is dead. My brother’s child is dead.

Screw the rules.


Thunder broke suddenly, hammering into the ground, followed immediately by a thin, high wind that screamed fury at the heavens and seemed to push the world apart. The trees nearby seemed to stagger back, leaving them in a large clearing. Kel took a step forward, looked up at the sky, and spoke.

“Do your worst. I’m in the game.”

She lifted a clenched fist above her head. From behind trees, bushes and rocks the heavily armed villagers emerged, training laser sights on the forehead, throat, stomach, groin and knees of each member of the Watcher group.

“You expect me to be impressed?” Snarled Travers. One of his men tried to raise their own rifle. There was a muffled burst of gunfire and suddenly he was disarmed, his weapon full of holes and on the ground.

“This isn’t about you, Watcher. You’re a message.”

Kel spoke with her true voice, regal and deadly and absolute. She opened her hand and each gun pointed at the Watchers was cocked.

“You’re bluffing,” Travers said, but with less than his usual arrogance.

Kel smiled like a knife, and lowered her arm. The guns fired.


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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:53 pm

God, I hate Travers.
More soonish?
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby db » Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:51 pm

exactly.

Who is the abomination here? Stupid Traves I say. Stupid a**

Kel just so needs to kick Travers ass -- and I hope that for some reason he doesn't bite it, but rather messes his pants... I dunno. Moral superiority?

And Kel. Please let her save the Sophie and Eliza and the baby!
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby inlerf » Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:18 am

ah, and all out war. very fun. and you're cruel to kill luc's family. :/ luc + kel war form...oooh.

sudden idea: maybe it is because of what kel did, declaring war on PTB, that caused the world to end. :D
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:34 am

inlerf: Hmmm...you think so? :P

db: It's interesting that you should mention moral superiority. that's a whole big theme in the next chapter

More soon. The next chapter is what I've affectionately nicknamed my 'Action Movie' chapter.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby inlerf » Mon Sep 11, 2006 4:53 am

i know so. ;)
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:27 am

Well, whatdya know? Psychic spoilers! Nice one! Perhaps I should change the plot just to throw you off, hmm? Nah, it'd take too long. Plus, you know, it'd screw up the plot.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Sun Sep 24, 2006 6:36 am

Okay, I'm not very well at the moment so I'm writing this chapter in parts. Here's the first part.

Alternatives 25 part a
Disclaimers etc: See previous chapters.


The echoes of gunfire fell away from the small clearing, leaving a hollow silence. Willow and Tara both had instinctively turned their backs, shielding the infant they each carried. After a moment they slowly turned back, fully expecting to see the ground littered with corpses.

No one was dead.

Each bullet had stopped moving millimetres away from its target and now hung, motionless, in mid air. Kel inhaled sharply and the bullets seemed to lunge forward, only to be brought up short by some invisible force.

“No!” She snarled, “You cannot deny me this.”

We can, came the silent voice, seeming to fill the clearing. Dawn and Xander clapped their hands over their ears in protest against the words that were more pressure than sound. We must.

And suddenly Kel was on her knees, muscles straining against an invisible net holding her in place.

“I...will…have…them,” she ground out.

Then we must intervene.

There was a moment’s pause as the struggle between the forces being exerted reached a head, and then it was gone. Kel knelt gasping on the dirt as the wind that built drained away. The hovering bullets faded into nothing, and Willow’s eardrums stopped trying to implode. The assembled throng stood in silence as the voice spoke again.

The choice is yours. Accept the consequences.

Kel stood carefully, her every muscle trembling as she absorbed the meaning of their decision. She could avenge her family, return their souls to their bodies, and retrieve all that was lost. But it would a direct strike against the Authority. There was no way to know what would happen. Or she could allow the Watchers to live. Her mind raced. She had made a choice like this before, chosen to obey, and now she was Fallen, her world about to end, on the brink of plunging into a celestial civil war. She couldn’t decide. Luc. Luc would know. His life, his entire being existed to maintain the status quo. She could count on him to keep them safe. She turned and met his eyes.

But Luc had been human once; she realised, and had died at her hand because of a choice like this. His eyes flashed and a vicious glee spread over his face.

“Do it, Kel,” he urged, his voice low and seductive. She twitched. Her gaze swept over Cain, still in his adolescent battle-form, the Scoobs, gaping silently, the armed humans at her command, watching her with absolute trust, and finally the Watchers, struck into awed silence. Her eyes narrowed. She turned fully to face them and took a step forward.

This is what you chose? The voice enquired.

“It is,” she stated, prowling toward the terrified intruders.

Very well.

The massive black clouds that had swirled overhead parted. A beam of light sliced down to encompass the fallen angel completely, stopping her cold.

Then we have no choice.



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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby db » Sun Sep 24, 2006 11:52 am

OK. I am forced to realize that I have left piss poor feedback to your story. I apologize and now will commence the ritual groveling.

This is an interesting story -- it is well written and has lots of intrigue and excitement. The plot is not transparent it's compelling and the characters are well developed and interesting too. I love Kel and Luc - they have a story all their own that is interesting to me. I also like the development of Faith -- the compassion that Kel shows her and the fact that she seems redeemable in your story. That said, I have questions... and I blame you. (After all, this chapter ends in a nasty cliffhanger. *pouts*)

What's Kel going to do? Will she save Luc's wife and baby? What is the bright light and way is the Authority such a huge pile of crap.... and why are Willow and Tara hanging out there with the bullets and the babies?

I want Travers to be at least maimed and Luc's family to be saved and for there to be some hot lesbian w/t love and also for Kel to finally feel redeemed.

I hope you're feeling better soon.

Here. Have some pie.

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby WillowRulez » Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:38 pm

Hope you are feeling better soonish :(
What just happened? What did Kel chose? :smash
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby inlerf » Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:03 pm

heh heh, devil. ;)

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:59 am

Okay, here I am, no longer all puke-y and headache-y, so writing shall commence at once. This chapter is still being posted in smaller parts, mostly because I still can't sit at the computer for very long, and I'd like feedback on each section seperately.

db - i wouldn't say pisspoor, but thank you for the renewed vigour.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Sep 27, 2006 9:06 am

Here's part the second of this chapter. Each chunk is about two pages long, so this chapter'll have a few more parts yet. Enjoy.

Alternatives 25b

Disclaimers etc: See previous chapters.



Kel stood motionless inside the beam of supernatural light, waiting. There was no way they would stop her from exercising her rights once she had declared her intent, so clearly they were trying to figure out how to make it seem like their idea all along. She waited patiently.

The assembled group of onlookers held their collective breath as the waited to see what would happen. All sound had ceased; the unnatural storm caused by Kel’s fury had frozen as though someone had simply hit the ‘Pause’ button. A long moment passed. Slowly, they became aware of a thin, high whistle; the sound of something metal falling through the air. The sound grew louder and the object became visible; a large sword falling faster than seemed possible. The whistling grew louder and louder as the weapon fell, aimed directly at the unmoving figure within the beam. She watched it descend with intense scrutiny until it finally plunged into the earth at her feet, tilted so the handle was angled toward her, as though the earth itself offered it to her as a gift. The light surrounding her began to fade as the terrible voice rolled through the clearing one last time.

We return what was taken. Claim your birthright.

Kel stared at the sword with outright disbelief. It was clearly very old, but beautifully maintained. The hilt and pommel were wrapped with worn leather and the blade boasted an edge too keen to be seen by the human eye. Finally, she tore her gaze away to meet her brother’s eyes again. He too wore an expression of incredulity, but as he turned to her it was replaced by overwhelming glee. He saw the doubt and cautious hope on Kel’s face and spoke in her mind.

It’s not a trick. It’s the real thing.

He laughed out loud, his voice filled with joy. Kel turned back to the proffered blade and slowly reached for the handle. She grasped it firmly and pulled it from the earth. The blade began to shine with some internal light, glad to be in its master’s hand again. The light reached up toward her and she inhaled sharply as the physical changes began.

There was an uncomfortable popping sensation as new bone sprouted from each vertebra of her spine, extending her ribcage down the length of her torso. Her shoulder blades became thicker and longer, reaching down to meet at the small of her back and broadening to cover most of her back to act as a support for the band of muscle that wrapped itself around her upper body. At the bottom of her spine, her tailbone split into three distinct appendages, two of which extended down her legs to join smoothly onto each femur. The third, central thread anchored itself to her hips, sinking her centre of gravity. Her collarbones thickened and extra cartilage grew around them to support the enhanced pectoral muscles that were forming under her breasts. Finally, she felt the pulling sensation of thin, hollow bones sprouting from the scar tissue on her shoulders as skin detached from her back to spread across the frame they created. She inhaled deeply, stretched, and turned back to the Watchers. Luc stepped forward to join her, taking his place at her side. She threw a sidelong glace at him and smiled with honest joy.

“Now the real fun begins,” she said as they spread their wings.

Rather than huge feathered monstrosities, the wings were bat-like; thin, hollow bones with translucent membrane stretched between them. Luc had black wings with dark red veins running across the skin much like the streaks in his hair. Kel, by contrast, had bright blue veins running through white skin. They appeared delicate, almost fragile, and gave the angels a vulnerable air that was strangely affecting.

Across the clearing, one of the Watcher team crossed himself as he exclaimed “Merciful Christ!” Kel fixed her gaze on him.

“Not today,” she replied. There was a muted tearing sound and the Watcher simply disintegrated. Luc laughed again, the sound becoming far more sinister and threatening.

“One down,” he murmured.

Willow watched mutely as the restored angel and her brother shifted into battle-form. Unlike the somewhat gruesome shape that Cain had shifted into, Kel and Luc became elegant and streamlined. Sharp bone spurs extended from their elbows, knees and knuckles, clearly designed to add bite to hand-to-hand combat. A sheer film spread over their wings as each bone joint was covered in protective cartilage. Each of their teeth became pointed and cruel. Their ears retreated into their head and their noses flattened into two slits. Their pupils dilated until only the black could be seen, while their brows extended and hardened much like a vampire’s, protecting the eyes. Their fingernail became vicious talons. Clearly, their bodies had been designed to inflict maximum damage while minimising the chances of being seriously wounded. The result was terrifying. Two of the Watchers fainted clean away.

The two battle-ready angels advanced on the intruders with clearly murderous intent. Their human prey tried to flee, but found themselves bound the spot. They walked among the Watchers, touching each one gently. At each touch, the victim would howl with pain and disintegrate, leaving a patch of grey dust on the ground. Finally, they reached Travers, who was shaking uncontrollably. Kel leaned forward and whispered something inaudible in his ear. He whimpered and a dark stain began to spread over the front of his trousers. Rather than disintegrating, he simply vanished. The angels turned back to the Scoobs and reverted to human form. This all seemed so anti-climactic that Willow found herself trembling with unexpressed emotion. Instead of the expected fury and chaos, Kel had been lenient, almost gentle. No-one knew what to think. Kel and Luc led the stunned humans away from the clearing and back toward the manor.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby WillowRulez » Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:49 pm

Uhm.. I wouldnt wanna get on Luc and Kel's bad side.
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby db » Wed Sep 27, 2006 4:25 pm

I am confused. I thought Kel was stripped of her birthright by the same people she was defying? Am I just hopelessly lost?

Was this all just some sort of test of some kind?

But the image of Kel and Luc in their terrible vengeful form. I *bet* Travers pissed his pants. *gulp* they are scary. I certainly wou;dn't want to piss them off.

What is the sword that they drop? Does it symbolize something or is it just her sword? Does it have speclial powers? I wonder if it can cleave and subvert the dominant male paradigm in one slice of its mighty swordness? *wiggles eyebrows*

Kel is a rock star.

...and I can't wait to read what's coming next.

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby RageMore7 » Thu Sep 28, 2006 8:24 pm

i started reading this story yesterday and finished it today and it was really buggin me at work cause i couldn't read and all i wanted to do was see what happened next *gasp* i really liked it :party

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Sat Sep 30, 2006 3:42 am

thank you very much. I'm off to Wales for ten days, so the next update will be in a couple of weeks. There's a prize for whoever can guess what happens next (unless you already know, APRIL!), so if you think you've figured it out, PM me. The winner gets their very own cameo!

Why isn't there a tongue-in-cheek smilie?
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:00 am

Hello!

So the trip to Wales went badly. I kind of accidently found myself in a weird cult-like religion. Freaked me out like anything. Anyhoo.

Bad news I'm afraid. I'm going on hiatus from Alternatives until after my operation, which is on the 26th of this month. I'll try and write afterwards, although I might need someone to check it through if I write while on morphine. Could be amusing though!

See you all at the end of the month!
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