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AU- The Midnight Players of SHS **Updated 11/16!!!!!!!

Postby mangled_monkey » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:17 pm

Author's Note: This is my first fic (that I will admit to, anyway) and it is very much a work in progress. Any suggestions and feedback will be greatly appreciated, since I'm still struggling with a few different storylines. Posting is my way of getting the story to move along. This story has a set timeline, beginning in mid-November of 2006. The characters are high school age.
I am also looking for a second beta if anyone is interested. I think my girlfriend is a bit biased.

Disclaimer: I own nothing but a rather nice computer. Suing will only make me unable to write. I don't own the Midnight Players either. That is a salute to my high school drama troupe.

Summary: Willow moves to Sunnydale halfway through her senior year- just in time for the Spring play auditions.

And, without further ado, I bring you:

The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter One

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Willow looked hesitantly up at the Sunnydale High School building. It stood over her like a gloomy statue, representing everything she had grown to despise. Not that she disliked the idea of school, quite the contrary. The concept of a place young people could go to learn appealed to her, yet the reality was so much different from the concept. In this reality, students could not rely on teachers to protect them as they were supposed to, and school became terrifying to those that were there to learn, rather than socialize. Having been teased and tortured since starting school when she was five, she believed that the only positive part of the school day was the learning itself. That was the part she was good at, so that was the part she liked.

She knew she’d be late if she didn’t go in to find her class soon but right now she didn’t really care. Right now, the possibility of being late wasn’t nearly as bad as being alone. Everyone she cared about and grew to rely on was on the opposite side of the country, missing her as much as she missed them. Knowing it was hopeless to dwell on friends she would never see again, she sighed in resignation and slowly entered the building.

The first sound to reach her ears was laughter. The sound stung, since it signified happiness, something she believed she would never feel again. She found it annoying that someone could be so happy when she was so sad, so she turned towards the sound to see who was laughing. She found the culprit within a small group of students dressed in either all black or jeans and a t-shirt. No one in the group seemed to care greatly about their appearance; half of them didn’t even comb their hair. A petite blonde girl was in the middle of the group. She was wearing a black sweater and jeans and all attention was on her as she waved her arms about in the air animatedly, telling a joke it seemed.

Willow smiled slightly, remembering her small group of friends back in New York. At the beginning of every day at her old school, her, Ruth and Polly would stand by Ruth’s locker and talk. They had been her best friends since kindergarten; when she had broken a crayon and Ruth had taken the blame for it. Ruth was slightly overweight and Polly was paper thin, causing them both to be teased for their outward appearances. Willow was teased because of her clothes. She frowned at the memory of a cruel football player stopping to tease them, saying “Hey Polly, you need to gain some weight… why don’t you eat Fatso over here? I’m sure she’d make a great burger… Heck, she could feed the whole football team for two weeks!” While most of the insults were as dim-witted as that one, she had been lucky that time, escaping ridicule. But that incident had caused Ruth to cry and hide in the bathroom for first and second period. Willow had gotten her one and only detention for skipping class to comfort her friend.

She looked down at her own appearance and the clothes her mother had picked out for her the week before. Back home, she was mocked endlessly for her “choice” in clothing, even though she didn’t choose it at all. The way she dressed was the only thing that caused people to tease her, since they never took the time to get to know her. If anyone had gotten to know her better, they would have teased her for many other reasons. She was always talking too much and saying things she shouldn’t, as well as always getting overly excited about her good grades and academic achievement. The few boys in school she was able to talk to laughed at her because she wasn’t able to say anything intelligent in front of them, and ended up just telling her to go away because she was being annoying. Only two people hadn’t made fun of her. Her friends. In fact, she developed a crush on Polly, even if she would never allow herself to admit it. Polly had come out to Willow shortly before Willow was told she was moving to Sunnydale. Some part of Willow wondered how their relationship would have turned out if she had stayed in New York to develop it more, but that part was hidden deep inside her so she barely registered its existence.

Willow walked slowly to class, musing over what she had left behind. She entered her classroom, Honors World History, and sat at a desk in the front, so she could take notes more easily. She was secretly pleased that, due to harder work last year, she was in the classes with students who would take school more seriously. She took her notebook out of her backpack and put it on the desk, then removed her pen. She smiled at the pink fuzzy pen that Ruth had given her as a present before she left. Ruth had been her best friend in New York and the present was more of a reminder of her than anything else.

The redhead waited for the bell to ring, looking around the room at her new classmates. They were all smiling and laughing or talking to each other. Not one of her classmates was alone. Willow looked down at her notebook and opened it to the first page, writing “World History Notes” in dark blue ink on the page. She drew doodles of quills and old fashioned glasses as she waited.

The door opened and Willow looked up, expecting the teacher. The blonde girl she had seen talking to a group of peers earlier walked into the room and sat next to Willow and smiled at her. “You’re in my seat…”

Willow panicked, immediately standing and picking up her backpack and mumbling an apology. The blonde laughed. “I was kidding.”

“Oh, um… I knew that…” Willow took her seat again and opened the notebook; suddenly very interested in the doodles she had drawn. She heard the blonde scoot her desk closer and looked up. The girl was now less than a foot away from her. She smiled, taking out her own notebook.

“I’m Buffy Summers. Are you Willow?”

Willow nodded.

“Great. Do you act?”

Willow shook her head.

“Oh. Well, we can work around that…”

Willow was left to wonder what the girl meant as another girl entered the room. She had dark blonde hair, which was all Willow could tell about her since she was staring at the ground with her hair covering her face. The girl quickly moved to the seat behind Buffy’s and sat down, quietly taking out her notebook and textbook and starting on the assignment that was written on the board.

Willow glanced curiously at the new stranger, then back to Buffy as she turned around to greet the girl. “Hey Tara, how was your night? I heard Joey tried to ask you out again…”

The girl, Tara, grinned slightly, and now Willow could see her face fully. She was pretty, but not by any standards drop-dead gorgeous and Willow barely gave her a second look until “Joey’s an idiot. She knows I’d never date her.”

Willow got very confused. ‘She?’ she ran the phrase that Tara had just said through her mind a few times and realized that Tara did indeed get asked out by a girl. ‘Wow, this place is VERY different from my old school.’

Buffy seemed to realize she was leaving Willow out and turned back to her. “Uh, Willow… This is Tara. Tara, Willow.”

As Willow and Tara exchanged polite smiles and waves, the bell rang and the teacher walked into the room, placing a textbook on Willow’s desk and startling her. Mrs. Travis smiled at Willow and walked to the front of the room to begin class. The teacher raised her voice slightly as she began talking to quiet some boys in the back. “Today we will be covering Chapter 13 in the textbook.” Willow turned to the page and was amused to see pictures from the hippy era splattered across the page. “Everyone please complete the section review questions on page 214 and turn them in by the end of class today. You may work in groups of no more than four people. Also, on Thursday, your assignment is to come in dressed as something from this era. If you do not have proper attire you may borrow some from the costume director for the drama club. She has volunteered the costumes for this activity. Anyone that does not participate will be given a zero for the assignment. Please get into your groups and begin.”

Willow got paper from her binder and began the assignment as the students around her moved their desks into circles to talk to one another. Buffy turned her desk around to face Tara’s and gave her a few pieces of paper. The both stared at Willow, waiting for her to join them. Willow didn’t notice, as she was already hard at work on the assignment. Buffy finally spoke up, “Hey, Willow? Do you want to work with me and Tara?”

Willow smiled and nodded as she turned her desk to join them.



A half hour later, they were finished with the assignment and began talking to try and get to know each other better. Willow was being interrogated about her life in New York. Buffy and Tara learned that Willow hadn’t had many friends, had never had a boyfriend (or girlfriend) and had never been on stage. Willow learned that Buffy and Tara had been friends since third grade, when Tara transferred into Buffy’s school and that both of them were on tech crew for the play productions at the high school. Buffy also acted in the performances, somehow managing to balance her time enough to attend both drama club meetings and tech crew meetings. She also learned that Tara’s favorite movie was Lara Croft: Tomb Raider and that Buffy liked karate movies.

“So, Willow, what are you doing Friday night?” Buffy asked.

Willow shrugged slightly. “Probably staying home and watching movies. Why?”

“I’m having a sleepover…” Willow wondered if Buffy was taunting her with her lack of friends until she added, “you can come if you want.”

Willow’s eyes went wide as she tried to comprehend what Buffy was saying. “Really? You’re actually inviting me to a sleepover? Like, the me sleeping at your house with the popcorn and the pajamas and the sodas? But aren’t you popular?”

Buffy and Tara both laughed as Buffy replied. “Which question should I answer first?”

Willow shrugged. “Asking order I guess…”

The blonde grinned. “Alright. Yes, I’m inviting you to a sleepover, yes, that kind of sleepover, and no, I’m not popular. Is that all of them?”

“Uh, yeah.” Willow paused noticeably, thinking. “Oh, but I saw you with a bunch of people earlier…”

Buffy again laughed, making Willow wonder if there was some kind of joke she wasn’t getting. “Those are my friends. Tara and I hang out with them all the time. You should meet them; you’d probably get along with them pretty well. And besides, most of the girls will be at the sleepover.”

The bell rang, making Buffy move her desk back to it’s appropriate place. Before she did, however, she leaned over to Willow and said, “1630 Revello Drive. Be there at 6:30.”

Willow grinned as she wrote down the address and got up from her seat to leave class.



At lunch, Willow sat alone with her brown-bagged food and her thoughts. This day hadn’t gone well, except for the sleepover invitation, and even that could be a cruel joke. So far there had been more than twenty remarks made about her clothes, three of them from one girl. Cordelia seemed to be the queen of the school; a cheerleader that every boy with eyes found attractive. Some small part of Willow envied her for her status. She also wondered why Buffy didn’t hold said status since she seemed capable of doing so.

Thinking about Buffy, she looked around the cafeteria to find her sitting with a group of her friends and laughing. She looked like she was having a good time and seemed very at ease with her friends; something Willow never was. Neurotic by nature, Willow always worried what other people thought about her, even in the best situations.

She noticed someone else that seemed to be in the same boat as her at Buffy’s table; Tara looked uncomfortable with her lunch time position. She was staring down at her lunch tray, avoiding looking at anyone and taking very small bites every few minutes. Willow wondered why she wasn’t talking to Buffy. They had seemed to be friends in History class. She was just staring down now, not making eye contact with anyone until a boy sat next to her and she immediately smiled at him.

She was waiting for her boyfriend, I guess, Willow surmised. The girl hugged him and Willow nodded to herself, figuring that her presumption must be right and that the girl that had asked Tara out was way off her mark.

As the two talked, Willow looked the boy over. As far as she could tell from the distance she was from him, he had brown hair, and dark eyes. He was wearing all black, as Tara was. The two smiled and talked for a moment before Tara turned and looked at her. She pointed toward Willow with her thumb and Xander turned to look also, both of them talking. That made Willow nervous, so she concentrated intently on her apple. She looked up again a few moments later to see that they were no longer seated at the table. That probably meant they were somewhere in the halls, walking around before class started again. That or in a closet making out. She took a bite of her apple and got out her history book to read the lessons that had been covered before she came here, since this book was different from the one they used at her previous school. She wanted to be sure that she would know everything she needed come exams.

Her studying was interrupted as the two that had left the table came over and sat across from her.

The boy spoke first. “So, you’re Willow? I’m Xander. Why are you over here all by yourself? I’m sure Buffy’d love to have you over at her table.”

Willow shrugged. “I don’t know.”

“Well, come on over to our table! Meet everybody.”

She wasn’t given a chance to say no as Xander grabbed her by the hand and pulled her up. As she was dragged toward the table, she looked back toward her book bag and lunch still sitting at the table she had just forcibly vacated. Tara smiled slightly at her and picked up the brown paper bag that the rest of her lunch was still in, her book bag and the apple that had fallen to the floor in her surprise at being grabbed.

She was dragged to the other table and made to sit by Xander. “You sit here, I’ll get attention.” He spoke to her, then screamed in a louder voice than Willow was accustomed to having right next to her ear, “Hey! Everybody!” Once everyone’s attention was on him, he pointed to Willow. “This is the new girl, Willow. Make her feel welcome and any belongings you leave backstage might not be reduced to a pile of ashes.”

Willow’s eyes widened and she looked up at Tara, who was now placing the redhead’s book bag under her seat and her lunch in front of her. “Does that usually happen?”

Tara grinned as she handed Willow her half-eaten, dusty apple. “Only on days that end in y.”

Xander began to make introductions, leaving Willow to wonder exactly what she was getting into.

****
Hope everyone enjoyed this, more should be up in a week or so, depending on how good my study habits are. If you see more in less than three days, please remind me that I have class.

ETA: Saying that the Tara in this story is not drop-dead gorgeous is in no way saying that Amber is not, or Tara for that matter. This is a high school version of Tara. Awkward and adorable, yes... but not drop dead gorgeous.
Last edited by mangled_monkey on Thu Nov 16, 2006 1:36 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:28 pm

its a very good start, i like it.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Sun Feb 26, 2006 9:36 pm

My first feedback! Thank you, writerfreak!

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:02 pm

-eats cookie- im not above eating bribery cookies, food is food lol.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Sun Feb 26, 2006 10:52 pm

Author's Note: I decided to post a bit more, to go a bit more into the Willow/Tara aspect of the story, since it is mostly about them. Here is their bonding time.

The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter One continued

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When the final bell rang, Willow was in Calculus. She realized that this class was no different from the one she’d had at her previous school and grinned at the similarities in the teachers. They both talked in the same monotone that made half the students fall asleep during class. Willow didn’t fall asleep though, since she’d always found math and science to be interesting. The book used for this class was the same as the one she’d used last semester, so she did not feel like she had missed anything. She’d even been asked by the teacher to tutor a few students.

She smiled slightly as she left the building, feeling that it was possible for her to make friends for the first time in her life. She was walking toward the sidewalk to begin the quarter mile long walk home when she heard someone calling her name. Tara was running to catch up with her.

“Willow, wait-up!”

Willow stopped walking and turned around to wait. When the other girl caught up with her, she was slightly out of breath. It took her a moment to catch her breath, as Willow waited patiently. “What’s up, Tara?”

Tara smiled slightly. “I live that way too. W-wanna walk together?”

Willow smiled and nodded, hearing the girl’s stutter for the first time and finding it rather endearing. “Sure. What about Buffy?”

Tara looked slightly confused, but answered, “Revello’s about half a mile the other way.”

Willow nodded, recognizing the street name that Buffy had given her. “Oh. So you walk alone every day?”

Tara nodded. “Pretty much. Xander walks home with me when he doesn’t stay after to help with tech stuff, but that’s pretty rare. Oh, and a few other techs go this way, but we don’t really talk much.”

“Oh. Why not?”

“We just don’t… click, you know?”

Willow nodded. “Yeah, I know.”

They were both silent for a few moments before Tara asked, “Did you walk before? At your old school?”

Willow nodded. “Yeah. Me and my friends, the two that I had, lived on the same street, so we walked together every day. Except when Ruth was sick. Then it was just Polly and me.” She smiled slightly at the memories she had of walking to school with her two best friends, and on other days, only one of them. She was silent for a moment as she remembered the day Polly had come out to her. Ruth was sick as she was a lot of the time and they were walking to school together in late autumn. She smiled wider as she remembered how pretty Polly had looked when the wind blew her hair.

Tara smiled slightly and broke the silence that had enveloped them during Willow’s musing. “You must miss them a lot.”

Willow nodded. “I do. So, uh, how far’s your house?”

Tara looked up the street, getting her bearings before answering “about half a mile from here.”

Willow nodded, seeing her house fast approaching. “So, uh, you wanna come in, maybe study, or… something?”

Tara was silent for a moment, staring down at the sidewalk, a myriad of emotions crossing her face, confusion, acceptance, joy, and then finally, sadness. She shook her head slowly. “I better not, my father gets mad if I’m late getting home.”

Willow nodded, somewhat dejectedly. “Oh, ok.”

Tara grinned slightly, her eyes now holding a slight hint of mischievousness. “But… I could call him… tell him I’ll be late?”

The redhead nodded enthusiastically. “Ok!”




Willow waited in the living room while Tara called her dad from the phone in the kitchen. This house still felt alien to her, so she was fidgeting as she sat. Tara entered the room a few moments later. “I can stay for an hour. Then I have to go home to make dinner.”

Willow smiled, then frowned slightly. An hour? I can’t keep her entertained for an hour! Twenty minutes, maybe… but an hour??

Tara stood a few feet away, looking uncomfortable. “I-Is that ok? Do you w-want me to leave?”

Willow jumped up. “NO!” Tara jumped slightly at the shouted response so Willow softened her voice. “I mean, no… It’s fine. I just don’t really have any idea what we could do since my board games are still packed along with most of the other fun stuff we have so I really have nothing to offer you. Unless you like cheese, because we do have some cheese. Cheese can be good in a... dairy farm sort of way... even though dairy farms are evil, what with the cow milking machines and bovine cannibalism. So maybe you shouldn't have cheese because of how mean it is to the cows. Do you like cows?”

Tara nodded. "Cows are good..." she grinned at the redhead’s adorable babbling, then quickly realized where this thinking would lead her and frowned slightly, telling herself it would be very bad to get a crush on this girl her first day here. “Uh, we could just talk?”

Willow nodded. “Alright.”

A half hour of excruciatingly mundane conversation later, Willow was getting annoyed with herself, and Tara was getting more and more self-conscious. Neither had learned a thing about the other. Both were getting frustrated with their lack of ability to communicate. They were now shifting uncomfortably on the couch. The two sat in silence for a few moments as Willow replayed the topics of conversation over in her mind. They had talked about school, the weather, school, and their mutual lack of enthusiasm for the new Calc teacher, in that order.

Willow broke the silence twenty long seconds after it began with a simple question. “What are you going to wear for the history project?”

Tara actually smiled for the first time in nearly a half hour. “Well, I have this one outfit that my mom gave me, from her time as a hippy. It’s perfect. This beautiful blue top that has a giant purple peace sign on it, and some bell-bottoms. And this really nice headband.” Tara’s face fell after a moment and she appeared to be deep in thought of the upsetting variety.

Willow became concerned when she didn’t talk for a few minutes. Well, it had only been a minute and a half, but it felt longer, so Willow felt she had to ask. “Tara, what’s wrong?”

Tara shook herself out of the thoughts she was wrapped in and smiled slightly, rather falsely. “Nothing.”

Willow did not want to push since she just met this girl. “Alright, you just looked so sad.” After a pause she continued talking. “Want something to drink?”

Tara nodded. “That’d be great. Thanks.”

Willow nodded also and moved towards the kitchen. “Water, or…”

Tara looked up, still slightly in thought, “Water’s fine.”

While Willow was gone, Tara glanced around the room, thinking of her mother. She’d been in the hospital for the past three weeks, causing Tara to take over the household chores. The doctors still didn’t know exactly what was wrong, just that it had something to do with her stomach. She had been sick for months before going into the hospital and she was only getting worse. Tara didn’t really feel like explaining exactly how she felt to Willow, who was almost a stranger to her.

Willow returned a minute later with a cup containing water and three ice cubes. She handed the blue plastic cup to Tara, commenting “I wasn’t sure if you wanted ice or not, so… I gave you ice. Since most people like ice in their water. Not that people that don’t like ice are weird or something, ‘cause there are lots of perfectly normal people with sensitive teeth…”

Tara cut her off after taking a few sips. “Willow, it’s fine. Thanks.”

Willow frowned, noticing that Tara still seemed deep in thought and it appeared as if she would stay that way for awhile yet. “Are you sure you’re okay?”

Tara nodded, but quickly shook her head. “No, I’m not okay. It’s just… my mom’s been sick for awhile. I’m worried about her.”

“Oh, uh… I’m sorry…”

Tara quickly cut Willow off. “Don’t. Don’t say s-sorry.”

“Uh, s- er… Is there anything I can do?”

Tara shook her head, almost imperceptibly. “No. There’s not much anyone can do until they figure out what’s wrong.”

Willow sat down next to Tara and shook her head slightly. “I meant for you. I mean, I’m sure you’d rather have Buffy for this, but I’m a good listener… most of the time. I try.”

Tara smiled slightly, setting the plastic cup on Willow’s coffee table. “Actually… Buffy’s not all that great to talk to. She has her own problems. I don’t want to bother her with mine. I don’t want to bother you with mine.”

Willow scooted slightly closer to her, gently touching her arm. “It’s no bother, really.”

Tara looked up and smiled gently at Willow, ready to tell her everything. “Thanks, Willow… I…”

BEBEEP BEBEEP BEBEEP!

“I have to go.” Tara turned the alarm on her watch off and sat for a moment before standing. “I’ll see you tomorrow.” She left before Willow could say anything.

“Bye, Tara.” Willow sighed as she heard the screen door fall shut and stood, taking the plastic cup Tara had used and going into the kitchen to dump out the water.

****
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby taralicious » Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:19 pm

MM,
Everything you've written so far reminds me of my own experiences in high school as I was the variation of Willow which you so visually describe so accurately.
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Amber and Tara will always be the pinnacles of earthy beauty.
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:33 pm

two in one night wow, and its still awesome.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Mon Feb 27, 2006 7:54 am

taralicious- This story was and is written based on my own high school experiences. I don't base the characters on me because they are not me, but I do base them on multiple people I know that react like the characters in certain situations. I had an idea that this would remind many kittens of high school. I hope you enjoy the story as it develops, as there were some good elements of high school that I hope to remind everyone of, such as first love and the thrill of being invited to Prom. (Not that I'm saying there will be a prom scene...)

writerfreak- Thanks for the support! It is partly (as in mostly) because of your feedback that I posted the second part last night.

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To everyone who lurks, since there's more than 8 views of this- Because of insane inspiration, I should have the next bit up in a few hours. I have a three hour break between classes, which should be sufficient time to get up a new (and un-betaed) chapter. Now.... off to fail my history test!
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby Irishlassie101 » Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:55 am

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

I like it---YES---I like it...I wish I had some goods memories from my high school, but it´s a different system here and far less fun !!!!

I love the way you bring the shy and the "loud" together, hope there will be lots of smoochies soon !!!!!

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Mon Feb 27, 2006 11:21 am

Irishlassie101- I'm glad you like it. Sorry, but the smoochies won't happen for at least four more chapters, probably more. I hope you still enjoy the build up to said smoochies.

To everyone- Here is a little more. I'm still working on the flashback that immediately follows this. It should be up in a few hours. If I work quick, it might even be up immediately following this, but I doubt that. Sorry for the shortness of this bit.

The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter 2

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The next morning, Willow arrived at school twenty minutes early for first period. She decided that this time would be best spent searching out Buffy and Tara and talking to them. After circling the school, she saw Buffy emerging from an alcove near one of the exits. She would come to learn that this was the backstage area where the techs spent their time before and after school, sometimes eating lunch there when they could sneak out of the cafeteria. She went over and smiled. “Hi Buffy…”

Buffy smiled at Willow, looking distracted. “Hey. Look, I can’t talk right now, but Tara and Xander are down there with nothing to do.” She ran off before Willow could say anything else.

Willow walked into the alcove and looked around. All over the walls were posters and flyers from various plays and musicals. Some of them were performed by SHS, some of them professionally done. She saw Tara and Xander cuddling in a corner, the blonde on her back with her head on Xander’s lap, her eyes closed and her knees bent, looking toward the ceiling. She hesitantly walked over to talk to them. “Hi guys…”

Tara opened her eyes and looked up at Willow. A smile graced her features and she sat up. “Hello Willow…”

Xander likewise smiled and waved slightly. “What’s up?”

Willow sat across from them. “I uh… I got to school early.”

Xander looked at Tara and grinned slightly, then turned back to Willow. “We noticed…” After a moment of silence, Xander asked “So… are you going to join the actors or the techs?”

Willow looked at him with wide-eyed confusion. “I… I have to join one or the other?”

Xander nodded. “Or you could do like the Buffster and join both… but that girl has superhuman functioning with no sleep abilities. I wouldn’t recommend that.”

Willow thought for a moment. “What does the tech crew do? I mean, I know you guys build stuff, but is that it? Because I’m really not good with building things. What with the hammers and the nails and the heavy boards… I’m really not built for building.”

Xander spoke up before she began to babble. “There are other things you could do… like lighting… or sound… Or you could be stage manager if you can wrestle that away from Faith…”

Tara nodded. “I do lighting. We do need another senior up in the booth… I could show you how.”

Willow smiled slightly. “I’d like that.”

BING BING BING BING

Xander zipped up his backpack and stood up, brushing dust off of his jeans. “Well… time for class.”

Willow and Tara followed suit, standing and wiping off their butts before picking up their bags. They began to walk to their class as Xander went off in the opposite direction. They walked in a comfortable silence for a few seconds, until Willow asked “Did you get home ok last night?”

Tara nodded. “Yeah… Right on time, actually… Do you think you’ll come to Buffy’s sleepover?”

Willow nodded. “I figure I should take any opportunity to make friends, right? I mean… I don’t get invited to things much.”

Tara nodded. “Before… well, before tech crew… I was really shy. I still am, I guess… I’m really comfortable with my friends, but… I don’t know. I’m not really a part of the family like Buffy is.”

“How long have you been in tech?”

She thought for a moment. “Since 7th grade, but… I moved here in 9th, so I’ve only been a member of this crew since then.” She decided not to elaborate on the girl that had caused her to join, figuring Willow would find out at some point anyway.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby ShallowLikeUs » Mon Feb 27, 2006 1:28 pm

This is a cute story so far, and well written. I egearly (i think i spelled that wrong..) await more!

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Postby mangled_monkey » Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:08 pm

ShallowLikeUs- Thank you for the kind words. *Gives you a cookie*

To everyone- Here's the next bit!

This flashback has given me alot of trouble, which is why it's up so late. It just couldn't find a good place to end. I apologize for the bad ending here, but after two hours of staring at it, i decided this was good enough since I couldn't think of anything else. Enjoy!

The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter Two part 2

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Flashback

Tara loved the weekends. It wasn’t just that she had no school; it was the time she could spend with her mother uninterrupted. Since her father spent that time with Donny out in the fields, teaching him how to run the tractor with optimum efficiency, or how to shoot a rifle, Tara could spend long days with her mother, learning about herself and the world. Now, at 13, Tara was just starting to realize she wasn’t exactly normal in the romance department. This was the time when all of her friends, the few she had, were getting boyfriends, and walking to the tiny resturant on the corner of Oak and Dell for dates. Sharing a milkshake was all well and good, but she didn’t feel the same urge to be in the company of her male peers, to have boys like her, that other girls her age had. She felt more of an urge to be with one particular girl at her school. Joanie was everything that Tara wanted to be; smart, outgoing, and most of all, beautiful. Tara envied her, of course, but she knew that what she felt was more than that. And it was this that was bothering her this particular Saturday.

Elenor Maclay sat with her daughter on the girl’s bed, braiding her hair into pigtails for the church social that night. She was listening to her daughter talk about all the reasons she wanted to be friends with Joanie. So far she had heard all about the teen’s long red hair, deep blue eyes, gorgeous smile, and perfect teeth. Tara was just beginning to go into the girl’s work with the school drama department's Technical Crew when there was a knock at the door. Tara’s father didn’t wait for a reply before he opened the door and peered in on the two of them. “Will you be ready in time for the social tonight Elenor?”

Her mother nodded. “Yes, Donald.”

Her father smiled tightly. “Great. Donny and I will be in the fields until supper. We’ll leave for the church at 7.” Without waiting for a response, Donald Sr. closed his only daughter’s bedroom door and walked away down the hall.

Elenor finished her daughter’s hair and stood up, walking to the girl’s closet to get the blue dress that she wore on special occasions. She removed the dress and walked back to the bed, laying it next to her daughter and sitting down. “I really think you should try talking to this girl. See if you have anything in common with her. She’ll be at the social, right?”

Tara nodded, smiling slightly. “She’s going to wear the green dress that her mama made for her. It makes her hair look so pretty.”



Later that evening, at the church social, Tara approached the object of her crush. Joanie was standing by the punch bowl, talking with one of her friends. Tara walked over and stood about five feet away, hoping Joanie would notice her.

Joanie’s friend turned and walked away, toward some boy she was interested in. Joanie herself turned around and nearly bumped into Tara. She smiled slightly. “Hey Tara.”

Tara smiled back and waved awkwardly. “H-hi Joanie.”

Joanie grinned and took Tara’s arm, pulling her toward the wall and out of the way. “I was hoping to see you here… I’m having a birthday party this weekend and I was wondering if you’d like to come.”

Tara grinned, a lopsided smile that made Joanie smile. “Y-yeah… I’d love to…”

“Great… Be at my house at 6 on Saturday.” Joanie hugged Tara tightly, then walked away toward her parents.

Tara stood there, unmoving, for a full minute before grinning so widely that she thought her face might explode and running to tell her mama about what had happened.



When Tara got to Joanie’s house, wearing her Sunday best, she quickly realized that she was the only one at this party. When Joanie answered the door, she was alone. The house was empty save the cats, the two girls and the furniture. Joanie led Tara to her room and told her where to leave her stuff and sat on her bed. Tara looked around nervously. “I… I th-thought this w-was a party?”

Joanie nodded. “It is… I just don’t have any other guests.”

Tara stood uncomfortably near the door and frowned. “Y-you only invited me?”

Joanie grinned and nodded again. “That’s right…”

“W-why?”

Joanie patted the bed next to her, waiting for Tara to sit. When she did, Joanie spoke again. “Because I want to get to know you. I’ve seen you watching me… in science? I want to know why… and I want to know why you never talk to me except to say hi.”

“I… uh…” Tara frowned and looked down at her lap, allowing her hair to cover her face.

Joanie scooted a little closer to her, putting her hand on Tara’s knee. “I’ve been watching you too. I see what you’re like… how nice you are… how you always stutter when you talk to people… it’s cute. I’ve wondered for a long time if I could get you comfortable enough with me that you wouldn’t.”

Tara barely looked up, but her eyes met Joanie’s. “Y-you w-watch me?”

Joanie nodded. “Mmhmm… And do you know why?”

Tara looked back down and shook her head.

Joanie smiled. “Because I like you.”

Tara’s heart leapt into her throat and she gulped it back down. “R-really?”

Joanie nodded. “Yup.”

They were both silent for a moment until Tara spoke up. “W-where should I p-put my sleeping bag?”

Joanie grinned. “This is a queen sized bed, Tara… you won’t need it.”



Tara signed up for tech crew the following Monday, to be with her first girlfriend.

End Flashback

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Mon Feb 27, 2006 8:23 pm

im glad i helped you post another part, or build your confidence or whatever i did to help. i genuinely like the story. so if theres ever anything i can do lemme know. the background was nice in this one, both of them the newer members, a way to get close. its good

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby ShallowLikeUs » Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:28 pm

*munches cookie* yay!

I'm so excited! an update! screw english comp homework!

Tara is so cute. and.. well i'm half asleep.. but i like the flashback.. and.. i don't have anything more constructive...

more please?

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby Guppy » Mon Feb 27, 2006 9:35 pm

ok, I'll admit that I'm guilty of lurking in this story, but I lurk no longer. I love this story so far. New shy Willow and slightly shy Tara and the awkwardness of getting to know each other is just fun. I can't wait for the next update!!
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Tue Feb 28, 2006 1:59 pm

writerfreak- I have found that it is amazing how much a little bit of feedback can encourage a whole chapter. I blame you for the flashback, as it was written in about 20 minutes after the first feedback you left. Darn you for distracting me from the regular story and creating this whole little side bar of flashbacks (yes, that means there will be more).

ShallowLikeUs- Homework is important... so uh... don't skip it too much. (From the girl who neglected to do three assignments on time so I could work on this story.)

Guppy- Glad you find it fun. I love awkwardness and angst, so expect both. And the next update should be either tonight or tomorrow, depending on how much trouble it gives me. Though I have found the more trouble I have, the better the part is. Oh well.

*Hands out three cookies* I'm actually sort of dreading more people responding because it means I have to buy more cookies... crap. Oh well, I started and I'm GOING to finish.

Also, :bow I salute everyone that's reading this. It helps to have an audience to work for.
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby Missocki » Tue Feb 28, 2006 4:31 pm

:clap This story is sooo sweet, and well done. I must say, that as a frequent new girl in a school, you have done an excellent job describing the loneliness, and the longing for friends from the former home. I tip my basecap to you. :-D

I'm sorry that you'll have to buy more cookies, well, not sorry enough to not eat said cookies! However, I am sorry that I didn't reply sooner, classes and all that jazz, but I have been reading, and now I can snaps to you!

I'm all for you continuing this lovely little yarn! :smug
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Tue Feb 28, 2006 4:35 pm

yay i caused flashbacks :dance . you should give a cookie to yourself for being a good writer.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby ShallowLikeUs » Tue Feb 28, 2006 4:59 pm

*munches on cookie* yay!

you better finish! quiters never prosper... unless you're me...i always seem to get by...though... getting by doesn't work as well in college as it did in highschool... so i guess that's still a work in progress...don't stop...(believing!) [i had to say it... cause.. well.. i'm lame... in a completely awesome kinda way.]

I await an update.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby LesbianJedi87 » Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:36 pm

Hello! "waves" So I started reading this when you first posted but got distracted (which is totally my bad hehe) but then writerfreak was talking about this story and persuaded to me to read it. So I did and now Im hooked! It's very well written! I don't read that many stories these days mainly because well, grammar and proper spelling is an issue! But I love this!
Update soon please! :D
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:48 pm

Oh I just noticed this cute story! What a nice approach.
Poor Willow! Having two friends is better than nothing. She shouldnt be that insecure... yeah, the teasing, thats seems really bad. :ashamed
Wht's up with Buffy? Doesnt she notice what's up with Tara and all?
Can't wait for more! :-D
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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:09 pm

Wow... three new people replying to this... anyway, I decided to check the replies before I went to bed to see if there were any... and there were! Five of them, in fact! That is SO cool! So, I figured, as a special treat, I'm going to write a new bit detailing Willow's past a bit more (because I'm stalling for time on the main storyline) and show where she began. This next update will have HER first kiss in it, and I promise it will be cute.

Missocki- I got the feel of the new girl completely from my experience moving into different schools than the ones the rest of my class went to. I have lived in the same place my whole life, and I'm relying mostly on going to college when I was 16 to illustrate feelings. Though that is just the feelings I have had. There's also an element of imagination at work... so I'm glad I'm being somewhat accurate. Continue I shall.

writerfreak- Oh, believe me... I get plenty of cookies. I don't really need good writer cookies because I get "Hmm... this new chapter calls for a cookie because stuttering reminds me of chocolate chips" cookies. But thanks for the idea... I guess I can always use one more reason to have a tasty treat... And thanks for the propaganda to LesbianJedi87! It's always appreciated.

ShallowLikeUs- Hehe... I myself was once a quitter. I did horrible in high school so I decided I wouldn't go by pretending to be sick constantly... and I went to college because of it. It really is a cool thing to do bad in high school and be rewarded with free college. If anyone is curious about that, google Gateway to College and it should tell you all sorts of nifty things about the program that rewards America's youth for doing drugs and skipping school. (Not that I did drugs... sometimes I really was sick...)

LesbianJedi87- Wow... I have someone persuading people to read this? And it's NOT my babygirl? WOW... That is so COOL! I am also rather meticulous about spelling and such when I have that handy spellcheck at my disposal... But I obviously don't when I'm writing this, because I know I'm spelling some things wrong. But in my story I am careful to write things using english as correctly as I know how. I'm glad that is appreciated.

WillowRulez- First off, Willow is insecure because she's Willow. She constantly had those insecurities lying under the surface... so um... yeah. I do think she didn't need to be that way, but that is how I've always seen her. And as for Buffy, she's simply too busy to be able to be that great of a friend to Tara. Tara doesn't complain much as a rule, and unless she comes outright and says something's wrong, Buffy won't notice until she's in tears because of her constant preoccupations. That seems in character to me, so that's how I'm writing it. And all of this is coming off way more defensive than I meant it to. I really don't mean it defensively, just as an explaination for what you said. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.


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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:18 pm

well if its going to be up in about half an hour looks like im stayin on the board. not like i dont anyway. im a night owl. but either way yay soon-to-be update. and i just happened to be talking to lesbianjedi on a messenger and mentioned your fic, once or twice or maybe had a convo about it. -cough-. lol.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby LesbianJedi87 » Tue Feb 28, 2006 11:30 pm

oooh yay an update!! Cool way to end my night! :applause
I think Im going to start becoming obsessed with this story, which is a good thing. Be scared when I start pitching up tents as I do when Im waiting for a "Written in the Stars" update hehe :P

And btw, my name's Rose :D Being called lesbianjedi is a bit weird for me (or maybe Im just used to many people on the board knowing my name lol).

Ok enough of my ramble! "sits and waits patiently for updatey goodness" :bounce
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Postby mangled_monkey » Wed Mar 01, 2006 12:02 am

writerfreak- Ok... so it took closer to an hour. Sorry about that... I have it ready, so I'm going to post it now... and I am rather flattered that you had a conversation about my story with someone. That is awesome. I thought that only happend to the really good writers. Yay me!

Rose- I don't mind obsessiveness. It's stalkerness that I have a problem with. Here is the update as promised...

*Gives writerfreak and Rose extra cookies*


And, I now bring you...

The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter Two part 3

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Flashback

Willow Rosenberg was the youngest girl in her kindergarten class. Her mother thought she was smart enough to start school early, so here she was. Four years old and entering the big scary school where her mother worked part time as the resident child psychologist. For all of her knowledge, it was amazing that Sheila didn’t understand the horrifying nature of school for her daughter, but that was how she was. She understood other people’s children and not her own. She didn’t seem to notice how upset the little girl holding onto her hand for dear life was. Didn’t understand that the tight grip indicated fear. All she had to say about that was “Willow, dear, you’re hurting my hand. Could you loosen your grip?”

The small girl barely nodded, but did as she was asked. “Mommy? Why do I have to come here now?”

“So you can learn, Willow.”

Willow understood learning. She knew she liked to figure out why things were the way they were and what made things work. But she could not understand at all why she had to go to a place with a bunch of kids older than her that she did not know to learn. She much prefered staying home and reading the books her mother had bought the latest in educational technology to teach her to read. She had just started reading a Berenstein Bears book that her father had just given to her as a present from his most recent business trip. She would have finished it, but her mother interrupted her reading to inform her that she was going to be taken to school in five minutes, and so she should get dressed for the occation. So she had gotten dressed, in her best Care Bears attire, and met her mother downstairs.

That led to her current predicament- being dragged into a classroom full of five year olds. All of the boys and girls here were a full year older than her at least. She could never hope to find common ground with them, it seemed, since they were all bigger than her also and so would get the best choice of play equipment during recess. Her mother removed her hand from her daughter’s and bent down to give her a hug when the teacher came over to greet her. “Have fun, Willow. I’ll see you after school, ok?”

The little redhead wanted to scream that it wasn’t ok… to beg her mommy to take her back home, but she knew that it would be pointless, so she didn’t bother. “Ok, mommy.” She resigned herself to be miserable the rest of the day and walked away as soon as her mother dismissed her. She took a seat at a table and began drawing a picture to give to her daddy.

All of a sudden, it seemed, the yellow crayon she was using to color the doggy’s fur snapped in half. Willow stared at it for what seemed like forever to her young mind and set it down on the table. She stood up and began to back away, until she bumped into someone. She turned around quickly to find a somewhat chubby brunette girl looking at her with interest. “Hi. I’m Ruth.”

Willow frowned. “I’m Willow, but I’m gonna be in twouble soon so it won’t matter.”

Ruth frowned also. “Why will you be in trouble? Did you broke the rules?”

Willow nodded her tiny head and moved aside, showing the crayon to Ruth. “I broked it.”

Ruth looked at the crayon for a moment, then picked it up and walked over to the teacher. “Miss teacher lady… I broked the crayon.”

The teacher knealt down, taking the crayon from Ruth’s outstretched hand and smiled warmly at her. “It’s alright, Ruth… There are more in those cans. You can use those.”

“Thank you teacher lady.” She went back over to Willow and handed her another yellow crayon from the can. “Here. This one works.”

Willow smiled, took the crayon and finished her drawing. She showed it to Ruth who in turn showed Willow her own drawing. Ruth put her’s down on the table and turned to Willow. “You draw doggies good. Want to be my friend?”

Willow nodded. “Ok.”



After story time and nap time, Willow and her classmates were given another play time, but they weren’t allowed to do what they had done for the first one. Willow opted to play house with Ruth and another girl named Polly. After Willow had also agreed to be Polly’s friend, the game began. Polly had set up the rules of who they would be playing. Polly would be the daddy, Willow would be the mommy, and Ruth would be the baby.

They began to play, Willow sitting at a table and tapping away at a fake keyboard, and Polly in the play kitchen trying to feed Ruth. Polly set a plastic plate full of plastic food in front of Willow. “Here’s your breakfast, Harold.”

“I can get my own breakfast, Sheila.”

Polly frowned. “Well… I was just trying to be nice, Harold. Eat the food and you get a special treat tonight?”

Willow nodded slightly, picked up a phantom fork and dug in to the plastic food, eating as quickly as she could so she wouldn’t be late for work.

After a minute or so of eating, Willow stood up and announced in as deep a voice as her four year old throat could muster “I’m off to work, dear.”

Polly smiled and walked over to Willow. “Have a good day at the office, honey.” She gave Willow a kiss, the best that she knew how, and the redhead, in a clip on tie and top hat, walked through the doorway with her plastic briefcase and off to work in the block area.



When Willow returned home from her first day of school she was happy. She did not dwell on why that was, but if she had she would have known it was because of her two new friends. All she knew was that she wanted to be friends with them forever.

End Flashback

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Wed Mar 01, 2006 12:08 am

half an hour...an hour....hardly a difference anymore. im up all night anyway, i got nothin but time lol. and i talked about it because you are one of the good writers. i think its safe to say rose would agree with me on that one. this update was very charming, it reminded me of my own childhood days with my best friend. only we usually played in the sandbox lol. good job!

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Wed Mar 01, 2006 6:21 am

writerfreak- *Hands out another cookie* You've earned three in one night! That would be a record... I based that interaction on my own experiences and what I saw while taking child development. Some of those kids had truely messed up home lives. It was sad. ...I'm a good writer? AWESOME!

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby writerfreak » Wed Mar 01, 2006 8:50 am

if i only did it for the cookies id be in heaven right now. i know all about truly messed up home lives, i lived one for 19 years. but it was experiences like that which kept me goin, its good that you base them on your own, it always gives it a more real quality, and YES you are a good writer.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby mangled_monkey » Wed Mar 01, 2006 11:03 am

writerfreak- Messed up home lives make for extremely fun people. It's only the screw ups that are interesting. I have been a screw up for 17 years and people think I'm interesting... sometimes. Usually I'm just weird. But weird is way more fun that normal. I'm not trying to imply anything about you, that's just my experience. Glad you got out of the messed up home, though. I still have 6 months before I'll be legally able to.

*gives writerfreak a cookie*

Anyways, here's the next bit. I just finished it, and I'll try to get the part following this up before class, but odds are I won't have time. Class is in an hour and that's how long it took to write this. I'll try.


The Midnight Players of SHS- Chapter 3


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After school, Willow went to the alcove she found Xander and Tara in this morning to sign up for tech crew. She found Tara there, talking to an older man. He was somewhat large with dark hair and smiling eyes. He vaguely reminded Willow of Santa. She approached Tara, who saw her and smiled. “Hey Willow… this is the Tech director, Lloyd.”

Willow smiled at him and waved slightly. “Hi Lloyd… I’m Willow. I’m interested in joining the tech crew if you have room for me, or even if it’s early enough to still join… I didn’t even consider that… that it might be too late to join. I’m probably coming in here just assuming that it’d be fine for me to-”

Lloyd cut her off by holding up his hand, laughing slightly. “It’s not too late. We can always use the help. Go into my office there and pick up the forms for you parents to sign, ok? Tara will show you where they are.”

Tara nodded. “This way…” She began walking further backstage, past large piles of wood and a few tools to a large steel door. She pulled it open and walked in, Willow following her the entire way. “So you decided to join tech rather than the actors?”

Willow nodded. “I’m not good at the whole stage thing. What with the people watching my every move and judging me based on my performance… I just freeze up.”

Tara nodded. “Me too. Besides… I can’t act.” She handed Willow a sheet of paper. “This is the contract you need to have your parents sign. It basically says that it’s ok for you to do tech and that, if you get any injuries or lose a limb or something you can’t blame the school or Lloyd.”

Willow gulped slightly. “Lose a limb? Does that happen often?” She looked at Tara in barely masked wide-eyed fear.

Tara frowned slightly. “Not really… I mean, there was one kid a few years ago…” Willow grew extremely pale, so Tara couldn’t continue. “No… we’ve never had anyone lose a limb. We did have a freshman break his arm in the fall, but that was because he was being stupid. He decided it would be fun to put the mattress from in here in the orchestra pit and jump to it from the catwalk.”

Willow looked confused. “What’s a catwalk?”

Tara took her back out to the stage and pointed above them at the bridge holding all the lighting for the stage. “That.”

Willow looked up at it. “You mean… I’m going to have to go up there?”

Tara shook her head. “No… not unless you do lighting from back here. We’re usually up there.” She pointed to the back of the auditorium, to a window. Willow presumed that behind that window was another room. She also guessed that in that room there was equipment to control the lights. All of those assumptions were correct. “So if do you want to do lighting, I can start teaching you how now.”

Willow nodded and they began to walk toward the stairway to the booth. On the way, Willow looked around at the few people backstage. “So… does the tech crew always wear black? I noticed everyone back here that I’ve seen is wearing black pants and sometimes black shirts.”

Tara nodded as they began to ascend the stairs. “We’re required to wear black for the performances; most of us just wear it usually. It’s just easier instead of finding the one black outfit. This way, we’re always ready.”

Willow nodded. “That means I need to buy some black clothes, doesn’t it?”

Tara grinned. “I have some free time after tech today… We could walk over to the mall and get you some, if you want…”

Willow smiled as Tara unlocked and opened the door to the lighting booth. “You don’t need to be home immediately?”

Tara shook her head. “No, my dad and brother are going out tonight, so I don’t need to make dinner.”

Willow frowned, not liking the idea that she probably had to make dinner other nights because she was forced to, but unable to really grasp a concept of why or what that meant, so smiled again. “I’d like that. What time is tech usually over?”

Tara looked at her watch. “Around four… so an hour and a half.”

Willow nodded as she and Tara entered the booth and stopped once Tara turned on the light. There was a whole array of switches and knobs, with a powerful computer in the center of it all. It was something that completely awed the geek inside her and she immediately began looking at all of the switches, reading the labels and figuring out what kind of computer they were using.

Tara grinned at the eagerness with which Willow approached the equipment and sat on one of the two folding chairs in the booth, unfolding the other for Willow to sit on. “It’s good you came here when you did… Kristine just decided she would rather do lighting from the catwalk, so I’ve been trying to find someone to take over co-lighting duties.”

Willow turned around and noticed the chair. Sitting down, she asked, “So… it’d just be you and me up here?”

Tara nodded. “Yeah…” Tara frowned a bit of insecurity leaking into her mind. “Is… Is that a problem?”

Willow shook her head. “Not at all. I’d really like to get to know you better. I guess this will give us a chance, huh?”

Tara smiled and began going over all of the technical aspects of lighting, and showing Willow what all of the switches did at the expense of the techs trying to work under the lights on the stage. As the stage was bathed in a green glow from a filter that was not properly removed from the light that was lighting the entirety of the left side of the stage, Willow giggled. “They all look like zombies… but not the creepy kind.”

Tara grinned. “Like… friendly zombies?”

Willow pointed to Buffy and Xander, who were hugging in a brief moment of friendship. “More like cuddly zombies.”

“Cuddly zombies. I like that.”


****

That's it for now. The idea of cuddly zombies really appeals to me for some strange and probably messed up reason. I wish I could draw, cause if I could, I would SO draw that. Oh well... the image will have to be enough. Hope that idea isn't too creepy to the rest of you.

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Re: AU- The Midnight Players of SHS

Postby LesbianJedi87 » Wed Mar 01, 2006 11:11 am

cuddly zombies! I like that! :P

Great two updates! :applause Cant wait for more! Im loving your regular updates, with most stories Im lucky if they update once every year hehe You're doing a great job!! :clap
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