New fic - Growth

[Shy One]

That was really hot!

Tara is quite the seductress..........and so very yummy!

I really loved the part where Willow called Tara her wife.

That was so sweet.

Of course, I'm also looking forward to Tara taking her turn at

ravishing Willow. I have a feeling that's going to be mega

hot too!

I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!



Shy One

[DreamLover]

this is a really flamey update.



Cant wait for the next one. MG

Edited by: DreamLover at: 9/19/04 11:01 am

[WillowTara Addict]

... Now this one drove me in a very good way. It's really good and very hot. ...oh damn, I have to scrap that jaw of mine off the ground! Thanks to you! Keep up the great job! Love ya...

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Brain to Willow: Uh fainting is not an option.

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That made me

“I guess I am more fucked up than I have anticipated.”~Me

Edited by: WillowTara Addict at: 9/19/04 11:07 am

[irishlassie101]

O.M.G...how can you do this to us...some of us might be home alone and not have the luck to go and ravish somebody..........

Do you have any idea how much cold water we all will use...could flood the sahara 3 times !!!!!!!





...and much more cold water needed when Tara repays Willow...O.M.G...I´ll just move my computer to the deep freeze !!!!!!!!

[wimpy0729]

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Holy smokes...not thinking clearly...mushy brain...mushy everything.



Now I gotta get a new chair cause these stains ain't comin out!!!



Eyes aren't working...legs aren't working...yep, you definitely broke me...





Wim...what was my name again??? damn

[Insanity]

Okay... that was really HOT!!

I'm really looking forward to the next part *blush*



Update soon *g*



Insanity

German Fanfiction

It's always sudden! Tara; the body

[umgaynow]

Wow...Willow's pretty tricks-y for a virgin...and Tara at the beginning with all the deliberate teasing...oh my

all I can say is

[alysagoddess85]

simple as that



~mel

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

[willohand]

i must confess to love writing for this tara.she is such a hottie and she knows what she wants.well in this case who she wants. which is our girl and can we blame her.I mean only just seen tara for the sexy goddess that she is.all she saw was this woman with a great pair of ears...bless her heart.

so can we talk about tara for a moment? she is rocking willow`s world. but as we can read, willow is right there with her. you guys cant imagine how draining writing this chapter was.okay who am i trying to kid? it was a hell of a lot of fun.i mean come on you guys were so caught off guard by tara`s little fantasy and willow discovering it by just being her attentive self.

[ramjr]

Long time, out of commission. Now back. Wow! to your story, to your character development, and mostly to your way of showing how deeply the love is between Tara and Willow.

I am curious, what you thought of the picture of Amber, I sent you? Did you receive others for your birthday?

[WickedReds]

-reds



my banana dances for smut

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

[Artemis]

Chris to Brain: Give feedback.

Brain to Chris: Are you kidding? We can barely remember to breathe!

Chris to Brain:

Brain to Chris: Oh, alright...



To say that chapter was hot would be to pass up a perfect opportunity to say 'scorching'. Tara was in total vixen mode, frankly I don't know how Willow even managed to keep herself in one piece rather than just melting. But she gave as good as she got, satisfied Tara's vixeny desires 100%... what a woman



As for Tara's secret fantasy - well naturally the fact that they even managed to do it shows that Tara has absolutely no reservations about giving herself to Willow. And the author said 'let it be hot', and lo, it was hot But y'know what made the biggest impression from that sequence? Willow just knew - she was so in tune with Tara's body that she knew exactly what Tara wanted without Tara having to even sign a word.



And Willow carried Tara to her bed - awww! That's so romantic

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

[WillowWise]

Wow it seems I have alot of catching up to do, damn comcast and them having issues, Just like to tell you like I had before, I loved the tango part!



Aly

[WillowWise]

Ok that was really good, not an anal fan but somehow ya pulled it off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anywho awesome I dig it, cant wait to read more, really considering putting one of my fics up!



Aly

[Irishgrl3]

OMG!



Well written! Need to take many (not just one) cold showers now...



Loved the "Willow to Brain" and "Brain to Willow" conversations.

[VixenyTarasHot]

Holy bujeeesus... I uh.. wow. that was incredibly hot/sexy/sweet and romantic! It was pretty much perfect. And see Vixeny Tara IS hot! The username never lies



Well that update was just filled with goodness as they all do... and I too love the WillowtoBrain and vice versa conversations. Just like Willow, haha.



I can't wait to read more.. which we all know secretly means I want to see what Tara has in mind.. for Willow... and so on.. anywho more!!



Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

[sam7777]

The build up with Willow worshipping Tara's body works perfectly with her being able to please Tara the way no one else has before. Willow may be a virgin but she has a heck of an imagination and a sense of experimentaton. It was hotter than the center of the sun and still loving and romantic.



And just worthy

Edited by: sam7777  at: 9/20/04 5:29 pm

[tararosenburg]

Great Googly Moogly I think you broke me! It was so Hot and Sweet and Cute and Hot! Man you write some of the best smut I have ever seen! Keep it going! Good thing I waited to read this till after my roommates neice left cuz I almost spit my soda everywhere! Man the licking! I want licking! I Demand Licking someone needs to find me a Girl! Oh well more Fic Please!

-Mal-

"Happiness is not a fish that you can catch!" From Happiness and the fish by Our Lady Peace

[screeminguitar]

Eeeeeegads! That was probably the hottest love scene I have every read on this board ...AND I have read plenty over the last couple of years!



That was "Wow"-oh Great Author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



My only thought was ok, how about Willow's turn??hmmmm??!!! I bet she has no idea what Tara must be screaming about....time to let her know.



I bet, it will be hot...I am just hot thinking of virgin Willow myself...



Great fic..looking forward with more to come (no pun intended!)

Marie

[umgaynow]

OK...so don't get me wrong here...I soooooo love this story...and I don't mean to criticize your prodigious talent in any way...really....this is currently my fave of the stories I am reading, but...I'm having a small problem with the whole fiction suspension of disbelief thing (don't feel bad I have the same problem when I watch movies)



I am just having a hard time seeing that Willow...a self admittedly scared virgin, would choose as her first foray into full on girl on girl lovin' rimming followed by anal fisting, without even asking Tara if it was OK...not to mention NO LUBE and Tara hasn't had anal sex of any kind before, let alone fisting...OUCH! and yikes...that aside...love the story...especially how Willow worships parts of Tara's body that most wouldn't notice and what a huge tease Tara is and especially the Willow/brain conversations...keep up the goodness



umgaynow

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you all didn't happen to do a buncha drugs did ya?

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[willohand]

okay first off after tasting tara self proclaimed scared little willow left the building to be replaced by a totally different more aggressive willow.And for those of you who`s had anal sex will understand what im saying.The asshole is a muscle. that muscle will grow and strengthen with use. and when your into anal sex and you like to be fucked up the ass its a total turn on and that person is capable of getting wet in the ass area like you wouldnt believe.and tara`s seceret fantasy has always been to have anal sex performed on her.the asshole is also capable of stretching to accomadate sizes.and willow isnt a large person to begin with but i can see where umgaynow is coming from. but i assure you i did my research before hand.i would never do anything to hurt tara.nor willow for that matter.and as far as tara is concerned willow knows her body. so as willow was first licking and biting tara`s ass tara knew even more that willow was in tune with her wants. she could of easily stopped willow the moment she felt her in that area cos believe me if your not into anal sex the moment a person even gets close to that area you stop them. if anything tara opened herself up wider for willow.id like to hear from those of you who are into anal sex. no im not kidding. talk to me.you guys know i love to talk to you and listen. so talk to me.

[willohand]

and you wouldnt believe all the research that went into this chapter. im not telling so dont ask of what exact research i did to write this.okay get your minds out the gutter and back on clean street .

you guys are just warped. but always in a good way.

[Sapphos Dream]

Okay first of all I'm kinda but not embarassed to say this, but anal roxz...for me anyway, I've tried it a couple times and I liked it alot. At first when i used to hear about it I was like...ewww....njo way that could ever happen to me, but when it did at first i was so shocked that it felt good, when it was done I cried my ass off cuz I liked it. But my ex told me it was natural and if I liked it, she liked doing it to me. I'm not telling everyone to try it but if your curious about it, give it a go. You can go wrong with exploring your body.





Tisha

[willohand]

hi sappho. thanks for taking the time to speak on this subject. i love that your so opened minded.

[sam7777]

I can attest that your first time with a-sex can actually be pretty remarkably pain minimal and enjoyable. Some folks' bodies are more "open" to it than others and while it's not everyone's cup of tea, I could certainly relate to what willohand wrote.

[willohand]

to sam7777 and a big thank you for answering my call out to those who are into anal sex.i knew in writing this about tara it would have some eyes opening but minds too i hope.

[Paigeosity]

willowhand,

My problem with your fic is not anal sex, it is anal fisting. I'm sorry but the thought that you can just "fist" someone is a little on the absurd side of things. There is not a ton of work up, beyond rimming, which I'm sorry is not enough. I think you simply rushed this part of the scene, which could have turned out better. I'm not saying fisting can't be done, I'm sure it can, but it takes work, like any fisting, anal, or otherwise. I've talked to several people that have had anal sex, with less than a fist, that had workup before, and they still say it hurt like hell. If only one person had said this, I would be likely to agree with you, but I talked 3 different people that all said the same thing.



"The next thing Willow did was slide a finger inside Tara’s asshole. Tara opened her legs wider in hopes that Willow would fill her up completely. And all her deepest desires were answered on this night.

Slowly Willow did just that, she filled Tara’s asshole with her entire hand. She fisted Tara into oblivion."



I'm sorry but the word "slowly" is not near discriptive enough, it went from one finger into a whole hand in 2 sentences. Even if in your mind time went by slower, it doesn't transfer to writing well.



The rest of the scene was good though, I did enjoy it, I just want more, well, sex, in my anal sex. It should be more emotional and heartfelt, I mean, how they talk in the beginning shows love, and the scene should have shown love too. I think I just expected more and was a little dissapointed.



Don't take what I am saying as offending, I am just trying to help you improve. I'm not telling you you wrote about the wrong thing, I wouldn't frown apon something someone enjoys, I just wish I could have taken more out of it than what I got.



With respect.

Paige

[willohand]

not trying to offend,absurd and wishing you could of walked away taking more from this chapter. . yeah ooooooookay.

right . got ya.

[Paigeosity]

I wish I could explain it in a way you would understand. I know I don't always come across like I hope I will, so I am trying again...



If you are putting something up online, you have to learn to take negative criticism, not just nice parts. I didn't want more during the whole post, I just thought that particular part needed MORE. I just wanted to feel what they felt. The amazement for Tara with Willow totally understanding without her having to say anything. Willow being amazed that she is so deep inside Tara that she can barely tell where she ends and Tara begins. I liked the rest, honest I did, and I have no reason to protect your feelings, as it seems I've already hurt them. You usually use really good discription and that particular part lacked it. I like to be immersed in a story, and I was following so closely, and for some reason that part pulled me out and made me feel critical. It didn't seem finished to me, at least not as finished as the rest of the post... I thought I had backed my opinion up better than I did...



I go to some websites that people just respond with a simple "you suck," if someone doesn't do something perfect. I wanted to HELP, it wasn't to be vengeful, or make you feel bad, just to help you improve a skill you already have.



I'm sorry if it made you feel bad, it honestly wasn't meant that way. But I won't lie and say something is "totally amazing" if I thought it could have been better. If you would have wrote a fight scene, and said "Buffy quickly defeated her foes." I would have asked for more, and to me this is not any different. Love scene, action scene, I want to feel in it.

Even with my negativity towards that part it was still a much better scene than TONS I've read, and I know you have a some potential to improve (if writing is something you want to improve upon) I'm just trying to point out how I think you could have made it better. If everyone just tells you you are awesome all the time, how do you improve? I just don't like making people feel bad, so I am trying to make you understand when I'm not so fresh from reading it. I have a bit of a "get the feelings out now!" complex, so if I don't like something and feel compelled to say something I just do, without to much thought.



Again I am apologizing for any offense I may have caused, and I hope this doesn't fall on deaf... erm eyes. Sometimes I come across more mean/mad/offended than I really am and that may have been the case on this one. I hope you can take what I said and use it, instead of taking offense to it and not listening because it isn't what you want to hear. I didn't mean it as a personal attack.



I don't criticize a fic if I don't like it, or a writer if I think they are wasting their time writing. I only make suggestions if I care enough to say so. If one of my friends would have shown me the same scene, written by them, I would have said the same thing, just probably in a more "erm, um, uh, yeah, so you uh..." way. I tend to be bolder online, more to the point. Sometimes too to-the-point. Re-reading what I wrote, it was harsh, harsher than I intended for sure. I could have said it in a nicer way, and this is my attempt, I hope you accept an apology from me...



I could get on my knees to apologize but alas I fear that would be a tad too... suggestive, so I'll just say I'm sorry for offending you while sitting down.



Paige.

"I'm gonna kiss you, okay?"-Me

"Okay,"-The girl I love

[willohand]

. i wrote it and i will always stand behind any and all my postings.