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Re: reply

Postby singgirl » Wed Jul 14, 2004 5:19 pm

What more can I say that i haven't already, or wasn't said better than another? Nothing to do justice. I love this fic.

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby little miss 666 » Wed Jul 14, 2004 6:21 pm

hi :bigwave



just popping in to say that i absolutely LOVE this here story! You're doin' such great things with it!! I'm a sucker for the Willow Tara :kiss2 moments, awwww *swoons* they're just too cute! Anyway, keep writing....and updating, can't forget the updating! :bow thankyou!



- lilmiss :grin

can i keep you?

little miss 666
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Thu Jul 15, 2004 10:40 am

mmmmmmm...



full hands...:drool .



More Soon?



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby thebardgirl » Thu Jul 15, 2004 1:20 pm

Hullo, there Rachel. Um...i just wanted to say thanks for the hiring and everything, and i have the finished product, if you'd be willing to see. Just click here and that should take you to it. i'm reading as we speak, and the funny thing is i believe i did read the beginning of this a while ago, liked it and then lost it. I'm bad with remembering where fics are (you know my memory...) i hope you like it. I must admit, Willow looks a little cartoony, and uh, i'm sorry if it's not what you wanted, but that's what i could come up with...



-elizabeth:spin

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.

thebardgirl
 


Update...Yay!!!

Postby WillowFever » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:14 pm

hello my beautiful little kitties.....



Thanks to everyone for being so patient and not throwing things at me...however....I am open to having large amounts of money being thrown my way....hehehehehe....



Oh yeah...a big ole thank you to Elizabeth for the sketch...thanks so much hun....you have a wonderful talent and I can't wait to see more of your work....



Okay.....and now...without further ado....I give you.....











Wild Horses

by

WillowFever





Part 43: Hands







Willow swallowed hard as she felt Tara’s hands squeezing her. The blonde’s touch was electric and at the moment, Willow’s body was pulsating with current.



“Tara...”



The blonde replied to the breathless use of her name with a lopsided grin. Slowly, she ran her hands down the redheads petite frame and hooked her fingers inside two empty belt loops. Willow could only blink as she watched her lover take a seat on the tailgate of the Chevy.



A gentle tug put Willow’s legs in motion and she stepped forward. It must have only been a half step, but it closed the distance between the two women and Willow found herself wrapped up in Tara.



First, she felt two warm arms slide around her and the softness of the blonde’s body pressing against her. For a moment she worried that something might be wrong.



Maybe she just needs a hug...but how can I hug her if I’m holding cider...I can’t...must lose cider...



Willow closed her eyes as she felt Tara’s cheek rub against her own. She caught the faintest whiff of vanilla and the delicious smell that belonged to Tara alone. Willow took a deep breath...allowing Tara to fill her soul and override her senses. She was just about to speak when she felt two familiar legs wrap around her and pull her close.



Oh...god...



“Willow...”



Tara felt the redhead’s body tremble as she whispered her name. She couldn’t believe she had such an effect on Willow. Slowly, she ran her hands up and down Willow’s back. The redhead was small but so strong. Tara was so lost in the feel of her lover’s body that she never heard the two cups of cider hit the ground...she never heard the rocks crunch beneath the heavy cups. She did, however, hear the low moan that escaped Willow’s lips just as the redhead wrapped her arms around the blonde



“Tara...”



Willow leaned in and nuzzled the blonde’s neck, placing small kisses and soft bites in all the secret places that drove Tara crazy.



“Ohhh...Will...”



Willow slid her hands underneath the blonde’s legs and scooted her further back in the bed of the truck. She leaned in and captured Tara’s lips in a passionate kiss. Slowly, Willow climbed up in the truck, her body still warmly wrapped in a Tara cocoon as the blonde lay back in the truck.



Willow raised herself up and smiled lovingly into blue eyes.



“Is this okay...are you comfortable...?”



The blonde nodded her head and pulled her lover down for another heated kiss. She felt Willow’s tongue slowly slide against her lips and her body shook with anticipation.



“Did you feel that?”



Tara moaned and ran her fingers through Willow’s redhair.



“Mmmmmm...yes I did....”



Willow pulled back and looked through the back glass of the truck.



“Not that.....that...”



Tara propped herself up on her elbows and waited.



“Sweetie...the only thing I felt...”



Before the blonde could finish her sentence, a cold drop of rain smacked her in the forehead.



“There...feel it...”



Before they could say another word, the sky burst open and the cold September rain washed over them.



“Oh my god....”



“Run..”



The girls scrambled out of the back of the truck and onto the porch. They tried to move quickly, but the rain fell to hard and fast and they found themselves very wet.



“Willow....”



The redhead smiled at her lover.



“It’s okay...we’re out of the rain...no worries...”



Willow looked up and her smile quickly faded at the terrified look on Tara’s face. she followed the line of sight of her lover and soon found herself sporting a worried expression.



“Frankie...”



Tara ran off the porch towards the barn.



“I’ve got to get him in...he’ll catch a cold...”



Willow was not about to let her lover go out in the rain alone. She hopped off the porch and followed the blonde into the barn.



“Open his stall and I’ll go get him...”



Willow ran to the stall and did as she was instructed. She threw open the door and quickly ran to see if she could help the blonde. Just as she got to the entrance, Tara and Frankie came trotting into the barn. Tara lead the horse to it’s stall and Willow closed the barn doors behind them.



“Is he okay?”



Tara nodded her head as the water dripped from her nose.



“We just got to get him wiped down...and a blanket over him...”



Willow grabbed two brushes and entered the stall. Slowly, she stepped toward Frankie and began brushing the him down. She knew Tara’s heart would be broken if Frankie got sick and she never wanted the blonde’s heart to break.



“Will....I’m gonna grab a blanket...you okay in here?”



Willow nodded as she continued to rub the horse down. Tara ran upstairs and the redhead found herself alone.



“Hey big guy...don’t you worry...everything's gonna be okay...”



She didn’t know if she said the words aloud for his sake or her own but it seemed to be helping both of them calm down.



“We’re gonna get you good and dry and then you’re gonna get a blankie...I’ll bet you get some tasty oats too...”



Willow brushed the horse’s neck and started to walk underneath his head to get to the other side. Frankie chose that moment to lay his head down on the redhead’s shoulder...freezing her in her tracks.



“Stay calm Willow...stay calm....he’s not gonna bite you....not gonna bite....”



Tara stopped at the foot of the steps and took in the sight of her lover standing stiff as a board with Frankie’s head draped over her shoulder.



“Tara...help me...I think I made him mad...”



Tara smiled as she walked towards the stall. She walked around so that she could see the look on Willow’s face. The redhead was terrified. She felt bad for her, but knew nothing was wrong.



“Honey...he likes you...”



“He’s gonna bite my head off....I know it....”



Tara let a small giggle escape.



“I’m glad you find this funny...”



Willow whispered as loud as she could, afraid that any loud noise would set the beast off.



“Sweetie...he’s not going to bite you...he’s telling you that he trusts you...”



Willow felt herself relax a little...but only a little.



“What...?”



Tara patted the horse on the back and slowly tossed the blanket over him. He let out a contented sigh and Willow found herself relaxing even further.



“He likes me?”



Tara nodded her head as she watched Willow slowly raise her hands and pat the horse on the neck. It was the most endearing thing she had ever seen.



“Well....I can’t believe I’m saying this....but..I like you too Frankie...”





~ ~ ~



Soon the girls finished up in the barn and secured all the animals, even Dusty had decided to bunk down with the horses for the night. Now, it was time to make a made dash back to the house. The rain was cold and the house had never looked so far away.



Tara looked to her lover.



“On the count of three....ready...?”



Willow nodded her head and took a deep breath.



“1...2...3...”



Tara threw the door open and both girls bolted across the driveway screaming and laughing the whole way. Before they knew it, they were on the front porch slipping off their shoes.



“Hurry....let’s get inside...”



Willow went straight to the fireplace and cranked it on.



“That will get it wa...”



Her words froze in her throat as she turned and found Tara standing naked at the front door.



“I...did you...ummm....help?!”



Tara smiled at her lover as she headed to the steps.



“I thought I would take a shower...didn’t want to smell like horse all night...”



Willow could only nod her head as the blonde stood at the foot of the stairs. Tara gave her lover a come hither stare before heading on up the stairs.



“You might want to shower too...”



Willow ran to the bottom of the steps, tossing clothes as she went. The night was young and filled with possibilities. Willow climbed the steps two at a time in an effort to catch up with her lover.



“Ohhh...you bet I want to shower....”







tbc.....







WillowFever
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby BurningWhiteRose » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:27 pm

:sheep :thud :drool I wanna shower....:drool :thud :sheep



Again, you my dear, are trying to kill your readers.



THANK YOU!!



Please continue with the plots of murder.



Sincerely,

:flower BWR

***

If homosexuals dont reproduce, why are there so many of them?-Jim David

BurningWhiteRose
 


Re: Woo hoo!

Postby marciam » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:28 pm

Willow with the horse... had me :lmao . And I love the way you write Tara. The final exchange, with this:
Quote:
“Ohhh...you bet I want to shower....”


I can just picture her bolting after the blonde :rofl



I eagerly await the next installment :)

Marcia

"Now get out of here and go claim your orgasms!" Anya to Tara in Something New by Ophelia11


"Well, we usually call it the ‘Wine Me, Dine Me, Sixty-Nine Me’ Festival of Homos, but Lezziepalooza has a nice ring, too." Willow to Buffy in Gods Served and Abandoned by Antigone Unbound

marciam
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby Marilda » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:38 pm

Oh yeah! That was the coolest. This story is so wonderfully sweet and just awww...you know?



I'm probably not making any sense, but please keep updating anyway. I am thoroughly enjoying this.

Marilda
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby wimpy0729 » Sat Jul 17, 2004 10:42 pm

Okay, so I thought the Z-71 was going to see some action, but nope, somebody was just teasing us. Stupid Ohio weather! :fit2



But ya know what? Showers are good too, very good actually. Tara is such a frisky vixen! :eyebrow



More soon please!



Wimpy

"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

wimpy0729
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby Kajun » Sat Jul 17, 2004 11:31 pm

I would imagine all the horses under Tara's care are just as sweet as Frankie. After all.. Tara brings out the best in everyone; human and critter alike. Now that Willow and Frankie have become friends she will feel more at ease around the stables and perhaps even learn to ride soon! Lovely update.. as always..

Kajun
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby WickedReds » Sun Jul 18, 2004 1:21 am

:sheep :drool :jaw

Mmmmm.... shower



oh hey i'm a floating rose now woo hoo :banana



-reds:willow

Edited by: WickedReds at: 7/18/04 12:22 am
WickedReds
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sun Jul 18, 2004 3:23 am

Amazing update and Willow has a friend cool:) now she has to feel comfy enough to ride him;) Oh hehe to imagine them runnring through the rain, wet clothes, taking them off and running around in the house, makes me shiver what a nice few and now they are on their way under the shower! i see lots of fun coming up in the next update:D



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby willowsgirl » Sun Jul 18, 2004 3:31 am

Hey there, still loving this fic :D This update was great, like the other kittens I loved the part with Willow and Frankie, I can just imagine her standing completely frozen with his head on her shoulder :lmao poor girl.

And the ending....? Well, Im just hoping the next update might continue where you've left off. Pretty please :flirt



Stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Jul 18, 2004 7:41 am

:shower

please?!?!?!?! :pray



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



Sweet Amber ~~~ Amber Board ~~~ Fred the Elephant ~~~ Danielle Benson ~~~ Danielle Board

littlecrazy80
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby veiled isis moon » Sun Jul 18, 2004 9:39 am

Awwwwww, Willow made a new friend



Personally, i think Willow managed very well after turning round and seeing Tara naked wearing only a sexy grin, if it was me.........then well...........i'd be.........

veiled isis moon
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby Artemis » Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:08 am

Yipes! A cold shower from the fates... oh well, it serves to get Willow and Tara inside and into a hot shower, so it's all good. Just, did this have to get posted the day it dropped to 10 degrees C here, with a massive wind-chill? I'm still shivering :)



Willow getting to know Frankie was adorable. Poor Willow, ever-fearful of horse-related dismemberment, when all the nice horse wanted was to say hello. It's good to see Willow relaxing a little though. Horses being such a big thing in Tara's life, I'm sure she just loves seeing Willow start to be more comfortable around them.



A lovely, lively chapter. Thanks, and here's to more :)

Artemis
 


Re: Update...Yay!!!

Postby sam darls » Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:24 am

Ooh a shower :flirt ..I wanna shower too..hehe. Wonderful update..yay..and now Willow likes Frankie :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby sharleen711 » Sun Jul 18, 2004 4:16 pm

I WANT THE SHOWER !!!!!!!!!!!!! ... Please...Or i'll be all and .

I loved Willow and Fankie interaction. It was cute... (of course Frankie likes Willow.. How could it be possible not to like her ???? )

for the next update...

~ Sharleen ~

sharleen711
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Sun Jul 18, 2004 6:11 pm

Willow likes Frankie. Finally, she sees that the horses won't eat her. This will only bring her and Tara closer together. Woohoo. :bounce Hmmm.. a shower. Nothing is going to happen to interrupt that too, right? :eyebrow

Great update.



~Mikaelah

That'll teach me to challenge her. ~Tara ... ~Something New by Ophelia11

Mikaelah Braenna
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby Shy One » Sun Jul 18, 2004 6:49 pm

Ooooooh a shower...together.......Please hurry with the next update!!!!

I need some hot, steamy Willow and Tara shower fun!! :flirt



Great update!!!

More, more, more!!!!! :applause :applause :applause



Shy One

:shy

Shy One
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby sam7777 » Sun Jul 18, 2004 8:38 pm

This is one of the best fics I have read with Willow and Tara getting together. It's sexy and sweet and it's hard to get those two things right in one story. Wonderful story and can't wait for the :shower .

sam7777
 


Re: (New AU Fic) Wild Horses....

Postby shuyaku » Sun Jul 18, 2004 11:38 pm

How sweet Frankie gave Willow a hug :p



I don't know if I have left feedback on this fic yet - in any case, it has been a while if nothing else so bad me. This story is great. And they are so cute together :luv2



:clap

-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


reply

Postby willohand » Mon Jul 19, 2004 6:37 am

you are my god...willow with a horse? i think...i think i love you.who would of thought...willow and a horse? and it just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter.:party :p arty:party :p inky:pinky :banana :dance

:bigwave :wave :tara has such a calming affect on willow.

im loving this fanfic.and to the author, you rooooooooock.

:glasses :banana :banana :tara =:willow .

willohand
 


Re: reply

Postby WillowFever » Mon Jul 19, 2004 5:03 pm

wow.....I gotta tell ya....it never ceases to amaze me at all the wonderful feedback I get from everyone...thanks so much for making me feel right at home here on the kitten...



Okay....so I'm gonna attempt to do individual replies...last time this didn't work out so well...but we'll see....okay



here goes...woohoo...I love you guys....











BurningWhiteRose



I swear...I'm not trying to kill anyone...as you will hopefully see in the next update....just...get prepared....hehehehe thanks hun...







marciam





Hey marcia...so glad you are still enjoying this fic..hehehe....just wait till the shower....Oh..I'm feeling so EVIL...Mwhahahaha....





Marilda



I will continue to update....and I thank you for your feedback..that's so sweet...glad you are enjoying...



wimpy0729



Ya know...I'm sure before it's all over...that Z-71 will have seen lot's of action.....lol....I'm dusting off my tiara...I feel the need to put it on.....thanks hun....





Kajun



Ya know....Tara does seem to bring out the best in everyone and everything around her....she is such a sweetie...thanks hun...glad you're still around....



WickedReds



congrats on the floating rose.....hehehehe...i thought I would do cartwheels when i went to Extra Flamey....woohooo...and thanks for the feedback hun...very nice...



Stroke of Luck



Oh yeah...lot's of fun to be had and soon....and I'm glad everyone is enjoying Willow and her getting closer to the horses...Ahhhh...yes..the shower....soon....lol....



willowsgirl



Hey Stacey...so glad you are enjoying...and Willow is always cute...IMHO...especially with Frankie...and Tara...and...well...showers..lol....and yes....right where I left off....



littlecrazy80





Hey Sweetie....I'm so glad you are liking this...and really glad we talked...woohoo...I had a blast....okay...thanks for everythign...and look forward to chatin' again....



veiled isis moon



I thought Willow handed naked Tara rather well too....but there is more to that story....as you will soon find out...and yay...willow has a friend in Frankie....that sounds like a bad song...lol....anyway...Thanks hun...



Artemis



Wow...very massive wind-chill...you poor thing...well I hope the next update will help warm you up a bit..hehehe..thanks...and I think it does do Tara's heart good to see Willow interacting with the horses...Thanks....



sam darls



shower is on the way baby..woohoo....thanks...





sharleen711



I agree....it is impossible not to like Willow....hehehe...thanks hun..more is on the way....



Mikaelah Braenna



Thanks hun....and no....I promise...no shower interruptions...but then you already know that....hehehehe...



Shy One



Hot and Steamy Willow and Tara is on the way...lol..thanks...





sam7777



Awwww....you are so sweet...and thanks for the wonderful feedback...I'm feeling all...blushy now...hehehe....glad you are enjoying....



shuyaku



Thanks sweetie...glad you are still enjoying....woohoo....



willohand



lol...well...I'm definintely no god...lol...but I thank you just the same...glad you are enjoying the story hun....Thanks..







Okay...i think I got everyone....at least I hope so.....ummm....I should be posting the next part sometime soon...hehehehe....so please be patient cause I promise lot's and lot's of W/T goodness is coming....lol....



Take care.....



WF







WillowFever
 


Re: reply

Postby irishlassie101 » Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:32 am

Hy there,



I´m still glued to your story...and now you promise lots and LOTS of W/T goodness...I´ll simply have to stay online 24/7 SMILE



Willow and a horse...finally she gets over her fear...and I´m sure Frankie won´t bite her arm off GRIN

(maybe you could get rid of her frog-fear at the same time:D )



PLEASE PLEASE keep up your posting



Aishling

irishlassie101
 


Re: reply

Postby pipsberg » Wed Jul 21, 2004 10:12 am

WillowFever,



I got back from vacation and was thrilled to see an update. I really love your story and the love you've built between Willow & Tara is amazing. I can't wait for more.



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

pipsberg
 


Update is coming soon..

Postby WillowFever » Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:10 am

Hello my little kitties...I just wanted to apologize for the slowness in the update....I feel as though I've been pounded with RL with a sledge hammer..:gnome soooooo...



Hopefully....I will have the next part posted later today....I just need to touch up a few things....



Thanks for being so patient and for being the wonderful kitties that you are.....





Take care





Rachel :peace



:pride

Edited by: WillowFever at: 7/29/04 1:12 am
WillowFever
 


Re: Update is coming soon..

Postby sharleen711 » Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:09 am

oh yessssss !!!!!! the next part, please...

~ Sharleen ~

sharleen711
 


Re: Update is coming soon..

Postby TromDeGrey » Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:38 am

I found this over on Looking Glass and wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this. And, hey! I'm a Buckeye! LOL!!!







My second favorite household chore is ironing. My first being hitting my head on the top bunk bed until I faint. -Erma Bombeck



TromDeGrey
 


Re: Update is coming soon..

Postby ophelia11 » Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:51 am

I am very bad and have not left feedback in a very long time. Bad, Laura, Bad. This story keeps getting better and better every chapter. I thought the little connection between Willow and Frankie was very sweet. And hip hip hooray for nekkid Tara. That's some good stuff.



Now I'll sit idly in my little office and watch the clock til it's time to go pick up the queen. Can't wait to hear about the shopping adventures. A dress? Really? *giggles*

ophelia11
 

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