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Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Jul 10, 2002 2:59 pm

Alternatives



Chapter 1

Rating: PG13 for violence

Spoilers: Up to but not including Entrophy.

Disclaimer: I own nothing but that which I create. All else belongs to people who can sue/excommunicate/execute me if I don’t write this.

Disclaimer #2: I am going to mess about with the ideas of religion in this fic, this is not intended to offend anyone, or contradict anyone’s beliefs, but it’s necessary for the story. I apologise in advance for any offence taken.

Summary: Giles lied to Joyce in Bad Eggs. Glory gets avenged, Buffy is beaten up.

Feedback: Send all constructive comments to rmmik@hotmail.com (please put something like “Re: your fic” in the subject, otherwise I’ll bin it). Send all abuse to someone else.

Authors note: I don’t like Season Six’s ending (obviously), so here’s my way of making things better. Eventually. After much angst. But hopefully you’ll like the W/T bits. The happy ones I mean. Hold on tight!









It was a slow night. Again. The emptiness of the dark graveyard was matched only by the yawning chasm in Buffy’s soul. In fact, it was slower than when Adam was sending demons to the Initiative, back when she could still feel anything but grief and self-pity. Suddenly, a vamp came running at her, but before he even got close to the Slayer, a stake flew out from behind him and caught him square in the back. A young woman stepped out of the shadows. Through the dust Buffy could barely make out her features. She was sure they’d never met, but the girl looked familiar. She stepped through the settling dust and smirked.

“Buffy.”

It wasn’t a question. She spoke with a clipped British accent, but her stance was oddly reminiscent of Faith; cocky, self-assured and dangerous.

“Yes?” Buffy asked. Her spidey-sense was blaring in her ear to get away from this girl, but she ignored it. The girl spoke again.

“You hurt Glory.”

The surge of fear that rose in Buffy’s breast was quelled only by her puzzlement. This girl felt wrong . As the Slayer she had a very faint empathic ability. It had started as just being able to sense vamps, but had progressed to the point where she relied on it to tell friend from foe. This girl definitely fell into the latter category. She spoke again.

“You have to pay.”

“Yeah, well the cheque’s in the mail.”

She smirked again.

“Call this the second instalment.”

And with that, her face morphed into vampiric form, and she attacked.







Anya sighed. Her last customer had left over half an hour ago, but she still hadn’t closed up. She had counted the money so many times it was getting boring, even for her. There were only so many times you could count $350.65. She had done the Dance of Capitalist Superiority three times, but her heart wasn’t in it. To tell the truth, she missed Xander. Big jerk, she thought. She wanted to hate him, which would be easier if he were dead, but even with her powers back, she couldn’t harm him. So, she was procrastinating to the point of tears, just so she didn’t have to go home, alone, again. Just like last time, she thought. The bell over the door jangled half-heartedly, jerking her out of her reverie. She put on her customer face, and turned to greet whatever pathetic mortal had dragged itself here for quick-fix’s to their problems. If only that worked…..

“Holy Pete!”

The figure hunched against the door frame was filthy, bleeding and broken. Anya didn’t recognise it at first, until a hoarse voice grated out from under the blood-matted hair.

“Anya? Call the gang. New baddie in town.”

“Buffy? What the hell happened to you?” Tact be damned, she needed to know. The beating Buffy had taken followed a familiar pattern, one she could do without seeing for a few more millennia, thank you very much.

“Vamp.” Buffy rasped, fear still evident through the remnants of a voice hoarse from crying out in pain.. “Said something about Glory, then kicked my ass.”

Anya reached for the phone.









Willow was worried, to say the least. She had cleaned Buffy up, and the cuts were mostly shallow, the blood had come from wounds on her head, which always seemed worse than they were, so they were healing nicely, but Buffy had broken three fingers on one hand and two on the other, and Willow was pretty sure there were at least three fractured ribs. She kept shooting worried glances the Slayer’s way, as she looked rather pale. Buffy was currently slumped in a chair, a blanket over her to stop the shaking that had set in. The entire Scooby gang was assembled in the Magic shop, including Tara and Xander, which Anya wasn’t too happy about. Spike was on his way, with some weapons, just in case. Willow cleared her throat.

“Buffy, what happened?” She asked gently. She didn’t want to push her friend, who seemed close to collapse. As far as she could tell from Buffy’s muttering it wasn’t from the injuries, but from the length of the fight, which had lasted over an hour before the vamp had retreated, still smiling.

Buffy took a deep breath, gathered her strength and spoke.

“ I was patrolling. But there was nothing there, till this one guy comes running out of the bushes like his un-life depends on it. Before I could even move, someone threw a stake at him. Then she appeared.”

“What did she look like?” Anya asked.

“Tall, blond, about our age, well-built but not in a butch lesbian body-builder way. Sorry,” she said, shooting an apologetic glance at Willow and Tara, who just smiled. They had instinctively moved closer together when the talk started, which wasn’t lost on Buffy. They still protect each other, she thought. It was quite sweet, even though it made her heart ache for that kind of love. She continued speaking.

“She said something about me hurting Glory, and how I had to pay, then attacked me. She was stronger than anyone I’ve ever fought, even Glory. And she reminded me of Faith.”

All the Scoobies except Tara and Anya shuddered at that thought.

“Well, I suppose we do have certain likenesses,” came an English voice from the door. The gang turned to face a tall, blond-

“That’s her!” Buffy yelled. Instinctively, they all reached for weapons. The girl smirked.

“Now, is that any way to treat a guest?”

“A guest is invited,” Buffy challenged. ”Who invited you?”

“I did.” Came another British voice, this one much more familiar.

“Giles?” Buffy whispered.

“Ah,” said the watcher, looking Buffy over, ”I see you two are acquainted. For the rest of you, I would like to introduce-”

“We’ve met.” Anya muttered, glaring at the blond.

Giles didn’t hear, and continued speaking.

“Kel. My daughter.”

The Scoobies gaped.





Ruth

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

Edited by: xita  at: 10/13/02 12:35:35 am
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Jul 10, 2002 3:32 pm

I like!! Giles and his daughter, this is very interesting please keep goin!! :)

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Jul 11, 2002 8:36 am

MissQuirky: Ok, just for you. Please bear in mind this was mostly written during a Chemistry test, so it isn’t my best.



Chapter 2

Rating: PG13 for violence

Spoilers: Up to but not including Entrophy.

Disclaimer: I own nothing but that which I create. All else belongs to people who can sue/excommunicate/execute me if I don’t write this.

Disclaimer #2: I am going to mess about with the ideas of religion in this fic, this is not intended to offend anyone, or contradict anyone’s beliefs, but it’s necessary for the story. I apologise in advance for any offence taken.

Summary: Giles lied to Joyce in Bad Eggs. Glory gets avenged, Buffy is beaten up.

Feedback: Send all constructive comments to rmmik@hotmail.com (please put something like “Re: your fic” in the subject, otherwise I’ll bin it). Send all abuse to someone else.

Authors note: I don’t like Season Six’s ending (obviously), so here’s my way of making things better. Eventually. After much angst. But hopefully you’ll like the W/T bits. The happy ones I mean. Hold on tight!





The first to move was Anya. She stormed up to the newcomer and whacked her on the arm.

“You never told me Giles was your father! A Watcher, yes but not Giles!”

“Oh yeah, that name would have meant a lot six hundred years ago.” Kel said sarcastically. “And if I had told you, imagine what it would be like to meet him knowing that. ‘Oh, hi, I’m the demon partly responsible for your daughter being stripped of her wings and thrown out of Heaven! Nice to meet you.’ That would go down well.”

They glared at each other until Tara spoke.

“Um… not wanting to interrupt here, but…how can you be six hundred if you’re Giles’ daughter? And what do you mean ‘stripped of your wings’ and ‘thrown out of heaven? And how do you know Anya?”

That question made Anya blush. Kel smirked.

“What, you can tell them about Olaf, but not about me?”

The Scoobies gaped. Again.

“Um…” Was all she said.

Kel interrupted. “To answer the other two questions, I was once the fourth highest ranking angel in heaven. We had no sense of time. I committed a great crime, and was stripped of my wings, and forced to live as part demon, part witch, part human, until I am allowed back home. But I digress. I am here for a reason.”

“To kick my butt for Glory?” Buffy asked miserably. She looked quite pathetic, curled up in a chair with a blanket over her.

Kel looked over.

“No, my vengeance for her is done.”

“Good.” Buffy said. She stood up, sword in hand, and advanced on the blonde.

“Now leave.”

Kel smirked again. It was really infuriating.

“No.” She moved in a flash, and the sword was gone from Buffy’s hand, and Kel was handing it to Giles.

“Now, I have a story to tell. So I shall begin, as is traditional, at the beginning. God made Man. Adam and Eve,” Kel looked at Willow and Tara, standing close together, Tara chanting quietly, and smirked. “Big temptation, got kicked out, blah blah blah, skip a few generations. Moses went up Mount Sinai, and got the commandments. ‘Ye shall have no other God before me’ Yada yada yada. But Moses got it mixed up. God was first, all others came after him. The Jews were allowed to worship other gods as long as they didn’t abandon God or forget His place.” Kel looked over at Willow, who had sidled in front of Tara and was holding her hand, shielding her from view. “That’s why He likes you. Jewish Wiccan.” She chuckled. “Anyway, then came uncle J. Jesus.” She said in answer to their puzzled looks. “So he came, and you lot nailed him to a tree. Very inconsiderate. Now for the good bit.” Smiling at the astonishment on the faces before her, Kel continued.

“Then God decided to take a more active role, like with Uncle Jesus. Only this time, no big ‘a virgin has conceived!’ promo. The Second Coming had to be discreet. So He had a child with another god. Artemis, to be exact. They named their daughter Keshmashmir.”

“Dumb name for a goddess.” Xander said. He was feeling jealous of the newcomer, and her apparent history with Anya, not that it was any of his business anymore. Suddenly, he found himself shoved up against the wall, Kel’s arm pinning his shoulders, and Giles holding the sword to his throat. He spoke calmly.

“You ever insult my wife’s name again, it’ll be the last thing you ever do.”

He turned and walked away.

“Your wife?!” Yelled Buffy.

“Yes," said Kel "That’s why I am… was, an angel. Anyway, Kesh went to live on Earth for a while, and fell for a mortal. My father. They had three children, and lived happily until she, and my sister were murdered.” At this point Kel looked at Giles, held his gaze with hers for a second, then dropped it to the floor. Anya made a move to comfort her, but stopped herself in time. You owe her nothing, she reminded herself.

“So, they returned home-“

“Home?” Dawn asked.

“Heaven,” Kel said with a look of longing. “They went back and I was sent to supervise The Project, with orders from Grandad to let nothing interfere. That’s why I’m here. You guys are The Project, and someone’s about to interfere. I came from a little way in the future. If I don’t stop it, things will turn into what I came from. I can’t let it happen.”

“Let what happen?” That was Willow.

“Where I’ve come from, the world ended, because you all died.”

She turned to face Tara.

“Starting with you.”







Ruth.



One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

Edited by: NewRuthRising at: 2/22/04 12:10 pm
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby willntlover » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:06 am

awesome first parts. sorry i didn't take the time to reply to your first post, forgive me?? :(



Its a kick ass story. i hope there is more soon. I love how someone has come to change the fact hat the gang is going to die. :)



-Will



"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:11 am

Of course I forgive you. Anyone reading at all is great. Working on chapt.3 now, but they wont all be this quick. I do have a life. No, really. I do! Ahem.





Ruth

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

Edited by: NewRuthRising at: 7/11/02 9:21:27 am
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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:23 am

Ooh, I'm lovin this story more n more, can't wait 4 ur next update! And of course u have a life but just keep comin up with these great chapters cos its really good!! :)

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Re: Fic: Alternatives

Postby NewRuthRising » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:26 am

Thanx, now if you could just convince everyone else to read it....:)



Back to work.



Ruth

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Curious...

Postby DarkWiccan » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:38 am

Hm.



Interesting... keep going.



Cheers

DW

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Re: Curious...

Postby willntlover » Thu Jul 11, 2002 11:08 am

is cool, i'll wait as long as it takes. :)

-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


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Re: Curious...

Postby Latsric » Fri Jul 12, 2002 1:29 am

Well, you've piqued my interest. Please keep going.





-lat-

- I need my obsessions, they keep me sane -

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Re: Curious...

Postby mollyig » Fri Jul 12, 2002 2:27 am

They still protect each other, she thought. It was quite sweet, even though it made her heart ache for that kind of love. Nice work to bring that line into play.



Am intrigued to see where you're going with all of this, especially how you will explain the Giles connection more fully.

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Re: Curious...

Postby xita » Fri Jul 12, 2002 2:42 am

NRR, I've just finished reading. I am a bit confused about this girl, but I am sure you'll clear it up. I am happy that she has come to undo the wrongs, starting with Tara, yay!



I have one suggestion for you. If you insert a space in between paragraphs and every line of dialogue it makes it easier to read :)



Thanks!

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Re: Curious...

Postby NewRuthRising » Fri Jul 12, 2002 8:54 am

Sure Xita. Love your sig. It's my birthday today and I'm going out, so C.3 probably won't be up for a bit, but when it does come, it should clear some things up. And leave some things hanging......

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Re: Curious...

Postby fidds » Fri Jul 12, 2002 10:07 am

great start

i wonder how the gang is gunna react

looking forward to the next part :)



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

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Re: Curious...

Postby MissQuirky » Fri Jul 12, 2002 7:14 pm

I was just poppin in 2 c if u updated cos i luv this story, but its ok i can wait alittle longer 4 it, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! :)

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Re: Curious...

Postby Murasaki S » Fri Jul 12, 2002 9:02 pm

Intriguing so far. Write more soon!

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Re: Curious...

Postby willntlover » Fri Jul 12, 2002 11:59 pm

happy birthday!

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: Update!

Postby NewRuthRising » Sat Jul 13, 2002 7:22 am

Your wish is my command. Enjoy!



Alternatives



Chapter 3

Rating: PG13 for violence

Spoilers: All eps are now fair game.

Disclaimer: I own nothing but that which I create. All else belongs to people who can sue/excommunicate/execute me if I don’t write this.

Disclaimer #2: I am going to mess about with the ideas of religion in this fic, this is not intended to offend anyone, or contradict anyone’s beliefs, but it’s necessary for the story. I apologise in advance for any offence taken.

Summary: Explanations

Feedback: Send all constructive comments to rmmik@hotmail.com (please put something like “Re: your fic” in the subject, otherwise I’ll bin it). Send all abuse to someone else.

Authors note: I don’t like Season Six’s ending (obviously), so here’s my way of making things better. Eventually. After much angst. But hopefully you’ll like the W/T bits. The happy ones I mean. Hold on tight!

Authors note 2: For those of you who don’t get it (I was confused when I read it back), the tape is basically the events of Entrophy onwards.









“No.”

That was Willow. She had resolve face on full blast and was standing defiantly in front of Kel, refusing to accept what she was being told.

Then Buffy spoke, with a voice of steel.

“Tara is not going to die. I won’t allow it.”

Kel looked at her.

“Well you couldn’t really do much, you were bleeding to death at the time.”

The Scoobs looked horrified. Kel went on.

“Oh, don’t worry, Willow saved you.”

Buffy beamed at her best friend, her first real smile in months.

“Right after she sucked all the magic out of the books up here”

She indicated the upper level of the shop, where all the real nasty stuff was.

“And right before she murdered a few people before trying to end the world. I have it all on tape.”

“Did she do it?” Xander asked, horrified.

“No. You talked her down. Or so you thought. Tara bled to death in her arms, right after they made up, and you tried to talk her down with stories about crayons.”

“I did it, didn’t I?” Willow asked. “If Tara died, Xander wouldn’t have been able to stop me.”

“True. You cried a little for his benefit, then killed him. Then you went after Anya. Then you summoned Spike and killed him, soul and all. Then Dawn. Then Buffy. You had no reason to live. So you jammed your essence into the nearest receptacle, a computer, and without it, you died. That would have been the end of it, except the computer had all your power, and all your pain, and a modem. Anyone remember Moloch? Ironic, really. The first emotion a computer ever felt was contempt, and hatred. So it disabled all the transport systems around the world, then let off every single missile controlled by computers. End of the world. And it had a catalyst, which I will explain later.”

“I don’t believe you.” That came from Dawn.

“I’m not surprised. I’ll prove it.”

Kel took out a tape labelled ‘THE PROJECT END-Must find alternatives’, and put it in the machine.





The screen went blank with Willow in Xander’s arms, crying. The Scoobies just stared. Finally Willow spoke.

“That can’t be real. I look so old. How far away is this?”

“If nothing changes, Anya will sleep with Spike in three days. That’s the catalyst.”

Then Xander spoke.

“You’ve been sleeping with SPIKE????????????”

Buffy looked embarrassed, but Kel intervened.

“Really not the issue here. We have more important things to deal with.”

Tara stood, for she had sunk to the floor at the sight of her own death. She strode over to Willow, took her in her arms and kissed her soundly. Principles be damned, this was something both their hearts needed. She pulled back from the embrace, and looked her love, if not her lover, in the eye.

“Promise me, no matter what.”

“I promise.”

No more words were needed. Both knew this was not the reconciliation they both yearned for, but a tiny step towards it. Both were content to know they still shared a bond stronger than anything else they knew, and both had renewed their flagging hopes.

“I’m still confused about you.”

Dawn said to Kel. The Scoobies nodded their assent.

“Right.” Kel said. She cocked her head to the side and looked up.

“Can I tell them now?”

Apparently she got a response, because she replied angrily.

“They deserve to know. They need to know. Thank you.”

She looked at Giles, who handed her the sword. Walking over to where Tara and Willow stood, a sphere shimmered around them as she passed through it.

“Nice protection spell.”

She said to Tara. Then she took the blade just below the hilt and offered it, handle first, to Willow, who took it slowly, puzzled by this behaviour. Puzzlement turned to astonishment when Kel knelt in front of her, baring her torso to the blade.

“My people have done you and your mate a great disservice. On behalf of them and the Holy Covenant of God and His angels, I offer penance, and beg forgiveness.”

Willow just stood there, gaping. Anya intervened.

“You’re supposed to stab her,” she whispered helpfully.

Willow looked at her, horrified. The sword dropped to the floor.

“No.”

Kel smiled.

“Good. That was the first test. Now you are ready to learn. I am… I suppose you would call me your guardian angel, except I can only watch, up till now that is. This group has been planned since the beginning, however, this is the first time all your souls have been in one place. It took some doing, I’ll tell you.”

Tara noticed that Kel had an air of guilt when she said this, and that both Giles and Anya’s gazes hardened.

Definitely some history here, she thought. But Kel was speaking again, so she pushed those thoughts to one side.

“The first two were you two.”

She indicated Willow and Tara.

“The rest of you joined later, when the world wasn’t so new, and more warriors were needed. We’ve had a hand in everything you’ve ever done. In fact, since I took over The Project, I have everything that’s happened since Buffy moved to Sunnydale on tapes like the one you just saw. But this isn’t the point. Willow and Tara are the most important people in the group. It is imperative that when they die, they either be together and happy, or they have never met, or they have broken up permanently and moved on. So far, we haven’t been able to get a happy ending, and we’ve been trying, believe me. Some of you previous incarnations have been so close. Anthony and Cleopatra, Romeo and Juliet (Will based the play on a story I told him). Even Adam and Eve, they were all you two. But this latest one is the worst. So we tried to keep you apart. We tried to get Willow to choose Oz when he came back, we were trying for three years to get Buffy together with Willow, but you people are so stubborn! I mean, talk about denial! No wonder you named a river after it. We had you crushing on each other for months, and nothing happened. Damn humans.”

By this point both Willow and Buffy were the colour of overripe tomatoes and gaping wordlessly. Xander looked euphoric. Kel ignored them and carried on speaking.

“And then Tara arrived. We had tried to remove enough of her self-confidence so she would be too shy to approach you, and you’d die never having got together, but nooo,” she dragged the word out, “you two had to beat us. So when you were together, we threw everything we had at you, and you still stayed together. So we thought, hey, maybe these two have a chance. So we started encouraging you instead. But some idiot didn’t read the message right, and next thing you know, poof, all gone.

People destined to be together have it easy. You two had all the angels in Heaven and Hell working against you (like anything else would have done it), and it took us years to break you up. However, the time has come where you need all the information you can get, so there it is.”

The Scoobies gaped.





Ruth

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Re: Curious...

Postby tommo » Sat Jul 13, 2002 11:17 am

Two souls trapped in time, destined to be with one another. I suppose that kind of sums up Willow and Tara's relationship, doesn't it? I'm interested in this Kel character though, as she seems incongruous in the Scooby dynamic.



As far as the technical aspects of your story go, have you thought about getting a beta reader? There are lots in the thread on Pens and it's the discussion I'm thinking of; your grammar and spelling is pretty accurate. I would like to see the narrative fleshed out a little more, with some more in-depth detail on tone of voice, movement, etc. :)






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TARA: ...didn't think she liked my fucking until I realized that that was her yummy face

Edited by: tommo at: 7/13/02 10:19:34 am
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Re: Curious...

Postby xita » Sat Jul 13, 2002 9:11 pm

Yes, interesting, keeping the girls happy of course, not breaking them up for good. I don't think they can do that :)

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Re: Curious...

Postby willntlover » Sat Jul 13, 2002 9:36 pm

swift. i like kel. weird, yet mysterious. And lol having buffy and willow crush on each other for three years :laugh :laugh :laugh .



-Will

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


willntlover
 


Re: Curious...

Postby NewRuthRising » Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:53 am

K. C.4 wont be up for a bit. I suppose I'd better start it. Ok then, off I go.

BTW Ruth, my lack of narrative was intentional, the idea is that the Scoobs are so shocked by what's going on they dont really notice anything else. It will get more descriptive later. The same goes for chapter length.

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Re: Curious...

Postby NewRuthRising » Tue Jul 16, 2002 10:48 am

Okay, no-one has replied so I'm assuming you've all lost interest, or lost the thread, but in any case, C.4 isn't back from Ruth who i emailed it to to beta, so it won't be up for a bit.

One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Re: Curious...

Postby willntlover » Tue Jul 16, 2002 11:05 am

There has been no lost intrest!!! I was just waiting for the update. ( just didn't want to be bumping the thread that's all. The rules.)



I am so excited to hear that c4 is almost ready!!!!!!



-Will



hey look i'm extra flamey!!!

"Hear that baby? You're my always."

"well, you know, when you play a lesbian witch you've gotta get killed in this fun kind of exciting way, so the heart was the way to go..."

"we have the most amazing fans though they LOVE us."


Edited by: willntlover at: 7/16/02 10:27:47 am
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Re: Curious...

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Jul 16, 2002 11:11 am

I really love this story, its gettin more interesting! i'm so happy this Kel woman is helpin them out! can't wait 4 Ch.4!! :)

"In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies" -Vamp Willow(Doppelgangland)

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Alternatives

Postby AmberBensonRockzMyWorld » Tue Jul 16, 2002 12:38 pm

This story rocks, I like it. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter. :) I hope it's soon.

Much Love,

Lisa



"Staring at the cracks in the walls, 'Cos I'm waiting for it all, to come to an end." ~Pink


Must I dream and Always see your face.~ Jeff Buckley "Last goodbye"

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Re: Curious...

Postby Zahir al Daoud » Tue Jul 16, 2002 7:43 pm

Okay, I like imagining the looks on everybody's faces! Write on! I'll read!

"O Let my name be in the Book of Love!
If it be there I care not of that other Book above.
Strike it out! Or write it in anew, but
Let my name be in the Book of Love!"

--Omar Kayam

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Re: Curious...

Postby NewRuthRising » Wed Jul 17, 2002 9:09 am

I live to serve!



Chapter 4

Rating: PG13 for violence

Spoilers: All eps are now fair game.

Disclaimer: I own nothing but that which I create. All else belongs to people who can sue/excommunicate/execute me if I don’t write this.

Disclaimer #2: I am going to mess about with the ideas of religion in this fic, this is not intended to offend anyone, or contradict anyone’s beliefs, but it’s necessary for the story. I apologise in advance for any offence taken.

Summary: More Explanations.

Feedback: Send all constructive comments to rmmik@hotmail.com (please put something like “Re: your fic” in the subject, otherwise I’ll bin it). Send all abuse to someone else.

Authors note: I don’t like Season Six’s ending (obviously), so here’s my way of making things better. Eventually. After much angst. But hopefully you’ll like the W/T bits. The happy ones I mean. Hold on tight!

Authors note 2: the plot twist I’m introducing now may seem hard to believe, but just go with it. It’ll make sense soon(I hope)

Thanks to Ruth (the other one) for her help, as my English sucks. Next Chapter will be much more narratey. (erm…) I promise!







“Ok,” Buffy said, glad to be able to take charge again. “So you’ve been watching us and controlling us for six years. Why?”



Kel took a deep breath, and started to speak. “First of all, I can’t control you. I can only throw situations at you and try to get them to turn out right. Humans have free will, remember? Secondly, to answer your question, I’ll need my brother’s help. Luci!”



Xander looked puzzled. He opened his mouth to speak but was interrupted by Kel shouting again.



“Luc! Get your big butt up here! What?” She said in response to Xander’s puzzled look. “They’re spelt the same, just another letter added on.”



Xander shook his head to clear it. “Ok, how do you get from L-U-K-E to L-U-C-Y?”



“I don’t,” Kel replied, as if she were talking to a very slow child. “I get from L-U-C to L-U-C-I.”



“What?” said an annoyed voice from behind them.



Everyone spun round; coming face-to-face with a tall man, around Kel’s age, with curly red hair cut short. He was wearing tight black pants and no top, giving them an ample view of his hard stomach muscles, cris-crossed with scars, and his well-muscled arms, crossed over his chest. His gaze swept over them all, finally landing on Willow. His expression shifted from impatience to horror.



“No. No, Kel, I’m not getting involved. You know this isn’t allowed.”



“She has permission from your grandfather,” Giles said, his tone harsh.



“But daaaaad…she always gets in trouble. I don’t want her to drag me into it.”



Giles’ expression hardened even more. Buffy looked at the three of them. The same chiselled jawline, the same intense eyes, except Kel’s were deep blue and Luc’s(whoever he was) were emerald green. The rest of them, however, was a mystery. Kel’s hair was a dirty blond, but whenever it caught the light it glittered with a thousand shades of gold, Luc’s was red with streaks of black and gold intertwining throughout.



Most hairdressers would sell their soul to be able to do that, she thought.



“Dad, listen to reason,” the man was speaking again. “She gets herself kicked out of heaven, ruins the life of everyone she meets for a few years, then decides she wants to help? She’ll get me kicked out too.”



“It’s not like you spend much time up there anyway!” Kel said hotly. “Now, you know what will happen if we don’t help-“



“And we know what will happen if we do! You can’t seriously be considering that!”



“I’m considering every alternative. This one is best. It gets us though the next four weeks, and completes the first objective. Please Luc.”



This seemed to give him pause, as though she had never asked for his help before.

After a second he spoke again. “Fine. Do they know everything?”





“No. That’s why I need your help.”



Luc sighed, and turned to his father to speak. Giles, however, got there first. “Luc, I never thought I would say this. You either listen to your sister or you go home and don’t come back. Ever.”



Luc opened his mouth in protest, but again Giles pre-empted him. “I mean it, Lucifer.”



The Scoobies gaped. They were doing a lot of that recently.



“Lucifer?” Willow sounded incredulous. “As in, the devil?”



“Yeah, yeah, but I’m not interested in buying your soul. Damn movie producers. Got their souls alright.”



Giles spoke impatiently. “I think I should explain.”



“Yeah, I think you better had,” said Buffy. “Starting with ‘how come you’re the father of the guy that controls everything I fight every night?’ and moving quickly on to ‘why is he scared of Will?’”



It was true. Lucifer was edging away from her, trying to be inconspicuous, but at Buffy’s comment he flung his arms in the air with an air of exasperation. “I hate movie producers!”



Giles took a deep breath. “Buffy, you are not the only one in this group with a destiny. In fact, we are all vitally important to the continuation of natural order in this reality, and several others. It starts with demons.”



“When doesn’t it?” Dawn muttered.



“God took this world, saw that it was infested with demons, so He cleared it, making way for man. He gave man a guardian, a human that could transform at will into wolf form to fight any evil that might threaten his new creation. However, the last demon to leave this reality corrupted a human, as you know, making the first vampire. These creatures spread, and eventually one attacked the guardian. He made it a corrupt being like himself, twisted his purpose to evil, and gave him violence as a means of reproduction. Thus the first werewolf was created, as well as many more breeds of evil, which were created in this way, which are the demons you fight even today.”



Kel picked up the thread. “But things weren’t supposed to be like that. Every society needs chaos to change, to evolve, but humans provide that on their own. That is why they were made as sinful creatures, and that is why God forgives those who repent. He knows the sin was necessary. The corrupt beings that wandered the earth with no purpose other than to destroy tipped the scale out of balance, so we evened it out. Warriors of the light were made. Witches, like Tara, who served Artemis, Slayers, even werewolves and demons, but they could all be corrupted. Case in point: Willow, Faith, Oz, Angel. Evil has a great lure, but it will always destroy you.”



Lucifer cut in, “Which is why I get a bad rap. I hold the souls of those who are evil, corrupt, and deserve it. But I am not evil. I work for good. In fact, I’m the third highest ranking angel in heaven, second only to my mother and Uncle Jesus. But people, largely thanks to gossip started by demons, seem to think I tempt people into evil. Not true. Our greatest aim is to rid your world of vampires and demons, restore werewolves to good, and balance the scales. When we do that, life will be as it should be for you humans; happy. You people are our army on earth. However, Willow and Tara are the most important of all of you.”



Kel walked over to her brother and stood with him. Lucifer continued speaking,

“Because they are to start the lineage of purebred warriors, and because when they die, they will take over for me and Kel. They are our heirs.”



“Oh, that’s what you were talking about.” Anya said to Kel. “I thought you were just drunk.”



The Scoobies gaped.





Enjoy!

Ruth.







One last call to answer, feeling full of despair.
Don't think I can get through it. Just one last prayer: Season seven.
Michelle Branch

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Re: Curious...

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Jul 17, 2002 10:29 am

Great update!! I really love ur fic, can't wait 4 ur next one! :)

"In my world there are people in chains and we can ride them like ponies" -Vamp Willow (Doppelgangland)

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Re: Curious...

Postby willntlover » Wed Jul 17, 2002 11:12 am

Anya LOL!!! I loved it :) So interesting, and Willow and Tara are going to be angels? Curious.



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