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Re: Soon update! Chapter 9! or 10! or Whatever!

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Nov 29, 2003 7:00 am

I'm prolly the only one to say you're not all that evil :lol .



I would be surprised if they go any further... unless either of them is having a sweaty dream :) . Besides, isn't Willow still injured.... rest and such is said to be good then. Or is kissing Tara a better cure ?? :)



Both of them deserve some happyness thats for sure. Willow is somewhat of a knowledge woman of course, but not nessecarely in the love-area :-) So they can both happilly learn from/with each other.



Maybe Tara can get some self-confidence from Willow, she seems to need it. And what does it mean they see each other even with eyes closed ??



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Chapter 11

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Nov 30, 2003 11:35 am

Everyone: It's Sunday, and as promised an update will be available later today. I'd add it now, but I've been away for the weekend and my house is freezing and I can barely type. So the update will be up this afternoon (Pacific time, mind you) along with all of the feedback I'm posting on the wonderful updated fics that I wasn't here for.



bluewillowwitch: Yup, I'm evil. But you love it. You know you do.



astrangerhere: Thanks for de-lurking to respond to my fic, I really appreciate it. I wasn't so sure of Tara myself at the beginning, but I really wanted to show the change in her. (I think you're probably talking about Nika's "Red Ace" for the other fic... which is obviously very different from this one.)



michellesflute: :devilish I am... but yes, you are used to it by now, are you not?



TaraBaby77: Comin' right up!



sabina: It is now...



Grimmy: Uh... just what it says: when they close their eyes, they can see each other. It's somewhat of an extension of how Willow finds things, and also how they can always find each other. You're also very realistic in your ideas of what's happening... you don't have a pipeline into my notebook by any chance, do you?



Chapter 11: Too damn much responisbility



The entire mood was shattered by a loud bang as the door slammed open. I leapt to my feet, a thousand different curses on my lips, leaving Tara on the bed.



I lunged for the doorway, fully prepared to tear the interloper limb from limb as payment for interrupting what was shaping up to be the best day of my life when I was stopped cold by the point of a sword against my throat.



I found myself looking at the copper hair, perfect features and blank silver eyes of the man who called himself the Second Red. "Jesus," I nearly moaned. "It's you."



"Now, now..." His face held no emotion. "I said you could call me Number Two."



I stared at him.



"That was humor." He sighed. "I'm not very good at it, which is a shame, really. I was hoping to make the situation a little easier."



"Right." I positively glowered at him. "As if anything could possibly help the situation."



He paused for a moment. "That was sarcasm, right?"



I gaped. "Well, duh!"



He smiled sadly and shook his head. "Joke again. I'm sorry, I should stop trying to be funny. I realize that there's no way in the world I could possibly make this any easier, and I realize that you sorely desire to kill me right now, but... I do understand the situation. While we are above such base feelings as lust, we certainly understand the impact they have on the majority of living beings."



I stared right into his eyes and gave him my best scowl. "Cut the crap, Number Two, and tell me why you're here. And put that damn sword away."



The sword disappeared, and I could breathe freely again. "I'm here because we need your help, Willow Rosenberg."



"Since when does the high and mighty Brotherhood of Steel need the help of a simple searcher and spellcaster?"



"You're more than just a searcher and spellcaster," said Number Two and Tara at the same time.



Number Two turned to face her, trying to look apologetic. "I'm really sorry that I had to do this, Miss. Do try to forgive me, but my business with the Rosenberg is urgent."



Tara gave him an angry but amused smirk. "So was mine."



Number Two looked uncomfortable. "Yes, I realize that, but..."



Tara ignored him. "Your interruption has left me high and, well... I hardly think dry is the word."



He went from looking uncomfortable to pained quickly. "I'm really very sorry," he tried again. "I know I must come across as an incredibly oily little bastard, but I'm really being honest with you. I wouldn't have interrupted if lives weren't at stake."



I forced myself to be alert. "Lives are on the line? Sorry, but my friend Buffy does the hero business. Along with her new sidekick Faith. I'm just a menace to society."



"There is nothing that the Slayers can accomplish that the Brotherhood cannot," said Number Two icily. "Mark my words, Willow Rosenberg. The Brotherhood has no desire to be in your debt, but we are soliciting your help because you are the only one who can help us."



I sighed. "Why does life have to be so damn unfair? I was just going to zip in here, find a runaway, and leave, but no! Instead, I find that everything's changed, I've fallen in love and now I have to be a hero for the Brotherhood? All in the space of two days? This isn't right!"



Number Two said nothing.



"Oh, all right. How many lives are on the line?"



Number Two almost smiled. "It's nothing, really. Just the entire world and everything in it."



If I'd been the tiniest bit low on willpower, I'd have screamed. Instead, I just opened my mouth and sounded stupid again. "I hope you realize how unhappy this makes me. But all right. Now get out of that damn doorway, sit down like a normal person and give me the details."



He glided through the door and sat on the couch, so perfectly poised and elegant I wanted to hit him. "We believe that the destruction of the Madness Maze is having... unpleasant repercussions on the rest of the Hellmouth, which will soon spread to the rest of the world."



I sat on the bed next to Tara and folded my arms. "Explain. In English."



"The forces at work were tied to the Maze through some aspect of its construction. We have no idea who built it, or how they did it, or even what their motives were, beyond containing the strange energies." This was bad. The Brotherhood typically knew at least something about everything.



"We believe that with the Maze gone, the forces will run rampant, altering everything in their path until eventually they wipe out all existing life and recreate the world in their own image."



Tara put an arm around me and spoke up. "And how do you know that, if you don't know anything about this?"



Number Two sighed. "I was hoping you wouldn't ask that. It's more a wild guess than anything else, but is it really that unlikely?"



I held Tara against myself. "Not on the Hellmouth... not really. And the architects of this thing are a complete unknown as well, right?"



"Of course."



I stood up and walked over to him. "This is great. Just great. So we're all screwed unless I do something. Now I ask you, Number Two. What the hell am I supposed to do?"



"Willow Rosenberg can find anything. Find a solution."

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Cray

Edited by: Tempest Duer at: 11/30/03 8:01 pm
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Re: Chapter 11

Postby RedIshtar » Sun Nov 30, 2003 10:58 pm

Neat!! :applause

Ooohh, I think Willow will fry Number Two on the spot if she grows anymore frustated, heh. :lol

This is turning out to be a very interesting fic indeed, can't wait to see the great Red in action!! :bounce



=> Kayleen <=



RedIshtar
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby Tempest Duer » Mon Dec 01, 2003 5:59 pm

RedIshtar: Oh, yes. Number Two is counting his days... and soon the legendary Willow Rosenberg will remind the Hellmouth exactly why they're all so afraid of her.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:12 pm

WOW!!! That was awesome!!! I mean :shock . And to Willow, WAHOO, you can do it!!! heehee. Anyhoo, great update. I guess that means I can't bug you for a while for an update..... NOT!!! heehee. Keep em comin'.... Once again, great job. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby astrangerhere » Mon Dec 01, 2003 6:44 pm

I see how it is, i make a great comment about the conflicting Taras and then i dont get even a hint of it in this chapter... ah well, patience is of a virtue i suppose. Thanks for the update and look forward to seeing you flesh it all out.



a.s.h.

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Re: Chapter 11

Postby Marilda » Mon Dec 01, 2003 9:33 pm

:lol :applause

Quote:
Tara ignored him. "Your interruption has left me high and, well... I hardly think dry is the word."




That was hysterical. This is good. Write more.

:p

Marilda
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby shuyaku » Tue Dec 02, 2003 11:37 am

Oh, yeah - what Marilda said! :bounce



-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Dec 02, 2003 12:53 pm

:bigwave TD :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow OMG! I would have beat him anyway for principal if I were in :willow and :tara 's shoes. :wink Now they have to go off and find a way to save the world. She's right, this isn't really fair. :lol You are :devilish evil and your right, I love a good cliffhanger, but do you have to be so good at them? :eyebrow Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray







Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Chapter 11

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:44 pm

TaraBaby77: Go ahead and keep bugging me if it makes you feel better. I should have one up by the end of the week.



astrangerhere: Yes, it was a great comment, but I really needed this chapter to be more about Willow and Number Two than Willow and Tara. Don't worry, there will be plenty of Tara in the next few chapters... and no Number Two.



Marilda: I'm glad you liked. I rather think it's one of my better "soundbites."



shuyaku: What I said to Marilda.



bluewillowwitch: Well, yes, that's one very good principle that most people would keep in mind, but a dead Brother is a very big deal, and if Willow kills him right away, she'll have the Brotherhood on her ass.



Thanks for your feedback, everyone! Update by the end of the week!

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby TaraBaby77 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 9:47 pm

Tempest Duer -



Okay, you asked for it!!! BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG, BUG...heehee... Can't wait to read more, once again, great stuff... =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 11

Postby astrangerhere » Wed Dec 03, 2003 6:38 am

TD-



Come now, i didnt delurk just to harass you for not talking about Tara much. It was more an impatient gesture, but only inasmuch as you have me intrigued and I want to see where it came from and where its going. Perhaps I should also mention here that i am only slightly less intrigued by the whole Brotherhood and whatever Willow did to make the Hellmouth fear her thing. I have a few guesses, but I will keep them to myself for now.

I join Tarababy77 in poking you for an update of this fascinating fic.



a.s.h

astrangerhere
 


update YAY!

Postby michellesflute » Wed Dec 03, 2003 9:21 am

Your story gets more and more interesting with every update. :applause :applause :applause

It's getting very mysterious with this maze, the dark forces which were released and all.

Wonder what intensions the brotherhood and Number Two really have. Somehow I don't really think that they just want to save the world. :hmm

There has to be something about them.



And I loved the little conversation between Tara and number Two! :lol



More Tara in the next update? I hope that means snuggles, lots of them! :D

michellesflute
 


Re: update YAY!

Postby willowsgirl » Wed Dec 03, 2003 4:39 pm

Hey tempest duer!

Just wanted to let you know Im really likeing you fic. At first I was like hmm Ive never read anything like this before, but then suddenly I realised I loved it! So sorry I havent left feedback before now.

Anyways, I was just wondering if you mind me using a line from your fic as my sig? cos i kinda already have! its my fave line :)

if its not ok, just let me know and ill be more than willing to change it to something else, k?

thanks alot, update soon



stacey xx

Tara ignored him. "Your interruption has left me high and, well... I hardly think dry is the word." Returning home by tempest duer

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Re: update YAY!

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Dec 03, 2003 6:52 pm

We still don't know based on WHAT the Brotherhood thinks the destruction of the maze will cause problem. Nr 2 himself admits it's mostly a guess and then justifies that with being on the hellmouth.



By that logic Willow travelling back to the hellmouth might cause problems on its own... it just doesn't add up. Something must have triggered that brotherhood to ask for help, esp. since I don't believe they're much in the asking business.



Why is Willow afraid of that sword anyway ? If she just keeps distance a sword should not pose a problem to her. Magic has a longer range than a sword, no matter how skillfully used :) . I guess she was just opening the door being mayorly pissed of :-)



Unless something really goes wrong in/around the hellmouth with visible effects, I don't believe the brotherhood too much. They likely have a reason to ask Willow, sure... but I'm not sure they've told her that reason yet.



Ah, and there was that line I remember reading in a sig... was wondering why I didn't remember that line :-) Must read updates faster...



Grimmy :wave

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: update YAY!

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Dec 03, 2003 8:12 pm

TaraBaby77: I didn't say it would do anything to me, though. Update's looking like Thursday though, instead of Friday or Saturday, due to a bit of inspiration on my part... that hit me... in Biology class.



astrangerhere: I suspected as much. Well you'll just have to wait until tomorrow.



michellesflute: First and foremost, the Brotherhood serve themselves. You can rest assured that this isn't just a humanitarian act. They probably know more than Number Two is letting on, and might not even have told him all of the details. They're a very secretive group.



willowsgirl: Of course I don't mind, I'm flattered that you saw fit to use it.



Grimmy: Well, at the time the tip of the sword was still against her throat- Number Two hadn't moved it, and a sword against your throat is a very unsettling thing.



And of course the Brotherhood hasn't explained its motives to Willow. Who do you think they are, humanitarians? There will be more on them... and you will see more.

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Chapter 12

Postby Tempest Duer » Thu Dec 04, 2003 5:58 pm

Hi all, sorry this chapter is so short but that's just where it happened to end.



Chapter 12- Teaser



I grabbed Number Two by the lapels of his perfectly tailored jacket and yanked him to his feet. "You have got to be joking."



He looked back at me completely unruffled. Of course, had his eyes been normal they might have told a different story, but somehow I doubted that. "I assure you, Willow Rosenberg, that I have given up on my admittedly mediocre attempts at humor. I have no desire to deceive you."



"You don't seem to have any issues with ruining my life."



Suddenly his entire demeanor changed, and he seemed much older, and very tired. "Please, Red. I'm only following orders."



Stunned, I released his coat, and he was back to his old polished self again, not even falling on to the couch. "I apologize for my lapse in professionalism."



I considered for a moment. "That's about the most unimportant thing in the world right now. But just for the record, you were a lot more relaxed when I met you on the bus."



"Oh, then," said Number Two. "I was off duty."



Tara walked over and wrapped her arms around me. "Willow honey, if you have to save the world, then save the world. After all, not facing up to responsibility isn't something you want to demonstrate to the kids, now is it?"



"How is this my responsibility?"



"You did destroy the Madness Maze," Number Two pointed out.



"You stay out of this!" I snapped. "This is not my responsibility and--kids?"



She laughed. "Don't you want to live in a lovely little house with a white picket fence and two point five children?"



"Don't ask for two point five children on the Hellmouth, Tara, or you just might get them, and I don't think the point five would be very happy about it. But if it's what you want..."



"I just want you to be happy, Willow."



"I want you to be happy too." I kissed her tenderly.



"Well, erm, yes," cut in Number Two, "I'll be leaving now, but let me remind you that if you do nothing about the impending crisis, you won't have a future in which to raise any children, whole or not." With that, he slipped out the door.



Tara and I sat on the couch, and I turned to look at her again. "Isn't it a little early in our relationship to start talking about having kids?"



She laughed again, a beautiful, musical sound. "Isn't this an eternal love that'll last for... well... eternity?"



I shrugged. "I guess."



"You guess? Oh, well, it's hard to get one of the strong, silent type to commit. But why not talk about settling down?"



I kissed her on the forehead. "I still have to save the world. Wanna help?"



"Somebody's going to have to remind you to eat and sleep."



"But that's a waste of time! How am I supposed to sleep when I'm supposed to be working?"



Tara pulled me back so that I was lying against her and fiddled with my hair. "I'll just have to soothe you then, won't I? You won't be fit for foiling evil schemes when you're running on empty."



"How do you recommend I recharge, then?"



"Well, I could feed you, make sure you get plenty of rest, massage your feet, do your laundry, fetch and carry everything and generally spoil you rotten." She shrugged. "Or we could have sex."



I blinked exactly three times before responding. "Huh?" Oh, great, Rosenberg, really articulate. How long has it been since you got any? ...don't answer that question.



"I said, I could spoil you rotten or we could have sex." She grinned. "Go ahead and think about it."



"Would the spoiling rotten involve sex? Because I really think I should know the details of all of my options before I make a decision."



"You are so cute."



I blushed. "We've been through this before, and I'm not!"



"One, we stopped arguing before I agreed, and two, you changed your mind about other things." She winked.



"This is different!"



"How?"



"It just is, that's all!"



"We'll argue later then, love. Are you going to make up your mind?"



I gave her a saucy grin. "I already have."





I'm evil! I'm bad! And you love me for it! :devil :devil :devil





Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby shuyaku » Thu Dec 04, 2003 6:13 pm

Quote:
I'm evil! I'm bad! And you love me for it!
G@d dammit it's true :lol



I am really liking your saucy Tara. So Willow saves the world, then they have kids. Sounds like a great plan :glasses





:bounce shuyaku



Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby michellesflute » Fri Dec 05, 2003 4:36 am

You're spoiling us with updates, I like that ... a lot :applause :applause :applause



The little 'teaser' was great and I really hope that Willow and Tara won't be interrupted this time :pray

But then again, you just called yourself evil :devil so I really credit you with teasing us a little more.



I loved this line

Quote:
She laughed. "Don't you want to live in a lovely little house with a white picket fence and two point five children?"


:lol

Great!!!



So please go on with the spoiling and update soon!! :bow

Wie soll ich meine Seele halten, dass sie nicht an Deine rührt... - Rilke

How can I keep my soul in me, so that it doesn't touch your soul...

michellesflute
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Dec 05, 2003 5:55 am

Tara seems to be recovering well from her stay in the maze, which is a GOOD thing. I still don't understand why this brotherhood is so sure there won't be a future unless Willow does something... Speaking of vague, how do they expect Willow to solve a problem they don't even define ???



Ah well, at least Tara has several comforting options for Willow..heh. This Tara ain't nearly as shy as I would have imagined, wonder where that's coming from.



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby TaraBaby77 » Fri Dec 05, 2003 6:06 am

Once again, what a great update. Teaser??? Most definitely, meanie, heehee. I just like it when Tara teases Willow about being cute.... but she is like, "I can't be, GRR" heehee. anyway, great stuff.... keep it comin', please??? =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby sabina » Fri Dec 05, 2003 7:59 am

Hi :wave



So many updates... Yay... yay :bounce :applause



Tara speech about how she could spoil Willow rotten or they could have sex cracked me up :rofl

Poor Willow... tough choice... :devil :lol



I'll be anxiously waiting for the next update :bounce




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby Tempest Duer » Fri Dec 05, 2003 5:06 pm

shuyaku: I thought so too. Glad you approve.



michellesflute: Oh, don't you all hope they won't be interrupted yet... :devilish



Grimmy: As usual, you're being incredibly analytical, which gives me a lot to think about when it comes to writing this. Luckily though, this time I know exactly what they're up to. Tara isn't shy for now, because she's alone with Willow. When they get back out into the world, I'm not sure how her reaction will be. We'll just have to wait and see, I guess.



TaraBaby77: Ah, yes, I'm a meanie, but you love me anyway don't you?



sabina: It's a very tough choice to make, but we know she'll make the right one, don't we?

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sun Dec 07, 2003 9:07 am

:bigwave TD :flower ,

You are so :devilish ! That was just mean to leave it there! :devilish I love the fic! :clap :bow 2.5 kids huh? :hmm That isn't enough. You have to have at least 4. :grin Sorry that damn Irish/Sicilan blood kicking up in me again. :grin :willow and :tara are so cute. :heart If that was me I would pick both options. :applause Of course I'm with :willow here, spoiling rotten should involve sex! :lol I think :tara will agree to that stipulation. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Chapter 12

Postby Tempest Duer » Tue Dec 09, 2003 10:11 pm

bluewillowwitch: You're Irish and Sicilian? Spicy! But you know Willow and Tara, they won't be able to stop at 2.5 either. And you want an update? With naughtiness? Here ya go.



Chapter 13: Mood Swings



Naughtiness ahead!



Tara just kissed me. "All right, I'll keep that in mind."



"What?" I said weakly. "But..."



"You haven't run yourself ragged yet, love."



I pouted. "Vixen. That isn't fair and you know it."



She hugged me. "I know, I know, I'm a vixen. But Willow, this really isn't the time or the place."



I sighed and hugged back. "I know... and I understand. At least, my head understands, but there are certain parts of my body that don't. And that are very upset with me for saying that I do understand. I love you, Tara, and I don't want to push you into anything, but I hope you'll be ready soon, because I don't want to wait too much longer, but I will if you want me to, and I'm babbling now so I'll shut up."



"You don't have to shut up, Willow." She buried her face in my hair. "I know all this must be driving you crazy, but I've got these crazy mood swings... I'm sorry."



I just held her tightly. There was little else I could do but hold her and hope, until finally I thought of an innocuous question. "Do you know what time it is?"



"No, but it's probably about lunchtime. Buffy and Faith barged in during a late breakfast, and that took a while before they left again."



"Wait a second, what am I thinking?" I released Tara and flopped on to my back. "What was I saying? What's the point of even trying to measure days in the Hellmouth? It's always..."



"...three in the morning." She lay back beside me.



I found myself smiling again. Maybe it wasn't just Tara who was having mood swings, or maybe the Hellmouthy atmosphere was just getting to us.



"I think I'm having mood swings too," I said as the smile settled and began to feel normal. "A minute ago I was feeling all bludgeoning-ripping-murderous, but now I'm all smiley. It's kind of weird, don't you think?"



Tara kissed me on the cheek. "Try and get some more sleep, Willow. We'll talk later, then we can leave."



I must have unconsciously obeyed, because the next thing I wwas aware of was waking up to a sense of soething... missing, but I couldn't put my finger on it. My vital organs and limbs were intact, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something vitally important was gone.



Tara walked over (she hadn't been in bed) and smoothed my hair. "Ready to save the world, Willow? I can't wait to see the famous Red Rosenberg in action."



"Tara, something's missing."



She looked at me, nonplussed. "What do you mean?"



"I feel naked."



"Willow, you are naked."



I looked down. She was right. "More naked that I feel when I'm just naked, like I'm missing a kidney or something except I'm not, and even if I were, kidneys don't contribute to the various states of dress or undress that I may or may not be in." I reached out toward the table for the familiar feel of "My coat! My coat and all of its coaty goodness! It's gone!"



"Oh, the coat!" Tara slapped her forehead. "I called a drucleaner to take care of the blood. It'll be done soon, and I promise plenty of coaty goodness." She giggled at the sound of the words.



"You're laughing at me." I gave her the cutest pout I could manage. "You're laughing at me and I'm naked."



"I'm only able to laugh because you're still covered." She kept giggling. "If you were, say, standing in front of me, I don't think I'd have any spare energy to laugh with."



"Good idea." I flung aside the blankets and climbed out of the bed to stand in front of her. "This better?"



"Gah..." Tara's eyes bugged out as they traveled up and down my frame. "Uh..."



"How sweet! The sight of my nakedness has reduced your vocabulary to mindless syllables!"



Tara's eyes gradually stopped roaming and stayed, riveted, focused on my breasts. Which, of course, amused me just as much.



I smiled innocently and began to stroke my left nipple with my fingertips. "I've got to say, this is pretty unexpected. I'm standing, naked as ban be, in front of a beautiful woman, and she's completely incoherent." I pinched my nipple, and gasped as the pleasurably painful sensation shot through me.



I let my voice drop to a purr. "I'd forgotten how good this could fee. It's been too long since I last had some time to... enjoy myself." I brought my other hand up to work my right nipple. "I'm so hot, Tara. I'm so wet, just for you. Do you know how badly I want you?" A thin line of drool was trickling down Tara's chin, and her denim-clad hips were swaying slightly. "I think you do."



Tara reached out slowly and unsurely to touch me. I gripped her hand in mine and guided it between my legs.



Once it was there, her hand knew what it was doing. Two of her fingers slipped easily between my dripping labia and plunged inside me. I gasped at the feel of her fingers. They were so soft, and so strong, and so delicate. The sensation was delicious and completely unlike any other sexual experience I'd ever had. I bucked my hips, taking those magical fingers as deeply inside me as they'd go.



Her mought sought mind and found it almost instantly. I thrust my tongue into her mough, desparately seeking the touch of her tongue, and it was there. I feld like I could melt into Tara, just pour myself into her mouth and become a part of her forever.



Her thumb grazed my clit and I moaned deeply into her mouth. The heat and the friction were almost unbearable. She rubbed me harder and faster, and only her mouth against mine prevented me from crying out so loudly the entire patronage of the Bronze could hear me.



I came suddenly and wildly, the sensations flooding me. Pleasure filled my body and carried me almost beyond consciousness. I collapsed into Tara's arms as my knees went weak and moaned helplessly as the waves of the aftermath broke.



Tara smiled down at me. "You like that?" Her voice was deeper than usual, huskier.



"I loved it," I whispered, kissing her.



I moaned again, softly this time, as her finger slid out of me, and louder when she slipped her dripping finger into her mouth.



"Mmm, Willow, you taste so good." She gave me a very sultry look. "So sweet and musky and... Willowy. Delicious." She licked her fingers clean as I watched. "Want to taste?" Her mouth captured mine and her tongue slid between my lips, filling my mouth with the musky taste of my own arousal. I ground my hips against hers and slid my hands under the waistband of her jeans.



I was eager to reciprocate, and would have wholeheartedly, but Tara stopped me with a gentle touch on my arms. "Not yet." There was a flicker of something I couldn't identify in her eyes.



It was probably the post-orgasmic bliss overruling my better judgement, but I didn't ask her what that flicker meant. Instead, I wrapped my arms around her and kissed her again, tenderly and lingeringly.



"I love you, Tara."



"I love you too, Willow."

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter 12

Postby michellesflute » Wed Dec 10, 2003 9:17 am

That was weird, why the hell was Willow naked when she woke up? I hope I didn't miss something important. :hmm

Not that I'm complaining or something. If you ask me they both could have been naked, hehe.

I'm just wondering. :eyebrow

But well, it's the hellmouth right, weird things happen in the hellmouth. So why not just waking up naked after laying down dressed.



Quote:
A thin line of drool was trickling down Tara's chin


:lol funny image. It made me :drool myself, hehe!



Great update!! :applause :applause :applause

Wie soll ich meine Seele halten, dass sie nicht an Deine rührt... - Rilke

How can I keep my soul in me, so that it doesn't touch your soul...

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Brava

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Wed Dec 10, 2003 10:46 am

Hey, TD~~ I just found this fic this morning and read it all in one go. What a delight! From the not-even-remotely-coincidental name of the Maclay business (Macrohard!) to Tara being left high and distinctly un-dry, you have a wonderfully playful way with words. It's really a treat to read. I also like the way your Willow can poke fun at herself--I especially liked her commentary about her coat billowing in "what [she was] sure was an incredibly dramatic manner." I just love that kind of tongue-in-cheek stuff.



And speaking of tongues in various oral recesses--great steamy goodness! And of course, I'm intrigued about what might be holding Tara back from letting Willow touch/make love to her. Hmm...



So kudos, TD!

Mary

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Re: Brava

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Dec 10, 2003 11:49 am

heh, well thats one effective way to shut Tara up :) .



Still... wondering how she got Willow all with the nakedness without Willow noticing. That's strange, for starters Willow still has some scars which don't like touch and clothing-removal probably and secondly I would expect Willow to be more alert. Otherwise how DID she ever survive the hellmouth ??



Guess we'll have to wait and see.... patience and such :P



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Brava

Postby bluewillowwitch » Wed Dec 10, 2003 3:52 pm

:bigwave TD :flower ,

Love the fic! :clap :bow :glasses I'm not in bliss like :willow , what was the flicker she saw? :glasses :hmm Wonder what :tara is hiding? You are :devilish with these cliffhangers. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here without you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, it's only you and me."--3 Doors Down--Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Brava

Postby sabina » Wed Dec 10, 2003 5:55 pm

Hey there :wave



Great update :applause



And a hot one too :thud



Although I too wonder how did Willow got naked in the first place :hmm And why is Tara holdin back?



Oh well, I suppose I'll have to wait to know :sigh




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

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