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Re: Part 3 Chapter 1

Postby deixs » Mon Jan 06, 2003 5:48 am

:thud

I feel so sorry for Tara. Hearing Willow being called mommy muxt be a shock....



Stef :p

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Re: Part 3 Chapter 1

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Jan 06, 2003 2:01 pm



Hardly... she might as well run to Tina (as far as Tara can see). Granted, it should be fun when she actually reaches Willow... hugging her leg since there so many strangers around and such :)



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Part 3 Chapter 2

Postby Leila DeRange » Sat Jan 18, 2003 8:45 pm

Uh Hi everyone!! I'm really really sorry that I haven't update in a while but my computure crashed and I had to get it fixed. Then I had to rewrite the update cause I didn't get to save it before everything went bonkers. I also forgot my password for my email so everything misspelled or doesn't make sense is all my fault.



Chapter 2



"Willow?" "Dawnie?" "Red?" "Faith?" "Willow?" "Tina? Wait, never mind." Tina just rolled her eyes.



"What the hell are you doing here." Dawn asked but before Willow could answer Faith asked another question.



"How do you know Tina?" "How do you know Tina?" Willow shot back before Dawn, Faith, and Willow all talked at the same time.



Tara stood quiet watching Adina who was hiding behind Tina's legs. She has Willow's eyes, Tara thought as she continued to stare.



"Okay everyone shut up!" Tina yelled and everything went silent, "Thank you now lets be adults about whatever this is and discuss it in a non-screaming way?"



"If this is gonna be an adult discussion I guess Faith can't attend." Willow muttered.



"Why you....." Tina just shook her head and blocked out whatever Faith was about to say.



Tina turned to Katie who nodded in understanding before rounding up the guest. Everyone grabbed some things they carelessly tossed in the kitchen and walked outside. Tina looked down at Adina who was looking at Tara with major intrest.



Tina looked at Tara who was also studing Adina. Things just had to get complicated now out off all the years, Tina thought to herself before she walked torwards Tara with Adina still hiding behind her legs. Willow, Faith, and Dawn still continued to argue but Tina didn't know what it was about because the words seemed to blend together in a totally different language.



"So your Tara, I heard so much about you." Tina commented.



"How much exactly did you hear?" Tara asked.



"Everything good I promise." Tina held out her hand, "My name is Tina Tran by the way."



"Tara MaClay." Tara replied as she shook her hand.



They both felt a small shock and smiled at each other knowingly. Adina looked at Tina then back at Tara. Uh oh this is a bad combi uh....together thingy, Adina thought.



"This might take awhile so do you want to talk?" Tina asked.



Tara looked at Faith, Willow, and Dawn, "Sure." Tara answered, she might as well get the inside scoop about how Willow has been doing while she's at it.



*****



"You skanky...." Willow's sentence was unfinished when she heard two familier laughs in the next room.



Faith looked around and noticed that everyone had left, including Dawn, while they argued for the past......"Holy shit it's been three hours!"



The laugh was heard again and both Willow and Faith looked at each other, "Truce?" Willow asked unsure.



"For now." Faith replied before walking to the next room watching Tina roll on the floor in laughter while Tara banged her head on the wall trying to stiffle her giggles.



"What the frilly heck is so funny?" Willow piped up confused.



Tina and Tara looked at them before bursting into laughter once more. Willow and Faith looked at each other with a lost look.



"Ba...llo...on sto...ry." Tara managed to get out before cracking up.



Faith's eyes widen before she looked down on the floor with her face blushing.



"If that made Faith blush I don't know if I want to know." Willow commented backing away.



"Willow do you think you can do the little dance singing "I Like Big Butts" for me? Except, I don't want to see you naked." Tina requested with a huge grin.



"Aahh!" Willow squeaked.



"I don't think she can do the butt twirl with an audience." Tara muttered sheepishly.



"I have corrupted her with my naughty ways." Faith exclaimed beaming with pride.



"You can corrupt anyone by just being there." Tina added.



"I can't believe this is the same girl who wanted to blow a *balloon*." Tara added.



"Oh my god I was nine years old!" Faith whined.



"I'm pretty sure they didn't have a balloon that size and wet." Tina explained while Faith shivered at the memory as they walked outside.



Tara and Willow stared at everything but each other in uncomfortable silence. Willow shifted her feet from one side to another unsure what to say.



"Hi." Tara said quietly.



"Hi." Willow replied.



"So how have you been?" Tara asked as she nervously played with her blonde hair.



"Fine." Willow replied before it went silent.



*****



Tina watched as Faith sat with everyone else on the beach turning to the beach house every five seconds, "Faith, chill out before I smack you." Tina warned.



"But Tara and Willow." Faith complained.



"Tara and Willow have to talk this out, don't worry." Tina exclaimed.



"How would you know? You've known Tara for what a few hours?" Faith asked.



"Just because she isn't a bad ass bitch like you doesn't mean she's weak." Tina replied.



"Did you have to tell her about the ballon story?" Faith asked in a small tone.



"What balloon story?" Dawn asked as she sat near them with a soda in her hand.



"Did I hear someone mention the balloon story?" Chrissy asked with a grin.



"This is not happening." Faith groaned as Tina smirked.



"It happened like this. Me, Faith, and Tina were at her house playing around when she went to the basement. We found this used condom on the floor and Faith asked if she could blow it up. It so was so funny except the part when me and Tina realised that Marissa had been getting some action earlier." Chrissy explained as Faith buried her head in her hand.



Dawn spitted the soda in her mouth and began to cough, "Oh jeez." Dawn kept muttering over and over.



Adina watched from where she was playing with her older cousin Huy and her uncle Dien. Dien looked down when she tugged on his pants.



"Yeah?" Dien asked as he knelt down.



"What's a condom?" Adi asked curious.



Dien looked wide eye as a blush crept up to his cheeks, "Uh...uh...uh" Dien was lost for words and he really wanted to not answer that question, "Honey, help please!" Dien called out to his wife.



*****



Tina and Chrissy kept telling Dawn a few more funny stories about Faith while Faith herself waited to ask Tina a question that was stuck in her mind. Tina was in a middle of a story where Faith flashed the school football team who was out on the field practicing when Dien came over and placed Adina on her lap.



"Adi got a question for you." Dien informed before running away with his face red.



"Hey, sweetie what did you want to ask?" Tina questioned looking down at the little girl.



"Nothing, I'm just hungry." Adina replied for some reason unintrested in knowing what the word condom ment.



"Hey, Kate!! Is there any food?" Tina called out to where Katie, Cassie, and Amanda were with their dates.



"We have a few ham and cheese sandwich, chips, eggrolls, and a few hotdogs Cassie cooked," Katie replied taking inventory, "and for some reason a whole lot of beers!"



"Come on Adi lets get some food before everyone finishes it." Tina commented and got up with Adina safely tucked in her arms.



Faith watched as Tina carried Adina where all the food where with a frown. Adina looked so much like Tina and like Willow she wasn't sure who was Adi's mother. She wasn't sure who she wanted to be Adina's mother cause if Willow was the mother Tara would be crushed and Faith became protective about her over the years. If Tina was Adina's mother then well she herself would be crushed.



*****



Tara watched as Willow stood up and ran to the nearest room slamming it shut. They had talked about little things when Willow finally noticed that Buffy, Xander, and Anya weren't here. Tara had to break the news to her and it went downhill. Tara got up and slowly walked to where Willow ran too. She sighed when she heard faint sobs. Tara knocked lightly.



"Go away!" Willow replied weakly.



Tara ignored Willow and opened the door. Willow looked up at Tara as tears continued to shed. Tara crouched down and wrapped her arms around Willow rocking her as she cried with Willow. Right now nothing mattered except giving each other comfort.



*****



Adina frowned as she looked up at the beach house, "Why is mommy sad?" Adi asked Tina in a small tone.



"I don't know but I'm sure Tara will help her." Tina replied and kissed Adina's forehead lightly.



"I guess she's okay." Adina muttered to herself as she tried to break the connection she had with her mommy.

*****

You know I have this idea in my head that keeps bugging me and I don't know if I should write it. It goes like this. During season 5 when Willow used that teleportation spell on Glory there was a unknown side effect. Five portals opened all over town and well Bre from Milestone, Tally from A New Begining, Tori from Never A Night Like This, Jordan from Next Generation, and JFK from season 7 go through it. Big confusion happens and I was wondering if it I should write it. If I do am I surpose to get permission from the writers to use their characters?



=LeiLa=





ANYA: Oh, and you know what else is unAmerican? French people.

WILLOW: You don't say.

Leila DeRange
 


Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sat Jan 18, 2003 10:56 pm

LDR:



It started out soooo good!

Quote:
"Willow?" "Dawnie?" "Red?" "Faith?" "Willow?" "Tina? Wait, never mind." Tina just rolled her eyes."
And just got better:clap funnier:laugh sadder:cry



I'm sure that the Willow/Tara reunion will take more time than awkward chit-chat and sorrowful revelations...I trust you won't make it TOOOOOO heart-breaking.



As for channeling all those characters into a fic.

Hope I wouldn't get too lost. And the JFK thing seems...erm...dicey. S.7 is fraught with tangly unpleasantness IMO.



Sure like this one...Suse (CLW)



Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Jan 19, 2003 12:30 am

I just found this story, and I hate I missed it before. I guess I am just glad W/T reunited in this last update because I didn't know if I could take much more sadness. The end of season six and season seven are too much for me. I can't imagine W/T being apart for five years.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby Grimlock72 » Sun Jan 19, 2003 9:54 am

Ah yes... I had almost forgotten that Willow didn't know the other scoobies had died :( Poor girl, she'll likely blame herself for that. Now Willow knows part of Tara's story... the other way is going to be just as difficult I'll bet. Willow telling Tara what happened when she left, how she got Adina... not going to be easy...



Seems there are SOME ways to get Faith embarresed or flushed, big surprise there :)



As for your other story idea; If you want to post it on pens I strongly recommend avoiding the JFK charachter as it would severely limit your options (people would focus on her as opposed to your story). It would be nice to see charachters from other fics but I'm not sure if the writers of those stories want someone else to write 'their' charachters (even in another story). So yes, you should ask them first. (good luck getting hold of Lisa :) )



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 1/19/03 7:56:37 am
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Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby xita » Sun Jan 19, 2003 2:45 pm

Ahh interesting, finally the big meeting. big drama, I am surprised Willow decided to spend hours fighting with faith isntead of dealing with her reunion with Tara, seems odd. I liked the way adina and tara regarded each other and that adina didn't seem to take an immediate dislike to Tara.



The fic thing, check your email for tips on that. Generally I think it's imperative to ask the authors and a no no on the season 7 stuff.

If I had to live my life again, I'd make the same mistakes, only sooner.

Tallulah Bankhead

Edited by: xita  at: 7/6/03 3:28 pm
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Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby WannaBlessedBe » Sun Jul 06, 2003 8:45 am

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! :clap



this is a really good fic, can't wait to find out what happens! it's getting good.......keep them coming!



Krystle

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Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby xita » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:12 am

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Edited by: maudmac  at: 12/28/03 1:58 am
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Re: First Fic- Heart of My Soul

Postby amazonaa » Thu Jul 15, 2004 1:28 pm

Oh my god! I love this story.





great job.







brittney





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Kiss this axe, bitch!---Tara "Bargianing part 2"


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