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Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby WillowFever » Thu Dec 18, 2003 10:04 pm

Hello everyone!!!



Well...I've decided to post some poems and possibly some ff that I am working on. Just so you know...I haven't seen any of W/T episodes in season 4 or 5...What I have learned about these gals is mostly what I've read from other stories....so please be gentle....but please keep me on track...If something sounds completely out of character...don't be afraid to tell me.....I WANT to know...okay....so here is my first creative effort for the board....A musing of sorts...I hope you enjoy....









Her Bath

by

WillowFever





I hear the last of the water drain from her bath. What I would give to be those soft bubbles that cling to her skin, delighting her in the most sensual way. Soon…



I wait for her now. Any moment she will walk through that door and take her place beside me in this bed. How did I get so lucky?



The sight of her takes my breath. It always does, but tonight she is exceptional. Her long hair so wet and shiny. She smiles that special smile reserved for me.



It would be so easy for her to walk to her side of the bed, but she delights in crawling across my trembling body. She is so soft. I am jealous of the silk gown covering her body. That should be me.



She lingers for only a heartbeat…she knows I need her; her touch, her love, her taste. Everything she is makes me who I am. But I wait for her. She is in control of me. My heart, my attention, my submission…it is all hers and she knows it.



With one word I discover that her want for me is raging inside her. The way she says my name…I can feel it. Everything she wants…everything she desires but is to shy to ask for…is revealed in my name…



“Tara…”



I gladly give her anything she needs from me. I know this will not be fast. This will be a slow seduction. I see it in her eyes…We will surely greet the moon and then bid farewell to night before our passion is spent. But this is what I live for. She is my strength…my love…my soul…my enchantress. My Willow.

Edited by: maudmac  at: 4/18/04 5:51 am
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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby allykat » Thu Dec 18, 2003 11:23 pm

That was beautiful..:heart

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby WillowFever » Thu Dec 18, 2003 11:27 pm

Thanks....I'm so nervous...my baby is out there now...lol....glad you enjoyed!!!!



Thanks for letting me know....



:banana

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby TaraBaby77 » Fri Dec 19, 2003 12:23 am

Hey!!! That was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. REALLY!!! Do share more, if you have any. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri Dec 19, 2003 2:53 am

Well! This is simply delightful, all with the sensual, sexy, love-filled goodness we like with our girls. This is definitely a great start. Try more writings of varying sizes and see how that works for you. And have fun, of course!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby WillowFever » Fri Dec 19, 2003 4:50 am

Thanks for the good vibes....makes me all giddy inside...:peace



I've got some ideas for longer stories...so maybe someday soon....who knows....



take care,

Rachel

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby sam darls » Fri Dec 19, 2003 12:16 pm

Rachel..That was soo beautiful :heart I loved it. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby SJ » Sat Dec 20, 2003 10:54 am

Lovely writing :clap

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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby WillowFever » Sat Dec 20, 2003 8:48 pm

Thanks to everyone for your kind words....



I have actually started a couple of ff...and will try and get them posted soon....I am feeling braver now that I have some good words from you all....:blush



Have a great day...and happy reading...



:pride



Rachel



We all smile in the same language
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Re: Get The Fever...(first creative post)

Postby maudmac » Sat Apr 17, 2004 3:02 pm

New to the archive. You can leave feedback! :)


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