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Shimmer

Postby Vamp_Willz » Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:17 pm

Title: Shimmer
Author: Rose
Rating: R and NC17
Disclamers: Hell I own diddly SQUAT! But hey I own Cinder! YAY!!
Warnings: Ummm...OH those Warnings!! SEX!! Stupid Men!
Summary: I had this weird idea one night, its kinda off to a weird start. But anyways, Willow is this Bitchin Ass Kicker, yet she is fithy rich and lonely to boot, so where does she go?



[center]CHAPTER 1[/center]

Willow watched as the auctioneer brought another slave to the stage and sighed. (Tis no fun with me mate gone.) She sat and watched as the auctioneer showed the man off to the crowd. She sat in boredom on one of the Taverns couches as she watched as slave after slave was brought up to the stage, until finally she found no interest in it.

The auctioneer saw Willow and recognized her; he knew that this was his big chance, if ever there was one. When he saw her start to drift away from his crowd he immediately decided now was time to bring out his ultimate, the white witch.
“Lord’s and Ladies, Master’s and Mistresses! Tonight I have here with me a special find, one so rare…” He paused and scanned the crowd making sure they where listening, and they were.
“That even I your faithful yet humble servant Ethan had trouble finding. You see folk’s there has been rumored that in the Glashomier Forest there is a Witch so powerful, that even the Gods themselves tremble at the sight of her or even the mention of her true name.” Ethan looked at the crowd that had gathered around him and his stage (Suckers).
“What is her name?” A man’s voice called out.
“Ahh my young friend, to speak of her name, would only enrage the Gods.” Ethan said as sat down on his stool.
“Then how do you call her?” A woman’s voice challenged. Ethan just smiled and raised a hand.
“Like so.” The room went dead silent as Ethan snapped his fingers.


P.S. I know this is a lil...WEIRD! But I SWEAR happyness!
In the Immortal Words of Tara Maclay:
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Re: Shimmer

Postby Vamp_Willz » Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:21 pm

Title: Shimmer
Author: Rose
Rating: R and NC17
Disclamers: Hell I own diddly SQUAT! But hey I own Cinder! YAY!!
Warnings: Ummm...OH those Warnings!! SEX!! Stupid Men!
Summary: I had this weird idea one night, its kinda off to a weird start. But anyways, Willow is this Bitchin Ass Kicker, yet she is fithy rich and lonely to boot, so where does she go?



[center]CHAPTER 2[/center]



Willow looked on in mild interest as Ethan began his little charade. (Look at all these fools, thinking they will get something rare and exotic from HIM! Ha!) Willow was about to turn away when Ethan snapped his fingers and out from behind the curtains came the most beautiful creature Willow had ever seen, and that was saying something for she had lived a long and richly “fulfilled” life.

Ethan watched as Willow’s eyes began to glitter, he knew he was treading on thin ice, bringing someone like the witch here.
“Well now my friends, know that you’ve seen the White Witches beauty, I think we should start the bidding.” Ethan smiled as he watched the blonde lower her head in shame. Ethan walked over to her and took her hand and started acting as though he were sizing her up for the “right” price to begin with.
“We will start at 25,000 gold.” As soon as the words left his mouth a tall demon-like creature with grayish skin, and wicked looking horns protruding from his temples stood up.
“I will pay 25,000 for the witch.” He said in an eerily calm voice.

Willow watched the blonde, as she seemed to study the floor when she heard Ethan start the bidding. (25,000 is not nearly enough for this beauty.) Willow growled when she heard the next voice. (Cloud, what does HE want with her? Other then another sacrifice, to his “God”. I can’t have that now can I!) Willow stood.
“50,000 gold, for the beauty.” Cloud turned and looked through the crowd at the owner of the voice.
“Doth my ears deceive me, or doth someone challenge me?” Willow just smiled lazily. Cloud growled and decided he would rise up to the petty creatures challenge.
“75,000 for the Witch.” He grinned to himself thinking he had won, until…
“100,000 for the blonde-haired beauty.” Willow smiled at the blonde seeing that she had looked up from the floor and was looking at her.

Ethan looked on as the amount had gotten higher and higher, then all the sudden…Hell broke loose.
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I think we all can agree on that subject.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby MissMaclay89 » Sat Jun 17, 2006 11:06 pm

Wow this is really interesting!! Please continue!
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Re: Shimmer

Postby Vamp_Willz » Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:00 am

Title: Shimmer
Chapter Title: Hell
Author: Rose
Rating: R and NC17
Disclamers: Hell I own diddly SQUAT! But hey I own Cinder! YAY!!
Warnings: Ummm...OH those Warnings!! SEX!! Stupid Men!
Summary: I had this weird idea one night, its kinda off to a weird start. But anyways, Willow is this Bitchin Ass Kicker, yet she is fithy rich and lonely to boot, so where does she go?


[center]CHAPTER 3[/center]



Cloud shoved people out of the way as he made it over to the creature that had dared to challenge him.
“You!” He pointed a slim gray finger with a sharper then knife fingernail on it at her while Willow looked on at him in boredom.
“Yes, I am me.” Cloud growled and swiped at her, only to find that he had either misjudged the distance or she had backed up… quickly, very, very quickly. He looked up at the redhead confused.
“Bored now, you’re no fun.” Cloud growled and this time leapt at the redheaded creature, but instead of grabbing her like he thought he would, he ended up on the floor. Willow looked down at the sad excuse for a demon and kicked him in the ribs.
‘CRACK!’
“You know.” Willow said as she knelt down beside the demon that was now very much in pain.
“You’re such a bad puppy, I wonder… does your owner know that you go off using his money to buy little sacrifices for your ‘God’?” There was a feeling of dread that filled the Tavern. When Cloud had not answered Willow she grabbed one of his horns and tugged him backward.
“You know, your making me cranky.” Willow ran her fingertip down the demons throat and heard him whimper.
“I’m no fun when I’m Cranky.” Willow stated calmly. Cloud swallowed as well has he could trying to get up his nerve to speak, he was no dummy, he knew when he was outmatched.
“Wh-wh-what do y-y-you want?” Willow let go of Clouds horn and smirked.
“That’s better Puppy. Now, get up.” Willow stood up and watched to see if he would rise, Cloud didn’t move. Willow raised an eyebrow and nudged him with her boot.
“I said get up.” Cloud slowly started to rise, wincing as he took in shaky breaths. Willow looked him over and ‘tutted’.
“Such a sad waste of a demon.” Cloud looked up at redhead with fear in his eyes.
“M’lady, please I beg of you, spare me.” Willow looked on at Cloud with humor playing in her eyes. Cloud looked into the redheaded creatures eyes and saw there was no way he was getting out of this one alive.
“Ahem…M’lady Willow?” Willow’s eyes shot from Cloud to Ethan.
“Yes Ethan?” Ethan smiled at Willow and then nodded towards the demon.
“How’s about a trade, M’lady?” Willow looked at Ethan, not getting what he was getting at.
“A trade? A trade of what?” Ethan’s eyes glittered at Willow’s question; he shoved the White Witch towards Willow and grinned.
“This beauty for that brute.” Willow looked at Ethan.
“This…thing isn’t even mine to trade.” Ethan waved his hand.
“Tis no matter to me nor you. You want him gone, and I want-“
“More Money.” Willow interrupted. Ethan smirked and nodded his head.
“Call me a fool, but a mate does what he does to keep his family afloat.” Willow chuckled.
[center]“You are an ol’ fool, you would sell your own family if you thought you could make money.” Ethan smiled thanking every lucky star he had that she hadn’t obliterated him. [/center]
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"Japanese commercials are weird."
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Re: Shimmer

Postby viximon » Sun Jun 18, 2006 7:39 am

:pinky Wohohooooooi!! Willow win Tara that way?? That's quite the meeting. Tara is really a witch in this one? Just checkin, Ethan is not a person to be trusted on. Anyway, I really enjoyied the fic start. Update soon so we can know more about the story.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby lostguardian » Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:20 am

seems to me that ethan just sold his own daughter.. then again whats this girl know
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Re: Shimmer

Postby PancakesinBellies » Mon Jun 19, 2006 5:49 am

This is a very intriguing start. I can't wait for more.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby will » Mon Jun 19, 2006 11:18 am

Very interesting start.
I can’t wait to read what will happen next.Please update soon.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby Vamp_Willz » Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:17 pm

Thanks for all the feedback Ya'll!!

[center]CHAPTER 4
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Shimmer or ‘The White Witch’, as Ethan so cleverly named her, watched the redhead and frowned as she made idle chitchat with Ethan.
(How could a creature as beautiful as her, lower herself to even look at that Demon Man?) Shimmer thought as she lowered her eyes to the ground and looked at her feet.
(Then again,) She thought.
(Why would she be interested in a Witch? After all Papa had said all witches were evil, no matter how they used their powers.) Shimmer looked at the floor as a thought passed through her head quickly.
(I could run no one here could be able to stop me. I could be free. I could be my own person.)
As soon as the thought came, it left when she felt a warm hand in hers. Shimmer turned to look at the hand in her own, and then made a path up from the hand to the persons pale forearm, then to the person’s shoulder, and finally resting her gaze on the persons face. To Shimmers surprise, it was the redheaded girl who had her hand, she watched as the girl smiled at her and said something. Something she didn’t catch because she was to busy looking over the redhead, that was until something hard hit her in the back.

Willow looked at the blonde beauty she had saved while listening to Ethan as he told her how much trouble she was in for. Rose turned towards the blonde and grinned at her before saying:
“She won’t be any trouble. Will you now?” Willow waited for an answer wanting to hear the blonde girls voice, but to her disappointment the blonde said nothing. Willow shrugged guessing that the girl must be shy; she looked away for a minute towards the bar. That was all it took, a minute of not watching, for Ethan to strike the girl.
“Wench! Answer when spoken too!” Ethan went for another strike, but was caught by surprise when his staff didn’t hit its intended target, but the Mistress of the intended target. Ethan watched with wide eyes as his “Training Staff” shattered upon hitting Willows side. Willow looked up at Ethan and growled.

Shimmer looked on in shock, no one had ever taken a blow for her before…except,
(No! I won’t go there, not now!)
Shimmer watched and felt the redhead’s powers begin to shift and grow, it felt different, unlike anything she had felt before. She felt it rise sharply, and felt herself grow scared, not for her own safety, but for Ethan’s. He may be an awful man, but deep down she could feel some good in him left. He may have sold his soul to a demon, but there still was some good left in him underneath all that darkness. Shimmer could feel the redhead shaping her power and beginning to direct it towards Ethan, she squeezed the redhead’s hand and started to send some calming energy through her hand and found that instead of blocking it, she accepted it. Shimmer turned her head and to her surprise saw that the redhead was looking at her, she watched as fiery emerald eyes turned, dark. Shimmer placed more and more calming energy into her redheaded Mistress, and soon began to feel something strange happening. Her body felt tingly, and her heart started to beat faster. She shook her head and tried to think straight, but found her path at thinking blocked, by something unfamiliar to her.

Willow felt the blonde transfer calming energies into her. She was surprised and pleased at the feeling she felt when the blonde had touched her hand, it sparked something deep inside her, something she hadn’t felt in a long time…desire. Willow looked at her blonde and smiled at her and squeezed her hand before looking back at Ethan.
“I’ve a score to settle with you mate.” Willow looked back at Shimmer and wanted nothing more than to take her home and just take.
“Shall we go, love?” The blonde looked at her and nodded.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby viximon » Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:42 am

:pride Waaaaay! It have been a while but the waiting was well paid for.
So those two really are into each other already. Don't they? ;-) Go go, for the two!!!
Keep it up!
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Re: Shimmer

Postby BigBlueEyes » Tue Jul 25, 2006 1:08 am

Ooh, I really like this. It's awesome, I can't wait for more!!!! :dance
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Re: Shimmer

Postby Willowlover » Wed Jul 26, 2006 9:27 am

Awsome story i cant wait to read more. Also r u going to stop with tales of a vampire to do this story.
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Re: Shimmer

Postby CrazyTaraWitch » Mon Jul 31, 2006 11:43 am

this story's quite interesting...i'm intriqued
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Re: Shimmer

Postby taralicious » Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:11 pm

This is an excellent story tinged with the right blend of fantasy, sorcery, and high adventure.
It puts me in the mind of the Dragonlance saga for some reason only that realm didn't have Willow and Tara to be blessed with.
The multiple points of view, of showing the same event from the perspective of the different characters is always an effective literary device to establish a more well-rounded view of events and to drive home the point of, in this case, immediate desire between our heroines.
Now, I would only ask of a scene where they undress each other.
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