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I never meant to do it

Postby tmr » Thu Nov 24, 2005 3:27 pm

Title: I never meant to do it
Rating: R
Spoilers: Maybe a bit of season 6 or 5
Pairing: W/T more might appear later on.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, they owned to Joss Whedon lucky fool.
Summary: We know Tara is not a demon but what about Willow?
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Email: stephmclay@hotmail.com
Note: I’m English so if any funny English phases end up in this story you know why.

Chapter 1
Thought in Italics
Tara room


Willow paced up and down Tara’s Room waiting for her to come. She had been waiting for her for over an hour now and was staring to panic. Going into full-blown babble mode.

What if she is in trouble and is getting attacked? Dammit I want my women wait a minute MY women
Geesh talk about looking a head I haven’t even told her I love her yet.


Willow now beyond worried decided to look for Tara not knowing it is her which will need to be found and brought back.
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Magic Box

Tara Mclay was at the magic box helping Anya stock supplies. It was hardly her who wanted to help but since Xander and Anya had broken up she found herself hanging out with the ex-demon lately. Only thing keeping her there was the book with a spell on making babies but her thoughts were interrupted by a high-pitched scream.

Willow!
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Re: I never meant to do it

Postby AlysonGoddess » Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:14 am

The summary is intriguing .. but longer update next time please? :)
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Re: I never meant to do it

Postby viximon » Fri Nov 25, 2005 6:48 am

:applause I really enjoied this first chap though it was pretty small. Please update soon with more lengh. eh?
So, Willow's in trouble. And she hadn't told Tara her feelings yet. Ohh how exciting. :applause
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Re: feedback

Postby tmr » Fri Nov 25, 2005 10:56 am

ALYSONGODDESS: thanks for the review I have made the update longer.

VIXIMON: I am glad you find it exciting because I am new to writing fanfiction.

The update will be up in a minute.
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I never meant to do it

Postby tmr » Fri Nov 25, 2005 11:00 am

Title: I never meant to do it
Rating: R
Spoilers: Maybe a bit of season 6 or 5
Pairing: W/T more might appear later on.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, they owned to Joss Whedon lucky fool.
Summary: What is the thing that willow wants Tara never to know
Feedback: Cheers
Email: stephmclay@hotmail.com
Note: I’m English so if any funny English phases end up in this story you know why
And I have changed the summary because I feel this story is going another way.

Chapter 2
Thought in Italics
Outside of magic Shop
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Tara ran outside her heart beating so fast she thought she might faint she followed the screams which where coming from round the cornet.

Oh Goddess please let her be okay.

When she turned the corner her blood ran cold lying there on the floor was Willow puddle of blood surrounded. Her clothes like it had been ripped apart by an animal.

Tara could see she was still breathing by Willow chest going up a down. Not being able to take much more of the site fainted only to be caught by Anya who had followed her.
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Hospital

Tara started to stir from her sleep still in a daze of what had happened. When she opened her eyes she could see the gang.

“ What happened?”Quietly said Tara.

At that moment the gang looked away not willing to tell her what had happened to willow forcefully Tara shouted.

“ WHAT HAPPENED?” This seems to encourage the gang to tell. Giles stepped forward to explain.

“ Willow was beaten by something we do not know what but she has lost a lot of blood and. …And…. is in a coma” Giles cleared is throat trying to fight his tears.
Tara felt dizzy.

Why didn’t she protect Willow it was all her fault

Tara broke down in a heap of mess and let out a scream that froze everybody

“Soooooooooooouuuuuuullllllllllmmmmmmmaaaaaaattttttteeeeeee” -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hospital Bed
Willow laid on the bed in a coma. She laid on the bed like a beautiful flower her hair hugged her angelic face. She looked more like she was resting than fighting a battle.

Flash back


A little Willow skipped towards a small house her eyes dancing with excitement she was going to visit her father. Her father and mother had split up because of her father rage of course she was only 5 and did not understand.

Willow father now lived with a woman who had a little girl one year older than the little red head. Willow had never seen the girl but new her name started with T.

Willow jumped in joy as she saw her father’s cottage she went up to the door and knocked a tune on it.

Come on dad hurry up

To the little red head delight the door opened

“Hi Dad” cheerfully said Willow.

The man with brown hair and who was well built laughed.

“ You know I am to young to be called Dad Willow just call me Donald”

“OOOkay!” The little redhead smiled and walked into the cottage.

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Re: I never meant to do it

Postby viximon » Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:48 pm

Ey again. Happy you update already. So you just began to write fanfiction? You do it pretty well.

What a scare whit bloodyWillow and all. Poor Tara, no wonder she fainted.
The flashback thing confuse me though. :| Now I'm more curious that before. Continue soon.
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Re: I never meant to do it

Postby AlysonGoddess » Fri Nov 25, 2005 10:19 pm

Aww poor willow i hope shes ok! Need an update soon to find out what happens to willow! :)
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I never meant to do it

Postby tmr » Sun Nov 27, 2005 7:43 am

Viximon: Thanks I think this chapter should clear up your confusion.

AlysonGoddess: I did this update for you and Viximon.

So here goes

Title: I never meant to do it
Rating: R
Spoilers: Maybe a bit of season 6 or 5
Pairing: W/T more might appear later on.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, they owned to Joss Whedon lucky fool.
Summary: What is the thing that willow wants Tara never to know
Feedback: Cheers
Email: stephmclay@hotmail.com
Note: I’m English so if any funny English phases end up in this story you know why
And I have changed the summary because I feel this story is going another way.

Chapter 3
Thought in Italics
Hospital
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Tara slowly opened the door to willows room. She took a seat next to willow’s bed. She had never like hospitals partly because her Mother died in one and the other because of the times she spent in the hospital because of her dad beatings.

Flash back
Tara lived with her mother and her step dad she did not know her real dad but still thought of him. Tara was a very charming and shy little girl she was one those people who kept to them selves.

Her step dad name was Donald Rose..Rose something he was never was nice to her always telling her that she was nothing like his daughter and that anyone sensible like his daughter would never go out with her.

Tara had never met his daughter but always daydreamed what she would be like.

Hmmmmmm would she be kind and confident or would she be hurtful and a bully like her dad.

Must people if they had know what this little girl was thinking would think that her mum did not care about her safety but they would be wrong. Her mother name was an Elizabeth Mclay she cared greatly for her little one she saw how her husband had been treating Tara but was powerless to do anything she was also frightened of him.

She often took beatings from him and not complains. She used to stand up to him but that only made things worse. She prayed that her husband would get what he deserved

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Sorry guys that the update is small today but I am a little bit stuck so if you have any ideas just email it to me.
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Re: I never meant to do it

Postby viximon » Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:58 am

Ey tmr!! Hello!
What a messy family we have here. I'm happy you updated. But the chap was so short again :(

I like you fic and I will love to help you if you want :-D Just send me a PM or something and we can talk. What do you think.

Hope you cheer up and continue soon 'cause poor Willow is in hospital all beaten up and poor Tara is all depresed and upset for it.

See you. And keep the story up, please
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