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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 6)

Postby viximon » Sun Jul 31, 2005 4:48 am

Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. Yipie. At last a update. YAHOOO! :bounce
I'm so happy. I was starting to miss this wonderful fic of yours.

Dawn presentation was so cute :lol She's such a teen hehe. Love how quick she get Willow and her sisTara (It's obvious but nevertheless...). She will be important to their relationship, I think.

The baddies gave me the creeps. :devil they really sound evil lords of darkness (middle age talking :-D )

Aww and poor Tara, discovering Willow true story this way. She must be fighting dissapoint and hope so much.

What will happen? I can't wait. :bow Keep the great work up!
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 6)

Postby wilgen » Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:03 am

Hi Julie,

Sorry for not replying on chapter 4 and 5 sooner.
Just read al three and there are quite a few things I like about your story:
- Great writing;
- Looooong updates;
- Funny « Are we there yet » - I immediately made a popping sound with my mouth;
- Angsty « cut off the head of the kneeling man » - did not see that coming;
- Characters « he built himself » - Like I said before they are so close to the original;
- Two mothers - T&W falling in love not a problem;
- Language expressions « moron » - I wonder if Wesley would know what it meant - well actually also wondering if Tara and Giles understood everything Willow was telling?

Okay I'm stopping because there are so many great lines, situations and things I love about this. The things mentioned above are just a needle in a haystack (maybe there is a better saying....?).

So the result is: still loving the story immensely and you're doing a really great job except for the cliffhanger. :impatient

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 6)

Postby cosmic dancer » Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:19 am

An intreguing update. :hmm I'm very interested as to how the 'bad guys' could have sensed Willows arrival (I'm guessing it was her they'd detected) and why it should affect them in any way. She must be extremely powerful for people miles away to detect her presence.

I love the way you have shown what both Willow and Tara are thinking. it's really cute seeing how they react to each other :x

Thanks for putting in clear breaks between the sections, it really helps. :-D

More soon?
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 6)

Postby Tawilove » Thu Aug 04, 2005 3:52 pm

Hello everyone, first of....sorry for the long silence and the lack of replies to your wonderful feedback.

I've had health problem for a while now but it was getting better...(motivating me in my writings :) )...but I recently had a check up and the tests weren't that good, I must say that it crashed my mood big time. So mood down and increase in the treatment....it didn't help much for the motivation! :eyebrow

Anyway, I had some very hard days but I've decided that moping wasn't the solution so.....I'm writing again but a little slower...so sorry about that.
I won't stop the fic though don't worry...I just will take a bit more time to update.

So after this much depressing little pep talk :lol here come the individual replies.

The Rose24 :
Thank you for your much appreciated feedback :flower
Yes indeed one problem down more to go :devil …who needs everything smooth and peachy when you can have angst! :-D

viximon :
Thank you so much for you ever wonderful feedback :bounce :blush….and sorry for the delay …I’ve been struggling with motivation but I’ll fight against gloom, what a better way to do so than to write about our girls. :x

I like Dawn or more the potential-funny-mischievous-teen she could have been on the show instead of the annoying-whining-brat role they gave her most of the time. So I’m glad you find her cute :) ! She ‘s very perceptive that is for sure…..that’s why she could never have been Buffy’s sister :lmao…..she will play an important role indeed…she liked Willow immediately and that is a good point for our dear redhead!

Middle age evil lords of darkness :lol …..right on the spot….it’s hard for me to write the villains, I am not at ease when dealing with violence and cruelty but I’ll do my best to keep them hyper-creepy! :devil

Aww and poor Tara, discovering Willow true story this way. She must be fighting dissapoint and hope so much.


Exactly she’s all mixed up…what with finally discovering Will is in fact Willow…this is a shock, a happy one but also quite disturbing as she realized that she was attracted to her when she thought Will was a man. Some confusion here!! But also because Willow when talking about Oz crushed her hopes at the same time. Now the problem is different but still present!

A lot of things will happen :lol ….I couldn’t be less spoilerish…anyway…I won’t let things marinate for too long but we need a little angst don’t we :flirt
I’m working slowly but surely…thank you for your support it helps a lot….it gives me the « whiplash » I need (as we say in france….in a totally non kinky way….I swear :-D :p )

wilgen :
Hey you :wave
I’m the one sorry for the delay in my replies…so sorry
Wow *swoons*! What a list….thank you so much, I’m speechless…
About the expressions Willow is using …I would say that except for the ones that are related to technological innovations (that are foreign to this world) or to a specific slang….the language is more or less the same….I’ll try to be more careful about my choices of words…I have a hard time to determine which words would be out of context though for I don’t want to apply middle age English nor a too perfect or uptight wording. The younger people like Xander or Dawn would understand Willow better, for Giles or Wesley it would be harder sometimes…that they chose to comment on it or not!

Okay I'm stopping because there are so many great lines, situations and things I love about this. The things mentioned above are just a needle in a haystack (maybe there is a better saying....?).


:blush :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush no better saying thanks :flower

So the result is: still loving the story immensely and you're doing a really great job except for the cliffhanger.


The result is that you gave me motivation to get faster on the writing and …..I’m addicted to your feedback! :-D
Evil cliffhanger-provider me I know…. :devil

cosmic dancer :
Great feedback thank you!! :bounce :bounce

Well I’ll develop a bit more on how the ‘bad guys’ found out about Willow but I can say that they had some kind of premonition, a vision that warned them about a real powerful being arriving in their world but on the side of the good!!! Willow is indeed very powerful…I’ll give more details but not just yet. ;-)

I love the way you have shown what both Willow and Tara are thinking. it's really cute seeing how they react to each other


Thank you….I was a bit worried that you kittens would think I’m too short on the dialogues between them but I though a lot could be learned in the begining by going inside their heads!

Thanks for putting in clear breaks between the sections, it really helps.


You’re welcome, and thank you for pointing it out for me!

More soon?


More in a little bit….I don’t know when though but don’t worry…I’m working on it!


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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 6)

Postby Tawilove » Sun Aug 14, 2005 5:02 pm

Here comes chapter 7...with much tardiness I apologize!
It's a bit shorter than the previous ones but I hope it'll satisfy you just as well ;-)
Ok let's go !


Disclaimer same as before

Note : I just wanted to mention that 'Giles' is Lord Giles first name, I zapped on Rupert :)

Beware! Cliffhangery goodness :-D






Part Seven : Confusion





Three cheery voices resounded through the green alleys, chuckles and giggles alternating with animated discussions, giving to the sleeping place some appearance of life.
Waking up early in spite of the long and pleasant festivities, the ever curious blonde had decided that she knew enough about it to share the ‘juiciest gossip of the year’ as she fondly named her recent discovery. So in her best ‘come-on-I’m-doing-you-a- favor-by-waking-you-at-six-in-the-morning-to-have-some-girly-chit-chat-gossipy-talk’ way, Anya had perkily shaken out of bed her two exhausted friends, not caring a minute about the bitchy protests of the grouchy sleep-deprived girls.
Surprisingly enough, the abnormally considerate blonde had suggested that they went out to the royal gardens not to wake the whole place with their conversation. Faith and Buffy had known better though, concluding that her sudden access of charity was purely driven by her need for secrecy. Anya was ready to share, yes, but not with everyone. Begrudgingly putting on some warm clothes, the slowly waking girls had followed the smiling blonde at the front of the castle where only a few valets were quietly taking care of the morning chores.

« No way! » exclaimed the disbelieving blonde.

« I tell you what I saw! » reaffirmed the annoyed narrator.
After some good ten minutes of looking for the perfect place, Anya had finally started to explain the reason for this mysterious meeting. Briefly retelling the events of the night to add an extra background to her story, she had quickly switched to the main subject of the tale.
During the evening her interest had been piqued upon spotting a young guard entering the ball room more or less stealthily. He was quite good looking so she had followed him with her eyes, lust and curiosity challenging each other in her thoughts.
When he had disappeared in the crowd she had pouted out of disappointment and directed her attention elsewhere, but to her total delight he had reappeared only a minute later, the chamberlain in tow, nearly running towards the exit. Deciding that there was surely good material for a future rumor, she had followed the pair from a distance.
Reaching the corridor at the balcony level the two had stopped to join a group of four already engaged in a big discussion. She was dumbfounded, what were Jenny and Tara doing, standing there, chatting with two ‘guards’, and why on earth had they required Wesley’s presence. Hiding behind a nearby former king statue, she had spied on this intriguing cluster determined to learn more about this new mystery.

« So what are you saying exactly? » the brunette warrior was completely unconvinced by what she was hearing. « That Tara has the hots for a guy!! »

« Yes that’s exactly what I’m implying here » she was extremely good when noticing attraction between two persons, hell she had known about Faith and Buffy for ages.

« You’re nuts! » declared the younger blonde deadpanned.

« What! You don’t believe me? » she was offended, she was the expert, those two were so blind they couldn’t even realize their own feelings, she was not about to be contradicted by two little girls!

« Alright An, don’t make such a fuss and tell us again about it, there is surely a good explanation for all this » Faith soothed the fuming girl, trying to lull her back into her narrative, wishing to avoid any confrontation between the two blondes who had a great tendency to get on each other’s nerves quite regularly.

« hmmalright » mumbled the still furious girl. Reenacting the whole scene that took place before her eyes some hours ago, Anya confirmed her strong belief once again. « You should have seen her, all girlie around him, gooey eyes and silly smiles, I even heard her stutter when she bid him goodnight! But honestly I don‘t see why, this boy is skinny and not manly enough» she smiled amused by her own conclusion « oh maybe that‘s why she likes him, he‘s a pretty boy, very girlie. For my part I liked the dark haired one better, I’m sure he does good with the loving » her eyes sparkled at the images forming in her mind.

« Sick » Buffy mumbled in a low voice only for herself, then she shook her head rolling her eyes at the same time « Well I’m still not convinced, I say, you’re reading all the signs wrong » she was standing her ground, she knew her cousin well, Tara was not into boys period!

Stepping between the bickering duo, the brunette pushed them apart, desperately searching for a way to reach a compromise. « You two stop this already! » she shouted at the bewildered girls. « Good! Now that I have your attention shall we try the civilized version » …I can’t believe it’s me saying that!



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« So…you are …a… hmmm… woman » he took of his glasses polishing them with care, frowning slightly at his own persisting habit. The redhead had finally finished to retell her recent adventures so he felt it was time for him to get on with the comments and on a very disturbing point no less.
The princess sighed, she was relieved that her uncle had decided to start the embarrassing questioning, she wasn’t up to it, she was still under the shock of this incredible discovery.

« Yes » the redhead was surprised by this statement which was very much sounding like a need for confirmation. « You thought I was a guy? » she wasn’t accusing, just curious.

« Well yes! » he confessed confused « so you didn’t mean to pretend to be a man? »

« No. What made you think so? »

« Well… » he was looking for a way to put it but was interrupted by an inquiring Tara.

« Your cous… I mean X-x-xander » goddess please not again… her stutter was back, brought along by her growing nervousness « he said your n-n-name was Will…and…I … » she was loosing her assurance progressively. She didn’t dare to look at the expectant albeit rather worried green orbs that gave her their full attention; so instead she fixed her eyes on the shelves, absentmindedly grazing the covers of some old looking books with her delicate fingers.

« I never imagined » she swallowed hard realizing with the blonde’s words the complexity of the situation …she thought I was a guy…she seems upset now that she knows I’m a girl… she felt sadness invade her …she’s disappointed! She didn’t know what was possessing her but the sole idea of disappointing the blonde was so unbearable that she felt like crying. « To me, Will is just another version of my name…I never imagined that you…but I should have obviously for you were led to confusion by all this…I’m so terribly sorry, I didn’t mean to upset you » at this Tara lifted her eyes to look fully at the redhead seeing only regrets and apologies.

« You didn’t u-u-upset me » she smiled softly « it’s just … » she nearly said it …what? What did I nearly say?…that since we met I felt an uncontrollable succession of feelings burning down their way to my soul, that I’d never felt such at peace and devastated at the same time, that the idea of being attracted to a man had made my mind scream…yes attracted, I can face it now…I am attracted but do I really know by whom…do I have to consider the sexual orientation or just the person, the soul?... This was way too much to deal with in such a short amount of time, she needed time to regroup, to set up her mind and her heart!

« What we are trying to express here » Giles recognized Tara’s increasing stutter as his cue to pursue the discussion  « is that apart from your name, your clothes and your hairstyle were both rather explicit clues to mistake you for a man. And we are truly sorry if we offended you in anyway » she heard his sincere excuses but the only thing she could focus on was the increasing look of confusion and distress on the blonde’s face. She fought the urge to reach for the other girl and comfort her with soothing words and gentle touches. Instead she turned her attention back to the older man.

« I’m not offended » she reassured kindly at the now smiling wizard.

An uncomfortable silence filled the room, no one knew just what to say, so many things had happened in less than two days and they had so much to deal with that no words seemed appropriate enough to convey of their troubled emotions.

« Lord Giles !» breaking the silence, a loud voice echoed through the vaulted room. All heads turned towards the sound coming from the entrance spotting a guard, cheeks red from running, carrying a paper roll that looked very much official.
Arriving at the level of the trio, the bulky blonde man bowed respectfully « My Lady, My Lord » lifting up his head he informed « I have been sent by Countess Cordelia, she instructed me to bring you this missive as fast as possible » he finished handing the message to the older man.
Opening the roll with precaution the Wizard scanned the document with patient eyes. Suddenly a frown darkened is features, something happened and it was not to be taken lightly. Addressing his niece he said « I’m sorry dear but some urgent matters were brought to my attention, I have to go » he would have loved to stay and learn more about their intriguing guest but he couldn’t delegate on this, it was an issue for the Army General.

« Is it bad ?» inquired the princess, anxious.

« I do not know yet Tara, but I will inform you as soon as I clear this up » patting her arm affectionately he smiled one last time at the redhead and followed the messenger out of the library.

They were alone now, standing in the middle of the room looking everywhere but at each other. Tara knew she should be the one to engage the conversation, to put the redhead at ease but she was too occupied thinking over an over again about what she dejectedly called ‘her biggest failure at perceptiveness‘.
How could I ever have mistaken this beautiful woman for a man?… she glanced at the distracted redhead with gentle eyes …maybe it was the clothes…come on Tara, you know many women are wearing uniforms …yes but they don’t have the same cut and they are much more form fitting … she smirked …ok mind out of the gutter missy!…so maybe the hair, they are uncharacteristically short for a woman…yes but still her face is so soft, her lips so sensual… she was beginning to sport a dreamy smile, stilling glances repeatedly at her companion who in return was also doing her best not to be caught ogling …so it was the name!…Oh! I don’t know!… maybe it was all these things combined together, but what is sure is that I’ve never ever been this blind in my entire life… she sighed unhappy with herself.

Only a few feet to her left Willow was equally lost in her frantic musings …why did I have to follow this silly plan?…because it was the only one that they came up with and you know you had no choices…so why did I have to dress this way?…because you certainly would have been a ‘little’ conspicuous in your gore-tex multicolored clothes!!!!…yes but still… she pouted slightly at her too logical mind, stomping a virtual foot on a very virtual ground materializing only for her in her quirky imagination. Sending surreptitious looks in the princess direction she followed her line of thoughts …alright, alright…but look at what I’ve done, she’s all upset because of me, me and my stupid masquerade! She thought I was a man, and now she’s disappointed… maybe she kinda ‘liked’ me when she took me for a guy and that’s why she’s all bothered now… she blushed at her own supposition …nah! Why would she be interested in little ol’me, even in drag I’m not attractive!… she had always felt very insecure about her physical appearance and this was probably one of the reasons why she had stayed with Oz for so long, in spite of his behavior! If she had left him, who would have wanted of her, she probably would have been lonely for ever! It was all these insecurities that kept her from running away, that pushed her to forgive again and again. Well she had found the courage to say farewell to him and his betrayals, realizing that everything, even loneliness, was better than what he was putting her through!
But she was still feeling the same way about herself, she was an unattractive-dorky-geek and she couldn’t do anything to change it!! Her self-depreciating nature was well anchored in her personality and it would take a long time and a big amount of love to invert this tendency.



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« So this was sent by Countess Cordelia? » Viviane was seeking confirmation from her brother.
Shortly after leaving the library with the diligent messenger Lord Giles had provided him a provisory answer for his Lady, promising to inform her as soon as possible on his future conclusions.
Directing himself towards the apartments of his sister he had mulled over the serious problem at hand. Should he summon the great army council or keep the topic in the restricted circle of his family and closer counselors? The choice was hard but somehow evident, the less people would know the better it would be! So after some internal arguments with himself the general decided for the second solution. Now standing in a small but comfortable conference room inside Ladies Viviane and Jenny’s suite, he was again polishing his spectacles while worried lines formed restlessly on his brow.

« Yes Viviane » he nodded while taking a seat at the big round table.

« I see, so the messenger must a have traveled what?… less than an entire day to reach the castle, this means that all this had happen in the lapse of a couple of days! » this was very grave, things were happening too fast!

« I know dear, I’m a little unsettled by all this, our latest spy report was not so alarming but then again it was some ten days ago! Something happened, something very important occurred recently to activate these events. I have the beginning of an idea about what could have been the trigger, what Lady Cordelia called the ‘chosen one ‘, but I still need to research on this. » he wouldn’t give an incomplete information, this could lead to big troubles and somehow it was even more frightening than the rest.

« Well maybe you could share this information Giles » the pompous voice of Lord Quentin resounded in the silence; he was one of the highest representative of the Wizards’ cast and was always very careful to underline it. Sensing that his somehow condescending tone wasn’t going to lead him anywhere he added in a more neutral way « I could help you with the research, two are faster than one! » pleased with himself he turned to his best ally in the room, Lord Wesley, and gave him a sly smile only proof of his auto satisfaction.

« But I am not alone Quentin » he knew this was coming and was not even phased by the other man’s attitude.

« Oh and who could that be? » he nearly sneered the words.

« My niece, Princess Tara, she has been very helpful until now and her knowledge of our magical history will show itself essential in this investigation » pride was flooding out of him in waves and this was impossible to miss.
Jenny and Viviane exchanged tender gazes, eyes gleaming with love for their oldest daughter who had become an amazing woman.

« Well I must admit that Lady Tara is very capable of assisting you » it was very hard to concede a praise for such an arrogant man like himself, however he knew a good flattering comment was necessary in these circumstances « but I was thinking more in the line of an expert help, if you see what I mean. No offense, but your niece is merely a beginner compared to men like us. » Lord Giles narrowed his eyes warningly not liking a minute the direction this conversation was taking.

« Be careful Quentin, you are talking about ‘Princess’ Tara » he accentuated the term ‘princess’ « your future queen, you better not forget it ».

I don’t forget Giles and only time will tell about her reign… some of us don’t approve… he seethed internally but could only bow in defeat « I beg your pardon Lord Giles, I didn’t mean to be disrespectful » his time would come, he just had to be patient.

« Well well, gentlemen, let’s not get caught in needless arguments » Queen Viviane knew she had to intervene or those two might never end to squabble. She was very aware of Lord Quentin’s ambiguous nature, his thirst of power was dangerous and they would have to watch over him very closely, however right now more important matters were to be considered. « I trust Lord Giles in his decision, and we should all do the same, I know this is a preoccupying affair but we shall remain calm and united through those difficult times. Each of us has a task to accomplish, an shall stick to it » she had to be firm, dissension was not tolerable. « The session is closed, thank you for your presence and please do not say a word about what you have heard in this room! » she stood up from her seat and thanked each of the seven participants personally before reaching for her wife who immediately found her hand in a comforting gesture.

« You were wonderful honey » whispered the dark haired woman to her lover as she embraced her from behind.
« I love it when you are acting all ‘take charge‘, it’s so sexy » she purred nibbling on the lobe of her ear.

« Goddess you’re insatiable » Viviane looked sideways to the entrance of the room making sure that they were finally alone.

« Are you complaining about it ?» she asked teasingly with a mischievous grin while pursuing her ministrations.

« Oh goddess no » she moaned in pleasure caught up in the passionate moment.


« Ahem ahem » clearing his throat to announce his presence Lord Giles took off his glasses and smiled apologetically « I’m truly sorry to interrupt you » he was starting to blush eliciting a soft chuckle from Jenny who received a mock disapproving look from her wife in return.

« Please Giles, come on in dear » she loved her brother dearly, he was a gentle man and a great support, she didn’t know what she would have become without him!

Smiling affectionately at the couple he approached them impatient to broach a subject that had been running through his mind since he called for the restricted council. « I have a surprising news about our ‘guest’ » he stressed the word to make sure they understood who he was talking about.

« What is it Giles ?» asked a rather anxious Jenny.



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« Well… » moping over the situation for ever wasn’t the solution, she had to react, she had to lead.

« Well… » echoed the redhead expectantly, she didn’t know what to say, how to begin.

« I am s-s-sorry about this interruption » the blonde was rather disappointed by the departure of her uncle, mostly because she was eager to learn more about the meaning of Willow’s presence in Hemera and also because she wasn’t sure that she could manage this one-on-one conversation.

« Don’t worry, it’s ok really » she reassured « he seems very nice » small talk Willow, small talk is the key… nervously wriggling her hands together, she repeated this mantra in her head albeit uncertain of its efficacy.

Losing track of the redhead’s peculiar logic, it took Tara a few seconds to realize that Willow had changed the subject of their discussion to reach the safer ground of conventional chit chat.
« Yes he is » she smiled recognizing that the redhead was directing her compliment at the recently departed man. « He is my mentor for everything related to magical history and mystic forces. He knows a lot about dreams and illusions, I learned so much through his guidance. I hold him very dear in my heart.» Her whole face lit up at the mention of her favorite ‘teacher‘.

Wow look at her glowing!… Willow stared dreamily …and she didn’t even stutter once, maybe because she is totally comfortable … of course she is doofus she’s talking about her uncle, a man she respects and loves… I wish she could feel the same when talking about me… blushing slightly at this thought without even knowing why, the redhead only smiled broadly in response.

This smile… she marveled … when she smiles like that it’s like the sun breaking through the clouds of a stormy sky…nothing can compare to that!
« I think we s-s-should postpone this research s-s-session, if you don’t mind of course. I would rather wait until my uncle is with us, he has already c-c-collected some very interesting texts, it would be quite unproductive to start without him. » she was feeling more and more comfortable and was able to keep her stutter at bay, to her delight and, she didn’t know it yet, to the redhead’s one too.

« I don’t mind really and it surely makes sense; to start research for research’s sake isn’t really a good way to do it…you might end up with fallacious information that could lead you to a complete disaster…and then you get the total opposite of what you where seeking for …» the redhead was in full babble mode, obviously the princess wasn’t the only one nervous about their ‘private’ conversation.

Grinning lopsidedly at the voluble girl …so cute…Tara wondered at the same time how long she could go on before passing out! But after a few seconds of attentive observation she realized that the redhead was alarmingly turning paler than she already was, so she did the boldest thing she ever thought she could do. She approached the unsuspecting babbler quickly, leaving only a few inches between them and no time for the other girl to react. Lifting her hand to the face of a bewildered but still mumbling Willow she put a delicate finger on the talking girl lips ceasing efficiently the unending torrent of words. Fixing the redhead’s longing gaze with her own she uttered huskily « Breathe Willow, breathe ».






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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby SavageWaters19 » Sun Aug 14, 2005 7:52 pm

Hey,

You don't really know me, but I am in love with this fiction and with the last paragraph of the update. Gah, can't wait for more. I'm also wrapped up in the Buffy/Faith story. Don't forget to include them in there! Keep it up and I'm waiting for more.
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Aug 14, 2005 8:01 pm

It seems as if a lot of things are finally getting cleared up.

I am looking forward to when the ladies start talking more and get on with smoochies. The next update?
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby cosmic dancer » Mon Aug 15, 2005 1:46 am

I liked the way you had a gossipy Anya at the start of this update :) It gives an air of realism, that even in a fantasy environment people would still act in this reassuringly normal way.

I think that Giles already has an idea about how important Willow is to their country.

« I have a surprising news about our ‘guest’ »


I look forward to seeing if he's actually worked out that she must be the chosen one or not, but even if not, I suspect he must be close.

I can't work out what on earth is wrong with Willow at the end.

Tara wondered at the same time how long she could go on before passing out! But after a few seconds of attentive observation she realized that the redhead was alarmingly turning paler than she already was,


I know she babbles lots but, as far as I'm aware, it's never made her look like she'll faint before. I can only guess that it is somehow magic linked, but I can't yet see how. :hmm

I look forward to reading more when you're able to post it. :-D
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby grimlock72 » Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:12 am

Wow... just discovered this fic.. so now I have to feedback seven lovely looooooooooong chapters :)

The setup with Willow still rememvering her own reality while being a sort of middle-agey dimension is nice. I wonder if Willow will introduce concepts she remembers from her world into this one.

You made Xander a likable yet goofy person, which is good and indeed more season3 like. Wesley is certainly still season3, with him associating with evil Quintin. Good thing Tara and Jenny found Willow first, Quintin just wants power.. either directly or indirectly by controlling someone just like Willow. Not good, not good. I hope Wesley eventually learns that Quintin isn't a very nice person.

I like Tara's familly, they seem very caring and provide a good and deserving home for Tara. Yeah Willow would be right at home in Giles' library, once she's comfortable with her surroundings :)

I wonder if Willow has anything back in 'her world' she wants to get back to? Friends she'll miss or pets to take care of, something like that? There appears to be a lot in her current dimension worth staying for, Tara is a huge part of that of course :lol.

Poor Willow is like a magic generator yet she can't even sense it herself. Good thing Xander got her to the castle safely, no doubt lots of not-so-kind people would have liked to take advantage of Willow. No way Tara or Giles will let that happen now, nope. Should be fun if Willow has to learn magic all new, she likes to learn though :)

I adora protective Willow, she was all seething when Wesley addressed Tara in stupid manner. Heh, Mr. Evilness better think twice about doing anything towards Tara or he'll have to deal with a VERY upset Willow :devil

This story deserves much more feedback (I haven't even mentioned Faith/Buffy or Anya or Dawnie yet), I'm fairly sure MUCH more people read it, if not the *should* ! It has nice fairytale like quality to it, with some evil thrown in for good measure. At least Mr. Evil is up front with his evilness, weasly Quintin is trying the sneaky way... bwah.

Please do get well soonish and update when you can :flower :flower

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby Artemis » Tue Aug 16, 2005 10:51 pm

I love the three conversations going here - Anya, Buffy and Faith (with Faith being the 'civilised' one :lol ), Quentin and Giles and the dark hints of political manoeuvring, which could have quite an effect on Willow, and Willow herself with Tara... they're so sweet, all hesitant and shy, yet smiling at the least provocation and adoring each other :x
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby spells42 » Wed Aug 17, 2005 4:19 am

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Hi, I'm relatively new to the board but I'm slowly coming out of lurkdom. I'm enjoying this fic. The way you took us from modern day to medieval times, keeping us guessing, tantalising with little hints as to why Willow made the 'crossing' and about the impending doom for the kingdom (queendom? nahh. I'll settle for .. realm. Sorry I'm easily distracted sometimes.).
I also like the confusion Tara felt at her attraction to Willow when she thought she was a man. Your portrayal of the characters and their relationships is a bit different but you retain the essential personality traits. I really like the whole family/s set up: Tara's mums are great. The love they show for each other sets a nice example for Tara to follow.
I'm looking forward to the next update.


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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby Tawilove » Mon Aug 22, 2005 5:30 pm

:bow :bow :bow Thank you kittens for the wonderful feedback, and sorry for the lateness, here are the individual replies


SavageWaters19
Hey there :wave
I don’t know you personally but I know your fic…  « Their ever after »….it’s great, and I’m sorry I didn’t have time to give you feedback on the second chapter!! I will soon fix this though!
I love Buffy/Faith interactions too, there is a lot of potential there, so don’t worry, I’ll keep on with them.
Thank you for reading and the kind feedback :flower
Stay tune, the next chapter is on it’s way!

The Rose24
A lot of movements on the chessboard indeed, some things are getting cleared up and some others are still in the dark!
More W/T talking and other things in the next update :flirt ….smoochies? You want smoochies!!! :shock :lol ….well… let see! :hmm :devil
Thank you for your feedback, I’ll try to satisfy some of your expectations in the next update

cosmic dancer
I liked the way you had a gossipy Anya at the start of this update...


I love Anya, she’s one of my favorite characters and gossipy Anya is double goodness, I feel sorry for Buffy and Faith though!! She can be quite tiring sometimes :lol

I think that Giles already has an idea about how important Willow is to their country


Yes Giles is more or less aware that Willow might have a role much more important than everyone thought at first….but you’ll see, I won’t give spoilers, no siree no! :no :devil

I know she babbles lots but, as far as I'm aware, it's never made her look like she'll faint before. I can only guess that it is somehow magic linked, but I can't yet see how.


Well Willow is quite the babbler indeed and trying to get herself out of an embarrassing or stressing situation (i.e. being alone with Tara and having a one on one conversation with her) is increasing this phenomenon. She tends to get her babble out of control and eventually forget to breathe….some writers on the pens would often describe this extreme point by saying that Willow is getting blue or red nearly passing out for lack of oxygen. For my part I chose to translate this babbling point of no return by a definitely paler Willow! I’m sorry if the way I wrote it confused you, there is no magical reason for this, or maybe perhaps the magic that is Tara :x (she’s still making our dear redhead incredibly nervous)!

Thank you so much for your great feedback!!
I’m actually working on the next update so it should be up eventually!


grimlock72
WOW I’m the one impressed, what an extensive and wonderful feedback, I’m really honored!! :bow :bow :bow

I wonder if Willow will introduce concepts she remembers from her world into this one.


Willow will surely come across some difficult times (darkness is lurking) in the following chapters and her actual « modern » knowledge might come in handy ;-)

You made Xander a likable yet goofy person, which is good and indeed more season3 like.


I wouldn’t have him any other way!….gosh did I really say that!!! :shock :blush I swear it wasn’t what you think :laugh ….I’m a lesbian wash, rinse and repeat!! :smash

Exact…Quentin is the perfect embodiment of the power obsessed man, ready for everything that could make him more powerful, he wouldn’t mind using Willow for his own interests!!! But rest assure, Tara’s watching over her girl, well her soon to be girl more precisely but who cares for such a small detail after all! :p
Wesley is weak that is his major default and his only excuse for being so blind. In fact he doesn’t even realize who Quentin really is and that he is being manipulated!! Time will tell if he can break the link and finally join the good ones!

I like Tara's familly, they seem very caring and provide a good and deserving home for Tara. Yeah Willow would be right at home in Giles' library, once she's comfortable with her surroundings


Tara’s family is her strength and she will need that to face the dark future looming over their kingdom and help Willow out of her insecurities. In this fic Tara will be the supporting partner (in the beginning at least) and I like this twist in canon.
Giles and Willow, are to me associated strongly with firstly the image of learning and books and also with this father/daughter relationship that will maybe seem a bit less accentuated at first (regarding canon) but that will extend nicely through the fic!

There appears to be a lot in her current dimension worth staying for, Tara is a huge part of that of course .


Definitely a lot in this dimension worth staying for…..I purposefully gave Willow a sort of « shitty » life back in her reality, precisely because I wanted her to regret none of it! Of course she had a few nice friends and a nice little apartment and I’m sure she’ll miss some of it at some point, but it will very quickly be forgotten when faced with her knew world = Tara! :x

Yes poor Willow indeed, she is unknowingly channeling very powerful forces and isn’t even aware of what she can do….she will learn fast but I can promise some funny moments in the process :lol

Protective Willow is drool worthy in my books :drool …and Tara will surely elicit more of our dear redhead « butch » moments!

Wow wow wow, what can I reply to all this wonderful compliments, I am furiously blushing now :blush :blush :blush
Thank you for your good wishes and kind words :flower

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Thank you for your kind feedback :flower , I greatly appreciate :bow
Yes indeed, three conversation planes here, which are in a way all revolving around the same subject : Willow’s arrival in this world…..the first one is funny and peachy, the second is quite unsettling and the third is full of discovery and love….I’m really happy you liked them, and I’ll do my best to bring a little bit of fun, angst and love all along the way.

I’d like to thank you again for posting my fic on « Trough the looking glass », the title graphic is really wonderful! :clap :clap

spells42
I’m flattered that you would consider my fic worthy enough to be part of your coming out of lurkdom process :bow :flower

Queendom, that’s a cool word, I love it! :bounce :-D

It was a bit challenging for me to travel from « modern days » (our reality) to a more « medieval time » setting (the magical realm), paying a constant attention to any slip in the logic; trying to make Willow slowly transfer from one to another. So thank you for your nice compliment!!

I also like the confusion Tara felt at her attraction to Willow when she thought she was a man...


More and more authors (very talented one) are playing with the confused feelings of our girls when one of them is in drag (mostly Willow) and I’m really glad that you appreciate my version of it. :dance
Yes indeed the portrayal of the characters are somehow srtaying a little from canons, especially with Willow who’s the one here to come from an abusive family and relationship. She’s more insecure than canon Willow. But also Tara is coming here from a loving and caring family and as you say, it gives her a better example and a more confident attitude. But I’m pleased you think that the dynamics are still working! :)

Thank you very much for your great feedback :flower , hope to read from you again.




Well that's all for now :)...chapter eight is on it's way, slowly but surely and it might be up for the end of the week, so stay tune!!

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby RageMore7 » Mon Aug 29, 2005 10:12 am

i think i need an update. this is such a cute story and i really like the whole engery thing they've got going on here. very cool

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby viximon » Thu Sep 01, 2005 6:47 am

uah, At last. I don't know why I couldn't log in...After days of tries I made it.
Waaaaa :blush I'm still a deeplyfallen fan of yours, that last chapter was so cute and the silencing Willow ways of Tara just speeded my heart.
Love you story. It was fun too Anya's goshiping.

Bads on the way, though. Don't they? Well. Continue soon.
Cheers!!!! :applause
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update Chapter 7)

Postby Tawilove » Sun Sep 04, 2005 5:43 pm

Hello dear kittens...sorry for the tardiness factor.....chapter 8 is finally up so enjoy :-D


RageMore7 :
Thank you so much for your feedback. I’m really glad you like the story so far. :dance
You need an update….well I’m pleased to comply ;-)

viximon :
Thank you for your always wonderful feedback :bow , I’m so :bounce to see you still like the story!!
Connections problem can be a real bugger sometimes :smash , anyway you made it back on the board so :bounce

Waaaaa I'm still a deeplyfallen fan of yours


:blush :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush

Tara is the only one who knows the cure for Willow’s babble’s attacks :-D ….and I’m sure you were not the only one with the speeding of the heart….you can count Willow in :x

Anya is definitely the comic factor in this fic, she was not the only one in the show but here I chose to give her the major comical role.
Bads definitely on the way :devil ……but they are many kinds of bads…the obvious ones and the others ;-)





Note: I personally didn’t know much about dragons except what I read of them in fairytales. So I decided to browse the net in search of some relevant material. I found this site http://www.dragnix.net/From_tail_to_snout/ that provided most of the « dragon material » I needed for this fic, it’s really great, so if some of you are interested in knowing more about dragons and their legends I recommend to give it a look!





Part Eight : Flaming hearts




Alright here, red alarm, red alarm, personal space invasion…though what a sweet invasion… she sighed dreamily …Oh my god! Oh my god…she is only a few inches from me now… Why? What is she doing? Oh yes! well answer on board right about now…she is touching my lips, I repeat she is touching my lips…what should we do captain? Captain?…oh yes! sorry! I don’t know what to do, my legs are trembling, I can’t move, I don’t want to move…but we have to react here!!…I know, I know, let me think ok!!!…aye-aye m’am… completely immerged in the velvety feeling of the soft fingertip, the redhead lost the control of her own internal babble, that had obviously started right after her capacity of speech had subsided, thanks to the arousing actions of a blond haired goddess. … Arousing!!!! Wow, did I really thought that…well it is arousing…why so?…because she is the most beautiful and sensual being I’ve ever been blessed to meet! … Her brain was aghast, desperately trying to understand her own heart conclusions, she was attracted to this angel, and she couldn’t deny it anymore. A life long list of questions …well ok maybe not so life long but more « years » long… was starting to get answers. Repressed emotions and confused feelings were finally making sense and all of this had happened in that perfect delicate moment.
So what do we do now captain? call for retreat?…NO! I mean no! no retreat we stay were we are! Look at those eyes, they’re so blue and so deep, I could get lost in them and never find my way back, the point is I think I don’t want to find my way back…staying still, check!…well I may move again, once I recover my motor system abilities!

She was in heaven, she had never imagined that such a perfect feeling could exist! At first she had reacted boldly, with her guts, not really caring that it might seem inappropriate or rude. Then when she had raised her hand to reach the redhead’s face she had hesitated, only for a second though. But still, she had realized that there was no turning back, that from now on she could never forget about the feel of the other girl’s lips on her skin and would stay forever in need of their touch on her own.
And it was exactly the case right now; she was marveling at their softness, at how wonderful it would be to taste them, to map them thoroughly with her tongue …wow Tara, calm down would you, you’re going to jump on that poor girl if you don‘t get your mind out of the proverbial gutter… flushed by her naughty imagination and the strong beating of her heart, she brought her eyes back to the amazed and sparkling emerald orbs of her ‘prey‘. What she saw there, caught her breath away! There was surprise of course but also wonder and a hint of amusement; something else was there though and she didn’t dare to hope. What she saw was desire, burning in those beautiful eyes. Still she wasn’t completely sure, was it Willow’s or her own passion that was reflecting in the other girl’s orbs? Her head was opting for the second when her heart inclined more for the first. The dilemma was torturous!

None of them was ready to move and the situation was becoming more and more ambiguous by the second. At first it might have appeared like a friendly and somehow funny gesture that the princess had chosen to stop the redhead uninterrupted ramblings. But now, five minutes later, the intimacy of the pose was evident and suggested a level of affection way too high for simple acquaintances.
They both knew it, but it didn’t mean they wanted to part!

During her two years’ relationship with Oz, Willow had never felt such an intense connection with him. They had kissed, sometimes cuddled and made love, but none of those activities had elicited the pleasure and the peace she was feeling right now with this simple touch.
Tara was stupefied, if the fact of simply grazing the redhead lips with her fingertip was exciting her like that, she didn’t dare to imagine what it would be like to touch and kiss her everywhere. …Bad bad girl, you are definitely the naughtiest girl ever… she smirked internally at her own vivid imagination.

The redhead’s mind was a blur and her only thought was directed at the blonde …I want to feel her lips too, they look so full and sexy, I bet they must feel like the most delicate silk and taste like the sweetest honey… she was transfixed, unconsciously leaning towards the princess and by this action pressing even more fully her lips on the blonde’s finger. The tension in the air was palpable and the beating of their hearts echoed through the quiet room forming one harmonious melody.
Looking into each other’s eyes, as realization of their new born connection came to life, they smiled knowingly at one another and the princess let her finger fall gently down by her side. An invisible force seemed to bring them irremediably closer, so they complied powerless but consenting, leaving only a wisp of air between their fervent bodies. Unconsciously licking her lips, Willow bent her head slightly to her left as Tara did the same. They were like the last pieces of a puzzle about to mingle and finally click to complete the beautiful scenery. They were only a breath away from completion, it seemed, when a terrible bang resounded outside slightly shaking the furniture in the process.
Startled by this explosion, they both sprang apart from one another, sporting ‘deer caught in the headlights’ expressions, realizing suddenly what had just been on the verge to happen. Blushing furiously the princess looked down at her feet searching for the invisible stain that would save her from embarrassment. As for Willow, her concern took over her undeniable shame and she ran towards the nearest window to assess the nature of the violent outburst. Finally following the worried redhead to her viewpoint the princess acknowledged with a smile the cause of the recent incident. Turning to her left to gaze fully at the other girl she however realized that some explaining would be necessary when she spotted the terrified yet still curious look in the redhead’s widening orbs.



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« So please Giles, tell us what you’ve found !!» pleaded an anxious Jenny as Viviane squeezed her wife’s hand to sooth the quivering seer.

« Well I think that my interpretation of the prophecy is a bit different now » he took off his glasses giving them a fast polish before reinstalling them carefully at their initial position. « What I mean is that, at first I didn’t know very well how to interpret the possible link between Tara and the stranger from her dream. It seemed intense but not precise enough to qualify it. Then came the prophecy that we found in those ancient manuscripts, it did make a link with Tara’s dream, but it was more confusing than before, especially when I heard about ‘Will’. Being perfectly aware of Tara’s inclination for women, it somehow excluded any romantic implication in their magical ‘union’. We all know that most of the time when a prophecy is linking two souls together with such a connection, it has ultimately a purpose of alliance that is generally sealed by a wedding or a hand fasting. »

« Well, you’re quite alright Giles » confirmed his sister trying to figure out where he was going.

« I am heading there » he reassured grinning, perfectly reading through his sister comment. Viviane chuckled at her brother’s perspicacity giving him a nod in encouragement. « This ‘soul mate factor’ as I like to call it » both women smiled at this denomination, amused by his quirky mind « is nearly an obligatory parameter in any magical bonding serving a high purpose, which is the case here considering all the elements I have collected until now. »

« What do you mean Giles, that our daughter has changed her mind about being attracted to men? Or that we are here in presence of the exception that confirms the rule, that this bonding does not involve love!» there was a mixture of incredulity and wonder in the Lady seer’s voice.

« No what I mean is the third choice » he smiled knowingly.

« The third choice? » echoed the queens in unison.

« Yes! What if love was the key » Viviane was about to comment when he silenced her with his hand « what if Tara and Will were meant to be? I say this because something rather unexpected was brought to my attention earlier. Ladies our guest’s name isn’t really Will. » Both women looked surprised and tad worried by this new revelation. « In reality Will’s full name is Willow! Yes you heard me well, Will is a girl !»



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« His name is Gandar » she smiled affectionately « he is one of the descendant from the Great Dragons that fought alongside our troops during the last war. »

« Wow » was all the redhead could muster staring at the enormous ‘beast’.

« His father, Tydor, was the lead of the night clan, he was four hundred years when he died on the battle field, his son was only 25 at that time, nearly a baby in term of dragon longevity »

« Wow » Willow didn’t seem able to say more, she was so shocked, first by this unexpected apparition, then by what it had interrupted …interrupted? There was nothing interruptible!! Or was there?… she flushed as the image of their potential kiss came back to her …who am I kidding? There was no kissage on the way… she sighed internally, insecurities were not ready to give her a break yet. Then suddenly realizing what the princess had just said she exclaimed « four hundred years!!! » she looked directly into the patient though amused blue orbs, widening her own in surprise.

« Yes » Tara confirmed giving her trademark lopsided grin which was officially becoming Willow’s favorite thing ever « dragons can live very old, some were reported to have reached a thousand year, but I personally never met one of this age, most of the oldest died while fighting » she looked saddened and the redhead instinctively reached for her hand.

« I’m sorry » muttered Willow squeezing the blonde’s hand lightly before letting go begrudgingly.

Lifting her shimmering eyes to look into the redhead’s ones she smiled tenderly and said « Thank you ». Willow could not contain a soft gasp at the intensity of the emotions present in those beautiful azure orbs.
Regaining her composure the princess went on « Dragons don’t generally die of old age, they perish through diseases, accidents and more commonly by the hand of men » there was a tinge of regret in her voice. Cruelty wasn’t demons’ prerogative, men knew their way around it all too well.

« Men can be terrible predators, in fact I would say they’re the worst in this world, I meant in my world, I don’t know about yours » the redhead trailed off blushing.

« Well in my world they’re quite high on the list, and if you consider that in opposition to demons they have the choice to be good because they have a soul, I would say they are right on top of it. » Tara was a gentle soul but she despised violence and cruelty, and didn’t hide her true feelings about it.

Willow was amazed, for every time she thought she reached a fair definition of the princess personality she realized with admiration that there were many more fascinating facets that she had to discover.
Tearing her eyes away form the beautiful blonde she looked once more at the young dragon, this time wondering the reason of the latest commotion. « Where was this explosion coming from ?» she inquired innocently.

« Gandar is training with the knights » she answered as if it explained everything.

« Ah! » exclaimed the redhead instinctively, but she soon realized that this hadn’t cleared anything up « uh…sorry I…don’t see how it explains the blast » she was playing with her right foot, wriggling her hands together like a ten years old in front of a quantum physics equation.

« You’ll see in a minute » was the enigmatic reply …anytime I think that she’s done or said the most adorable thing in the most adorable way, I’m blown away by how outdated this statement was…she’s so cute there’s no words for it… she gazed adoringly at the redhead profile while the other girl gave all her attention to the outside’s animations.

Suddenly the dragon breathed fire through is snout but lost his balance in the process and the flames went in another direction reaching a small pile of barrels that scurrying men where trying to move out from the field. Seeing the fire going directly their way, they left everything behind and skedaddled out of reach. When the flames came in contact with the casks, a big explosion ensued causing once again a similar shake in the library.
« What was that? » questioned the stunned redhead.

« Well, Gandar is a bit… how to say that … clumsy » Tara giggled amused « he is still quite young and much inexperienced in term of breathing weapons. Apparently the knights didn’t plan on the eventuality of such a wrong shot, they should have though, because I’m pretty sure the barrels there were full of fairy powder » she shook her head at the silliness of the situation.

« Breathing weapons? » she didn’t know weapons could be breathed. She let out on the fairy powder comment though knowing very well that she had still much more to learn about this world.

« Well, dragons use their breath to defend themselves against attacks. They are three major breathing weapons, fire, ice and acid. They use them in function of the situation but also depending on their alimentation. I don’t know all the mechanisms but I’m sure that uncle Giles would be pleased to explain everything to you in details. » the princess didn’t know Willow very well yet but one thing seemed to be evident about her, she was curious and in the good sense of the term. She apparently was very similar to her uncle when it came to the thirst of knowledge …smart girls are hot… she ginned mischievously.

Wow what was that? … thought the redhead at the impish smile and the near feral look in the other girl’s eyes …I don’t know what it was but it’s quite arousing! Oh god, how am I supposed to keep my lips to myself
« Thank you » Willow sputtered with a flushing face.

Score … she though victoriously … I so love to make her blush!... « I’ll present you to Gandar later » she proposed amiably.

« What!! » the redhead cried panicked « uh no no, I rather not if you don’t mind » at the deflated expression on the blonde’s face Willow explained her reticence. « Well, I….I’m afraid of horses you see, and this » pointing at the unsuspecting creature « looks like a giant flying horse, with a ‘breathing weapons’ bonus » she babbled animatedly trying desperately to make her point.
The princess could not contain a hearty laugh at the cuteness that was the redhead.

« Willow, you’re so cute » she answered unconsciously through her giggles. She blushed at her words when she realized she had said them aloud. But seeing the widest smile ever on the redhead’s face she felt reassured that her outburst had not caused uneasiness between them. So she went on her fervent explanation « Dragons are really sweet creatures, you don’t have to be afraid, except if you intend to hurt them. They are totally peaceful. Plus they are intelligent, they communicate with us on a spiritual level. They don’t talk but they found a way to exchange their thoughts and their feelings with mankind. They use something akin to telepathy, it’s a bit different though. »

Listening to Tara’s description opened a new perspective on her beliefs about those fairytales beasts. Willow was curious now and soothed by the words of the princess, she could only agree to her former proposition « alright then, I’ll meet him, but only if you’re with me » she bushed at this admission.

« Deal » concluded the smirking blonde, extending her hand to the redhead in a sign of agreement.

« Deal » confirmed Willow shaking the other girl ‘s hand with resolve.



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Darkness seemed to be incrusted in the scenery, it was a summer morning but it felt like a cold winter night! The mist was so thick around the black fortress than its walls were hidden behind the grey curtain of smoke that concealed eerily the dark preparations taking place behind it.
Hundreds of steeds mounted by soulless horsemen clad in ebony colored armors were trotting out of the castle gaping mouth. The silent though impressive cortege marched with determination towards Silvery Mountains with only a goal, destruction.

At the same moment, a group of men and demons was debating into the throne chamber of Lord Akattla.

« The legions of the Wetlands are on their way to join us your majesty, they will be here in a few days » announced proudly the leader of the Mongho demons.

« Our troops have arrived my lord » exclaimed a blue haired general.

« Well, well, our army will soon be complete » Akattla smiled dangerously and turned his attention to his closest companion.
« You said earlier that you had news for us count Falkor! »

« Yes your highness, our spy has just reported on his latest discovery, apparently the ‘chosen one’ would be human. He hasn’t had the time to learn more about them though, they are under the Queens’ protection already »

« Hmm » the dark lord was lost in his thoughts …the chosen one is human… he sported a disturbing smile as the implications of the ‘dark prophecy’ finally made sense to him. … This is changing my plans considerably… he thought appreciatively while stroking is black and white beard.

« Very well count Falkor, send a missive to your spy, he has to find out more about the chosen one and the reason of their presence in Hemera »

The count bowed his head in understanding and deference « Very well my lord, it will be done »

« Now that this topic is closed, we must establish the troops movements for the final day » everyone in the room nodded their agreement even though it was more an order than a request.



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« Hey Xander, be careful would you » warned his cringing friend.

« Sorry » the younger man apologized shamefully.

« That’s ok, but remember that those blades are extremely sharp » Jesse frowned at the wide gash in his overcoat, the skin was not injured but it was only out of pure luck.

After a good night sleep, Jesse had hoped against all odds that his best friend would have changed his mind and realized that his place was back home with his family. Unfortunately, the young farmer was more determined than ever, so the royal guard had took upon himself to train him for the knights preparation trials. If he couldn’t convince him to change his mind the least he could do was to help him make his dream a reality. The tests were in a week and he wasn’t sure that Xander would be ready in time, but he felt like trying his best to help his friend.
That’s why they were actually engaged in a sword fight which was, in opposition to the pantomimes the farmer used to play in his backyard, actually including real blades! Xander wasn’t that bad at fending off the blows but his beginner’s eagerness when attacking was putting him, and Jesse, in danger. He would have to find a balance, a control in his moves or he wouldn’t stand a round in the contest, even risking serious injuries or worst in the process.

« Alright, real sharp blade, check! » the goofy boy smiled nervously trying to ease some of his discomfort at the embarrassing situation.

« Don’t be ashamed Xan, you’re making mistakes and that’s normal, it’s your first try at a fight and with real swords at that! You’re actually defending yourself pretty well » he knew that the younger boy was prompt at self-depreciation, all he needed was some encouragement.

« Thanks » answered the dark haired man with a wide grin.

« All you need is to take your time and evaluate the situation before plunging into action » some advices were needed « The first step in a fight is to assess the setting, of course in the midst of the battle the time you have for that important stage is next to nothing, but with experience and a lot of practice you will improve your reflexes and your skills. You have to find some control, your weak point is attack, you’re too quick, too impulsive. Now it’s not the end of the world » he added seeing some gloominess pass in the gentle brown eyes of his companion « we just have to concentrate our training on getting you more focused that’s all » he smiled encouragingly and patted the farmer on the shoulder.

« Alright, we’ll do that » confirmed the grinning boy.

« But for now we’ll make a pause. I have to join my section for the festivities, our group will be in charge of maintaining order through the day. » Today was devoted to the popular celebration of Princess Tara’s 21st birthday.

« Alright then, I’ll just hang around a little longer, I want to check out on the Knights trainings. »

« Sure thing Xan, have fun » Jesse waved him goodbye and ran to join his troop formation.

The young farmer sat on a nearby wooden coffer and placed his right elbow on his leg bending his forearm to rest his chin in his hand. He would certainly learn a lot by watching the confirmed knights duel with various weapons. So he stayed there, attentive to their every move all the while dreaming he was part of the ‘gang’.
Approximately half an hour had passed when a shadow appeared to his left, towering over him. He straightened up from his curled up position to look at the looming figure.

« Hello …. » the other man seemed in search of his name so he supplied politely.

« Xander, my name is Xander » he stood up to face his interlocutor, extending his hand in salutation.

« Yes, yes, of course, I remember » peeved by his own incapacity at finding back the young man’s name, Wesley brushed off the presentation diving straight into the motive of his visit.
« I came here to talk to you about the young redhead that arrived here with you the other night »

Xander eyed him suspiciously « what about Will? »

« I was told that this Will was your cousin »

« Well yes! »

« Can you tell me more about him? »

« I have nothing more to say, Will is my cousin that’s it » Xander realized that Wesley was not aware of Willow’s womanhood yet and it was maybe for the best. This guy was giving him the creeps. He didn’t like his attitude, he was being pompous and condescending. Plus Xander didn’t like his sudden interest in Willow, didn’t Lord Giles told him to let go and that he and princess Tara would take care of Will!
This guy was fishing for information he wasn’t concerned about and Xander wasn’t the one who would give them to him.

« But you can at least tell me the reason why your cousin came here for, Jesse told me that I had to help a friend. At least I could be informed of the problem » he was miffed by this ’peasant’ effrontery.

« This is not necessary anymore, the princess herself is taking care of my cousin’s problem, plus this is Will’s choice to tell you about this if he wants to, I have no right to interfere. » this guy was really pushy and in a totally disturbing way, the young farmer frowned at his impolite attitude.

« I don’t appreciate…. » the offended chamberlain was about to protest about the boy’s uncooperative behavior when a running soldier came to a halt at their level completely out of breath and red like a ripe tomato.
« What do you want soldier » asked an irritated Wesley.

« The….queens…..have…requested your…presence…my lord » taking a deep breath he finished his sentence « the festivities will start …in a few minutes ».

Turning is attention back to Xander, the chamberlain addressed him one more time « our conversation is not yet finished » he declared with authority.

« I’m afraid you’re wrong » stated the farmer firmly « my lord » he added before bowing shortly.

Turning briskly on his heels the older man left the courtyard with a huff muttering under his breath some words of anger.

Shaking his head in amazement Xander had not seen a figure approaching from behind.
« Hey » said the voice.
Jumping at the surprise, the young man turned around to face an amused Willow.
« Sorry » she said, slightly picking out her tongue from between her lips. But one thing was sure, she was not sorry, it was clearly showing with the mirth twinkling in her eyes.

« Well then you’re forgiven » answered a mock hurt Xander quickly sporting his trademark goofy grin.
« Glad to see you Will » he said giving her a quick hug.

Slightly taken aback by his impulsive gesture she didn’t hug him back but she didn’t push him away either. Xander was a gentle soul and affectionate so it wasn’t hard to accept his warm greetings, but to give them back was still an issue for her. She was like a wounded animal, it would take time to trust again.

« Glad to see you too » she smiled at the young man.

« I thought you were with princess Tara » he was a bit surprised to see her here, but nonetheless really pleased to meet the redhead again.

« We were together earlier, but she had to leave for the celebration, I should stay out of the frontline for the moment so I decided I would come here to spend time with my new friend » she explained with a big smile.

Xander smiled too, happy to see that the redhead wanted to spend time with him. She didn’t have to really! She could have totally ignored him after he had brought her to the castle, she didn’t need him anymore. But deep inside he knew she wasn’t like that and he was happy to have a friend like her.

« Wasn’t it this Wesley guy talking with you a minute ago ?» she asked frowning.

« Yes » he answered with a tinge of bitterness « I swear this man is a real weasel »

« Yeah I don’t like him either » she stated with some disgust, remembering the other night when he had the impudence to contradict Tara. Thinking about the princess brought a grin to her lips and a dreamy look in her eyes. But soon her curiosity took over again. « What did he want? »

« He wanted me to tell him more about my cousin » he signed quotation marks with his fingers at the word cousin.

« Really! » she sounded concerned.

« Don’t worry I didn’t tell him anything » he reassured with resolve « I totally brushed him off, he was pissed I can tell » he chuckled as the images of a grumbling chamberlain came back to mind.

« Thank you Xander » she was relieved though to be honest not surprised by her friend discretion. But she was dubious that Wesley would stop here with his investigations, plus there was this Lord Quentin he had mentioned yesterday. This guy seemed very important and also apparently Wesley’s mentor. She should learn more about those two men, she didn’t trust them at all.
« I think we should keep an eye on him, and on this Lord Quentin too » she proposed to the farmer.

« I’ll try to get some information about them, you stay put alright! I don’t want you to risk anything, plus it will be easier for me to snoop around without being discovered. I have a bad impression about this Wesley, his intentions are no good. » Xander was determined to get the bottom of this and he would protect Willow from their possible conspiracies.

« Thank you Xander, you’re a sweetie » she smiled thankfully eliciting a deep blush from the young farmer.

« You’re welcome »

« By the way, did you see that huge dragon! » her eyes were still wide with a mixture of terror and amazement as she started the narrative of the latest event.





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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby RageMore7 » Sun Sep 04, 2005 9:35 pm

omg there was almost :wtkiss but it didn't happen!! why not??? omg i cant stand the angst!! it's killing me!! more please?

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Sep 04, 2005 11:53 pm

Happy to see an update on this.

The tension between the girls is so evident, and it is time for them to do something about it. :wink

As everyone else, I have a bad feeling about Wesley.
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby viximon » Mon Sep 05, 2005 4:32 am

I'm here again. I couldn't lose any chap now. Wonderful work on and on :bow .

They almost kiss, almost! Lips almost touching, breath to breath, noses inches apart but ...NOoooooo they didn't :gnome You're cruel to your fans, snif snif.
But I forgive you 'cause there were plenty of hipercute scenes and naughty thoughts :-D

Gandar is adorable, I can't help it but viewing it that way, all young and clumpsy :lol . Will the dragon play a rol with our girls? I hope so.

I wonder why the choosen been a human means anything to the bad guys :hmm

Ops, I'm late! I have to go. Anyway, great chap, continue soon I will be waiting
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby cosmic dancer » Mon Sep 05, 2005 12:36 pm

A beautifully written update with lots of angst! :bounce It was well worth waiting for :dance

Gandor sounds like a really cute 'baby' dragon. I hope we'll see more of him :)

Lord Akattla and his allies sound more scary by the update, they'd better not hurt either Willow or Princess Tara. :no

I can't decide if a believe that Lord Wesley is actualy working for the 'baddies' or if he just annoys people lots with his pompous nature and thats why they don't want to tell him anything :lol

This is an excellent story, and I'll look forward tro reading the next update when ever it is ready. :)
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby spells42 » Mon Sep 05, 2005 3:30 pm

Happy to see an update to this fic. Liked the interaction between W/T. The 'chosen one' is a bit different here - I think Willow's going to have to learn to control her powerful magic in this reality to protect Tara and her mother's 'queendom', huh?
Looking forward to the next update.
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby grimlock72 » Mon Sep 05, 2005 3:54 pm

I wonder why that army of Akattla would cause problems, sounds like he has tried stuff like this before. Surely the good guys have an army as well ? :)

Speaking of army, I estimate Xander would need at least 2 years of training to become a sufficient soldier. He is indeed much to impulsive, esp. when fighting in groups. I can't actually think of an army function were impulsiveness would be good.. :lol.

Yeah if Willow fears horsies it stands to reason she fear a dragon :) Do dragon have large teeth by the way? Do the people of the Tara-kingdom ride dragons during combat?

Typically Tara to care so much for the dragons, no doubt they like her as well (good allies :-). Kissing at that time wouldn't have solved much anyway, likely just added more confusion. It's not like Willow has been living in a very lesbian-friendly kingdom the last twenty years or so :)

I doubt Tara indeed is the 'naughtiest girl ever' with Jenny being around, heh.

I don't know why the Chosen One being a human would surprise Akattla and why changes things since I don't know how they were to start with :) We'll probably figure that out later. How far away is this Akattla from the kingdom anyway? Will he reach it during the festivities ?? That would be lousy planning though, many if not ALL soldiers will be on duty that day.

Poor Gandar has to learn a lot of combat skills, he reminds me a bit of Xander :). Speaking of learning I'm becoming worried about the time left for Willow to learn whatever she has to learn in order to keep the kingdom save. Clearly Akattla isn't waiting around, while I would guess it would take years for Willow to properly master magics on a usefull level... bit troubling that.

Giles is annoyingly vague at times indeed :party Feel like screaming 'get to the point already' when people talk like that. Not that *I* am impatient or something, noooo... :devil

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby Tawilove » Fri Sep 09, 2005 3:15 pm

Hello dear kittens...sorry this isn't an update...but here comes the individual replies to your wonderful feedback....thank you also to all the readers (that leave feedback or not) you rock :party


RageMore7 :
Hey there,
Nice to see your feedback again :bounce ….sorry about little evil me but I kinda crave angst, well at least to write angst….. :-D
I’m working on chapter nine and I promise that things will evolve between our girls….they are still a little insecure though and need some time to trust their newly acquired feelings.
Thanks for reading and stay tune!

The Rose24 :
Happy to read your feedback :)
The tension is a great material for clinffhangery goodness isn’t it! :-D
They won’t suffer to long though…..they’ll soon be united but….angst is good :devil
I’m glad you like so far, so stay tune chapter nine is on its way….I’m increasing gradually the level of exchanges and contacts between Willow and Tara until I reach apotheosis.
Wesley is a complex character…but somehow it’s not spoiling to say that he is kinda creepy…will he be any threat that is still a mystery for now (well a mystery to the readers anyway :lol )

viximon :
Nice to read you again, I’m addicted to your feedback :bounce :bounce
I’m sooooo cruel I know :-D …..I totally apologize for the angst level….uhhh or maybe not :devil
Phew !!! I’m lucky you forgave me :flower ….really….cuteness and naughtiness are about to become a constant here, if you see what I mean so buckle up kitten!! :glasses

Gandar is a cutie indeed, I love the idea of kind and brave dragons that come to help humans instead of the cruel and sanguinary roles they often played in the fairytales.
Will he play a role with our girls…*thinks thoroughly* :hmm …you’ll see :lol
The chosen one being human is a factor that is clearly important for the bad guy…why?….well do you really expect me to spoil :p
Thanks for taking time to leave feedback, it’s always a pleasure to read you! :flower

cosmic dancer :
A beautifully written update with lots of angst! It was well worth waiting for


Wow thank you so much… :blush :blush :blush :blush :blush

Gandor is just the cutest :x …and you’ll definitely see more from him….he will be a mascot of sorts…I’m definitely getting attached to his character as I write.

The baddies are indeed scary and not well intended with Willow and Tara …even though their ominous plot is not unveiled yet, it will be soon….for the moment I keep on sowing some dark filled passages along the way...giving some enigmatic clues. I’m concentrating the first half of the story on what happens in the castle and more specifically between our girls…the extensive paragraphs with the bad guys will come later.

This Wesley is very much like his alter ego from the show, weak, coward and a somehow not very wise went it comes to chose a side!! The « he’s a frigging annoying weasel » hypothesis you developed is cracking me up :lmao but is also very true…that doesn’t mean your other conclusion was totally wrong mwa mwa mwa mwa…..I won’t tell!! :devil

Thank you for your great feedback and compliments….I’m always happy to read your nice comments :bow . I’m working slowly but surely on part 9...stay tune!

spells42 :
Hey there, :wave

Thank you for your feedback :)!! I’m glad you liked W/T interactions, I try to do them justice as much as possible.
Yes indeed, the ‘chosen one’ has a drastically different meaning in this fic compared to the show. Willow is still very disoriented from the ‘sliding into a brand new world full of magic’ experience and this will be somehow epic for her to master her powers but she unfortunately will not be given a lot of time to learn the basics! Will it be enough for her to help Tara and her family? Is magic the only important factor for an eventual victory against the forces of darkness?
Well you’ll see, so stay tune. :flower

grimlock72 :
Wow Grimmy (may I call you that?) your feedback is so extensively great!!! I’m really glad to read all your pertinent questions and of course I’ll do my best to answer most of them….the rest will be unveiled when time comes….:-D

Well, indeed the armies of Akattla have lost against the land of light, but a lot of destruction ensued on both sides, and a lot of powerful allies of the good (as the dragons for example) paid a heavy tribute to this war.
Of course forces have been reconstructing on both sides, but it took time! Plus, Akattla has lost the last war because the forces of darkness never allied together at that time in opposition to the forces of good. This time however the chances are more even because both sides have strong alliances on the way.

About Xander, I totally agree with you it will take time to make a good soldier out of him, but I think I’ve not expressed myself well enough when talking about knights preparation, so excuse me for leading you on the wrong path :blush . Xander wants to enter the « knights preparation » as for a « knights school » of sorts….this preparation will take years before he becomes a knight.
I wanted to have a Xander not yet ready, uncertain, untrained but totally devoted to the cause to face all the up coming events.

Dragons (in this fic at least) do have big sharp teeth very much crocodile style but bigger of course….the pressure they can put in a bite is enormous and they can easily break steal. The people of Hemera do not ride the dragons, well they can if the necessity would present itself but the dragons are mostly living in society with each other and help human for combats and some heavy works… they are powerful allies to the clan of good, but they are not « domesticated » as horses are. They are not seen as animals by the people of Hemera who soon acknowledge their intelligence….but oops I’m spoiling spoiling spoiling here so I’ll stop!! :p

Kissing at that time wouldn't have solved much anyway, likely just added more confusion. It's not like Willow has been living in a very lesbian-friendly kingdom the last twenty years or so


You’re totally right, at least that’s how I see things here, even if Tara is very aware of her attraction for women since she was a teenager (plus she has not suffered the gay bashing in her world), Willow is still trying to grasp the concept. Of course she is conscious now of her attraction to Tara but she is still having a hard time dealing with it. Jumping to the physical level of a very young though powerful relationship is a bit risky for now. But fear not smooches will come soon enough… :x


The « human » nature of ‘chosen one’ is still a mystery for the readers ….but you’ll learn more about it gradually.
About Akattla nearness from Hemera, well his strategy is not to attack Hemera first, cause this kingdom is one of the strongest of the land of light. His plan is to destroy first the border kingdoms from the land of light standing between the land of dark and Hemera. I’ll develop more the strategy along the way. About the festivities, well nothing real bad will happen that day, but you’ll see very soon what I’m talking about. ;-)

Akattla isn’t waiting around you’re right, and a beginner like Willow isn’t standing a chance alone but she’s not alone and her ‘chosen one’ nature will be the key, but you‘re right she‘ll need years to control her powers with balance and wisdom but here, the urgency won‘t let her be ready….just like Xander (love and courage can conquer all)….but I’ll stay enigmatic still, wouldn’t want to spoil you completely :-D

Giles is annoyingly vague at times indeed Feel like screaming 'get to the point already' when people talk like that. Not that *I* am impatient or something, noooo...
 

I so understand what you mean :lmao :lmao :lmao

Thank you again for reading...your comments are always greatly appreciated :flower




Thank you again to all of you, I'm writing chapter nine but I will go a bit slow, things are getting quite complex now...I don't want to mess up with my marvelous plot :lmao


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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby beanie » Sat Sep 10, 2005 8:10 am

Mmphargenslarmenmeeeeeerrrrrrrrr . . .

That's my way of ripping out my hair for not dropping a note or two sooner! I am truly a phargenslarmenmeeerrrrrrrrr, whatever that may be. But rest assured! It's baaaddd.

Dragons! Excuse the squee but dragons! Especially cute and clumsy ones. Do I see Willow's other dragon-y half? I think so! Which will be tres difficult seeing as Willow's frightened of horses

with a ‘breathing weapons’ bonus.


Heeeheeeeheeeeheeeeeheeeeheee. Hee. :lmao

And Wesley is just unmentionable. Like underwear except there's nothing but pure pure undiluted crappiness underneath. Oh so he's a dia-poo.

Your whole beginning concept of gay-friendly kingdom in a far-off time is brilliant though. I find it ridiculouslly humorous that olden times Tara is from a far more comfortable and open society as compared to future Willow. Oh the irony.

So to sum up: You're fabulous. This story's brilliant. What's next mon amie?
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby Bug23 » Sun Sep 11, 2005 8:14 am

I love this fic ... its great ... :bounce
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby Artemis » Wed Sep 14, 2005 3:46 am

I love the start of this chapter, how the moment of Tara touching Willow's lips went on, and on, and on - the attraction in the air felt as thick as chocolate (I figured I might as well pick something tasty for it to be as thick as). I also really enjoy how Tara's more self-aware about her attraction - while Willow's brain is running around in circles, Tara's making wry comments to herself. It's clear she's the one who's had plenty of time to get used to her feelings for women in general, and that the idea of having the hots for a woman isn't new to her, even if the strength of said hots is. Willow, on the other hand, is completely in the deep end - hilariously so :lol

I liked the talk they had about dragons, and how Tara's strength of character showed when she considered people's cruelty. She's no weakling, and has no trouble voicing her opinions when she feels strongly - it's very sexy :x as well as admirable.
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby WillowRulez » Mon Dec 26, 2005 12:01 pm

I am a fan of bumping threads for 'neglected' fics, sorry.
I just reread this and wondered when you are gonna update :P
I really like this idea and the way you write Xan is just too cute hehe.
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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby grimlock72 » Mon Dec 26, 2005 4:22 pm

Oh.. there it is, this is the story about displaced Willow and the cute pet-dragon... Indeed it has been a longish time without update. There are at least two readers waiting here you know :P :wave

Willow adjusting to the totally different world should be much fun ahead.

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Re: New Fic : Magic Calling (Update 09/04)

Postby viximon » Tue Dec 27, 2005 3:27 am

Hey there Julie, about what Grimmy said....make with me three readers.

So pleeease come back with more chapters. Will you?
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