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Re: feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Fri Jul 02, 2004 3:51 pm

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so as i think i've read once or twice :p , you kinda like feedback!




Who me? :fallen Not at all, I dont know where you got that idea.. :lmao Thanks for leaving feedback AmbeRocks, Im working on updates right now, as I mentioned before, I think the fic will be ending within the next few updates :paranoid but Ill try and get some Willow/ Tara roomie goodness in there before it ends ;)

Thanks again,



Stacey xx

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Re: Feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Jul 26, 2004 5:43 am

Hey all...yeah I know I said Id post an update *ducks from flying objects* but this is just to let you know that there should be an update very very soon. Its just a matter of getting the words out of my head and down onto paper. Well, keyboard. Anyway, soon! I promise :wink

Thanks so much for reading everybody, and for the very encouraging feedback!



Stacey xx

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UPDATE chapter 37

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Jul 26, 2004 7:23 am

Hey kittens! Yep its true, I finally have a finished update:lol

It's not that long, but hopefully you'll like it. It's been hard coming back to this fic, as Ive been writing another one, and Ive been reall busy...but I vowed to finish this, and finish it I will! Only one or two chapters left, and thats the end. So, enough babbling from me, here is chapter 37...

Enjoy! I hope... :paranoid



Chapter 37.



Willow’s nose involuntarily twitched as it detected a familiar smell. Drifting from her sleepy state, her emerald eyes opened to meet ocean blue ones, watching her lovingly.

Her body still groggy with sleep, she rolled over, flinging one arm across Tara’s waist and burying her head in the crook of the blonde’s neck.

“What’s that smell…mmm…yummy…” the redhead murmured.

Tara ran her fingers through her lover’s hair, holding back an amused chuckle at Willow’s half-awake antics.

“Its breakfast baby, coffee and pancakes,” she smiled. “I called room service; I hope you don’t mind…”

“Nope, don’t mind...smells yummy….me like room service…” Willow mumbled against Tara’s neck.

“I think room service liked you too….he could hear you saying something in your sleep about raining frogs and monkey umbrellas,” Tara smiled teasingly as Willow groaned and held her tighter.



It wasn’t until Willow’s nose detected the scent of coffee moving closer, and the distinctive sound of Tara’s lips taking a sip of the warm liquid, that she lifted her head and smiled. Flashing her girlfriend her cutest grin and wiggling her eyebrows for good measure, she trailed her fingers along Tara’s bare arm,

“Is there any for me…?”

“Of course baby,” Tara reached over to the bedside table, taking a cup of coffee and handing it to Willow, who sat up slightly to take a sip.



As they drank their coffee and ate their pancakes, the two girls sat in comfortable silence, throwing side long glances at each other and smiling contentedly. As she swallowed her last mouthful of pancake, Tara looked up at Willow and couldn’t hold back her soft laughter as she saw something she’d failed to notice before.

“What? What’s so funny baby..?” Willow asked, amused.

“It’s just...erm…you still have chocolate on your nose!”

“Chocolate?” Willow asked, slightly confused.

“Yes chocolate,” Tara confirmed as she leant over slightly and placed a soft kiss on the tip of Willow’s nose “Don’t tell me you’ve already forgotten about the fun we had with chocolate sauce last night..?”

Her girlfriend’s eyes widened as she realized that in her sleepy state the events of the previous night had indeed slipped her mind.

“Oh, *that* chocolate! Mmmm”

“Yes that chocolate missy,” Tara teased with an adorable lopsided grin, “I think we’d better take a long hot shower before we go anywhere, make sure there aren’t any traces leftover…” she trailed off suggestively.

“Oh definitely,” Willow grinned. “What time is it anyway?”

“Erm….its actually 12.30,” Tara blushed. “I guess we wore ourselves out last night.”

“12.30?!” Willow exclaimed, interrupting Tara’s trail of thought. “How could I let us sleep ‘til 12.30? Right now we should be on the beach, taking a walk and then having a romantic picnic for lunch…my whole itinerary is ruined!”

Tara raised am eyebrow at her girlfriend’s dramatic outburst.

“Itinerary?”

A blush quickly covered Willow’s cheeks as she reached towards the bedside table, opening the draw and fumbling for a piece of paper. Handing it to Tara, she watched the blonde carefully for a reaction. Scanning the paper, Tara chewed her lip half in puzzlement, and half amusement.

“You even scheduled drinks and bathroom breaks,” she commented dryly.

Willow scrambled lower on the bed, pulling the covers up over her head in embarrassment.

“Mmmhmm….”

Tara smiled and slid down the bed too, joining Willow under the sheets. Kissing her girlfriend’s cheek lovingly, she wrapped her arms around her waist.

“Don’t be shy baby, I think it’s sweet.”

“Y-you do..?” The redheads self consciousness was betrayed by her slight stutter.

“Of course, but I was kinda thinking…..after we’re cleaned up and everything…do you think we could go home? I mean, I’ve had a wonderful time here love, but right now all I want to do is go home, to our home.”

Willow smiled at this, whispering “Our home” to feel the words roll over her lips.

“Of course baby, let’s go home.”



***




Just over an hour later, and Willow and Tara were finally showered and dressed, and in the midst of packing. Folding up a blue shirt, Tara packed it into the top of her bag, pushing down the clothes that were inside firmly and zipping it up at the same time.

“All done,” she grinned.

Willow zipped up her bag as she heard Tara’s words, “Me too.”



The two girls smiled at each other, both knowing that this was a momentous day for them. Yes, they had slept in the same room, the same bed, for many nights since they had first gotten together. But this was totally different, their first big commitment. Today they would be moving in together, it would be their room; and the two girls couldn’t think of anything more perfect.



Entwining their hands together, the two girls made their way down to reception, knowing grins on their faces. Willow handed Tara the keys to Xander’s car, so that the blonde could go put her bag into the boot while she handed their room keys into reception and paid the bill. Having paid, Willow left the hotel with a swing in her step, her eyes scanning the car park for the blue Citroen.



Her emerald eyes instead focused on the sight of her girlfriend bending over to place her bag into the boot, pushing it as far back as it would go. The jeans that Tara was wearing were clinging in all the right places, giving Willow a very nice view indeed. Completely unaware, Tara stood up straight and smiled as she saw her girlfriend moving towards the car, her bag over her shoulder. It wasn’t until the redhead got closer that Tara noticed the somewhat voracious look in Willow’s eyes, a look which she had seen many times.



Before she knew what was happening, she was being pushed up against the car and Willow’s lips were upon her own, kissing her with slow, barely controlled passion. Loosely wrapping her arms around Willow’s waist, their lips met again and again, igniting the flame between them once more. Placing one last soft kiss on Tara’s full lips, Willow rested her head on Tara’s shoulder, sighing softly.

“I can’t wait to get you home...” she said under her breath, causing Tara’s breath to hitch. Smiling mischievously as Willow saw her comment have the desired effect, she pulled away and threw her bag into the boot with Tara’s, slamming the door shut.

Taking their seats in the car, Tara reached for her seatbelt and pulled the strap tight across her,

“Do you think we should have called Buffy? I mean, she’s not expecting us back until later tonight.” Tara clipped the seatbelt in and looked up at her girlfriend, who smiled back at her, turning the key to start the engine.

“I’m sure it’ll be fine, she’ll probably be with Faith somewhere anyway.”

Tara nodded and Willow squeezed her girl’s hand in hers reassuringly before putting the car into gear and moving out of the car park.





***




Meanwhile in Sunnydale, Buffy and Faith were surrounded by half filled boxes and suitcases. There was very little packing being done, however, as Faith was pinning Buffy to the bed.

“Faith…” *Kiss* “I should be packing right now…they’re due back today…” *kiss*

“Relax B, there’s plenty of time” *kiss*

“Um…ok then…” *kiss* “Your kisses are very convincing” *kiss*

“I know, you can’t resist me”

Buffy slipped out from underneath her girlfriend, flipping her over and straddling her hips, dipping her head to kiss Faith’s lips heatedly, “You’re right, I can’t resist….”





***






Parking the car outside the UC Sunnydale dorms, Willow turned and faced her girlfriend, who smiled warmly at her.

“I guess this is it…home” she smiled, a little nervously.

“Yep,” Willow agreed. “Home…”

Tapping her fingers on the steering wheel, she realized that she was as nervous as Tara.

“Do you wanna grab some coffee before we go up baby?” she asked, hoping to dispel some of the tension that had built within the car.

Taking a deep breath, Tara reached for her girlfriend’s hand, entwining their fingers and lightly tracing her skin with her thumb,

“We have plenty of time for coffee sweetie, lets just get up there and move into our room first,” she smiled, her blue eyes sparkling as her lips formed the words ‘our room’.

Leaning closer, Willow kissed Tara’s lips tenderly, the tip of her tongue grazing her lips with promise. “Ok baby, let’s go.”





***




As the girls unloaded the car and moved up the stairs towards Willow and Buffy’s room, Faith and Buffy were still surrounded by half packed boxes, although this time they were very much naked, clothes scattered across the room. Buffy was trailing kisses along Faith’s neck and down her body, as her hand caressed her side, slowly moving towards Faith’s breasts. It had been two hours since they’d given up on packing, and yet the blonde was showing no signs of running out of energy any time soon; her teasing was driving Faith wild.

“Fuck, B…no more teasing….” The brunette arched her back into Buffy’s touch, completely unaware that outside the door….



***




Willow and Tara had reached their room, and Tara was smiling shyly as she retrieved the small box which was nestled safely within her bag, containing her key. Locking eyes with her girlfriend, she pushed the key into place, and turned it.





TBC.







Soooooooo......... :banana Feedback? :fallen

Edited by: willowsgirl at: 7/26/04 6:28 am
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Re: UPDATE chapter 37

Postby Spighy » Mon Jul 26, 2004 7:46 am

Mummy!! :D You updated!! Yay! :bounce



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“What’s that smell…mmm…yummy…” the redhead murmured
:lmao :lmao :lmao



I loved this chapter, but our girls are going to be slightly surprised when they enter the room....:eek

All this talking of moving in together made me wonder....are W&T going to get a rabbit? :angel :whistle :yikes



Can't wait for more :pinky

Your kiddo :shy

Hello *crash*

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Re: feedback

Postby intricate mirage » Mon Jul 26, 2004 9:36 am

Hey baby :heart



I love the update baby :love It's been a long time coming ;) Always looking forward to reading your writings/stories love *loving smile* Definitely looking forward to reading how this story ends finally, it'll be my most treasured story of all time, and you and I both know why :heart Can't wait to be waking up beside you in the future love, a very near future I may add too*sappy grin* :heart ;) And *ahem* kiddo, our sweet smug sneaky kiddo, I honestly doubt W&T are gonna have a pet rabbit ;) I love you Stace :heart for always baby :heart



Cass xx






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Re: Feedback

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Jul 26, 2004 11:16 am

OH finally an update wooohooooooo:bounce :bounce

I hope W&T wont get a shock :lol and geez Buffy shouldnt tease Faith so much :p



Cant wait for the next part, this was great:party



Cu:wave

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Re: Feedback

Postby DreamsToDream » Mon Jul 26, 2004 1:24 pm

:bounce Haha..UhOh! Will and Tara Are Gonna Walk In On Faith And Buffy? Doing It In Their Room? :sheep What Are They Gonna think? Yikes LoL

D2D





Dreams To Dream In The Dark Of The Night, When The World Goes Wrong, I Can Still Make It Right...- Dreams To Dream



I Don't Know About You Miss Kitty,But I Feel A Whole Lot Yummier. - Catwoman

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Re: Feedback

Postby sam darls » Mon Jul 26, 2004 3:18 pm

OOh Stace you updated..yay!! How are you hun, you good? Wonderful update, so great :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Tue Jul 27, 2004 3:07 am

Hey everybody, thanks so much for the feedback, you made me a very happy kitten :D Ill be working on an update very soon, so not too long to wait. Here's some replies...





Spighy- Thanks for the feedback kiddo! Im sorry to say that Willow and Tara won’t be getting a rabbit anytime soon, we’ll just leave that to your mummies instead :lol

Thanks for reading, yay that you liked it and yes indeedy, big surprise for them to come :wink



Intricate mirage- Hey you, thanks so much for your comments baby, though they’re more about us than the story :wink I can assure you that this will be my most treasured story too, as it brought me to you. I love you too Cass, for always xx



Stroke of luck- Hey there! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback, Im so glad you liked the update :) Yep there may just be a shock instore for W/T, and Buffy shouldn’t tease so much? Why…? Teasing’s good! More soon



DreamsToDream- Yikes indeedy, it looks like they might catch them up to something doesn’t it? And what are they gonna think? Well Im quite sure they won’t be joining in, so I guess you’ll have to wait and see :fallen Thanks, glad you liked it :D



Sam Darls- Hey Sam, Im good thanks :D and woohoo you liked the update! :D Thanks for reading, take care x





Stacey xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

Edited by: willowsgirl at: 7/27/04 2:07 am
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Re: Feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Wed Aug 04, 2004 4:46 am

Just to let you kittens know, Im working on the next update, which might just be the last one ever! I promise ill get it to you soon :) Thanks for reading everyone :applause



Stacey xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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Re: Feedback

Postby WickedReds » Wed Aug 11, 2004 11:20 pm

Hey i started reading this on extra flamey... i love this fic...



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”- Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

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Re: Feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Thu Aug 12, 2004 9:15 am

Hey WickedReds, Im glad you liked the story- I totally forgot that Id started posting at that site til last week, so well done for finding it! Oh, and I love your dancing banana for smut :lol A new update soon, the finale! Thanks for leaving feedback, it always put a smile on my face and encourages me to write ;)

Keep reading :devilish



Stace xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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Re: feedback

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Aug 12, 2004 9:23 pm

oh poor willow and tara...this is going to get interesting...i cant wait to see how faith and buffy are gonna try and 'cover up'...should be fun...keep up the great work!



~mel:kdevil

Willow: It's horrible! That's me as a vampire? I'm so evil and... skanky. And I think I'm kinda gay.

Buffy: Willow, just remember, a vampire's personality has nothing to do with the person it was



Sure it doesn't

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Re: Feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:41 am

alysagoddess85- Hey there, thanks so much for leaving feedback :D Yep youre right, willow and tara are definitely in for a bit of a surprise :lmao im in the process of writing the next chapter- the final chapter! so more soon ;)



Stacey xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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The Start of Forever

Postby behindhereyes » Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:02 pm

Stacey...



This is story is amazing :bow . The way you allow the emotions to be laid bare is mesmerizing. You have such a gift for writing W/T, you really get what makes them special... and you so get your readers. I've enjoyed it all, and I'm feeling very fortunate to have found this.



behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

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Re: The Start of Forever

Postby BFR from Paris » Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:10 pm

Previously, on "The Start of Forever"...



Faith & Buffy, who are rolling around naked in Willow & Tara's bedroom instead of being unpacking, are about to be busted by Willow & Tara who are coming to their new home with the intention of doing some rolling around of their own...



You're up, Stacey :grin

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Re: feedback

Postby alysagoddess85 » Fri Nov 05, 2004 9:26 pm

wow definately thought there was the final update..ya know...the nice smutty one with the naked slayers and willow and tara consecrating their new dorm...stuff like that...guess not though...and there hasnt been any update in a while!! i saw one of the last comments up there was from me!! back when i was a little flaming o with only 31 comments...my my...so long ago...which means UPDATE!! hehe..



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Feedback

Postby willowsgirl » Sat Nov 06, 2004 2:50 am

*steps into the thread with a very guilty look on her face*

Um....Im sorry! :blush Things have been kinda hectic for me, with work and my girl moving closer to me, but I do have some of the chapter written and I promise it will be finished soon! Thanks so much for leaving feedback, I thought that this story had been lost a long time ago, so nice to know you kittens are still enjoying it :D



Stacey xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Nov 13, 2004 2:09 pm

:bigwave willowsgirl :flower ,

I love this fic! :clap :bow I love the way that :willow reasures :tara . It was just so cute. :love Sorry it took me so long to update. But I finally did and I love it. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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Re: The Start of Forever

Postby willowsgirl » Sun Nov 14, 2004 5:58 pm

Hey Grace, thanks so much! :D Im so happy youre still liking the story, and hey- any feedback is great feedback, late or not :p Ill update as soon as i can, Im off to see my gf for a few days this week but hopefully after that.

Thanks for reading!



Stacey xx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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Re: feedback

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sun Nov 14, 2004 7:24 pm

STACE!!!!!!!!!!! How dare you start an update without telling me??? I never did give up on this fic, just had to make myself really, really patient. And look what patience brought us, an update!!!! I am sooooooo happy to see that you started this up again. And what an update it is, WOO HOO!!!! But, ummm, where is the rest??? You so can't leave it like that. Anyway, I'm going to have to bookmark this one again, heehee. Great work Stace, hope to see more soon. Take care. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'


"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson

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Re: Feedback

Postby Traveler4069 » Thu Feb 24, 2005 1:08 am

OK Nagging time. Here it is the 24th of February 2005. After Chapter 37 you said there would be one more Chapter to finish off this story. Today I reread this wonderful story from start to were it ended. Since you said you had part of the chapter written please post it and bring a fitting end to this story A Great story need a Great finish please cap this one off. Be safe Traveler

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oops

Postby willowsgirl » Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:57 am

Hey there Traveller! I know, Im sorry Im disgraceful :blush I know I promised but I still havent quite finished the final chapter, I moved home recently and started a new job, and I only had my PC brought down a few days ago! Thanks for the encouragement though, its really nice to know that people are still reaing this. Thanks to everyone for your patience, and for sticking with this story til the end. :flower



Stacey x

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Re: The Start of Forever

Postby stillrunning » Thu Feb 24, 2005 12:48 pm

So I saw this fic had popped up on the board, and I went and read it, and it ROCKS! Can't wait until you can update!

"Heaven's not a place that you go when you die...it's that moment in life when you actually feel alive"

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the start...

Postby willowsgirl » Thu Mar 03, 2005 7:26 am

Stillrunning- Awww thanks! Im blushing now :blush Woohoo that you like it, Ill be posting pretty soon, might take a little longer than I thought though cos Im working 12 hour days at the moment. Soon, though! I started another fic too, but I saved it on a disk and I cant find it anywhere! :gnome

Anyways,thanks for reading guys



stace xxx

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Re: Feedback

Postby Traveler4069 » Wed Apr 20, 2005 7:51 pm

Yea for nagging. Just kidding, thanks for answering my plea. Now that I know theres hope take what time you need and I'll be watching for that update-and you new story too! Traveler

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Re: oops

Postby Naeryn » Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:12 pm

Waiiii! I love it! You must update more. And soon. You're a great writer, keep it up. Willow and Tara walking in on Buffy and Faith? :lmao ... I see a major :yikes reaction approaching. Accompanied by much "Oh, god..." and "Jeez, Buffy!" and "Don't you two knock?!"



Should be very amusing.



Also, I know it's a chapter old, but

Quote:
“Yes! You said yes!”

Seeing another passing couple looked at her inquisitively, Willow clarified for them,

“She said yes!”


Had me :rofl like no other. In a good way, of course. That was just too damn cute!

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Re: The Start of Forever

Postby willowsgirl » Sun Apr 24, 2005 10:12 am

Hey peeps! Just a couple of replies for now, Im still working on the final chapter :blush I know its taken a long time, but my girlfriend's been distracting me :lol

so, replies...



Traveler4069- Thanks for waiting, nice to know there'll be someone there to read when I finally post! It won't be long now ;)



Naeryn Yep, definitely a big reaction approaching! And yup, you might just be along the right lines. Keep watching, updates on its way soon.



Thanks for your patience everybody!

And thanks to my very own kitten - Cass - for inspiring me :luv2

Stace xxx

"You're the only one I'd be with til the end- When I come undone, you bring me back again- Back under the stars, back into your arms" 'Fall to pieces' by Avril

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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby willows girl » Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:12 pm

ok um... Hi everybody!
After having to post in the find a willow/tara fic thread to find my own story (embarassingly!) Here I am! The thing is....I absolutely cannot believe that it's been this long since I last updated, or even said I was going to update. Time really does fly! I guess I've posted around the board and on other fics, but I seem to have forgotten my own :blush
Well, I did vow once that I woud finish this story and I will! I'll be working on it straight away.
So incase there are still any kittens out there who remember my story, and want to see the end...or any new ones who read for the first time and want to see what happens...just let me know ;-)
Thanks,
Stace xx
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Re: First Fic: The start of forever

Postby Thianne » Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:22 am

*raises hand bouncing up and down* me, me! me wants to see what happens! me!
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