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Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby LokiPromise » Sun Jul 27, 2003 4:22 pm

Yay an update:applause , ooh things look like they are about to heat up.:drool

BB:Hello Xander...and Anya, how is your money?!

A:Fine!Thank you for asking!

LokiPromise
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby sam darls » Sun Jul 27, 2003 6:25 pm

Hey..Ooh, so good, they finally realise they love each other and it was amazing, i just hope they don't get into too much trouble over it.I love this..more soon?:flower love sammi xx

sam darls
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby EffieBlue » Sun Jul 27, 2003 6:41 pm

I'm enjoying the story,



But I have to admit, the set up kinda makes me a bit uncomfortable...



Teacher.. student...



and the title,



Forbidden Liason,



adds to the whole, "It's Wrong" feeling...



I hope this does get resolved so they can be together without the whole "teacher in responsible position" senario.







EffieBlue
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Jul 28, 2003 12:09 am

Oh they kissed yay but even an OUCH....damn why are they teacher and student...hmm Willow has to find another school to work at....:wink



Nice update....want more:grin



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby tiredsoul » Mon Jul 28, 2003 12:40 am

This is an interesting set up you have here. I can totally see Willow as a teacher, though she is a bit young. Getting involved with Tara is a given but as a student that can get dicey. And now that there has been a kiss, I guess the only solution Willow would have would be to transfer. Being new, she wouldn’t have an established idea of what a student/teacher relationship would be like. It would be so like Willow to give up teaching there to pursue Tara.



--celia



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When innocence is shattered
... madness is inevitable

www.gotlicky.com

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Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby SJ » Mon Jul 28, 2003 1:25 am

Good update.

SJ
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby the vamp nurd » Mon Jul 28, 2003 3:29 am

Where's my socks gone?



They've been blown off holy cow pats Batman.



Great fic....:D



Note to self, never have caffine in the morning...:p

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Jul 28, 2003 4:00 am

Hey!!!

Although a Teach/student affair IS wrong or viewed as... I can only thing about how right it is between Willow and Tara.

But now what will Willow do? how would they act around each other ?

I guess now the most sensible thing would be having Willow to transfer, as was previously mentionned!

But hey that's your story and I can't wait for you to continue it!!!





~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Jul 28, 2003 8:53 am

Oh, that was fast for a first kiss :-)



I wonder how Buffy does as a councillor given what she asked Tara. Seems far to direct to be miss. Subtle, heh. It's typically Buffy though, foot firmly in mouth. Contrast that with the lack of directness when talking to Willow, where a certain amount of directness would have been very helpfull.



I was almost expecting Tara to snap out of her day-dreaming at the thunder-clap noise. It's going so nicely I thought she was dreaming. The entire 'girl walking in the rain' scenario so very much reminds me of an old Police song _Don't stand so close to me_ :-)



At the minimum I would recommend Willow switching classes so she doesn't teach Tara in any of them. At least Tara won't get into trouble with her grades that way. Furthermore I would expect Willow to think a bit about their relation and what to do with it, given her role as teacher and all. Surely she knows such relations aren't allowed on most schools ?? Heck it must have been in the handbook which Willow probably read so many times she knows it backwards :D .



Keeping their relation and work seperate is going to be their biggest challenge I think. Should be interesting to see how thats going to work out.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Part 4

Postby Kita830 » Mon Jul 28, 2003 9:18 am

Wow, that was fast! (The update and the kiss) :) I think Willow shouldn't do anything about her current situation; what's the fun of a forbidden relationship if it's not so much forbidden? I'd love to see how they try to keep their feelings for one another hidden in class...Willow would still have to be impartial even though she doesn't want to be. I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon please? :pray



Kita :eek

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I won't be held responsible she fell in love in the first place.

Kita830
 


Great job, baby :)

Postby Mainer » Tue Jul 29, 2003 6:01 pm

I'm very slow posting this, but I really liked this update. I feel so privledged that I get to read them before anyone else, cause you are so talented. :bow I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I'm enjoying this story so much. Especially the student/teacher aspect cause it's so taboo in our society. You are doing a really great job with it. The kiss was amazing, very descriptive just the way I like them. I know that you are hard at work on the next update. :letter I can't wait to read it. I love you, Tara. :heart



~Spencer~





Mainer
 


Forbidden Liason

Postby tara24alh » Tue Jul 29, 2003 10:05 pm

Forbidden Liason

PG-13

Disclaimer: Most characters belong to Joss Whedon.



Note: I want to thank you guys again for the feedback.



Part 5:







Three weeks went by and teaching at the High School was going great for Willow. The students were beginning to open up to her and loving her class. Willow wasn't strict like a lot of the other teachers were. She knew that the key to their learning wasn't to be harsh, it was understanding that they needed, guidance. So she did her best to make sure they got it. So in Willow's eyes everything was on track, well, everything except for the most important thing, Tara. The first thing on her mind every morning and the last every night. She hadn't spoken to Tara since their kiss. Of course in class she had but not outside of class and not about anything other than school work. She noticed the way Tara would avoid eye contact. She really wanted to talk to her but what would she say? What could she say? All she knew is that the whole situation was eating her up. She needed to talk to someone. The only person she felt comfortable enough to talk to was Buffy. That was a big debate in her head, whether or not she should talk to Buffy.



Tara was pretty much in the same boat as Willow. She was sitting on her bed contemplating whether or not she could go and talk to Willow. I wish you were here mama, I know I'd be able to talk to you. You were always so understanding, never judgemental. Oh mama, I don't know what to do. I'm in love with a beautiful amazing woman. No one would understand. Willow could loose her job. I wouldn't want to be the cause of that, I won't be the cause of that, I refuse. I'm not even sure how she feels. She hasn't spoken to me, maybe she doesn't feel anything. But that look, the look she had right before we kissed. She has to feel something doesn't she? I just wish she were here so she could tell me. Tears started rolling down her face. She laid down and cuddled up next to the bear her mother gave her when she was five. It was the only way she felt close to her mother. Sleep came quickly, then dreams, dreams of Willow.



A blue Jeep Cherokee pulled into the school parking lot. A thin girl wearing a cheerleading uniform stepped out. She looked to be about seventeen with long straight brown hair pulled back into a ponytail.

"I can't believe I'm wearing this." She said to the driver, who was now stepping out of the SUV.

" Cheer up Dawny, you look good." Buffy said with a proud grin.

"Cheer up? I still can't believe you made me do this."

"I just wanted you to be involved in a school activity. You could've easily chosen something else." Buffy said locking the door.

"Yeah, like you? Miss school spirit." She said grumbling.

"Hey! I was saving the world!"

"Always an excuse. See you later." Dawn said heading towards the locker room.

"Okay, good luck!"

Buffy started towards the stadium where she was supose to meet up with Xander and Willow. Wow, I don't remember it being this crowded at our games.

"Buffy! Hey!"

Buffy turned to look and saw Xander carrying, or at least trying to, an armful of soda and snacks. She smiled knowing who all those snacks were for.

"Hey, you feeding an army." She said helping take some of the load off.

"Huh? What army?" Xander asked not getting what Buffy was saying.

"The snacks. Who's gonna eat all this?"

"Just me. Why? Did you want something?"

"No thanks, is Willow here yet?"

"Yeah, she's saving our seats. This way." Xander said leading her through the crowd.

They finally made it through the crowd and to the seats.

"Buffy, Hey!" Willow said when she saw the two approach.

"Hey"

"So, is Dawn excited?" Willow asked with a huge grin. She was very excited for Dawn. Ever since their mom passed away Willow has been very close to both Buffy and Dawn. They were her family.

"Excited? Not exactly."

"Oh, she'll be alright. She's probably just nervous." Willow said just as the football players started making their way onto the field.

A group of girls, who were sitting two rows down from the scoobies started to make comments.

"Ooh look, it's the cheerleaders." One girl said making a discusted face.

"Oh my god. Like Jake is so cute!" Another girl said. They started giggling.

Buffy really wanted to kick some ass but knew she was now an adult and had to behave.

"You believe them?" Buffy said, her face getting a little red.

"Their just kids, kids do that." Willow said.

Buffy huffed then turned her attention back to the field so she could see her sister.

"Excuse me." Came a voice, a voice Willow would know anywhere. She looked down to see Tara squeezing her way through the people sitting on the bleachers. She couldn't stop the smile that lit up her face. The butterflies that formed in her stomach. Her eyes were glued to Tara, followed her to see where she was going. She frowned after seeing that she was sitting down next to the girls that were teasing the cheerleaders. She couldn't understand why Tara would sit with them.

The scoobies sat through the whole game, cheering on Dawn. When the game was over they headed towards Dawn to tell her what a great job she did. Willow noticed Tara walking towards the bathroom and decided she couldn't wait any longer.

"I'll be right back guys. I'm going to the restroom." She said while watching Tara dissappear around the corner.

"Okay, we'll be here waiting." Was Buffy's reply.

Tara finished using the restroom and headed out the door. The bathroom was a little out of the way so there were no people around. She closed the door to the restroom and turned around. Willow was standing there waiting for her.

"Hey." Willow said still nervous about the whole talking to Tara deal.

Tara jumped, she wasn't expecting to see anyone, least of all Willow.

"Oh, Ms. Rosenberg, hey." Was the only thing Tara could choke out.

Willow realized how much she scared Tara and started to appologize.

"Oh, Tara, I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to scare you. Are you okay?"

"Yes, I'm fine." Tara said breathing heavily.

"No you're not. Do you need to sit down? Do you need a doctor? Yes, you need a doctor. Oh god, I have to get a doctor. I'll call 911, hold on, let me get my cell phone and....."

Tara smiled at Willow's babbling concern. She interupted Willow.

"It's ok, I'm fine. You don't need to call 911. I'm okay, really."

Willow stopped and looked at Tara.

"Are you sure?" She asked, her eyes full of concern.

"Yes, I'm sure." Tara smiled.

"Okay. Tara, we need to talk." Willow said, getting back to the reason she came.

Tara was starting to worry.

"We do?"

"Yes." You can do this Willow. She took a deep breath.

"About the kiss." Willow said.

Tara's brain was starting to race. About the kiss? Oh god, this can't be good. She's gonna tell me it was a mistake. I don't want to hear that. It couldn't be a mistake, it was too perfect. Something so good can't be wrong. All she could say was...

"About the kiss?"

"Yes, how do you feel about that? I wasn't trying to take advantage of you, it was wrong and I'm sorry. It won't happen again, not that I don't want it to, but it won't. Unless of course you want it , then...."

"Yes."

"...huh?"

Tara looked at Willow.

"Yes, I want it to." Love was the only thing Willow could see in Tara's eyes.

"You do?" Willow said still not grasping what Tara was saying.

"I do. Okay?" She smiled not sure where the courage for her to say it came from.

"Oh, okay, yeah, it's definitly okay." She said as Tara came closer.

Willow still felt the need to talk.

"Um....."

Only to be interupted by Tara's finger on her lips.

"Shhh...." Tara moved her finger and replaced it with her mouth.

The kiss was perfect yet again. Slow and passionate. Nothing had ever felt so right.

A figure could be seen standing near some bushes just right of the restrooms. He stood watching, he couldn't believe what he was seeing. His white football jersey with the number 17 on it shined under the moonlight. He knew this had to end now.

"What the hell are you doing Tara!" He asked walking towards them.

Tara and Willow jerked away from each other.

"D-D-Donnie?"



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~Tara~



tara24alh
 


Part 5

Postby Kita830 » Tue Jul 29, 2003 10:54 pm

Oh no! I sense trouble in the near future...but hopefully not too much trouble? Maybe Tara can talk her way out of it or something...I hope everything works out ok for her and Willow! Great update, I'm patiently awaiting more. Thanks for updating so quickly! It keeps my mind focused on the story.



Kita :eek

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I won't be held responsible she fell in love in the first place.

Kita830
 


Re: Part 5

Postby SJ » Wed Jul 30, 2003 12:52 am

Interesting that you have Donnie find out about Willow&Tara's relationship.



SJ
 


Re: Part 5

Postby sam darls » Wed Jul 30, 2003 1:58 am

Ooh, Donnie..nooo..but it will be okay won't it? please? I love this fic..it's so amazing, love sam xxx:flower

sam darls
 


Re: Part 5

Postby WillowPowered » Wed Jul 30, 2003 2:58 am

OMG Noooooooo. Not Donnie of all people grrrrrr.



See now you have to update cause I'm all on edge and needing to know what happens next.



Jill

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My Home Page



I may not be fighting the good fight, but I'm cheering from the sidelines.



Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?

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Re: Part 5

Postby the vamp nurd » Wed Jul 30, 2003 3:42 am

:punish Donny!



Argh.... biting my nails here....

Sorry I missed church, I was busy becoming a lesbian and worshiping Satan



Bardlet no #27



the vamp nurd
 


Re: Part 5

Postby Arwen276 » Wed Jul 30, 2003 3:49 am

Perfect Kiss!! Almost!



I love how Tara is the assertive one of them but it's understandable , she's got to decide for both of them, since Willow can't make a move!



And Donnie? Worst kind of DEMON EVER!!! I wonder how they're gonna dodge that, and how he's gonna ruin everyone's life! I just hope he won't blackmail them cos that's just SICK...



Can't wait for more!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Part 5

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Jul 30, 2003 5:47 am

Oh no that fucking bastard Donnie again:rage ....why does that person always appears at the worst time!!! Ohoh i see lots of problems for our girls...:angry



:cry they just found each other and now they gonna seperate them :no



Haha and Xander with his survival pack of food:lol



Great update....lots of emotions....



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Part 5

Postby LokiPromise » Wed Jul 30, 2003 11:29 am

Oooh, great update, I think I can see where your going with this, but a cliffhanger:no . Only wets the appetite for more:wink , keep it up.

BB:Hello Xander...and Anya, how is your money?!

A:Fine!Thank you for asking!

LokiPromise
 


Re: Part 5

Postby tstcloud » Wed Jul 30, 2003 4:44 pm



Interesting story, but the teacher-student relationship is wildly inappropriate. Is Willow going to continue teaching at SHS? The relationship would seem better positioned if she taught at another school

tstcloud
 


Re: Part 5

Postby tara24alh » Thu Jul 31, 2003 7:34 am

I noticed that some of you don't care too much for the student teacher aspect. While I agree the thought of student teacher relationships aren't a good thing, this is Willow and Tara and is just a story. I do have an idea of where I'm taking this story and it'll get better for those of you that don't agree. Just keep in mind the ages of our girls, it's only a few years difference and Tara is 18. I think the fact that this would be considered a forbidden relationship makes it more interesting to see how it works out cause you know it will. It is Willow and Tara after all.:)





~Tara~

tara24alh
 


Re: Part 5

Postby sam darls » Thu Jul 31, 2003 9:12 am

Hey Tara..I just wanted to say that I can't wait until the next update, I love this story. love sammi xxx:flower

sam darls
 


Re: Part 5

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Aug 01, 2003 7:55 am

Quote:


I noticed that some of you don't care too much for the student teacher aspect.




Quite the opposite actually :-). I'm just worried for Willow mostly, who stands to lose her job if she's not carefull. Other then that I think it will be increasingly difficult to have a sustained relation under the current circumstances. Doing something 'forbidden' is only fun for a short while, after which it gets annoying having to hide.



Anyway, I see Donnie is around and being obnoxious as per usual. Many possibilities for blackmail in situations like this one, Willow and Tara better be more carefull. After all they *know* Teacher/Student relations are generally frowned upon so they really should make sure not to be seen together like that. Most of all not be seen by jerks like Donnie or his dad.



Given the current situation there's not much Willow can do if Donnie does something nasty. They're probably best of trying to away from Donnie quietly, something tells me Donnie ain't exactly the quiet type though : -->>: .



Now if someone were to accidently (*cough*) break Donnie's arm or something.... that wouldn't be TOO bad, heh. It's understandable he doesn't want to miss his house-slave of course, God forbid he would do the dishes or something..:rage



Enough ranting about Donnie already... for some reason I really don't like him.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re:Great story

Postby Velaingie » Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:13 pm

Hello :bigwave



Read your story last night and I absolutely love it. It's just a great topic story. Can't wait what will happens in the next update with that jerk of Donnie :punish . :bounce :bounce

Velaingie:wave

Velaingie
 


Re: Re:Great story

Postby xita » Sat Aug 02, 2003 2:21 am

If I may say a couple of things about the teacher thing , being a teacher myself. The age difference isn't great but that's not the problem in these kinds of relationships. The one character who suffers the most is Willow here. It's hard to respect someone who doesn't understand boundaries. She should not be doing this as she is abusing her position of power. I kinda worry that this Willow doesn't see this, because she should. She should lose her job, she should face consequences for her actions at this point.



The story is interesting, and I can see this situation developing but I hope that it doesn't ignore the real issues it brings up and that the people involved face the consequences.

- - - - - - - - - - -
"The suspense is terrible. I hope it'll last."


-Willie Wonka

xita
 


Great

Postby Willster » Sat Aug 02, 2003 10:23 am

Great fic!!



I wish i could have post a fedback before..!

Anyway I like the main idea of the fic and the way you write it is really good.



Our girls are in a messy situation.. but i'm sure they'll got out of it.. eventually!



Continue to update, can't wait to read more!

Willster
 


Re: Great

Postby Shadow » Sat Aug 02, 2003 12:08 pm



I guess since this is Willow and Tara story most of us don't look at the whole teacher/student thing which we probably should.

And it is true that Willow could lose much more then Tara.

Oh I forgot Tara has shitty family...



But I love this fic and I'm sure it's gonna have happy ending for our girls.



Vladimira

_____________________________

Zvjezdano nebo nada mnom i moralni zakoni u meni.- Kant

Does the walker choose the path, or the path the walker.- Sabriel, Garth Nix

Shadow
 


Re: Great

Postby nika » Sun Aug 03, 2003 12:54 am

O.k the story is interesting and I understand it is just a story and it is afterall about W/T and this is the kitten board where we all want them to be rolling in fields of dasies and puppies, BUT...I must add my discomfort at the fact that it is a highschool student-teacher relationship. The topic is touchy and the thing is it does happen more often than people care to admit and even if the student is of legal age I for one think it's wrong. Abuse is not only about age, it's mostly about power and position. There are serious implications that come from these type of relationships and there are ethical matters that should not be easily dismissed, I think. Sorry if I'm rambling on, but having become a teacher to teenagers this past year the subject hits too close to home to not have misgivings about some aspects of the story. I do like the story and would like to see where it goes, but again I think maybe there are aspects that shouldn't be left out and that should be considered on a deeper level than just 'hey let's get it on regardless of everything else', even in Au that wouldn't be very W/T like.

nika
 


Re: Forbidden Liason

Postby tara24alh » Sun Aug 03, 2003 11:22 pm

Hey guys! I was gonna post an update tonight but some things came up. So, it should be up tomorrow.



~Tara~

tara24alh
 

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