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Re: Oh My!!!!!! Oxygen Please!!!

Postby PeachyNectar » Wed Sep 29, 2004 6:16 am

Ah:shock ...wow:shock ...um :shock ... great update.:shock When did breathing stop being second nature :hmm ... oh right when this update took my breath away. :thud :thud :thud :thud



Seeing an update to this fic was like the return of an old friend. I had hoped you would one day continue the story of our two ladies becoming "reacquainted" as they enjoyed some well deserved alone time while on holiday. It a was a very pleasant surprise to see you have.



The sexy atmosphere you painted of Willow and Tara; in the rain; giving into their passion, was incredible. I love when the characters are taken outside the box of what we grew to expect. This fic gives a voice to the other side of the Willow/Tara relationship; the rawness, something we were never treated to on BTVS. The connection shared by these two women deserved further exploration, and you continue to do so through Journeys. Kudos Magrat. :clap :bow :bow :clap



I won't even say anything about how I hope the next chapter will be in the not to distant future.:whistle :whistle



Okay patience over... Please update soon!:pray :bounce :pray



You can't have Tara feeling inCOM... plete, now can you?:flirt :rofl

Cheers,

PN

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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

PeachyNectar
 


Re: Oh My!!!!!! Oxygen Please!!!

Postby sam7777 » Thu Sep 30, 2004 12:32 am

Wonderful update!! remids me very much of the last time they talked about the rain. :wink I can't wait to see what is in that mysterious locket that Tara gave to Willow. I love fics that are just :willow and :tara away from it all. Thanx for continuing this fic!!

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Re: Oh My!!!!!! Oxygen Please!!!

Postby Magrat70 » Sun Oct 17, 2004 11:15 am

DreamLover: Glad to know that I have helped someone remember a good time



PeachyNectar: I know a surprise for me to finally be updating this fic, but it proves that impossible can happen



I hope it shows a rawness in passion, it’s what I was going for. After all they are 2 attractive women in love why wouldn’t they give into passion.



Hmm we’ll see on the next update; maybe I’ll surprise you again



Sam: no problem and you’ll have to wait a little while longer to find out what’s in the locket.



Freddie is king

Magrat70
 


Re: Journeys

Postby Magrat70 » Thu Oct 21, 2004 11:45 am

Title: Journey- Self

Author: Magrat

Ratings: Do I need to say NC: 17?

Spoilers: not important

Disclaimer: not mine blah, blah.



Journey- Self



Tara tried to sleep, but even with the curtains closed it was just far too bright. Willow had tried not waking her when she had left for an early morning breakfast with Buffy, but Tara, always a light sleeper, had woken up and had been trying unsuccessfully to get back to sleep for the last 20 minutes. She decided that the eerie silence in the house didn’t help. With Buffy and Willow gone, and Dawn staying the night at one of her friends, the Summers house was unusually at peace.



Willow and Tara had only been back from New Orleans for a few days and were about to fly out to England in another weeks time. Tara was finding the travelling exciting; she felt real, felt that they were here not just to fight demons, but here to have fun, take holidays and love one another. She smiled softly to herself because there had been plenty of love in New Orleans. Even after the first night when they had been so abandoned it had hardly taken the edge off the lust they felt for each other. Tara shivered with desire as she remembered just what Willow had done to her on the second night. They had been walking back from a restaurant close to the hotel when it had started to rain. Willow had looked at her wickedly and asked if this was the sexy rain she had been talking about? She proceeded to pull Tara into an alley way, where she had shown the blonde just how hot and sexy a rainy night in New Orleans could be.



Tara lay on her back stretched out and groaned; not good thoughts to have when you were lying in bed by yourself, or maybe they were. She cupped her hand over her sex feeling the heat rising. She could smell the intoxicating scent of her own arousal and the almost painful throb from her clit. Thanks to the love and acceptance she had gotten from Willow she was no longer ashamed of her desires but quite the opposite and now she was intent on enjoying them. Tara dragged the forefinger of her right hand up and down her labia, trying to keep her hips motionless as she teased her own body. Her left hand went to her nipples pinching and making them erect.



She decided that this wasn’t going to do it for her and reached into her bedside cabinet and pulled out a vibrator. Tara smiled as she thought of the day Willow and she had bought it. It was called a Rampant Rabbit after the ear shaped clitoral stimulator, and they had giggled at the name, but they hadn’t giggled when they got the wicked little machine home and tried it out.



Tara placed the head of the vibrator against her opening and wasn’t really surprised to find out that she was so wet and aroused it had just slid inside. She slowly moved it inside her without switching it on, enjoying the sensation of the gentle penetration. She played with the control making the body of the vibrator vibrate softly, then edging the intensity up and at the same time making the head swivel. She still hadn’t turned on the clitoral stimulator because she wanted to make this last longer and knew she it would be too intense with this on. Her hips were now pounding into the bed and Tara gripped the bars at the head of the bed as she switched the stimulator on. God it felt good, only Willow could feel better and as she marched closer to her orgasm she could picture the redhead kneeling between her legs, she could see her pale smooth skin and imagine just what that felt like. Her hips started to buck in almost desperate rhythm and she was gripping the bars so hard now that her knuckles were white.



Willow came quietly up the stairs hoping to slip into bed beside her lover. Buffy had been called away by Xander to some sort of emergency and when Willow realised that it was something they could handle without her she had come straight back home. When she opened the bedroom door her jaw dropped. She was glad she had been so quiet and not disturbed Tara, this was a sight that was going to be burned onto her memory for years: her beautiful girlfriend on her back, naked, the soles of her feet flat against the mattress, her knees raised off the bed and apart; her back arched and her breasts bouncing as she pleasured herself. Willow could see the sheen of sweat on her forehead and she knew her lover’s responses well enough to know that she was very close to the edge. It took every ounce of the redheaded witch’s control to carry on watching and not rush to the bed, but she wanted very much to see this.



Tara started to verbalise her feelings pleading for release and when it came she screamed out the only thing that was on her mind. “Willow.”



The young redhead thought her knees were going to buckle when she heard her name screamed out. Her own body reacted so physically to her lover’s. She watched Tara try to get her breath back and decided it was time to announce her presence. “That was the most beautiful, sexy thing I have ever seen in my life. What a show.” Tara jumped slightly at the sound of her voice and to Willow’s surprise she didn’t blush but instead rewarded her with a sexy smile.



“Well I don’t need an intermission if you want to join me for act two.”



Willow was pulling off her clothes as she dashed across the room.



TBC







Freddie is king

Magrat70
 


Re: Journeys

Postby Shandem » Fri Oct 22, 2004 1:16 pm

can you say wow.........i think i can just barely mumble it as my mind recovers from such a hot update. The only thing better than reading some one getting off is watching so Willow is a very lucky girl.:wink

Shandem
 


Re: Journeys

Postby sam7777 » Fri Oct 22, 2004 6:26 pm

I'd say Willow arrived at a very opportune moment. :drool

And I can wait patiently to find out what's in that locket. :whistle

Great Update, Can't wait to see what happend next. :wink

sam7777
 


Re: Journeys

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:01 am

OMG! Dont u wish u were Willow? I DO! I cant wait for the next part ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Journeys

Postby behindhereyes » Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:15 am

Damn :bow , so passionate... so hot.





behindhereyes

Kim

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

behindhereyes
 


damn

Postby LizPuRR » Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:29 pm

yes yes I would love to be Willow walking in on that!!!!

we must have Act 2 right now!!

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you were the one, you were the only one and you were amazing

LizPuRR
 


Re: Let the "Play" Continue ;)

Postby PeachyNectar » Tue Nov 09, 2004 11:00 am

Okay ... um:drool ... wow:drool ... Magrat you have left me unable to form a coherent sentence.:shock :thud :thud

You have stopped me in my tracks, and I have no idea what I was supposed to be doing with the rest of my day.:confused



I found this update not only extremely hot; but very erotic. Tara "exploring" her own sexuality so freely was very sexy. Gone was the shy girl we most often saw in the Buffyverse, in her place was the passionate woman I always knew was just below the surface.



Willow watching Tara really appealed to my voyeuristic side. Seeing/hearing your Lover completed turned on; pleasuring herself; calling out your name ... few things in life are so intense. Brilliant writing.:bow :bow



Now I just know you aren't going to just leave us like this for long. Please let the curtain rise for Act II soon.:pray :bounce :bounce :pray

Cheers,

PN

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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

Edited by: PeachyNectar at: 11/12/04 2:23 pm
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