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Making It Big (AU)

Postby amber 4 prez » Mon Dec 22, 2003 5:25 pm

Title: Making It Big

Author: Amber 4 Prez (Liz)

Feedback: yes please

Disclaimer: I don’t own Buffy, end of disclaimer

Rating: should eventually get up to R

Summary: The Scoobies are a band from Sunnydale very alternate universe





The Scoobies were your average girl punk / ska band with Buffy on bass, Faith playing drums and Willow on guitar. The Scoobies like most bands really sucked. Faith couldn’t keep a beat through a whole song, Buffy couldn’t move her hand fast enough to get the right note, and Willow didn’t know any chords. They were pretty bad, but what they lacked in talent they made up in looks, and style. The Scoobies held their weakly practices at Willow’s because her parents were never around to tell them to play quieter, or to make requests. They were all sitting around, Willow and Buffy on a sofa against the room they use to practice in, and Faith in the chair next to them.



It was quiet, then Willow broke the silence.



“We suck”



Buffy and Faith looked at Willow and Buffy answered Willow



“You just noticed that?”



“Well, I knew it awhile ago, but look at us, none of us can sing. Every band has a singer, and what can we do with this, is this just a fun thing to do on the weekends? Is there a real point to us being in a band except we have nothing better to do? What are we - - “



“Red, stop talking.”



All of a sudden in was just as if a lightbulb went off in Willow’s head



“We should get a singer, you know, to cover up our junkie lack of playing skills.”



“How do you think we are going to get a singer Will? ”



“We could hold auditions, and put up signs all over town, about a girl band looking for a singer, that’s around our age, and put this address for where the auditions will be.”



“Sounds like a plan, I’m in, what about you Faith?”



“Works for me.”



The Scoobies plastered signs all over town, in the Magic Box, at the Espresso Pump, and most importantly The Bronze, which they thought would get the most singers. They made the audition date on their regular practice day, but a week later to get more people. The date for auditions came, and there was a big turnout. The headcount was 37 people. Willow took her spot behind a table with Faith and Buffy waiting for the performers, who each had a number, to come into the room. They called in the first person. She walked in with her head low, and her face hidden behind her hair.



“M-m-m-m-my name is Tara. Here is some in-in-information.”



With those two sentences Willow knew who was going to be the new lead singer.

amber 4 prez
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby jadeo0 » Mon Dec 22, 2003 6:32 pm

Hey Liz, great start you've got going there. Buffy on bass and not being able to play - :rofl More soon?

jess



If it first you do succeed, just try not to look so surprised.

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Postby gottalovewillow » Mon Dec 22, 2003 6:36 pm

oooooooooh, intriguing start! You've definatley got me curious! Can't wait for more.



Julie

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Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby allykat » Mon Dec 22, 2003 6:40 pm

Very cool start!:applause

Quote:
Faith couldn’t keep a beat through a whole song, Buffy couldn’t move her hand fast enough to get the right note, and Willow didn’t know any chords.


:rofl

More soon?:pray

allykat
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby kindagay » Mon Dec 22, 2003 7:47 pm

Oh interesting start, yep I'm liking this.



Plus, we have love at 1st sight, which is always a good thing :)



Okay, you have my attention, now, more please :D



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by Wannafriendsbe



I am perfectly normal in my abnormalities



kindagay
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby TemperedCynic » Mon Dec 22, 2003 11:48 pm

I like it already Liz! Keep going, and lets see where the girl band goes with its new singer.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Dec 23, 2003 5:58 am

Oh what a great start, so they get the best singer ever, but i hope they try to learn their instruments:p would be great...and maybe someday they´ll be popular:blush



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Edited by: BytrSuite at: 12/23/03 10:37 am
Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby TaraBaby77 » Tue Dec 23, 2003 1:56 pm

Hey Liz - :bigwave

:party :party :party , cool. This sounds very interesting :hmm . I can't wait and see what they band will evolve into. Keep them updates comin', kay???:banana =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

Edited by: TaraBaby77 at: 12/23/03 12:59 pm
TaraBaby77
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby amber 4 prez » Tue Dec 23, 2003 11:25 pm

Thanks guys for the feedback, today I give you an early X-mas present, Hanukkah gift, Happy Holidays







Mike gets full credit for getting the right song for the story, thanks Mike!



Cliffhanger ending, don’t get mad at me for it, I had to get off the computer.







Chapter 2



The staring contest between Willow’s eyes and Tara’s chest ended with Buffy’s interruption.



“So Tara, what will you be singing?”



“I-I-I-I will sing At Last by Etta James”



“Whenever you are ready”



Tara took a deep breath, and closed her eyes and turned a great song into the greatest song in the world.



At last my love has come along

My lonely days are over

And life is like a song



She started singing quietly, then opened her eyes staring at Willow for inspiration.



Ohh yeah yeah

At last the skies above are blue

My heart was wrapped up in clover

The night I looked at you



Willow just sat, her mouth wide open in awe of the beautiful voice coming from Tara.



I found a dream, that I could speak to

A dream that I can call my own

I found a thrill to press my cheek to

A thrill that I have never known



Ohh yeah yeah…

You smile, you smile oh

And then the spell was cast

And here we are in heaven

For you are mine....

At Last



Tara finished the song and Willow was slowly brought back into the world with a hard kick.



“Ow, Buffy that was my shin.”



“I had to get you out of La La Land somehow. Tara, I think we have all of your information here, we will call you if you made it or not.”



Buffy leaned over to Willow and whispered, “Willow, do you want to do a thorough interview, you know to make sure she’s not crazy?”



“Yeah, good idea, I’ll go do that.”



Tara and Willow walked into an office, getting away from everybody. Willow started the interview with the simple questions.



“So uh, Tara, that’s a nice shirt, what school do you go to, I don’t think I’ve seen you around here, did I mention that’s a nice shirt?”



“O-o-o-okay, umm thank you, I just moved, thanks. Can I ask you a question now?”



“Yeah, sure I’m all ears, well, not really, how could I stand if I were all ears”



“Why were you staring at me like that?”





What will happen next chapter, I don’t really know but I was thinking maybe later, much later Tara + Willow + drum sticks = ???

amber 4 prez
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby TaraBaby77 » Wed Dec 24, 2003 12:12 am

And again, hey Liz - :bigwave



I love that song :whistle !!! I love that chapter:read !!! Okay, not fond of the whole cliffhanger thingie :no , but you did warn us so I have to let that slide.......for now, heehee :D . Willow and Tara and drumsticks??? Pretty kinky, if ya ask me, :punish . Anyhoo, once again, I like what I have read and can't wait to read more......Hope to see more soon. :pray Once again, great fic. :banana =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby TemperedCynic » Wed Dec 24, 2003 12:54 am

Hey Liz, thanks for the credit sweetie. It wasn't hard to decide a knockout song that Tara would sing for an audition. Plus, the added bonus of making Willow go non-verbal. For those who haven't heard it, please listen to Etta James sing "At Last" and then imagine Tara singing it to Willow! Keep going with this fic, it's lots of fun.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby allykat » Wed Dec 24, 2003 3:48 am

Oooh! Liking this! Great update!:applause

I can totally picture Tara singing that song to Willow.:flower

allykat
 


Re: Making It Big (AU)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Dec 24, 2003 3:56 am

HI:wave



What a nice pressie:D great chapter...wonder when we get the next one :hmm



Quote:
“Why were you staring at me like that?”




I wonder what willow trys to tell her, the truth or just some lie...oi i hope she will tell her the truth:wink



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


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Postby MellindraX » Wed Dec 24, 2003 8:57 am

Oh this is funny :D



I love your description of the band, maybe Tara can inspire them to greatness! Or not, but that would be amusing too :p



Quote:
I was thinking maybe later, much later Tara + Willow + drum sticks = ???


This one time, at band practice...

[had to say it, cause somebody did]

I’ve never purposely gone out to take somebody out. Well, maybe, in elementary school I once did try to trip somebody. –Amber Benson


I'm an idiot. Ask me how.

MellindraX
 


Re: ...

Postby bluewillowwitch » Thu Dec 25, 2003 11:07 pm

:bigwave amber 4 prez :flower ,

I really like this fic! :clap :bow I'm liking the whole band idea. :grin :willow was really staring at :tara 's chest there wasn't she :wink and got busted too. :lol Um, wonder if :tara joining will get the band playing better or just distract :willow ? :wink Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here without you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, it's only you and me."--3 Doors Down--Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


Chapter 3

Postby amber 4 prez » Sat Dec 27, 2003 12:21 pm

Sorry for the long wait. Thanks for the feedback, now on with the story.





Recap:



“Why were you staring at me like that?”



Now for the answer



“I wasn’t staring, and if I was what way was I if I was? I mean I was looking other places, not just you - Was it that obvious?”



“Well, you didn’t drool so I-I-I-I guess not, but I kinda did the same thing back”



“Really, then why were you looking at me the whole time?”



“Willow, that’s your name right?”



“Yeah.”



“I like you, and I think you like me. A-A-After you’re done want to do something? You have my number to call me.”



“Sounds good.”



Tara got out of her chair, she was sitting across from Willow. She walked over to Willow and kissed her. It wasn’t a deep kiss, but more of a kiss you greet somebody with. Tara walked out of the room, and out of the house blushing, not believing what she just did.



Willow was still sitting alone in the room in shock of what just happened until Faith walked in.



“Hey Red.”



“Wha?”



“We need you back in here.”



Willow turned around in her chair to face Faith.



“I’ll be right there.”



*****



The auditions went well, all 37 people sang. Buffy Faith and Willow were sitting together discussing who they wanted based on personality, and singing ability. Buffy and Faith wanted Jamie Pressman, she wasn’t the best singer there (we know who was) but she had a scratchy quality to her voice that they loved, plus she sang Drain The Blood by The Distillers which was the type of music Buffy and Faith listened to all of the time.



“I think we should have Tara Maclay, I mean she is the best singer, I got a headache from just about everybody else.”



“Okay, she might be the best with range, and hitting notes, and I guess she knows how to read sheet music, and prolly took vocal lessons for a long time. That’s not really the point, Jamie sang The Distillers, Tara sang I don’t know what.”



“Yeah but you could listen to her voice for hours, just singing the phonebook or something.”





“Red, how about we let your chick sing in the band until we have a gig, she sings at the gig, but if something happens before the show where I can’t stand her she is out, if she is good at the show she stays, if we kick her out Jamie comes in. Can we agree on that?”



Willow thought about it and decided it was a good plan.



“Alright, she won’t let you down, I promise.”











so, what did you think, what did you really think? Hope you liked it.

amber 4 prez
 


Re: Chapter 3

Postby bluewillowwitch » Sat Dec 27, 2003 1:08 pm

:bigwave amber 4 prez,

I really like this fic! :clap :bow So :tara busted :willow but turns out she was staring too. :p :lol Gotta love that. First date should be fun. :grin i love Buffy and Faith they don't want the one that can sing, just the one who sings the song they love. :p :lol Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Chapter 3

Postby TaraBaby77 » Sat Dec 27, 2003 2:35 pm

YAY!!! Great update. Great, great, great!!! I was glad to get an update. I love this fic. Please, keep them comin'. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 3

Postby allykat » Sat Dec 27, 2003 4:55 pm

Hey, cool update! Go Tara for kissing Willow!

allykat
 


Re: Chapter 3

Postby sam darls » Sat Dec 27, 2003 5:30 pm

Hi..I've just read all of this so far..and I love it so much :flower It's so good. And "At last" is one of my fave songs :love . Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Chapter 3

Postby Seldomly Naughty » Sat Dec 27, 2003 10:26 pm

Hey Liz,



I read your fic. Me likey very much. it's really good and i glad you made tar shy but bold. i think she should have an innocence like that. Keep it up I love it. Plus we're all behind you. So keep up the good work. I can't wait for a new uodate. Don't keep us waiting to long!!!!!!!!:bigwave :applause :flower :applause :bigwave

Seldomly Naughty
 


Chapter 4

Postby amber 4 prez » Tue Dec 30, 2003 3:14 pm

Again I gotta say, loving the feedback, and it helps while writing. I haven’t had much time to write, but it’s better to have kittens that are angry because you take too long to update, then having no kittens reading, or was it better to update than to not update . . . I think I just confuzled myself which means it is time to start the story, yay!











Buffy and Faith left Willow’s to go home, it was getting late and Willow wanted to call Tara with nobody around. Willow thought about what she was going to do. She picked up the phone, dialed the first three digits, and hung up. It took Willow fifteen minutes of picking up the phone and dialing half of Tara’s number before she finally called, and Tara answered the phone.



“Hello?”



“Uh, Hi, is this Tara?”



“Yes, Willow?”



“I’m calling about the band and if you made it in.”



“Oh, is it good news?”



“It’s good, and bad, we should talk about it somewhere in person. We could go to the Espresso Pump and talk it over coffee or something.”



“Are - are you asking me out on a date?”



Willow took a breath and thought for a moment.



“Do you want it to be a date?”



“Yes”



Willow listened carefully to Tara’s reply repeating it over and over in her head.



“It’s getting late, you could come by my place and we could walk over there, it’s not that far from my house.”



“Well, I know where you live, so I could stop by in about ten minutes”



“Okay, umm, I’ll see you there, well here bye.”



“Bye”



With that Willow and Tara hung up the phone and just sat there, then they both realized that they had to get ready for their date.









That’s all for now, I’ll make sure to update sooner, and the next chapter should be good, their fist date. Later!









amber 4 prez
 


Re: Chapter 4

Postby allykat » Tue Dec 30, 2003 3:20 pm

Great (albeit short ) update!

:applause Yippie! First date coming up! Can't wait to read it!:bounce

allykat
 


Re: Chapter 4

Postby sam darls » Wed Dec 31, 2003 9:49 am

Awww..first date..yay :love Loved the update. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Chapter 5

Postby amber 4 prez » Wed Dec 31, 2003 11:11 pm

Thnks for the feedback, wish I had more time. I think I’ll just do the date this chapter it isn’t the whole date really, just the main parts.



Tara searched for an outfit but realized she spent about fifteen minutes trying to figure out what to wear. She looked at the clock and decided to wear the first thing she pulled out which was a blue low-cut top that hugged her curves perfectly, and a pair of jeans. She brushed her hair out and decided on putting it up. Tara left in a hurry to get to Willow’s hopping she wasn’t going to be that late.



*********



Willow rushed to her closet pulling out every outfit she had, trying to think about what to wear on her first date with Tara.



“This is nice but do I want to look sexy, or cute or just like me?”



She looked through all of her clothes and decided on a low cut purple three quarter shirt and khaki cargos. The door bell rang and she rushed down the stairs with half of her shirt on. Right before she answered the door Willow realized her shirt wasn’t completely on, quickly putting her arm through the sleeve. Tara caught a small glimpse of Willow’s abs.



“S-s-s-so are you ready?”



“Yeah, we can talk on the way there.”



“Alright.”



They were almost at the Pump when Tara finally spoke up.



“Did I make it?”



“Yes, but it’s more complicated than just that.”



They finally reached The Espresso Pump. The place was crowded with only one booth left and it was all the way in the darkest corner, Willow ran for the table and almost tripped but caught herself. Tara and a crimson Willow sat across from each other, and both ordered mochas. Willow started to explain everything.



“You are in the band.”



“Then w-w-w-what’s the complicated part?”



“I liked you, a lot really, but Buffy and Faith liked somebody else. I convinced them to have you in, but they have one condition.”



“W-w-w-what is it?”





Willow took a deep breath, and continued.



“If you screw up once you are out and the person they liked is in.”



“Oh, that . . . . oh”



Just as Tara said that their orders were ready and brought over.



“So, umm”



“Well, being that we are girlfriends, and out on a date I think we should talk about stuff. I don’t know what we could talk about. We could talk about, hey this is good mocha. How long have you been singing?”



“A-a-a-almost all my life, well since I was little. My mother was a singer, she, she had a really powerful voice.”



Willow decided at this point to get up to sit next to Tara. Now there was nothing separating them. Willow leaned in close to Tara, cupping her face, they were about an inch apart with their eyes closed.



“Excuse me, but here is the bill.”



Willow and Tara jumped back and blushed noticing they were caught. Willow looked up at the waitress who ruined the date.



“Thanks.”



Willow payed for the tab and they walked out with their drinks.



“W-w-w-well that was.”



“It was kinda not good, more than kinda, it was bad, and filled with not goodness.”



“We could go to you place and talk.”



Willow turned ten shades of red over the ten shades she already turned.



“Sounds good to me, we could uh, continue our conversation that we were having, before the waitress came, I mean, interrupted us.”



They walked back to Willow’s and Willow was doing most of the talking, it was less like talking, more like babbling about nothing.









sorry to cut you off there, but I’m tired, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!









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Re: Chapter 5

Postby sam darls » Thu Jan 01, 2004 9:06 am

Awww..first date..soo cute..and when they were caught..hehe..Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby bluewillowwitch » Mon Jan 05, 2004 5:25 pm

:bigwave amber 4 prez :flower ,

I really like your fic! :clap :bow The first date was sweet. :grin :willow is babbling her little head off and :tara is trying to hid her stutter. :heart Can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

------------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos



"I'm here with out you baby/But your still with me in my dreams/And tonight girl, there's only you and me."--3 Doors Down-Here Without You----Mine and My Baby's song.

bluewillowwitch
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Jan 05, 2004 10:29 pm

WAHOO :applause :applause :applause !!! What great updates you have here!!! And, it was sweet how they kinda went from a little meeting arrangement to a kinda date, heehee. Anyway, I love it!!! Can't wait to see more.... =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: Chapter 5

Postby allykat » Tue Jan 06, 2004 3:26 am

Awww..sweetness..:heart Very cute!!

allykat
 


Re: Thanks

Postby amber 4 prez » Wed Jan 07, 2004 2:07 pm

Quick little blurbs of thanks





sam darls - Getting caught durring smoochies is pretty bad, they might get caught doing more than that

bluewillowwitch - fist date isn't over untill they are detached from eachother . . .

TaraBaby77 - more to come, more to come

allykat - When are Willow and Tara not cute?





I'm also writing this because I'm back in school, and won't be able to update for some time. I'm going to try to get as much done, and posted as I can when I can but with mid-terms and everything . . . well, that's about it. I might get an update to finish the first date in a few days, but more should be coming (think about it for awhile) That's all



Amber 4 Prez (Liz)

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