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Re: OMG

Postby Gimpgirl » Tue Mar 16, 2004 8:32 pm

Hey honey....



Very awesome update...smut and all. I so love when you write smut...you write it so well. I can't wait for more. It so reminded me of us....they and us just can't seem to keep our hands off each other....wonder why that is.



I love you.......:pinky



Michelle

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:kiss2

"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

Gimpgirl
 


RE: OMG

Postby BARE1975 » Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:30 am

Just one word:

WOW!!!

BARE1975
 


Re: RE: OMG

Postby sam darls » Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:56 am

WOW..that was..wow :heart :thud . I liked that very much. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: OMG

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Wed Mar 17, 2004 6:00 am

WOW! That was totally hot! It's a shame they never did that in the show LOL ;) mmmmmmm sooooo naughty and I love it alot ;)

AmberAlysonlover
 


Re: Early Days

Postby kop4parker » Wed Mar 17, 2004 11:30 pm

Lost in Blue

I Love this fic, I have been reading it since the beginning and I just now joined The Kitten Board, I am so stoked, it has taken me forever. Sorry, enough about me. I know how you love feedback so here goes. Keep going at it dude, you have real talent. Please don't stop and please post again soon!

Peace and Chicken Grease

parker:D

kop4parker
 


Re: Early Days

Postby SJ » Thu Mar 18, 2004 2:25 am

Great update :thud

SJ
 


WOW!!!

Postby warriorlove » Thu Mar 18, 2004 3:49 am

The love scene was H O T !!!



You've really outdone yourself!!! :tara AND :willow having sex pressed against a wall is SEXY!!!



MORE :applause

warriorlove
 


Apologies

Postby Lost in blue » Thu Mar 18, 2004 1:04 pm

Hey Kittens!! Just popping by to give my apologies for not updating last night, I won't tonight either. My sister Jen isn't feeling well so I'm looking after her. I will update over the weekend at the latest though. I will also do all the individual thank you's for feedback then as well, until then thank you to all of you who have left feedback- I do so adore it!! :D



Love Helen xxxxx :pinky

Lost in blue
 


Re: Apologies

Postby pikescoob » Thu Mar 18, 2004 8:51 pm

Dude! It's okay that you weren't able to update, though I think I'm suffering slight withdrawal symptoms :p got so spoiled with the regular updates! I can always reread the smut...oh what the heck am I talkin about, I'll just sign off and get snuggles from my girl *huge grin*



Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Apologies

Postby Taras Shadow » Sun Mar 21, 2004 6:10 pm

Hey Helen,



I hope your sister, Jen, is feeling better. :)



This story is definitely worth the wait.



Take Care,



~Holly~ :heart

"I was born 'normal'...life made me strange." - Marina

"I am a tongue whore...you gave me tongue, what am I supposed to do...sit back and keep my mouth shut?" -Me-

"I know who you really are...you're the one who cries when you're alone." - Where Will You Go? - Evanescence

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Apologies

Postby girlfriends actually » Sun Mar 21, 2004 8:42 pm

I just started reading this fic and I'm really liking how the story is going so far. So I thought i would take a quick break and let u know much I like it. :clap :applause :bounce

girlfriends actually
 


Feedback

Postby Lost in blue » Mon Mar 22, 2004 5:31 pm

Ok before I leave an update, I have a few thank you's:



LizPuRR- thank you for the feedback. Hope the cold shower helped, heh heh. I’ll try to write more updates like that one, I just hope I don’t ruin it by writing something that sucks.

Gimpgirl- thanks for the feedback baby. Hmmm, baby why would I ever keep my hands off you?! That’s crazy talk!!

BARE1975- thanks for the feedback. Well if you’re gonna use one word I’m very glad it was that one :D

sam darls- thanks for the feedback. I’m glad you liked it, and I get two wows?! That’s so cool.

AmberAlysonlover- thank you for the feedback. Oh how I wish they had done that on the show. Mmmm Amber and Aly doing sex scenes together :thud

Kop4parker- thank you for the feedback and welcome to being a kitty!! I do indeed love feedback, I admit it- I’m a feedback floozy.

SJ- thanks for the feedback.

warriorlove- thanks for the feedback. Hmmm, indeed it is sexy. I only wish I could have written it as good as the image was in my head.

pikescoob- Dude!! I hope the next update will cure those withdrawal symptoms, not all with the smut this time but I’m thinking the next one might be. And dude, don’t make me all jealous that you get to snuggle your girl, so unfair that my girl is so far away- damn ocean!! Stoopid big blue wobbly thing with its “Mwa ha ha ha- I keep you and your baby apart” mocking *pout*

Taras Shadow- thanks for the feedback Holly. My sister says thanks too, she’s feeling better now, although she’s still coughing a lot.

girlfriends actually- thank you for the feedback. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far.



Thanks everyone for all the lovely feedback. New update in just a few minutes.



Love Helen xxxx :pinky



"Embrace me, surround me, as the rush comes" -As the rush comes.

Lost in blue
 


Update

Postby Lost in blue » Mon Mar 22, 2004 5:38 pm

Hey kittens!! I'm back, sorry its been so long. My sister is all better now which is good. These past few days have been a little crappy for me though, hence the lack of update. I won't bore you all with the details, best to just get on with the update seen as I've been a bad kitty and not updated for so long. Hope you all enjoy it:-



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Closing her dorm room behind them Tara furtively flashed a concerned glance in Willow’s direction. She knew that Willow was still worrying; one look at the girl’s furrowed brow would tell anyone that. Tara though could sense the girl’s turmoil as if it were her own.

“Are you okay sweetie?” Tara asked, her brow furrowing in concern. Getting no answer she moved across the room to Willow’s side and placed a hand on her arm.

“Will sweetie, are you okay?”

“Hmmm?” Willow replied, suddenly aware that Tara was speaking to her.

“I asked if you’re okay, you seem kinda spacey.”

“Yeah I’m, fine, I’m fine.”

“Then what’s with the worry face?”

“It’s just, I don’t know, something seems off.”

“Yeah?” Tara stepped behind Willow and wrapped her arms around her. “Wanna call Buffy? Maybe it will make you feel better?” Willow turned in Tara’s arms and gazed into her sapphire pools, feeling a slight calmness wash over her.

“Yeah I guess. I’m probably just being all silly and worriedy you know?”

“Yeah I know.” Tara tenderly stroked Willow’s hair. “Tell you what- you call Buffy whilst I go take my shower and then when she’s made you feel all better we can snuggle.”

“You sure you won’t need someone to scrub your back for you?” Willow grinned cheekily.

“Vixen. As much as I would love for you to scrub my back for me I think we both know that you won’t be able to relax until you’ve talked to Buffy.”

“How did you get to be so smart?” Willow asked, a look of absolute adoration adorning her face.

“I-I’m not really.” Tara shook her head and looked at her feet bashfully.

“Hey you are smart, super smart, super amazing smart, you’re-”

“Okay, okay I get it.” Tara giggled.

“I missed out sexy- you’re super sexy amazing smart.” Tara’s giggling amplified, Willow was too cute for words. Leaning in she kissed Willow lovingly. The kiss was intense, a promise of all that was to come later that night. Willow whimpered as it came to an end, wanting it to last just one moment longer. Just one more moment of those soft, velvety lips caressing her own.

“Mmmm, ok I’m gonna go take a shower…. maybe I should make it a cold one.”

“No chance, with you in it it’ll be hot no matter what.” Willow’s eyes danced as prowled over Tara’s curvaceous form.

“Uh huh, just you get that sexy ass on that phone.”

“Mmmm I love it when you’re dominant.” Willow kissed Tara softly and then walked over to Tara’s desk. She picked up the phone but paused as she watched Tara, entranced even by the simple acts of her gathering her towels and wash bag. Just an everyday thing and yet Willow couldn’t tear her eyes away, nor did she want to. She was captivated by Tara’s grace as she moved, the way her curvy, womanly hips swayed.



Wow her ass looks hot in those jeans, well it just it looks hot in general.



Willow knew she was drooling but she didn’t care, and besides who could blame her? Tara was a goddess, in Willow’s eyes there was no one more beautiful, no one more incredible or amazing.



“Ummm Will, you know you need to dial right?” Tara teased. She was well aware of Willow’s little drool fest, not that she minded one little bit.

“Huh? Oh, right!!” Willow snapped out of her daze, feeling a little sheepish at getting caught out whilst staring. She carefully dialled Buffy’s number, not quite trusting her brain to dial correctly. She felt relief when she heard Buffy’s Mom answer the phone.

“Hello?”

“Hi Joyce, is Buffy there?”

“Oh hi Willow. Yes she is but she’s taking a bath. But if it’s important I can get her for you.”

“Oh no, it’s ok. I just wanted to check you were both ok.”

“Oh, that’s very sweet of you Willow. As far as I know everything is fine here. Are you ok? You sound a little strange.”

“Ummm, no I’m ok. Will you tell Buffy I called?”

“Of course sweetheart.”

“Ok, thanks. Bye.”

“Bye Willow.”

Willow placed the phone back on its hook and stared at it a moment. The worried feeling was still there, lingering in the pit of her stomach. If only she could work out what the feeling was in relation to. Picking up the phone again she dialled Giles’ number, knowing Tara wouldn’t mind her using her phone again. The phone rung a few times, Willow was just about to hang up when he picked up.

“Hello?”

“Hey Giles, its Willow.”

“Oh Willow!!” Giles exclaimed, pleased as ever to hear from her. Willow smiled into the phone. “Is there something I can help you with? There’s not any trouble is there?” Giles asked, his paternal instincts towards the younger Scoobies taking over.

“No, no trouble. I was just wondering if you’d heard from Buffy?”

“No, not since yesterday, why?”

“Well there was just police outside her house earlier-”

“Police?!” Giles cut in anxiously.

“No, no. I think its ok. I think they got Faith.”

“Oh. The police got Faith?”

“I think so. I can’t be sure. I know it’s not that good coz what do the police know about handling a slayer? But then it means that Buffy won and doesn’t that mean Faith probably won’t come back?”

“No she probably won’t. I’ll tell you what, we can all meet here at mine tomorrow. That way Buffy can fill us all in on what has happened and maybe we can get back to the subject of Adam.”

“Yeah. That’s a good idea. Ok so I’ll see you tomorrow?”

“Ok Willow.”

“Oh and Giles? Thanks.”

“What for?”

“Nothing, just thanks.”

“Always a pleasure.” Giles suddenly understood Willow’s meaning. Whenever there was crisis, it was always Giles who could allay their fears.

“Night Giles.”

“Goodnight Willow.”

Willow hung up the phone, the worry alleviated for now. She moved over and sat on Tara’s bed to wait for her favourite blonde to return. Images of a wet, naked Tara entered her mind. Willow felt her mouth go dry as jolts of pleasure flashed through her tummy. Suddenly she heard the sound of the shower next door turn off. Willow smiled to herself and impatiently waited for Tara.



.....to be continued.



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Ok well that's it. I'll try not to slack off so much in future. Hope it was worth the wait, not that much happened in it. One of those annoying in between-y thingies that are so damn annoying to write. Anyway I'll update again soon as possible.



Love Helen xxxxx :pinky



"Embrace me, surround me, as the rush comes" -As the rush comes.

Lost in blue
 


Re: Update

Postby Taras Shadow » Mon Mar 22, 2004 8:15 pm

I love this story...and all the inbetween stuff. Willow and Tara are so adorable and muchly in love. :love



Thank you!! :D :D



~Holly~ :heart

Baby, baby, baby when all you're love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty




Taras Shadow
 


Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Mar 22, 2004 8:22 pm

Very sweet. I am guessing "Who Are You" is next?

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Update

Postby pikescoob » Mon Mar 22, 2004 8:29 pm

Woohoo!! Update *grin* I know what you mean about the inbetween thingers but hey they're necessary thingers cuz otherwise there'd be holes and holes are never good. I'm glad your sister is well again...thanks for the update dude *grin*



Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Update

Postby kop4parker » Mon Mar 22, 2004 9:13 pm

LIB,:wave

Love the update, I've been patiently waiting.
Quote:
Willow knew she was drooling but she didn’t care, and besides who could blame her? Tara was a goddess, in Willow’s eyes there was no one more beautiful, no one more incredible or amazing.
That got me there!! Hopefully there will be naked Tara in the near future? :eyebrow Keep up the good work dude!

Your faithful reader,

Katie:peace

kop4parker
 


Re: Update

Postby SJ » Tue Mar 23, 2004 2:17 am

Your updates are always a great read :read

Glad your sister is feeling better :)

SJ
 


Hey!

Postby BARE1975 » Tue Mar 23, 2004 2:28 am

I really missed your updates, I'm glad your sister is doing well.

By the way, I think that I said that WOW in loud voice while I was at work reading the "against the wall stuff":blush . I'm glad that as long as I know, no one here can read thougths, otherwise...

BARE1975
 


update

Postby warriorlove » Tue Mar 23, 2004 6:06 am

That was very sweet...looking forward to "Who are you"



Well done!! :applause

warriorlove
 


Re: update

Postby Gimpgirl » Tue Mar 23, 2004 9:21 am

Hey baby.....



I think that you can take all the feedback as forgiveness for not updating. Tell you sister that I'm glad that she's feeling better, even though she prolly already knows that. Now onto the subject of the update. The inbetweeny stuff is definitely necessary, but hard as hell to write. But you write it so well that it just seems like I'm watching the episodes and seeing everything. And Willow watching Tara, that is so like me to do something like that. Bad me. I can't help it though. Anyway-before I make you blush I will stop.



More, more, more!!!!



I love you.......:pinky



Michelle

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx:kiss2

"just when you think you got me figured out the seasons already changing...."-Meredith Brooks

Gimpgirl
 


Re: update

Postby sam darls » Tue Mar 23, 2004 2:47 pm

Awww..that was soo lovely,a nd so sweet. Poor Willow :heart Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: update

Postby Kerrison20 » Tue Mar 23, 2004 3:27 pm

:bigwave LIB,



I don't think I've replied yet to this wonderful story. :punish Bad me.



I have been reading from the beginning and I totally love it. And all the in-between stuff is what I think makes it so cute.:heart



But then again, I'm a total mushball.



So, I say BRAVO :applause and I can't wait until the next update.



Lisa



~~~~~~~~~

Tara beamed up at her lover. Willow Rosenberg, shy, unassuming computer geek was about to fuck her girlfriends brains out. Oh God yes baby, bring it on. -Three Months By WillowPowered

Kerrison20
 


updaTe!

Postby LizPuRR » Tue Mar 23, 2004 7:00 pm

hey there



another great update!



Looking forward to more

----------------



"Oops, that kind of talk's more appropriate for the bedroom. I apologize."

Alyson Hannigan, That 70's Show

LizPuRR
 


Sweet!!

Postby warriorlove » Wed Mar 24, 2004 1:37 am

Loved it!! awesome Update



Need I say, MORE? PLEASE?

:bow :

warriorlove
 


Re: Sweet!!

Postby nazelhuts » Fri Mar 26, 2004 7:18 pm

aw i just stumbled upon this fic. its cool, like we know whats goin to happen, but yet we don't.. or maybe its just me. eh anyway yeah, cool fic keep it comin!

a day without laughter is a day wasted - charlie chaplin (i think!)

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*squeal!*

Postby ApplesauceHorsies » Sun Mar 28, 2004 9:54 am

I just came on to this fic yesterday, and I've read the entire thing *minus breaks for class, of course. Stupid uni..* ;)



Might I just say that you write extremely well, and I LOVE this story! *squeal* I don't know the pain of an alarm clock, but I certainly know the frustration of an annoying cell phone. Gah.



Anyway. Terrific story! I love it, and now I actually have to *wait* for an update. (Sidenote--thanks for the prompt updates. :) )



-AH

ApplesauceHorsies
 


Re: *squeal!*

Postby girlfriends actually » Sun Apr 04, 2004 5:30 pm

I'm glad to hear ur sister's better. Gr8 update!! :bounce :applause

girlfriends actually
 


?????????????????

Postby Shy One » Sun Apr 25, 2004 5:55 pm

Hey! :bigwave

What happened? I was all involved in this story and you just stopped. I hope all is well on your end.

I hope you post more soon. I need my :willow & :tara

fix. :sob



Shy One

:kiss

Shy One
 


Re: ?????????????????

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:36 pm

Yes, You were one of the few people that updated everyday, and sometimes you updated twice a day. I hope everything is okay. :wave

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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