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Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Jul 14, 2002 1:15 pm

Hi everyone. This is the first fan fic I've ever written so don't blame me if it's really bad. So anyway, here it is. Please don't be too hard on me. :)





Title:Thrill Ride

Author: Anna (I go by Piper though…don’t ask, long story)

E-Mail: ForeverPiper@yahoo.com

Feedback: Sure, why not? Bring on the criticism.

Spoiler Warning: Maybe a little of season 5

Summary: The Scoobies head out for a day at an amusement park.

Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters. They all belong to that ass wipe Joss Wedon.

Rating: PG-13

Couples: X/A W/T

Notes: This takes place the summer after the 5th season. Buffy never died, and Glory was killed.



Prologue



“Everyone in the car now!”



It was a scorching day in Sunnydale and the gang was taking a break from they’re demeaning lives. Not 3 weeks ago had Buffy and Co. saved the world yet again from another appending apocalypse. A hell-god by the name of Glory had captured Buffy’s little sis and was going to use her to destroy the barriers separating all dimensions. However, Buffy being Buffy had once again kicked evil’s ass with the help of her friends. Now it was time for a well-deserved day of fun and enjoyment, it was however, going to be anything but relaxing. The gang, which consisted of Buffy, Xander, Anya, Willow, Tara, and Dawn, were all headed out for a day at Sunnydale’s one and only amusement park.



“Come on, let’s go already! What’s taking so long?” An impatient Slayer wined. Buffy was already in the car, her head poking out of the window as she glared at the people who were holding them up. Xander climbed into the front seat, taking the keys out of his pockets and turned the car on. Anya soon joined her fiancé in the front and Willow climbed into the spacious back seat that she was soon going to share with her lover. The only ones not in the car yet were Tara and Dawn who were still inside.



She pulled her head back in the window and glanced behind her to look at Willow who was applying sunscreen to her arms. “What could possibly be taking so long?”



The redhead just looked at her friend and shrugged. Buffy sighed impatiently yet again and sat back in her seat with a scowl settled on her face.



After about 3 more minutes of pointless fidgeting, Buffy was about to get out of the car and physically drag her sister and the blond witch into the jeep. As she opened her door preparing to do just that, Tara and Dawn came out the front door holding a large, red cooler. They walked up to the car and took their seats, putting the cooler on the car floor beside Dawn as she settled herself beside Buffy. Tara slid beside Willow and their hands joined instantly, and they gave each other a little grin.



“Geeze what took you guys so long? We’ve been waiting forever!”



“Hey, blame Tara, she’s the one who wanted to make sure we had enough snacks to take with us.” Dawn piped.



“Well, everything’s so expensive there. I just thought we could, ya know…save some money. F-for games and stuff.” Tara explained. Willow gave Tara a small smile and squeezed her hand lightly.



Buffy’s eyes suddenly lit up. “Oh games! I forgot about them.” She turned her attention to Xander who was pulling out of the driveway. “Hurry up and get there.”



“A little impatient there aren’t we Buff?” Xander replied playfully. His eyes sparkled. He was just as exited about going to the park as Buffy was. Buffy just rolled her eyes at him.



“So, what do you guys wanna do first?”



“Rides!”

“Shows!”

“Games!”



Everyone shouted at the same time. Soon after, everyone was in a debate about what they should do first.



“Rides first!” Anya proclaimed.



“No, not rides, shows. We should go to the shows!” Willow protested. Everyone groaned in response to her suggestion. “Hey what’s wrong with shows?”



“Will, you are the only person I know that actually would want to sit through those boring shows. Why would you pay 40 bucks to get in, just to sit around all day and watch some person talk about God knows what?” Buffy asked. Meanwhile, Dawn gave her a look of disgust and shuddered at the thoughts of shows.



“Shows.” Dawn stuck out her tongue and made a face.



“Nuh-uh!” She glared. Everyone turned to her and gave her skeptical looks as they all turned to each other, confirming that Willow was the only one who wanted to go see the boring shows. “Tara, a little help here.” Willow nudged her girlfriend, who had been silent ever since she got into the car.



“Well, I-I think the shows can be okay sometimes. I mean I-I like the bird one.” Willow grinned, pleased as she turned to the others. “See?”



The others groaned upon seeing the look of glee on Willow’s face. They went back to their discussion.



“I still think we should do games first.” Dawn said, brushing her hair back behind her shoulders.



Anya turned back in her seat to face Dawn. “No we shouldn’t, we should go to the rides first. The rides, not the games, the rides.”



“Games.”



“Rides.”



“Games!”



“Rides!”



“GAMES!”



“RIDES!”



What had begun as a simple debate soon turned into a full-fledged shouting match between ex-demon and ex-Key until Xander had had enough and suddenly stopped the car and turned in his seat until he was able to see everyone. “Okay, will you two shut up for just a minute? I’d like to keep my hearing for another couple years, thanks.”



They both murmured an apology.



“Here’s what we’re gonna do. Now, who wants to go to the shows first?”



Willow and Tara slowly raised their hands in unison.



“Fine. Now who wants to go on the rides first?”



“Oh me!” Anya jerked her hand into the air.



Xander nodded to Anya, signaling she could put her hand down. “And that leaves Buffy and the Dawnmister for the games right?” Both Buffy and Dawn nodded. “Right, so, here’s what we’re gonna do. Willow, you and Tara go to your…shows. Me and Anya can go on the rides, and that leaves Buffy and Dawn to go blow their money on the games. Just let it be known that I will not be carrying around all the stuff you guys win.” Buffy and Dawn both stuck out their lips in a mock pout. “We can meet up around 1 to go eat lunch, so that leaves us about 4 hours to ourselves. Everyone agree?” Everyone nodded and there were a few murmurs of “yeah” and “okay”. Xander started the car up again, and headed to the park, a small smile appearing on his face.



As they started moving again small conversations were started amongst one another. Xander and Anya were talking about wedding plans and Dawn and Buffy were chatting about which games they should play first. Meanwhile, Willow was putting suntan lotion on Tara’s face and vice versa. Willow lightly dabbed some of the lotion onto Tara’s nose and they both giggled quietly.



Soon, the conversations died down and each person was lost in their own individual thoughts.



Buffy was looking out the window, staring at the passing cars thinking about everything that’s happened the last couple months. She thought of Riley, and wished he were here with her. Each of her friends had their significant other except her, making her kind of lonely.



She glanced towards Xander and Anya and smiled lightly. They made a perfect couple in her mind. It had taken her a while to fully accept Anya, but once you got past the sex and money comments she was an okay person to be around…and she had done wonders for the Magic Box. In her mind she was the replacement Cordelia…with a nice side. It still baffled her that they were getting married, but once she had gotten over the initial shock, she was thrilled for her 2 friends. She knew how hard it was to find love on the hellmouth, and she was just happy that they were going to make it. They were the light at the end of her tunnel.



She glanced behind her to where Tara and Willow were cuddling together in the back seat, Tara’s head on Willow’s shoulder, with Willow’s arm around Tara’s back, gently rubbing her side. Their hands came together in Willow’s lap. Willow had her eyes closed and a content smile on her face as Tara stroked her knuckles with her fingertips. Buffy sighed. They had been through so much, what with Tara losing her sanity and all. Willow had been a wreck for those couple of days. She had even gone after Glory, knowing even then that she was no match for the hell-bitch. Buffy shuddered. She was just glad that it was over. Now that Tara had her sanity back her and Willow were literally inseparable. Wherever one went, the other went too…she just hoped that someday she could find someone who loved her as much.



She turned to Dawn and her heart skipped a beat as she thought about what her baby sister had gone through in the last month or so. She was coping remarkably well and Buffy was so proud of her. Out of the blue, she leaned over and pulled Dawn into a hug. Dawn stiffened in surprise. As Buffy pulled back Dawn gave her a quizzical look and Buffy just smiled. Dawn shook her head, adjusted her headphones and went back to staring out the window, lip-syncing with the music.



TBC...



So...what'd ya think?



~Piper



[/i]She has magick fingers...on the keyboard.[/i]- Tara in Wisdom of War



[/i]And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied.[/i]- Willow in Wildnerness

Edited by: xita  at: 10/13/02 12:29:38 am
foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Loco2 » Sun Jul 14, 2002 1:31 pm

very nice! this is your first fic? very hard to believe.:grin



i really wanna see where this is going, it's looking great so far. please update sharpish. :D



steph

ps. in your sig where you want the italics to start, you have to put [ i ] with no spaces, and at the end, it's [ / i ], :)

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby snuggle79 » Sun Jul 14, 2002 1:46 pm

I think it's a pretty good start which makes me say:"I want some more!" :D

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

Edited by: snuggle79 at: 7/14/02 12:47:11 pm
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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby pikescoob » Sun Jul 14, 2002 1:53 pm

I think this is an excellent start. I could totally picture them arguing about what to do first. I can't believe this is your first fic...I think it's great. :grin



--Michelle

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby shootingstar » Sun Jul 14, 2002 2:00 pm

That was brilliant...And it's your first fic? Wow, you rock.



I loved Buffy's line 'Hurry up and get there' I could just see her expression saying that.



More please... :)



Luv Star x

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Latsric » Sun Jul 14, 2002 2:14 pm

This is neat, specially since I really love amusement parks. Please continue.



-lat-

- I need my obsessions, they keep me sane -

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Sun Jul 14, 2002 2:20 pm

Piper, this is a great start. It looks like this will be one fun fic. The arguing is typical Scooby behavior. I loved how Tara meekly stood up for Willow, without trying to alienate the others. Typically sweet Tara. Looking forward to more!

*****

She's my everything!

Tiggrscorpio
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby spazz07 » Sun Jul 14, 2002 2:31 pm

Great start Piper. An interesting concept that has fun written all over it. :) Can't wait to read more. :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:12 pm

Hi everyone! Thanks so much! I wasn't sure if anyone would like it. :)



Loco2: Thanks! I do try. :) I’ve decided that this is going to be a piece of pure fluff, with no baddies or anything. Everything’s been so depressing lately so I’m trying to make something completely angst-free. And thanks for the sig help. I knew I was doing something wrong. :)



snuggle79: Thank-you! There will probably be more up on Tuesday…maybe Monday if my beta reader sends it to me :grin



pikescoob: Thanks! Yep, it’s my first fic. I had 3 people look at it before I posted it and they gave me a bunch of help. :)



shootingstar:Brilliant? Wow…I wasn’t expecting a brilliant, thanks! :grin



Latsric: I love amusement parks too, that’s why I decided to write this in the first place! I remember sitting on the train at the park and thinking “I should write a fanfic about this” and so I did. :)



Tiggrscorpio: Thanks! I’m hoping it’ll be a fun fic…I’m not that good at comedy but I can try.



spazz07: Thanks a bunch! Gosh, I didn’t think anyone would like it. :)





She has magick fingers...on the keyboard.- Tara in Wisdom of War



And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied.- Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby LeatherQueen » Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:40 pm

Very nice start. And I love that Willow likes to go to the shows. :) Because that's what I do at amusement parks. :grin Looking forward to reading more of this.








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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby KathleenWolf » Sun Jul 14, 2002 6:00 pm

Very cute beginning... I think having the ending at Buffy's perspective was really nicely done as well... sets up where you are placing us in the timeline nicely...



bravo kathleen

"I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine."

To The Land of The RainbowWriters

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Jennpurr » Sun Jul 14, 2002 7:24 pm

Pure fluff? I can handle that. :grin



Hee.... I'm really loving this already. A trip to the amusment park? Sounds like alot of fun. :) I can definitely see something like this happen on Buffy.



Can't wait for more. Soon??



Jen

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Tara:
Shhh, darling.

Willow:
I can't do this.

Tara: We can do this.

Jennpurr
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Jul 14, 2002 9:45 pm

Great start. I'm anxious to see where you take this.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby fidds » Mon Jul 15, 2002 1:15 am

heya piper

i really love this fic - it's great and funny! :D



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Jul 15, 2002 9:33 am

LeatherQueen: Thanks. I’m not much of a show-girl myself. I have more of a Anya like-look on things when I’m at an amusement park. :grin



KathleenWolf: Thank-you! :D One thing I didn’t put in the beginning though is that I’m going to make Joyce still be alive (I have to add that to the ‘notes’ for the next part.) cause I really liked her and I didn’t want her to die.



Jennpurr: lol…yep, pure fluff. There should hopefully be more up today. :)



The Rose24: Thanks. :)



fidds: Thanks, Hannah. And thanks for your help with the title. :grin



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She has magick fingers...on the keyboard.- Tara in Wisdome of War



And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby jdcioffi » Mon Jul 15, 2002 10:45 am

Very nice ... amusement park, eh? Living so close to Disneyland -- I've heard about all sorts of things people have done in It's a Small World, :lol .



Hmm ... ;)



JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

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Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Jennpurr » Mon Jul 15, 2002 12:50 pm

I like fluff. :grin



And more today?? YAY!!! :bounce I'm waiting patiently.



OH... and I wanted to say, that I never would have guessed that this was your first fic. You write really well. ;)



Jen

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Tara: Shhh, darling.

Willow: I can't do this.

Tara: We can do this.

Jennpurr
 


Re: Fic: Thrill Ride

Postby Sionan » Mon Jul 15, 2002 12:53 pm

hey this is great. i can't wait to see what happens next (that is such a cliche) but oh well. i vote for an update!!



sionan

"Rage More"
Paulie
Lost and Delirious

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Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Jul 15, 2002 1:28 pm

Okay, I’ve got the next part but I’m just gonna put some replies in real quick.



jdcioffi: You live next to Disneyland? You’re so lucky! The only park close to me is Busch Gardens in Williamsburg, VA, and even that’s and hour away. :D Just what exactly have you heard about It’s a Small World? Hummm??? :lol



Jennpurr: I’m glad you like fluff…we have something in common then. :grin And thanks.



Sionan: Thanks! And now you get to see what happens…:D



Now on with the story...





****



Chapter 1: Splitting Up



Once the gang got to the park, Xander parked the Jeep and everyone piled out of the car. They were fortunate enough to get a good parking spot right next to the entrance seeing as not many people were there this particular day.



“Now, what do we need to bring in?” Buffy asked. “I know for a fact that me and Dawn get the munchies pretty much…well, all the time really.” Her forehead creased a little. It was a wonder she was in such good shape seeing at all the junk food she always seemed to consume. I guess being the Slayer did have its quirks…that and having a pretty high metabolism helped.



“Okay, so munchies check.” Willow took some of the snacks in the cooler and put some in each backpack.



“Suntan lotion check.” A bottle of suntan lotion were popped into each bag.



“And extra shirts check.” Each person had brought along an extra shirt, due to the fact that they were most likely going to get wet, Sunnydale Park was known for all of their water rides.



“Oh and here!” Xander pulled out 3 high-tech walkie-talkies and handed one to both Buffy and Willow. “Ya know, for communication-like stuff.” He grinned.



“Wow, Xander, where did you get these?” Willow asked as she fiddled with some of the little knobs. She switched up the ‘on’ button and she listened hard. Nothing could be heard so she turned the volume up full throttle and put it to her ear. Dawn, who had snatched the other talkie away from Buffy, turned hers on as well, thus causing both talkies to screech loudly. Willow screamed, jumped nearly a foot and jerked her head away from the piercing noise, thus so dropping the expensive piece of equipment onto the ground. Willow held her hand to her ear and grimaced as Xander quickly scooped the talkie off the floor and examined it for damage. Tara ran over to Willow and took the hand that wasn’t clutching her ear. She put her other hand under Willow’s chin and turned her girlfriend’s head so that she could look into her eyes.



“Oh sweetie are you alright?” she asked worriedly.



Shaking her head to clear the ringing noise she still heard in her eardrum, she nodded and rubber her ear once more. “Geeze Xander, warn a girl next time would ya?”



“Sorry Will, I just though a smart college girl such as yourself would be smart enough to know not to stick a talkie up to her ear when it’s at it’s loudest setting.” This received a glare from Willow, which was not only directed to Xander, but also to the Summers sisters who were trying to hide their giggles behind their hands, and to Anya who was laughing openly, clutching her stomach. She scowled again and rubbed her ear once more.



“Awe, baby, is your ear gonna okay?” Tara asked. “Want me to kiss it and make it better?” Tara’s eyes shined as she gave the suggestion. Willow’s scowl disappeared instantly and she quickly nodded, a small grin tugging at the edge of her lips. Tara lightly kissed Willow’s ear and leaned back. Just as she was about to give her another quick peck, Willow swiftly lifted her face and captured Tara’s lips with her own. What had begun as an innocent kiss quickly turning into passion.



Loud coughs interrupted them and they jerked apart instantly, blushing so hard that they both started to match Willow’s hair. They brushed themselves off and averted their eyes anywhere but to the four people in front of them. “So, um, Xander, where did you say you got those walkie-talkies from hell from? Cause ya know, if I get a ear problem I’m not going to be too happy about it, cause that usually leads to having to go to a doctor and you guys know how much I hate doctors and then-” Willow’s babble was put to an abrupt end when she was silenced by Xander’s hand covering her mouth.



“Okay, Will, okay, we get it.” He lifted his hand off his best friends face and she nodded, still blushing slightly. “Okay now people, lets get this freak show on the road, time’s a-waisten.”



Everyone agreed so they packed up the rest of the stuff they needed and locked the doors to the jeep.



“Xander.” Buffy asked, looking at the walkie-talkie again now that she had taken it away from Dawn, “where exactly did you get these?”



“Kinda…took it off the Initiative. I figured, hey, they weren’t gonna need ‘em, so, there ya go. I figured we could use it for patrol sometime, and look how many channels there are!” He said pointing to all of them, grinning like an 8-year old child who had just found a puppy under the Christmas tree.



“So you stole them.” Anya said. It was not a question, just a statement.



“Not stole, borrowed. There’s a major difference there honey.” Xander flashed her a grin. “And since normally these babies would cost a whole bunch of cash, that leaves me more money to buy Anya nice, pretty things. Anya likes nice, pretty things.” He nodded at his own words and gave her a quick peck on the lips.



Anya thought for a moment and then nodded and smiled. “Okay Xander, I approve of your method.” She quickly added, “but not from the Magic Box of course. That is off limits.” Xander bobbed his head up and down in a silent agreement.



After that, they headed to go buy their tickets for what was beginning to look like a very promising day.



****



Once they had purchases their tickets they made their way into the main gate.



“Oh this is going to be so much fun! It’s about time I got a break from all the slayage.” Buffy bounced happily.



Willow looked at her, smiling, “Yep, totally agreeing with you there, Buff.”



“I just wish Giles could have come, that way we wouldn’t be stuck carrying everything. Why did he say he couldn’t come again?” she asked puzzled.



“I-I think he said some Olivia person, w-whoever that is.” Tara answered.



“Oh, that’s Giles’s orgasm buddy.” Anya stated nonchalantly.



Buffy shivered, as did most everyone else. “I don’t even want to comprehend Giles having a sex-life. That’s just gross on so many levels.”



“Well at least it’s that Olivia person and not your mom.” Xander said. Buffy went totally still, her eyes wide. Dawn grimaced.



“I told you never to bring that up again! I’ve spent forever trying to forget about that!” Buffy shouted at him. Xander flinched and hid behind Tara who was the closet one near him, hoping to shield himself from Buffy. Tara quickly stepped away, not wanting to be near a furious Buffy as she advanced towards him.



“Sorry, sorry, I forgot!” Xander tried to defend himself, unsuccessfully.



“Guys, lets just go in okay?” Willow stood stepped in between Buffy and Xander. “Lets just drop the matter altogether.”



“Fine.” Said Buffy, still glowering at Xander who grinned meekly.



“Let’s just put this behind us into the box of things never to be motioned again.” Willow said, trying to be the peacekeeper.



“Yes, along with the Buffybot right?” Anya asked.



“Is that never talking about it again?!” Buffy yelled. Anya shrugged, and Buffy threw up her hands and walked away muttering “I give up.” Dawn and Willow snickered as they all followed Buffy into the entrance.



***



Employees taking pictures greeted them in the entrance.



“Excuse me, would you like to have your picture taken? There’s no purchase necessary. Today’s our 10-year anniversary and we’re giving away a free picture to all the visitors.” Asked a girl in her mid-twenties, holding up a camera.



Everyone agreed.



Buffy, Willow and Tara all sat on a large, wooden bench with Dawn laying across them, head in Buffy’s lap as her hands came up in a dramatic pose, while Xander stood behind the bench with Anya in his arms. Willow put her arm around Tara and Tara looked at Willow, beaming. Buffy put up bunny ears behind Dawn’s head without her noticing and right before the picture was taken Anya whispered something in Xander’s ear, making his eyes widen in shock and his face redden as the camera flashed, signaling the picture being shot. The photographer came up to them and gave them a ticket.



“You can pick up your picture anytime between 3 and the time we close, just hand them this ticket.” She handed it to Buffy, and walked off after the group thanked her.



“So, where are we meeting up?” Buffy asked.



“Um, lets meet up here, under the clock thingy,” Willow answered pointing up to the humongous clock tower that towered over them.



“Okay, so it’s here at 1, right?” Everyone nodded.



“So use the walkie-talkies if anyone needs anything.” Everyone nodded once again. They picked up their backpacks they had set down for the photo and they were off, separating in the crowd, each going to their desired destination.



TBC…





The next part should be up tomorow if I'm lucky. And thanks to Sarah for helping me with everything. I owe ya one!

Edited by: foreverpiper at: 7/22/02 8:44:16 pm
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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby Loco2 » Mon Jul 15, 2002 2:01 pm

ooh, oooh, sounds great! i'm really liking this and fluff? i think i can go with that!:D



you really have a knack for writing them, which brings me back to; is this really your first fic? hmm, hugely impressed? you bet'cha!



this is great, the lightheartedness of it is a pleasant change, and it's funny, too. i congratulate you! *applauds*



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Jul 15, 2002 3:03 pm

I'm glad you like fluff...that's the only stuff i can write. I didn't even know i could write fluff so I'm glad I tried. :grin



And it actually is my first fic. Who knew a 14 year old kid who got a B in english could write? I didn't.



Oh, and an applause. I never would've thought I'd ever get one of those! :D





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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby spazz07 » Mon Jul 15, 2002 3:07 pm

ha funny Willow didn't realise the volumw was up. I'm looking forward to some quality W/T time so more soon please. :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby Jennpurr » Mon Jul 15, 2002 3:22 pm

You're only 14??? :shock WOW... I never would have guessed.



This is excellent. Hee... I loved the walkie talky thing, Tara kissing Willow's ear. :grin Very cute



DUDE, now I want more. ;) Soon??



Awesome, awesome.

Jen

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"Talented Tongued Tara." Willow snickered.- "Unexpected Consequences," by Lisa

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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby Loco2 » Mon Jul 15, 2002 3:47 pm

- ahem, no applause? think again.



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby xita » Mon Jul 15, 2002 10:30 pm

Oooh, nice , a nice fun fic! I loved how they got carried away kissing :)

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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby The Rose24 » Mon Jul 15, 2002 10:51 pm

Beautiful Willow and Tara smoochies



I don't mind a little fluff every now and then. :)

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

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Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby shootingstar » Tue Jul 16, 2002 4:46 am

Yay an update...and I give you another brilliant and a big round of applause! :) Your only 14? Wow, an extra big round of applause!



This is just the sort of stuff I need to cheer me up after the awful night I had last night.



Luv Star x



p.s - jen, your avatar is truly drool-worthy

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Jul 16, 2002 5:16 am

Lovely Update! And I loved the ear-whispering-kissing part! :D

Oh baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I ... stop explaining things.

Hi, um Tara..how are you? well...I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time...for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby pikescoob » Tue Jul 16, 2002 6:40 am

"let's get this freak show on the road"...lmao...cuz I said that to my family once when we were getting ready to go on a trip and we were all arguing who was gonna sit where in the car....:lol And the walkie talkie thing is so cute.....ouch poor Willow...I know how it can hurt when you do that. Lovely update!! :grin



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Ch. 1: Splitting Up

Postby jdcioffi » Tue Jul 16, 2002 10:34 am

Excellent update ... you've got everyone's characters down perfectly.



MOre,

JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 

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