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Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 12:31 pm

Simply Lovely! :D :clap

So, Xena and Gabrielle...it was all true? I knew it!! :laugh ;)

Great Update! :)



Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:03 pm

Aww that was great!! I Love how u added the lil OMWF scene in there, so sweet! Cute update, can't wait 4 more! :)

"Don't warn the tadpoles!...
I-I have frog fear."

MissQuirky
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby spazz07 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 1:14 pm

yeah he he, magic film :lol Gotta love playful Willow and Tara, Willow was so sneaky and evil :) Lovely little update:)



Cheers

Nath

Isn't it funny how you feel your most tired five minutes before you have to get up.

spazz07
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Grimaldi » Thu Aug 15, 2002 4:10 pm

cool update :) loved the water fight. Buffy saying goodbye Rufus was funny. amazed that the camera still has film left

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Fucking Windows 98, get Bill Gates in here!

Little pussy gnome, don't call me a pussy. Pussy gnome.

Grimaldi
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Aug 15, 2002 4:25 pm

Hee hee... Water Fight!!! :rollin That was so damned cute, Piper. Very cool! I enjoyed that update very much, as I did the first one you posted. Thank you.



I loved the screaming match, trying to outscream each other. They should have known, with Buffy/Anya/Tara, who was going to win. :lol That was priceless.



Naughty, naughty Tara, trying to spill water on Will. She should have known better. I loved how Willow distracted her from her task though. Go Tara!! :party



Need more, Piper! Glad you are back, BTW. ;)



Jen

* * * * * *
Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Edited by: Jennpurr at: 8/15/02 3:26:52 pm
Jennpurr
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Scout » Thu Aug 15, 2002 5:08 pm

This is such a fun fic! I'm going to hate to see their day end. Love Anya clearing up the confusion about Xena's true story - we knew it all along. ;)



The Battering Ram ride reminds me of our trips to Busch Gardens Williamsburg. They used to have this little fun house in the England section where it was all dark and cozy. Couples would go in and take forever to come out. Like we didn't know what they were doing in there! I could see W/T getting lost in there for a little while. :D



Thanks for this enjoyable fic! :)

Scout
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Thu Aug 15, 2002 7:07 pm

Emily: OMWF was the best episode, ever! :D However if I have to watch it one more time I'm going to blow. When I went to Texas i brought all my Buffy tapes with me so me and my friend could watch it...and, well, let me just say that even before i went over there i memorized all the lines...but now i can repeat the episode backwards! Word for freggin word!



And no, sadly the camera has only but a few pictures left in it Xander's beloved camera. I went back and checked all the pics that were on the camera and there have been precicly 13 pictures taken. *evil smirk* also at the begining, many of you may have missed it...but Tara has a camera too...whether it will be used is still in quesiton...



snuggle79: hehe, of course it's true! Was there any reason for it to not be true? ;)



Miss Quirky: Thanks! :) That scence was the best one in the entire season! *cough* Well aside from Entropy and the first 1/2 of Seeing Red *cough*



Nath: :grin Magic Film indeed! And ya gotta love sneaky Willow! ;)



Grimaldi: hehe, I had to say goodbye to my Rufus when i wuz at 6 Flags. *sniff* the memory still haunts me...



Jen: Hehe, the water fight happened to me too! Without the smoochies though! ;) hehe, can you tell i base this story on personal expierence?



:lol At least Willow should've known!



More to come as soon as i write it! Probably up on Sat or Sun cause tomorow I'm busy. My school schedule comes in and i have to call everyone i know to see if i'm gonna know anyone in my classes! :grin That in itself is a pretty big task! (That and i have to go see XXX)



Scout: Well they've got a lot more planned for the day before it ends... :grin



:lol Willow and Tara'd probably be kicked out for what they'd probably do... not that i'm implying anything of course! ;)

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby The Rose24 » Thu Aug 15, 2002 8:05 pm

Keep giving us the fun updates. :grin

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Aug 15, 2002 11:42 pm

Heya, Piper. :) I've been in a couple of water fights, myself. They can be fun. You know... I usually write from personal experience too. There's always alot of myself in my characters.



Hey, no pressure. I was just letting you know I was anxious to read more, is all. Thanks girl. :) What movie is that? Is that that new movie with Van Diesel (Sp?)



Good luck on getting the classes you want.



Take care, girl,

Jen

* * * * * *
Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby singgirl » Fri Aug 16, 2002 12:07 am

aww! that was so cute! water fight betweenthe girls....mmmmm....

singgirl
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby the vamp nurd » Fri Aug 16, 2002 3:56 am

water fight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [the vamp nurd's eyes glaze over with the thoughts NC-17...... :blush :grin :jaw ]

the vamp nurd
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Loco2 » Fri Aug 16, 2002 8:45 am

Quote:
“And don’t even get me started on that whole Eve thing! Puh-lease! That was Gabriel’s baby all the way!”




I KNEW IT!!! glad that anya and i feel the same way. i mean - when xena refers to her she totally says our[/i] child. and they take every oportunity to have a snog - and hello - bathing together.... and i'm shutting up, now....is it that obvious this is a topic i feel strongly on? ;)



hee hee - water fight - very cool :grin heh - sneaky willow :D



thank you, piper for the update! :D



steph

"I'm not gay - I'm just Trevor's bitch." - some drunken guy about his sexuality
"Oh, bugger off, you BROLLY!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Fri Aug 16, 2002 1:40 pm

The Rose24: :D I’ll do my best!



LeatherQueen: Defiantly a good thing! Defiantly, definitely! :grin



Jen: Yeah, XXX is the one w/ Van Diesel (I don’t know how to spell it :lol ) As for the class thing I probably will…hopefully. *crosses fingers* But I’m getting kinda mad cause the schedules were supposed to come out on the 15th! Grrr! *huff* I’m not so good with patience!



singgirl: :lol Cuteness suits them!



the vamp nurd: Can’t go wrong with a wet Tara! ;)



Steph:



Quote:
is it that obvious this is a topic i feel strongly on?




:lol Yeah, I think I caught onto that! ;)



Welcome for the update!



It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby TareBearRS » Sat Aug 17, 2002 8:36 am

Gotta love Xena and Gabrielle!!!



Waterfight woohoo, when it's hot those can be so good.

Nice update.

R.

TareBearRS
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Aug 18, 2002 9:03 pm

TareBearRSYa totally have to luv Xena and Gabby! It's a must! ;) *sniff* but now my dad took out my satilite so i can't watch it no more! *sob* :cry *sigh* I'll just have to watch my tapes...that is...if i can actually find them!



Waterfights can be excellent! :grin







Okay, so sorry for the lack of update but i'm having a major case of writer's block! There's probably going to be only a few more chapters (once i figure out what to write) cause i'm gonna start winding down to the end...there's only so many ideas i have in my tiny little excuse for a brain! ;) So, i really can't tell you guys when the next update's gonna be...but i'll do my best! :)

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby willowsgrrl » Mon Aug 19, 2002 12:06 am

hmmmm Willow/Tara and Xena/Gabby both mentioned in 1 story :p atry whoo hoo what more could a grrl ask for



christina

willowsgrrl
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Jennpurr » Mon Aug 19, 2002 12:35 am

Quote:
Jen: Yeah, XXX is the one w/ Van Diesel (I don’t know how to spell it ) As for the class thing I probably will…hopefully. *crosses fingers* But I’m getting kinda mad cause the schedules were supposed to come out on the 15th! Grrr! *huff* I’m not so good with patience!




Okay, thanks. I was pretty sure I was thinking of the right movie. You know, I've only seen one of his movies and that was, "Pitch Black." That movie was pretty cool.



Hey, I'm sure your schedule will turn out okay. Just think positive. And I'm not good with patience either. It's one of my weak points. I really hate it, actually. But, good luck, Piper. ;)



Take care,

Jen



* * * * * *
Quotes from Melissa Etheridge on 8/10/02, in The Woodlands, TX


"I've been to every, one of Melissa Etheridge's concerts! ... No, really, I have!"
"THAT, is a bat! ... Hey, does it have a ticket? ... It doesn't have a ticket!"

Jennpurr
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Tue Aug 20, 2002 7:34 pm

Christina:
Quote:
what more could a grrl ask for


i have no answer for that ;)



Jen: I never saw Pitch Black so i'll take your word for it! :grin XXX was pretty cool. the stunts were awsome but the plot was pretty much lame, but other than that... :D



Well i got my schedule back and it totally and 100% sucks! On A days i have Spanish 2 first period and then on B days i have PE/Heath first!!! :mad :rage I'm gonna spell all day on B days!!! grrr! And lunch is my last period (before study hall) But other than that it's okay i guess.







I know there hasn't been an update in a while but i've been super busy. I've just started Field Hockey today (it was my first practice) and i'm really tired afterwards so i dought i'll have it within the next few days. I've never played before...ever and running is takin a LOT out of me! :lol the last time i ran that much was the 6th grade mile! There's practice mornings and nights, 2-3 hours each and on our couple hour break i slept today! :lol But i'll try to get something out there, tomorow i'll see if i can't write something. Don't get your hopes up but hopefully i won't be too tired. :)

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Loco2 » Fri Aug 23, 2002 1:49 pm

ok, i'm english. and curious - what's study hall? you don't have to actually ... *gasp*... study?





"I'm not gay - I'm just Trevor's bitch." - some drunken guy about his sexuality
"Oh, bugger off, you BROLLY!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Sat Aug 24, 2002 4:46 pm

Quote:
you don't have to actually ... *gasp*... study?


God I hope not! That would suck!

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby Loco2 » Sun Aug 25, 2002 3:23 am

:lol - have fun with that!



writer's block, eh? may i suggest dawn falling off a very tall ride - possibly into a lake that contains angry man-eating sea-monsters?

"I'm not gay - I'm just Trevor's bitch." - some drunken guy about his sexuality
"Oh, bugger off, you BROLLY!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 11: Water-Wars

Postby foreverpiper » Sun Aug 25, 2002 8:27 am

Um, yeah...I'll take that into consideration... *cough*

It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby foreverpiper » Mon Aug 26, 2002 7:42 am

Okay, to some extent I finally got over my vicious case of writer's block to type a little something up. It's one of the shortest chapters but I had to shove a little something in there to keep the story rollin. So, without much further ado...the next chapter.



Oh, and I'm also sorry to say but there will be no angry-flesh-eating Dawn monsters in this part...



Chapter 12: The Innocent Bystander



The soaking wet Scoobies, apart from Dawn and Willow who didn’t have a single speck of H20 on them, went back to the lemonade stand to get more water, seeing as how they had waisted all of theirs and were all still very thirsty.



The girl working at the stand shook her head and smiled as she saw them return. She’d seen the whole thing and she had found it all highly amusing. She’d seen many water fights go on in front of her stands, but none had been this fun to watch. When she saw them returning she automatically started to fill up some cups for the group, knowing exactly what they’d be wanting when they got up to the stand.



When the group got up to the stand the girl cut in before Xander could ask for water. “6 more cups of water right?” she asked, a small smirk tugging at the edge of her lips.



A sopping wet Buffy shook her head, flinging water droplets in every direction. “How’d you guess?”



“Water fights tend to happen. And then the participants usually come back and want more water cause they waisted all of theirs dumping it onto the other person.” She grinned.



Buffy chuckled, “Guess you get a lot of that huh?”



“Pretty much.” The girl shrugged as she started filling the 3rd cup of water. “It’s fun to watch the reactions.” She grinned a knowing smile.



“So how much did ya see?” Xander asked joining in the conversation, while picking up the cup she handed to him.



“Saw the whole thing.” The girl smiled and pointed to the spot they had been in.



Willow gulped, “The whole thing?” she asked, her voice a squeak, recalling exactly what the girl could have seen.



The girl smirked as she turned her head to the two witches who were both blushing furiously. “All of it. Every. Last. Thing.” She grinned and had to work very hard to keep her laughter bottled up inside as to not to burst out laughing in front of the two women who were so obviously crazy about each other.



Tara’s face must have gotten at least 10 shades redder than her previous color and she buried her head into her hands, trying to hide. “Oh my God!” she moaned.



The girl couldn’t help but snicker, along with Anya and Buffy. “Don’t worry.” She said in a stage whisper to them, “I won’t tell anyone.”



Dawn, who had along with Buffy, Anya, and Xander had seen what had happened with Willow and Tara joined in the laughter. “And besides,” she told the lemonade stand girl, “you wouldn’t have to! Half the park saw it anyway!”



This said, the girl couldn’t hold her laughter in anymore and she burst out laughing, along with Buffy, Xander, and Anya, who were all already doubled up, much to the humiliation of Willow and Tara.



The girl had finished pouring their cups of water and everyone claimed a glass. “Try drinking it this time. I know throwing it on each other again must be very tempting but your gonna clean us fresh out.” She winked at them. “I suggest the Roman Rapids. You wanna get wet then that’s the place to go.”



“Okay thanks!” Buffy said before taking a small sip of her freshly poured water. “So which way do we go to this famous wet ride?”



The girl leaned over her stand and pointed to her left, Buffy’s right, “Keep walking that way until you get to the petting zoo, then turn left and walk to that big thing where it tests your strength and look to your right and you should see a big sign that says “Roman Rapids”.” She smiled politely.



“Great, thanks!” Buffy smiled her killer grin and turned back to her friends. “Okay you guys, you heard the nice lady, let’s go!” she turned back to the girl, “Thanks!”



The girl smiled, “Anytime.” They all turned and walked passed the girl, heading to where she pointed out for them. Tara passed quickly, almost as if she was trying to sprint out of sight. Willow followed but stopped when she heard the girl call after her, “Hey!”



Willow turned around, eyes wide and more than a little red. “Yeah?”



The girl smirked, “Nice tongue action.” She winked and smirked, causing Willow to go so red even her red eyebrows stood out in contrast to the brightness of her face. Willow had nothing to say to that as a response so she just nodded quickly and hurried after the rest of the group, who, apart from Tara, were howling with fits of laughter.



Willow and Tara hurried to the front of the group and broke into a frantic jog, trying to get away from the scene of the oh-so-fun-to-commit crime, all the while both of them muttering “Oh my Gods” and “I can’t believe that just happeneds”.



TBC…



It's better to be pissed off than to be pissed on. - My mantra on a bad day.


And never let it be said that I left a Tara craving unsatisfied. - Willow in Wilderness

foreverpiper
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby SquishyTrishy » Mon Aug 26, 2002 7:52 am

LOL, oh my gosh thats so funny, go warer girl! and yay for tounge action..



Trish

~I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine!~ Soul Shatter

SquishyTrishy
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby Loco2 » Mon Aug 26, 2002 8:28 am

woohoo - update!



damnit! no dawn-eating monsters. well...... it is the water ride next.... could be lots of giant angry squids in there.....



heh - lucky water-woman :) would so like to be in her shoes...



thanks for posting :D



by the way - have you downloaded that thing, yet? ;)



steph

"I'm not gay - I'm just Trevor's bitch." - some drunken guy about his sexuality
"Oh, bugger off, you BROLLY!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby snuggle79 » Mon Aug 26, 2002 8:44 am

ooh, "nice tongue action" :lol

Great Update! :)

Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Bitch! Witch! Ho!..mo!"

snuggle79
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby xita » Mon Aug 26, 2002 1:16 pm

ooh that's so funny, they are so cute blushing. I must say I am intrigued by this "wet ride" ;) I am sure Willow and Tara will find a way to smooch!

- - - - - - - - - - - -

Childie -"Not all girls are raving bloody lesbians, you know!"

George - "That's a misfortune of which I am perfectly well aware."

The Killing of Sister George

xita
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby MissQuirky » Mon Aug 26, 2002 1:26 pm

Yes ya gotta comment on the nice tongue action! ;) Can't wait 4 some "Roman Rapids" goodness and wet-ness! ;)

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby spazz07 » Mon Aug 26, 2002 2:29 pm

Poor Willow and Tara being picked on. Though it was a nice little show they put on :)



Cheers

Nath

Isn't it funny how you feel your most tired five minutes before you have to get up.

spazz07
 


Re: Ch. 12: The Innocent Bystander

Postby tiredsoul » Mon Aug 26, 2002 5:06 pm

Writer's block suits you well. This was a great update. Very funny. Nothing like having a total stranger commenting on your "tongue action." :) I love seeing these two get embarrassed.



--celia

---------------------------------



"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

tiredsoul
 

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