hey everyone , well i thought i'd give a go at writing a few poems , just to get some feelings out and stuff. Well all feedback is welcome both good and bad.... -hehe wow look at that guy . *ahem* Well i hope you like it.....





Shattered



You shattered my heart into a million pieces

You left me to die on the floor

But please just tell me this one thing....

Why don't you love me anymore?







Daggers



Daggers pierce into my heart

Why can't you see?

I am a prisoner of this pain

As i pray to be free







Cry



I cry my tears alone at night

Look at the mess you have made

I am deeply trapped in this sorrow

Why won't happiness come to my aid?







** Well that's all that i can think of for now , hopefully i'll write more soon . Thanks for reading yay!



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

YAY Hannah!! Well done, i really like this,

Keep on doing the good work, you are very good!



Love: Jesse/Drumbly

Me: "..I fall for you more everyday i live.."

Kattie: "..Hey, i told you to becareful and look where you walk[/b]

Liked your poems bit short,you could add a few more lines

Great poetry

Hey Hannah



LOVE those poems!!!



I want more, more, more!!!



Thanks for sharing, they seem to be very private



Take care



-Viv-

Yes, I have Keyboard Dyslexia!

hey JESSE! , thank you very much, i'm glad you like it

hey SJ , thank you for your feedback and thank you for the good criticism , and i've taken that into account and made this one longer

Hey VIV , thank you very much, i hope you like the next one too......



Dead



Words can't express my pain

As i sit here alone on my bed

Gazing at the heavy rain

My heart which now feels dead



I would've given you everything

My love, my trust, my heart

I would've loved you for eternity

I thought we would never part



I guess i was just naive

To think you wanted me too

But this you'll never know

I always wished for you.





Well thank you to everyone for taking the time to read my poems, it means alot to me



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Hannah!



Hey, that was great. I can really feel with ya, cause i thought like that a few months ago.

You should write more of that, cause wow, i really liked that.



Love: Kattie

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

Wow hannah... good stuff. A little short, but very powerful. Very sad too.



::hugs::



I'd really like to read some more if you have any... pleaze?

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

Great poem

Liked it a lot,thanks for sharing

hey KAT! thank you very much you used to feel like that? awww i'm sorry *hugs* hmmm i'll try working on some more soon for ya

Hey Ryan , thank you very much , wow *hugs back* thanks - well i'm gunna try and write some more soon , my brain's kinda hard to get into gear sometimes though , but i'm gunna try ....

Hey SJ , thank you

thank you all for reading , it means a lot to me



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

i just wrote a new poem , eh ...i hope it's long enough, cuz i have trouble writing long poems . This poem doesn't really have a pattern to it , it rhymes in some places and not in others...lol - but anyway , i hope you all like it





YOU



You were the reason for my smile,

You had a charm,

You were the only reason i took a shallow breath each day,

You always knew how to comfort me and tell me everything was gunna be okay,



But where are you now?



You had a way with words,

That filled my heart and soul,

You knew how to make me warm,

Even though i was so cold.



YOU

And only you



You were the reason i wanted to live,

But the only thing i had to give,

Was my love and soul,

Was that not enough for you?

You gave me everything,

That i could wish for,

You are the only person,

That i would die for,

But you broke my heart

You made me cry my heart out,

You made me scream and shout,

You never really loved me,

You just felt pity for me,

You'll always know who i love,



YOU

And only You

ALWAYS







hmm well um i'm not really that sure about this one...... - hehe even i think it's kinda weird , well anyway ,thanks for reading



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Wow Hannah... I love it! The emotion is strong and heart-breaking, but what really speaks to me is the passion: The sheer ferocity with which you switch between emotions and FORCE the reader to empathize with your inner turmoil.



"YOU"

Quote:

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You are the only person,

That i would die for,

But you broke my heart

You made me cry my heart out,

You made me scream and shout,

You never really loved me,

You just felt pity for me,

You'll always know who i love,



YOU

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That just overwhelmed me: The crechendo of such raw emotions that shifted from ardent adoration to utter confusion, to scorned fury, to knowing resignation... it was beautiful.



Wow Hannah, I'm impressed, you got me so worked up that I had to get all analytical: you're GOOD



More please!

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.



(Translated from "The Gift")

Hannah..*sniffs* I don't cry*sniffs* but they were beautiful ans so full of passion*sniffs* sorry I'm in a bad place...anyway hannah I loved them and I hope ypu write more..





kiwi

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

Great poem

hi everyone , thank you all so much for reading and replying to my poems , and i'm very sorry, but i'm not going to be able to write more for a little while cuz i'm in a bad place right now . But thank you all so much for reading, and i'll try and get back to you with more poems when i can - thank you



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

hey everyone, i didn'tthink that i would be able to write for a while cuz i'm going through a hard time but it turns out that it gives me more inspiration and feelings to write more> These poems are pretty depressing cuz it kinda explains my feelings right now - well i hope you all like 'em





You've Made My Grave



Can you believe that once i was happy?

The one time when i mattered most to you

You took me from my pain

You were so precious to me

I always dreamed that i was loved

And then it happened

Like a drug healing a wound

I felt so whole

So alive

But now i feel dead

You stole my soul

As i die inside

You stand and stare

With nothing to say

Not even a prayer

You kill me inside

And pierce my heart

Which once so innocently loved you

I still can't deny my feelings

As i die inside

Hearing you words

Of hatred and lies

You killed my soul

And you made my grave.







Pills



i sit here on my bed

Staring at these white little things

They will save me from my pain

They can stop the hurt

Of which you caused me

But how many should i take?

5,10,50, how much will numb you?

Right at this moment

They're my only hope

They're my saviour

These white little things

They can do so much for me

Stopping the pain

Making me numb

Right in this moment

That seems like paradise

I stack them up one by one

Taking one for every tear

But why did i stop?

They can stop the pain

I'm already dead on the inside

Why not the outside too?

What difference would that make?

Would anyone care or notice?

I stopped

I broke down

Why didn't i take them?

So i could be dead

A question

That has no answer

Dead

Is wishfull thinking







Did I Mean That Little To You?



How can your feelings fade so quickly?

Was i that easy to get over?

Did i mean that little to you?



How could you sit there?

As i broke down and cried

Did i mean that little to you?



How could you lie to me?

yet after all we've been through

did i mean that little to you?



How can you blame me still

Even though i already blame myself

Do i mean that little to you?



How can you forget me

When i think of you every second

Do i mean that little to you?



How can you watch?

While i die inside

Do i mean that little to you?



How can you live with yourself?

After all that you put me through

Do i mean that little to you?



Please just tell me this one thing

What do i mean to you now?



Special thanks to Kiwi6969 , Kat, Jesse, SJ, Pacou, Ryan, thank you all for reading and replying - oh and a big thank you to my ex for breaking my heart and making these poems possible to write ...

(sorry i'm a little bit bitter)

Well thank you everyone, it means alot to me



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Hey hannah *hugs*



I hate it when hearts get broken, for such beautiful meaningful poems to be written....such a waste...hannah I love them but dont take anything futher than here...



kiwi/Teresa

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

Hope things get better for you

Very powerful poetry

hey lil one



how are you? good i hope.

you know, i really like wha you wrote, it is just great how you can show your feelings and i am serious "I will kick that B****..." ....

okay keep on the wonderful work and SMILE ...



Love: Kattie



btw: no more pills please??

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

hey everyone, some more depressing poems for ya



TERESA- heya awww thanks *hugs back*- thank you soo much, you're very sweet , no worries about me, i'm fine

SJ- thank you very much

Hey KAT - thank you honey i'm fine





LEFT IN THE DARK



i searched for you

but you found me

you stayed by my side

when i wanted to hide

you brought me out

and you set me free

i felt so alive

so happy to be me

you brought out my smile

you brought out my soul

i felt so whole

but then you left

you left me alone

you ran away from me

what did i do?

tell me the answer

why won't you just answer me?

you left me standing

all alone

crouched in the dark

you left me

i hid alone

and i waited for you

i waited for what seemed like eternity

scared in the dark

but you never came back

you never came back for me







sorry everyone- i only had time to write one , because i spell checked like 3 and lost all of my work *dumbass right here* - but i'll have the other two up soon - thanks for reading



*hannah

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

hey hannah.



that was great again, awesome to be hornest...

i wanna read the other two poems soon...please??



take care...



Love: muff/Kattie

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

hehe next poem ......

THANK YOU SO MUCH KAT!! - YOU'RE THE BEST- I HOPE YOU LIKE THE NEXT ONE HONEY



PILLOW



i place my head on my tear soaked pillow

thinking thoughts of nothing but you

did you plan it all?

plan to hurt me so?

i stare at the wall which faces me

as a tear slowly slides sown my cheek

falling onto my pillow

you were once my pillow

the one thing that i leaned on,to cry on

but now all i have

is this object to cry on

it won't comfort me

or tell me everything is gunna be ok

it's just a pillow

soaked with my tears of hurt from you

how did everything lead to this?

even though not so long ago everything was so good

my pillow won't last much longer

it can't collect so many tears

where will i go now?

what do i have left to cry on?

my tears could fill an ocean

an ocean of hurt, pain and sadness

but my pillow has soaked up my tears

you were just like my pillow

soft gentle and peaceful

the one thing that gave me comfort and peace

but now you're gone

all i have left is my pillow

an object to collect my tears and sorrow

and a wall to stare at

as i lay down to rest alone.







thanks for reading everyone



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

Hey hannah *hugs and kisses your cheek* I soooo love this poem...I to went through the same thing...belive me there IS light at the end of the tunnel....I know cause I found it..

so you just hang in there ok?... *hugs*



kiwi/teresa

we are all lips in life sucking on one big nipple ~ kiwi6969

"shes out ther,our souls have meet,our hearts have meet,just not ourselves"

Love your poetry

Thanks for sharing such personal feelings.

Hey Teresa, awww yay *hugs and kisses your cheek too* - wow thank you so much, you're always so nice - i'm sorry that you went through the same thing *hugs*



Hey SJ thank you very much for reading and replying - and i hope ya like the next one too







WHY DON'T YOU CARE?





i know you don't care

your never did care about me

i was stupid to believe your pitiful lies

in which you said you cared

but i know you don't

i can tell

you wouldn't even blink an eyelash

if i cried

if i died inside

you wouldn't even care

well you're not worth it

you're not worth it anymore

i shouldn't care either

but i'm not going to stoop as low

i still care

and i always will

it's why we're different

you and me

i still care about you

even when you don't care about me

you're not even worth

a breath i breathe

i pity you









thanks for reading everyone and sorry it's a little shorter than the others.



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

That poem is great

You have a good writing style,thanks for sharing

Hey Hannah. Good poem, even if it is -worthy. You're a sweet gal and I know u don't particularly care for this kind of stuff, but trust me: Banging your head to Kittie at 110 dB is a great way to relieve some anger. (Besides, those chicks are kinda hot )

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Listen! Do you hear that? IT'S THE STICKY NOTES OF THE APOCOLYPSE!!! --Double D, "Mama's Little Ed"

hey hannah



that was great. i really hope you will write some more of that soon. you almst made me with the last one...



take care

Kattie

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

hey SJ - thanks for reading

Hey RYAN , thank you very much

Hey KAT , Thank you so much - aww no

- i'll try and make the next poems more happier , i don't want any depressed kitties on my hands.....

Sorry i have no new poems today , i can't seem to think of anything lately , but i'm working on it , so new poems up soon



*hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*