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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2002 10:23 pm 

A Tail Of The West
BY Moonsp666@aol.com
Spoiler: Non
Rating: R i have some bad laguange and some other stuff later on.
Disclamers: Ok I dont own buffy, thats joss. These caharters may look
like tara and willow but dont really act like them. This story is like a A/U
and in the past kind of story. There will be no deamons this is stricly a
human story but thtere will be bad guys. and i do not own any other
carters of other shows that i may meation.
I hope u like this story, i would like feed back from y'all good or bad.

Astrid McClay walked into the rusty spike a saloon and brothel
for a rest. She was dressed in buckskin pants and a tan sleeveless
shirt that show off her Curvy body. At her sides were two shinning
colts with pearl handles that had Her initials engraved in the handle.
All the customers were men who all Glared disapproval at her.
The only women she saw in there were working the men.
The Bartender looked at this young girl and wondered what in the
hell she was doing in here was she lost or what. He didn't want
trouble in here and the way the men were looking at her he didn't think
that would be possible. Astrid walked right up to the bar and said " Water."
Her voice was low and harsh from the lack of moisture.
Water was all the bartender could think, no one ever asked for water.
When her looked into her eyes to see if she was kidding her eyes were
so blue that they looked like sapphires, so he didn't say anything and
got her water for her. " Thanks." She said and gave him a half grin.
That was it he thought no harm would come to her she kind of reminded him of his daughter.
" No Problem Miss if any one bothers you come let me know. My name is
James." " Thanks James I'll remember that." Astrid went to sit at a table
that was Empty and put her feet up on the extra chair there, checking the
clock behind The bar it was 1:30 p.m. Only half an hour more till her
appointment at the bank.She looked up to the second level of the saloon
and looked at a couple ofthe girls There but there were none there she
would come back for to have a little fun With later. Just then the chair her
feet were on was kicked out from under and man in his late 20s or so Astrid
thought was standing in front of her." Are you a whore?" Not now was all she
could think, she didn't need this right now If she came back home with
cuts and bruises Samantha would have her ass for not letting anyone come
with her. "What?" She said as she stood up slowly " Is a pretty thing like you
for hire. I want to buy you." The drunken man said, as he was about to grab her. Astrid grab his hand before he touched her and twisted it and answered him
" First off don't ever touch a women unless she says its ok.
Second I'm not a working women, and even if I was I would refuse you
You piece of cow shit." With that said she throw him out on to the street.
When she looked back in at the saloon the women were smiling at her
while the Men sat there fuming. James was at the bar watching the
whole scene play out And when she throw that guy out he was proud that guy
was always mean and rude To his girls. Her winked at her and she bowed her
head and walk to her horse and down the street to the bank. " Did you see
that miss. Fantastic, that guy was a real jerk." The black horse with a
little white coloring on her noes just snorted like she understood.
" Well time to get what I came here for." She walked in to the bank
and walked up to the Teller " I have an appointment with Mr. Madison."
The mouse-faced girl told her he was In the back and was expecting her.
She thanked the girl and headed to the back. When She knocked he told
her to come. " Miss. McClay how nice it is to meet you." Astrid wasn't in
the mood for small talk or plesntrys she just wanted her money and to go.
" Mr. Madison I'm tired and want to leave so can we just get on with it?"
" Um. Yes" he grabbed some paper and a pen and put them in front of
Astrid to sign. " So its all there?" "Yes Miss All $10,456. If you don't mind
may I ask why you're pulling all your money out?" " I'm buying some land
and building a house for me and my family." With that said and walked out
she hated being in a room with people who were Acting fake, it made her
uneasy. She and Miss. Fantastic were walking by the saloon when
Astrid heard a muffled scream; it was so faint she almost missed it.
" What the hell was that? Stay here Miss Fantastic." She silently made
her way to the Side of the saloon, when she peaked her head around
the side she saw the man she had kick out of the saloon there and
there was another man there his back was turned to her and he was
holding someone down. That asshole just wont quit will he? Astrid readied
Herself for a fight. This was going to hurt alot, I hope i wont have to kill him
was her last thought befor she walked in to the little ally way.
TBC...



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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2002 11:59 pm 
Is it Willow? Is it Willow? Uh, wait that's not her anme is it? It's probably soemthing like Clarice or Pearl. Please don't let it be Pearl!!!! Anyway, i hope you post more soon :
-Will

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"Hear that, baby? You're my always."



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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 12:45 am 
THIS IS COOL really is it willow i like the screw everyone attitude *smiles* great job deamoon

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"That'll put marzipan in your pie plate,Bingo!!"



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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 4:46 am 
willntlover & tarabear thanks so much, i glad u like the story so far. As for Willows
soon to be name i can tell you now its not
Clarice or Pearl. As for Astrids screw everyone attitude well thats going to stick
for a bit but i tell u now we will get to see
warm and fuzzy Astrid soon.


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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 9:57 pm 
Part 2


Astrid stepped into the little ally way to see if the men Would notice her before she voiced her presence to them.
She lifted up her shirt in the back to expose her knife in case she need to grad it and she flipped one of the tabs holding her gun in place.

“ Hey Boys can anyone join in on the fun or is this a boys only thing?” The man she had thrown out earlier looked at her and said “ You! You bitch. I’m going to make you pay.
Mike keep holding this little one that ones mine.”
The mike still had his back turned to Astrid but when the other guy started to make his way to her mike turned around and she saw him holding a girl. She was tiny, her green eyes full of fear. She also was crying. She had cuts on her arms and a bruise on her face, no doubt from where the two men hit her. There was also a small cut on the side of her eye where the blood was mixing in to her scarlet hair.

Astrid saw the abuse that little girl took and made a decision
To make them hurt maybe a broken bone or two.
She remained calm on the outside but inside she was pissed off. The man walking to Astrid was a bit unnerved by how
Calm she was shewasn’t scared is even angry by the looks of it. That’s what scared him the most.
“ So you want to join in on the fun? Well for you it wont be so much fun come here.” He pulled her by the arm
To the back of ally. She grabbed his hand on her arm and twisted herself so she was behind him. She had his arm in her hand now and was painfully pulling it up higher on his back.
She kicked him in the knee and he crashed to the ground “ Now see I thought I told u to treat women a little bit nicer earlier didn’t I? I thought I did. Well I just going to Have to teach you a little lesson.” She grabbed his hand harder and pulled it up till she heard a loud popping sound at his shoulder. “ Now mister it isn’t broken but dislocated. Now if I see you again I’ll break it next time you got me?” Before he had a chance to answer she hit him in the back of the head with the hilt of her knife. He slumped to the dirt ground pass out. “ Mike we can do this the easy way or the hard way. You can let the girl go and walk away or I can
Beat the crap outta you. Your choice.” Astrid said as she made her way closer to him. Mike took the easy way out and let the girl go and ran as fast as he could down the street.
The little redheaded girl fell to the ground shaking and crying. Astrid decided to go to the girl slowly and talk to her in a calm voice so she wouldn’t scare her.
“ Everything going to be fine no miss they wont hurt you.
I just want to help you ok?” The girl froze still and looked up at Astrid “ You wont hurt me?” she said in a child like voice. “ No I wont.” She knelt down next to the girl and put her hand on her shoulder and tried to give her best reassuring smile. The girl nodded. Astrid put her arms around the girl to help her stand up “ So honey what’s your name?” “Charlotte. Charlotte Conner. You?”
“ My name is Astrid McClay.” “ So I’m safe with you
Right?” “ Right.” “ Good.” Then Charlotte passed out falling
Limp in Astrid arms.
Tbc….



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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 10:13 pm 
Awesome! I Loved Charlotte fainting in Astrid's arms!! That is so cool. Great job And btw, I think Charlotte is a cool name.
-Will

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"Hear that, baby? You're my always."



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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 10:31 pm 
Heya... I'm quite enjoying this. What can I say? I'm a sucker for A/U... just one suggestion: maybe get a beta reader? Though this is well written and very enjoyable, I noticed some typos and grammatical errors... so umm.. cheers! Keep up the good work!


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 Post subject: FIC: A Tail Of The West (1/?)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 26, 2002 11:11 pm 
jea i glad u like the story as for a beta i dont have one but if anyone wants the job let me know and u got it.
moon


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