Hi Guys...
Yes Update here for you...I am having a bithch of a time doing feedback simply because I can't seem to write it without exiting without saving it...So out of practice I am.....LOL
Anyway,for a certain person who needs to sleep,here is this and feedback will follow...
Thanks
jay/wt4evr
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no....no....you can't do this...and did I say no??? I'll cry you a river if you do that! well, if miss-bitchy-f******-suzie does that, but since she's your character then you
pweaseeeee!!!
Ohhh.Its okay Jay.I promise...............
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I like her
And here we go.Ya see,you people do this.Not me.You like her.
equasion
.Like her + rose fic= bye bye
Thanks Jay for the feed back.....I will try to update more frequently
wimpy0729Quote:
Willow really needs is a kick in the ass to get her up and moving.
And she is going to get one very soon.More then one...
And I love her therapist too, who also isn't taking any shit.
No.She is a scrappy little thing and she is going to be some fun in here for sure...
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Seems Susan has some complications with her little "plan" to off Phil. Well, I'm glad her plans don't always work out. She tried to have Willow killed, but it didn't work, tried to have Sheila killed, but that also didn't work. And now, whoever her evil partner is also failed to finish the job on Phil. Oh, I love it when she doesn't get what she wants.
LOL...Yes.Her plans havent been going to well as of late.There is a bit of a turn coming in the update after this one,which by the way,will not be to far off, and this is going to really get heated up for many people..Its a fun thing for sure to write the next bit after this update.I expect some severe lashing out from people at her next move.....but it is all in the name of plot right?
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Now I can't wait to see why this day is so significant for both our girls. Please don't leave us hanging too long.
I won't.It is going to be clear here soon.I say about three more updates and this will all come together...
Thank for the feedback Wimpy.As always it is wonderful to get.
Paint the SkyFirst,my apologize for lack of feedback onQSM's..I have not had a lot of time latley and reading is something I have neglected.I am now reading and catching up and feedback is forthcoming...lots of it too...Ive missed a number of updates.Which is good for me because its sort of like not having to wait so long..
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Go Sheila! Tough love is definately the route to go with Willow, and her PT ain't gonna take that feeling sorry for herself shit either.
Yes.They are both a couple of tough cookies...I like writing Shelia for sure.The PT is going to be a big player here as well so I think you will enjoy it for sure.
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Can't say I like the tease with the whole significant day thing. Dammit, I hate being left hanging, so you better tell us soon Missy
Sorry for that.The teasing does indeed suck.It is a little bit clearer here but not to much.
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Looks like Susie's plans are starting to go just a tad wrong, for that I'm pleased, but please, please please, leave Millo alone. Promise nothing or no-one is gonna hurt the little doggie?
This,I can say with confidence to you.No,nothing to bad will happen to Millo....I like him too much..
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Interesting that in this update neither Willow or Tara made any reference about the other. That is not of the good.
Its not is it? I will have to be careful to not do this again..it was unintentianal I assure you...
Zampsa1975Quote:
Good that Sheila isn't taking shit from Willow... I hope her memory comes back soon... I really really hope that the bitch monsters plan to kill Milo fails miserably and her part in shooting Willow and trying to kill Sheila comes to light...
Sheila will soon have a thing happen that is going to kick start this game and very soon this story is going to be moving at a very quick pace.
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Bad Rosemary
Me?
Bad?
Really ?
Who,Juju,have you been talking to ?
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How are ya today?
Wonderful and bbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaadddddddddd...
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How're the kids?
I wish I knew.
Yat is fine...lonely but fine..no dusty .she is in the dark to as too the how are they thing.We know theyre fine cause they call at odd hours and leave messages..
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How's the bird?
Better now.Over the yelling thing I hope
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WTF will happen to change things forever, and will it be changed for good or for bad?
I dont know.I wish I did.Its scarry really to be left in the dark.They never tell me anything....
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You got me all worried.
Awwwwee..
Sorry for that Sweetie.Don't worry...Its me.I always write happy things.you know this..
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Poor mar... Foaling that way is owie.. And yes, often it is death... For one of them at least... But miracles happen don't they?
Im sure they do.
In nice fics.....
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Susan Bitch's plan is frailing somewhat
It is.Its failing badly.I will warn you.The next update after this?Badness for the good guys
......Goddness for the badguys....
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Ooooh maybe Phil has seen reason and has turned himself in? Yeah?
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Or mayb esusan bitch has tried to kill Millo! But she can't 'cause he's the Heroe here.
Yes.She will.And it will be bad....sad and bad...oh...there is no way to combine these two words eo do that funny thing like spork or spuffy or bragolina....you know...that thing
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Now, to the serious. I frighten you?
No.Why would you?
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Ok maybe I can't of am firghtening sometimes... Not now though 'cause I have no idea of how to kill Susan..
Really?
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. Painfully...
Well may a little scarry but nothing major
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Well, maybe she could be thrown injail wearing an Iron Mask and ending unknown of her own jailer 'cause nobody will never name her or see her face and seh'll die of infection on her face...
Well a lot really.You do frighten me a lot
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well if she's wearing an Iron Mask, sealed, she can't wash her face... yucky yuck)
Tottally frightning you are.
..and a bit twisted too.
...kinnda sexy and ggrroowwlll really..
...to a nutjob..
..mental instute escapy,serial killer,strange torchery person..
.but still juju,sexy non the less..
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she could also be walked on by thousands of hysteric Mylène fans... That'd be nice
Death by stampeding Pole Goddess worshippers...yummie
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Anyway, no I don't lik ethe visual of Tara's ass bouncing off while riding, 'cause she is ridign another horse, I want her to ride Juju!!! Don't worry about the visual, horses have a large view Juju will not see her ass bouncing but she will be able am sure to see her boobies bouce.
LOL LOL LOL
LOL LOL LOL
LOL LOL..
..youre a perv...Its clear to me....Juju is a perv...I had no idea...but there it is....PERV....
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Dear Rosemary, won't you come out to write
Dear Rosemary, greet the brand new day
The sun is up, the sky is blue
It's beautiful and so is your fic
Dear Rosemary won't you come out and write...
Dear Rosemary open up your eyes
Dear Rosemary see the readers' wait
The wind is low the birds will sing
That you are part of the kitten board
Dear Rosemary won't you write an update?
Look around round
Look around round round
Look around
Dear Rosemary let me see you write
Dear Rosemary like a little child
The clouds will be a daisy chain
So let me see you write again
Dear Rosemary won't you let me see you write?
Juju wrote Beatles at me..
..I can die happy now.
No one has ever done this.
.Im touched..
...really...I kid you not.and the dancing guys.
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You Juju,are after me in a sexual way arent you??
I know it now.
..its obvious..
.No????
You don't???
Really???
Okay...
Thanks Sweetie for the feedback and humor....
..and songs LOL
tararules2007Quote:
so for this is a great story
Thank you.I hope you like the rest...
MsKittyBQuote:
I'm here. I'm here, I'm here!!! See, I work overtime and miss my favorite fanfic update. Twice! Sooo Smart ass me! I'm here!! lol
Okay.I will
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Where the hell have I been?!
I dont know....where?
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I'm a bad fan, thou must be spanked and pecked at!!!
Ohhhhh..
..yummm.....We aim to please Kitty...
...both of us
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Oh, I will take all the smart assed remarks from you!
You will???
Really? I dont beleive you.
Your credibillity has been damaged here...
.missing updates is sinful To the GQR...
as is changing the name on your beast...
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That's not gonna work either because I like that. Humm, damn, I cant think of anything. Well if you think of a good punishment, I'm all for it
Ohhhhhh....
You Kitty,have just left the gate wwwiiidddeeee ooopppeeennnn
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Queen Rosemary. Please forgive me. Is Spooky mad at me too? Tell him he can peck at me when he's threw pecking at you. lol I love you Spooky come peck away!
Sorry...hes run off with a band of rats to play music in a coffee bar in Vegas..
...for money.
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Thou must comence with the feedback.... Here's it goes. I think I might start off on my knees begging...
well theres a visual
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MILLO!! Please dont hurt Millo! Please!! Pretty please!! I love him!!"Dont hurt him! PLEASE!! Leave him be! Not Millo!
Yea...okay.
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See, I said this before in one of your updates and what did you tell me "Humm, you'll just have to wait and see." I was right wasnt I. I knew it. Susan hell bitch is going to try and frame Tara. Am I right? Hun? Hun?!
Yiou are a wise cookie there darlin'..
..she is indeed.I would hate to be a criminal in your district...
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umm, when are we going to see Susie hell bitch get disemboweled or get ran over by and SUV? Gotta say the more I read her dialogue the more I want her to die in the most horrible, painful, gruesome way ever.
I
suggest you get with Juju on this.She is into this face thing to now.Like the mask of flesh you where weilding about a while ago?She has this metal one going now..intresting to see what you will come up with.
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P.S Boobs... Dont ask lol
To late.I know all of this now.
Thanks Kitty,for the feedback.
Willowtree252Quote:
love you bunches but I have nothing to say to you right now
Well thanks for this...I am inspired to write volumes due to this unbeleivable feedback....LOL
Kidding Dia,you know right??
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Please Rosy I will send my bikini clad msn wife to clean your pool
Oh well....tell you what,keep the bikini,send the hot chick and we'll call it square....
Thanks for you feedback.It is appriciated
LittleBitQuote:
Hey I didn't even realise that this story had been updated ... great work. And Willow has to get out of her funk and sort her shit out - but it's good plot development. But I'm sure you will fix this up soon??? And get our girls together???
LOL...Thats funny.I have done this very thinfg as well.I am glad your enjoying the story.I am enjoying writing it.
Thanks for the comments
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Hopefully Millo wont get killed... That'll be tragic really. I like him.
Please update so we can find out what happens next.
Here ya go....update for you.The other,i cant promise anything....but I wouldnt worry much.Hes safe I think.
Thanks for you feedback.It is appriciated.
This is still your story.....Its not gonna change.....I miss you.
I'll still sing you love songs...writen in the letters of your name...brave the storm to come,for it Surley Looks Like Rain..
Grateful Dead
CHAPTER 12
It had been almost two hours since they had arrived at the ranch,and still Tissy had not gotten up.
This was a bad sign and Tara knew what they would need to do.She hated this.She hated it because it broke her heart to see this mother watch her baby, and want nothing more then to go to him and be his mother.The birth had been rough.She had lost far to much blood and she knew that her chances were next to zero at this point.She looked up from the mare now,the first time in almost thirty minutes she had taken her eyes off of hers and looked to Les.
"Daddy,I want to talk to you outside for a minute.Les,you want to come over here and try and keep her a bit calm?If she tries to get up, just put your hand right here on the back of her neck and shell lay back down and call me. Okay?" She managed a smile although she knew her voice was giving her true emotion away.Les looked to the ground and lightly kicked a bit at the hay there as he made his way from the colt to his mother and knelt down."Alright now girl,your alright."he said to the horse with a catch in his voice he started to stroke her neck.The mare calmed now at the sound of his voice and Tara and her father made there way outside.Donnie stayed there with Les and finished cleaning up the colt with the hay,rubbing him dry with it.
"What do you think Dad?"Tara asked.
"I think we might need to go on and take care of this pretty quick.I think she's in a bad way and there is no sense in prolonging it."
"Yea,I agree.God ,I hate this. Im just so tired of all of this sadness everywhere I go.I must be some kind of bad luck or something."Tara said as the tears started to sting her eyes.
"Hey now,this is not your fault Tara.If it hadn't been for you ,neither of them would have stood a chance.Now You need to get yourself right and lets go in there and help Les through this.Its going to be hard for him as it is.Now,Tara,I know you know this already,but you have a gift.The same one your mother had.I need you to go on in there now and talk to Tissy.Get this thing a bit calm and let us do what we know needs doing.Okay?"
Tara sighed and looked down.She knew that it was true.She did share this thing with her mother.This ability to communicate so to speak with animals.Horses in perticular.She thought however,it was backward to say the gift was hers.In the real world she knew the gift belonged to this beautiful creature.This was something that was lost to most people because they had blocked it off.She was certain if anyone listened hard enough ,you would hear it.She felt to at this point that perhaps she would have a difficult time of this today.Her mind was not as clear and open as it usually was.Her mind was occupied by other thoughts almost continuously as of late.That and those thought were Willow.
She shock it off,closed her eyes ,and took in a deep lungful of breath."I can do this."she said to herself as she followed behind her father ,who know carried the case he had retrieved from the locked tool box in the bed of the truck.It was something that was always there just in case.Something he never wanted to use,but knew was necessary to save this poor animal from the suffering she was enduring.
They made there way inside and Tara was immediately shaken by the powerful feeling she got as she entered the barn.
The baby.It was something .Something not right with the foal.As it would be for most people,her attention should have been to immediately look to him to see what it was that was being picked up.However,in this circumstance it was to look at the mother.
She was trying to tell Tara something.She approached and knelt down.Placed her hand on her nose and gave a light scratch."What is it Tissy? What are you trying to say."She said it silently,to no one but the mother and as she listened for the response she heard Donnie speak."Dad,We got us a problem here."
Tara looked up and saw Donnie holding up one foot of the newborn,careful to not let it touch down."Oh God."she said to herself as she realized what it was.She stayed there with Tizzy,sensing she needed her at this point.She looked up too her father as he approached Donnie and the colt,and saw as her father bent down to take a look."Oh,damn,what the hell is this."he said as he looked at the leg.
Tara looked down at Tizzy and she saw the panic in the mothers eyes.She wanted to look away.Couldnt bare to watch this.She desperately wanted to run from this barn and away from these people.This was her fault again.
She did this.It had to be her.She was the one who maneuvered this baby and she must have done something wrong when she turned him around in order to allow him to be delivered.No.I wont run.Not again.She spoke to herself.I can't.
"Help him.Help him and he'll help her."she heard this.Clearly.She looked down at Tizzy."What did you say Tizzy?"she asked mentally.
"Save him and he'll save her.I promise."the horse communicated back to her.She was in awe at this point.In her life never had she had a whisper so strong and so clear."I'm out of my mind"she said to herself.She shook her head and looked up again and her attention was again drawn back to Tizzy as she heard again the same thing."He'll save her.And more.Help him.Please"
"Okay,this is,this is just crazy...no,I am not hearing this I know..."She closed her eyes tight and reopened them and looked into the mothers eyes again.
"Please.Help him.I promise.I promise you he will."
She knew it then.This was not in her head but real.Real and clear and she knew.
"What is it Daddy?"She called out.
"Well baby girl ,he's got a twist here in this leg.Its a bad one too.I don't know but I think its not so good for him Tara.I don't know if it can be fixed,and if it can,a horse this young,can't be good to keep him in a sling.He'll miss out on the critical development stage here.It would be highly unlikely he could ever be healed , let alone sound ."
"Unlikely?Yes,unlikely but not impossible right?"
"Well,no,not impossible,but the time and the money in this,on something that's only about a 1 in a 1000 shot.Not really fair to him or Les.Of course that dissension is his."
He looked up at Les .Les looked at the ground ,again kicking at the hay."I can't ,I don't got the money or the time.You know that with the my ranch and the new baby and all.I'm sorry,but its impossible for me."he said as he raised a hand ad wiped away a tear that threatened to escape.
"I understand Les.Dont feel bad.Id make the same decision and I don't have half of what you have there on your plate."Mr.Maclay answered.
Tara was panicking now.She looked down at Tizzy,a look of sadness in her own eyes,and as they meet,she heard again"Please."
Without thought or delay,Tara looked up,"I'll take him.I'll try it."
She felt it immediately,the mother that lay there under her gentle and comforting touch,relaxed.Became peaceful and she heard a solitary thought from her."Thank you."
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"Well Willow ,tell me how you like the new therapist?She's great isn't she?She will be wonderful for you I know already."Sheila looked at her daughter quickly and then back to the road.She had said nothing all the way home.Not a word.Not a complaint,bicker or demand came from Willows mouth.
Was this good?She wasn't sure.It wasn't bad.She didn't think at least.She was angry now at herself.Here she was a shrink,yet when it came to her little girl she could not tell you a think about her mental state.It was frustrating for her.Painful and frustrating."Well what about we stop and grab some lunch at Brent's?"
Willow turned,looked at her mother and asked,"When did you stop missing dad?'
Shelia pulled into the lot of the deli and looked at Willow in the eyes.She looked down a moment,cleared her throat , and played with the car keys in her hand."When I wake up in the morning,the first thing I do is look to his side of the bed and pray that when I open my eyes he's going to be there.Ive done this everyday since he's been gone.
The difference now is that I can get out of bed and do what needs to be done,knowing that I will survive this day without him.As far as not missing him?I miss him nearly every hour of every day.Its not as hard as it used to be , but it is still something I know I will do for the rest of my life.I'll never stop missing him."
"Well that's just wonderful to know."Willow said under her breath.
"Willow, don't try to make this a similar situation to yours.Its not.Your father,my husband ,is dead.Tara is just in a different state.You and I have very different circumstances.You still have a chance.You still have the opportunity to share this life you have with the woman you love.Don't ever forget that.Don't ever let it go."
"Well mom,sorry to break this to you but she is not coming back.She is gone.As far as we are concerned,she is dead.Or I am.It doesn't really matter.The result is the same no matter how you see it."Willow answered with a harsh tone.
"Willow,why do you do this? Open up to me then shut down so fast?I don't want to hurt you honey.I don't want to give you false hope and I would not ever do this.I am saying this because I know it to be true."Shelia said.
"I'm sorry mom.I didn't mean to...I know how much you miss dad.I know how hard it is.I do.It's just,I feel so lost.So alone.I can't help feeling that Tara is better off away from me.From this."she aid tossing the cane forward against the dash."I don't want her here from guilt.I want her here because she wants to be."
Shelia sighed and said,"Willow,she does .She does want to be here.She just needs time.A chance to let some of this guilt disapate.In her mind?Honey, she thinks she is responsible."
Willow turned her head to her mother sharply and said"What?"
"yes,she thinks its her fault.She sent you to the store,was angry you were late.This is why she is gone.Not any other reason."
"Did she tell you this? When did she say...Did She?"
"No .She never said it directly to me,but I think she wanted to.I think,honestly?That she was going to tell you and someone else may have intervined.I don't need to say who."
Willow shook her head."So this is simple a hypothesis on your part then?A read of Tara's mind? Well what am I waiting for.Lets rush home so I can call her."
"Why do you have to be so sarcastic all the time? What's wrong with you? Are you worried that maybe it is really why?And that you may have to get over this self pity kick of yours? Or are you scared? Afraid to keep her down because of the accident? Whatever it is,you need to get over it.Or you will never get better.Now I don't know about you,but I'm hungry.I want some food.Do you want to join me or do you want me to get something to go?"Shelia said glancing at the door of the restaurant.As usual,it was very busy.It would be hard for Willow to stand this long even with her help.She would need the chair.She was certain Willow would opt for to go.
"Yea,just get me turkey on rye.And some potato salad.Please."Willow added as an afterthought.
"Okay.Ill be right back then."
Willow watched as her mother went inside and once she saw her there she opened the door and got out of the car.Her destination? Trips Liquor barn.She headed that way,it was not a far distance from where she had parked."Turkey on rye and a fifth of Jack.This is a real lunch."She thought to herself as she went inside.
She picked up the bottle and made her way to the counter.There was a young man in front of her and she waited not so patiently as the clerk rang him up.
She was glancing out the store window to the car,watching to make sure that her mother did not get out of the deli before her.If she saw her,she knew she would have to ditch this plan,leave the store and use the bathroom excuse.
The thought crossed her mind then that perhaps this was of issue,Sneaking actions in order to drink screamed problem drinker at her but she chose to ignore this.She had that thought cleared away from her mind as she heard the clerk ask for ID.
Crap.In the car.She had left it in the car.She would not have time to go back,get ID and come back in time.She would be caught for sure.She looked at the man in front of her and knew that she was sure to carded.He looked,she thought ,at least five years older then herself and she knew for certain she was not going to get this bottle.
She sighed in defeat,turned and made her way back to return the bottle to the shelf.Damn it.She needed this drink and she knew Susan would not be back for at least four more hours and this was far to long to go without.
Looking around she leaned against the shelf, untwisted the cap and took a hearty swig from the bottle.It burned her throat as it made its way down and the sensation delighted her.She felt the warm feeling spread through her body and she closed her eyes as she waited for the initial effect.
She looked again around and saw no one.Again she lifted the bottle and took an even larger swallow.
She twisted the cap back on and suddenly the thought crossed her mind that she could just slip this bottle into her jacket sleeve and walk out the door.She would tell the clerk as she left that she had forgotten her ID and would be back in just a minute.Looking around yet again,she slid the bottle up her arm and bent it as she grasped the cane.
She looked at the sleeve and was satisfied that this camouflage would work just fine.She made her way to the exit,said to the girl that she would return ,and made her way out the door.
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP..."You have set of the stores security system.Please return to the counter and pay for all items before exiting."Screamed the door..
"Oh Fuck...I Don't believe this.."She said to herself as she realized she had just been busted..Shop lifting...liquor..
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It took only moments for the drugs to do its job.Tizzy closed her eyes and peacefully passed away.Tears filled all eyes as Les sat with his beloved horse ,her head in his lap,he stroking her neck and nose as he felt the final breath leave her lungs.
"I'm awful sorry about this Les.I know it's not much help to you but I really am."Mr.Maclay said to his long time friend.
"Is alright , you all did the best you could for her.I know."
After a few moments ,Tara made her way over to the colt,kneeled down , and began to wrap the bad foot.It was the left front foot and she knew that this was a difficult injury to hope for success.
She also knew that he would recover.She knew this .At least she wanted to beleive.She still had a bit of doubt,but her positive thinking was far stronger then this due to the clear messages she had picked up from his Mama.
"What are ya going to name him?"Donnie asked.
Tara looked up,smiled at the colt and said,"Officer".
TBC