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FF : RW Season 7.4 : Alienation.

Postby Beth Dragon » Tue Jul 30, 2002 10:58 pm

Part 3 can be found here





Scene : Madalene raising the casket out of the ground – Anya trying to think of a way help Willow as she freaks whilst looking at the school books - The gang finding willow and Tara curled up in the forest - Buffy carrying out Madalene post big stick breaking - Tara and Dawn chatting on the porch - Tara calming willow down after a nightmare - Buffy Xander and the money - Tara waking up in a cold sweat.....



Voice over : Together they have struggled



Scene : Buffy sat on the sofa signing lots of cheques, Dawn sat beside her all grinning and happy, the rest of the gang all in the room looking similarly happy.



Voice over : Together they worked through the hardships



Scene : Giles holding court with everyone, looking pensive and shocked as Tara slides a book back across the table and gets up walking away.



Voice over : But there are some journeys that must be taken alone.



Scene : Anya barricading the door of the Magic Box, looking around pensively.



Voice over : Some battles have to be fought one on one.



Scene : Buffy fighting big ugly demon – obviously a hard battle



Voice over : Sometimes, its personal.



Scene : Buffy’s face scowling, Giles face worried, Dawns face scared, Willow’s face younger, Tara’s face resolved.



Voice over : Coming Soon to a Kitten board near you - Buffy the Vampire Slayer - 7:4 : Alienation.



Edited by: xita  at: 8/30/02 2:08:21 am
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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 12:24 am

damn you! i'm not even gonna take this teaser seriously after last time! ;)



ahem, seriously, this sounds great, guys. i'm really looking forward to it :)



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby WiccansIllusion » Wed Jul 31, 2002 12:45 am

damnitt..and here I thought it was an update, well, it was but the whole thing.!

Tara nodded in agreement "She has magic fingers." Then, as though the words had just echoed back to her and sounded not at all right, she perked up and glanced around at the others. "On the keyboard."

TheWisdom of War, Chris Golden

'My heart is cleverer then I and it knows what to do.'-MC Legends of the Kiss

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby MadeinNZ » Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:25 am

Now that's a teaser!!!

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Puff » Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:33 am

Oh great teaser :D I look forward to reading the epsiode.

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Jennpurr » Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:41 am

Alienation, huh?? That's an interesting title. Can't wait to see what happens. That teaser sounds very interesting, though.



More, soon???



Thanks ladies. As always, you two are awesome. ;)



Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

Edited by: Jennpurr  at: 7/31/02 4:46:37 pm
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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby funkyasian » Wed Jul 31, 2002 2:08 am

damn...i was so excited about the prospect of an update...but alas, it's only a teaser. a wonderful teaser, can't wait for the real thing...



steph

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby KathleenWolf » Wed Jul 31, 2002 2:21 am

Hi everyone,



hey who put the tease in teaser! :evil X :evil Rainbowwriters



Beth and I wanted to remind everyone that we're working very hard on bringing you the update for the new story asap... but these things do take a small amount of time, you know with the writing and the blocking and the editing... :) and beth reminds... there's a week between RL eps! ;) (and again I mention editing!)



Alienation will bring alot of the elements that everyone has been waiting for and though I'm sure still bumpy lots of W/T...



hope we don't keep you all waiting too long... but if we need a few days... please be patient!



k&b





"I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine."

To The Land of The RainbowWriters

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Jul 31, 2002 2:24 am

Great teaser!! :) Can't wait 4 the Epp.

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

MissQuirky
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Kalita » Wed Jul 31, 2002 2:40 am

He-hem... (puts on railthin-schoolmarm dress, horn-rimmed glasses, and puts hiar into a bun)



One refers to the pre-credits scene of an episode as the 'teaser'.



A sequence which presents scenes from throughout the episode, cut in a way as to provide interest for its eventual broadcast, and is accompanied by narration, is called a 'preview'.



All clear, now, class? Excellent.



(loses the costume)



Sorry. Don't know where Ms. Persnickety comes from all the time, it's not very often though...

"Numfar... Do the dance of shame."

Kalita
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby KathleenWolf » Wed Jul 31, 2002 2:59 am

MissQuirky: thank you... hope the wait won't be too long



Kalita: interesting distinction... though there is one reason we love calling them "Teaser" cause we like being the Rainbowwriters who but the "tease" in Teaser ... putting the pre or view in preview just isn't that much fun ;)





"I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine."

To The Land of The RainbowWriters

KathleenWolf
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Kalita » Wed Jul 31, 2002 3:58 am

Hey, that's cool. I just came into it hearing 'teaser' and expecting the first scene of the episode; then I get a preview instead and it's all short and I'm deflated.



But that's me and my big expectations; if teaser works for you guys, call it a teaser. I'll keep any further personal nonsense to myself...

"Numfar... Do the dance of shame."

Kalita
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby WebWarlock » Wed Jul 31, 2002 5:53 am

Heheheh,



Now the Kitten has comericals. :lol



Wow. I am SO not going to miss watching Buffy this year. I got this, Sass has a new (new to me) fic. Lisa has a new one, Tigger has the AU one going.



This is so cool.



You have made want to run off and read all of your old fics! Any suggestions or recomendations? I remember reading something a while back when you both came to the board annoucing your engagement (that was also a great story, even better because it wasn't fic!) but for the life of me I can't remember what it was.



Ack. I remember later.



Great job!



Warlock

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Web Warlock

The Other Side, home of Liber Mysterium: The Netbook of Witches and Warlocks


What the hell is your problem? - Ozzy Osbourne to me, October, 1997.

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby VampNo12 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 8:35 am

Wow guys the teaser sounds exciting, and quite intriguing! Can't wait to see where the next part of the journey leads the gang.

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby spazz07 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 10:02 am

Nice interesting teaser there. Last ep was full of brilliant interaction between different sets of scoobies and now it seems we get to see you's write them when they're by themselves. If its half as good as the interaction scenes, we're in for a treat. :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Beth Dragon » Wed Jul 31, 2002 11:52 am

Don’t check the poster or anything yep it’s Beth here and for some reason I’m in a responding to feedback mood :)



Kalita : :) There is nothing wrong with your high expectations, or your ‘personal nonsense’ so please don’t keep either out of your feedback :) As long as you don’t mind us being inaccurate with our ‘teaser / preview’ name – we can happily put up with the railthin-schoolmarm dress, horn-rimmed glasses and hair in a bun :) - I personally like the odd bit of discipline – or am I slipping off topic a little there ;)



WebWarlock : I think its great that not only are great writers (I’m not too sure I count myself in there – but I do count Kath so that’s ok I can write it without sounding conceited – I didn’t sound conceited right?? *Beth worriedly looks around* :) ) continuing to write and share Willow and Tara’s special and beautiful love, but that kittens are reading them and having the faith in us all to do the right thing by our beloved girls. As for recommendations of our older fics – mmmm – I don’t want to seem like I have favourites ;) (But The Letting Go isn’t a bad read ;) ) And I feel like a bad person now cause I can’t remember which fic that was either.



VampNo12 : It’s always a bit of a mystery as to where we’re going to take them next isn’t it? Hope you enjoy the ride – we’ve had the seats made comfier on the Rainbow Writers Story Coach – so hopefully you’ll be ok ;)



Spazz07 : Kath and I like a challenge – so having an ep that makes the gang alter their approaches a little sounded like an interesting test :) Hope we do ok :)



Well there you go – now you will probably understand why Kath does the feedback and not me :)



The first scene shouldn’t be too long in appearing – I’m afraid I’ve had a bit of a dip in health so the RW Story Coach is a little slower than normal – thank you all for journeying with us though – we love and appreciate you all.



:) Beth :)



Beth Dragon
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby mollyig » Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:49 pm

Intriguing teaser - really looking forward to a new story from you both.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby TesniStryngefyre » Wed Jul 31, 2002 3:09 pm

OMG great teaser. There's NO WAY the ME Season 7 can ever beat what we've got right here on the kitten board. I log in just about every day to check for updates from you guys. Thanks so much for doing this. Now I don't care WHAT ME does for season 7.... I'll always have yours! 8-)



Can't wait for more....



AJ

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TARA: Every time I... even when I'm at my worst ... you always make me feel special. How do you do that?

WILLOW: Magic

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Grimaldi » Wed Jul 31, 2002 4:14 pm

wow, great teaser. can't wait to read it :)

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Cross my heart, smack me dead, stick a lobster on my head.

We'll roll on with our heads held high - The Living End

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby sparrow » Wed Jul 31, 2002 7:30 pm

Holy tease, you guys are great. When is your stuff getting published.









And, yet, I just can't seem to care


I'm not coming back

sparrow
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby oneinten » Wed Jul 31, 2002 7:57 pm

WWeeevviiill!!! You guys are wevil!!!



That's a great teaser...almost as good as....



Can't wait for more!



kath

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby chronic » Thu Aug 01, 2002 1:24 pm

Hmm, I can hear the plot thickening (it makes a squelching sound). Looking forward to the episode...

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"Kiss rocks? Why would anyone wanna kiss... Oh, wait, I get it"
- Willow, Band Candy

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Loco2 » Thu Aug 01, 2002 1:40 pm

is it a week later, yet?........no?.......damn.

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you BROLLY!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Alienation - scene one

Postby Beth Dragon » Fri Aug 02, 2002 2:35 am

The sunlight seemed to draft through the front bay of the Summers house with a twinkle that it hadn’t held in a very long time. Little beams danced across the usually dark and depressive pile of tri-folded papers and sparkled over the metal body of the pen in the Slayer’s hand.



A warrior quite used to the strength of her carved stake, she now cut her opponent down to size with the sure craft of controlled black ink.



“Buffy... Anne... Summers.” Buffy whispered as if almost to remind herself of just who wielded this power as she signed her name to the bottom of the blue and white bank cheque. “Take that Mr. Sunnydale Hospital Accounts Payable.” With a flourish she handed the rectangle of paper off to Dawn who waited impatiently with an envelope. “Stuff and lick Lady Dawn the Mighty.”



“Oh yeah.” Dawn took the cheque and made it do a small dance, accompanied by jolly tune as she put it in and stuck the flap down.



“Who is next Sir Xander?” Buffy looked at the carpenter who was going through the stacks to marry the same accounts together and piling them in priority.



“The Evil Mistress of Electricity, three payments behind.” Xander tore off the repayment portion and presented it to Buffy.



“Stake her, stake her.” Dawn bounced in her place.



“Three payments, I scoff at her three payments.” Buffy positioned her checkbook and with a mighty swipe of her pen made out the full amount. “And I raise her pre-authorized debt!” She tore off another check writing void across it to include for future payments.



“How many more have we got?” The teenager looked over to Xander.



“Mmmmm let me see.” He leafed through pages. “Hospital, electricity, mortgage, phone, credit cards all paid. Al that’s left is a subscription to Teen Fashion magazine.”



“I have to pay that.” Dawn looked down briefly her face losing its bright smile



“How much is it for?” Buffy looked at her sister.



“Don’t know.” She looked over at Xander.



“Twelve fifty for the year.” Xander laughed as he handed over the bill.



“I think we can cover it but you’re doing dishes for the next week deal?” Buffy grinned as she began another cheque



“Deal.” Dawn’s smile was back instantly.



“When are you expecting Giles back?” Anya asked from her place on the couch.



“Should be soon, he just had to see the manager and make the deposit.” Buffy looked over at her. “What’s the total left?”



“Well that depends on if you have had any more thoughts about investments.” The demon glanced up from her notepad.



“Talk to me.” Buffy leaned back twirling her pen.



“Oh this is so cool.” Dawn squeaked from her place interrupting the conversation. “We have money.” She clapped.



“Some money, no going insane.” Buffy smiled softly. “We have to be responsible.”



“But Xander said there might be rewards from all the returned property.” Dawn looked over to the carpenter. “We could go insane with that.”



“There might be indeed.” Xander nodded firmly.



“Anya, what do you think?” Buffy turned and looked at the demon. “Invest, splurge or save?”



“Well that would depend, I would probably say invest in some major life insurances.” She put forward humourlessly.



“Anya, I think Buffy is asking you for some honest input in a field that you have the most influence in.” Xander coughed at looked at his ex. “Without mentioning the life insurance.”



“Not that I don’t want to listen to this but isn’t it time we woke Willow for her pills?” Dawn asked though if she was honest she didn’t want to listen to money talk that didn’t involve what colour sneakers she was getting or how many new tops.



“It is. Can you take care of that?” Buffy looked at her sister with a gentle smile.



“Yep, I’ll get right on it.” Dawn pushed up and towards the kitchen.



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Beth Dragon
 


Re: Alienation - scene one

Postby spazz07 » Fri Aug 02, 2002 2:42 am

Loved the start here, all having fun with money and finding something that Anya may actually be able to help in :) It's good to see them in a happier state than we're used to, lets hope it holds out for a little longer this time. :)



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby Tulipp » Fri Aug 02, 2002 2:45 am

Oh Dawn. "Teen Fashion" magazine? I would have thought that, with Willow and Tara as models, she would have had some...different...taste. Nice to see some money!

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Re: FF : RW Season 7.4 ......

Postby WiccansIllusion » Fri Aug 02, 2002 2:48 am

Money fun is something I won't have for a few more weeks. Oh well. But yea no more debt. And I'm eagerly awaiting Willow being woken up, or..the sight of her and Tara.

Tara nodded in agreement "She has magic fingers." Then, as though the words had just echoed back to her and sounded not at all right, she perked up and glanced around at the others. "On the keyboard."

TheWisdom of War, Chris Golden

'My heart is cleverer then I and it knows what to do.'-MC Legends of the Kiss

WiccansIllusion
 


Re: Alienation - scene one

Postby MissQuirky » Fri Aug 02, 2002 5:31 am

Great update! The money is comin in handy i can c, their gettin everything payed off. Maybe they can have a lil fun w/ all the cash soon! I can't wait 4 more! :)

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

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Re: Alienation - scene one

Postby Latsric » Fri Aug 02, 2002 7:04 am

Lovely update. Makes me look forward to the day when I'll be able to vanquish the mighty debt that hounds me. They should really let Anya invest some of the money...with the way she is, she'll have them all rolling in money in no time.



-lat-

- I need my obsessions, they keep me sane -

Latsric
 


Re: Alienation - scene one

Postby LeatherQueen » Fri Aug 02, 2002 7:53 am

:grin Lovely start to this new ep. And I loved seeing Dawn and Buffy so happy, writing checks and so playful for once. Very nice. :)








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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

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