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Little Moments

Postby quirked_out » Sun Oct 08, 2006 11:52 am

Title: Little Moments
Author: Quirked_out
Summary: WIllow and Tara were destiny, see what that actually means.
Disclaimer: Still poor, very, very poor. Don't own these characters, wish I did, I would've treated 'em right and proper.
Author's Note: Still working on Something to Mend For this is just a side-project.


[center]In the Beginning[/center]


Elizabeth Maclay nursed her young daughter, singing a quiet nursery rhyme on a cool Colorado evening. Tara grabbed at her mother’s shirt and sighed, her doting mother looking on her with soft eyes.

“My little Tara, you’ll be so beautiful when you’re grown.” She whispered.

Suddenly Tara’s great blue eyes opened and she turned her head, cooing softly. Elizabeth smiled. “Your love has arrived? Of course, I knew it would be soon.” Tara gurgled happily for a few seconds before suddenly stilling. The infant let out a whimper before crying inconsolably.

“Oh, Goddess,” Elizabeth said anxiously. “no!”

She quickly set Tara in her bassinet, lighting the candles she kept in a circle. “Please Goddess hear my plea, take me to my daughter’s heart and let me aid the trouble.”

Her plea was granted and suddenly she was surrounded by a flurry of activity. She was in a hospital room and doctors and nurses were everywhere.

“What’s wrong? Why isn’t she crying anymore?” A red-haired woman asked frantically. The doctors gave no reply as they lifted the silent baby from her mother’s arms. “Ira, what’s wrong with her?” Her voice was quickly becoming desperate.

Elizabeth’s heart broke for the woman as tears began to stream down her face. “She’s not breathing!” A nurse called out. The doctor quickly tried to give the helpless figure air through something Elizabeth didn’t recognize.

Quickly she walked unnoticed to the baby’s side. Soft, downy, red hair was the first thing she noticed, and then she noticed how still the little one was. As gently as possible she reached down and placed her hand on the newborn’s unmoving chest, and took a deep breath.

Eyes that so closely resembled her daughter’s closed against a wave of tears, “Please Goddess spare this child; we both know the good she can do. She’ll be my daughter’s everything someday. Please, don’t let Tara search for something she can never have.”

Elizabeth felt a tiny thump against her palm, and then another, and then a cry let out as the baby took in her life’s breath. Her eyes opened and Elizabeth saw the most beautiful shade of green in her life and she smiled feebly as the child let out another cry. The little one was certainly a fighter.

A man took his child reverently in his hands as if she would break with the slightest move. “Hello Willow.” He greeted raggedly. “You really scared us.” Willow finally quieted, looking up curiously at the man holding her. His weak smile gained strength as emerald eyes took in everything around her. What Ira didn’t know was that his daughter was looking past him. She was looking at the mother of her soul mate.

Elizabeth chuckled as the girl let out another howl, only this time in hunger. She began to fade; her astral form no longer spiritually solid. “Be well Willow.”

When she opened her eyes she was back in Tara’s nursery, she could hear her daughter’s sobs lessen to the occasional hiccup. Relief flooded through her body as she reached down to hold her. “She’ll be okay darling. She’s quite the fighter.” Tara’s eyes began to grow heavy, her earlier fear tiring her. “Sleep my Tara, you have a beautiful future waiting for you.”
The test of courage comes when we are the minority. The test of tolerance comes when we are the majority. - Ralph W. Stockman

A day without sunlight is, like, y'know, night. - My Friend Courtney
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Thianne » Sun Oct 08, 2006 12:13 pm

oooohhhhh.....this is veeeeeery cool! please, update soon!
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Re: Little Moments

Postby BigBlueEyes » Sun Oct 08, 2006 3:19 pm

Ooh, I really like this story. It's very interesting!
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Amberslover » Sun Oct 08, 2006 6:04 pm

Hey I really like the way this has started! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Little Moments

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Mon Oct 09, 2006 8:40 am

Yes, it's true, time goes back a long way,errrrrr, or something.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby willohand » Tue Oct 10, 2006 8:13 am

Talk about grabbing a readers attention... THIS IS GOING TO BE GOOD.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Emms » Tue Oct 10, 2006 8:22 am

Pretty darn interesting so far, sweetie. Can't wait for the next update. :peace

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Re: Little Moments

Postby will » Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:58 pm

The start is interesting I'm looking foward to read more.
Please update soon.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby quirked_out » Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:36 pm

Author's Note: Hey everyone, here's another, thank you to everyone who replied, you guys rock my world.


[center]Another Morning[/center]


“She’s exceptionally bright, Ira. I really think we should look into schools that will better nurture her learning capacity.”

Willow watched as her mommy set a bowl of wheat and fruit cereal in front of her. Her daddy folded his big paper back. She liked to read; maybe her daddy would read with her today. When she was lucky he would spend a whole ten minutes reading the business section with her.

“You don’t have to tell me that Sheila, but really she’s only four and she’s already in kindergarten, studies have shown that if we push her too fast we might hurt her social development.”

Willow looked around her mommy had forgotten to give her a spoon and she was already flipping through her rolly-dex. Usually, when her mommy was using her rolly-dex she was gonna talk to someone important.

She got up quietly and walked towards the drawers.

“Still I don’t want her assorting with such common intellect, she should have friends that challenge her; all that Harris boy does is imitate what he’s seen on television.”

Willow paused as she picked up the stool in the corner; she liked Xander. He was really nice and he didn’t laugh when she said she liked to read, he wasn’t mean like Harmony. She put the stool down and climbed on it until she could reach the silverware drawer.

“That is true, but the teachers say that she hardly talks to anyone else. If we simply take her out we may irreparably damage her self-confidence.”

Willow came back to her seat quietly; spoon in hand.

“I’m going to call a few of my collogues and get their opinions.” Her mommy said as she passed by, absently patting her shoulder. “Hurry up and eat Willow, we have to go visit one of mommy’s friends.”

“But mommy– ”

“Hush, Willow. Do as mommy says.”

Willow frowned; her mommy had said that she could go to the park with Xander today.

Her daddy looked at his watch, “I’ve got to head to the college for a conference, hopefully they’ll grant approve my travel request.”

He kissed her mommy on the cheek and reached down to ruffle her hair. “I’ll see you later Little One.”

Her mommy rolled her eyes, “Ira, you shouldn’t encourage nick-names, they’ll only cause her to develop weak proper behavior.” But her daddy was already out the door.

Willow liked when her daddy called her “Little One” it made her feel warm, like her dreams about the pretty girl with blue eyes. Those were her favorite. She was just as nice as Xander, but there was something especially special about her dream friend, Willow just couldn’t pin it down yet.

“Hurry along Willow.” Her mommy said, shuffling her papers.

Somehow she knew if told her mommy anout her friend she would think that she was just being silly, so she ate the last spoonful of her cereal and hurried up the stairs. Maybe tonight her special friend would come. She smiled, suddenly, Willow couldn’t wait to go to sleep.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Emms » Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:56 pm

This is panning out to be a very sweet tale, indeed. I like they way you're writing little Willow. She's adorable. I can't wait to see what she's going to be like when she gets older. :luv Kudos.

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Re: Little Moments

Postby Willowlover » Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:43 pm

Awesome story! I love it so far and i cant wait to read more. =)
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Re: Little Moments

Postby PancakesinBellies » Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:49 am

Oooooooh. I really like this. Poor little Willow though! I can't wait to see where you go with it. Update soon? Please?
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Re: Little Moments

Postby willohand » Wed Oct 18, 2006 8:46 am

Thats our willow a brain from birth and with a heart just a large. :hmm i wonder whomshe is thinking about? Beautiful blue eyes... :confused yeah right. It could only be one person. Tara.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Thianne » Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:09 pm

aawww....Little Willow is just so cute :x and she deams of Tara...very interesting. her mom is just like tha Sheila we know....totally unfit to be a mom. no nicknames?!?! they're the best part!

i can't wait to see an update, good job so far
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Amberslover » Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:34 pm

Too cute! Keep it up! I eagerly await the next update!

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Re: Little Moments

Postby kivrin » Sat Oct 21, 2006 10:51 am

yes!!! I completely agree she's adorable and we definitely want to know more about this pretty girl with blue eyes.
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Re: Little Moments

Postby Brianna » Fri Oct 27, 2006 7:14 am

Adorable Little One!!! so small and so smart!!! and the little bleu eyed girl! so weet!! more please!!!
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