Apocalypse: (Sequel To Resident Evil:Buffy Style) (09/05/05)

[tru2urheart]

Title:Apocalypse: (Sequel To Resident Evil:Buffy Style)
Author: Tru2urheart or Ariel if ya prefer
Feedback:In the words of five year olds everywhere,"PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!"
Disclaimer:The "Resident Evil:Apocalypse" plot and stuff that I use from the movie isn't mine. Also, Joss owns the Buffy characters so, yeah. Blah Blah.
Rating: R (If it changes, I'll let you know)
Notes: You might want to read the first one. You don't have to read it, but it would help you understand this one.

Notes 2: I'M BACK! Hey guys. Here is the start of the sequel. More Willow and Tara. More . More zombies. More everything. Even more Buffy Characters. If you don't like any of that stuff then what are you doing in this forum? Alright, if I didn't scare ya off then get to readin'.

Hope ya enjoy it.
(Also, thoughts are in italics)
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Before on Resident Evil:Buffy Style...

Just two more samples of the anti-virus.... and, I'm Done! A flash of clothes and spikey hair heads to the door quickly and a small, glass container falls the the ground and it breaks in half. The blue fluid inside turns into a vapor as it heads through the air conditioning.

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"What is it,"asked Robin,"Oh god!" A body of a young was floating in one of the rooms and it had gone up against the glass of the wall.

The body of the moves against the glass. She opens her eyes.

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A man dragged a sludge hammer behind him as his broken ankle ed each time he walked on it.

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"An experiment had been developed called the t-virus. It was a major medical breakthrough. It made cells reproduce living cells and make the body active once again even after . But something went wrong with the chemicals and it didn't quite work the way they hoped it would."

"It brought the body back to moving form, but it didn't quite keep the souls that are originally what we have. The person has already moved on so the body is brought back with only the simplest motor functions. Mainly, the need to feed."

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A rumble starts in the empty tunnels as the wall starts to and a monster emerges, with long claws looking around. The same exact thing that Willow had seen in the tank down in the place known as dining hall B. It looks fiercely around before continuing on, ing the wall as it takes each step.

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Willow had no idea that this was the version of the t-virus that the Initiative actually hoped for. That it was what they were trying to design in the first place. If this was mixed with the t-virus that the zombies had in them, it would surly be dangerous. And it would be. But not now.

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Angel had gone home when the others had decided to go to a movie. He went to his couch and sat down. He wasn't feeling well. Dizziness, and pain. His wound was itching constantly. He screamed in pain when the wave of pain came through again. Below the bandages, hair started to slowy grow. Stiff hair. The same hair that had been on the beast that gave him the wound.

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Willow gets roughly pulled from the bed.

"WILLOW!!!"
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Now on to the reason why you're all here....
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Bang!! Bang!!! Ba..."ALRIGHT!!! I'm comin'. Who the heck is bangin' at the door at this hour. We got three people tryin' to sleep." A very sleepy brown haired woman opened the door," What do yo... Tara? Whoa. What's wrong?"

A blond , blue eyed woma ran straight into the house. Tears were running down her cheeks and she looked extremely worried. The brown haired woman closed the door,"Buffy, Dawn, get down here!!!" Thumping could be heard from stairs. A blond and another brown haired woman (looking younger than the first) came stumbling in the living room. The young one was carrying a bat and the older one was carrying a pistol.

Tara could hear the thumping, the yelling, but it all seemed distant. She couldn't piece together anything going on except her goal, her reason for running the whole way down here. Her reason for banging on the door. For coming to those, for help, that she knew best.

The short one known as Buffy spoke," Tara, what's wrong?"
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Army soldiers stood inside a large mansion. Guns held out in front of them, they step forward towrds a large metal wall. In the middle is a big indent painted white. A door. A man with a specialized helmet shouts orders," Open the door. Let's see what has happened down here."

"Captain Caleb, the t-virus is at minimum level." a soldier yelled. Just after the door opened he looked down at his hand held computer. As he did, three men advanced into the darkened doorway.

The computer showed them as three white dots. Hundreds, no thousands of red dots appeared and the green level bar rose to red. Next to the bar were the words,'T-virus Contamination'.

The man named Caleb looked at the soldiers computer. He froze when he heard a sound. A scream coming from inside the doorway,"Shit!" Before he could move his troops and him were under a sea of what seemed to be distorted humans.
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A line of black suburbans were traveling in a line down a street. Suddenly, they split off in all direction. A computer is in each one of them. A name is on each different computer. The one on the last van was a british looking man in a wheelchair. The headline said,'Giles, Rupert'.

The car stops at a house. Men in black, padded suits get out of the car. They ring the doorbell and Rupert, from the picture, answers it. The men start to wheel him out of the house,"We're sent to evacuate you from the city immidiatly."

The man looks at them like they're insane, then a sign of knowledge crossed his face,"I need to pick up my daughter. She's at school."

"Already taken care of sir."
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Another man is in a classroom by the door. A little kid walks up to him,"I'm ready." She takes her backpack and heads out the door.

In the car, the little kid watches the man driving. Coming out of an intersection right outside the school, an 18-wheeler truck rams into them and continues on. The car roles to a stop upside down. The man in the front has a broken neck. The little kid is in the back. Red litters her face, but her hand jerks.
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Emerald eyes popped open. Red hair was spread over a steel table and wires were everywhere. A woman awoke in a white room with hospital equipment and needles stuck inside her body everywhere. She looked around in shock. Where was she?

Only one thought came to her mind. She shouted,"Tara?" Scared and shaking, she stood up. Painfully pulling all the wires out of her she took the only fabric in the room and covered herself up. It was a sheet. She could barely stand. She only seemed to remeber glimpses of what happened after her abduction at Tara's house.

A memory of a young man with black spike hair and a white lab coat kept coming into her mind. Another man kept talking to him about something. The one in the lab coat was being called, Mr. Meers. Then the memory of Tara and the last minute she saw her face.

The last memory that kept coming face to face with her was the one down in the tunnels. The last she saw of everybody before being swiped away. The special t-virus making a tattoo on her wrist. The look on Tara's face when Tara realized that the red- head had survived.

Snapping out of her reverie the woman looked at the sheet on the table next to her. It had her information on it. 'Patient: Rosenburg,Willow Lynn.' She didn't read any further. She dropped the sheet on the floor and went to the metal door. It had a card swiper.

Going back over to the table, she grabbed a needle. She stuck the needle into the card swiper. A minute later she heard a click and the door unlocked. Willow walked out into the Sunnydale hospital. It was deserted.

Taking a lab coat from a nearby rack and walked outside. It was a sight to behold. Wrecked cars were everywhere. She walks a little and finds a cop car. She looks inside of it before opening it and grabbing the rifle that is sitting there. She calks it and looks around.
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Sorry for all the cliffhangers, but you will understand after some chapters. Once again, it may take a chapter or two before we get to any Willow and Tara cuteness and lovingness. Hope you like it. Feedback is definitely wanted.Will update on a regular basis hopefully. Everyday or every other day. So if it's not updated one day, chack the next.--tru2urheart

[Darth Pacula]

G'day Ariel.

Thou asketh for feedback, so feedback thou shalt have.

So sequel time already. I'd be doing cartwheels, but I'd inevitably stuff it up and probably give myself a concussion.

Now, Tara's recruited a search party in the form of the terrific trio of Buffy, Faith and Dawn, so hopefully that should help with the inevitable swarm of zombies that we all know is coming.

Caleb makes an appearence, and exits stage right almost at the same time. Not quite getting split down the middle, but hey, dead is dead.

Poor old Giles is in a wheelchair? Hope he does better than his counterpart in the movie. And who's his daughter? I can't think of any suitable children from the show.

Willow really should have at least read her medical file. I might have given her some important information. Still, she has just been abducted from a nice, comfy Tara-enhanced bed and that's bound to put her off her game.

Can I just say, how the hell to you pick an electronic door with an IV needle? It makes no sense to me.

Please do feel free to keep the cliffhangers coming. It keeps your readers salivating.

Bye,
Paul.

[tru2urheart]

Title:Apocalypse: (Sequel To Resident Evil:Buffy Style)
Author: Tru2urheart or Ariel if ya prefer
Feedback:In the words of five year olds everywhere,"PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!"
Disclaimer:The "Resident Evil:Apocalypse" plot and stuff that I use from the movie isn't mine. Also, Joss owns the Buffy characters so, yeah. Blah Blah.
Rating: R (If it changes, I'll let you know)
Notes: Ok. I got quite a few readers but not so much feedback. If you have to tell me this fic sucks then do it. It's not helping my writing if I don't get criticism.

Thank you darthpacula, actually, the needle picking of the electronic doorway actually came from the movie. Anyway, I won't hold ya up. Get to readin'. Also, the daughter is sorta complicated. I chose a certain character for her role, but she wasn't a kid when she played on Buffy, but she did have something to do with kids and bad parents.

Hope ya enjoy it.
(Also, thoughts are in italics)
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Before Willow wakes up....

"This is Sunnydale News and I'm Amy Madison. The city is having a problem. Things are happening here that has never happened before. A string of strange people have come out of nowhere and have started to attack the city. Grabbing people out of there cars, and biting people. The police are having a hard time with the situation."
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"What the hell are these things?" asked a policeman. He was trying to handcuff a man that kept trying to bite him.

Another cop looked over at him. He was trying to bandage a man who had been injured by the same man being handcuffed,"I have no clue."

Just then a man with dark hair came in. He held a gun and a blond followed him in. He shot the zombie nearest to biting someone.The man that was about to get bitten looked up,"Thanks man. Yo, I owe you. These people are crazy. My names Jesse...."

"Just get to the bridge and out of town. These things are worse than bunnies. Bunnies don't eat you. They just kill you," said the blond next to the man. He looked at her weird and then split.

The man finally spoke,"It's worse than we thought, Anya. I just hope the others are ok. We need to find them."

"Alright Xander," Anya sounded worried," If we're going to find them, we need to do it quick." They ran out into daylight to find them.
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Back to the present with Willow and the Shotgun at night...


Willow walked on through the darkness. Everything seemed empty and fire was burning out of control in some places. She stopped at a clothing store and went inside.

After finding a suitable outfit, she started to pull on her boot when a shot of pain coursed through her. She saw something go through her arms. Then it was gone. Even the pain had subsided. She thought she knew what this meant, but decided to wait awhile before making any assumptions. The Initiative could have done anything to her.

Leaving the clothing store she was jumped from behind, but quickly snapped the neck of the zombie not wanting to shoot much at the moment, just in case it caused more to come. Next she came across a weapons shop.
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"Sir, the perimeter is secure. We're ready for lift off." A soldier said. His jacket bared the initiative mark,"We have also blocked off the rest of the city. The virus can't leave."

Giles was sitting and listening to this whole thing. When he heard that the city was sealed, he grimaced. The commander nodded his head and excused the soldier," Mr. Giles. I'm Adam. The head of the Initiative force here in Sunnydale. Your ride is awaiting you on the helicopter."

"I don't wish to leave just yet. If I could I want to stay and see if any of your soldiers find my daughter," Giles made it clear that he wasn't moving from this camp.

"I assure you if we find her we'll get her to immidiate safety, but I must warn you that it is not safe her. Not even outside the city walls. I personally would feel better if you.." He was interupted.

"I'm not leaving,"Giles gave his last warning," Until my daughter is found."

The commander nodded. He left the tent. As soon as he was gone, Giles grabbed his laptop and started typing. He hacked into the Initiatives camaras all around the city,"Come on, there's got to be some one still alive." He finally saw someone walking down the street. A red head was holding a rifle and walking into a shop.

He changed camaras several more times before finding a group of soldiers that had managed to stay alive as well. Then he found a group of group of people walking, armed, down a deserted street as well.
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We zero in on the group last viewed on the camara...

"Okay, so Xander and Anya aren't at their house, and Angel is gone too. Willow was taken from your house and we're about the only people alive. Well, This is just great," Dawn jabbered on.

Faith looked at her,"Ok. If we need more dissapointment, we'll tell you, but at the moment your not helping!! Everything is five by five. We'll find them all."

Tara walked on without any knowledge that there was noise or anything going on around her. All she could focus on was that Willow had been taken. Buffy noticed,"Tara, it's going to be ok. We'll find her."

"I'm just worried,"Tara finally said,"We can't even find Xander and them. If the Initiative has done anything to her, I..I.. I don't know. How are you supposed to destroy a world wide health care buisness that is doing illegal experiments for the military anyhow?"

"Shit guys. We got company. Quick, into the church." Faith yelled as hundreds of zombies traveled in a group toward the ex- soldiers. They quickly closed the door.

All of a sudden Dawn screamed as a hand found her shoulder,"Calm down. It's only me. You know those things have been a danger to the town. Where are those silly cops when you actually need them. But of course they are there when you're speeding." Xander smiled at his own joke.

Dawn's eyes lit up,"Xander! Anya! Thank god you guys are ok. We thought you guys were in trouble or captured too."

"Captured,"Anya asked,"What do you mean captured? Is there money on our heads or something. Ooh, money. Maybe I should turn myself in or..."

"An, they're not after us. No one else is missing. They would have taken Tara too if they wanted all of us because she was with Willow," Xander calmed her down.

"Well then smarty pants, where's Angel?"Anya stuck her tongue out at Xander.

Xander finally noticed that he wasn't there. So did Buffy. She looked around,"We thought he would be with you two."

"We thought he was with you. Great. Willow is gone and the man in all black finally decides to blend in. You know he used to wear black just for that purpose, but he always stood in front of a really light color," Xander said.

No one got to respond. They heard a noise coming from opposite them and down the hall. They froze.
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"Jonathan! Get over here. No use in wasting ammo when we don't have much of it in the first place." A tall man with brown hair yelled.

Jonathan looked over,"Gram, we need evacuation. I've been bit. Damn it, we need supplies, too."

"Don't you get it you blundering idiot. They don't care about us. We are expendible assests. They don't care a bit about anyone left alive down here," another soldier said.

"You shut up Wesley,"Jonathan yelled," You're the one who got us into this. If you hadn't of stopped the chopper to save a woman that had been bit then we wouldn't be here."

Wesley stood from his seat,"She was in trouble. How should I have known that she would herself. It isn't my fault you short idiot."

"Guys, we have bigger problems right now. I think they found us,"Gram pointed out the zombies. They started to run, but Jonathan tripped. He was gone before they could do anything. Finally, Wesley and Gram found a safe place to hide in a deserted store near the hospital.

"This is getting way out of hand," Gram stated.

Wesley looked into the sky,"Is that a chopper? Yes. It is. They're heading for the hospital."
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Adam stood in front of a system that showed the city. He looked at it and realized that something was missing,"She is out of the hospital. Start the project."
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Another white room with scientific equipment. A creature lays on the table hooked up to all the equipment. Skin as thick as armor and one eye sewed shut.

By him, on the table is a piece of paper. Information on it stated,' Nemisis Project: Angelus, Liam.' Just then the deep blue of an eye opened up on the monster.
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Wesley and Gram arrived at the hospital a few moment later. Weapons cases lay on the ground.

"Well, they dropped us supplies. I guess they want us to get rid of these guys as much as we can," Gram stated looking at the boxes.

Wesley lifted the lid of a box and peered inside with a suspicious look,"I don't think these were for us."

Two empty boxes. One fit for a rocket launcher....
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Hope ya like it. I know, I know, another cliff hanger, but I promise that Willow will reunite with the gang and of course, Tara next chapter. Feedback helps, even if it says you totally my fic. If you say that though, let me know whats wrong with it. Thx and hope you enjoy it--tru2urheart.

[Darth Pacula]

G'day, Ariel.

No one else is giving you feedback? For shame, people! Pull your fingers out.

Right'o then. Your little tidbits on the identity ( Buffyverse-wise that is ) of the G-Man's daughter first led me to think Faith. Then I hit myself in the forehead when I remembered she was already in it. So, I'll put my money on a prepubescent version of Halfrek.

Some more residents of good ol' SunnyD make an appearance. I can totally see Wesley in Oded Fehr's role, well the later version of Wesley anyway, not the poncy knob he was on Buffy. When you say Gram, do you mean Graham, who was one of Riley Initiative pals on the show? Jonathan makes an appearance, but lasts about as long as he is tall.

I loved your crack on Angel's fashion sense. There were definite times when he wasn't at his stealthiest on both shows.

Do you have anyone betaing for you? I don't want to be a jerk, but I've noticed a few spelling and punctuation errors, but I don't tend to let that bother me.

BTW, I know that the bit with picking the electronic lock was in the movie. I watched both of them again just the other week, I just find it weird that a lock like that could be broken that easily. Maybe it just shorts out or something. I could ask my brother the electrical engineer, but he'd probably just get into a in depth explanation, then my eyes would glaze over and I'd pass out and whack my head on the floor or something. It'd be one ugly scene.

Keep it coming, and I'll keep giving you feedback.

Bye,
Paul.

[tru2urheart]

Title:Apocalypse: (Sequel To Resident Evil:Buffy Style)
Author: Tru2urheart or Ariel if ya prefer
Feedback:In the words of five year olds everywhere,"PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!"
Disclaimer:The "Resident Evil:Apocalypse" plot and stuff that I use from the movie isn't mine. Also, Joss owns the Buffy characters so, yeah. Blah Blah.
Rating: R (If it changes, I'll let you know)
Notes:I was soo hoping for more feedback. With all the 150 readers, I would really like more feedback.
Thank you Darth Pacula for keeping my spirits up. I don't think I would continue writing this story if it wasn't for you. Heres next chapter. Please leave at least a sentence of feedback. Even if it says you me, I won't care. At least it's an opinion. I'm in this to improve writing skills and have fun. English class is so boring.

Hope ya enjoy it.
(Also, thoughts are in italics)
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Back to Willow....

Willow walks into the weapons store.The whole town has been attacked. There are going to be alot more zombies now. Thank you Initiative. All I want is one night of calm with Tara and you go and mess that up. Well, actually I did sleep a few nights there, but there wasn't as much snuggling and... Oh god. I'm babbling in my head. You had to change me, why couldn't you of at least stopped the babbling?

She grabbed guns, knives, and anything that she could use. She had five or six pistols on her, the shotgun with more shells, and a machine gun with plenty of ammo. Knives were also hidden on her including one by the pistol on her belt.

She walked out of the store. Ok. Now all I need is a ride and Tara. Oh God. Tara! She had been thinking about Tara almost the whole time, but the one thing she forgot to think was what had happened to her and the rest of the gang. Was she going to have to shoot them all in the near future. No.

She wouldn't be able to do it. She'd find a cure. Somehow she would find a way to get Tara back if she was infected. She wasn't going to go through all that. All she had to do now, was find something that she could use as fast transportation.

She looked around and went from car to car, but they were either to damaged to work or the key wasn't there. Then she saw it. The perfect thing. It was small and could go through narrow spaces at fast speeds. Now all she needed to do was find a another peice of equipment that should be right near it. She continued her search around the area.
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"What the hell was that?" Faith asked the rest of the group. They all stood in the church. Down the hall there had been a sound.

Xander was looking down the hall intently," I'll go check it out."

Anya looked worried. She was about to protest him going alone when Buffy spoke up,"I'll go with you. Buddy system and everything. Stay here guys, alright?" Everyone else nodded.

Xander and Buffy both held out there old guns in front of them as they slowly walked down the hall. They came to a door. A noise was inside, that sounded like it was trouble. They stood on both sides of the door. Buffy held up three fingers and started counting them off. When she set the last one down, they bursted through the door. An old lady was sitting in a chair moving around restlessly. Her back was turned away from them.

"Miss," Xander said with a trembling voice,"Are you ok?"

Buffy moved forward slowly. She finally got to where she could see the side of the womans face and tripped on something. She looked down and there was a human arm at the base of her foot. The old lady was strapped to the chair by barbed wire on her ankles and wrists.

An old man came in from behind," Please. Leave. My sister is very sick and needs her rest."

Xander had also seen the arm,"You've been feeding her," He held back a gag,"Ok. That is just sick. That's not your sister bub. That's the monster that took her from ya. You should be hating her."

He put his gun up to shoot her, but the old man stopped him. Buffy then noticed that he had been recently bitten as well. She sot the woman and went over to the man,"You'll be just like her in a few hours. You've been infected." She went to leave the room with Xander in tow.

The old man took a gun and was about to shoot Buffy when Xander turned and shot him. He had seen the gun out of the reflection from the metal on the lamp in front of him.

They heard a scream next. Buffy looked towards where the rest of the gang was,"Come on. There in trouble!"
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The rest of the gang had waited as told.

They all pointed their guns toward a moving figure emrging from another room. The figure quickly shut the door. Faith moved out in front and yelled,"Who's there?"

"Me!" The reporter from the news came into view.

Anya rolled her eyes,"Your that reporter from the Sunnydale News. What are you doing here and have you been bitten or scratched?"

Amy shook her head. She held a camara in one hand and a stick in another. No doubt for protecting herself a little at least," No I'm not injured in any way. I came in here to get away from those things." They shook there heads and went back to silence.

They sat there looking around the church and listening to the bangs on the big wooden door. They heard gun shots from where their two friends went, but didn't have time to react. The window farthest from them at the top of the church shattered. Anya screamed.

They stood with their pistols pointed at a creature that looked exactly like the one down in the tunnels. Not only that, but two more came in after it. Their long tongues whipping around them. These must have come from the other machines in Dining Hall B.

Faith looked around at them,"Ok. If these guys were there in The Hive, then why didn't they join their other friend?"

Xander and Buffy had come up behind them," Late bloomers?" Xander gave an answer. Faith, Tara, and Buffy all started shoting at it, but it was useless. One started coming near Tara position, but before it got to her a motorcycle crashed through the window.

The rider jumped off it as the bike went stright into the creature and killed it. The new arrivel shot the shotgun at another one. It came lunging after the rider, but the rider took the move and used it angainst the creature and broke the neck.

The last one threw the person against the wall, but all the injury went into the helmet and the rider got up. Flipping over the creature, the rider pinned it to the ground and stabbed it with a knife from the belt around the waist.

When the motorcyclist got up and turned toward the group, all the guns were pointing at the helmet. Dawn was first to ask,"Who are you?"

Hands came up and took the helmet off, revealing red hair and emerald eyes. Tara knew this person all to well. Except she didn't. How did Willow do all that? The only answer was that the Initiative had done something, but that would be answered later.

"Willow!!" Tara ran up to her.

Willow looked straight at the on coming blond . Her heart filled with joy as she saw her uninjured. Willow swept Tara into a furocious hug. She didn't want it to end, but knew that they had to get out of here. Had to get out of this town.

Buffy and the others let down their gaurd,"Will, what happened? We were worried. Hey, is Angel with you?"

Willow looked up at this. She had heard Buffy say that they had been best friends for a long time. If he wasn't here then where was he? Willow shook her head regretfully. Buffy looked defeated, but went up to give Willow a hug. The rest of them followed.

Tara finally let the question out,"What happened to you Willow? What did they do? What did they want?" Willow looked into soft sapphire eyes. Sadly she looked down at her wrist.
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Jesse ran as fast as he could. They were right behind him. A group of the zombies were following him. There were only three or four, but still. Then he finally couldn't run anymore. He stopped to catch his breath. They came up to him fast, but a gun shot sounded around him. Then another, until all of them were .

He looked up onto the roof of a building and saw a deputy sheriff on top drinking a beer and holding a gun. He then saw a bunch of officers in the building right next to that. They were the STARS. They were the best of the best. The best cops you could find.

He ran over to them,"Thank god. I thought I was going to die out there."

One of them looked at him,"You're safe in here for now. Take a gun and have a seat."

"Man, forget that. My stuff is custom." He flashed two golden guns at them,"Now, I just need to shoot 'em in the head right?"

They nodded. All of a sudden, giant footsteps were approaching them. It was a huge creature. The guy on the roof of the building next to them shot at the creature, but it did no affect. The creature seemed smart to the act. He shot off the giant rocket launcher he had. It killed the building and the deputy sheriff in seconds.

The creatures vision, then went to the STARS members.{ 'STARS Officers. Moderate Threat'} The creature took out his big machine gun and shot all the officers in the building. He then looked at Jesse who was standing there shaking.

Jesse looked up realizing that he was still alive. The creatures vision aimed at him, {'Civilian. Minimal Threat'}. Jesse immidiatly dropped his guns on the ground and held up his hands. {'Civilian. Zero Threat'}

The creature walked away.
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That's it for this chapter, and PLEASE leave Feed back. Gotta go.--tru2urheart

[Darth Pacula]

G'day, Ariel.

Darth Pacula reporting for spirit keeping up duty. Ok, now I sound like a total burke. Then again, I am a total burke, so who cares.

If the lack of feedback is getting you down, you could always look on the bright side of life in that no-one hates your story. It's not much, but hey the glass is half full. Just do this for your own personal enjoyment. Anything else is a bonus.

If you think English class is boring, wait until you start a job. Being an adult blows.

Ahh, Willow-babble. Accept no substitutes. How could she ever wish it gone. Without the babbling she just wouldn't be Willow, now would she?

I liked the way you kept the exact nature of her mode of transportation hidden. Nice touch. Of course, having seen the movie I knew exactly what it was, but it was still a good writing .... er .... thingy. Stupid lacking vocabulary.

Thank you for avoiding the horror movie stereotype of someone going off alone to investigate a scary noise. That never fails to give me the shits. "Yes, we're in danger of losing our lives, but I'm still going to wander off by myself and get in even more trouble."

Hmm, barbed wire in a church. I wonder what kind of kinky shit that priest was up to?

Amy Madison, ace reporter. Her defence against the ravenous hordes of the undead. A stick. A stick! She is so definately zombie chow.

I have to bid you farewell now, fair lady, for I just remembered it's my turn to cook, and I've got nothing out. D'oh! Keep it coming.

Bye for now,
Paul.

[xefan]

Ack! Is this a "dead" story? More please!!! I love the movies and it is real interesting to see this version of it.