Tonto: Im glad that you like the story so far, and all the dialogue and such. I thought there was far too much dialogue when i wrote it, but i decided to leave it, and the whole *he said she said* tag at the end of the sentence; i thought it rather unnecisary. I think that it really does make it sound to much like a story and it delays the picture that plays in your head. I dont know. i think that it makes the story more continuous with out them. Well i hope you like this next bit. Enjoy!
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title: lost in you
author: dreamin of my rainbow. aka. heather
distributions: its for pens. if you want to post it somewhere please let me know
ratings: G for now
disclaimers: these characters arent mine...they belong to the peeps who own buffy and stuff...
summary: um...i dont know yet...it comes as i write... I just know that there is no hellmouth or vampies or slayer or magicks...just normal people
feedback: yes please...
thoughts in italics
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"So, when did you get here?"
"Excuse me?" Willow looked up from her moniter.
Oh. My. God...
Vibrant blue eyes met her confused and shocked face.
"When did you get here? I havent seen you around here that often. Well. not just HERE but like around town or anything. It's a small town. Everyone knows everyone."
"um...just a few months ago..."
no babbling, no babbling. no babbling.
"Oh. So why did you decide to move here? You didnt like Virginia?"
"Um. One of my friends...my friend...yea she moved here, and so i followed...i...yea" Willow looked down at her keyboard, and sighed.
Youre such a friggin dork....Shut up while you still can
"well. I have a present for you." Tara smiled.
Well she sure is straighforewards..I wonder if shes always.....
Willow's thought was cut short.
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
Tara pulled her lips away.
" I'm kinda hoping youre single."
All willow could do was nod.
"Great!" Tara gave a broad smile.
"Then maybe friday..."
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP
"What the ffff-"
Willow rolled over and looked at her clock.
"damn...."
She hit the snooze button and retreated back to her lingering dream.
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"OW!" Tara rubbed her sore shin which just made contact with the corner of her coffe table.
"I should kick you for that!"
Damn coffee table. Wont know whats comin to him. Stupid little piece of..
Tara grumbled her way to the kitchen.
"What to eat? What to eat?"
Tara poked her head in the fridge.
"Apple?,,,,nah.....Eggs? ....nuh uh....Bagel!"
Tara had a knack for cooking, but did it rarely. She had no reason to. She lived alone.
Soon the kitchen was filled with the rich aroma of coffee and creamcheese.
Tara looked at the clock.
"O. Gonna be late."
* 9:45*
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Tara had a routine that she had to go through every morning at work.
1. Make coffee
2.Vacume
3..Clean bathroom
4. Restock
5. Clean the computers with antivirus, spybot and adaware.
6. Clean the actual computers.
7. Open store.
It had taken her forever to learn how to use these simple programs. She had one of her ex-girlfriends teach her. And when she began running the store and had a routine established, it had taken her two hours to do it. Now that she had, had the store for a while she became accustomed to the routine and only needed to be at the store an hour early.
"Flip the switch, aaaaand were open"
Tara sat at her desk, which faced the door. and the first row of compters, and sipped at her huge mug of coffee.
The store didnt usually get any costumers until 11:30 or so, so Tara walked over to the staff computers at the front and turned it on.
Bah bah bah bah bah bah bah
Tara kept beat with the music playing in her head.
Heart broken, Tears of pain. Words unspoken Summer raaiiiin. Failed heart now grandma dies. The babies hurt, Mama cries.
She put in a cd labled "Taras mixz" and put on her headphones.
Youll recieve what life has given. Pain and love and mooooore.
The bell at the door rang but tara didnt notice it. She did a little air guitar move, and banged her head at the air, letting her hair fly everywhich way.
"Bah bah bah bah bah bah bah!!!!"
She felt a small hand on her shoulder and jumped.
"What the freak!"
"OH!...sorry i didnt mean to startle you but...i uh...i walked in and uh...you were here and i needed a computer and i cant use one unless you turn it on but .um you were doing something here and ...uh....sorry."
Willow looked as startled as Tara did.
So much for not babbling like an idiot
Willow mentally slapped herself.
"uh...." Tara looked around with a face as red a cranberry.
An akward silence washed over the both of them.
"Computer?..please?"
"O! r-right um....ju-st turn one on"
"uh...yea...."
Willow walked stiffly to her favourite computer, and turned it on.
They sat in silence until twelve when three other people walked in, and the store had been awoken
more laters all! Hopes you likes it!
-heather
and hey dont complain...they talked