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New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby A-Rob » Thu Jul 07, 2005 6:48 pm

Now, I know that I have a pending fic, which I assure you I will keep working on. I just had this interesting new idea and I wanted to see what you think of it. I was rewatching Finding Neverland and I got inspired, you know how that goes.

This is just an introduction, a prologue if you will. See how do you like it:

Title: Finding Wendy
Author: A-Rob
Rating: G for now
Disclaimer: I don’t own BtVS characters or Peter Pan, they belong to a bunch of very God-blessed people and I couldn’t even fathom how it is to be that inspired.
Author’s Note: This will probably come out sounding very corn and in my defense I say that my sister’s PMS hormones is contagious. :grin


Prologue - Distant Dreams

One of my earliest memories is of my grandmother. Leaning on her rocking chair she would pull me onto her lap and read for me. My favorite was Peter Pan. Each night she would read me a chapter and I would fall asleep and dream of Neverland. Her light green eyes would sparkle merrily as she told me about the boy who could fly and never ever wanted to grow up. She read it to me many times, but each time she did, she made it sound like a brand new story.

"Every time you say you don't believe in fairies another one drops dead to the ground. So clap your hands, Willow, clap your hand and say you believe." she used to say. So I believed, I believed in everything.

Grandma died when I was seven, but I still believed. Every night I would read a chapter of my favorite book and dream of Grandma and me on Neverland. My parents said they were silly dreams, that I should focus on my studies and learn fast, so I did. I studied hard and no one could ever beat me when it came to grades. They never found out that I still believed, that I still dreamed. Peter Pan was my hero, the fairies and mermaids and pirates were my dreams. They were unbelievable. That’s exactly why I believed them.

Sometimes I used to sit alone in the garden and pretend I was a Lost Boy hiding from the pirates and Captain Hook. I'd run around having imaginary swordfights until the night came. Then I'd sit quietly in the tall grass and wait for the fireflies to come. I would run and chase the bugs with my empty pickle jar, trying to catch one and find out what exactly made them glow so brightly.

Those fireflies, they were my fairies, my Tinker Bells. They made the whole story real. I would catch one and talk to it the whole night, telling it my dreams and secrets and hopes. And my Tinker Bell would take me to Neverland and we would search for my wayward shadow. But my game was never complete, it was never as fun as I felt it could have been. I needed someone, someone I could teach to fly, to show them my secret Neverland. I needed a Wendy.

But unlike Peter Pan, I eventually grew up. Life tends to get in the way of dreams. I went to college, graduated at the top of my class, got a job, my own home. But I still felt my life was unfulfilled. Then I started remembering my dreams. I found Peter Pan in an old trunk in my attic together with a picture of my grandmother and me when I was four. As I looked at those pale green eyes, just like my own, and that face full of laugh lines I felt a tiny bit like that cake smudged child laughing and waving at the camera.

That was when I started writing. Silly, childish stories that helped me touch that long forgotten part of myself. One day I received a letter from an editor and found out that a friend of mine had sent one of my drafts. Suddenly I was publishing books under a pseudonym and I felt closer than ever to that dreamer that I had been as a child.

I still haven’t found my Wendy, but maybe, someday…

To Be Continued...

So... Do you think it's even worth continuing or it's entirely too corny and I should stick to my usual dark themes?

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Last edited by A-Rob on Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:30 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Emms » Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:00 pm

Oh yes, please do continue! I like the tone you've set in the beginning...kinda a "sweeping saga" type thing....if that makes any sense. Besides...I was never one to say stop writing one thing in order to finish writing another.... ( and everyone can just wipe that smirk right off their faces. :lol )

anyway....great start.

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:21 pm

A-Rob, this is a lovely start, and I hope you do continue. I love Peter Pan, and for such a brief introduction, you really captured the spirit of wonder in childhood make believe. I can't wait to see where you take this tale.

And I'll second Emmy...you can never have too many fics going at once. :-D

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby GayNow » Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:39 pm

Definitely continue! What a great start! I can't wait for more...from any of your fics.

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Tonto » Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:51 pm

Wow! You have hooked me already.....I can't wait to read more. You absolutely have to continue with this fic. I'm curious to see how Tara will fit into it.

Suddenly I was publishing books under a pseudonym and I felt closer than ever to that dreamer that I had been as a child.

What's Willow's pseudonym?

Update soon please...........pretty please! :flirt

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby viximon » Sun Jul 10, 2005 8:41 am

MM :applause that start is quite interesting. I like to see the Willow who keep the child within herself somehow. A believer. That so cute. I trully hope to her to find her Wendy :blush

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Tawilove » Mon Jul 11, 2005 2:36 pm

Hi A-Rob,

I was all :bounce :bounce when I saw you started a new fic!
Wonderful start and in no way corny :p, so thank your sister for us will you :-D, it was a brilliant contagion!
I'm really impatient to learn more about Willow's books and of course to meet her Wendy....who could that be :lol

Great work, please continue


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Update-y goodness!

Postby A-Rob » Mon Jul 11, 2005 5:08 pm

Well, your response to this epiphany of mine was better than I had expected. Yay!

Miss Kittys Ball O Yarn Thanks, though I didn't quite get the "sweeping saga" comment.

Besides...I was never one to say stop writing one thing in order to finish writing another.... ( and everyone can just wipe that smirk right off their faces. )


Right-o, no smikage from me, nope. :lol

tarawhipped: Peter Pan was one my favorite books growing up, it's so full of those life philosophies hidden within the childish story.

And I'll second Emmy...you can never have too many fics going at once.


:eyebrow I'm sensing a pattern here. I can't for the life of me get whatever you mean. :lol

GayNow: Oh, don't worry. I plan to continue, I'll write as much as I can squeeze off my coffee overloaded brain. :-D

Tonto: I'm not sure my way of introducing Tara will be the best way possible, but I'll try to make it the best I can.

What's Willow's pseudonym?


You'll see. :-D

viximon: I'm glad you liked it. I think it's a wondrous thing when a person can preserve a bit of that wide-eyed wonder of a child. Sadly, there are so few of those.

Tawilove: Hey sweetie! Nice hear from you! Or read in this case... I'll be sure to thank my sister for you, though she'll probably call me crazy and whack me on the head.

I'm really impatient to learn more about Willow's books and of course to meet her Wendy....who could that be


Gee, I have no idea. :lol

Well, here is chapter two. It's not much, just a very small introduction to Willow's life, plus Tara makes her appearance.

All Disclaimers Apply

Chapter One - New Neighbors


The sound of the alarm clock echoed loudly through the bedroom. A pale, freckled hand reached for the bedside table, cutting off the annoying noise before dropping limply on the bed. The two lumps under the covers stayed immobile for a few moments before the blankets were flung off and a young woman with a horrifying case of bed hair jumped off bed.

For Willow, waking up was like taking off a band-aid. An annoying, but necessary thing which the faster you did the less it hurt. The redhead yawned and stretched languidly, feeling her spine pop back into place. She shuffled to the bathroom, watched by the sleepy eyes of her dog.

Doofus was a Great Dane. He was very big and somewhat awkward, but his gentle manner and loveable nature made it impossible not to fall in love with him. Willow did, from the first moment she saw him in that box under her Christmas tree. It was the start of a beautiful friendship. Now, with three and a half years Doofus knew his Willow’s habits by heart, so when he saw her head for the bathroom he immediately lifted himself from his warm spot on the rug and went to the kitchen to wait for his breakfast.

As expected, it didn’t take long for his Willow to come down dressed in sweat pants and a snug t-shirt. He woofed at her and she patted his head on her way to the counter.

“Morning, Doofus.”

She started the coffee machine and busied herself preparing Doofus’s breakfast. Picking up a can of dogfood she eyed the label with barely suppressed disgust. Liver ‘n’ Bits… Could this get anymore repulsive? I don’t even want to know what the ‘bits’ are. She shook her head and put the mash of semi-solid, foul smelling, clinically tested and healthy dogfood on Doofus’s bowl and put it down. She watched with mounting nausea as Doofus scrambled to the bowl and buried himself in the smelly goop.

“Yikes, buddy. I don’t know how you can eat that thing.”

After being cheerfully ignored by the big dog, Willow went to prepare breakfast. Usually she spent her mornings jogging around the neighborhood, but since she had a guest she decided to forego her habit and laze the day away with her favorite playmate. She loved Lydie dearly and had been more than eager when her best friend decided to take his wife on a second honeymoon and asked her to take care of his young daughter.

“Mornin’, godmummy.”

Willow looked up and smiled at the sleepy child. Lydie looked incredibly cute in her Scooby Doo pjs with her hair all messed from sleep.

“Morning, princess. Sleep well?”

Lydie nodded, trying to rub the sleep off her eyes. She stood beside Willow and lifted her arms.

“Morning cuddles?” Willow grinned and the child nodded, pouting cutely.

Willow picked her up, hugging her close. Lydie sighed contently, nuzzling Willow’s neck. Doofus looked up from his now empty bowl and whined, bumping his forehead on the redhead’s hip to get her attention.

“Now you want attention?” Willow laughed at the dog’s pleading eyes, but relented and scratched behind his ears.

Willow put Lydie down and resumed cooking breakfast. Eggs, bacon and toast, a typical American breakfast and pretty much the whole extension of her cooking skills.

“So, what are we doing today, princess?”

“Can we play in the backyard?” Lydie asked eagerly.

“Sure thing.” Willow set Lydie’s plate before her and picked her own plate along with a glass of OJ for Lydie and a cup of coffee for herself. “And we could go to the park later.”

Light brown eyes lit up in excitement. “Really??”

“Really.” Willow nodded solemnly and they dug up on their food.

Doofus woofed at them and Lydie tossed him a piece of bacon.

“You’re spoiling him, princess.” Willow chuckled at the happily munching dog.

Lydie grinned innocently and shrugged, tossing Doofus another piece.

“Did you see your new ne… nei…” Lydie trailed off, frowning as she struggled with the word.

“Neighbors?” Willow finished helpfully. “No, they moved in yesterday while I was at your dad’s. Maybe we’ll see them today.”

“We could invite them to the park.”

“What if we got another crabby old man?” Willow asked playfully, referring to old Mr. Grayson, her former neighbor.

Lydie wrinkled her nose, remembering the nasty old man. “I hope not.”

Willow laughed. “So do I, princess.”

The redhead picked up their empty plates and put them in the dishwasher after rinsing them in the sink. In a few minutes she had Lydie changed into shorts and a cute Hello Kitty t-shirt and her short brown hair more or less tamed. The three of them went to the backyard taking some of Doofus’s toys with them.

The backyard was large and well cared for, with a couple of flower beds and a young cherry tree planted by Willow herself when she moved into the house four years ago. Willow smiled at the sight of her goddaughter playing with Doofus and sat against the tree’s trunk, content to just watch for a while.

Lydie threw the ball as high as her short arms would allow, squealing when Doofus jumped and snatched it from the air. She held out her hand and the dog obediently dropped the slobber covered ball on her palm. Lydie didn’t mind, though, and the ball was thrown once again.

After a few minutes of watching, Willow got tired of being still and entered the fray, engaging the dog and the girl in a mock wrestle match. The wrestle match soon turned into a tickle fight between Willow and Lydie with Doofus trying to get between them, barking and licking at his two giggling playmates.

Willow ended up on her back with Lydie mercilessly tickling her middle section while Doofus covered her face with doggie kisses. She was laughing helplessly. She knew she could easily regain the upper hand, but she was having too much fun to try.


Tara Maclay didn’t know what to think of the scene she was confronted with. She had been preparing breakfast for her and her daughter, which consisted of cereal and milk since she didn’t have time to grocery shop yet when both heard the commotion coming from their neighbor’s. Curious, they went to investigate and found that the fence separating their backyard from their neighbor’s was broken down, thus they had little problem finding the source of the noise.

A redhead woman, probably no older than Tara herself, flat on her back, laughing uncontrollably as a small girl tickled her and a huge dog barked and licked at her face. Tara looked at Annie, finding her daughter stifling giggles behind her hands and chuckled herself. It was a pretty funny scene.

The dog was the first to notice their presence and lifted his face, letting out a friendly woo woo. The other two looked up to see what had caught the dog’s attention and both flushed at seeing they had company.

“Er, hi.” The redhead squeaked, immediately sitting up. The little girl just hid her face in the woman’s shoulder.

“H-Hello.” Tara smiled. Annie waved at them. “I’m Tara, t-this is Annie.”

“I’m Willow and this little tyke here is Lydie.” Willow got up from the ground, taking Lydie with her. Doofus whined, indignant at being forgotten. “And of course, this is Doofus, dog extraordinaire.”

“Doofus?” Annie giggled at the silly name.

Willow grinned. “It suits him. Besides, Scooby Doo was already taken.” she looked at Tara with an apologetic smile. “I’d shake your hand, but Doofus has deemed appropriate to give me a bath and I don’t think you’d appreciate dog drool on you this early in the morning, nevermind the terrible dog breath. I have no idea how Doofus can eat that horrid thing they’re calling dogfood these days, it’s smelly and icky and so-“

“You’re babbling, godmummy.” Lydie tugs on Willow’s ear, cutting off the flow of words coming from the redhead’s mouth.

Willow blushed. “Sorry, I do that a lot. Babble, I mean. It’s a pretty annoying habit.”

“I think it’s c-cute.” Tara said and Annie nodded her agreement.

“Me too.” Lydie chirped. Doofus woofed, adding his two cents.

“Well, since everyone seems to agree on the cuteness factor of my babble, how about that park, huh?” Willow looked at her two neighbors. “We were going to the park, would you like to come with?”

Annie looks at Tara pleadingly. “Can we, mommy?”

“Hmmm…” Tara pretends to think about it, trading a wink with Willow.

“Pweeaaase?” Annie pouts.

Tara raised her hands in defeat. “Well, since you decided to bring out the big guns, I guess I have no choice.”

“Yay!” Annie jumps up and down, much to the amusement of the adults.

“Well then, I guess I should wash up.” Willow grinned. “Why don’t you come in?”

Tara nodded and they followed the redhead into her house. It didn’t take long for Willow to wash the slobber off her face and run a quick comb through her messy hair. After checking her appearance in the mirror, she took Doofus’s leash and they were off.

To Be Continued...

This is it for now. Next chapter they'll go to the park and play the get-to-know-you-better game.

Cheers!

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby GayNow » Mon Jul 11, 2005 5:25 pm

That was a very sweet chapter, Rob. I really liked the interaction between Willow and Lydie....quite nice.

I'm looking forward to their day at the park!

Can't wait for more!

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby wiccanbotanist » Mon Jul 11, 2005 5:35 pm

I haven't chimed in yet have I?

This is great! :clap Very cute and sweet. Looking forward to more Willow and Tara interaction. I like the idea of a 'get to know each other game'. Should be lots of fun.

Also curious about Willow pseudonym, and what exactly she writes (children's stories I know, but I'm thinking maybe some specifics would be nice).

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Mon Jul 11, 2005 6:07 pm

This story is very high on the cuteness factor! With Lydie and Willow and awww wittle Doofus. I love the pooch already :D

And ooo Tara and Willow meeting, and the getting-to-know-one-another part comin up! Caaan't wait.

:| really.. I can't wait. It's an illness. More soon please :D

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Emms » Mon Jul 11, 2005 6:11 pm

Hi Rob :|

Thanks, though I didn't quite get the "sweeping saga" comment.


:lol Oh okay, I just meant that it kinda gave me the same feeling I get when I'm watching Gone With the Wind, though this is way more modern than that of course.

*sigh* I've only gotten halfway through the update and just had to take a moment to leave feedback on some of the things rolling around in my brain. Lets see....

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:lol It's the breakfast of champions!

And I just loved Willow's dialogue with Lydie (that name sounds familiar Hmmmm) :eyebrow Anyhoo........I thought the way they communicated with eachother was so very real.

And how cute is Doofus???!!! Soooooo cute!!!!

okay.....scampers away to finish reading...........

alright I'm back. :-D Yay they are all going to the park together!! hehehehehehehehehe!!! (i'm a little hyper cause I just ate some marshmallows....) And Annie is just sooo cute!

I really can't wait until the next part... i'm not feeling patient...so I think you should get back to work and post something to appease me within the next few minutes..... :impatient :lol

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby viximon » Tue Jul 12, 2005 9:22 am

Aww, so adorably cute. I like Doofus :lol (I love biggy doggies).
So Tara is there already. Good good. I will be waiting next chapter, the story now comoes to the "going to know you" part wich I adore.
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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Foomatic » Wed Jul 13, 2005 12:42 pm

Hey Rob! I'm enjoying your new story! I love how you described Willow and Lydie, I could pretty much picture them rolling around on the floor in front of me!

And what a sweet way for Tara to first see Willow, seeing her play with her niece. Nothing like playing with children to bring out the fun in ya.

Looking forward to more!

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Wed Jul 13, 2005 2:09 pm

Going trying to figure the backstory here - now I know how some of my readers feel :blush - but I'm always a sucker for the sweet stuff. Hang in there.
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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby A-Rob » Fri Jul 15, 2005 2:42 pm

GayNow: Thanks, Carleen! I tried to make Willow and Lydie pretty close, kinda like I was with my own godmother. I always thought that Willow would be good with children (since she had so much practice on Xander to begin with). :grin

wiccanbotanist: Hey there! Glad you liked it. More W/T interaction coming, but for now they'll be accompained by the kids. They'll have some alone time soon, though.

Also curious about Willow pseudonym, and what exactly she writes (children's stories I know, but I'm thinking maybe some specifics would be nice).


I'm still trying to think of a good pseudonym for Willow (suggestions?), but I'll try to describe Willow's writings the best I can. Also, keep in mind that Willow doesn't want publicity (hence the pseudonym), so it will be some time before she starts speaking of her books.

VixenyTarasHot: Thanks for reviewing. I think you'll like the next chapters, then, much with the cuteness factor. It will either be very corny or cause many 'aaaawwww's all around.

Miss Kittys Ball O Yarn: You know, Emms, you're a very strange person. :eyebrow Or maybe I just didn't get the Gone With the Wind reference.

It's the breakfast of champions!


My dogs love those icky smelly goop they're calling dogfood now. It's absolutely revolting. Yikes.

And I just loved Willow's dialogue with Lydie (that name sounds familiar Hmmmm) Anyhoo........I thought the way they communicated with eachother was so very real.


Familiar? I don't get it. What's up with that? :eyebrow And Willow is kinda a big sister slash surrogate mother to Lydie. At first I thought about giving Willow a daughter, but then I realized that they don't need to be blood related to be close. Plus it's way easier than trying to come up with a back story for the 'father' thing.

Sweetie, you really should try to eat less sugar. Maybe even try a decaf? :grin

viximon: I also happen to love big dogs, which is why I have two Weimaraners, they're sweeties. Doofus is based on my uncle's dog, he's a Great Dane called Elmer, but I always called him doofus. :wink

Foomatic: Hi Foo! The intention was to introduce them in a light, fun mood. I figured if Tara saw how great Willow is with Lydie she won't have many problems letting Willow in (sharp mama lioness's claws, you know?). Plus Willow does seem to be the kind to play around like a big kid herself. I miss my niece *sigh* Hope you keep reading!

DaddyCatALSO: The mystery is the best part of the story! Well, I sure hope you have a high tolerance of sugar, cuz this will be Where-Is-My-Insuline Sweet.

And here I give you chapter 2!

All Disclaimers Apply


Chapter Two - A Walk In The Park

“It’s very nice here.”

Willow nodded in agreement. “I usually come here for my morning jog with Doofus, I always feel peaceful here.”

Tara glanced at her sideways. “You don’t look like one of those 6 AM joggers.” she said, before she realized that the redhead wouldn’t appreciate being judged.

To her surprise, Willow laughed heartily. “I really don’t, do I? I look more like someone who should be in the library with her nose buried in a book.”

“I didn’t m-mean to sound-“ Tara started to apologize, but Willow cut her off with a gentle squeeze on her arm.

“I don’t mind, really. The thing is that I actually am a geek. I just have a best friend obsessed with physical fitness.” Willow grinned. “She sorta got me hooked into track when we were in High School.”

“Godmummy…” Lydie pulled on Willow’s shirt for attention. “Can we play?” she pointed to the swing set.

“Sure, princess.” Willow scooped the small girl in her arms, twirling her around a little. “What about you, munchkin?” she looked at Annie.

Annie frowned. “Munchkin?”

“Don’t tell me you’ve never watched The Wizard of Oz?” Willow exclaimed in mock outrage, making the girls giggle. “We must correct that someday, The Wizard of Oz is a classic.” Willow looked at Tara, her eyes asking.

“Absolutely.” Tara smiled.

“So, wanna play too?” Willow asked again.

“Can I, Mama?” Annie asked excitedly.

“Yes, you may.” Tara smiled indulgently.

“C’mon then.” Willow lifted the other child up and run with both of them to the swings.

She’s strong, Tara observed, I usually have difficulty carrying Annie for a long time but she carries both of them with no problem at all. She watched with interest as the redhead sat on one of the swings with both children on her lap. A blonde eyebrow quirked up as the redhead started pushing them on the swings higher and higher, giggling along with the girls. Cute.

“I thought you would push them on the swings.” Tara gave Willow a curious look when they finally stopped swinging.

“But then I would miss all the fun.” Willow winked. “How about we play with Doofus now?”

The girls squealed and took the tennis ball Willow pulled from her pocket. Soon they were both taking turns at tossing the ball to the eager dog.

“Hey, girls, wanna see a trick?” Willow asked playfully, stopping beside them as Doofus ran after the ball once more.

Tara looked on, curious.

“A trick?” Annie asked. Lydie looked equally interested.

“Yeah, look.” She whistled sharply and Doofus came running with the ball clasped firmly in his jaws. Willow extended her hand and Doofus obediently dropped the ball on her palm. She wrinkled her nose at the stickiness of the ball, but tried to ignore it. “Let’s play seal, Doofus.”

Tara’s eyebrows hit her hairline when Willow placed the ball on the dog’s nose. Doofus stood still with the ball balanced on his black nose.

“Wow!” Lydie exclaimed, her eyes wide in awe.

“Cool!” Annie agreed.

“How does he do that?” Tara asked.

“Now that’s a secret.” Willow shook her finger at her playfully. “Look now. Stand up, Doof.”

Doofus stood and put his forepaws on Willow’s shoulders, the ball still perfectly balanced. Tara noticed just how big Doofus was, standing he was as tall as Willow.

The girls clapped, impressed by the display. Willow chuckled and patted Doofus’s back. The dog let go of her and the ball fell to the ground. The redhead picked it up and put it back in her pocket.

“How about ice cream?” she offered, pointing to the small ice cream shop near the park.

The little girls took one of Willow’s hands each and started pulling her towards the shop. Tara followed, giggling to herself. They entered the shop and Willow went to the small Hispanic teen behind the counter.

“Hola, Fernando.” Willow greeted in flawless Spanish.

“Buenos días, señorita Willow.” Fernando smiled and switched to English. “And who are those ladies with you?”

“Well, you know my goddaughter Lydie.”

“Sí, sí, señor Xander’s daughter.”

“And these two lovely ladies are my new neighbors, Tara and her daughter Annie.” Willow caught her Tara’s eye and the blonde blushed at the compliment.

They exchange pleasantries and Willow ordered their ice cream, insisting on paying since she was the one who invited them in the first place.

“Besides, you can always pay mine next time.” Willow reasoned and Tara found herself looking forward to the next time.

“So, how old are you, munchkin?” Willow asked Annie as they strolled along around the park enjoying their ice cream cones.

“Five!” Annie declared proudly.

“Oh, that’s a very important age.” Willow said sagely.

“Really?”

“Of course. You’re starting school this year, right?”

“Yes, Mama and I already went shopping for my school things.”

“And you insisted on having everything Powerpuff Girls themed.” Tara let out a long suffering sigh and Annie giggled.

“Oh, I’m sure Lydie here will put her parents through a similar situation when she starts school next year, won’t you, princess?” Willow winked at the dark haired child.

Lydie nodded enthusiastically. “Spiderman!”

Tara blinked at the unusual choice of favorites.

“Her dad is a comic maniac.” Willow explained, seeing Tara’s confusion. “Xander considers Spiderman and The Fantastic Four perfectly good bedtime stories.”

“And X-Men!” Lydie added, giggling as Doofus tried to lick her strawberry cone.

“I don’t know which is worse, Xander with his comics or Anya and her Accounting Today. At this rate either Lydie will become a money-obsessed accountant or create the next Marvel.”

Tara laughed as she tried to imagine each scenario. “What about you? What are your bedtime stories?”

“Oh, the classics. Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty… My favorite is Peter Pan, though.”

“Peter Pan! I love Peter Pan!” Annie squealed.

“Oh, no. Now she’ll make me read it to her again.” Tara said melodramatically. “I think I know it all by heart, since this little one here insists on hearing it every night. Of course, then there’s the Disney movie too.”

Annie pouted.

“Uh uh, no pouty face or I’ll get Captain Hook on you.” Tara mock threatened, brandishing an imaginary hook.

“Funny, Mama!” Annie giggled.

“So you like Peter Pan too, huh?” Willow ruffled Annie’s hair. “You know, I had a cat named Mr. Smee.” She said, remembering the feline that had shared her bed for seventeen years.

“Really?” Annie asked excitedly.

“Uh huh. He had a mark on his right eye that looked like an eyepatch, so I named him Mr. Smee.”

“Cool! What happened to him?”

Willow looked sad for a split second, but covered it with a grin. “He went back to Neverland. Knowing him, he’s probably sleeping with his belly up or chasing some poor fairy around. He did that a lot here.”

“Wow! You have seen a real fairy?” Annie looked at Willow, eyes wide with excitement.

“Sure! Maybe one day I’ll show you some.” Willow winked at her.

“Can I see fairies too, godmummy?”

“Hmm…” Willow tapped her chin, feigning deep thought. Then she laughed, picking Lydie up and putting her on her shoulders. “Of course you can. We can all go fairy hunting.”

Tara smiled amusedly, thought she couldn’t help but wonder what Willow meant by ‘fairy hunting’.

“Am I not invited to this hunt?” Tara asked with a pout.

Willow raised an eyebrow at her, then smirked. “Fairy hunting is a serious business, you have to be daring and resourceful.”

“We are, aren’t we, Mama?” Annie asked, trying to fend off Doofus’s advances on her ice cream.

“We sure are.” Tara nodded, giving her daughter a one-armed hug and pushing the playful dog away.

“How about you, princess? Are you prepared for this adventure? There may be even…” Willow shuddered. “Frogs.”

“I’m brave!” Lydie said with a cutely fierce look on her face.

“I know you are. But frogs are tricky. They deceive you with that slimy hop-hopping and that sticky tongue…”

“I can do it, godmummy!” Lydie insisted.

“You’re so brave, princess.”

Lydie beamed.

“Frogs, huh?” Tara gave Willow a sidelong look.

“They’re evil.” Willow said seriously. Doofus woofed, as if agreeing with her. “So, how about we schedule this hunt for tonight? At eight?” she looked at Tara questioningly.

Tara nodded, smiling as the children whooped excitedly.

“It’s a date.”

To Be Continued…

Next Chapter... Fairy Hunting!

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Tawilove » Fri Jul 15, 2005 3:38 pm

Rob my dear…wonderful updates :bow :bow

Sorry about the feedbacky delay :ashamed ….I’m a bad girl ….but in my defense I was out of town for a few days (work grrrrr) and grumbling about my fic withdrawal :sob
So imagine the pleasant surprise when I spot your 2 updates
I’m all giddy now :bounce :bounce

In chapter one, I loved the way you depicted the everyday life of Willow filled with love and quirkiness.
Her interactions with her goddaughter are incredibly cute, it made me all mushy :x
I can only imagine what this huge tickle fest must have been and how it surely brought a feeling of love and belonging to Tara’s heart!
Annie’s a cutie, I so love the idea of Tara being a mom…. :flower

By the way…..this part is so ewwww but hilariously funny :lmao :lmao :lmao

Picking up a can of dogfood she eyed the label with barely suppressed disgust. Liver ‘n’ Bits… Could this get anymore repulsive? I don’t even want to know what the ‘bits’ are. She shook her head and put the mash of semi-solid, foul smelling, clinically tested and healthy dogfood on Doofus’s bowl and put it down. She watched with mounting nausea as Doofus scrambled to the bowl and buried himself in the smelly goop.



In chapter two…..God! Willow is such a kid….I love that.. :-D

All the way through my reading and their progression through the park I couldn’t shake the impression of a Willow in a Peter Pan suit…..no seriously…the way you wrote this part felt so light and joyful…events were flowing with grace as they seemed to become linked in one swift movement. Just as if (like Peter Pan) Willow and her companions were flying from the swing, to the dog-play, to the trick, the ice-cream…..
I’m really amazed by the ability you have to write movement, I know I already told you that for « Warring Heart » but it felt just the same here.
I can’t get that ‘fluently flying image’ of our dear redhead out of my mind!

BRAVO! :clap :clap :clap :clap

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Foof » Fri Jul 15, 2005 3:43 pm

I am quite taken with your writing A-Rob. Both stories you are working on right now have me completely hooked - they are so different and your writing style tends to change for each. The fluidity of you writing is really quite spectacular; not many people can write such different genres (let alone write both at the same time). Hat's off to you.

You also write the children quite well (not too "cutesie" and not too old for their ages) and I adore the name you chose for the dog. Your Willow - this children's book writer with a heart of an adventurous child and a mind for the fantastic - is endearing beyond belief and somehow I can't imagine her naming the dog anything other than "Doofus." Loveable, but not in a goofy way. She's just... Willow. Exceptional portrayal.

I look forward to reading more interaction between Tara and the children and see how you develop Tara as a character as well. If it's anything like you've done with Willow, I know I won't be disappointed.
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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Emms » Fri Jul 15, 2005 5:25 pm

Rob Rob Rob!!!! first let me start off by replying to these little lines.....

You know, Emms, you're a very strange person.


:lol why yes...yes I am. :-D

I just didn't get the Gone With the Wind reference.
*sigh* if you don't get it now dahhhhhling you'll nevahh get it. :lol

Familiar? I don't get it. What's up with that?
:-D jeeze, i must have really been hyped up on sugar that day :lol What I was trying to say there, (and I didn't take into consideration that you hadn't read it) was that, there is another story on the board written by a very talented writer by the name of Jeanne aka Kindagay in which Willow has twin daughters and one of the kid's names is Lydia, Lydie for short.

now, on another note. I loved everything about this update!! With Willow in the park swinging with the girls (litterally) ...i don't think i spelled that correctly...I could go and check in the dictionary...but I'm too lazy right now *groan* Anyway...it was so lovely, and she really interacts with them so naturally. I can definitly see the possiblility of Annie becoming very attatched to Willow...

“Am I not invited to this hunt?” Tara asked with a pout.


Good grief....They just met an hour ago, and already Tara's pouting?? :lol

I'm so glad you updated rob! more soon please. :x

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Fri Jul 15, 2005 6:40 pm

You said we'd get a high cuteness factor and you delivered :D SO cute! And much of the awww and not corny.

Everyone loves these fluffy stories. Makes us forget our own badnesses. Yeay for you adding to the goodness :)

Maaaybe.. in a not so distant update... there could be Willow and Tara only.. hunting.. different things.. say like each other.. and um.. yeah. You get the idea :lol

But its enjoyable just to read PGlike cuteness too ;)

In fact more soon please
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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby A-Rob » Sat Jul 16, 2005 10:17 am

Tawilove: Thanks, Julie. And it's no problem really, RL tends to get in the way. Happens to the best of us. :grin

In chapter one, I loved the way you depicted the everyday life of Willow filled with love and quirkiness.


With Willow, love and quirkiness is a given. My objective here is to show her everyday life (from terrible bed head to playful tickle fights) without the pressures of being a Cool Monster Fighter. The Hellmouth is good to add angst and action, but that gets old fast. It's incredible how a normal (or in Willow's case, not so normal) can attract just as much attention.

All the way through my reading and their progression through the park I couldn’t shake the impression of a Willow in a Peter Pan suit…..no seriously…the way you wrote this part felt so light and joyful…events were flowing with grace as they seemed to become linked in one swift movement. Just as if (like Peter Pan) Willow and her companions were flying from the swing, to the dog-play, to the trick, the ice-cream…..
I’m really amazed by the ability you have to write movement, I know I already told you that for « Warring Heart » but it felt just the same here.
I can’t get that ‘fluently flying image’ of our dear redhead out of my mind!


:blush Aww, now you made me blush! And Willow in a Peter Pan suit? :hmm Sounds interesting, I'll take this into consideration. What I like about Peter Pan is the playfull but deep theme. I wanted to put this into my story, I don't know if I'm doing it well enough, but I plan to keep trying. :wink 'fluently flying image', huh? I like it. :grin

Foof:

I am quite taken with your writing A-Rob. Both stories you are working on right now have me completely hooked - they are so different and your writing style tends to change for each. The fluidity of you writing is really quite spectacular; not many people can write such different genres (let alone write both at the same time). Hat's off to you.


Thank God the only headwear I use are baseball caps, which are adjustable, cuz at this rate my head is going to get bigger and bigger. :lol Thanks, Foof. It really is a challenge to me to change styles like this. Warring Heart has a sorta dark theme, which is excellent if you're in the mood, but I wanted this one to be light and fun. So I can right either depending on my mood.

You also write the children quite well (not too "cutesie" and not too old for their ages) and I adore the name you chose for the dog. Your Willow - this children's book writer with a heart of an adventurous child and a mind for the fantastic - is endearing beyond belief and somehow I can't imagine her naming the dog anything other than "Doofus." Loveable, but not in a goofy way. She's just... Willow. Exceptional portrayal.


Surprisingly, the children were the easiest to write. Maybe because I spend so much time with children here. You see, I have four nieces and two nephews, so I have lots of experience. And Willow is an exceptional character all by herself, I just gave her a dream and it all flowed. :heart

I look forward to reading more interaction between Tara and the children and see how you develop Tara as a character as well. If it's anything like you've done with Willow, I know I won't be disappointed.


I think Tara may be a little more difficult for me to write. She's just so deep, you know? The show didn't give her nearly enough credit, IMHO. She's one of the strongest characters, really. Her difficult past and her perpetually gentle soul give her an air of mystery. I don't know how to describe it, not really. I hope I can write her as well I could write Willow.

Miss Kittys Ball O Yarn: Hey Emms! Good to hear from you again. I just vowed to myself to watch Gone With The Wind someday, I never really had the opportunity (or the patience) but now I'm curious. If I die of boredom (which is what my sis says will happen) I'll come back to haunt you, alright?

jeeze, i must have really been hyped up on sugar that day What I was trying to say there, (and I didn't take into consideration that you hadn't read it) was that, there is another story on the board written by a very talented writer by the name of Jeanne aka Kindagay in which Willow has twin daughters and one of the kid's names is Lydia, Lydie for short.


Interesting, can you give me a link to this story? And Lydie is really a nickname for Lydia. I named her and Annie after my youngest nieces, they're just too cute for words.

I can definitly see the possiblility of Annie becoming very attatched to Willow.


Sure she will. Willow is a big kid herself and she has a way with children, don't you think?

Good grief....They just met an hour ago, and already Tara's pouting??


What can I say? Willow is pout-worthy (and a lot of other things too) :devil

VixenyTarasHot: Thank God, I really didn't want to overstep the bounds of cuteness into the land of way-too-corniness.

Maaaybe.. in a not so distant update... there could be Willow and Tara only.. hunting.. different things.. say like each other.. and um.. yeah. You get the idea


:hmm Weeeeell... That's for me to know and you to find out. :-D

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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby Emms » Wed Jul 20, 2005 10:29 am

HI Rob! This morning I had a psychic premonition that this story would have an update today....so, where is it? My premonitions are very seldom wrong...so that can only lead me to believe that you are dilly-dally'ing somwhere when you should be posting an update for us all to read and enjoy. :-D

Okay...(Going back to being patient now. )


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Re: New Fic: Finding Wendy

Postby viximon » Wed Jul 20, 2005 11:03 am

Wow. So adorably cute. Willow is quite the family-kid person. And I think Tara is fallin for her charms.
Oh, :bounce fairy hunt, that sounds really interesting...it's a date hahahahha
Love your fic. Keep it up.

BTW your spanish is really good. Mucho mejor que mi Inglés, eso seguro. Do you know it too?
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