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It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu Jun 30, 2005 2:15 pm

Disclaimer;I don't own these charcaters or the setting, no compensation is being taken for this story.

Summary;My version of their first kiss.

Rating;PG?

It’s in Her Kiss, That’s Where It is


“So, if you really want to see if those sunstones work properly this early in the year, why don’t we just meet in the Old Quad by the flagpole tomorrow at 12:30PM and try them?” Willow Rosenberg asked as she was preparing to leave Tara Maclay’s dorm room. It was almost midnight and they had been practicing some magical rituals which work best in the evening hours. To unintentional musical accompaniment; Tara’s neighbor had an affection for dinosaur R&B and couldn’t seem to comprehend study conditions after 7 PM, and the strains of Dolores Troy’s “Just One Look” were quite audible through the wall.

“Sure, we c-could do that, I mean, if you w-want to, you know.”

“Of course I want to, I wouldn’t have suggested it if didn’t. Is something wrong?”

“W-well, I know you have your old friends from town, and a whole course load. I, I just don’t want you to feel ob-obligated to do magic with me.”

“Hey, I don’t, not even close. My friends see plenty of me, plus they have their own lives. Every minute I spend with you, I want to.”

“Okay, I don’t, don’t want to crowd you.”

“You aren’t, and that’s the bottom line. And, well, I don’t want to pretend I can read your mind, and if I’m wrong I apologize. But if you’re at least partly thinking what I think you’re thinking, I want you to know you’re not barking up the wrong tree.”

Tara had not expected Willow to say that, and all she could manage to say was “Uhh . . . .” Willow moved closer and took a hand in each of hers, like Anna and the King.

“Look, again, if I’m wrong, sorry in advance, and if I’m right, I have to admit that, as of now, I don’t know how far I’ll be able to go. But from where we stand, right here, if that’s what you want I’m definitely interested.”

Tara took a deep breath. Her eyes shone a bit brighter with just a little added moisture, nothing even close to a tear.

“Oh, Willow, you aren’t wrong! I just didn’t expect you just to come out and say that even though I’ve been imagining what it’d be like to hear it but I didn’t know how to ask and I didn’t want to scare you off because I’d rather have you as a friend than as nothing and . . . .”

“Hey, hey, hey!” Willow interrupted, “You don’t babble, you stutter, I babble, remember? I’m feeling confused enough as it is right now.”

Tara smiled and said, “Alright, sure, sure, so we’re cool right now?”

“Right now I want to try one more thing,” said Willow. She leaned forward and gave Tara a quick but warm kiss on the lips.

“Hey, I liked that,” Willow said after a split-second’s thought, “Of course, I’ve done as much before, with friends.”

“Same for me, on both counts.”

“Then how about this?” asked the redhead, leaning forward and kissing Tara again, a bit more demandingly. The ash-blonde woman responded in kind, just an affectionate tipping, tentatively at first then with more vigor.

Pulling back, a pair of sapphire eyes ringed with glacial gray met a pair of emerald ones flecked lightly with bits of hazel. They stayed this way for a few heartbeats, not knowing quite what they were reading in each other but liking it nonetheless. Then, neither too quickly nor too slowly, they let go of each other’s hands.

Willow spoke first, only a hint of nerves audible under the happiness, “That was great, it really gives me some energy to burn off during the walk back to my dorm.”

Tara responded, in a similar tone, “And it makes me feel happy and warm about settling down for the night.”

“So, okay, see you tomorrow?” said Willow, gathering her things.

“Yeah, in the Old Quad, I’ll be there. Good night.”

“’Night.”

The door closed and Tara stood staring at it for a few seconds, then she became conscious of the music. The speakers next door were pouring out “The Shoop-Shoop Song” by Betty Everett: “If you want to know, If he loves you so, It’s in his kiss, That’s where it is.” She walked over to her mirror.

As Willow walked down the hallway, she heard the same words, while asking herself silent questions.
“Right brain- Do you have any idea what you’re doing, Rosenberg?’
“Left brain- Not a clue, it’s just what I want to do, Rosenberg.”
“Right brain- Well, think it out!”
“Left brain- That’s your job.”
“Right brain- Okay then, I will.”
“Left brain- Fine, I’ll send you plenty of first-hand data to work with.”



Meanwhile, Tara was staring at her reflection.

“Alright, you’re at least started on getting what you’ve wanted since you first saw Willow. Goddess knows, you’ve wanted somebody special for so long now, Maclay.

“So why am I so scared? Guess Mom was right again when she warned me that my own feelings wouldn’t play fair with me.”


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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby A-Rob » Thu Jun 30, 2005 6:12 pm

:lol This gave me a few good chuckles. When I read the title I thought 'God, that crappy Cher song' and remember my younger sister and her best friends singing that on a karaoke bar *shudder*. But I got curious. Now I'm glad I did, you definitely had an interesting version for Willow and Tara's first kiss.

But if you’re at least partly thinking what I think you’re thinking


I bet you can't say that three times fast! :lmao

“Hey, hey, hey!” Willow interrupted, “You don’t babble, you stutter, I babble, remember? I’m feeling confused enough as it is right now.”


I can just see Willow saying something like that. So Willow-esque!

And the conversations with Willow's brain parts were funny too, I liked it. You could use a little bit more plot, more story, but it was funny and sweet. Try to write a bit more next time, you'll make us readers much happier. Or maybe it's just my prejudice against one-shots talking, who knows? :grin

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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby psimetis » Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:26 pm

....nice, i found another of your stories, and again, very much enjoyed it!

i have a fondness for 'dinosaur r&b', ;) mostly the girl groups, so i dig your title and how you lightly worked that innocence-romance vibe that is that kind of music into this story.

again, you wrote a really great interaction and i love how you see things. you bring fresh energy to this pairing. their conversation about taking a certain step was great. :)

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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Fri Jul 01, 2005 9:27 am

Thanks each; like I said, I was worried I'd written soemthing not-credible (since obviously I'm just kinda gueessing here).

A-Rob; I was never exactly "in touch" about popular music even as a teenager and I'm 49 now so I usually avoid musical and similar references. (Except when I bring my Mary Sue charcater on stage, since he listens to what I do, and he definitely would be out of place in any of these tales!)
Actually these W&T two-person vignettes (I have two more typed and ready and a couple others further down in the cycle) are strictly "intimacy fics," not plotted stories, but they do get longer and have more detailed dialogue. Those later ones are all set in a specific AU of my own that I've done a number of stories in.

psimetis; I have only read a few other things, and I've been palying around with wrting dfifernet hings since I was in junior high.
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby sam7777 » Fri Jul 01, 2005 3:12 pm

Lovely vignette about :wtkiss first kiss. The bit at the end with the “The Shoop-Shoop Song” playing was just great and it so fits. Willow is all babbly and Tara is all stuttery but they both know what they want. There may be incertainty but there is love and sweetness. Loved how they deppened the kiss after the first one. That should give them a hint where this is going. Enjoyed it. :pride
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby Thianne » Thu May 25, 2006 6:16 am

lovely fic, good job!
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu May 25, 2006 12:50 pm

Thnaks, I' always wonder how credible my stories are...


Hmmm, wonder what happened to the thre-four other replies I had ebfore?
Snapshots:http://thekittenboard.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=10210 a Love Story
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Kim: (breaks off the kissing) I l... (Sue stops her with a hand)
Sue: We don't talk about things like that right after, you know that, no saying those things in The Moment.
Kim: (moves the hand aside) Screw The Moment. I *love* you.
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby WillowRulez » Thu May 25, 2006 3:32 pm

Very credible I'd say ;)
Really cute story. I liked how easily Willow could read Tara. :x
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby taralicious » Thu May 25, 2006 8:36 pm

That was as sweet as a plate of yummy pancakes, any shape, covered in golden syrup and topped with strawberries.
Willow and Tara, two great tastes that taste great together.
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Re: It's in Her Kiss, That's Where It Is

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Fri May 26, 2006 9:55 am

Just a concern of mine, having never been female, never been gay, and my college years way behind me. (Plus Iw asn't dating then so no useable memories either :-).) but most people seem to like my W&T pieces and my H&F one-shot so I guess I'm doing soemthign right.
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Kim: (breaks off the kissing) I l... (Sue stops her with a hand)
Sue: We don't talk about things like that right after, you know that, no saying those things in The Moment.
Kim: (moves the hand aside) Screw The Moment. I *love* you.
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