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New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby SakuraEtsuko » Fri May 06, 2005 9:42 pm

Title: The Legacy
Book 1: Remembrance
Pt 1
Author: SakuraEtsuko aka Karen
Feedback: love it want it need it!! PLEASE!
My email: SakuraEtsuko@gmail.com
Disclaimers: nooope I don’t own em..none of em…I’d be one helluva rich and happy gal if I did! *winks* Willows dream is script from the show…from when our beloved Tara died.
Rating: mostly Pg 13 with some NC-17 thrown in some chapters..not this one though
Description: this is post season seven, Sunnydale is a hole in the ground and our fav characters are livin’ it up in northern California.
Warnings: The first chapter is the shortest…the rest get quite long, and this fic is pretty angstful in up and coming chapters…including a brief spell in which W/T are not together..but rest assured…our ladies come to their senses and all ends well! *winks*
Notes: Don’t be too hard on me..although ive been an avid reader of fan fics..this is my first one :D


A lone figure stood on the beach, painting the serene sunset, attempting to capture the calm fury of the sea before twilight hit. She scrunched her face a bit, tilting her head and sighed at her efforts. “Oh well”, she said, before turning against the wind to pack up her easel and art supplies. After finally wrestling her art supplies into her bag, putting the rest over her shoulder, she frowned as a movement in the water caught her eye.

“What the heck…” she whispered as she watched a glowing naked young woman emerge from the waters, stumbling a bit as she tried to become accustomed to walking on shore. The brunette beauty looked around with a confused expression on her face before collapsing to the ground.

“Oh no!” Kylie said before running towards the fallen woman, stopping in front of her she bit her lip, unsure of how to help her. Pulling the girl further up the shore Kylie threw a blanket and her jacket over her and began pacing next to her. “Great just great”, Kylie thought to herself, “if I bring her to the hospital no one will believe where…how I found her…what is that gold medallion around her neck? who is she? Or rather…what is she?

The young woman stirred and mumbled a bit, awakening Kylie from her musings and she immediately knelt down beside her, “Oh my goodness, are you all right?” Kylie asked, pulling the shaken girl to her feet. The mysterious beauty looked at Kylie and whispered softly, “I don’t know”.

“Well, what’s your name?”

A beat. “I don’t know”.

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Tara: Your shirt...

Willow: Tara? Tara? baby, come, on baby. Get up. Please. Tara... No... no... no..

Willow: Oh God. Oh no...Please... please, come on... come on Tara! Please! Come on baby... (invoking magic) By Osiris, I command you! Bring her back! Hear me! Keeper of darkness-

IMPOSING DEMON: Witch! How dare you invoke Osiris in this task?

Willow: Please, please, bring her back!

IMPOSING DEMON: You may not violate the laws of natural passing-

Willow: How? How is this natural?

IMPOSING DEMON: It is a human death, by human means.

Willow: But I-

IMPOSING DEMON: You raised one killed by mystical forces. *This* is not the same - *she* is taken by natural order. It is done.

Willow: No. There's has to be a way!

IMPOSING DEMON: It is done!

Willow: NO! (she blows the demon away with a yell)



“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!” Willow screamed as she awoke from her nightmare and bolted upright, shaking and sweating profusely. “Taaaarrraaaaaa!!!!!!!” Willow screamed her deceased lovers name as she began to sob her heart out, screaming and crying her lovers name over and over. “I m-miss y-y-you s-ooo much Tara…Come back! Please come back!!!” Willow threw herself to the ground, shaking, screaming, and pounding her fists helplessly against the carpeted floor.

Buffy ran in the room three seconds later…holding up a hairbrush and comb as a weapon. “Will? Will, whats wrong??” She asked her friend frantically, dropping her “weapons” and kneeling down on the floor, gathering her sobbing friend in her arms.

“T-T-Tara….”

“Oh Willow, its gonna be alright..ok? I promise it will be..I know its hard, I mean today is the anniversary of Taras death, and I know its hard“…Buffy stumbled over her words, thinking to herself, “how can anything I say make it allright? Or any less hard?”, nevertheless, she took a deep breath and continued, “But Tara would want you to move on, to be happy Will…you can’t give in and keep having these nightmares.”

Suddenly Willow stood up, her face radiating with joy, “Buffy, I know why I’ve been having these dreams”, Willow told her excitedly. She whirled around in a circle before dropping to the floor again and grabbing Buffy’s shoulders, “Tara..shes..I feel her…shes alive..”


To be continued…
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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri May 06, 2005 9:46 pm

Interesting start. Solid story, good pacing and great diction - my criteria for asking: MORE PLEASE!!! :D:D:D
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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby viximon » Sat May 07, 2005 2:00 am

uooh uoooh! Tara's alive! She's the beach woman, isn't she?
I'm sure the scoobies at first will think Willow has lost it definively. But I really hope to our dear tormented redhead to search and found her soulmate.

Keep the story up
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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby sam » Sat May 07, 2005 7:50 am

Great start..I can't wait to read more :-D . Love sam xx
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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby GayNow » Sat May 07, 2005 10:09 am

This is a very intriguing beginning to your fic, Karen. Good job! Keep it going. I'm really looking forward to more.

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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby cperrins78 » Sat May 07, 2005 8:46 pm

I love this story already. I always like stories that bring Tara back. Can't wait till they actually come face to face. Keep up the good work.



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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance-UPDATED

Postby SakuraEtsuko » Fri Jun 03, 2005 9:54 am

ok...i know this is a REAAALLLLY short update....but u would not believe the craziness lately with school just ending, finals etc etc etc...however! i promise...no really i do...that the next update will be only a few days away...and will be REALLLLY REALLY REALL LONG!!! (i wrote this in my history class...enjoy....the story of our lost lovers continues..dun dun dun..*giggles*

P.S. thank all of you for your nice comments and feedback..i LOVE getting feedback helps me alot.

again..a warning..its short..lol

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Willow rose from the floor, avoiding Buffy’s shocked gaze, and turned to her closet to pull out some clothes, her magical books that were saved from Sunnydale and her laptop.

“Will, I think you should wait a minute I mean, your not thinking straight..” Buffy tried reasoning with Willow, grabbing Willow’s arm lightly.

Willow turned to face Buffy, with a glint of determination on her eye and said, “Call a Scooby meeting Buffy, she’s alive, I know it…and its time I began looking for her.”

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The young woman entered the small cramped car and frowned…she knew what a car was…she knew so many things…how could she have no idea as to who SHE was…no memories at all. Tara shook her head to refocus and looked at the woman next to her shoving her art supplies in the backseat already littered with trash.

“Sorry about the mess”, Kylie said, blushing.

“Oh its all right”

Kylie looked at the mysterious blonde with interest, trying to figure out something, anything about her. “you know”, Kylie said, chuckling, “it’s a good thing we are about the same size.” As she said this, Kylie tossed the blonde a spare set of clean sweats she had in her duffel bag, “There’s a bathroom right down the beach that I’ll drive us to so you can change.”

“Thanks”, The blonde shot Kylie a brilliant smile which made her start, then soften inside.

“Hey what’s that?” Kylie asked later, glancing at the amulet around the blondes neck.

The young woman inspected her amulet carefully, tracing her fingers over the engraving. “Is ero prognatus iterum , ut filia of divum quod mare , vivo iterum , insequor suus fatum..” She turned the amulet over…“Tara”

“What does that mean??” Kylie asked, a bewildered look on her face as she alternated her eyes between the road and the young woman next to her.

“She will be born again, as daughter of sky and sea, to live again, to follow her destiny.”

“And Tara?”

“Well…I suppose that’s my name”, Tara said smiling sheepishly.

“I’m Kylie”, Kylie said, grinning back at Tara.

Tara cocked her head and took a few moments to look over this Kylie. She was short, with green eyes that sparkled when she laughed and fiery red hair, physical attributes that reminded her of someone…but who? Someone important…someone she…? Tara frowned and was shaken from her thoughts when the car suddenly stopped in front of Kylie’s apartment.

“We’re here”. Kylie told her, causing Tara to forget about her new revelation.

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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby Tonto » Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:13 pm

Ooooh I like this story......its a completely different twist on the return of Tara. I have so many questions about how Tara got to where she is but I'm sure they will be answered in time. Soon, I hope.....*hint hint. I really love the amnesia thing.

"Thanks”, The blonde shot Kylie a brilliant smile which made her start, then soften inside.


I just hope that Willow finds Tara in time........before Tara and Kylie start something. Bad Kylie!

Update soon please...........I'm at work waiting for an update!
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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby SakuraEtsuko » Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:28 pm

im working on an update as we speak..and well the rules of this site are that no non w/t action shall be on this boards.....and those rules must be followed...but as u can tell kylies starting to fall fast..should be interesting eh? should have an update by tomorrow, the day after at the latest!

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Re: New fic:The Legacy Book 1: Remembrance

Postby Nicole023 » Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:41 pm

I know I'm gonna love this story so much..

Just with these two updates you already have me coming back for more..
A lot more ? Please ??

Thank you for sharing this

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