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My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation"

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 5:15 am

Hi well here it is. I hope I am doing this fic thing alright :)

I hope you like the first part, please do let me know what you like or don't like about it Any comments will be appreciated :)

Caz x x x



The big pale moon had shone down, like it always had, the stream had flowed bathed in silver, as the willow tree swayed to the rhythm of her beating heart…Everything was the same. She was wearing purple silk, her hair, lustrous golden and beautiful, she was divine with the way she danced, moving so sexily, as she grinded her body against the willow tree, entwining herself around it as she had done before. Those beautiful, deep rosy lips never spoke, she had no name, and the eyes as blue as the ocean never gave too much away, she was a woman, a friend and a lover all at once…she called out with her mind, her lips remaining full and seductive as ever: “Come to me my love.” She would reach out her hand and catch some rain that had began to fall and then she would, run through the rain, shouting and laughing…and then Willow would wake up…



Willow opened her eyes and was greeted by the sunshine that filtered through her curtains as if to impatiently wake her from her slumber. “Hmmm” she groaned in pleasure as she remembered her dream, she could smell the rain and the woman’s perfume…Vanilla it was…sweet and sensual Vanilla…yet the girl was not even there…Damn what was the mystery of these dreams? The same dream every night for the past month had haunted, tempted her…she wanted this woman to be her own…God Willow wanted her so badly…she groaned desperate to get back to sleep and dream of her again, she pulled a pillow over her head and closed her eyes scrunching up her face in a stubborn yet adorable way…yet it was useless, Willow knew that she would only come to her at night…Oh Willow thought to herself…My love if only tonight would come sooner…



what do you think? :)

Caz x x x :)



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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Bubblecath » Thu May 01, 2003 6:10 am

Hey Wiccachicka-:wave

oooh- interesting concept! i am liking this muchly! :grin

please continue!!! dreams of Tara *sigh* :drool

cool! :clap its a funky fic!!! :dance

catherine

xxx

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 6:20 am

Hi Catherine :) I am soooo glad that you like it :)

I am working on another add to this now I'll post it soon :)

Thanks for the comments :)

Caz x x x :)

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby angelofinsanity » Thu May 01, 2003 6:53 am

A most excellent start! very nice visuals and good description about dreams, you almost got the whole dream sequence realistically put out- senseless but whole lot of meaning- just like dreams (well, mine anyways)- kudos!!



""she grinded her body against the willow tree"" ok nice visual there.:wink



looking forward to the next instalment.

STacy



p.s.- hey, is this gonna be cannon or another different W/T dimension?

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby serenity » Thu May 01, 2003 8:14 am

great start! i like your ideas! it sounds intersting!

please more! wanna read much updates! :applause

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 8:33 am

Thanks all for the lovely comments here's another add :)



Willow was so fed up with her life right now…Buffy wasn’t around all that much anymore and Willow just got bored with her life being so mundane. The same old routine…getting up at 7:15 am, having a shower, going to work in “Café moderne.” Until 4pm, serving Latte’s and Mocha’s and muffins and so many sweet things that it gave Willow toothache just looking at them. Getting all sweaty with the rushing around from table to table and longing for her hour lunchbreak just so she could go and sit by the Pond in the park watching the ducks Quack Quacking merrily through their day not giving any different life a second thought…Willow had dropped out of College, she was searching for something different…something that a café that played cheesy music wasn’t going to give her…She had never thought she would have dropped out of college…Willow I love studying Rosenberg…drop out of College???…Willow never knew if she would even go back…she didn’t know what she wanted right now all she knew was that she wanted her dream woman to come and rescue her as she wiped the table with a bleached cloth, back and forth back and forth…her eyes went blury as her hand and the cloth swirled together in their relentless exercise… as Willow could see another couple working their way towards that very table ready to pollute the surface with their Mocha Spillage’s and scone crumbs…everything was Pollution…people working their asses away for a mere wage…and for what to pay bills and buy food…same old same old…God I have to get away from this place Willow thought to herself. As willow passed a table she noticed that some boys were eating and slouching on their chairs as they merrily laughed and continued to spill crumbs…”Yeah that’s right just SPILL SPILL SPILL!” Willow yelled at them as she went past thinking that she was NOT going to clear up the mess.

It was just her and Maria on shift tonight- evil boss Lynnie was off, complaining of the flu or something which means that she was probably either getting drunk is some bar or at home lazing around eating chocolates in bed and having her brains shagged out by her latest conquest…even though women of her age shouldn’t be conquering anything apart from a Stairmaster…Willow unable to stop these rather disturbing thoughts in her head, rushed past Maria and quickly took out a muffin and said “ I need a break I’ll be back in one hour ok?”



Willow sat in the park with a bottle of mineral water, contemplating about how fast her days seemed to be flying by…how fast her life was dissolving…soon she would be an old lady with a dozen cats and fuzzy blue rinse hair…she had to do something with her life… the only pleasure she seemed to have was within these dreams…not only physical, but spiritual…only within these dreams could Willow be truly at peace and happy…she wished that the woman was real…that she would manifest herself into Willow’s life somehow…but that was stupid…but oh how Willow longed to see her again…if she be only a dream…at least it was one pleasure that would let Willow escape…only a few more hours…until I will see her…but will she ever see me…will I ever know who this woman is and how happy I could possibly make her?…Only dreaming would tell…



More soon :)

Caz x x x :)



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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Washi » Thu May 01, 2003 8:45 am

Wicca, I'm loving it! Willow's thoughts are hysterical! And that dream, that niice dream. :drool

I'll be around when u update. :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby angelofinsanity » Thu May 01, 2003 9:06 am

:bigwave :D this is good stuff!



Willow dropped out of college? Willow dropped out of college? Willow dropped out of college? Oh that was delightfully unexpected! Yeah i love Willow rambling, she's cute when she rambles, but bad Willow for leaving Maria all the crumbs. ^^



hehe, i can't wait till W meet the girl of her dreams (heh, sound so soppy)

Till next time!

STacy

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Bubblecath » Thu May 01, 2003 9:11 am

Hey Caz!

great update! you use alotta :D faces dont cha! :lol

Poor Willow! i think she needs a new job! its funny how you write her thoughts! Kinda reminds me of my job!!:eyebrow

Excellent - so now willow needs to go home and sleep so we can all read about her yummy dream! pheww!

cant wait for another update! :grin

catherine :kiss

xxx

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 9:36 am

Thanks STacy :) (Mwah :) Thanks Catherine) :)

New add soon-possibly on friday :)

wiccachicka
 


Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby barnabasvamp » Thu May 01, 2003 10:35 am

Great start, and Willow serving Mocha's! Interesting that she dropped out of college, obviously seeking some direction in her life.



Look forward to more.

BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 3:37 pm

New add hope u like it



Willow was so excited about meeting her again that she could barely sleep, after her bath still when she was not relaxed enough, she paced the room anxious of what would happen in her dream…would it be the same? That divine goddess creature…her legs entwined around that strong phallic trunk…wearing that sheer silk that seemed to barely cover her skin…bathing in that rain that was not worthy to kiss her skin…what would happen…Willow was sure that she was going to explode with anticipation…she bit her lip and chewed thoughtfully on it for a moment…Willow’s breathing heavy as she stopped pacing the room she could feel her heartbeat thudding in her ears…she knew…she had a feeling inside her that tonight would be different…she just had to sleep…yet she was too excited…Willow chewed her lips again…she knew she had to relax…Willow needed some relaxing music…she walked over to her CD player and pressed the play button and was greeted by the soothing sound of Dolphins…and the sea slumber…Willow decided that a nice mug of hot chocolate would set her straight to sleep…her eyes blurred as she poured the boiling water into the cup…Willow double blinked…and breathed in the sexy chocolate fragrance as it make her nostrils quiver like a rabbits…she instantly gulped down the hot creamy liquid…it burned her throat but soothed Willow’s mind as she now knew she would sleep…or at least she would try…Willow felt relief as her head hit the pillow…the cotton pillowcase felt like heaven against her cheek…yet she was to dream of heaven in her glorious forms…yet would Willow ever know the touch or feel of heaven for herself?



Willlow was familiar with the big pale full moon by now and how it gave the woman’s skin a seductive sheen, the silk still clung to her skin loosely…tempting as if it could just be shed off…The rain would begin to fall…drip…drip…drip…dripping down from the midnight sky…making the material cling to her skin…now this time leaving nothing to the imagination…how tangible and sexy she seemed now…the beauty of her curves make all the more obvious…her breasts slightly drooping, like fallen rose buds…yet blooming and full with large succulent nipples…her navel…her toned stomach…she longed to be touched…as she continued tossing her now rain kissed locks down her back…suddenly she cried out in ecstasy…she brought her head back up and smiled and again spoke…this time she used her lips…her full delicious looking lips…her voice the most divine song as she said…in a murmur like a seductive hum…”Are you going to come with me…come to me my love….” The woman suddenly laughed as a sound of tinkly bells was heard as she suddenly appeared without her clothing…she tossed the silk shield aside in an erotic gesture…she looked so ripe…Willow could almost smell her…feel..her…taste her….Willows heart beating…God I have to touch…bleep bleep 7:15 again…time to get up…Willow’s heart raced as she ached from her core…her love had revealed her true nature to her…it had been different this was only the beginning…Willow knew that these dreams were only going to become more intense and she was going to love every second…



hehe more soon :)

Caz x x x :)





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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Bubblecath » Thu May 01, 2003 4:15 pm

Hey caz! :applause

another update- why, you are really spoiling us! and before friday too!:grin

If i was willow, i would just sleep say ALL the time, yep all the time.:drool

cool update

catherine

xxx

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby wiccachicka » Thu May 01, 2003 4:27 pm

Hi Catherine :) I am soooo glad that you like my fic so much thanks :)

More on friday hopefully heheh :)

Caz x x x Mwah x x x :)

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Eelzuhtjuh » Thu May 01, 2003 4:33 pm

Hey Caz!

These are sooooo nice, so romantic and poetic

I really love them



More soon?

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Aww, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I...stop explaining things."-Tara





Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby tara24alh » Thu May 01, 2003 5:05 pm

I think your doing a great job with this fic.:bounce I can't wait for Willow to finally meet Tara, I hope it's soon.:) ~Tara~

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby wiccachicka » Fri May 02, 2003 6:51 am

Thanks sooo much for the lovely comments they mean alot to me so *hugs you all* :)

Here's another add :)



However Willow was wrong…a week past and she didn’t see her dream woman again…it seemed like all dreams had vanished…but they can’t be…she’s my hope…my dream…mine…Willow cherished these dreams because in them this Goddess like woman was hers and only hers…Willow had waited for such a long time for something that she could truly say was hers…and with this woman of her dreams, Willow had thought that she had found her…no one could take it away from her…Willow tried to remember her sweet face, her delicious lips…her eyes that when she laughed had lit up like heaven…Willow felt like she was going crazy but she could think of nothing else. It was now Friday afternoon and Maria watched Willow out of the corner of her eye as Willow handed some change over to an old lady…”Willow are you alright?” Maria asked looking at Willow’ violently shaking hands. “Yes, Yeah…FINE!” Willow said a little too hyperactively with a little giggle as her eyes Darted worriedly back and forth…”Tables TABLES” Willow said enthusiastically as she rushed over and began to clean up the tables, she scrubbed hard at a stubborn stain and even when it had gone Willow still seemed fixated on cleaning…anything so I don’t think of her…her eyes…her..lips…her brea…too late! Damn! Willow scrubbed harder an exasperated look on her pretty face…it was metaphorical in a hope for removing this vision from her mind…but alas she would not leave Willow, she would never…yet she already had…”Willow why don’t you take this afternoon off eh? You look worn out poor thing…I can finish up here?” Maria offered with a kind smile.

“Thanks” Willow gave a small worried tight smile as she quickly took her apron off and headed for the door. Willow rushed out the door, relief washed over her as she felt the cool blessing wind upon her face, like a dozen cooling kisses…Willow decided that she would do to the park again. Willow found a bench and sat down…looking around her she searched for the calmness in nature that usually calmed her down…She glanced around at the trees with their cherry blossoms, and their summery branches reaching out to embrace willow in a hug of reassurance. Yet Willow felt nothing…she didn’t want reassurance all she wanted was HER…

Willow gazed into the lake, its ripples gently easing Willow into a trance…the birds continued to sing…then as Willow slowly looked up she saw the tree in her dream, the scene just as it was…the woman was entwined around the tree, slowly moving against it, pressing her silken body against the roughness of the bark….then the vision was gone again…it had been so intense…yet…Willow realised that she had been crying as a few tears trickled into her hand…thunder began to roll and willow started to sob and as if on cue the rain began to slowly pelt from the sky, soaking into the Willows branches…turning everything more green and lustrous and fresh…Willow didn’t feel the rain, she didn’t care…she wanted something that was unattainable…someone who she could never have…a sick envy had taken hold of her…she needed someone to hold…but not anyone. God how I want her…Willow said as she sobbed louder, her tears flowing freely and wildly down her flushed cheeks…

Willow could feel someone watching her…she looked up and opened her eyes…IT CANT BE…yet…Willow double blinked again…yes!!! She stood there like a vision…even at that moment a tiny peace of sunshine seemed to bathe her skin…she was an Angel…she was glorious…and oh how the sea had blessed those adorable eyes with their startling heavenly blueness! Willow smiled in awe as she looked at the girls lips and marvelled at how soft they looked…so rosy…so delicious…her beautiful creamy skin…her hair…long and golden…slightly wet from the falling rain…oh how lucky those raindrops were to rest upon those divine locks of sunshine! Willow realised that every beautiful emotion she felt was overtaking her entire being…how divine this woman was…and she existed…if not more beautiful than Willow’s dream. Willow tried not to gasp as her heartbeat raced and gave a smile of wonderment as the woman smiled and offered her a basket containing apples…”Want one?” The woman asked Willow. Oh how divine her voice was, like silky syrup flowing from her precious mouth…Willow just nodded as the woman sat down next to her. What an adorable smile she had! Willow gingerly took an apple from the basket and looked at it, red and tempting and delicious…like her lips…Willow turned the apple over and over in her hands thinking that it would vanish at any moment and that she had fallen asleep and this was another dream. “Bite it!” The woman offered a gentle command…Willow smiled and took a bite from the apple, its juices luxuriating in her mouth…as she crunched…Willow’s heart beat faster…she wanted to taste other forbidden fruit…The woman gave s shy smile as she took something out of her bag…an umbrella…it was now shielding hers and Willow’s head…Willow felt a wash with love as she looked into the woman’s eyes…God Willow thought I’m in love with you…The woman gave a shy smile and looked away for a moment…her cheeks turning an adorable shade of pink…how Willow longed to touch her face and caress her skin…The woman looked up again…”Nice apples.” Willow said with a little grin, quickly eyeing the woman over…Willow blushed at her mistake “Uh…” Willow fiddled with a strand of her hair nervously… The woman laughed and winked at Willow’s double entendre. “Yes aren’t they?” She replied with a half smile…God you drive me crazy…Willow and the woman sat in a comfortable silence…each girl looking over at the other every so often trying not to be obvious...but they got caught out…this time they both looked at each other, Willow smiled and she smiled back.…their visions blurred as the Woman moved a little closer to Willow…”I’m Tara…” She purred…



hehe :) More soon :)

Hope u liked :)

Caz x x x :)

wiccachicka
 


Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Eelzuhtjuh » Fri May 02, 2003 7:57 am

ooooooooooooooooh

it's lovely!!!!

Well done Caz whoohoo!!!

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Aww, baby, want me to rub your tummy? She likes it when I...stop explaining things."-Tara





Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Bubblecath » Fri May 02, 2003 8:05 am

Hey Caz:wave !!

Fabulous update!! Me like- :grin

finally willow gets to meet tara- that can only mean one thing....smoochies right?? :pray

waiting patiently for your next update- and thinking about apples oddily enough! :eyebrow

yay :applause :applause

catherine :kiss

xxx

Edited by: Bubblecath at: 5/2/03 8:40:10 am
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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby angelofinsanity » Fri May 02, 2003 9:37 am

oo- awsome! it took me 2 hours to finish reading your fic but hell it was worth it (not only because i was absorbing every word as toroughly as possible, but also my computer decided to hate me particularly more tonite...why tonite why???)

ah you hopeless romantic you. finally willow meets the girl of her dreams - with apples too ^^



ok- i'm gonna go post this now just incase my comp decides to crash on me-

looking forward to next time!

STacy



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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby wiccachicka » Fri May 02, 2003 10:08 am

Thanks for all the comments :)

Am going home this weekend so more probably next week :)

Mwah :)

Caz x x x :)

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby tara24alh » Fri May 02, 2003 7:12 pm

YEAH BABY!!!!:bigkiss Excellent, you left me:drool ~Tara~

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Romance

Postby Incitatua 8 » Sat May 03, 2003 1:57 pm

:rofl Please keep writing this...I'm tired of angst...let's hear it for ROMANCE! :heart

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Re: Romance

Postby Guinevere » Sun May 04, 2003 2:05 am

Oh wow! Those dreams are so decriptive and vivid! If I had dreams like that I would sleep all the time too!

This is so nice to read, I really am enjoying it. You have a great talent here! I'll be waiting paitiently for more.



Gwen







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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby angelofinsanity » Sun May 04, 2003 6:31 am

......etc etc- you get the idea.



STacy

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&qu

Postby wiccachicka » Mon May 05, 2003 2:27 pm

Aww hiya to my new readers :)

Thanks for all the comments :)

Don't worry Stacy here's a new add Mwah :)



Tara what a beautiful name, so feminine so…”You’re beautiful!” Willow found herself saying. Tara’s eyes went bright and big at Willow’s flattery.

Tara gave a cute half smile as she saw Willow redden as Willow realised what she just said. Willow smiled and looked down, grabbing another apple from the basket and taking a huge anxious bite out of it, God why can’t I just shut up Willow thought to herself. Willow still felt Tara’s eyes on her as Willow swallowed the piece of apple and gulped. Willow’s eyes met the blue ocean of hers and Willow said “But its true.” Willow realised that she couldn’t and wouldn’t hold her feelings back and in response to Tara’s shy yet Vixen like smile she moved a little closer to Tara. Willow looked into Tara’s eyes and realised at this moment just how blue and mysterious they were. Tara gazed back, their eyes intermingling in a whirlpool of sensuality…”Your eyes are like emeralds…so..Di…divine…” Tara said breathlessly, as Willow chewed anxiously on her lower lip…Suddenly Tara found her hands in Willow’s hair…how soft it was…Tara bet that her lips would be too. Willow gave a contented sigh as Tara began to kiss her neck…her lips like raw fire…Oh God…Willow sighed again as Tara’s lips met hers. Willow linked hands with Tara and squeezed her fingers gently as Tara’s lips worked their heavenly magic…Willow caught up with the pace…gently easing Tara’s lips apart, to greet Tara’s willing and spellbinding tongue in a kiss of desire, so lustful and enchanting was the wondrous sensations on Willow’s lips she thought that she had died and gone to heaven. But I have! Willow thought as she heard Tara’s sweet moan, as her tongue continued to tease her…Willow could feel her world beginning to swirl, desire, love, lust, heavenly bliss…all the delightful emotions that she could feel she was experiencing right now…after moments of sheer ecstasy Tara broke the kiss, Willow quickly moved forward and gave Tara another little kiss to savour her lips one last time before they gained their breath again…Both Willow and Tara sat, linked hands looking at each other’s flushed face and bright with desire, yet shy eyes. This was all so new…”I’m Willow” Willow smiled cupping Tara’s cheek in her hand. Tara blushing looked down and put her hand out catching some raindrops in her hand…”Willow- a pretty name for an adorable girl like you.” Tara said with that cheeky glint in her eyes. Tara suddenly brought her hands up to Willow’s mouth, tracing her lips bathing them in the rain and another little kiss. Willow smiled feeling her stomach doing backflips, she was so crazy for Tara, intrigued yet nervous…”Come with me my love.” Tara said once again linking her hands with Willow’s as they both gazed at each other, their emotions flowing as freely as the rain…



hope you liked :)

Caz x x x x x x :)





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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby tara24alh » Mon May 05, 2003 6:45 pm

Your writing is so beautiful that I find myself glued to the screen until the very last word.:bow :bow :bow I really hope this turns into a long fic.:dance ~Tara~

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Washi » Tue May 06, 2003 11:04 am

Read it! Loved it! More! Give me more! :grin

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa

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Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby Bubblecath » Tue May 06, 2003 11:15 am

Hey Caz! you are back!! :wave



wow- that was a sweet update! :heart you write so well! :bow

yay- and willow finally meets tara!! wonder whats gonna happen next! ;)

cant wait for your next update!:kiss

yay!! :applause

catherine!

xxx

Bubblecath
 


Re: My first fic please read "Dreaming of Temptation&am

Postby angelofinsanity » Tue May 06, 2003 1:59 pm

ok...i'm speechless- honest! i'll just post up some syncronised thud* smilely-faces on.



:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud



you're just too romantic

STacy

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