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First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait"

Postby ApplesauceHorsies » Sun Apr 11, 2004 10:54 pm

Hiya Kittens! At the urge of *somebody* I decided to post this. Be gentle, as is my first attempt at fic-writing. Not sure if this will be AU or not, since it's just a couple of paragraphs. Warning for the non-patient Kittens--College is a tad demanding, so updates will most likely be sporadic at best. However, keep the title in mind, and all will be fine. :)

-AH



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        From the moment Tara heard the lock on her door click snugly into place, she knew that

this night was going to be the night that haunted every hour of her life for nearly six

months. All thoughts of the perfect atmosphere and mood immediately flew from her

consciousness and were replaced with the overwhelming desire for the empyreal goddess

who was currently pressing her firmly up against the door, deftly using her hands and lips

to claim Tara as her compliant captive. Kiss after feverish kiss was placed upon her lips,

the continuity broken only for a few moments by a growl of pleasure and the words:

“Mmm, sandalwood.” Willow let out a lascivious moan and Tara could only utter a small sigh by

way of response as she kissed her way down into the hollow at the base of her neck.

        Tara felt her head tilt back and her eyelids droop, plunging her into blissful darkness

as she completely surrendered herself to Willow's caresses. It only took Tara a few seconds to

become dizzy from Willow's exploring every inch of her neck and shoulders. Her copper hair brushed

against her neck as she leant in to kiss her flushed flesh, the sensation of it causing Tara to

shiver. She instinctively reached her left hand around to the back of her head and buried it in

her soft, fiery locks. Tara inhaled and felt her nostrils tingle with Willow's scent. She let herself drink in the smell of her as she continued kissing her

neck.

        “Mmm, hon--oh, God--there’s a, ohhhh my god--” Tara let out a shuddering cry as Willow's

lips travelled southward to begin sucking at her pulse point. Bursts of light began

exploding in the back of her eyelids, and she felt a fire course through her entire body. Tara

heard her breath come from her mouth in erratic gasps and she winced as she felt her back slam

into the metal doorknob. “Doorknob.” she managed to say in between moans, trying to shift

away from the door to no avail.

        “Bed--now.” Willow commanded, moving away and blindly leading her captive backwards. Tara

felt her calves crash into the bedframe with such force that she was immediately thankful for

the comforter that cushioned the impact. Her back hit the bed and she bounced slightly

upwards before Willow pressed her body against hers and pinned her down. She began to

work her hands up underneath Tara's shirt as she kissed her neck, causing Tara's head to push

deeper into the pillow behind her. Willow's warm fingers traced the outline of her bra, and she

immediately stiffened underneath her touch. “I think somebody likes their present,” Willow

purred, referring to the cherry-red lace lingerie set she’d bought Tara earlier that day.

        “Mmmmm, god, yes.....”

        “You know, for a pagan, you sure do call on God a lot..” she observed as she let a

hot breath caress her earlobe.

        “Because he brought me you, and that’s most definitely a good thing...” Tara

murmured, growing more impatient with each passing second.

        “He brought me you...I’m so thankful for that...”

        Tara let a low moan escape her lips as Willow began tracing a white-hot line down the

length of her left thigh, stopping mid-point to trace torturously slow circles directly above

her knee with her finger. The effect was almost too much to endure. “Are you sure you

haven’t...oh, God...this is the first time you’ve...fu---oh, Goodddd....”

        “Someone’s impatient.” Willow smirked, letting a soft kiss linger on her lover's lips.

        At that point, Tara's motor skills had all but flown out the window; all she could

manage was a small sigh.

        “I want you to do something for me, okay?”

        “Anything.”

        “I want to see that present of mine where it belongs.” she purred. Her voice gained

a seductive edge when she added: “..tossed on the floor.”

_____



Et je saigne encore, tout ce rouge sur mon corps, je te blesse dans un dernier effort

ApplesauceHorsies
 


Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&quo

Postby TemperedCynic » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:01 pm

OMG!! That was one heck of a beginning, I'll tell ya. So happy you posted this chapter, but I'm sure other Kittens will agree that MORE is a necessity for this fic. Please continue and welcome to the Pens!!!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&quo

Postby WillowPowered » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:02 pm

ooooooooh excellent start.



Jill

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There is a little bit of Amber in all of us.

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Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:04 pm

..........nice start. Very nice start. Veryveryexcellentlywonderfullynice start. I hope college isn't too demanding, though we all know how bad it can be. Good job.

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

Tempest Duer
 


Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&

Postby KirkBaldridge » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:14 pm

Wow.



That was your first attempt at fan fic?



Man, I wish my first one had gone that well.



Nicely done. :)

Kirk B



Life is much too serious to be taken seriously.



Willow is a tree that weeps, but Tara is firmer and will hold.

KirkBaldridge
 


Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&

Postby bulldog tidnab » Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:19 pm

this is a fantabulous start. #1 it's, well, HOT. #2 it's so very true to the way life tends to be:

Quote:
“Doorknob.” she managed to say in between moans


i love it when i get to see that in fic.

i'm in awe. wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.



*woof*

"Think sexy! Think kinky, not weird. Weird implies there's medication in her past... or present. Kinky means she's got a grip on her fetishes." - Kim Ficera

bulldog tidnab
 


Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Apr 12, 2004 7:02 am

HOLY CRAP!!



Um yeah, I think this is off to a good hot start.



To quote that song from the 80's, "How do you like it? How do you like it? More, more, more!"



Wimpy

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Re: First fic..."Good Things Come to Those Who Wait&

Postby xeembiote » Mon Apr 12, 2004 11:33 am

you posted! you posted! *jump up and down* post more!

xeembiote
 


Wow!!!

Postby WillowFever » Mon Apr 12, 2004 1:21 pm

Hey you....



wow....:applause ....and I should add an...Oh! MY! God!...This is fantastic....my blood is pumping...:banana





Quit school....keep posting.....:no Just kidding...



I love it...glad you posted....keep it coming....



:peace

WillowFever



:pride

WillowFever
 


*blush*

Postby ApplesauceHorsies » Mon Apr 12, 2004 1:35 pm

Oh, goodness! I am seriously about to shed a tear, you guys. Y'all are wonderful. This was just a hack piece that I decided to put on paper one rainy night because I was bored (amongst other..em, more forceful emotions. ;) )



I haven't posted anything to *anywhere* before, and to have this feedback is just feeding my fragile little heart; it's shown me that you Kittens are the best board around. :) Then again, you knew that. Thanks for replying, and I'll try to have a decent sit-down session if I can find time in between studying for finals. Ugh. :) Glad y'all like it so much!



-AH

Et je saigne encore, tout ce rouge sur mon corps, je te blesse dans un dernier effort

ApplesauceHorsies
 


Re: *blush*

Postby Willster » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:24 pm

You did the best thing posting this, this is an awesome beginning and it sure make us all really impatient for an update.



Really sexy what you wrote...!



By the way, nice signature you got there! ;)

Willster
 


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