Hi all, I'm in the process of writing my first fanfic... I've posted here my first part. Let me know what you guys think.



Title : Don't Give Up

Author : Muse

Email: troi14@hotmail.com

Feedback: Yeah sure why not!

Disclaimer : None of the characters are mine. Joss’s and Mutant Enemy.

Pairing : w/t of course… x/a and b/f eventually

Rating : Not sure at this point

Spoilers : AU fic… not set in any real season

Summary: Willow, and the gang are teens. Willow meets someone special over the net. Read and find out what happens. Totally AU so no baddies or vampires in this.

Note: Thanks to my great beta Aine aka Stace!



Part 1



In Sunnydale, California a redheaded teen, Will, as her friends call her, came bounding into her house. “Mom!! I’m home!” She yelled. Peaking her head out of the fridge in the kitchen she wondered where her mom was. She normally came home and went straight to the kitchen for her afternoon snack. Then she usually proceeded into the library to tell her mom about her day. She finished getting her snack and yelled out once again, “Mom?? I’m home…You here?” Hearing no answer she looked around the kitchen for the regular note explaining the non-existent mom. Spying it on the breakfast island in the middle of the room, she sat down with her food and read the note.



My little munchkin,

Sorry I’m not here. Got called away on business again for the company. I put money in your account at the bank if you need any cash and if the house runs out of food…just go shopping and buy what you want. I’ll be home in about a week if everything goes as planned. Don’t get into trouble and do your homework! No boys over too!

Love you,

-Mom



Will rolled her eyes at her moms note. Her mom was always thinking she liked guys because her best friend was Alex. It wasn’t her fault they were always having fun and that the principal didn’t like that. What were 13 years old supposed to do, sit still and be quiet? Yeah right!



Will and Alex were always skate boarding and having fun at the park or at school. They believed in having fun and living life, why wait, life is short! Especially in this day and age, kids dying from all kinds of things.



Will sighed and finished her snack heading to the library as usual. ‘Well least today I can surf the net without mom looking over my shoulder every five seconds thankfully.’

She jumped on the computer booting it up and getting on the net. She checked her email first seeing a few emails from internet pen pals. Those made her smile and she checks the rest of her email.



After a while she gets bored of small talk over IM’s and surfing the internet. So, she decided to go into a chat room to see what was going on. Logging into the teen lesbian room, she sees a few people she knows and some new visitors.



RedFairie enters the room.

MemoryLost: Hey hey all… look who just came in to say hello! Our favorite little baby

butch! Hey Little Fairie girl! How’s it going?

LonelySexyBabe: Hey there cutie! Long time no chat!!!!!

BlackCrystalHeart: Hey Fairie

RedFairie: lol Hey all! I’m great ML and I missed you all too! What’s been going

without me here??

LonelySexyBabe: We’ve been missing such a cutie like you of course!

MemoryLost: Just been here hanging and hooking up.

BlackCrystalHeart: Yeah we’ve all got sweeties now! :) Except for the newbie’s in the

room. Maybe you can catch one of them? *Elbows in side playfully*

RedFairie: What? Oh man…You telling me you all went and got P-Whipped? What

happened to staying single my main girls? LOL

MemoryLost: Hey hey we didn’t mean. We all just kinda…fell in love girlie. *shrugs*

But hey! We’re still here! We can hook you up with one of the new cuties in here!

LonelySexyBabe: Yeah yeah! There’s this new one just came in a while ago but had to

leave. Shy, but sounds beautiful in her own way girl. Think you should chat her up!

RedFairie: Oh come on guys…lol I don’t need another relationship! You guys know how

the last one ended.

MemoryLost: Awww :( don’t give up on us Fairie… Just at least talk with her!

RedFairie: Oh alright… I guess so… But only to talk.

MemoryLost: Yes!

LonelySexyBabe: *whistles* And she’s back in the game.

RedFairie: Lol Alright alright you all. I have to go but I’ll be back on tomorrow night. If

any of you see this mysterious girl back in here, tell her to come back tomorrow to talk

to me.

MemoryLost: Alright girlie :) Will do if we see her. TTYL and glad to see you’re alive.

LonelySexyBabe: Bye Fairie! Come back soon!

BlackCrystalHeart: Take Care Red.

RedFairie: Thanks all!! Laters.

RedFairie has left the room.



Will smiled at the screen at her friends antics. They were a rowdy bunch, but she loved them none less. She sighed and ran her hand through her short butchy slash fairie hairstyle. She loved the style though her mom always frowned upon it like she did about her sexuality. She knew from the first day in kindergarten that she was gay. She had a crush on another student in the class, Liz. Though that never turned out, Liz was one of Will’s closest friends, beside Alex. They grew up a close nit group of friends and always did everything together. Just 3 years ago another student had joined the group as Alex’s girlfriend, Anya but who everyone called Any. For any which way she wants to swing. Will had come up with it.



Just then the doorbell rang. Will looked up at the clock and smiled. “Late as usual” She said to herself.



She went to the door, opening it, and got pushed out of the way.



“Get out of the way! My bladder is about to explode! What took you so long to answer the door!?”

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That's what I have so far people...what u think???



-Muse

I like it! More please!?! i think its cool idea and a great start! Please post more soon!!!!

I hate everything about you,why do i love you,You hate everything about me, why do you love me~3 Days Grace

that was great.



good job. and keep going





brittney

Ooh..I like this so far..it sounds really interesting, I can't wait for more. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

Okay, you've got me curious and interested about what's gonna happen next.



Can't wait for more



~Holly~

Baby, baby, baby when all you're love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty

oooooooooo me like! Me like alot!

Me want more......uh huh! more pwease...and soon!

Keep goin love! i'll be lurkin about for the nxt update!

*sits quietly in corner....waiting* hehehe

Take care



Lil boo xxxx

hey there!

great start on this fic!!!

i really like your idea for this. and i can't wait to read more



inky

^^these emoticons are sooo cute!!^^^



update soonish?



-monkeyluv--

Edited by: hot monkey luv 66 at: 3/25/04 3:30 pm

Great start!



Looking forward to see how this develops!

Every time you walk away, I pretend that I'm okay

Hello all and thank you for reading my story! I'm greatful for all the great responses and such.



And here's the reply to the feedback:)



Doppleganger – Hey! Thankies! Hehe..Glad you liked it. And posting right after this:D Yay!

Amazonaa – Hehe..thanks! Me flattered:D

Sam Darls- Thanks hope you like more of the story too!

Taras Shadow – Curious is always good. Hehehe…especially

with exploring new things. Opps! Hehehe…Didn’t mean it to

sound like that… well maybe just a teenie little bit:D

Lil boo- *holds out hand* you can come out now.. more is

here! Yay!

Lost Without You – Oh great name for Kitten Board.:) Makes

me think up all kinds of things I’m missing right now. Hehehe Thanks for reading.

Monkeyluv – I absolutely adore those emoticons, they make

me happy with giddy joy inside hehe. Like I’m 5 years old

again:) Which is a while ago for me.



Ok...and here's what you've all been waiting for...



Disclaimers in the first part.



Part 2



After the movie as the credits start rolling…



Will sits back relaxing. “I love that movie, no matter how many times we’ve seen it.”



Alex nods his head in agreement. “Yeah me too, I just wish we could go on adventures like them.”



“Well you know what I think? They’re a bunch of fools to be wanting to do that. Who would want to go get into a situation they know would be dangerous. I still don’t know why you guys call yourselves the Scooby-gang, you guys aren’t anything like them!” Any let her opinion be known as usual.



“We are SO like them!” Liz defends.



“How so then? I don’t see it.” Any says annoyingly.



“Well, I’m Velma of course!” Will said. “Jinkies!” The whole room laughs at Will.



“I’m Daphne!” Liz says hurriedly not to get stuck with a bad character.



“And I’m Shaggy! Can’t you tell?” He says posing jokingly eating the last piece of pizza from the box that sat on the floor.



“Yeah cause your always scarfing down food!” Liz says joking.



“Who would I be??” Any asking wondering.



“Well sweetie, you could be either Fred or Scooby.” Alex says smiling.



“Awww… I don’t want to be a guy or a dog.” Any says pouting.



Will shrugs and says, “Fine you can be Shaggy’s girlfriend.”



“Yay! And we can have lots of sex, but you have to cut back on eating so much Alex.” Any says bluntly.

The whole roomed laughs as Alex turns a ripe shade of red.



“Hey who’s Fred then?” Will asks breaking up the embarrassing situation for Alex.



“Well, we’ll just have to find one. Or we could get Mr. Gordo to stand in.” Liz jokes around.



“Then it’s solved then, Mr. Gordo will be our new Fred. Let him know we welcome him to the gang will you Liz?” Will says joking around. She gets up and goes to the TV. “What’s up next?”



“Oh oh! I want to watch the deleted scenes and bloopers first!” Says Alex excitedly.

~~~~~

Later that night… Everybody is asleep except for Liz and Will…



“Man I loved that blooper of Velma acting like she was drunk and singing. I laughed my ass off!” Will says laughing remembering the funny antics of the movie.



“Yeah just like you when you had to much to drink!” Liz teases.



“Hey that was just that once.” Will defends herself.



“Yeah on one glass of champagne. I think your parents said something about no more alcohol for you.” Liz says laughing hard at the memory.



“Yeah yeah yeah… and I remember your last time drinking too. Who was that guy you ran off with…what was his name? Pete...Petie…”Teases Will.



“What are we doing tomorrow Will?” Liz asks trying to draw the attention away from her.



“I was thinking a day downtown and shopping?”



“Sweet! Sounds like a plan. Why don’t we go to bed so we’re not too tired to have fun?”



“K. But I get the side by the wall this time! You’re not going to push me off the bed again this time. I was soar for a week last time!” Will whines.



“Alright alright. Let’s go miss winy pants.” Liz says pushing Will up the stairs.

*****



Well there it is folks. Leave feedback and let me know what you think:D

-Muse



PS- Rating is G for now... will go up on later parts:D

Edited by: RoseWitch at: 3/25/04 10:10 pm

Cute little group of friends



I'm sensing Tara will be entering the picture soon?



Loving the fic Muse, keep up the great work!



~Holly~

Baby, baby, baby when all you're love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty

well done love! bravo! keep those updates acommin!



love your fabulous beta, lol

stace

ooo me want more!!!!!!!!

keep it commin!!! please *puppy dog eyes*





-Kelsey

Thank you all for reading..and hope you like the update for today. I unfortunately got a small writers block..so part 3 will be in 3 segments. I hope to have part 3b in up a day or two. And for the feedback...



Holly- Yes they are a cute group of friends. They remind me of my old friends And as for Tara… Hehehe…read on..think you’ll like her. Thanks.



Bindingwiccan- And more to come… here it is





Part 3a



Disclaimer in first part...

Note: 'thoughts in quotes'



“So Blondie, what are we up to tonight?” Fai says over the loud music as they cruised the busy San Fransico streets in Bree’s car.



“I was actually thinking of staying home tonight. You know with it being a school night and all?” Bree sarcastically says to Fai.



“Oh come on girlie, I heard a new club was rolling with the music tonight!” Fai spills while waving her hand in the air currents.



“Nope sorry, but if you want to come over to hang out if that’s ok.” Bree suggests.



“Fine, I’ll sacrifice my social life for my bestest bud.”



“Thanks.I feel sooo loved.” Tara gushes mokingly.



Later that night…



Ding Dong…

Ding Dong…



Bree stood on the other side giggling and waiting to see how long Fai would stand there.



“Tara Bree Maclay open this door right now!” Fai yelled through the door.



As she watched for the next couple of minutes while Fai stood there steaming. Just as she turned and started to go down the steps Bree opened the door and shouted at Fai, “Hey you don’t have to leave just yet. That was a new record yet!”



Fai looked back startled just for an instant before realizing the joke that had just been played on her. “You little…” She starts running and chasing Bree all over the house shouting after her, “You little munchkin! I’m so going to get you!” The girls continue running all over the house nocking over things.



“That’s enough for now ladies. That’s no behavor for inside my house.” Said a stern voice from somewhere in the house.



‘Oh shit! My dad heard us, I’m in for it now.’ Bree moaned in her thoughts. “Come on Fai, lets go to my room. If you want something to drink or eat, you know where it is.”



“Yeah, let me grab something quick. I’ll be up in a sec.” Fai says to Bree as she goes to the kitchen.



Fai watched Bree go up the stairs from the doorway. Once Bree was out of sight, she made her way to where she heard Bree’s father.



Entering the office she stops by his desk where he was doing paperwork. She coughs and says, “Mr. Tara’s dad…”



“Mr. Maclay.”He says sternly.



“Sorry, Mr. Maclay. I just wanted to say sorry about earlier. We got carried away, we were just being teenagers. Please don’t hurt Bree please, it was my fault she was...” Fai slips up.



Mr. Maclay looks up sharply. “Are you accusing me of hurting my daughter Ms…”



“The names Faith. And yeah, what you do to your daughter isn’t right.”



“How dare you talk about my parenting skills. You don’t know what you are talking about young lady,” angrily, Mr. Maclay stands up.



"Yeah whatever. Be warned, if I ever hear about you hurting Bree again, I’ll personally see to it that you will never witness the light of day ever again." Fai then turns around and storms up the stairs to Bree’s room.

*****



Alrighty...there's the small update...hope more to come

Tell me what you think. Love you kittens!!!

-Muse

Cute!

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns