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You Belong With Me

Postby redheadedgoddess » Mon Aug 18, 2003 8:38 pm

You Belong With Me

Rating:Pg for now

Disclaimer: Characters belong to Joss Whedon.....but it would be cool if they were mine. :)

Note: Enjoy.....







Part 1:









It was a dark and rainy morning. The three story Beverly Hills home was quiet. On the second floor at the end of the hall was a master bedroom where a woman was sleeping. All that could be heard was the beeping of an alarm clock that was not being turned off anytime soon. The woman lay completely covered by the sheet with her head under the pillow. After putting that pillow over her head she had blocked out the sound of the alarm clock. It was obvious she was not ready to get up. All of a sudden she felt something shift the bed. She was half awake and groaned. Then, out of nowhere the bed started shaking. She peeked her head out from underneath the pillow and saw what was making the movement.

"Madison Rosenberg" The woman said in a stern voice. "What have I told you about jumping on the bed?"

The little girl stopped and looked at her mommy. "Um...don't do it?" She said as if she were trying to guess the right answer.

"That's right. So, care to tell me why you're doing it?" The woman asked trying her best not to laugh at the way her daughter responded.

"I was just trying to wake you up. You see, your alarm clock is going off and you're still sleeping. I was only trying to help so you won't be late for work." She said as she batted her little green eyes.

Her mother held her arms out inviting her to sit in her lap. She sat down and looked up to give her mom her attention.

"Well, thank you for waking me up. Next time you could tap my shoulder ok? No more jumping on beds, that's what your trampoline is for." She said in a calm caring voice.

"Okay mommy." She put her index finger on her chin as if she were thinking. "I think I'll go put some clothes on. Then I'll have breakfast."

Her mom smiled at her daughter. "Ok then, I'll meet you in the kitchen."

The girl kissed her mom on the cheek and headed for her room. Once she had put her clothes on and brushed her teeth and hair she made her way to the kitchen. Her mother already had her a bowl of cereal on the table and was sitting, sipping a cup of coffee. She sat beside her mother.

"Mmmmm...Berry Captain Crunch, my favorite!" She said with delight. She started eating.

The phone rang and her mother answered..."Hello"

"Willow, it's Joe."

"Oh, hey, what's up?" She asked knowing Joe wanted something.

"Tiffany can't make the interview so I was hoping you'd be able to do it."

"Ugh...me? Joe I...."

"Please Willow, I really need you to do this."

"Can't you get someone else?" She asked.

"No, they wanted someone that starred in the movie and Greg is too new to do this yet. You're the only one that can."

"Okay fine, I'll do it. When is it?" She asked not sure when she would even find the time.

"It's Wendsday at noon, they're coming here. Thanks Willow."

"Yeah" She said biting her tongue.

"Okay, bye Willow."

"Bye." She hung up the phone.

"Well sweetie, it's time, you ready?" She asked, trying to smile through her frusturation.

"Yes mommy, let me get my bookbag." The red curls bounced as she ran to get her bag.

The White Mercedes pulled into the front of school. Willow gave her daughter a kiss on the forehead. "Have a good day, mommy will be here at 2:30 okay?"

"You don't have to work today?" The girl asked.

"Nope, mommy has to do some interviews so I can find you a new nanny." She smiled.

"Oh, ok...that way you can go to work and won't be so stressed out. Aunt Buffy told me how stressed out you were and that I should be a good girl so you don't have a mental breakdown."

Willow looked at Madison. "She did, did she?"

"Yes, she also said that you can be a real prude when you're stressed. Mommy, what's a prude? Cause you don't seem like one."

Willow could feel a long talk with Buffy coming on. "Well honey, you're right, I'm not a prude. I'll tell you what it means someday, but not today. You go on in now, I'll see you later."

"Okay mommy, I love you."

Willow smiled. "I love you too baby girl." She gave her child another hug before she went in. She headed back home to prepare for the interviews. She had a total of seven for the day. Those were the ones with the best references and backgrounds, she was prepared. The first five interviews went okay but none of them seemed to be what she wanted. So she kept her hopes high knowing that one of them had to be good enough. She was down to only having one more left. Her hope was gone and she was begining to feel that it was useless. She sat on the couch to get comfortable while she waited. She began going over some questions she knew would be asked in the interview she had on Wendsday. She pretty much already knew what they we're going to ask. They almost always asked the same type of questions. She was brought out of her thoughts by a knock at the door. She got up and walked towards the door knowing she wouldn't like this person either. She figured the reason she didn't like anyone was because she didn't think anyone was good enough for her baby. She opened the door and what she saw blew her breath away. She fought to speak, but she managed to.

"Miss Maclay?" She asked trying not to let her awe show.

The woman smiled a half smile. "Yes, you're Ms. Rosenberg?"

"Yes, nice to meet you." She said as she shook the woman's hand. She could not tear her green eyes away from the heavenly blue ones in front of her. She then realized she still had the young woman's hand in her own. "Oh, I'm sorry." She said as she let go. "Please, come in."

The blonde woman came inside where she followed the redhead. They sat at the table in the dining room.

"Well, Miss Maclay. I've already checked your references and they all look really good. In my line of work hours can vary. Is your schedule flexible?" She asked trying to stay profesional and not drool.

"Yes, my schedule is flexible, I do have a son but he stays with his grandmother when I have to work. Please, call me Tara." She said with a smile.

"Okay, good. I'm in the movie buisness and sometimes I might not work at all and others I might work 24 hours straight." Willow said hoping that wouldn't be a problem.

"I would like to ask if it would be ok that my son came on the nights I would have to stay over?" Tara asked.

"I don't see why that would be a problem. How old's your son?" The redhead asked taking a swollow of her ice tea.

"Oh, he's six. He's a really sweet kid. I don't think he would cause any trouble." She said not wanting to mess up this interview.

"That's ok, Madison can cause enough trouble for the both of them." Willow imediately regretted her words. "Oh...I was only teasing! Madison's great! Until recently she stayed with her Aunt Buffy....ok Buffy's not watching her anymore but that's because she got this great job and it has nothing to do with Madison cause she loves her and they still play together all the time and Buffy tells her things about me...well, I don't know if she tells her but Madison knows and....um...I'm shutting up now." The redhead said blushing from ear to ear.

"Do you think you could come for another interview so you can meet Madison and hang out with her to see how you guys get along?" Willow asked.

"That would be great! When would you like to do that?" The blonde asked trying not to giggle at Willow's babble.

"How about Thursday, it's pretty much the only day I can with my work schedule."

"Okay, Thursday it is." She said as she got up.

Willow saw Tara to the door. "Tara?" She waited for the blonde to turn around. "It's Willow, call me Willow. I don't like the Ms. Rosenberg, I rather be called Willow."

The blonde smiled. "Great, I'll do that then. Bye Willow." She said.

Willow smiled liking the way her name sounded coming from Tara. "Bye Tara." With that she went back into the house to grab her keys and go pick up Madison from school.

Willow pulled in front of the school where Madison was waiting. She saw her mommy and ran to the car. After getting in she looked at her Tigger watch and then at her mom. You're two minutes late mommy."

"I am? I'm sorry sweetie, my interview ran a little later than I expected. Forgive me?"

Madison gave her a hug. "Yes, I forgive you. Oh..I have this paper to give you." She said pulling a piece of paper out of her bookbag. She handed it to her mother.

"Hmmm...this says parent/teacher night is next Tuesday. Your teachers only have good things to say right?" Willow asked.

"Mommy, there would only be good things to say. I'm a very good student." The little redhead said holding her head high.

Willow laughed. "You sure are baby, a very..very good student. How about we go out for dinner tonight? Just you and me."

Madison's eyes widened with joy. "Oooh...can we? That would be cool! Can we go to Kids World? I love playing the games!" She was excited to say the least.

"Yes we can. It will be cool." Willow said driving away from the school.



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~Red~

redheadedgoddess
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby xita » Tue Aug 19, 2003 2:42 am

Hey thanks for posting. I love AUs and here they both have kids to begin with that's an interesting twist. I am wondering how old madison is, maybe I just missed it. Great start! If I have any advice it would be to double space between paragraphs and lines of dialogue, it makes it easier to read! Thanks!

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"The suspense is terrible. I hope it'll last."


-Willie Wonka

xita
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby sam darls » Tue Aug 19, 2003 4:49 am

Hey...aww, this is such a lovely start, I can't wait to read more..love sams xxx

sam darls
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Aug 19, 2003 6:12 am

very cute! Both having kids. sweet. :)

can't wait for more!

snuggle79 :wave

I don't get wild. Wild on me equals spaz.

snuggle79
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Aug 19, 2003 6:59 am





Great Start! :clap

It's cute with the AU and both having kids!

Sounds promising





Waiting for more...

~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Aug 19, 2003 7:20 am

Hey, and your first post too. Great for you. :bounce :clap I love the AUs and they both have kids. I agree with Xita about double spacing, it helps read smoother. God, Tara working as a Nanny for Willow--what a power imbalance. But I'm sure that she's just doing that while putting herself through medical school or selling her first screenplay or something. Why can't Joe come along and Tara watch both kids? Maybe that will happen. How old is Madison? About the same as Joe? Great start. Debra

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"It is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or demons, heaven or hell." - The Buddha

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RE:you belong to me

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Tue Aug 19, 2003 8:52 am

hooooo this is good



im thinking future here



big affair with the nanny and making it to the tabloids that sounds good especialy the affair part









Tara:i am you know

Willow:what

Tara:youres

thank you

peggy of sunnydale
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Aug 19, 2003 11:00 am

Oh another AU story...YAY i love them....:bounce

Both are having kids...wow who is the father of them....and how old are Willow and Tara? Taras son is 6 but how old is Madison? Lots of Q´s sorry..



Hope the update comes asap!!!!



CU:wave

SoL/Natti

This is a duet, Amber! You need to sing!"- Tony

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby SySnootles » Tue Aug 19, 2003 12:26 pm

Interesting! Both Tara and Willow have children. I feel a Brady Bunch vibe coming on!



I can't wait till the next update.

Catie



"The purpose of life is not to be happy - but to matter, to be productive, to be useful, to have it make a difference that you lived at all." -- Leo Roston

SySnootles
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby WannaBlessedBe » Tue Aug 19, 2003 4:10 pm

hmm......i'm liking this story! it's really cute! i think you have a great start! is tara a single mom as well as willow? i'm interested in where this story is heading! can't wait for the up-date!



Krystle

WannaBlessedBe
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Aug 19, 2003 11:08 pm

:bigwave ,

Oh I love the start of this! :clap :bow I love fic where :willow and :tara have kids and yay i this one they both have a kid! :applause I do wonder where are the dad's? I also wonder how old is Madison. By the way love the name. Can't wait to :read more. Update soon, please? :pray :pray :pray :pray





bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos


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Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby akira » Wed Aug 20, 2003 1:20 am

howdy :wave

great fic. i love fics with kids in it.

i am also happy that tara has a little BOY and not a girl.

that´s something new. i like it :grin

really hope you´re going to update soon.

off to work...:yawn

akira



akira
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby Moosetakingabubblebath » Thu Aug 21, 2003 7:51 am

Wow... this story is so great. :clap I love that Willow and Tara both have kids, and that Tara has a little boy. It's very rare on the board to see stories where one of them or both of them together have a son. I can't wait for you next update. It's coming soon right? :pray It's okay, I can be patient. :whistle Oh, who am I kidding, update soon please. :)





Moose

Moosetakingabubblebath
 


Re: RE:you belong to me

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Aug 22, 2003 4:55 am

I love Willow/Madison interaction in this part. Madison sure seems to be a bright kid... even though she bounces on the bed anyway :) . Willow should try to prevent herself from judging people before they enter the room, as Tara has neatly shown.



How old are Willow and Tara in this story ? I wonder why Tara is doing nanny-work, if she's around 22-25 it could be to get through college you see. Nothing wrong with being a full-time nanny but it would be, well... different.



Madi noticing Willow is two minutes late.... takes after her mother doesn't she ?



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby allykat » Fri Nov 14, 2003 4:58 pm

This looks so cute!! I was just looking for a fic where W/T had kids.. :heart

Hope it gets finished...:pray

Edited by: allykat at: 11/14/03 4:00 pm
allykat
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby Yellow Crayon » Fri Nov 14, 2003 9:43 pm

Thats a really good start, keep it up



hope theres an update soon...

Yellow Crayon
 


Re: You Belong With Me

Postby willow fan7 » Fri Nov 14, 2003 11:01 pm

Hey,

Great start. Loved the interaction between Madison and Willow. And it's really cool that Tara has a SON, not a daughter.I don't really see that a lot. In fact i've never seen in before. So great start. I'd love to see where you take this...the journey, i mean, coz we all know where it ends up!

:willow :love :tara forever!!!

willow fan7
 


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