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new fic: The Seventh Angel

Postby nika » Mon Aug 26, 2002 6:07 pm

I just know I should not do this but my fingers were itching and head was telling to go for it. Sorry.



TITLE: THE SEVENTH ANGEL



AUTHOR: NIKA



RAITING: KNOWING HOW MY MIND WORKS LET US JUST ASSUME IT WILL EVENTUALLY BE NC-17.



SPOILERS: SEASON 6



SUMMARY: TARA IS AN ANGEL, HELL WE ALL KNOW THAT. THE THING IS SHE IS A KEY PLAYER IN THE FINAL BATTLE BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL.OF COURSE SHE WILL MEET WILLOW AGAIN.



NOTE: I KONW I SHOULD NOT BE DOING THIS. I ALREADY HAVE 3 UNFINISHED FICS OUT THERE, BUT THIS IDEA WOULD NOT LEAVE ME ALONE. SO THERE MUSE I STARED IT, HAPPY NOW? SERIOUSLY...I WOULD APPRECIATE SOME FEEDBACK, JUST TO KNOW IF I SHOULD CONTINUE IT.



THE SEVENTH ANGEL



PART 1: THE ARRIVAL



Michaella kneeled right in the middle of the marbl ed hall, her face hidden within her hands. From a distance anyone would think that she was praying or in a state of suplication. In fact, she was waiting. She had been waiting for centuries, millenias even. Now she sensed that the time had come. The white room was enfulfed in a bright light that had no forseeable source, it simply existed everywhere at once. Like everything in “ the infinite” it simply was and always had been since the beginning of time.



Now what had always been, would be no more. She stood and sighed deeply, breathing in the aroma of the far horizons that would soon travel to. She placed her hands behind her back as she contemplated her home as she knew it for what could be the very last time.

Music resounded from all corners, she had been right, the trumpets blared and the pillars of the room shook in response.



Raphael materialized in the “ hall of waiting ” and spoke softly. “ It has come to pass. The seventh has arrived.”



Michaella answered, “ I know.” Simply and without emotion.



Raphael bowed and left quietly. Michaella had always been an enigma to him. He did not know why her reaction or lack of it surprised him. She was always the stoic one, a contrast to their bright surroundings. In all the halls of white, she was invariably dark, her hair, her eyes, even her choices in clothing. She was mistery, even to the other “Ori-Genesi.”

He left his musings alone and headed towards the “ hall of arms” he needed training now, more than thinking he decided.



In the “hall of transition” a young woman was just breaking through the waters of “ the neirika” a circular pool of azure blue water where the “rebirth” ocurred.

She came through as most do, gasping for air and fainting the second they touched the ground of the hall, more from exhaustion of the journey than anything else.



Michaella reached down and lifted the naked girl in her arms and carried her to the “familiar” an earthly like bedchamber so when she awakened she would not feel so dissoriented. It was a process that everyone went through upon arriving, even the “ seventh angel” needed to be comforted. Michaella set her charge gently down on the bed and concentrated on calling the one called Selena another “ familiar” so she would be there to greet her daughter when she awoke.



Selena arrived almost instantly and she smiled softly upon seeing her former daughter on the bed. “ Beautiful, just like I remember” she looked towards Michaella “ So young...may I know what happened?”



Michaella smiled and cocked an eyebrow. Selena nodded and ammended “ Sorry, I have still to learn. It was meant to be.”



“It was meant to be.” The dark Ori-Genesi repeated.



The young girl shifted and began to pull away from slumber. Her eyes fluttered a few times before finally opening. “ Where...” she beagan to ask in a confused and frightened tone.



Selena rushed to her side and held her hand “ Shhh...baby... everything is allright.”



The blonde nearly broke down in tears “ Mama is that really you?”



“ Yes baby Tara and everything is really going to be allright.”



COMING NEXT IN PART TWO “THE GENESI CODEX”



RANDOM SCENES:



In the beginning there was only darkness...

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Michaella: Lucien, you cannot be serious about insurrection.



Lucien: I am. We are angels, we are the originals and yet the source prefers the humans. We are perfection...we...



Michaella: We are angels, not Gods.



Lucien: But we could be.

---

The beast was chained for two thousand years.



---



Michaella: I am one of the original thirteen. You are the seventh Angel. The beginning of the end you have a choice, make it now.



Tara: I will fight, even if it means the final death.



---





Willow: I am not going to make it without her Buffy, let me die.



























Edited by: xita  at: 12/28/03 2:03 am
nika
 


New fic.

Postby Wiccaguitar420 » Mon Aug 26, 2002 7:26 pm

wow...nice begining...I loved all the different names...I hope you update soon...

~Meg

Wiccaguitar420
 


Re: New fic.

Postby MissQuirky » Mon Aug 26, 2002 7:56 pm

Great start! Very interesting! Can't wait to read more! :)

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: New fic.

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Tue Aug 27, 2002 12:04 am

WOW love it so far can't wait for update. (Naked Tara) sorry but I have a very bad mind. But I have lots of imagination does that count??

XWickedXWiccan
 


Re: New fic.

Postby mollyig » Tue Aug 27, 2002 1:32 am

Hi Nika,



A most intriguing setup. Am interested to see where this is going.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: New fic.

Postby xita » Wed Aug 28, 2002 1:24 am

Well i know how your mind works and I look forward to any naughty and non naughty stuff you come up with.



An angel? But she meets WIllow.. intrigued!

- - - - - - - - - - - -

Childie -"Not all girls are raving bloody lesbians, you know!"

George - "That's a misfortune of which I am perfectly well aware."

The Killing of Sister George

xita
 


Re: New fic.

Postby tiredsoul » Wed Aug 28, 2002 2:17 am

I like this beginning. It's intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this.



--celia

---------------------------------



"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

tiredsoul
 


re:feedback

Postby nika » Thu Aug 29, 2002 9:11 am

Hello kittens. I hope you're all having a nice morning.

It's raining in buckets where I am and no one to cuddle with, blah! Thank you all for the kind replies.



Wiccaguitar: Thank you. I'm glad you're liking it. There should be an update up by saturday night. I think.



M.quirky: There will be more as soon as I do some biblical research. I'm not too prolific on the old religion thing.



Xwiccedxwiccan: Never apologize for having a dirty mind, it just happens to be my favorite kind.



Mollyig: I'm interested in seeing where it's going myself. I have the general outline in my head but the details are kind of murky still.



Xita: Aaaah...I have intrigued the lovely Xita...how great.

I'm glad you like how my works cause I don't think I'll be the cobwebs any time soon. That is one cluttered attic.



Tiredsoul: I'm not taking it, I suspect it's taking me. Thank you for the feedback.

nika
 


Re: re:feedback

Postby Puff » Thu Aug 29, 2002 10:45 am

Oh very interesting start Nika, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.

-----------------------
You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: re:feedback

Postby vix84 » Thu Jan 16, 2003 5:11 am

Nika, I love this idea!



I am a big fan of angels :love and I would be so interested to see where you take this fic.



Any chance of an update? :pray



Thanks for sharing the first part with us!



:love

Sal

_________________


Willow laughs, kissing her. Soft and sensual. Deep love territory.

Seeing Red, Shooting Script.


Edited by: vix84 at: 1/16/03 7:04:04 am
vix84
 


Re: re:feedback

Postby Stroke of Luck » Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:31 am

HI!!



What a nice start. Want to read more!

Please keep going. :pray

I just hope that someone is fast enough to help Willow!



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Xena/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: re:feedback

Postby funkyasian » Thu Jan 16, 2003 6:41 am

hey there...so glad to see you writing again...even if it's not to finish the other fics...this one has a great start...you're right, we all knew tara's an angel to begin with...i can't wait to see what happens...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: re:feedback

Postby tkheaven » Thu Jan 16, 2003 12:52 pm

this is a great start! definitely continue with the story. I love this setup. I have one question so I get used to the different names 'n' stuff: what would a "familiar" be? I'm assuming it refers to others but you also mentioned it being the bedchamber, or am I reading that wrong...

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...Tk's Heaven


"I've become really protective of her. I want to make sure if Tara comes back, it's for good reason." -Amber Benson
Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to this season's catch phrase.
"Got it: that's a 'yes' to petals; a 'no' to pricks. I should remember that more often." -On Second Thought

tkheaven
 


reply

Postby nika » Sat Jan 18, 2003 12:44 pm

Puff: Thanks I wish I could get further than just the start, las I don´t have much time lately.



Vix84: I´m intrigued by Angels also, obviously, but I don´t think any amount of praying is going to get me the time I need to continue this, sorry. Really sorry.



Stroke of luck: I want to continue, really I do...Darn real life, darn it all cutting in on my writing time.



Funkyasian: you´re always so nice to me, thank you honey.



Tkheaven: Wow I didn´t expect to have any new replies to this fic. I know it´s been a long time. Thank you for your kind words. This is something I do want to continue and I think I will, but just around March when I expect work to slow down some.



May i just add that kittens Rock! I could´ve sworn no one remebered this piece. It was a cool surprise to find it on the 2nd page.



I´m editing cause I just realized I didn´t answer Tk´s question. A " Familiar" is a term I was planning on explaining further in the 2nd part. A " Familiar" can be a person, a place or a thing, when people die they need to adjust to the new concept of their out of earth bodies, it brings them comfort to be surrounded by "familiar" things or people.



That´s the sum of it.



Again thanks to everyone who´s taken the time to reply and or asked for an update. I´m truly sorry for dissapointing you all.:(







Edited by: nika  at: 1/18/03 6:46:18 pm
nika
 


Re: reply

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Jan 18, 2003 9:53 pm

Great way to set things up. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: reply

Postby tkheaven » Tue Jan 21, 2003 6:14 am

Cool, thanx :p

Tk's new and improved "GrrArgg"...


"I've become really protective of her. I want to make sure if Tara comes back, it's for good reason." -Amber Benson
Tara ate her, devoured her from beneath. -The Edge of Silence giving new meaning to this season's catch phrase.

tkheaven
 


New to the Archive

Postby BytrSuite » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:04 am

This is new to the archive. You can leave feedback!



To the creator of this thread: If you ever want to add something new, just email a mod and we'll move it to the active Pens board.



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"...the sharks got smarter."

Edited by: xita  at: 12/28/03 1:59 am
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