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St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic.

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Mon Jan 06, 2003 9:18 pm

Title - St Mary’s School for Girls

Author - Wytchi Grrl

Email - Contact me through private email

Disclaimers - Storyline and Characters belong to me except for Willow, Tara and Sunnydale who belong to JW, ME etc.

Pairing - W/T

Rating - PG-13.

Distribution - Yeah sure but let me know first.

Feedback - Yes as usual Please :)

Summary - Willow is using some inheritance money to go to one of the best boarding schools in the UK. There She meets Tara and the Two embark on a witchy adventure together.

Notes - Although this fic is AU Willow’s background is pretty much the same up to the events that made her leave Sunnydale before Buffy and Giles arrived. Thoughts are in ‘’.



St. Mary’s School for Girls



The redhead checked her watch. It would be an hour or so before they landed at Gatwick. She couldn’t help but feel nervous. Her stomach did little flips and she was sure her heart was trying to do the same. Checking her watch again a minute had past, sighing she took out the information package she had received on her destination. The glossy brochure cover was adorned by a picture of a very large grade 2 listed building surrounded by luscious green fields, Above the words Sussex St. Mary’s School for Girls. The architecture gave Willow an excited interest but also made her nervous, it had a kind of dark presence that she supposed was simply due to its age and severity of its size. Putting the leaflet to one side she closed her eyes, in less than an hour she would have her fresh start away from Sunnydale and all the grief that went with it.



***

Two ominous looking oak doors towered above Willow adding another case load of butterflies to the pit of her stomach ‘Come on Willow don’t wimp out now, Destiny awaits and all that’. Giving the heavy doors a solid shove, She found herself inside a rather large and gloomy entrance hall. Lugging her heavy case she made her way to an empty admittance desk, a stained glass window cast a little more light on the situation. The walls around her were ornamented by a vast amount of Tapestry’s, sculptures and Wood carvings of a gothic nature ‘Not so much with the Homeliness here’.



“Miss. Rosenberg” A sharp woman’s voice interrupted Willow’s thoughts.



“Huh...Oh yes” the redhead offered a hand to the prim and proper looking woman before her.



“Good. We’ve been expecting you. Will you come this way” after returning the handshake the elderly woman turned and headed for the grand staircase at the back of the hall. Willow followed trying to ignore the many different babbles that ran through her mind.



On the first floor they came to a lengthy corridor with several doors on each side. Stopping at the second to last, the woman opened it with a key attached to a chain on her belt. Somewhat like a prison guard Willow contemplated ‘this place has boding evil written all over it’ but then she remembered that was one of the reasons she had chosen it.



Once inside the Woman motioned for Willow to sit.



“I’m Miss. Downing. I will be handling your admittance and getting you settled in” Miss. Downing made a vague attempt at smiling. “I will also be your form tutor. Willow Rosenberg. Unusual name?”



“Oh...um...yeah Willow, that’s been said before” She smiled nervously.



“I meant Rosenberg, Isn’t that Jewish?” The teacher eyed the redhead closely.



“No...I mean Yes my err...father converted to marry my mother” Biting her lip Willow wondered if Miss. Downing Had noticed the small beads of sweat forming on her brow. She hated lying but she really wanted this placement. St. Mary’s had the best reputation and if it means pretending to be catholic for a few years then so be it. She wasn’t really Jewish anymore anyway.



“You are sixteen. This means you will be starting our sixth form. Your quarters are located on the top floor. You will be sharing until next year. I see you will be taking an array of classes. Latin...Computer Science. Well from your previous grades you should be able to keep up.”



“Oh Yes” Willow nodded her head enthusiastically.



“There are a few more questions and forms to go through but I think will show you to your room so you can freshen up after your trip.” With that the Teacher rose from her chair and made her way to the door, gesturing Willow to follow.



***

Throwing a bulk of leaflets onto the floor Willow flopped onto her new bed. The soft mattress conforming to her contours causing her to sigh with relief.



“I thought she would never leave.” She muttered to herself. “Jet lag is not my friend!”



Turning on her side Willow took in her surroundings. The sizeable room was symmetrical in its furnishings, The decor however wasn’t. Surrounding the bed opposite was an assortment of posters, drapes and candles. All were dark in every sense of the word.



“I guess it isn’t just the building that’s gothic.”



Forcing herself to stand Willow set about unpacking her nightclothes and toothbrush. The rest would have to wait for the morning and unless her roommate showed up in the next five minutes, meeting her would too.



***

Willow exploded through the classroom door. Her run coming to an awkward stop, her ankle gave way and she fell graceless to the floor. The room erupted with laughter.



“Silence!” Miss. Downing’s familiar drone commanded “Miss. Rosenberg, better late than never find yourself a seat.”



Finding her feet Willow limped to an empty desk. Once seated she flapped her hands in front of her face, trying to reduce the redness that was bound to be illuminating her features.



“Now Miss. Rosenberg, You have only missed a few lessons, You should be able to catch up. Miss. Hancock if you could share your textbook” instructed the teacher.



Willow looked to her left. A girl with light blond hair pulled back into a tight bun and the perfect English rose complexion was smiling back at her.



“I’m Beth” She whispered and pushed a book on her desk towards Willow.



As Miss. Downing continued her lesson Willow tried to keep up. It wasn’t easy she couldn’t help but stare at her fellow students, endeavouring to take in the new faces. Something caught her eye at the back of the classroom. At first she wasn’t sure if she was imagining the pencil that floated a foot above the table, but a second look confirmed what she was seeing. Although golden hair cloaked her eyes, the girl behind the desk seemed to be staring straight at it. As if she sensed Willow’s gaze the blond turned suddenly to face her. The pencil falling to the floor, Willow caught a glimpse of brilliant blue eyes before quickly facing forward.

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Hope you enjoyed the first part :)

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Tara pushed down Willows pants with her feet, colliding with silken legs, a sensation that made her shudder-VIXEN-Shamelessly promoting my own fic.

Edited by: Wytchi Grrl  at: 1/7/03 8:10:39 pm
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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic.

Postby sunspud » Tue Jan 07, 2003 12:26 am

Hey, I really like your start here. I'm already hooked!! Can't wait for more!



Brandi

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"Madness has now come over me..." Disturbed - Down With the Sickness

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic.

Postby Lonewolf22 » Tue Jan 07, 2003 4:11 pm

Wytchi Grrl: Great start, I kinda like the idea of Willow and Tara meeting when they were younger, very cool. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

Edited by: Lonewolf22 at: 1/7/03 2:17:31 pm
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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic

Postby Big Dummy » Tue Jan 07, 2003 6:55 pm

Hey there. This is a good start. I always love reading new and different ways for Willow and Tara to meet. I get goosebumps every time cause it's inevitably very romantic.



One note: I notice there are a few punctuation errors. It's been pretty useful to lots of Pens writers to use a beta to catch those little things that can sometimes be a bit distracting to your narrative. There's a thread here that you can check out if you're interested. Just a suggestion.

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic

Postby pikescoob » Tue Jan 07, 2003 8:37 pm

Cool start! :grin I like reading fics where Willow and Tara meet when they're younger. This is a really cool idea...lookin' forward to more! :D



**Michelle

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic

Postby bearskeeper » Tue Jan 07, 2003 9:00 pm

This is a really great start. I can tell that it's going to be a great story. And I love any story that is set in a dark, brooding atmosphere, like England. Throw Willow and Tara into the mix and it's just amazing!

bearskeeper
 


Well Done

Postby StrawberryTrix » Tue Jan 07, 2003 9:08 pm

Good job I'm liking this alot. Well started. :party



Looking forward to the update... :bounce



Straw :sneeze <-isn't he cute??

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Re: Well Done

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Tue Jan 07, 2003 10:34 pm



Thanx Brandi-already hooked? great:smug well i'm going to try and keep churning this out but updates might not be as often as I usual like to do but I will try!



Lonewolf-Well the idea has always interested me too so I hope I'm going to beable to do it justice. thanks for your comments:D



Big Dummy-I actually have a beta reader lol. I guessed she missed those. I tend to be more about the story but I can understand how it might distracting to some.

Yep planning on some of that inevitable romance that comes when a couple first meet. Espesh W/T!



pikescoob-really glad you like the begginging-thanks for the feedback x



bearskeeper-Ah Yes! that is exactly my plan, the whole dark and gothic atmosphere seemed the perfect place for our girls to meet, pleased you agree:grin and well England, your right I have seen many a place which fits the description of just that. Cheers x



Thanks StrawberryTrix, I'm going to try and get a small update done tonight.



Thanks again for all your feedback :heart





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Tara pushed down Willows pants with her feet, colliding with silken legs, a sensation that made her shudder-VIXEN-Shamelessly promoting my own fic.

Wytchi Grrl
 


St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Tue Jan 07, 2003 11:45 pm

Short up-date. Same disclaimers except- Flashbacks in >>> <<< and prepare for a little bit of angst.



Part 2



Willow slumped on to her bed; Feeling utterly exhausted after her first day of classes. She noticed her roommates’ things still hadn’t been touched. When she had woken in the morning it seemed strange to her the bed opposite hadn’t been slept in, it occurred to her that maybe the other girls in the dorm had slumber parties and wondered if one day soon she would get an invite.



The sound of running water disrupted her thoughts of pillow fights and popcorn. Jumping up she straightened her clothes and flattened her hair.



“Is there someone in the bathroom?” Willow questioned anxiously.



“Yeah and I’m not done so you will just have to wait!” The reply was short and not so sweet.



Cringing Willow shrugged her shoulders. She guessed her roommate was home after all. Walking across the room she began to take notice of her ‘roomies’ possessions in more detail, the many posters of The Manic Street Preachers determined they didn’t have the same taste in music. Willow’s foot tripped on something protruding from underneath the nightstand. Leaning down to pick it up she became aware the offending article was a small leather bound book.



“Ancient Occult Rites?” Willow read aloud from the cover.



Taking a seat, she began turning through the yellowed decaying pages. From what she could see the majority of it was written in Latin, her translations were unreliable at best but she could tell the book wasn’t something to be messed with.



“What the hell are you doing?” Willow jumped so hard she nearly fell of the bed.



“I...Uh...I Just” the redhead stood nervously, trying to stop the sudden twitching her left eye had started. The girl in front of her had long gleaming black hair and a pale angry face.



“Well don’t!” The girl grabbed the book from Willow’s hands and practically pushed her out of the way so she could get to her bed. “And stay away from my things!”.



“I’m sorry, I will you’re...um Tanith right?” Willow asked trying to make conversation.



“Yeah” the raven-haired girl shot back continuing to shove items into a black bag.



“OK well nice to meet you” the redhead offered a hand for shaking, to be ignored by Tanith turning her back on her.



Defeated Willow flopped back onto her bed ‘oh with the fun and stuff. Maybe I should have stuck to Sunnydale.’



>>>Willow Stood in sodden clothes drenched by a sudden down poor. The rain continued to beat down on her as she knelt placing flowers at her mothers’ grave. A quiet sob escaping her, she looked over to the second fresh grave, her fathers.



“What is this for?” The redhead screamed at the sky, rage consuming her. All the while drops of rain blended with the tears on her cheeks.



“Will? The cars ready, are you?” Xander, A friend since early childhood, placed a comforting hand on her shoulder. He was now her only real connection left with this world.



“It’s was just a stupid accident you know?” Willow turned to face him eyes wide and full of questions. “Just one stupid thing that ended everything for them.”



“Listen Will, you know you don’t have to do this alone, I’ll always be here for you.” Xander did his best to console her in a situation that no one really could.



“You’re wrong Xander. I do” with that Willow fell into his arms crying hard. <<<



Shaking her head Willow came to her senses, her memories digging up pain she tried hard to keep buried. Wiping away tears from her sore eyes she just caught a flash of her unwelcoming roommate leaving the room.



Still feeling worn out she decided to take a nap. Pulling back the covers she settled down to catch up on lost sleep, a soothing warm wave started to cloud her mind. Just before she drifted into a deep slumber images of the blue eyed pencil-floating girl glided through her mind.





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Tara pushed down Willows pants with her feet, colliding with silken legs, a sensation that made her shudder-VIXEN-Shamelessly promoting my own fic.

Wytchi Grrl
 


Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby saule77 » Wed Jan 08, 2003 5:09 am

I want blue eyed pencil-floating girl (and we know who that is... :eyebrow ) to share with Willow, not meanie :rage Tanith!!! :cry



And Willow's parents are DEAD???? Poor Will. :(



Hope to read more soon! You've got my attention...





"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart."

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby Grimlock72 » Wed Jan 08, 2003 2:36 pm

Hmmm, could Tanith please do something wrong with that book she has ? And like dissappear into another dimension or such ?



Poor Willow, both her parents dead and she went away from her friends this far ? That makes it harder to deal with it all I would think. Ah well, there is probably someone around who wants to help her with that.



:)



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby visual fallacy » Thu Jan 09, 2003 4:27 pm

oooh i love this fic!! Probably coz it runs along similar lines to my own education! lol!! There were some evil girls I had to share rooms with!! Cover her with toothpaste whilst she's asleep willow!! (works every time!!)



Cant wait for Willow and Tara to get to know each other better!!





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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby frau rosenclay » Thu Jan 09, 2003 8:01 pm

OOhh. I have such a thing for girls schools, my first romance was in highschool, with a girl, so that is probably why, and though it was so long ago, it is still a sweet memory.



Willow roomate is giving off some major darkness. I'm looking forward to this, as i said, girls schools make me all nostalgic.

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby pikescoob » Sun Jan 12, 2003 6:11 pm

Holy crap, Will's roomie is soooo mean! :paranoid She definitely seems to have some issues. So sad that Willow's parents died : I'm sure that the blue-eyed pencil floating girl could make her life good again :D Thanks for the update!



**Michelle

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls.

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Sun Jan 12, 2003 7:48 pm

Hey All,

Thanks so much for your positive feedback :D I will be continueing this fic but I've got a case of writers block at the moment lol. But like I said as soon as it comes back to me I will carry on. Thanks again.

Wytchi:heart

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Tara pushed down Willows pants with her feet, colliding with silken legs, a sensation that made her shudder-VIXEN-Shamelessly promoting my own fic.

Wytchi Grrl
 


Hello ^^

Postby MellindraX » Sun Feb 02, 2003 3:59 pm

Spotted this on the board, and I just couldn't ignore a name like that :D

Quite love what you've done here, and waiting (very impatiently, dont worry) for an update.

Bye :peace

They just don't like me because they think I'm trying to seduce their daughter.

You are trying to seduce their daughter.

They started it!

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Re: Hello ^^

Postby singgirl » Sun Feb 02, 2003 4:22 pm

I had to read this fic, the name couldn't be ignored. I can't believe Willow's parents are dead, that's so sad. Can't wait for more!

:peace Pax! -Bev

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St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic.

Postby Wytchi Grrl » Sun Feb 02, 2003 8:12 pm

Hey all, How funny was it that I finally get round to writing the next part to find more feedback today! Yay, thanks for the feedback guys, I'm really glad this is going down well so far, giving me a kick to keep it coming. Anyway next part here-Hope you enjoy! :love




Part 3



The sound started faint, far off, a charade. A whispering sound of matter cutting the air, the rush of it’s rise and fall. Coming closer and now accompanied by a beat. Feet against the ground, Harder, faster they come. The nearer it gets the louder it becomes, now so close it’s deafening, calling out into the night. Panic starts to climb up into her throat and pounds in her chest, escaping when it can no longer be contained.



Willow woke with a start to the last echoes of her scream. She bolted up right and checked Taniths’ Bed, it was empty, and she was alone. ‘God what was that?’ her mind tried to reason with the images her nightmare had left. ‘If things aren’t hard enough without the Heebie Jeebies setting in.’



A thin layer of perspiration had settled itself over her face; She decided she needed some fresh air. Willow went to the bathroom to freshen up. Before she made it she noticed the time, “Gone Midnight, I guess Tanith isn’t coming back tonight either.” Willow muttered to herself with a characteristic nod.



Willow crept quietly throughout the halls and made her way down to the drama hall where she could slip out into the grounds without being caught.



Outside the air was crisp. A bitter breeze caressed her available skin causing her to shiver. Filling her lungs with fresh air she felt her head clear from the nightmare. She began to walk the path leading to the gardens deciding that she would head back when she reach the woods beyond them. Willow couldn’t help feeling cautious, the dark and unfamiliar territory playing with her nerves.



In the distance she could see the shape of a building, she determined it was most likely a house for the grounds-keeper, as she got closer it was obvious the cottage had been abandoned. Realising that the eerie looking building would be more inviting in the day she made the decision to make her way back to the school, Just as she was turning away a glimmer of light in one of the upstairs windows caught her eye, flickering against the walls probably from a candle. Willow wanted to investigate but decided against it, She had lived in Sunnydale too long to go wandering through derelict buildings at night or in the day for that matter. She realised it was judgemental to tarnish every place with the same Sunnydale brush but couldn’t help thinking that this school and it’s grounds had more going on than it said in the brochure.



On her way back down the path she could see two figures up ahead, they appeared to be sitting on one of the benches that were spotted around the gardens. Willows’ heart began to race. Two small circles of amber starting to dance in front of them, almost certainly the ends of lighted cigarettes. As she continued to walk towards them she breathed a sigh of relief as the looming figures revealed themselves as two girls that Willow recognised from some of her classes.



Josephine Brooks and Ashleigh Winters were people, which Willow knew if her previous school life was anything to go by, she would never be friends with. They were popular. Just from what she had seen so far, their presence around school was quite similar to Cordelia and Harmony’s, best described in Willow’s mind as the bitches back home.



Head down Willow hoped to pass them without communication.



“Hey new Girl?”



“Err...Yep?” Willow replied guardedly, looking up to see it was Josephine who addressed her.



“Were you just going to walk by us without saying hello?” The bogus blonde questioned with an unusual smile that reminded Willow of a cat, demure with ulterior motives.



“I...um...didn’t see you.” the redhead tapped her foot nervously against the floor.



“Yeah sure, So what are you doing out tonight?” Josephine grinned as she paced in front of her.



“Just getting some fresh air” Willow stated gaining some confidence in the fact she knew she wasn’t doing anything wrong.



“Us too or some bad air.” The blond laughed sarcastically and motioned towards Ashleigh. “Well offer our company a cigarette then, where are your manners?”



“Sorry.” The brunette giggled and stepped forward offering the packet in Willow’s direction.



“No thank you.”



“Sensible. So tell us a bit about your American self?” Josephine spoke what seemed to be a request rather than a simple question. She sat back down on the bench, Ashleigh followed suit.



“I better get back to the dorm. I’m getting tired.” ‘Tired! Lame excuse Willow!’



“We understand, you better get on back, don’t want you to be late for class in the morning.” Josephine flashed her teeth in her direction then at her sidekick.



“Bye Bye for now.” They chorused and started to laugh.



“Bye.” Willow took her cue and started down the path as fast as she could. Her uneasy stomach relaxing the farther she got away from the two girls she left behind. She could still hear them laughing, the sound causing shivers to run up her spine.

Willow could see the door that led back into the safety of the drama hall. Suddenly a memorable sound came from behind her, the shrieks of Josephine and Ashleigh

had been replaced with a swish in the wind. It was getting louder and that only meant what was making the noise was getting nearer. She couldn’t understand why she felt afraid. She couldn’t bring herself to turn to see the culprit.



Willow made a dash for the door, She ran hard until she reached it, slamming it violently after her. Catching her breath she rested against the door, a loud bang from the other side started her sprint again; she didn’t stop until securely in her dorm room. A quick look at Taniths’ bed determined she was still not there. Willow stumbled forward to her bed and flopped down onto the warm soft covers, she knew now she was safe but couldn’t shake the familiarity of what had just happened, It had been just like her nightmare.



***

A short time later, after she had washed up for bed, Willow began to write a letter to her friend back home.



Dear Xander,

I hope this finds you well. I think I have made a huge mistake in coming here...







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Witchcraft Grrls

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Re: St. Mary's School for Girls-AU Fic.

Postby singgirl » Sun Feb 02, 2003 8:36 pm

oooh, what was it?? C'mon, ya gotta write more!

:peace Pax! -Bev

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Yay!

Postby MellindraX » Sun Feb 02, 2003 8:51 pm

Ooh! Suspense, mystery, drama, and a cliffhanger (devilishly cruel :happy )

Another update though, and I would not be so bitter (*hintfrigginhintgetthehinthint*)

Of course, take your time though. Make it good :D

They just don't like me because they think I'm trying to seduce their daughter.

You are trying to seduce their daughter.

They started it!

MellindraX
 


Re: Yay!

Postby SobeitUK » Mon Feb 03, 2003 1:21 am

I'm not so good with the posting here, but this is just too intriguing! I love you've brought Willow to England, but Sussex? :p



Really loving this, please continue!





SobeitUK
 


Re: Yay!

Postby SJ » Mon Feb 03, 2003 3:12 am

Thanks for the update :)

SJ
 


Re: Yay!

Postby Grimlock72 » Mon Feb 03, 2003 1:39 pm



I hope those two evil girls were eaten by a horrible monster, heh. Being mean to Willow...boooooh, isn't there a law against that ? Besides I kinda doubt those girls are allowed to smoke anyway, heh..



Smart Willow about not going into the creepy cabin in the dark, very smart. I like her already :)



Grimmy

"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: Yay!

Postby BytrSuite » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:17 am

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To the creator of this thread: If you ever want to add something new, just email a mod and we'll move it to the active Pens board.



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Edited by: maudmac  at: 12/28/03 1:53 am
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