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Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby WillowsSlave » Sun Jul 21, 2002 8:27 pm

Hi! This is my first Fic. Be kind! :grin



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Title: The Coldest Sunrise

Author: Kerri L. Raven

Rating: PG (For some smoochies, but hea! I say G!)

Summary: Only love can banish the cold.

E-mail: sjr@clanross.net

Feedback: Please! Feed my poor, poor neglected muse! She starts making up weird things and planting them in my head when she's ignored!

Distribution: Mainly for the Kittens, but if anyone wants it, just ask, and let me know were it’s going.

Disclaimer: All related characters, belong solely to Joss “bad man” Weston, ME, and the little “Gerr, arg” monster! Not to mention TPTB have slight dibs on these girls.

Parings: W/T. (Really, come on now! Who else!)

Plea: Please do not copy this story thinga ma bob, without due credit and E-mail attached! If you do, um, well, I can’t think of anything real bad right now, but, it’ll happen to you! :grin

Dedication: This is for ALL of the Kittens in light of the recent de-evolution of Joss and ME. Long live Willow and Tara!!!!!!!!!!

Note: Un-beta-ed. Hope it's still good though.

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The sunrise. It’s really such a beautiful thing. But before the sun comes up there is coldness. It lingers everywhere. I’m cold now, and the jacket I clutch tightly to my body does not help at all. Inhaling, my eyes close as an all too familiar sent lingers in my senses. Her. My love’s fragrance is imbued within the fabric; I bury my face in the scratchy wool, and savor her essence. Pure, bright, sweet. I look up to the lighting sky, anticipating my fate. Footsteps. I turn my head slightly to the sound in the woods behind me, and yet it does not tear my eyes from were the flaming ball in which all life relies on would rise. I’m still so cold.



“Oh Goddess! Baby, come on, we have to get you out of here. Come on!” A voice I never thought I would hear again surrounds me. My eyes turn to meet hers, and I feel tears roll down my face. She gasps softly, but rushes to me, and pulls me from were I sit on the dew moistened ground. She runs, my hand gripped in her own, urging me on. When I see our destination, I shiver slightly; the cold still lingers with me. Her grip tightens on my hand, and she propels me into the darkened cave in front of her, muttering something under her breath and the cave is sealed. No light enters the damp cavern.



“Baby, were are you?” She says, her voice weak. The spell must have drained her. I walk to her, as I can see in the pitch black, and grasp her hand. To my surprise, she pulls me into an embrace. At first, under my own assumptions, I’m confused, than I allow myself to melt into her arms.



“I thought you would hate me. I would rather be dead than have you suffering because of what I am.” I say, amazed at my own eloquence. Her head shakes violently.



“No, no, no. I don’t hate you. I could never hate you. I never will hate you, love. You are my forever.” She pulls my face into her oh so soft hands, brushing away blood-red tears that I know she cannot see. Her scalding hot lips meet my own death chilled ones. Her heat meets my coolness, and finally I feel icy cold talons releasing my heart. Pulling back I look into her eyes, and I know, even in the blackness, she looks into mine.



“I love you Willow.”



“I love you Tara.” We both say at the same time. Resting my back against the chilled rock, I pull her body atop mine.



“Sleep. We have all day.” I say softly. She nods into my chest, and I see her eyes close, resting against my cool body, my cool arms wrapped around her.



And I’m finally warm.



Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy
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Tara: What about the (furrowed Tarabrow) "trio's evil skeem"?

Willow:(Grin) Well, I'm kinda working on my owwn...(Complete with Willowleer.) ~ In Seeing Red (duh!)

Edited by: xita  at: 12/29/02 8:04:45 pm
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Re: First Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby funkyasian » Sun Jul 21, 2002 8:33 pm

definitely interesting...will there be more? i'm forming all sorts of different ideas from this start already...



steph

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Re: First Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby xita » Mon Jul 22, 2002 4:07 am

Yeah, I am not sure who is who here and what is what, had to reread there but I have a couple of ideas.. but they are together , so that's the important thing..

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Re: First Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby WillowsSlave » Sat Sep 14, 2002 9:04 pm

Thank you both whom responded to the first piece of this story, and all whom have read it! I hope for more responses to this piece, but if not *shrug* what can you do?





Title: The Coldest Sunrise (pt 2/?)

Author: Kerri Raven

Rating: PG (For some smoochies, but hea! I say G!)

Summary: Only love can banish the cold.

E-mail: raven@clanross.net

Distribution: Mainly for the Kittens, but if anyone wants it, just ask, and let me know were it’s going.

Disclaimer: All related characters, belong solely to Joss “bad man” Wheton, Weston or however the dork spells it, ME, and the little “Gerr, arg” monster! Meaning: it’s not mine! Just the story idea!

Parings: W/T. (Really, come on now! Who else!)

Apologies: I’m sorry Steph and Ms. Xita for not responding to you before this. I’m a bad, bad kitty and must be whipped. :grin please! Because of my badness:

Dedication: To Step (funkyasian) and the ruler over all that she surveys Ms. Xita!

Feedback: Pppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! Perty perty please! I don’t know whether to give up or keep on going! ANY responses are just…worshiped!!!

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I can feel it within the depths of my being that the twilight has fallen. The beast within my body roars for blood, but the larger part, my soul, denies it of the pleasure that would be given with such a meal.



“Have you fed?” Her question startles me out of my inner battle. She can feel me shake my head.



“No.” Her fingers caress my face gently.



“Than how come your not all “gerr” with me?” She asks curiously. I half smile into the dark.



“I could never hurt you, soul or not.” I say softly. Her lips meet mine and again, I am surprised that she is not revolted with me. There is silence with us for a long moment.



“We can leave now. It’s dark out.” I say softly to the woman cuddled up to my breast. She gives a little grunt, obviously annoyed at giving up her resting-place.



“Alright. Let’s get out of this place, it’s starting to wig me out.” She crawls from my chest, and stands, amazingly confident with the darkness surrounding us. I see her raise her hand to roll the rock that had sealed the cave away, and I grasp onto the free one. The electricity surges between us as it always has. Only I see the smile that eases onto her features.



With a grating sound too loud to my enhanced senses, the stone rolls away, and the fresh air of the night rushes to meet us. I take a deep, synchronized, yet unnecessary breath with my lover. She looks at me, in the dim light before complete darkness, and smiles. She gently raises a hand to my face, tucking a stray piece of hair behind my ear. Her warm palm lands upon my cheek. Reflexively, my eyes close.



“You’re so beautiful.” She kisses me gently, and than wraps me in her embrace.



“You’re the beautiful one.” I say softly, my voice a gentle whisper on the wind.



And for a moment, it’s just us, the wind drifting lazily around us as we stand at the mouth of a cave, twining red and blond locks, and caressing our skin.



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We arrive at the Magic Shop, and both of us pause before we enter.



“Are you sure you want to do this? We could just go home.” I smile at her.



“I’m sure, I’d like to find out why I’ve kept my soul.” I see her face darken a degree.



“Not that I’m not very glad to have it.” I say, my eyes wide. She puts her hand on my arm to calm me.



“I know. I just don’t…I don’t know, I just don’t want you to hurt. I know you do when you think of what happened.” I take her face into both of my hands, and look deep into her eyes.



“Nothing hurts when I’m with you.” She closes her eyes, and a tear rolls down her cheek. I kiss it away.



“No tears, baby.” I whisper to her. Watery eyes stare into my being.



“I’m just so happy you’re a…here.” She stumbles slightly. I pull her closer to me.



“I’m always with you. No matter what. Never forget that.” She nods and no other words are spoken as we wait a moment before entering the occupied shop.



End part two



Kerri (The panther kitten with an eternal caffeine rush)
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Forward, but never Straight

WillowsSlave
 


Re: First Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Sat Sep 14, 2002 9:20 pm

You know I'm confused it really nice but who's who and what happened??

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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby WiccansIllusion » Sun Sep 15, 2002 12:11 am

from what I could gather, Willow is a vamp with a soul? Or maybe Tara is her soul, who knows...interesting ideas..

Tara nodded in agreement "She has magic fingers." Then, as though the words had just echoed back to her and sounded not at all right, she perked up and glanced around at the others. "On the keyboard."

TheWisdom of War, Chris Golden

'My heart is cleverer then I and it knows what to do.'-MC Legends of the Kiss

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby vix84 » Sun Sep 15, 2002 1:27 am

Whoa! What an interesting idea, Kerri...



I loved the line "so how come you're not all grr with me?"



It's so Tara!



Can't wait to see where you go with this :)

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Willow: Those darn Salem judges. With their less-satanic-than-thou attitude.

Tara: Oh, honey, let’s change it. The Discovery channel has koala bears.


Intervention

Edited by: vix84 at: 9/15/02 5:31:12 am
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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby TheWhiz » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:10 am

Just read the first 2 parts. This is interesting. I'll be back to see what happens :)

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"


"Make your own kind of music"-Mama Cass

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby Tulipp » Sun Sep 15, 2002 6:19 am

Intriguing. You have some nice turns of phrase here, like "The beast within my body roars for blood," that are almost poetic. Nice. I am looking forward to seeing who's who, as well; I noticed that so far you are holding back from giving the kind of details that would suggest who is who, but I imagine that's part of the master plan here. Looking forward to seeing where yo go with this; thanks for sharing it.

Tulipp
 


Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby mollyig » Sun Sep 15, 2002 8:58 am

I take a deep, synchronized, yet unnecessary breath with my lover. The synchronicity coming naturally to her. I like that.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby vmpIrslAr » Sun Sep 15, 2002 7:29 pm

Ooooooohhhhhh....I love vampy goodness. Please more cuz if not then you are being very very bad. And that means the whips have to be brought out...

VmpIrslAr out.



"she's my everything."

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby Centauri2002 » Sun Sep 15, 2002 7:41 pm

Okay, I can figure out who is who but perhaps it would be better to write it in third person.



Anyway, I love vamp Willow (I am right about that? coz I hate to say I can tell who's who and then be wrong lol) and with Tara in the story too... pure heaven. :D In a twisted kinda way. ;)



Caz

Tara: I got so lost
Willow: I found you... I will always find you

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby WillowsSlave » Sun Sep 15, 2002 7:51 pm

XwickedXwiccan Hopefully you’ll find out in this part, but…maybe not….muhahahaha :evil



WiccansIllusion You’ll find out whom the vamp is in this one, and we will find out why they’ve kept their soul.



vix84 Thank you, and I do hope you won’t be disappointed where I’m going with this.



TheWhiz Thanks for reading. Do come back, and I hope I’m keeping this entertaining enough to keep your interest.



Tulipp Poetic? Thank you. I’ve never had my writing described like that before, but thank you. And yes, my with holding of ideas has been intentional and indeed is essential to the master plan. I’m glad you’re interested as to where it’s going. And thank you for replying, it means a lot to my muse and me.



mollyig Whenever I think of Tara and Willow I picture them with this synchronicity that is engrained within their soul. Thank you for your comments.



VmpIrslAr Glad someone likes vampy goodness with me!! I’ll give out more but, the whips? PLEASE!! :grin



Centauri2002 Don’t worry, eventually, after I’ve given up the eluding, I’ll pop into third person. First is just too hard to do when your trying to get two POV’s down. You’ll have to read to find out whom got vampy, and we agree, Willow and Tara together in any story is just…bliss. And I just prefer the twisted!



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Title: The Coldest Sunrise (pt 3/?)

Author: Kerri Raven

Rating: PG (For some smoochies, but hea! I say G!)

Summary: Only love can banish the cold. Willow and Tara face what has happened, along with the gang.

E-mail: raven@clanross.net

Distribution: Mainly for the Kittens, but if anyone wants it, just ask, and let me know were it’s going.

Disclaimer: All related characters, belong solely to Joss “bad man” Wheton, Weston or however the dork spells it, ME, and the little “Gerr, arg” monster! Meaning: it’s not mine! Just the story idea!

Parings: W/T. (Really, come on now! Who else!)

Feedback: Pppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! Perty perty please! I don’t know whether to give up or keep on going! ANY responses are just…worshiped!!!



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Breaths are drawn, due to mixed reactions as we enter the Magic Box. I suppose some reactions are due to our appearance, because well, sleeping in a cave doesn’t leave you as fresh as you would like to hope. The other reactions could be due to both of our disappearances the other night, and my lover’s disappearance even before that.



“Oh my God, Tara, Willow, are you alright?” Buffy asks, rushing to us, genuinely concerned.



“I guess were okay, in a manor of speaking.” I look to my soul mate, and I see her backing away from the Slayer, and the concept finally flashes though my mind.



Vampire afraid of Vampire Slayer.



I wrap my arm around her, and pull her closer to my body. She buries her face in the crook of my neck, and surprisingly, okay, well, not surprisingly, I’m not afraid for my own well being. My eyes meet those of Spike whom was sitting at the circular table, and understanding flashes between us.



“Slayer, I think your scaring ducks over there.” Spike points out softly. Her hazel eyes flash over the both of us, and recognition flitters over her features.



“Oh God. No. Please.” The blond falls to the ground, tears coursing down her cheeks. She hugs her knees close to her chest, and rocks back and forth, repeating the word “No” constantly.



Each of us is frozen, not expecting Buffy’s agony. Finally, my lover slowly lowers herself next to the crying girl, and raises her face, looking into the Slayer’s eyes.



“I’m still me Buffy, I just have no hope of getting a tan now.” She gives a little half smile, and suddenly, she’s holding the blond, as the girl just threw herself at her.



“Oh, I’m so sorry, I never wanted you to get hurt. I’ve always tried to keep you guys safe. I’m a bad slayer. I’m a bad, bad slayer. Oh I’m so, so, sorry.” Buffy cried.



“Buffy, It’s okay, this is not your fault. The one whom has done this will pay. It’s okay.”



For some reason the “The one whom has done this will pay,” line chilled me to my bones, but I shook off the discomfort. She would never hurt anyone…would she.



“So, Willow. What’s it like to have your girlfriend as a vampire?” Anya pipes up from her place behind the counter.



End Part Three



I couldn’t just leave it there but I also couldn’t not continue until next weekend either! Here yea go! Oh by the way, PLEASE DON’T KILL ME!



Title: The Coldest Sunrise (pt 4/?)

Author: Kerri Raven

Rating: PG (For some smoochies, but hea! I say G!)

Summary: With Tara as a Souled Vamp, Willow being the ultimate support-o girlfriend and Buffy being emotionally cracked, as weird as this is, it couldn’t get worse? Could it?…

Timeline: I’ve finally figured out where this baby takes place. At the end of season four, before the beginning of season five. Here I diverge off, and can PLAY!

(All previous disclaimers withstanding.)



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“So, Willow. What’s it like to have your girlfriend as a vampire?” Xander from his place next to his girlfriend, groaned and dropped his head.



Willow being as calm as she could, gave the ex-vengeance demon a tolerant smile, but ignored the question. Tara from her place holding a somewhat calmer Slayer shared a look with her girlfriend. Giles, having been at the grand sized table researching, was cleaning his glasses in a classic gesture.



“U…um Tara. I don’t mean to sound rude but…W…why are you so….so…”



“Tame?” The blond witch offered.



“Y…yes. I s…suppose that would do.” Giles stammered out.



“We really don’t know. That’s why we came here. We hoped you would know.” Willow said, taking some of the heat for the blond.



“Blondie has her soul.” Everyone stared at Spike. He looked around.



“What! A bloke can’t have some answers some of the time?” The vampire said defensively.



“I…I had already kinda figured that one out. But w…why?” Tara asked, assisting Buffy in standing, than climbing to her feet.



“I think that the best theory to believe at this point is that because the two of you,” Giles gestured to the two witches, “have such a strong spiritual and magickal, that the two of you may share the same soul. Therefore, because Willow is still alive, Tara’s soul remained intact.”



The two women looked into eachother’s eyes.



“Solutes.” Willow whispered softly. Tara caught the redhead’s hand in her own.



“Forever.” Suddenly, a rumbling growl echoed by a vocal growl came from Tara. She closed her eyes tightly, and bent over, clenching her waist tightly.



“Baby, what’s wrong?” Tara opened her eyes slightly, and Willow had to force herself not to draw back at the gold flashing orbs.



“Bloody hell! You haven’t fed have you?” Spike exclaimed, pulling a flask from one of the pockets of his leather duster. He tossed the metal canister to the blond. She unscrewed the top, and each gasped as her face contorted.



Tara could no longer deny her body of the blood it craved, and when the first metallic sent reached her nostrils, she could not prevent the demon from coming fore. She gulped down the contents quickly, and had to fight the disgust and horror that she felt for having to ingest the fluid. But a dark part, a part that the blond was trying hard to ignore, was in ecstasy at having tasted the blood. And it wanted more.



When she drained the last of the contents of the flask, it took all of her will power to force the demon into submission. Her features returned to normal, and she tossed the flask back at the suprised master vampire.



Ducking her head, she let her hair cover her features, as she feared the reaction of her love, and the reactions of her friends.



“Well, now that that little melodrama is over, shall we research?” Giles said, trying to ignore the sadness that filled him, at the thought of a girl that had quickly become like a daughter to him, had to consume blood to stay alive.



Both witches nodded, along with a somewhat dazed slayer. They both walked to the table, and waited patiently as the watcher gathered books to look through.



“I’ve got one question goldie locks.” Spike said, breaking the uncomfortable silence that fell over the group. Tara looked up, questioningly.



“Who turned you?” There was a very long pause.



“Dracula.” Was the only response. Shocked eyes all turned on her.



End part four.



P.S. I’m extremely sorry but I won’t be able to update except on the weekends. As always, I hope you enjoyed it and don’t hate me too much for vamping Tara! Thank you to everyone who's commented and for everyone whom has read! You guys are my inspiration!



Kerri (The panther kitten with an eternal caffeine rush)
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Forward, but never Straight

Edited by: WillowsSlave at: 9/15/02 6:53:13 pm
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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby mollyig » Mon Sep 16, 2002 1:10 am

Okay now we know which of them has been turned. Dracula as the sire? Looking forward to reading more about that one.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby starlitefaeriegrrrl » Sun Nov 17, 2002 6:59 pm

Just read this and I really love the first paragraph of the first chapter. Wonderful description, I felt like I was there myself. Mmm, lovely.



rae



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MORE MORE MORE!

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Mon Nov 18, 2002 5:44 pm

Hey! Love the fic! I'm very interested to see where it goes!! :clap



Update soon! Thanks :)



~NICKOLE~

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby xita » Sun Dec 29, 2002 10:04 pm

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Re: Fic: The Coldest Sunrise

Postby Willows miss PsychoPepSqu » Sun Aug 17, 2003 10:30 pm

That was really well written and had some really good sentences













Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually, I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens, but it's been pointed out to to me that that's, you know, insane.

Tara: I said "quirky"

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