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NEW Fan Fic: Willow and Tara “the series”. First Season.

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Sat Sep 28, 2002 11:12 am

A huge HI!!!! To all Kittens and Willow & Tara fans.



Here I’ll continue my Fan Fic about Willow & Tara. This Fan Fic was concibed as a show... as a TV series. That is the reason why it’s written like a script (English is not my natal language either, so is easier to me write in this way than a literary text). There are not suggested camera shots (screen play). The history is telled thanks to places and actions descriptions (generaly in present tense) and dialogues (my fics are literal scripts). So, it will not be so rich and pretty as the fics you can write, but the important is the story. I hope you enjoy it anyway!!!!!!!!!



I will start with the Second Chapter (the first one was a Special divided in 4 parts named “Love beyond reason”. You can find it into a topic in this board under the name “To all kittens!!! My W/T TV show first chapter!!!!”. I will put it here later, after a good review (it has many mistakes) I promise. Despite that, here is a little resume how my series begin:



The story starts almost a year after Tara’s death (all events on season six was not changed). Willow has traveled again to England but only with Dawn this time. There, a serie of extrange events begins: A vampire call Willow “believer” before die suddendly and the girls find, into a small and old library named “Eye of Eternals”, a very very old book with Tara images! In that place, Dawn and Willow meets Loyd, a cinical british who looks similar to Giles (not exactly, only similar: gray short hair, fine eye-glasses). He reveals them Tara is something called “Reflection God”: a God who needs encarnates as a mortal and find happines to make her powers work over the dimension she protects... but she never knows that. Her murder made her become into suspension state in her dimension. Dawn travels to Sunnydale across a portal to find Giles and prepare Tara’s body and Willow begins an epic quest into the realm of Lordganthnora to bring her girlfriend back.



At the dimension, Willow meets Eldarth, a young fighter with pointed ears. He is of a race called L’veths, the main race on Lordganthnora, Tara’s protected world. The boys is known as “The Gate Keeper” a blessed fighter who can summon all his ancestors’ strenght, changing his form into an madure, tall and amazing warrior. Both begin the quest for Tara’s temple, which must be unbruried by Willow. They engage many battles against brutal creatures called “Scavengers”. In their travel, meet places as “The Cathedral of Bones”, where there is a weird, dark and wise creature called “The Rune Master” who tells them were find the temple: at a place known as “The Gods’ Grave”.



Finally, (I will not tell you how) Willow brings Trara back. Eldarth travels with them to our dimension, because he has the life mission of protect the Goodess and her “happiness tree” (Willow). The only problem is that everyone (Willow, Dawn, Giles and Eldarth) have lost their recent memories. Willow doesn’t remember she traveled to another dimension to recover Tara, Dawn doesn’t know how she is back to Sunnydale, Giles has forgotten all the history telled by Dawn, and Eldarth only remembers his family and mission but not the why. Tara... she only remembers some seconds of cold and darkness!. All is atributted to an unexplained and marvelous miracle.



Well I hope you like it. It’s time to introduce you the regular characters of my series!!!!:

PD: Many of the characters and some places are own of Joss Whedon and ME. Only Loyd, Eldarth, Lilian and the series concept are mine.



REGULAR CHARACTERS



WILLOW ROSENBERG

Our dear red haired witch!. Her relationship with Dawn is better then ever, after a storming adaptation period of time. It’s said her awesome magical power has not been removed entirely. Her sadness c’ause Tara’s death was deeper with each day. Now she is back, their love is gratest than anything else!!!!



TARA Mc CLAY

Our shy and cute sorceress is back!. After almost a year six feet underground, Willow could bring her to live again. Because she was not “dead”, she has not the remembers and trauma Buffy had. Her condition of Reflection God is unknown, even to her!



DAWN SUMMER

Buffy’s sister is Willow’s best friend. She ever looked Tara as a kind of new mom. She loves the couple with crazy. In this year, she has been under training with Buffy and Giles, becoming a good “mini slayer”.



LOYD McHAGEN

A mysterious British who want to become Willow and Tara’s watcher to unknown reasons. He was a good Giles’ friend before been banished from the Council. Loyd was acused of gain inmense knowledge by dark ways. Now he has inmense financial and knowledge power... and secrets (one of the gratest was the escene when he pulled out from a closet in his library... a Loyd’s corpse!!!!!!!) Who is this man really?... is one of the huges mysteries of this series.



ELDARTH

A young L’veth figter who has the mission of protect his people’s Goddess and her happiness tree (Tara and Willow). He handles as no one his seven swords: one two handed, two bastard, two long and two short ones (gladiuss). He has the power of summon his ancestor’s strength, gaining the ability of an entery army. He looks too serious to his age (aparently 18), but inside, he’s only a kid with too much responsability.



LILIAN

????????????????? This incedibily beautiful woman is an absolut mystery. She could be seen by first time into the chapters 4 or 5.



As I said, I hope you enjoy this W/T new adventures!!!!!!! Joss Whedon took our lovely couple away from his series, but I’m going to bring them back on this board.



I apreciate all your feedback. This is done with much love. If I have your support, this first season will have 17 more chapters (first one count as 4 and here you are the second one). ENJOY!!!!

Prayer Of Gehenna



Edited by: xita  at: 12/29/02 7:44:49 pm
Prayer of Gehenna
 


interesting start

Postby WTsnuggles » Sat Sep 28, 2002 11:37 am

Hi there.



So part 1 will be up soon? This sounds very interesting and am looking forward to reading your story.



post soon :grin

WTsnuggles
 


W&T "the series" Chapter 2: Scottish factor. S

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Sat Sep 28, 2002 11:38 am

Willow & Tara "The series"

SEASON 01: Chapter 02: “Scottish Factor”



CAST OF CHARACTERS

Willow

Tara

Dawn

Loyd

Eldarth



GUEST CHARACTER

Giles





INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (WILLOW & TARA’S BEDROOM) – DAY



The soft sun rayligth from dawn breaks the room’s darkness. It enters by a little line between the closed curtains. The warm ligth touchs Tara’s face, like a tender care. Almost a year under earth, but now she can wake up and sit, as it never had happened, with her true love at her left side of the bed. Willow, still sleeping, is wearing last day clothes. It is full of earth dust an dirty, but, for Tara, she looks like an angel. Completly diferent the blond girl is dressed. She looks like a carefully handled modern doll, clean clothes, awesome make up.



Tara can’t resist herself and bends her body to kiss tenderly her love’s forehead. Willow opens her eyes slowly, with a slender smile on her lips. She watches Tara’s face by several seconds, almost without take breath. The red haired girl touches carefuly Tara’s face.



WILLOW

So... this is not a dream...



TARA

(Smiling and fondling Wllow’s red hair)

N-No. This i-is a real g-good morning k-kiss.



Tara bends her body again. Her lips touches Willow’s into a long and full of love kiss.



WILLOW

(With her lips still on hers and with tears on her eyes)

I missed you so much... I did so many things wrong.



TARA

(Helping Willow to sit slowly)

W-What happened sweet heart? I-I only can remember a s-sudden cold covering my body your s-scared expresion, y-your distant v-voice.



WILLOW

(With her eyes lost into the window)

We was here, talking. A bulet shoted by Warren passed across the window and... and h-hited you.

(Begins to cry strongly. Tara hugs her lovely)

You... you died in my ams. I turned myself insane... so much hate, pain. Magic... I used all my magical strength and learned the darkest rituals. I... I murdered Warren, Tara, I was so blind. I tried to destroy everyone... everything... f... forgive me please...



Willow, unabled to talk, hugs Tara with all her srenght. She helps her to calm down some seconds.



WILLOW

(Still crying, but not as before)

I traveled to England with Giles almots a year ago. He helped me... to control myself. I came back some weeks later... All was so hard, look them again to their eyes... I returned with Dawn to England again few days ago... That’s the last I remember... I don’t know how this miracle happened... I was there and now I’m here again... with you... alive.



TARA

(Shocked)

I-I don’t remember anything e-either. Only s-some seconds of d-darkness. All s-sounds so u-unbeliveable. I-I think, my love, i-is better forget all, all the m-mistakes. I-I put myself in your position, I’d turned i-insane too. This year w-was the real dream, a bad d-dream... o-only a horrible nightmare.



The girls hugh them terderly. Joy can be read on their faces.



WILLOW

(Cleaning her eyes)

Oh, sorry, look at me... I’m a mess, I’m soiling you. I need to take a bath.



TARA

(Smiling)

Don’t be s-silly. It d-doesn’t matter but... (with shy expresion) if you w-want...



WILLOW

What, baby?



TARA

(Still shy, but smiling)

I c-could help you.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Giles is laided down on the sofa waking up slowly, with the firsts rays of sun. He puts his eyes glases and fits his shirt’s neck. He scans the room with his sight. There’s no body there. Slowly, begins to stand up. The british turns when hears some steeps from kitchen direction. Dawn aproaches to him with a glass full of shiny natural orange juice.



DAWN

Good morning. Waking up early too, don’t you?

(She puts the drink on the coffee table)

Here you are.



GILES

(With his tipycal British accent and siting down again)

Oh, thank you, Dawn. Yes, there is many questions to do. Have been a very strange nigth.



DAWN

(Smiling)

Yeah, werid, but absolutly wonderful I’d said. So marvelous... so romantic I hope.



GILES

(After drink a bit of the juice)

Yes... It could be another point of view, dear. It is incredible, has been the most wonderful thing have happened here in many time. But the facts... think about them: our recent memory has going out, you and Willow appeared here and Tara not only but alive too! This is more than a “simple miracle”, Dawn. There is something more behind this.



DAWN

(Watching to the stairs)

And don’t forget our sword boy up stairs... But I would rather don’t think about the facts and simply enjoy the “miracle”.



GILES

(After drink another bit of the juice)

Oh, yes, our little well weaponed visitor! Is he still up staris?



DAWN

Yeah, sited in front of the room’s door. I’m goint to give him some of juice too.



GILES

(Cleaning his eye glases)

And a loyal young bodyguard from an unknown dimension. I insist, all this is too bizarre.



In that moment, the phone rings. Dawn presures and takes the call quickly to avoid the ringer noise.



DAWN

Yep!?



VOICE (OFF)

(With British accent, more than Giles’)

Good morning, miss. That is the Summer’s residence, am I right?



DAWN

(Surprised and talking better)

Y-Yes, this is. Can I help you?



VOICE (OFF)

Yes, you can help me kid. Is there Mr. Giles, Mr. Rupert Giles?



DAWN

Yes, he is here. Who is talking?



VOICE (OFF)

Tell him I am an old friend, please. Can I talk with him now?



DAWN

(Covering the phone with her hand)

Giles, is a british guy, without a doubt. He says he is an old friend of you



GILES

(Taking the phone)

Thank you, Dawn... Yes, who am I talking?



VOICE (OFF)

My old friend Rupert... Have passed a long, long time since the last time we talked, do you not think?



GILES

T-This is impossible... Loyd, Loyd McHagen?



Dawn, who is walking to the kitchen stops when listens the name, trying to remember something, but nothing happends.



LOYD (OFF)

Awsome memory as ever. You have not lost your abilities.



GILES

The last events do not support that afirmation, but forget it... what is the reason of your call?



LOYD (OFF)

(Laugthing softly)

Precisaly, my call is because... the last events... witch envolves a girl, who should be six feet underground, but, instead, is with her girlfriend on a warm bed again. Am I right?



GILES

(Shocked)

W-Wow do you n-now that.



LOYD (OFF)

If my memory does not fails, I was banished from the Council ten years ago for my knowledge, my friend. So, I think that is a stupid question from your part. I need talk with you... face to face. I have an important proposal to do. I am lodged into the small Inn called Raymond’s outside town. My room is the number 1-5. Come as soon as you can.



The call finishes suddendly. Giles, still shocked, is still standing there, whith the phone in his hand. Dawn passes thought his side with the glass of juice.



DAWN

Something bad, Giles?



GILES

No... no dear. Listen, I have to leave by a moment. I will be back soon.



DAWN

Don’t worry. I will take care of all.



Giles goes to the main door and takes an old fashioned dark gray jacket. Dawn smiles to him and begins to go stairs up.



DAWN

Good luck Mr. Mistery.



GILES

(With his sight still lost)

Oh, yes, good bye, dear.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (SECOND FLOOR) – DAY



All the place is immersed into shadows and dark areas. It’s too early and all room’s doors are closed, which avoid the still weak rays of sun. At the left side of the Willow and Tara’s room door is sat Eldarth, with his knees up and his arms arround his legs. His eyes are closed too. Dawn aproaches slowly. “He is sleeping” the girl think, and begins to watch him detailed: So serious expresion on a so young face... like an adult jailed into a boy’s body, his toasted and well formed thin body, his pointed ears, like if they were puled out from a fairy tale, his straight; dark and long hair, his clothes and weapons... and hybrid betwen a gracefull knight and a savage barbarian.



Immerse into her thoughts, she scares when hears his voice.



ELDARTH

(Without open his eyes)

Can I serve you in something?

(He opens them and watches Dawn)



DAWN

Ohh, sorry, I didn’t know you...



ELDARTH

Don’t worry, I was only resting my eyes.



DAWN

Here you are, something to drink



Eldrth stadns and aproaches to the girl. His weapons clincs softly with each move. When he takes the glass, watch it with curiosity.



ELDARTH

You must be a very rich family



DAWN

(With her sight inmerse into the dark and deep L’veth’s eyes)

Ah, sorry? No, rich, we... No, no way.



ELDARTH

This bootle is made of glass, must be very expensive.



DAWN

(Makes her typical eye roll, buts smiles friendly)

Oh, no. This is not expensive here, he, he.



ELDARTH

I see.

(Drinks some of juice)

This is very tasty, thank you, miss.



DAWN

(Smiling)

Did you like it... I made it by myself. It’s orange juice.



ELDARTH

Orange, curious name... Sorry, but can I ask you something?



DAWN

(More realxed)

Of course.



ELDARTH

Are Tara and Willow... a couple?



DAWN

Yes, they are



ELDARTH

(With his eye brow down)

But they are both women... that is... weird... It’s not natural.



DAWN

(Unpleasant)

Hey! They are happy in that way... Willow and Tara are the best couple I’ve seen!



ELDARTH

Ok, ok... calm down. I didn’t want disturb you. Only was a commentary. That is not my matter.



DAWN

Ok...Did they wake up?



ELDARTH

Yeah. They are taking... a bath now.



DAWN

Have you been listening all!?



ELDARTH

(Smiling)

Hey, I didn’t want to, but my ears are not ornament, you know?



DAWN

(Smiling too)

Yeah... I think you’er right, but spy is not right. Go stairs down whenever you want... You’re a kind of bodyguard, not a guardian dog. I’m going to find a room for you.



Dawn begins to go downwith watching over her shoulder



ELDARTH

Thanks, but I want to introduce myself to them. I’ll go down later.



EXT.- RAYMOND’S. INN – DAY



The inn is the typical place that can be found at one side of a road: long, with a line of room doors on the front side. Giles examines carfuly the numbers painted on the doors. He finaly finds the number 1-5. He knocks the door and it opens noisily with the first hit. The british enters slowly.



INT.- LOYD’S ROOM IN RAYMOND’S – DAY



GILES

May I come in?



The room is into darkness, with the curtains closed. The bed is done as it was not used last night. At the bottom of the place, a gray male figure wearing a long coat, with a weak glass shine al face level, covered by shadows, is sat on a chair. At his right side there is a little table with a smoking tea-pot and a couple of cups on it.



LOYD

(With his typical and strong British accent)

Be wlecome to my humble place, Rupert. Sorry, but was the better I could find. But do not worry, I will not stay here for long time. Do you want a cup of good English tea?... or you want a soda like all the people in this country? You must be used to drink that now.



GILES

(Very serious)

I did not come here to hear your sarcasm, my old friend. I am sure you have better things to say.



LOYD

(Filling a cup)

You are right... I only wanted “break the ice”, is that the expresion here? Please, close the door and take sit.



Giles takes one little tabouret near from the door and gets closer. Finaly he can see his friend face well. His eyes are deeper and his expresion harder than tlhe last time he saw him. But the cinical smile is the same, now a little more sinister, may be. Loyd gives hin the smoking cup when the watcher takes sit.



LOYD

(Filling the other one)

So, a lady has woken up from her long dream under earth. Finaly.



GILES

(Putting the cup aside)

How do you now that?



LOYD

Giles, you think your Slayer is a very important person, don’t you? Of course, that is a stupid question. And all the Council think the same... The Slayer here, the Slayer there, you and they can not see beyond your pionted and fully british noses.



GILES

Loyd, you know that your scotch ascendency never was a reason for your banish...



LOYD

Be quiet and listen, Rupert! That is not the point now! The Slayer, your Slayer, is only a little link... of a huge and more important net. World’s fate is ingraved on stone... but mistakes, like you and the Council did almost a year, could have break that stone. Fortunatly, destiny is engraved on steel.



GILES

Sorry, Loyd, but I am not understanding anything.



LOYD

Miss Summer, the actual Slayer, have been only a piece which have been surrounded by others more important. For example, Angel, the souled vampire, will take part from the apocalypse... but Willow... and Tara are destinated to become the Gates of a new era, which will become after the end of the days. Do you think is casuality the boy that arrived in the night?... He is called “Gate keeper” in his world. They don’t know why, it is only a tradition, but that name has its reason. Buffy has been the beginning, Angel is going to be the end, but Tara and Willow will be the future... Everyone and everything’s future.



GILES

(Shocked)

That... that theory is...



LOYD

(Smiling)

Weird, strange...?



GILES

(Standing up quickly and violent)

Unacceptable! Almost ten years after you were banished, you appear here and tell me a history like that and wait I belive you!



LODY

(After drink some of tea)

Calm down. I did not came here to only tell you this. If you belive me or not is your problem, not mine... and I was banished by my knowledge, remember?



GILES

(Angry)

Which was adquired by dark ways!



LOYD

(Angry)

Do you or the Council has evidence from that?!



Giles takes his eye glases and walks arround the room, but don’t say anything.



LOYD

I came because I have a proposal for you and the ladies. I want to take Tara and Willow with me to New Orleans. I will give them house and a place into the most important University from that city. I helped in the building of its library, the must impresing on all the south. I am one of its accionists too. So, there is no problem. The girls will have everything they want, even jobs.



GILES

(Angry)

Why do you want to do that? What will you gain? Magic... you want their magic, disgusting leech!



LOYD

(Disturbed)

Shut up, you fool! I only want to protect them, from moorons like you and the Council’s decitions! I want to be their watcher, their guide. I want to teach and train them for their destiny.



GILES

(Furious)

I can not accept that! I don’t belive you, traitor! There is something behind all this and is not good!



LOYD

(Angry)

Fool, blind and deaf as ever, Rupert! Ever with the wrong side! You know something? I don’t want their magic! I don’t need to use lent magic like you did to try stop Willow when she needed more support! Do you know why, stupid?...!!!



Suddendly, Loyd stands up surrounded by a gray mist. He extends his right hand to Giles. The watcher is thrown by the air, striking a wall with his back. Giles’ feet do not touch the floor. He takes his neck like if he would be trying to avoid be hanged by an invisible force. Loyd begins to aproach to him very slowly.



LOYD

Because I have my own! And now, we will go to talk with Willow and Tara and you will support my proposal.



GILES

(Fighting)

F-Forget it. Y-You are crazy. Arggg!!!!!



LOYD

Well, if you want it this way.



From Loyd’s left hand begins to leave a burst of gray mist. It introduces by Giles’ eyes, mouth and nose. Loyd slowly makes him land.



LOYD

And now, we will go to talk with Willow and Tara about my proposal.



GILES

(As it never happened)

Of course, I think it is wonderful. They will love the idea. I will support you.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (SECOND FLOOR) – DAY



The girl’s room begins to open. The sound of the lock makes Eldarth to stand up with a graceful jump. He stands in front and takes out one of his long swords with his right hand, grabing it with the edge down, using it like a cane. Willow and Tala leave the room. Both have their hair wet. The red haired witch wears a straightless dark green top and tight-fitting black pants. Tara wears a long pale brown skirt, a white top and a long brown sweater. Both are suprised when watch the strange boy stand in front of the door.



WILLOW AND TARA

(Surprised)

Wow!!!!



Eldarth bows and bends on his knee like a medieval knight. He downs his head in respect signal.



ELDARTH

My ladies Tara and Willow, I am Eldarth, L’veth and natal son of Lordganthnora. I’ve been sended here to protect thee over my own live. In my name, my people’s and my ancestors’s, I offer my seven swords, which are here to serve thee.



TARA

(Shocked)

W-What is a-all this?



Willow keeps watching the young L’veth some seconds and smiles.



WILLOW

(Smiling)

I don’t understand anythig either, but I have the feeling I know you.

(Turning her head to Tara)

May be he played part in this miracle. What do you know, young friend?



ELDARTH

No much. As all of you, my memory is not well. I only know this is what I have to do.



Willow and Tara bends themself too to watch Eldarth face. Willow takes his face carefully



WILLOW

C’mon. You don’t need all this formalism. You’re welcome. Nice to meet you. I am Willow.



TARA

I-It’s an honnor, Eldarth. N-Nice to meet you too. I’m Tara.



Eldarth down his head again, and instinctivaly takes Tara’s hand and kiss it, putting his forehead on it after that.



ELDARTH

No, It’s my honnor to know thee both.



Willow and Tara looks each other.



The trio stands up.



TARA

C-Come on. Let’s go d-down.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Dawn is sat on the sofa watching tv. When she sees Willow and Tara are coming, trows the remote control and runs smiling. She hugs Tara.



TARA

(Smiling)

H-Hi, honey. Sorry, w-we had not much time to t-talk yesterday.



DAWN

(Happy)

God, God, we missed you so much. You can’t imagine!



Tara turns her face to Willow and smiles her softly and tenderly.



TARA

(Watching Willow)

I t-think I can, s-sweet heart.



Dawn hugs Willow too.



DAWN

(Talking quickly)

Come on. Let’s go to the kitchen. I made a big breakfast to celebrate this day. It’s not the better I’ve made... I’m not pretty good cooking, but it’s done with much love.



WILLOW

That’s the most important ingredient... for everything.



TARA

Hmm D-Dawn cooking. M-Many things h-have changed here.



Eldarth, who has been following the couple, gives some steps to Dawn.



ELDARTH

(With a smile but with his typical deep sight)

And... which things are you good for?



DAWN

Well, I’m not bad kicking undead asses.



Tara Turns suddendly



TARA

Dawn! W-Watch your vocabulary!



DAWN

Sorry... but it’s true.



TARA

(Smiling and taking Willow’s hand)

D-Definitively, y-you have many things to t-tell me.



The group enters to the kitchen.



FADE OUT



FADE IN TO



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



The main door is opened. Giles enters and puts his jacket on the coat rack with normal behavior, even relaxed. Behind him, enters Loyd. His cinical smile and hard expresion has changed absolutly. He looks kind. Doesn’t leave his long and dark gray coat like Giles does. Loyd carries a black leather briefcase too.



GILES

Welcome in, Loyd.



LOYD

Thank you. A beautiful place you have here. American, but nice.



GILES

Yes, I agree. It’s very comfortable. Where is every body here?



Some female laughts are listened fom kitchen direction. The british pair walk to there.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (KITCHEN) – DAY



Giles knocks the door and enters only half of his body. Willow, Tara and Dawn are sat arround the table talking and laughting. Eladarth is stand at left side of the freezer, watching a glass which has in his hands and listening. Everyone turns and see Giles.



DAWN

Giles! You’ve finally arrived!



WILLOW

Good morning, Giles. Please, come and eat something.



TARA

H-Hi. We are talking a-about things I’ve lost. T-The good ones of c-course.



Eldarth only makes a respect gesture with his head.



GILES

Good day to all of you too. But I want to intoduce you first someone who has may things to tell you too. Good things of course.



The british opens more tho door. Loyd enters.



GILES

This is Loyd McHagen an old friend from England.



Willow and Dawn makes a soft head shake like if they wolud be remembering something but nothing happens again. No one notice this.



LOYD

(His british accent is stronger than Giles’)

How do you do? It is a great pleasure know all of you.



DAWN

Sorry, mister, but... Do I know you?



LOYD

I do not think so, dear. This is the first time I come to Sunnydale.



DAWN

Forget it... you look so similar to Giles... That’s all. Nice too met you.



WILLOW

Yes, you look very similar. Are not you family?



GILES

No, no, Will. Loyd is from England, but his roots are from Scotland. Am I right?



LOYD

McHagen... yes, and I am very proud of them.



TARA

S-Sounds like mine!



LOYD

(Smiling, very kind)

Yes, miss Mc Clay, your last name is typical from my ancestor’s land. Who knows? May be we do have some grand grand grandfathers in common.



Willow turns similng to Tara and kiss her hair.



WILLOW

(Whispering to Tara’s ear)

Who’d said. My baby is from Nessie’s country.



Tara smiles her, takes Willow’s hand and kiss it.



TARA

(Smiling and Whispering too)

Come on, we have visit here.



Willow “comes back to the earth” and turns to Loyd.



WILLOW

Sorry, sir, but... how do you know her last name?



LOYD

As Rupert said, miss Rosenberg, I have to talk many things with you both. But I would rather accept the invitation you made to Giles to eat first, if I do not disturb you, of course. Let’s relax first...



Loyd enters and begins to take sit.



LOYD

... and celebrate miss Mc Clay’s miraculous return to live.



Every one, except Giles, gets in shock when listen that.



FADE OUT.



END OF “SCOTTISH FACTOR” CHAPTER 2. FIRST SEASON.



































Prayer of Gehenna
 


The start

Postby WTsnuggles » Sat Sep 28, 2002 11:54 am

Hi there



First off I think you have a great start to your story and it is very interesting.



I understand that English is not your normally langauge so quiet a few things do not read to well. Perhaps one of the Kittens here if you wish would be more then happy to help you. Please take this in the spirit it is intended and not an insult. I love your story.



Snuggles





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Re: The start

Postby WilTaraFan » Sat Sep 28, 2002 3:23 pm

That's a good start to a good story. Can't wait for more.



Kudos!!!

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Thanks for your Support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Mon Sep 30, 2002 8:38 pm

I want to thank you for all your support!!!!!!!!!!!! Specialy to Snuggles and WillTaraFan. Chapter three is almost ready. To friday I should be doing the update.



I'm happy you enjoy the history. I enjoy write it too!!!!! But, as you know, English is not my natal language, so I would like to find a Beta reader. Please, If anybody want to help me with this, tell me.



MAGIC BE WITH ALL OF US :willow :tara





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W&T "The series". Chapter 3:"Hi and Later

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Fri Oct 04, 2002 5:55 am

Willow & Tara "The series"

SEASON 01: Chapter 03: Hi and Later



CAST OF CHARACTERS

Willow

Tara

Dawn

Loyd

Eldarth



GUEST CHARACTERS

Giles

Buffy

Xander

Anya



OTHERS

Anthony

Dr. Walterman



EXT.- ARCHAELOGICAL MESOPOTAMIC EXCAVATION (MIDDLE EAST). (PRESENT DAY) – DAY



A huge group of people is arround the ruins of an antique mesopotamic reilgious temple. It has the yellow-red color like the sand over all landscape. The sun is as big and hot as a fireball few inches on the workers. An awsome green truck is parking in front of the main gate. A lot of chains leave from the vehicle’s back part.



INT.- MESOPOTAMIC RELIGIOUS TEMPLE – DAY



A group of seven native workers enters to the ruins carring the chains, leadered for a male young archaeologist. He has huge eye-glasses, and black hair absolutly wet by sweat. The place is iluminated by torches and some oil lamps. A little and dark entrance can be seen at the bottom of the chamber. The group begins to enter to the little entrance.



INT.- MESOPOTAMIC RELIGIOUS TEMPLE (SARCOPHAGUS CHAMBER) – DAY



A serie of stairs drives down to another chamber, full of colums decorated with engraved sculptures and images of snakes. In the middle of the room, there is a huge sealed sarcophagus made of stone. It is decorated with snake images too. The archaeologist gets closer to the sarcophagus and takes one walkie-talkie from one of his pockets.



YOUNG ARCHAEOLOGIST

(With south accent)

I insist, Dr. Walterman, this little chamber is thousands years older than the rest of the building. Over.



DR. WALTERMAN (OFF)

(With south accent too. Distortion noise)

I copy, Anthony. I believe you. Can you take out the sarcophagus from there? We have a plane waiting for us in four hours. Over.



ANTHONY

I think so, but I must use some little charge of explosives. It is holded to the floor with some kind of snake head shaped stone clips. Over.



DR. WALTERMAN (OFF)

(Distortion noise)

I copy that. Be careful, Anthony. I’ve been waiting your signal. Over.



ANTONY

Ok, doctor. Over and out.



The young archaeologist puts a small back pack on the ground and takes out some little plastic explosives. He gets closer to the sarcophagus and puts his hand careful over it.



ANTHONY

Ok, little teasure. Time to make a travel.



He begins to put the explosives on the six “stone clips”. Later, prepares the trigger.



ANTHONY

(To the workers)

Ok, guys, let’s go stairs up quickly! This could be dangerous.



The group leaves from the chamber... A little serie of explosions sake softly the place. Some sand falls down. From the broken rest of the clips, a strange red mist is dropped.



INT.- INSIDE OF THE SARCOPHAGUS – DAY

All is absolutly black an nothing can be seen. A sound like heart beat and a soft but animal breath begins. Two red little lights, like eyes, rips the darkness.



Antony enters again but the mist is not there.



ANTHONY

(Excited)

Great! Succes!. Come on, guys, let’s enchain this baby to take it out!



The group begins to work and tie the sarcophagus in very short time.



ANTHONY

(To the Walkie-Talkie)

Dr. Walterman, we are ready. You can begin to pull it out. I will guide you from here. Over.



DR. WALTERMAN (OFF)

(Distortion noise)

I copy that. Congratulations, son!



EXT.- ARCHAELOGICAL MESOPOTAMIC EXCAVATION – DAY



A mechanism into the truck begins to enroll the chains. Some time later, the sarcophagus leaves to the sun. All the workers celebrates the succes. Antony and the workers leaves from the temple. An old man, with a long withe mustache, wearing short pants, fully pocketed jacket and little eye-glases, hugs the young archaeologist.



DR. WALTERMAN

Great job! So many months and finaly it’s over!



ANTONY

This is a grat day, Doctor!



DR. WALTERMAN

Yes, it really is. Come on. New Orleans’ Museum waits.



FADE OUT



FADE IN TO



EXT.- HIGH WAY OUT SIDE SUNNYDALE – DAY



A little group walks across a lonely way surrouded by trees. They are Buffy, Xander and Anya. Buffy wears an almost riped out dirty white top and dark bluejeans. Her golden hair is a mess. She has in her right hand a broken axe, almost destroyed. Xander wears a ragged hawaian shirt, and dirty pants too. He has a pieces of something was a good crossbow once. Anya, who has a old and big and almost toasted book in her hands, has her clothes make a disaster as her partners.



ANYA

What a hell happened with that vampires?! They were a lot, but they became like crazy!... Oh... I quit to try to do magic again! When is Willow going to come back?!



XANDER

Come on, you was not so bad... and remember, Willow shouldn’t do magic. You must to get over it... But it’s true... those vampires became suddendly... almost invincible...



BUFFY

(With her sight lost)

I can’t still believe I had to stake the last vampire twice to kill it.



XANDER

The first half of the nest was easy... but the last one...



BUFFY

Incredible... I’ve never seen some thing like that. May be they drank some altered blood stolen from a laboratory, who knows?



The group continues their tired walk, like three tortured souls.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Giles is sat on the sofa with Dawn at his right side. Eldarth is stand near the stairs, with his typical deep sight, hearing their conversation without say anything.



DAWN

(Sad)

But why? Why he wanna took them with him? He... He can help them without take Willow and Tara away.



GILES

Dear, this is the better. He is a very wise man. He can help them to make their lives better. They will study in a great University. The girls will have a brigther future there. But calm down, they are still talking. The final decition is in Tara and Willow’s hands.



There are some seconds of silence. A tear runs on Dawn’s face. She snifs a bit and cleans the tear.



DAWN

You... you know what, Giles?...



GILES

What, dear?



DAWN

...If Willow and Tara move to New Orleans... I... I will go with them!



GILES

Dear... you can’t...



DAWN

(Standing up)

Giles, I’m not going to stay here an see how the two persons I most love go away! I love you, and Buffy, and everyone, but... understand, Willow is my best friend and Tara... have been like a mom for me!



GILES

(Serious and taking his eye-glasses)

We’ll talk about that later. This is not so easy.



DAWN

(Going to the stairs, angry and crying)

It is for me!!!



When she is begining to go, Eldarth takes her shoulder.



ELDARTH

(Wispering)

I understand you... Family is not only the one you have, is all you feel like. Don’t worry I will not let them go alone either. This “guardian dog” will be with them ever, remember?



DAWN

(Sniffing)

T... Thank you, Eldarth!



Dawn hugs to the L’veth. The boy is surprised and doesn’t know how to react. Slowly, he begins to hug to Dawn too.



ELDARTH

(Nerveus)

Be... Be careful... swords are sharp.



Dawns leaves him and smiles.



DAWN

If you are going to come...

(She louds her voice and watches to Giles)

...with us...

(returns to normal)

...you need some clothes. Yours is not bad... but is not... right to be here, you know? I should leave and find something cool to you. It will make rest my mind.



GILES

(Standing and going to Dawn)

That’s a great idea. Take some dollars. There are some into my jacet’s pocket.



ELDARTH

What’s wrong wih my clothes? Don’t worry, it’s no neccesa...



DAWN

Take it easy! I need leave.



Dawn take some bills and leaves from the house.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (KITCHEN) – DAY



The kitchen’s curtains are closed. A warm dark can be felt into the room. Three figures are sat arround the center table. Two of them have their hands together each other. They are Willow and Tara, who has their sight almost lost, sunk in thinkings. In front of the couple is Loyd, with serious but kind expresion. They have a lot of time alone talking in there.



LOYD

So, girls, this is my proposal. I know this place means a lot for you, but think about your future. I promise be your guide... your help. I really need your help too. And... as I said, I don’t know how this miracle happened to you, Tara, but destiny is ingraved on steel, there is no doubt about it. I could help you to figure it out... or you both can only accept it, live it and enjoy it as a God’s gift... a wonderful gift. Willow, I swear I will help you with your magic. I will learn you how to use it in the right moment... and now Tara can do it too, I know. I’m not going to castrate your power, but magic is a tool, not a way.



TARA

W-Wise words, Mr. Loyd... Y-Your proposal is w-wondeful, but...



WILLOW

(Turning to Tara)

...we need time to think it. Understand, so many unexplained things have happened in so few hours... and now this... Please give us some time.



LOYD

Of course, I understand. Oh... I forgot. Do not think this is a try to buy your decition...

(He takes the briefcase and puts it on the table)

...but I know you need this, Willow.



Loyd opens the briefcase and takes out a wonderful and shining next generation i-book. The last creation in technology. He puts it in front of the girls, who watch with their jaws open.



LOYD

Research spells are slow if you compare them with this beauty.



WILLOW

I... I c...can’t accept it!!!



LOYD

Come on, you must accept a house and a place into the best Univerity on all south if you take my proposal. This is nothing... It is only a gift.



He stands and begins to leave the kitchen



LOYD

Take it, please.



Willow and Tara remain alone into the kitchen. Some seconds pass before one of them say something.



TARA

W-What do you t-think?



WILLOW

I don’t know, baby...



TARA

L-Let’s go to the b-bed room.



WILLOW

Yes... we’ll talk better there.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Willow and Tara leave the kitchen. Eldarth is stand at left side of it. Tara turns to see him and puts her hand, with care, on his head.



TARA

Hey, E-Eldarth.



Giles and Loyd are sat on the sofa. They watch the couple.



WILLOW

(To the British pair)

We... are going up stairs to discuss your proposal, Mr Loyd.



LOYD

Don’t worry, take your time.



The girls begin to go to the second floor. Eldarth begins to follow them.



GILES

(To the L’veth)

Eldarth... stay here. They will be well.



ELDARTH

But!...



GILES

Do not worry, it is a safe place in here.



LOYD

(Whispering to his “friend”)

I do not think the girls believe that... They will accept the proposal, I know.

FADE OUT



FADE IN TO



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (WILLOW & TARA’S BEDROOM) – DAY



Tara is sat on the bed. The girls expresion is deep, serious. Willow keeps stand and wathches the hole on the window. Some air enters by it and moves the curtain softly.



TARA

What do you t-thik?... N-No... What do you w-want, my love?



WILLOW

(Without see Tara and sad)

This year have been so hard. A lot of time I thought didn’t lose you only, but my friends too. Slowly I recovered them, but without you, nothing was the same... Do not think bad, but now you are back, baby, nothing will be the same either. I’m not going to lose you again...



Tara stands and hugs Willow’s hip tenderly by behind and puts her chin on Willow’s right shoulder. Willow covers Tara’s hands with hers.



WILLOW

...each time I see that hole I feel hate, fear, much fear. I know, I should love this place... Sunnydale is my home... is our home, the place I knew you... (She begins to cry) But that dammit hole!.. Is the evidence this place is not safe for us, baby.



Willow turns to Tara and hugs her with all her strenght.



WILLOW

(With tears on her eyes)

Tara... you are the most important to me. I don’t want to risk you here, again... I made my decition... I want to go. But I will accept your decition, whatever it is, angel.



TARA

(With some tears on her eyes too and taking Willow’s face with her hands)

I will be w-with you wherever you g-go. Forever and e-ever.



Tara begins to aproach Willow’s face to hers. Their lips become together into a tender kiss.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Giles and Loyd are drinking some of tea. Eldarth is sat at the bigining of the stairs playing with one of his gladiuss, making it spin over his right palm.



GILES

They have a lot of time up there, do not you think?



LOYD

Do not worry, Rupert. Is not a easy decition. I mean, look, this town is all for them. Moving never is easy, you must... we must know that.



The main door begins to open. A huge white paper bag with a blue store logo can be seen. Dawn enters to the house. She watches for a second to Eldarth and smiles him. She turns to the British pair.



DAWN

(Nervous)

So... Did you already talk with them, Mr. Loyd?



LOYD

Yes, I did, kid. They are up stairs, talking.



DAWN

I... I see. Take this Eldath, I bought some things to you. Go and prove them!



ELDARTH

(Shallowed)

T... Thanks



The L’veth downs his head, guards quickly his weapon and takes the bag.



EXT.- SUNNYDALE’S STREETS – DAY.



Buffy’s group keep walking across sunnydale’s streets. The day have advanced a lot. They look tired and swept.



XANDER

Next time let’s take a cab.



ANYA

(Sarcastic)

Yes, c’ause you are going to stop it with the crossbow, or buffy’s axe, better!



BUFFY

Come on, guys. We are near home.



INT.- SUMMER’S RESIDENCE (LIVING ROOM) – DAY



Eldarth wears a white sport sweater made with nylon. It has a hood which helps to cover his pointed ears. His pants are made of nylon too, very sport and comfortable. They are dark green. A pair of white spotr shoes complete the custome. There is only a detail, over all the new wear, are the leather belts which support his lethal weapons. Dawn watches him.



DAWN

Hmmm. Better



ELDARTH

It feels so strange, bt it’s not bad. Thanks Dawn.



DAWN

(Making her eye roll and smiling)

Oh, that was nothing. You’re welco...



Steeps begin to be heared. Tara and Willow have left the bed room. The girls go staris down hith her hands together. A mix between nervousism, sadness and decition can be seen on their faces. Eloyd and Giles stand and go quickly and stand in front of the stairs. Dawn and Eldarth turn to the couple, who are forced to stop in the middle of the stairs. The girls see one each other. Tara assents slowly with her head. Willow presses Tara’s hand, like she was looking for support. Tara presses hers, understanding her signal.



WILLOW

All of you know Sunnydale is our home... and... and all have happened so fast this last hours...



A big smile is drawn in Dawn’s face



WILLOW

... But... we have thought this a lot. We... can’t forget the events that happened here a year ago. We think nothing of this can be coincidence... The miracle, Eldarth, your arrival and proposal, Mr. McHagen... We accept it... we are going to move to New Orleans.



The smile on Dawn’s face fades, but a big, almost paternal, smile, appears on Loyd’s face. Giles smiles too, but with his sight down and with a sigh. Dawn’s expresion becomes strong. She makes a big effort to do not cry. Willow and Tara give some steeps to her.



TARA

D-Dawn, we...



Dawn suddendly turns to Loyd.



DAWN

Well... Mr Loyd, I made a decition some hours before. You have to take me with you too!



WILLOW

Dawn, honey...



DAWN

(To the couple)

Don’t worry, girls. No body more than me understand your decition. Everyone have told me I have to “grown up”... Well, this is a life choice I want to do by my own! Willow, Tara I feel you as my family... and, as Eldarth told me, that is enough be one... This year have been hard to me too. I love you guys... I’m not going to leave you alone.

(To everyone)

I go to New Orleans too. Nothing can make change my mind!



TARA

Those w-words were beautiful, Dawnie... But you m-must talk with B-Buffy before.



DAWN

(Smiling again)

I will.



ELDARTH

(Putting his wnew hood apart)

I hope you have more horses, Mr. Loyd. You now I will go with they to the edge of the world if it’s necessary.

(He begins to take one of his long swords)

But if you don’t want I go, you will have to talk a bit with all my seven friends.



GILES

(Taking his forehead)

Oh, God... This is unacceptable...



LOYD

(Laughting and smiling)

Do not worry, Rupert! I felt something like this could happend. I came for two, but I knew I would go with more. Everyone calm down. Of course you will come with us, Eldarth. I do not “need” talk with your weapons. Dawn... I will make some calls, but, as americans say, will be “a piece of cake” find you a place in the best school of New Orleans... which is near of the University. You two are welcome!



A huge happines can be felt into all the living room. Suddendly the main door is opened. The ill-treated trio, leadered by Buffy arrives to the house.



BUFFY

Finaly, we have arrived! Hey Gil...

(She stops with her eyes wide open)

Dawn, what are you doing he... Willow... Ta... Tara?!!!!!!!!!!!!!



XANDER

(With his jaw open and looking to the couple up stairs)

Ta... Tara?.........



ANYA

This... this is not another Shapeshifter demon joke, is it?!!!!!!



FADE OUT



FADE IN TO



EXT.- AIRPORT IN MIDDLE EAST – DAY



Dr. Walterman and Anthony go out from a dirty brown jeep. The wind is strong, with a lot of dark an yellow sand. Dr. Walterman holds his hat strongly. They run to the transport truck which contains the sarcophagus. Many workers and the two archaeologist take it out very carefully. A huge plain is parked on the road. A native aproaches quickly to Walterman. The wind noise is so loud, they must scream to talk.



NATIVE

Mr. Walterman, weather is too bad! This travel should not be done!



DR. WALTERMAN

No way! This piece must arrive to New Orleans’ Musseum as soon as possible! The weather could become worse. Let’s put this into the airplane dock now! Time is running out! They have been waiting for this too much!



NATIVE

Okey! As you say, doctor!



The men begins to take the sarcophagus to the plane.



INT.- INSIDE OF THE SARCOPHAGUS – DAY

Nothing can be seen. There is only a soft and heavy breath sound.



FADE OUT



END OF “HI AND LATER” CHAPTER 3. FIRST SEASON.



























































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Re: NEW Fan Fic: Willow and Tara “the series”. First Season.

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