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To all Kittens!!! My W/T TV swow project first chapter!!!!!

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Thu Sep 12, 2002 10:11 am

From: Prayer Of Gehenna

To: All Kittens



Here you are, kittens. A promise is a debt: the first chapter of my W/T TV show proyect.



Please, put one eye on it and GIVE ME ALL THE FEEDBACK YOU CAN. I LOVE YOUR HELP.



ENJOY. I'M PUTTING MY HEART ON THIS



Characters: Most characters are own of Whedon and Mutant Enemy. Only the idea, some characters and scenarios are mine.



Feedback: Yes, Please... this is for all of you!!!



This is a hibrid script (literal and technical). Not all suggested camera shots are here



PD: Sorry, English is not my mother lenguage





Willow & Tara "The series" (suggested name) Pilot project.

SEASON 01: Chapter 01 Love beyond reason: Part 01: Eternals



The story begins with Willow's voice OFF, with a DOLLY IN from



EXT. - GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE IN ENGLAND - NIGHT (DUSK) to



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE IN ENGLAND. BOOK ROOM - NIGHT (DUSK)



"I'm here again, not with Giles, but fortunatly not alone. He offered his home, here in England, for Dawn (she needs a rest of her new training) and me. But my mind has not rest. My heart has not stopped to cry. I feel myself empty".



The shot enters by a window to a low lighted room. Willow is sited front a wood made table with a candle and some books on it. She holds something like a piece of paper with her hands.



INSERT of Willow's face. A tear runs down. Cut to I

NSERT of a Tara´s photo (The paper in her hands) The drop falls on it.



A door opens slowly. Dawn enters the room and closes the door carefully



DAWN

Do I disturb?



WILLOW

(Cleaning her eyes and sniffing)

No, honey. What do you want sweaty?



DAWN

(Slowly and sad too)

I thought we could go to town and have some of dinner



WILLOW

(Smiling)

Of course. It's a great idea. Let me go for my coat and... Dawn?



DAWN

(With scary expresion, she watches the window)

I... I saw somethig passing trought the window, Will



The sound of a old wood door opened is listened. Willow stands quickly and puts Dawn behind her. Dawn takes a pair of scisors from the table's cabinet. Steeps sounds flood the house and the room's door start's to open very slowly.



180° FAST PANNING from the door to the girls. They give some steps back. The doors is opened. A cold wind blow out the candle. A dirty and dark male figure is revealed



DARK MAN

(slowly, deep and with resonance)

Are you the believer? We need you. Bring it to us again...



The figure walks some steeps to the girls. His face reveals he is a very damaged vampire. The girls screams and try to get ready for a battle. Sudendly, the vamp's chest is opened in like a fast slash cut. A brillant blue light is dropped by the wound and he dessintegrates. The grils see one to other very scared.



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE IN ENGLAND. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT



Willow closes nerveausly the main door with key. Dawn is sitted with a quick breath episode



DAWN

Wha... what was that?



WILLOW

I don't know. Was so... strange



DAWN

Strange?... Scary you mean



Willow takes sit on her side.



DAWN

Believer?... What's that.



WILLOW

I don't know. I've never listened that before... I think.. better stay here tonight.



DAWN

Should we call the others? Must we return to America?



WILLOW

I will mail them tomorrow. Unfortunatly my computer is not good. We´ll go to town in the morning. Do you want someting to eat?



Dawn sees a long time Willow's eyes. Finaly she smiles weakly



DAWN

Yeah. A double aspirine sandwich should be great.



EXT.- ENGLISH TOWN STREETS - DAY



Willow and Dawn walks wearing brown sweater and a grey heavy jacket respectivly. Both are carring bags. It's a cloudy day. Willow stops in front of a small Cyber.



WILLOW

Well, I'm going to write to Giles and the guys. I's a great day, to be England, you know. Go and walk a bit. What do you think about a small shoping?. I'll be with you soon.



DAWN

Good. I´ll go to the next block's store. I saw very pretty things for us. We are going to be the center of the party back to Sunnydale with our English fashion style.



WILLOW

(Smiling)

Great, honey. See ya soon then.



INT.- CYBER - DAY



Willow types quickcly and drinks a cup of smoking chocolate. She looks like very serious. She stops a moment to see something on th keyboard. INSERT of the Tara's photo hold by some keys. CUT TO MEDIUM SHOT of Willow. She writes again and takes the mouse. CUT TO INSERT OF THE SCREEN the cursor clicks a "send" button.



EXT.- ENGLISH TOWN STREETS - DAY



Willow is walking to the store. She looks worried sudendly. She doesn't sees Dawn. Will runs to the Store's door. A selling girl intercept her.



SELLING GIRL

(With British acent)

Can I help you, miss?



WILLOW

(Worried)

Have you seen a girl here? Young, long and dark hair



ACELERATED 360° STEADY CAM ARROUND WILLOW. When the motion stops, the selling girl says:





SELLING GIRL

Does she looks like her?



Running, Dawn arrives from left side and takes Willow's arm



DAWN

(Exalted)

Willow, c'mon, I've discovered a great place, specialy for you!





WILLOW

Oh, God. Dawn, don't do that again! You scared me. I thought that something bad hapened to you, sweet heart!



DAWN

Sorry. That was not my intentions...



WILLOW

Ok. What do you want to show me?



Our girls walks down street and arrives to a hidden place into a dead end



EXT.- LIBRARY- DAY



They stop. Willow reads the name of the place: "Eye of eternals"



WILLOW

Yes, it's really a curious place.



DAWN

Let's come in. We could find something interesting to buy to make "Magic box" collection bigger.



WILLOW

Come on, honey. What can we find into a old and small old world's library?



Dawn stops and turns to Willow



DAWN

I'll made as if i've never listened that



EXT.- LIBRARY "EYE OF ETERNALS"- DAY



The library looks very old and dark. It's made of wood most of all. But... there's nobody in there. Despite of that, it looks like normal, with racks corridors.



Willow and Dawn enters in and look for someone.



WILLOW

There is no one here. We can come back tomorrow.



DAWN

Oh, Will. Come on. Let´s watch. I don´t want come back to the house very soon. You know why, don't you?



WILLOW

Ok, ok, let´s see.



The girls walk betwen the book racks for a while. Into the last passage (from right to left) Dawn reads a section called "Old pages"



DAWN

Look, Will, this is getting better



WILLOW

Was not so bad get in here.



PANNING FROM LEFT TO RIGHT TROUGHT A BOOK RACK LIKE IF SOMETHING WAS FOLOWING WILLOW'S BAG WITH SIGHT. CUT TO INSERT of a small semi Azteca - semi gargolye statue hidden betwen books. It's head turns slowly and small lightnings surround it. A secret doors opens silently behind the girls. When they are coming back, Dawn looks the new pasage



DAWN

Hey! Was this one here before?



WILLOW

I think it was, but we didn't saw it. Let's put one eye on it



DAWN

That's the spirit!



The pasage has stairs down. It's all stone made and has torches on the walls. The girls walk stairs down slowly. Down there is only a table and a rack with no more than nine books.



DAWN

Too much structure for only some books. This must be "the sale section" there's nothing.



WILLOW

Or "the most value section", look this.



Willow aproaches to the rack and look the books. All the inscriptions on them are very strange. One of the books has a color that looks like a kind of pale pink.



DAWN

Is it pink? A very uncommon color for a old book, don't you think?



WILLOW

Yes... but I can't understand what is written on it.



Willow takes the pink book very carefully and puts it down on the table. Both girls take sit. Willow opens the cover and try to understand the language. A strong wind enters sudendly the room. Willow and Dawn watch the door up stairs. When they back to the book both open wide their eyes.



INSERT of the book. It's pages show a beautiful but uncolored draw... a Tara's draw surrounded by paceful faces figures and a tree at her side.



DAWN

She... She looks like Tar...



WILLOW

(With her eyes full of tears)

No!... It's only a coincidence... a horrible coincidence.



She closes the book



DAWN

No, Will. I'd said a beautiful coincidence. Let´s take this book. May be we can buy it or rent it.



The girls go staris up and get close to the check out point, near from the exit door.



WILLOW

Nobody?



A door hidden into a wall behind the check out opens. A man of middle age, very Giles style with gray hair and cleanning his glases, rises from a room like bassment.



LIBRARIAN

(With British acent)

I'm not nobody, miss. Can I help you?



WILLOW

Oh, sorry. We'd like to buy this book.



Willow gives him the book and does not apart her eyes from the unknown, trying to se "something else" on him.



LIBRARIAN

Ladies, sorry, but where did you find it?



DAWN

Into a room with stairs down, the "the sale section" I think.



The man sees Dawn and rises one brow.



LIBRARIAN

Sorry, again, but that is not "the sale section" and I fear I can not sell it.



WILLOW

Oh...



DAWN

But we can rent it. Can't we?



LIBRARIAN

Even if you have the registration card, I could not rent it, ladies.



WILLOW

(Sad)

Well, sorry if we disturb you. Good day.



DAWN

(Angry)

Hey, this is important! Mister, What's the matter with you?! We can pay, we can give you our address and you can go for the book tomorrow! You don't know, but she is a great book handler and know how take care of this. She has older books!



LIBRARIAN

(Leaving the book on the check out table and turning back to go down staris again)

Sorry again ladies, but this is greatest than that.



WILLOW

(Going, head down, to the exit door)

Come on, Dawnie. I told you, it's only a coincidence.



Dawn watch the librarian and Willow. Makes a fast move with her hand, taking the book and putting it inside her bag. She walks fast to Willow's left side. FRONTAL MEDIUM TWO SHOT of the girls with SELECTIVE FOCUS on them. The librarian's figure is shown backgrounds at left side. He sudendly stops



LIBRARIAN

Hey, ladies...

(Dawn stops momentanly with scared face)

... if you want anythig else, my door is always open.

(Dawn relaxes and breaths out)



FADE OUT TO



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE. DAWN'S ROOM - NIGHT



Dawn is on her bed watchig carefully the book. Only a lamp gives light to the country style room. She is amazed. The book shows several images of someone like Tara. She pases many pages and finds one picture of a triangular amulet. Willow's voice is listened



WILLOW

Dawn, do you wanna help me cooking some for dinner?



DAWN

O... Of couse. I'm coming Will.



Dawn closes the book and puts it below her pillow. She leaves the room quickly.



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE. KITCHEN - NIGHT



The girls are working in something to eat



DAWN

What do you think about the guy in library? Too much serious.



WILLOW

Too much British I'd say.



DAWN

That book. Too much coincidence. I swear is Tara in that pages... eh... page.



Willow begins to cry



WILLOW

Tara...



DAWN

Oh... Willow, sorry I don't...



WILLOW

Don't worry, sweaty... I miss her so much... I need her so much...



The girls hugs them one to other



WILLOW

Why, Dawnie, why... Tara... Tara...



CUT TO



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE. DAWN'S ROOM - NIGHT



Some thunders begin to roar... and the Dawn´s pillow is slashed and the feathers fly in the air. The book opens alone.



CUT TO



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE KITCHEN - NIGHT



The lights begin to turn on and off. Willow rises her head. Her eyes are absolutly black. The thunders remain their roar.



WILLOW

(Scared)

What's this? What's happening?



DAWN

Oh, no... the book



WILLOW

Book? What book?... Dawn, what did you do?!!!!!!!!!!!



FADE OUT



TO BE CONTINUED





What do you think, kittens. Did you like it? I'll wait your answers



MAGIC BE WITH ALL OF US...

Edited by: xita  at: 12/29/02 7:41:52 pm
Prayer of Gehenna
 


Re: To all Kittens!!! My W/T TV swow project first chapter!!

Postby pacou » Thu Sep 12, 2002 12:49 pm

Yeah, I definitly like it! :)



Very, very thrilling!

And what about that bool? :hmm



We'll somehow get to see Tara alive again, won't we?



More please :)



:peace -Viv-

--------------------------
Don't dream it, be it

Rocky Horror Picture Show

pacou
 


Re: To all Kittens!!! My W/T TV swow project first chapter!!

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Thu Sep 12, 2002 2:59 pm

This is pretty good can't wait for next update!! What's up with the book having Tara's picture?? Okay it might not be her's but it's similar.



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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. Angel in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Thanks for your support. Round 2 is ready to go!!!!!!

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Fri Sep 13, 2002 8:42 am

Whoa!!!!!!!!!! 55 visits. I'm realy glad, specialy with pacou and xwickedxwiccan (thanks for the feedback).



As I told before, the most important of this project is your support and ideas (Let's give a lesson to Mutant Enemy Team and show them how the things must be done!!!!!)



To everyone that didn't write: come on!!! is the FIRST PART of the FIRST CHAPTER of the show (three parts left). Don't be dissapointed.



I need your support and ideas. For example, a lot of kittens think that New Orleans should be a fantastic scenario for the show (nothing of Sunnydale or L.A.). My answer is: Why not? if you help me, we can work on it.



Joss Whedon and ME took our favorite couple away. I'm gonna try to bring them back to us, at least on this board.



Wait for more!!!!!!!!!!! I made a little advance once: All new characters as Eldarth and The Rune Master. Incredible places as the Cathedral of bones and The Gods' Grave.



Something about a regular castig for the show?? Of course: Willow, Eldarth, Dawn, a guy called Loyd, Guiles (may be) and.... ( :tara ? He, He, He... You have to read to know)



Sorry again for my English. I will work harder. No more talking, enjoy the second part of "Love beyond reason": Hope



Thaks This is for all of you: Prayer Of Gehenna.

Prayer of Gehenna
 


Chapter one: Love beyond reason. PART II: Hope

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Fri Sep 13, 2002 9:18 am

Characters: Most characters are own of Whedon and Mutant Enemy. Only the idea, some characters and scenarios are mine.



Willow & Tara "The series" (suggested name) Pilot project.

SEASON 01: Chapter 01 Love beyond reason: Part 02: Hope



Feedback: Yes, Please... this is for all of you!!!



PD: Sorry, English is not my mother lenguage



PD: I'm not going to write more the suggested camera shots. I'm going only to write a literal script this time. It'll make all easier and faster.





Our story continues with Willow sufferig a strange magical reaction to something.





INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE. KITCHEN - NIGHT



The kitchen's lights are turning on and off over and over again. Dawn is droped on floor covering her eyes, very scared. Willow, with her eyes totally black, is surrounded by lighning bolts. Suddenly, all stops and Willow falls down.



DAWN

Willow!



She runs to Willow and helps her to stand up very carefully.



WILLOW

(Dizzy and tired)

Wha... What was that... Dawn, which book are you talking about... Oh no... You stoled...!



DAWN

No, no, Will... I only took it by today. I thought put it back tomorrow, I swear.



The grils take sit



WILLOW

You did wrong!



DAWN

I know, but... Willow, this was more than a coincidence... the book is full of Tara's images... or someone who looks like her. And you... the cry... all began when you...



WILLOW

Called her? That can't be. We must return that book... now.



DAWN

More than that. The librarian must know something. Willow, I'm sorry... I scared me so much... you momentaly looked like...



WILLOW

...When I get mad because...

(Tears runs from her eyes)

... Tara's death... Come on we must go back to the library.



INT.- GILES' COUNTRY HOUSE. DAWN'S ROOM - NIGHT





Willow and Dawn go to the room, when they open the door, get paralyzed by fear... feathers are still flying and the walls are black as they were burned by something. Carefully Willow aproaches to the bed and takes the book. The girls go out from the room very quickly.



EXT.- ENGLISH TOWN STREETS - NIGHT



The girls run quickly across the dark streets. The sky is flashed in times by the fall of lightnings and the sound of thunders surround all. Rain begains to fall. When the pair is arriving to the Library's ally, a fast green lighted vortex apears on the floor. Willow and Dawn stops suddendly.



DAWN

Ahhhh!



WILLOW

What a...



From the furious vortex, a very tall and muscular figure emerges... a horrible creature covered by brown dirty hair, with pointed low big ears, the mounth full of all direction fangs and with several horns like needles on his head. It has a kind of huge turtle shell with spikes on its back. The monster holds the biggest double hand axe ever seen in its claws. The eyes are two black twisted vortex.



CREATURE

(With ressonance)

Believer...



The grils get ready for the fight. Dawn avoids the first slash of the monster and kicks (without effect) it's face. The creature hits her with its claw and throws Dawn away.



CREATURE

(With ressonance)

Not with you...



Willow tries to stop the creature with a earth spell. "Gaia explotare" she says, then the floor sections below her hands explodes. The rocks consecuence of the explosion flies to the monster, but it crush them with its fists and axe.



CREATURE

(Angry)

Die, Believer!!!!!!!



The moster charge with all its strenght to Willow. Dawn only can stands up, wery weeak and dizzy. When the enemy arrives near of Willow, a strange green blast hits it from behind. The creature is jailed into a huge and billant green ball that gets little and little, to finally dissapear. From shadows, a male figure, covered with a gray coat walks to the girls.



LIBRARIAN

I think you were looking for me. Am I wrong ladies?



WILLOW

No... Thanks... but wha...



LIBRARIAN

(getting closer and helping Dawn)

Miss Rosenberg, you are so weeak, so out of power. What have done that Council's fools to you? Or did it that useless of Giles?



DAWN

Hey!



LIBRARIAN

You're not in position to say too much Dawnie kid!!!! Come, follow me.



The trio walk slowly to the ally's end. There's no more rain, lightnings or thunders, only a dark night with a clouded full moon.



WILLOW

Wow do you kow our names?



LIBRARIAN

You'd be amazed...



INT.- LIBRARY "EYE OF ETERNALS"- NIGHT



The Doors opens and the librarian entrers. He quits his coat and puts it quickly on a coat-rack. He walks behind the check in-out table and opens the door to the secret bassament. The grils remain under the main door.



LIBRARIAN

Come in... Are you vampires and need any invitation? Willow... this is important for you, belive me. Let's go staris down.



INT.- LIBRARY "EYE OF ETERNALS" BASSAMENT- NIGHT



The bassament is, like the other secret passage, enterely made of stone. There are several old fashion lamps and a great wood table with books and extrange things (like kind of spell components) on it. Some walls has old and huge closets. Only one thing does not fit: a brillant ultimate generation Mac on a little corner table. The librarian arrives first and takes two chairs.



LIBRARIAN

Take sit, please. Do you want a cup of tea?... Of course, where are my modals? You both are all wet.



WILLOW

(Taking sit and looking deeply to the guy)

Yes, thanks, but... we'd like more that you explain us all this, if you can, sir.



Dawn remains stand behind her friend, looking all arround.



LIBRARIAN

Well, first of all, sorry for not introduce me before, but I was not very sure If you were the right persons . I am Loyd, Loyd McHagen...

(Loyd lows his voice and aproaches to the girls)

Willow... what would you say if I tell you that you can bring Tara... your Tara, back?



The eyes of Willow flood again in tears, deny with her head and low her head. Dawn gives one step to Loyd...



DAWN

(Unpleasant)

Hey... If... If you are playing with her, I swear...



WILLOW

(To herself)

It... It can't be. O'Cyrus told...



LOYD

I'm not playing... O'Cyrus you said dear Willow?... He is a looser, a pour god that only know about mortals' death, but not what is beyond the flesh and blood...



WILLOW

I don't understand.



Loyd takes three cups and fill them with hot tea. He gives them to Willow and Dawn, taking sit later.



LOYD

You must remember that old family legend about Tara.



WILLOW

Which one?... Oh... no, no...That about she was a demon?



LOYD

Yes. Well, that was a lie but not enteraly. Can you give me the book?



DAWN

Here you are... Sorry I didn't want...



LOYD

We'll talk about that later, kid.

(Loyd opens the book and show one draw to the girls)

Tara is not so human as you think... Her real nature is a holly one... She is a godess... from another dimension.



Willow and Dawn open their eyes wide open



LOYD

Well, she is human too, like you two... The fact is that she is of a very rare kind called "Reflection god".



WILLOW

(Withe tears in her eyes)

I´ve never listened something like that... I don't understand anything.



LOYD

She is a godess of serenity, peace and happiness, but her power works... when she encarnates into a mortal body and finds her real happiness by herself. She is a god but she doesn't know it.. ever.



WILLOW

And you mean I...



LOYD

You are her happiness. It's no coincidence your name is Willow. Look.



Loyd shows to the shocked friends the book again. The draw shows a tree at right side of the Tara's image.



LOYD

The Willow tree... A magical plant destinated to support the godess and give her energy... the magical energy...



DAWN

...of love.



LOYD

That's right. Willow, all you are is not a coincidence and all the power you got after her death either.



WILLOW

But, she... she is dead.



LOYD

No, she is not. Only her body and was by... no natural ways... her normal life cycle was interrupted suddendly by mortal ways as O'Cyrus said. She is now trapped and the wolrd she protects is going down. I don't need to ask you if you want bring her back. Do I?



WILLOW

(Crying)

This is a dream. I can't belive anything. I want to, but sounds so...



LOYD

Strange, I know. You must be strong, because make she returns will not be easy, and more if your magical forces have been castrated in the way I think. You canalize it bad in that moment... anger and vengance desires... You had not the correct guide... everyone closed any posibility to you. I understand... but, miss Rosenberg, you're still the most incredible and powerful spell caster on earth... I hope.



WILLOW

(With her eyes closed an with her hands in fists)

Even if I weren't, I'd do anythig to bring her back... if all you have said is true. Sorry if I don't belive you, but you must understand... Has been almost a year without any ray of ... hope...



LOYD

I know Willow... Let´s go, we have a lot work to do.



The librarian stands up and takes a cristal bottle with a shining red liquid inside it and a old yellow scroll.



LOYD

It's a bless you be here Dawn. Willow is going to need your help... Go now to Sunnydale and...



DAWN

Wa, wa, wa, wait... go to Sunnydale... now? We're two hours from the nearest airport. The fyl will take hours and our return passages are dated for...



LOYD

Who need airplanes? Don't you think, miss Rosenberg?



Loyd extends his left hand to a nude and grey wall. A blue whirlind ray leaves from it and hits vilolently the cold stone. "Abrire to luminus restums" he says. A portal, showing Sunydale's graveyard at other sides, opens. Willow stands up quickly and amazed by that demonstration of power. Dawn sees with her mounth open.



LOYD

(Very serious)

Listen me very carefuly, Dawn. We need that you disinter Trara's body...



DAWN

What!!!! No, I can't...



LOYD

You want to see her again, Don't you? You want your friends' happines, Don't you? So... you must have courage... You need to find some magic handler too.



DAWN

Who?



WILLOW

(Sitted again and with her right hand holding her head with worried expresion)

May be Anya...



LOYD

No, Anyaka is a demon, not a witch or warlock...



DAWN

May be some of the College Wiccans



LOYD

Oh no, no!!! What are you thinking? This is not a job for unbrained amateurs in any way!!!



WILLOW

Giles is the only one...



LOYD

Yes... looks like that jerk is the only one could handle this. And not very well I have to say.



DAWN

I insist, What's your trouble with him?



LOYD

Have you listened somethig all I've said? All this waste of time and Willow's power has been his fault and all that moorons of the Council!!!!!!!!! Well, find him. Once you have the body, tell him pours this potion on it and conjures the scroll. It's a powerful regeneration spell. Put Tara on the place she died and stay waiting there next to her... that's all. Do you get it?



DAWN

Yes... I think



Loyd aproaches and gives her the bottle and the scroll. The Librarian puts his hands on Dawn's head and whispers very close of her ear:



LOYD

Your friends and their shining furure depends of you.



The eyes of Dawn gets full of tears. She sees Willow.



DAWN

Will... your prays... our prays... have been listened... Count with me... ever.



Dawn runs and enters into the portal, which closes once she does it. Willow can't say any word. She is only deep brething and feelig how her heart is near to explode. Has been too much just for one night.



LOYD

Well, Willow, as you imagine, your part is the hardest of all... and now Dawn is gone I must tell you... there's no guaranties you succed. If one thing Giles and the Council are right is that your body, a mortal one as it is, may no support the inmense power you're going to handle.



WILLOW

(Standing up and watching the librarian)

My body doesn't matter. My heart and soul are enough... and they will support anything... Nothing can be worse the pain I've been suffering.



LOYD

That's true. Well it's your turn. Take the book and open it in the page marked with a little and thin purple rope.



Willow takes breath and stands, takes the book and watches the page. Loyd puts appart the center table, openig space arround our witch. When he finishes, walks and stand front Will.



LOYD

(With hipnotic tone)

Now Close your eyes and put your mind blind. Take the book and and listen me well... The only thing you must remember... no mater what happend... is read the words written on the page I told you. Relax, Willow.

(Wishpering for his own)

This is going to hurt.



The man extract a dark powder from his pocket and blows it to Willow's face. THE SECUENCE OF TARA'S DEATH IS SHOWN WITH RESSONANCE AND ECHO SOUND EFFECT. Willow begins to shake and repeats the words she said in that moment (she is living it again). Suddenly, Willow opens her eyes. They are absolutly black and full of fury again. Her hair have changed its color too. The floor begins to break and the spell caster is surrouded by big black clouds and lightning bolts which hit violently everything. Loyd remains stand and is not affected. Only wishpers: "the book... read it"...



Willow begins to read the strange language. The book, and wooden made things turns into flames. Willow dissapears with a violent explosion that makes a hole where she was. All the things stops burning. Loyd opens his eyes and begins to aproach to a near closet.



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. CANYON BATTLEFIELD - DAY



Willow opens her eyes very slowly. She has a tired expresion, she's normal again. There's hard noises surrounding all the place, but she listens them as if they were very far. Confused, begins to see the place she is... a endless landscape like a great canyon, with huge needled pikes and abrupt red earth and orange rock cuts. The sky is dark blue, with dark gray clouds and... full of flying creatures, like pales and deformed dragons, spitting brillant blue blasts to wood bridges that conect the pikes.



A boy with long broawn hair tied as a ponny tail aproaces to Willow. She sees him, but is too much confused to say anything. The boy has pointed ears (like an elf) and wears leather made pants, boots and belts arround his chest. His back is full of swords: two bastards and one two handed in the middle. Has two long swords holded by his hip belt and two short, gladdius kind, swords, tied to his legs.



BOY

(With his brow down and very serious)

Are you the believer?



Suddendly, blue and brillant tatoos begins to appear on boy's body and face. He starts to transfom: he becomes taller, stronger, his hair grows longer, unties and changes to white color, a short and white beard and mustache grows from his face. He is getting older. The boy changes from a young weapon keeper to a experienced and amazing warrior, with the body full of blue tatoos. Then, he takes out one of his bastard swords and reanudes his walk to Willow.



AMAZING EXPERIENCED WARRIOR

(With menacing tone of voice)

I've been waiting for you...



INT.- LIBRARY "EYE OF ETERNALS" BASSAMENT- NIGHT



Loyd opens the closet and takes out... a pale Loyd corpse!!!!!



LOYD?

Sorry... I have to do it...



FADE OUT



TO BE CONTINUED





MAGIC BE WITHA ALL OF US.

Prayer of Gehanna

Prayer of Gehenna
 


Re: Thanks for your support. Round 2 is ready to go!!!!!!

Postby btvs sara82 » Fri Sep 13, 2002 9:46 am

This is the first fan-fiction I read here, in this board, you know, not having a lot of times, makes me cry reading Willow and Tara happy together and alive, english not my natural language, so, I'm not the expert here, but, I like it! (really) :clap



I like it very much, and belive me, I'm so thrilling for the next chapter, who's this Loyd not Loyd, it will be difficult to wait for it....

I like this Dawn-Willow centric, i mean, you do better Dawn than Joss, with her "get out get out"..... :wink

Willow&Dawn&Tara would be a great family!



Hmm..............hope to see "Tara" too........ :blush :grin





Sara





Ps: Willow and Tara forever! :pray



Edited by: btvs sara82 at: 9/13/02 9:01:02 am
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Re: Thanks for your support. Round 2 is ready to go!!!!!!

Postby pacou » Fri Sep 13, 2002 1:34 pm

Yeah, again very thrilling! :clap



And 'ugh', when Im thinking of the corpse...:puke



Hey, by the way, whats your first language? English isnt mine either... So we can make all the grammatical mistakes together ;)



Thanks, Im curious to see what happens next! Hope that spell will work :pray :pray :)



:peace -Viv-





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Don't dream it, be it

Rocky Horror Picture Show

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Re: Thanks for your support. Round 2 is ready to go!!!!!!

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Fri Sep 13, 2002 2:56 pm

You know I didn't need that barfing picture but I know how you feel. I like the story so far and can't wait for update.



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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. Angel in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Thank you guys. You are the most important of all this.

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Sat Sep 14, 2002 4:30 pm

Thanks, thanks, thanks. Pacou, XWickedXWiccan, Btvs Sara 82, you're all very special. :rollin



What a lot of visits!!!!!!! :shock . I hope all others be enjoying this like you do, guys.



My natural languge is spanish. I read and talk well english, but is my first time writting in this way!!!!! So, forgive me all mistakes I've done. :



Are you ready? two parts left to finish the first great chapter of this "proto series". If I count with your support, this first "season" (what professional, doesn't it?) will have 20 chapters (this first count as four, of course). I want some ideas too.

My mail is: orianice@hotmail.com



A bad new, is that I'm going to come back to my university studies very soon, so since the sixth chapter the serie will not be updated so soon as this days. But I will make an effort to do it weekly. I will notice all of you.



Part 3: Steps is ready to go!!!!!!! Enjoy it.



Thanks again.



MAGIC BE WITH ALL OF US (and :willow & :tara too)



Prayer Of Gehenna. :grin









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Chapter one: Love beyond reason. Part 3: Steps

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Sat Sep 14, 2002 4:58 pm

Characters: Most characters are own of Whedon and Mutant Enemy. Only the idea, some characters and scenarios are mine.



Willow & Tara "The series" (suggested name) Pilot project.

SEASON 01: Chapter 01 Love beyond reason: Part 03: Steps



Feedback: Yes, Please... this is for all of you!!!



PD: Sorry, English is not my mother language



PD: I'm not going to write more the suggested camera shots. I'm going only to write a



literal script this time. It'll make all easier and faster.









Our story continues. Dawn has pass across a potral to Sunnydale, Loyd remaisn in the Library's bassament with a corpse of himself and our dear Willow has make a smashing magic travel into a warfare kingdom of another unknown dimension, having an encounter with a extrange and dangerous shapeshifter warrior.



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. CANYON BATTLEFIELD - DAY



The warrior begins to arrise his sword to Willow, who tries to react.



AMAZING EXPERIENCED WARRIOR

(Watching behind the confused witch)

Don't be stand there, believer!!!!!!!!! Head down!!!!!!!!!!



Willow turns to se how a horde of seven creatures like the one that appeared when she was with Dawn going to "Eye of Eternals". The monsters are charging and making a brutal battle cry, swinging their terrible and huge weapons: two handed axes, heavy maces and great morningstars. One is too near of Willow and is going to slash her with its weapon. The spell caster reacts and ducks down. The withe haired warrior do something looks like impossible: trows his bastrad sword, which flies, sipinning. Monster's head is off.



AMAZING EXPERIENCED WARRIOR

(Taking his sword and charging to the creatures)

Come on, believer!!!!! Do something you too!!!! Show me what you've got!!!!!!



The fighter and many of the creatures crahes into battle. His moves are fast and lethal each one of them: one swing for each sword he has: one monster who falls to ground. But some succed flanking moves and aproaches to Willow, who gets ready and makes a powerful "repulsion" spell which hits strongly the creatures and makes them lose balance and fall. Her sight has a determination never seen before.



WILLOW

Love... love is what I've got



EXT.- SUNNYDALE'S GRAVEYARD - NIGHT



Dawn sees arround. Incredible, she's really in Sunnydale! Takes a short time to ubiccate herself. Walking a bit, finds Tara's grave. Dawn watch it with serious expression.



DAWN

Hold on Tara, I'm gonna take you out of there...Giles, I must find Giles and the guys!



She begins to run taking way to her house.



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. CANYON BATTLEFIELD - DAY



The warrior stabs, with his two handed sword, the last creature Willow made fall. He turs to her.



AMAZING EXPERIENCED WARRIOR

Ok. If we don't hurry, a lot more of this crabs will be surrounding us again.



WILLOW

I agree, but, wait... I need...



AMAZING EXPERIENCED WARRIOR

We'll talk later. Do you see that forrest?

(He points with his finger to a group of trees)

Very inside of it is my village. Let's go!!!!!!!



Willow begins to run. The sword handler follows her watching all arround. There are creatures all arround, fortunatly very far. The monsters fight bravely with the pale dragons, climbing the rocks and trowing things from the high, and very unsecure, bridges.





EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GREAT FOREST - DAY



Willow and the warrior stop running when they're well inside into the forest. The warrior changes again to his "boy" form.



BOY

(Talking without watch Willow, but all arround like a ranger)

So... you are the one that keeps our Godess still alive...



WILLOW

Do I?



BOY

(Stopping his march and stabing his sight in Willow)

You are the believer, aren't you?!!!!!!! The reason of our Godess, Tara, in her mortal life!!!!!!!



WILLOW

Yes, yes. Sorry. It's all so confuse.



The boy wtch her from up to down slowly with a serious expresion, almost out of his aparent age (no more than 18). Then, he starts to walk again.



BOY

Well. And... tell me... what are you? Which race you are?... and which is your relation with our Godess in her mortal live.



WILLOW

Race?... Well... I'm a human if that you mean. Relationship? I was... no... I am her grilfriend!



BOY

(Stopping againg and turning to Willow)

What?!!!!!!! Great!!!!!!! Of all races into all minnor dimensions, our Godess choose the weakest!!!!!! And, did I hear well? Grilfriend? Our God is a Godess, you know? Why would she coose another girl as her reason of life!!!!! She could have choose a man, a great warrior to defend her!!!!!!! Now I understand why she is near to dissapear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Willow stops. Her eyes turn into black and a wind begins to hit her hair. Slowly, she aproaches to the now scared boy.



WILLOW

(Furious)

You... jerk... can say anything about our race... I know we are weak... but that's the reason why the little thing we do are bigger. In other topics...

(she makes him levitate. The boy tries to repel the effect shaking himself very scary)

...You're talking about the person I love more than my own life, and my relation with her... no one cryed her dead more than me, and I will do it until I have her live into my arms again... If you, little piece of scum, talk in that way again I'll crush your empty head without use my hands... and belive me... this usseles and weak human can do it.



Willow lets him fall to ground. The boy watches her and downs his head



BOY

(With repentance)

Sorry, miss. I didn't want to... but you must understand. You must think some times that your God or Gods don't hear your prays, but know that he, she or them must be busy... or playing a game bigger you can't understand... Althought you don't know what is have no God or that he or she can't hear you any way. We have been alone and hopeless, with our lands engaged into war and pain... I'm Eldarth, miss, sorry again.



WILLOW

(Normal again and smiling sad)

I understand, Eldarth... I know what is to be hopeless... and no listened. But that's going to change. I'm Willow.



ELDARTH

Willow... Like the magical and holly tree of our Godess!



WILLOW

...Yes



Eldarth and Willow begin to walk again to the Eldarth's village.



EXT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE GARDEN - NIGHT



Dawn is running to her house, but stops... there's not any light on. She checks her watch



DAWN

Oh, I forgot about the time change... Well that does'nt matter now.



She aproaches to the door and knocks, but nobody answers. Then, she remembers something and checks her jacket's pockets. Luck! Dawn finds the house's keys! Very hurry, Buffy's sister opens the door and enters.



DAWN

Buffy?! Guiles?! Somebody?!!!!!!!!



When she begins to go stairs up, a light is turned on. A British acent arrives to her ears.



GUILES

Buffy? Have you arriv...? Dawn!!!!!!!!!! Ho.. How this c...?



Dawn runs to the watcher and hugs him.



DAWN

Guiles!!!!! Thank God!!!!!!



GUILES

What's this?!!!!!!! You should be with Willow at England!!!!!! When did you arrive?!!!!!!



DAWN

(With fast breath)

Guiles, Guiles, There's no time. We have to hurry!!!!!!



GUILES

What is happening here, Dawn? Something bad?



DAWN

(Very excited)

No, no, it's somethig wonderful, but we have to run, now! Where are the others?



GUILES

They are out of the town, into a cleanning nest mission... but calm down! How is this possible...? I don't...



DAWN

I will explain you later... I think we're going to need a shovel... No, better two!!!!!!



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GREAT FOREST - DAY



Willow turs to Eldarth and watches him.



WILLOW

Well, am a human, but, what is your race, young figther?



ELDARTH

I'm a L'veth. We are the main race here, as you're in your world.



WILLOW

And, what's the name of this wolrd... my love's protected world (whispers to herself)



ELDARTH

This is Lorganthnora. It's called the last frontier too. The last and ultimate dimension. The only one where the Gods, demi gods or demons has no powers. That's the reason why our blessed Godess, Tara, is a Reflection Godess. She has not influence on this land with her holly escence only. Her happiness out there becomes energy here.



WILLOW

But, the creatures...



ELDARTH

I told you, we're Godless. He have no protection now. Those creatures are worse than demons. We call them Scavengers. They are a vicious materalization of chaos and evil. They're not a race. Their only reason of life is cause the apocalypse on unprotected lands and dimensions. They come in thousands and one has the power of hundred demons.



WILLOW

But they were easy to you... All of your race... change like you did?



ELDARTH

Oh... that... no, I'm the only. I was choosen before I born. I've been trained all my life...



WILLOW

You're like Buffy, a slayer.



ELDARTH

Mmm... you know her?



WILLOW

She's my best friend.



ELDARTH

I see. A glad surprise i've heard somethig about the slayers. No, I'm not a slayer. The ones before me, and those who become after me are called the "gate keepers", figthers of final days. We have the power of summon the spirit and experience of all our ancesters. That's my name's meaning: summoner of the elders. Slayers are only very powerful humans who confront small menaces in your world. We are thousands of years of experience into one person. One of us is an entery army by himself. Our world is not so frequently menaced as yours, this is a pacific land, but each transition like this is one step to an Armageddon. As you see, be a slayer here is nothing.



WILLOW

Awsome... Eldarth, don't worry, I'm going to bring Tara. I swear.



ELDARTH

All this world has it's hope on it. Come on, we must arrive to talk with my grandfather: Village's Elder. He will tell you what to do.



EXT.- SUNNYDALE'S GRAVEYARD - NIGHT



Dawn is walking with Giles to Tara's grave. She has two shovels and walks with determination. Suddenly, Giles takes her shoulder to stop her movement.



GILES

Dawn, all that you have said has no sense!!!!! Tara a Godess? A librarian that opens portals and knows about dimensions and wolrds never listened before? And Willow the believer?

Think, this is too much suspicious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



DAWN

(Angry)

I told you, I saw every thing. The pictures of Tara as a Godess into an ancient book, and Willow's reactions. I kicked the face of the most powerful and horrible thing I've ever seen... And crossed the portal to here!!!!!!!!!! Loyd is right, dammed!!! Looks like you and everyone want to close the door to Tara's and Willow's happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



GILES

Wait... Loyd you said? That's librarian's name?



DAWN

(Calming down a bit herself)

Yes, Loyd... Loyd McHagen



GILES

Oh my God...



DAWN

Do you know him?



GILES

So many years witout know anything about him... Dawn, that man was the powerfulest member of the Council...



DAWN

But he's not older than you!



GILES

I know. He got knowledge beyond every member... even me, even the older one. He caused a dangerous lost of balance into the Council. He almost became the Council by himself. Was acused of handle dark forces to get all that knowledge... and was banished from it. He was a great friend. I lost contact with him several years ago...



DAWN

So...



GILES

If really was Loyd... I have no doubt about all you have told me... I swear, Dawn, that man knows almost anything, even things we've no idea. I insist, this is too much weird, but the name of Loyd McHagen is a guaranty, very dark, but a guaranty.



Slowly, betwen the shadows, two figures gets closes and closer to Guiles and Dawn, while they talk. Two young male gang vampires have located their dinner. The first wears a black leather jacket. The other one is a blond crazy face guy, with an old black t-shirt. When Giles finishes his phrase, the pair jump from a ruined angel statue.



LEATHER JACKET VAMP

Look, two bags of food!!!!!!!



CRAZY FACED VAMP

Yeah my brood... one fresh and other one with consistence!!!!!!!



Guiles and Dawn react imediatly. The watcher checks his clothes, to discover he has no stakes with him!



DAWN

Go away, blood suckers, we have things more important to do than kick your dead asses!



LEATHER JACKET VAMP

Oh... you, your grandpa and... the army behind you, girl? Ha, ha.



The blond haired jumps to Dawn. She trows one shovel and defends herself with the other one, hitting the atacker's head. The other one charges, but the girl reacts fast and kicks his chest two times, finishing the attack with a spining kick to the face. Giles says to Dawn he has no stakes, quickly takes the shovel which trowed Dawn and hits again the crazy faced vampire, who layed on the ground and was trying to grab Dawn's leg. The Slayer's sister reacts to the Gile's advise and hits the shovel with a tomb stone, breaking it in the grabing side.



LEATHER JACKET VAMP

Good legs, kid, but not so good with the "weapons", ha, ha, ha.



DAWN

I'd don't say that, fool.



Dawn turns with great agility and grace, staking the laughting vampire with the broken side of the shovel. The undead stops laugthing. Only a scream of pain is listened... and the ashes falls to the ground.



DAWN

Giles!!!



The girl trows the improvesed weapon to the British, who takes it and hits the knocked out vampire from his back.



GILES

(Breathing quickly)

Great job, Dawn. Buffy... Buffy would be proud, as I am.



DAWN

I have great trainers, don't you think?... Well, will be difficult cave with this shovel now, but we must do the effort. Come on, Giles. Time is runnig out!!!!!!



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. ELDARTH'S VILLAGE - DAY



The travelers arrives to a village middle aged stile, but with Aztecan style details, like statues forms and the center of the market place, which has a low pyramid stair builded. The houses, made of wood and stone, and almost everything, has twining plants all arround, but all is so clean and shining like if hundred drops of cristals surround all. A lot of L'veths recive the travelers: Males, females, childs. They talk with a strange language, and their eyes are full of hope with Willow.



ELDARTH

Welcome to At'nara, my home. My Grandpa waits.



WILLOW

(Smiling and wishpering to herself)

Beautiful... The people, the place you protect, my love, is like a dream...



Willow and Eldarth arrive to a small red tend, beautiful decorated with draws like the tatoos on Eldarth's skin when he changed.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. ELDER'S TEND - DAY



Sited on ground, there is a very old L'veth, very similar to Eldarth's warrior form, but too much older and weaker. Has the face covered with blue draws, and wears a cream colored soft tunic. Has a rose book in front of him.



ELDARTH

Grandfather... I did it. I found the believer.



ELDER

Our Godess still smile us, my son. A girl, the believer is a girl... ha, ha.. a strange, but tender spin of our Godess... Please, sit my girl... What's your name?



WILLOW

Willow, sir, Willow Rosenberg.



ELDER

(With tender laught)

Oh... ha, ha, ha... what a coincidence too.

(Takes the book and opens it. A draw of Tara, with the tree at her side is on the pages, exactly as the shown by Loyd)

Like her holy tree!



WILLOW

That book! I know it.



ELDER

It's our holy book. Our Godess book. So, did you recive my message?



WILLOW

What mess... The vampire!!!!!!



ELDER

Oh, well they are unsouled creatures, easy to posses thougt astral planes across dimensions, dear. Sorry if I scared you.



WILLOW

Don't worry, sir.



ELDER

Well, I'm proud to meet someone with your power and love, dear. Have Tara all time into your thoughts has manteined her escence. If wasn't because you, she would had disappeared. I don't know much about what to do, my children, but I know who... Eldarth, you and the believer must go... to the Cathedral of bones...



ELDARTH

With The Rune Master?... This is going to be a hard work.



ELDER

Yes, I know, but he'll tell you what to do. Dispite all, this is his home world too. Rest a bit and go. A pleasure, my lady. Good Luck... I will not tell you that our Godess be with you, 'cause she is into your heart more than anything.



WILLOW

Was a pleasure, sir. Thanks for your trust.



When Willow leavers from the tend, the elder stops Eldarth and gives him a little piece of paper.



ELDER

Eldarth, you know you must protect her... but your work will not finish when she acomplishes her way here... My son, you've grown up very fast... you have my own father eyes, and yours... you will be the greatest "gate keeper" of all... you don't belong here now!!!!!



ELDARTH

But... Grandpa!!!!!



ELDER

Listen me well. Be with her wherever she goes, when you see the shining white blast, jump, without fear, into it...



ELDARTH

I don't understand anythig!!!!!!!!!



ELDER

Put the note into one place you know you will read it. But don't do it until... (his tears begin to get full of tears) you leave Lordganthnora... and us , son.



ELDARTH

No... This can't be...



ELDER

(Standin and taking the young L'veth by the shoulders)

Your place and destiny is at our Godess side. There's no more honor than that, son!



ELDARTH

(Crying)

I'll do it... for you...



ELDER

For all your world. Only remember, son, our ancesters will be ever with you... remember ever, ever that.



Eldath leaves and watches Willow, who is admiring the place. The L'veth ties the note to the grabing side of his right long sword, and begins to walk to the witch, cleanning the tears on his eyes.

The travelers take some fruits and clear water an begin to leave behind the village. SLOW MOTION EFFECT: FRONTAL MEDIUM TWO SHOT OF WILLOW AND ELDARTH, WHO IS BEHIND, WITH SELECTIVE FOCUS ON THEM. BACKGROUNDS, THE L'VETS SAY BYE WITH THE ELDER LEADING THEM.



FADE OUT



TO BE CONTINUED

Prayer of Gehenna
 


Re: Chapter one: Love beyond reason. Part 3: Steps

Postby XWickedXWiccan » Sat Sep 14, 2002 5:56 pm

Yay update!! :grin I wish they had a emoticon with a happy dance but I guess this will do. :bounce :bounce :bounce

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Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love, the clarity of hatred, and the ecstacy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bare. If we can live without passion maybe we'd know some peace. But we'd be hollow, empty rooms, shuttered, and dank, With out passion we'd truly be dead. ANGEL in "Passion"

XWickedXWiccan
 


Thanks for reading!!!!!! Part 4 is almost ready!!!!!

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Mon Sep 16, 2002 9:52 am

Thanks for reading, guys. I beg and apologize again for my english writting, but I'm making a great effort.



Remember, this fic have been written as script, so is not as "beautiful" as a literal fanfic. Sorry to all.





Sorry (again), but I can't update the part 4 today. I'll do it tomorrow. I promise.





Have been a long way, but Willow quest is almost over!!!! I'll try make this last part better, exciting and thrilling than others (and longer too)



I hope you like the characters I've made (and the way I tried to solve the great mistake of those ME jerks did)

setting a scenario for a show centered in our loved couple ( :willow :tara )



Ah... to my dear btvs sara82: Loyd will be a regular character. He's a very complex character, and has a lot secrets arround him.

Discover them will be an important topic in this first season (and even the second one, may be). So, keep reading to do it!!! into every chapter may be a clue!!!!



"Love beyond reason" is in count down to finish... but will be the begining of all other adventures for Willow... and... Tara???? who knows he, he, he.



I love you all.



Prayer of Gehenna





Prayer of Gehenna
 


Re: Thanks for reading!!!!!! Part 4 is almost ready!!!!!

Postby btvs sara82 » Mon Sep 16, 2002 5:25 pm

Again, compliments to you. double :clap !

I really like your fan-fiction!

I enjoy reading it. Yes! I have thinked on it today, this afternoon and a smile is appared on my face. Cause it was so funny. Dawn with her "double aspirine sandwich"...you make her very funny and very tipical great Dawnie! It makes the day better reading where Willow is not alone, has a supportive friend and......he he.......who know......can have Tara back into her arms. :blush



Yeah, it's a very strange and secret character this Lyod, but, it's kinda similar to Giles, like when he has spoken to Dawn 'cause she has stolen the book "We'll talk about that later, kid". He's so british, like Mr. Giles (this name always remember me how Tara called Giles......:cry ) .

Oh, and thank you for the explanation. I will be very courious to knew news on him! It would be funny to see a confrontation between Giles and Lyod. The two british gentlemen! :grin





I'm so curious and thrilling about the next chapter...the last of this first great episode......please, don't let us to wait to much....! :wink

Waiting for the next chapter, I wish you good luck!



Sara



Ps: Willow and Tara forever in my heart! :love

btvs sara82
 


The Conclusion of "Love Beyond Reason" is here!!!!

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Tue Sep 17, 2002 1:50 pm

Ufff!!!! Have been a big job write this chapter, but... It's finaly done!!!!!!!!!! All cards will be now on the table to begin the real adventure. : -->>:



A great HELLO!!!! to all who keep reading, specialy to my friends: XwickedXwiccan, BTVS sara82 and pacou (who have been lost). Guys I'm glad you enjoy the fic... to the other readers which I don't know, I would like to know your opinion. ;)



I hope this part be more excitng to all of you.



I would like to know if you want the rest of the series here. Should I open another topic board to the rest? The title of "first chapter" could be a limit.



Well. I'll be with you later. Get ready for Part 4: "Tears".



Enjoy it!!!!!!!!!! :bounce



MAGIC BE WITH ALL OF US :willow :tara



Prayer Of Gehenna.

Prayer of Gehenna
 


Chapter one: Love Beyond Reason. PART 4: Tears

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Tue Sep 17, 2002 2:38 pm

Characters: Most characters are own of Whedon and Mutant Enemy. Only the idea, some characters and scenarios are mine.



Willow & Tara "The series" (suggested name) Pilot project.

SEASON 01: Chapter 01 Love beyond reason: Part 04: Tears



Feedback: Yes, Please... this is for all of you!!!



PD: Sorry, English is not my mother language



PD: I'm not going to write more the suggested camera shots. I'm going only to write a



literal script this time. It'll make all easier and faster.



"Warring: This chapter contains scenes with blood and gore :evil "









After a violent fight against the dangerous Scavengers, and a travel across a forest, Willow and Eldarth arrive to the L'veth's village, and have a talk with the elder, who is Eldarth's grandfather. They must go to a place called "The Cathedral of bones". Dawn, arrives to Sunnydale and has luck, 'cause finds Giles. The Watcher don't belive too much all the history, but the name of Loyd McHagen makes him react. While they walk to Tara's grave, are attacked by two vampires. Dawn takes them away.



EXT.- SUNNYDALE'S GRAVEYARD. TARA'S GRAVE - NIGHT



A great hole is in front of a tomstone. Earth dust flies from inside to out. A wood hited sound is listened. Guiles arises his head from the bottom of the hole. Dawn do the same after him.



GUILES

(Serious but tired)

Well, here it is



Dawn watches sad the sarcophagus. It's a beautiful decored one.



DAWN

(Sad)

So beautiful piece... to have so sad content inside of it. Giles... I can't see her in this way!



GUILES

Don't worry, dear... I will help you to get out from this hole. Take the shovels with you... I'll make this alone. Give me the potion and the scroll, please.



Once Giles has the components, helps Dawn. She takes the tools, turns back and walks away. Giles opens the sarcophagus. Dawns closes strongly her eyes when hears the sound. There Tara is... her dry body has a grey colored skin... She wears a beautiful pale green dress and has a death rose on her chest... Giles closes his eyes momentaly too. He remembers the crying of Willow the burial day.



The watcher reacts and begins the ritual. Covers the corpse with the red and shining potion... Tara's body begins to shine in red, like if a ligted blood would run again inside it!!!!! Guiles begins to read the scroll: "Recovere corpore transmuto... preparus advenimentum". Tara's skin begins to regenerate... soft, smooth... beautiful again... even the rose comes to live again... a huge and white one, like a giant snow-flake. When Giles finishes... the scroll turns into a blue dust. Eyes wide open, the British takes very carefuly the body. Incredible!!! She is so warm... like if was only sleeping.



GILES

Dawn, come, help me, please.



DAWN

Did it work?



GILES

Come and see it by yourself.



Dawn aproaches. Her mounth opens. Helps Guile with Tara's body. Dawn takes some time to caress her friend's soft hair again.



DAWN

Awsome... she looks so... live. She is so warm (tears runs) so beautiful.



GILES

Yes... let's go home. As you said... Time is running.



Giles begins to walk with Tara on his arms. Dawn too... but suddendly, the Slayer's sister runs to Tara's tomb stone and hits it with one of the shovels with incredible rage. A huge part is broken into pieces!!! Dawn walks again to Giles' side...



DAWN

(With tears and rage on her eyes)

Never more...



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GRAY MOUNTAINS - DAY



Willow and Eldarth are sitted on a pair of big rocks, taking a rest. The sky is totally covered by huge dark clouds. Eldarth has his sight lost, but when hear Willow's voice, he recovers.



WILLOW

And... this place... The Cathedral of bones... What is it?



ELDARTH

It's the only eternaly dark place here in Lordganthnora. Legends say that is the greatest library of all dimensions and realms. The ultimate palace of knowledge... to me it's a huge grave... a building made of skulls and bones of every race and demon. I've never seen a book in there.



WILLOW

Looks like it doesn't like you very much... So, is this "Rune Master" an L'veth.



ELDARTH

(Disturbed)

Absolutly not!!!! He is unique... has no race. I don't know what he is... He's only... the Rune Master.



WILLOW

Sorry... You did not like very much the idea of go to him... why?



ELDARTH

I had to talk with him lot of times before... he is not good...

(arrises his head to the sky)

...even in shinest days, he is a dark cloud for this world... Only cares for himself... I hope my grandpa be right...

(tears runs from his eyes)

...Grandpa...



Willow notice it and gets closer to the young L'veth.



WILLOW

(With care)

Hey... Why are you crying?... Something bad?



ELDARTH

I... I'm not gonna see him again... my people either...



WILLOW

Why do you say that?... Don't be afraid... you told me: you're the gratest warrior on this land... all is going to be okay... All will be over very soon and you will come back to your home again.



ELDARTH

No, you don't understand, Willow. I can't come back... I've been assigned to defend you... and our loved Godess Tara...



WILLOW

No! I don't accept that!!!! If you're happy with your people is not rigth make us your duty...



ELDARTH

No, no... you're not a duty... This is the highest honor every L'veth, every Gate Keeper can have... No one has done it before... I'm only sad 'cause I've lost a family... but I've won other one...



Eldarth stands front Willow and beds on his knee as a knight.



ELDARTH

Since now, and if we succed... you and Tara are my family...



WILLOW

(With tears on her eyes)

Oh, god... Please, stand, this is not neccesary...

(Taking the young L'veth's face and smiling)

It's an honor for me too... but families take care one to others... so, we're going to take care of you too...



ELDARTH

(Sniffing)

Thanks, thanks, believer...



WILLOW

Please... call me Will...



ELDARTH

So... you... you can call me Eld!



WILLOW

Of, couse, dear...

(She hugs the boy and whishpers to herself)

... you're only a little child... with too much responsability.



ELDARTH

Will... Could you forgive me for all things I said in the forest?



WILLOW

(Smiling)

I had forgotten that.



ELDARTH

Count with me for everything... you and Tara must be a great couple... a bit strange for me, I must admit... but I can see more love for her into your eyes than anyone on this world.



The pair begin to walk again. After some time, the gray and rocky way ground begins to go down. Beyond, a huge structure is seen. Looks like a dirty white gothic church. Willow and Eldarth begins to walk down. The road is large, but surrouded by tall walls of gray dark stone. When they get closer to the building, see the reason of the color... It's really absolutly done by millions bones and skulls of every size and shape!!! The majestuosity is bigger, taller and sharper than the standard gothic style. The sky on the cathedral is darker and with ligning bolts running across the black clouds, like if a tempest would go to begin.



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. NEAR OF CATHEDRAL OF BONES' GATES - DAY



WILLOW

As awsome as crepy... This looks like impossible...



While the travelers aproach to the building, begin to feel the ground is shaking. A rumble sound begins to arrive behind them. Eldarth turns back.



ELDARTH

Oh great!!!!!!!!



WILLOW

What is happening, Eld?



Runnig down by the way they came, a group of twelve violent Scavengers charge to the travelers. The monsters cry very loud arrising their weapons and crashing them against the rocks, breaking them as if they were glass.



ELDARTH

Some of company.



The young L'veth takes his two handed sword and gets ready to recieve the monsters, but before, makes his spectacular change to an awsome and experienced warrior. Willow begins to cast an earth spell.



Violent crash!!!! The first creature has no opportunity and is slashed at hip level. A sword cut fast and powerful. Eldarth takes impulse with the strike and makes a graceful spin which hits a second Scavenger at the chest. The sword remains in the monster body... so, the warrior takes one of the short swords and trows it strongly. A third creature falls thanks to a deadly hit in the neck. Willow's spell causes a big explossion into the ground which trows two Scavengers to the air, but the creatures recover quickly.



When Willow see that her spell was not enough tries to think another one... too late... three Scavengers jump heavly to her swinning their weapons... all is lost... but, in the last second, three green blasts travels from behind her and hits each monster, jailing them into green balls... that begin to become little and little!!!!!!!!! Willow turns awesomed to the Cathedral's gate.



WILLOW

Loyd?!



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE - NIGHT



Dawn opens the door. Guiles enters with Tara's body.



DAWN

Loyd said we must put Tara in the place she died



GILES

Was in the main room... Isn't it?



DAWN

Yes... was the room that Willow and her took when they move in here to live with me. Was their room since then.



Giles begins to go stairs up followed by Dawn. When they enter in, Giles takes a look arround... the window is still broken. Some wind enters by it, moving the curtain.



GILES

Where?



DAWN

Can you put her on the bed? I want to wash her a bit, give some make up, and clothe her... more live, you know?.... I want her gorgeuos... Willow will be thanks.



GILES

(Laying Tara on bed)

It is a beautiful detail. I'm going to bring you some of water and towels.



DAWN

Thanks. I'm going to check the closet.



EXT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. NEAR OF CATHEDRAL OF BONES' GATES - DAY



The ground is full of Scavenger's corpses but not all the twelve. Eldarth, who has returned to his normal from, hold one of his bastard swords washing in boold. Willow tries to see something beyond the shadows that cover the Cathedral's gates.



WILLOW

That spell...



ELDARTH

Looks like we had some help. Very weird to come from him...



WILLOW

The Rune Master?



Eldarth says yes with his head and begins to aproach to the building. Willow follows the boy. When they arrive to the gates, they begins to open alone. A voice whith echo effect comes from inside...



RUNE MASTER

Finaly you have arrived... come in, please.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. CATHEDRAL OF BONES - DAY



When the travelers enter into the temple, the doors close as they open... alone. Inside, the Cathedral is equal to outside... all made of bones: columns, chairs, windows... the walls, the roof... even the floor... as majesty as horrible. As Eldarth said... no one book is seen into all the place. At the end of the central corridor, a figures begins to get closer. His body is only an ethereal tunic... like black fog. Has no feet, fyles near of the floor. Arms and hands? Almost. The first ones are very long and as thin as skeleton's. Hands are sharp, with long claws... They are not as ethereals as the tunic, but thet are. The face looks like a gray and black flame, ethereal as the rest too. The only thing looks "material" are his little, shining yellow eyes and the space that surrounds them, corrugated and blue gray colored. He looks like something betwen a ghost and mist.



RINE MASTER

Welcome to my home. It is ever a pleasure have you here, my young "gate keeper"...



ELDARTH

Yeah... of course...



RUNE MASTER

(Witout taking care about the comentary)

... But the greatest pleasure is have you here, dear believer... dear Willow.



WILLOW

Thanks for your words... eh... mister. I have a question, are you alone here?



RUNE MASTER

Absolutly... the real knowledge can be only handled and understood when you are alone.



WILLOW

But the spell...



RUNE MASTER

Well, dear... I must defend myself too. A little secret to take appart that disgusting things. Well, but you are not here to talk about it.



WILLOW

Tara...



RUNE MASTER

Exactly... your grandpa made well in send you to me, Eldarth. Follow me.



The Rune Master gets closer to a wall made almost enteraly with skulls. Willow notice that all the bones has symbols like runes on them.



WILLOW

The... the bones are your books...



RUNE MASTER

Awsome, little tree. Very perceptieve. That's right. This place is made with the bones of every thing alive in all dimensions possible. Each bone has runes with complete meaning on them, hundred of books in only one single skull or bone... all knowledge is here... and I'm his handler. But it doesn't mater now.



The strange handler takes a skull from the wall and talks watching it



RUNE MASTER

When Warren... that was his name... before you kill him... am I right?



Willow downs her sight



RUNE MASTER

Yes, that was... well, when she shooted Tara, made the Godess' amulet here break into pieces. The amulet is the channel which her power covers this world. Her sudden phisical death was an impact of negative energy to it. To bring her to life again, the amulet must be restored and placed in it's place... I know some one like you, my girl, has something to do it. The trouble is you must arrive to our Godess temple... and no one knows where it is...



WILLOW

So, how could I...!!!!!!



RUNE MASTER

... no one but me.... Eldarth, you know the place that makes our wold unique, don't you?



ELDARTH

The Gods' Graveyard?



RUNE MASTER

Exactly. The place where all the gods go when they die, nobody belive more on them or are defeated. Well, Tara's temple is just under it... buried into ground. Willow, when Tara died you was close to destroy your world... you made arrise a diabolic temple... am I right?



WILLOW

(Sorrowed)

Yes... I did...



RUNE MASTER

Well, you must do the same to dicover this temple now... but is going to be harder. You will need to handle more power you've ever handled... is in this point you could die.



WILLOW

But my magic...



RUNE MASTER

Was castrated... no removed. If you survive, enter the temple, restore the amulet and put it in its place. That's all, Willow... you will be with her again.



WILLOW

I'll do whatever is necesary.



ELDARTH

But the Gods' Graveyard is too far!!!!



RUNE MASTER

Follow me.



The group begin to go stairs down into a bassament. At the end, there is a room with a giant and wide open Jaw bone with terrible and huge fagns, at the bottom of the place.



RUNE MASTER

Who need walk to arrive? Don't you think, miss Rosenberg?



With a movement of his hand, a blue vortex appears and a portal opens into the Jaw bone.



RUNE MASTER

Go now... and good luck. You have had enough help.



Willow, reacts late... that expression... she has listened it before.



WILLOW

Thanks... mister. I have no words



RUNE MASTER

You're welcome. Bye, Eldarth.



ELDARTH

(Getting very close to the Rune Master and anger)

You have debts to pay, and don't think 'cause...



Willow begins to cross the portal.



RUNE MASTER

(Cinicaly)

I know. I'm sorry you never come back here again... to see you trying to make me pay. But who knows, ways are long... and many.



ELDARTH

How you now...?!!!!!!!!



RUNE MASTER

Bye young boy... Hurry, or you will lose your trip.



Eldarth cross the portal giving a bad sight over his shoulder to Rune Master.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. MAIN BEDROOM - NIGHT



Dawn is finishing comb Tara's hair very carefuly. Door is knocked.



GILES

May I come in?



DAWN

Yes. I've finished.



GILES

(Watching the scene and smiling with sad sight)

Well done, Dawn... She looks wonderful.



Tara have been dressed with a soft deep blue sweater with a not so tall turtle neck, and a tight- fitting, but comfortable, long indigo blue skirt with lateral cuts from knees level to the end. No shoes... no socks. Has a delicate make up in eyes and cheecks. Her blonde and long hair is clean, shining and combed.



DAWN

I chose the blue... as the shining night sky we have tonight... but She will look more wonderful when open her eyes again...Come on, Guiles, let's put her on the floor section I... I found her.



Guiles gets closer to the bed and begins to charge Tara.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GODS' GRAVEYARD - DAY



The Gods' Graveyard... a weird place that breaks all phisics laws: It's an awesome enormous, vast and flat rock of orange tones. This huge stone is supported by one rocky, sharp and incradible tall peak, who belongs to an equaly sharp, dangerous and rocky mountain chain. A unbelievable show of balance ever concibed. On the surface of the balanced rock, there is a lot of ruined, broken and huge statues made of gray stone. Mesopotamic, egipcian, nordic, even diabolic, or almost unknown, heads, arms, feet and bodies are disseminated on all the area. A lot of bridges made of rope and wood are from oher peaks and mountains to the stone. In one of them, the blue vortex of the portal appears. Willow is the first to arrive. When Eldart cross by, the portal dissapears.



ELDARTH

There it is... Gods' graveyard. Each of the statues you're watching, Willow, is the rest of death Gods... The legend says when they die, become into stone and falls here from the sky, breaking into pieces.



WILLOW

I can't belive a place like this really exists...



ELDARTH

But it does... There are too much bridges... more the last time I saw this place... Let me go first. I can smell an ambush here.



The travelers begin their walk to the strange Graveyard. The bridge swings and cracks white each step. Falling down would be lethal. Fortunatly, Willow and Eldarth arrive to the stone without troubles.



ELDARTH

Too much calm... I don't like it.



WILLOW

Where should I begin?



ELDARTH

Let's go to the middle... Will be more secure... and it's equidistant to all.



After several minutes walking, They begin to arrive to the center, but Willow suddenly stops when she sees a statue's head that looks exactly like... Glory.



WILLOW

(To herself)

So, at the end, she was finaly defeated



ELDARTH

Something wrong, Will?... We have arrived.



WILLOW

No, it's nothing... well it's time.



Willow gives some steps to the front. She closes her eyes to concentrate... but, in that precise moment, from behind of a huge stone head, a gutural voice sounds...



VOICE

(With resonance effect)

Stop there, believer!!!!!!!!



From behind the head, a 12 feet tall black haired Scavenger emerges. It has two axes on each hand. From broken statue pieces, a lot of standard Scavengers begins to run.



ELDARTH

(Shifting his form to ancestral Warrior and taking one bastard sword in each hand from his back)

What a hell is that thing?!!!!! Dammit, I knew it... Ambush.



Eldarth turns to Willow, who watch with fear in her eyes the giant black Scavenger.



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

Willow, leave them to me!!!!!!!!!! Begin to arrise the temple!!!!!



WILLOW

But is too much for you!!!!!!!!!!



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

Don't care... This is my duty... you have yours!!!!!!!

(Eldarth turns and charge to the monsters)

Welcome to the slaughter, dammed things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Al the Scavengers begins to surround their chief. Whe Eldarth is near, a small part try to flank him by the left to charge to Willow. The brave L'veth gets the tactic...



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

I don't think so!!!!!! My Godess, guide my blades!!!!!!!



... and using all his strength, trows the bastard swords at same time. The deadly weapons fly spinning with an incredible speed, crossing their blades as scissors... One head, one chest, one hip and a pair of legs are savagely slashed. The small contingent is destroyed!!!!!!! Following his instinct, Eldarth tries to take his right long sword, bot he touches the tied note. That makse him vacillate by a second... great mistake. A Scavenger jumps to him and smash him with its body... The Scavenger body is trown with a short sword in the stomach.



Willow is too nervous... she can't focus... how can she awake all the power her had? She closes her eyes and tries to close herself to all arround. She begins to remember... "It's so cold": Tara's last words... her blood on her white bluse... The wound on Tara's body... her unbreathing body in her arms... all doors been closed... all posibilities... the sensation of loneliness... to have lost all in her live... a tear begins to travel on her face... Willow opens her flaming eyes absolutly black full of rage... black clouds begin to appear... a strong wind begins to surronds all.



WILLOW

For my power, for my pain... for all remembers never will be erased... I command you, lacky stone and earth... arrise the home of my own to make her finaly awake!!!!!!!!!



The huge stone begins to shake!!!! Many Sacvengers begin to get in fear, which is taken by Eldarth to slash some of them with his long sword. The chief becomes in rage and crashes some heads and bodys of its servers with its own axes, beginning to aproach to Eldarth.



SCAVENGER CHIEF

(Furious)

Kill the believer, fools, or I will kill you by myself!!!!!!!!!



Eldarth makes a graceful parry of one Sacavenger attack with his sword, but more dificult is try to parry the powerful hit of the chief, wich kills his own warrior and trows the L'veth several feet away, making him fall strongly and relaease the sword.



The rest of Scavengers run to Willow, but she is too much focuses with her spell. The floor begins to rips loudly and a poited white tower roof begins to arrise from it. When the monsters are very close, the white temple made of shining marble, arrises entirely with a brutal explosion of rocks. The Scavengers fly in the air... many of them are destroyed by de impact. Willow falls exhauted... her eyes become to normal.



At same time, the Scavneger chief tries to kill Eldarth hitting the ground with its two great axes. The Gate keeper rolls to one side to other on the ground. He almost can't avoid the gigant black haired Scavenger's attacks, which make pieces of rocks fly. If one of those axes hits, will be instant death. Willow, recovering weeakly, watches the scene.



WILLOW

(Furious)

No one is going to damage my family again... even if he's new...!!!!



The witch begins to cast a spell quickly.



WILLOW

"Fragile!!"



Shinning sparks sorround the Scavenger weapons. When it hits again the floor, the axe breaks into pieces as if it was made of glass.



SCAVENGER CHIEF

What a...?!!!!!!!!!



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

(Taking with incredible agility his two handed sword from his back and whispering to himself)

Thanks, Will...



The warrior makes a violent swing with his sharp blade. The Scavenger's head is slashed with a transversal cut... Blood and pieces of poited and deformed fangs fly. Eldarth succedes a last roll to avoid the deadh body's fall. The L'veth stands and smiles when sees the marvelous temple and most of the Scavengers on the ground. Quickly, begins to take his weapons diseminated on the battleground and runs to the temple.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. TARA'S TEMPLE - DAY



Willow begins to enter to the temple, watching its beauty. The door is surrounded by two awsome female statues which look as Tara. The double door is made with a shining red wood... wood from a willow tree. The gates open by themself and Willow enters... a warm sensation of home fills her. The temple is incredibly high, colored with marble white, blue and rose... looks like a little piece of shining heaven. At the end of a long passage, with two beautiful line of greek style colums at both sides, there is a willow tree sculpture made of bronze. Into the long and twistd branchs ther is a glass made chrysalis, with a sleeping and phantasmagoric Tara's body. On the floor, near of the tree sculpture, there are golden pieces.



WILLOW

Ta... Tara...



The embelesed spell caster walks slowly to the sculpture.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GODS' GRAVEYARD - DAY



Outside, Eldarth runs to the temple's gate. Suddendly, a Sacavenger stands and tries to hit Eldarth with its claw. The warrior avoid the attack and strikes the monster's stomach with a long sword. With a short one, strikes its throat and push it away, unlocking his weapons from the horrible body.



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

Dammit!!!!!!



A little number of Scavengers begin to stand and go to the temple. Eldarth Charges to them with all his energy.



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

You don't learn very fast, don't you, stupid things?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. TARA'S TEMPLE - DAY



Into the haevenly place, Willow arrives to the sculpture, she can't avoid her sight from Tara's floating image. Without see to the floor, she beds to take the pieces of the amulet. On the trunk of the tree, trere is a triangular hole... the place to put the amulet.



The Scavengers begin to enter to the temple, but Eldarth arrives at right time and takes them from behind. He notice the trultle like shells on their back, so, chooses go to the legs. Two slashes, two members and their respective owners falls to ground. The others turn back and begin to attack the L'veth.



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

Willow, I don't want to pressure you, but...

(Throwing his long sword like a spear, hitting one Scavneger in the chest, and locating the short one into the chin of another one, which was almost over him)

Hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



But Willow doesn't listen anything, like if a charm were working on her. When has all the pieces with her, she trows them to the air and moves her hands with in a baeutiful secuence.



WILLOW

"Repare neo"



The pieces' edges begin to shine in blue and get closer. When the triangular amulet falls again to her hands, it's totally restored. She gets closer to the tree and puts it in its right place... an earthquake begins... the chrysalis breaks and dissaperar into star lights and the Tara's image begins to descend wo Willow's arms.



Eldath stops momentaly his "head crushing work" of a Scavenger against a column to watch.



ELDARTH (WARRIOR)

Holy poder of our godess... she did it.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. GODS' GRAVEYARD - DAY



The sky is getting full of dark clouds, which begin to spin, making a violent vortex on the temple. In the center, a incredibly brillant white light begins to shine and descend like a huge and powerful blast to the temple.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. CATHEDRAL OF BONES - DAY



Throught a window, Rune Master watches the sky.



RUNE MASTER

Finaly... Time to go.



INT.- KINGDOM OF LORDGANTHNORA. TARA'S TEMPLE - DAY



The white blast covers to Willow and Tara's image. Willow, who is duck on her knees and surrounded by the holy light, closes her eyes and tries to caress the hair of her love, but her fingers passes throught.



The light affects in some way to the Sacvengers that remain live into the place... their black vortex eyes explodes and black smoke colums leave from the holes. The death bodies falls. Eldarth returns to normal shape, watchig the blast with fear. Closes his eyes and remembers his grandfather's words: "when you see the white blast, jump, without fear, into it...".



ELDARTH

(Taking his trowed weapons, and with tears on his eyes)

Grandpa... people... this is only a "see you later"... I'm going do my better... you will be proud of me.



The L'veth runs to the blast. Willow begins to dissapear. The earthquake is stronger. Eldarth makes a high jump to inside the blast.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. MAIN BEDROOM - NIGHT



Giles and Dawn are stand arround the body... nothig has happened for a long time



DAWN

(Nerveous)

Giles... do you think she didn't...?



GUILES

I really don't know, Dawn... I told you, all this is so weird.



EXT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE - NIGHT



In the sky, a lot of black clouds begin to cover the shine of the stars. They become into a vortex, like happend in Lordganthnora. A bright light begins to shine. A earth shaking begins.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. MAIN BEDROOM - NIGHT



DAWN

Wha... What is going on?!!!!!!!!!



GILES

I... I don't...



EXT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE - NIGHT



The blast falls on the house... by the main room's window a brillant shine leaves.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. MAIN BEDROOM - NIGHT



The room is flood by the blinding white ligth. Dawn and Giles covers their eyes. Dawn screams... but all sound or image dissapear. SCREEN REMAINS ABSOLUTLIY WHITE BY SOME SECONDS. A FADE IN REVAELS THE ROOM AGAIN.



Willow is on the floor with Tara's body in her arms. Dawn and Giles open their eyes.



DAWN

(Confused)

Wha... What happened? Where I am?... Hey, this is my home!!!!!!... but... England.



GILES

(Confused too)

What was that?... Where... Dawn!!!!!!!!! What are you doing here?... Willow, where is Will...



DAWN

(Shocked)

Willow!!!!!!!!

(she gets closer to her friend... and watches who is on her friend's arms)

Ta... Tara... What are you doing here wit T....?



GILES

(More confused and dizzy)

What is that about Ta...?

(He gets paralyzed when sees Tara's body)



WILLOW

(Very dizzy)

Where I am?... Wha...

(She lows her sight and watches Tara's body in her arms)

(Shocked) T... T... Tara... who has unburied h...!!!!!!!!



TARA

(Opening weakly her gray eyes and watching Willow)

W...Willow? I...It was so c...cold, s...so dark. W...where are we?



WILLOW

(With tears running on all her face, eyes wide open and totally shocked)

Ta... Tara... you are... a... alive... how... how this could...?



TARA

(Smiling but wit tired face and touching her girldfriend's face)

W...why shouldn't do I...I, m...my love?



WILLOW

(Taking Tara's hand)

This... this is a... a miracle...



DAWN

(Shocked but getting closer to the couple)

I... I can't belive this... I... It's impossible...

(breaking in cry)

Tara, Willow!!!!!!!!!!!!



Dawn runs and hugs them with all her strenght. Giles walks slowly, with shocked face too. He ducks on his knees and puts his rigth hand on Tara's hair very slowly. He arrise his sight, like if he'd want talk to the sky. Closes his eyes.



GILES

Oh... God... There's no words for this.



EXT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE'S GARDEN - NIGHT



A body is layed on the grass. Slowly begins to stand taking his head. The young L'veth watches all arround as if he would be lost.



ELDARTH

Where I am?... What happened?... What is this place?



When he takes by instinct his right long sword, touches the piece of paper.



ELDARTH

What is this?



He unties the note, opens it and reads it:



"Dear grandson, if you are reading this, that means that you have succesed in your mission. You must be confused... almost without memories. Still my image must be blur into your mind. But don't worry... all is as must be. Our people's future and happines are in your hands. You were in your naltal dimension someone special, but now, on your shoulders rest the greatest responsability of any L'veth have had. Look for the humans called Tara and Willow, your swords are here to serve them... They are your family now. All this sounds weird to you, but in the bottom of your hearth something tells you all this is true and right.



My thoughts will be ever with you, son. I love you. Ah... Remember your ancesters. Never forget them".



With tears on his eyes, the confused L'veth puts the note into one boot, watches the strange house front of hin and begins to go there.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT



Giles and Dawn are sited on the sofa. Only a little lamp has light.



DAWN

I can't still belive all this.



GILES

All is so confused. My mind is in blank.



DAWN

Mine too. But that doesn't matter. Guiles, we have seen the greatest miracle of all. I can't wait tell it to the others...



The main door is knocked. Dawn stands up very enthusiast.



DAWN

Buffy!!!!!!!!!



When she opens the door, gives a jump back



DAWN

Whoa!!!!!



Beds on his knee, as a medieval knight, is a youg boy with pionted ears, long brown hair and full of swords.



ELDARTH

Is here where the ladies called Tara and Willow are?... I came to offer them my seven swords.



INT.- SUMMER'S RESIDENCE. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT



Layed on bed, are Willow and Tara, no much words. Only charmed with love eyes. Willow takes her lover's face.



WILLOW

(Still with tears on her eyes)

Oh God... this is... the greatest gift I could have... Tara... This is the happiest day of my life.



TARA

(Cleanning the tears of her girl)

T... The happiest day of my life b...began the day I know you... A...and has not over yet.



Willow gets her lips closer to hers... Closes her eyes and whishpers:



WILLOW

If this is a dream, I don't want to wake up.



TARA

I...I will not let you wake up.



Their lips gets together... as their souls... the girls are into the most tender kiss they have ever given.



FADE OUT



FADE IN



EXT.- SUNNYDALE'S GRAVEYARD - NIGHT



A dark gray figure walks across the tombs. A little shine comes from his eye-galsses. Has his hands inside his long coat's pockets.



LOYD

(Stopping and watching to the sky)

Time to work.



FADE OUT



END OF "LOVE BEYOND REASON" SPECIAL FIRST CHAPTER OF "WILLOW AND TARA" THE SERIES.



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Sorry. I took a break

Postby Prayer of Gehenna » Sat Sep 21, 2002 4:02 pm

Sorry to all kittens have been reading my fic, I took a little break before update it.



The series will continue, but the question is... I don't know if I should do it in this same topic board.



Reply here for your suggestions.



MAGIC BE WITH ALL OF US :willow :tara

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Re: To all Kittens!!! My W/T TV swow project first chapter!!

Postby xita » Sun Dec 29, 2002 9:41 pm

This is new to the archive. You can leave feedback!



To the creator of this thread: If you ever want to add something new, just email a mod and we'll move it to the active Pens board.


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