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First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby WillowandTara84 » Tue Jul 30, 2002 4:34 pm

Ok, hi. I'm new here and I want to post a fic my 13y/o sister wrote which I think is pretty good. So here goes:



Title: Untitled (suggestions welcome) Parts I and II

Author: WillowandTara84's sister

Feedback: YES PLEASE!

Spoilers: Seeing Red and beyond

Rating: PG (I think)

Paring: W/T

Disclaimer: None of these characters are owned by us, but by Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy

Summary: Set right after Warren has come in and shot Buffy and Tara. Don't want to give too much away but Tara does not stay dead although Willow still becomes Dark Magic Willow.





Part One



Tara: “Your shirt!”

Willow: “Tara!”

Willow takes Tara’s dead body into her arms. “Tara, baby c’mon. Oh god, oh no, please no! C’mon Tara!”

Willow’s eyes have now turned reddish black. Her face is streaked with tears. “By Osiris, I command you, bring her back!” Suddenly, the ceiling changes, bringing forth the face of a very angry Osiris. “Witch!” the demon shouts, “how dare you invoke Osiris in this task.”

“Please you have to bring her back!” Willow pleads.

“You may not violate the laws of natural passing,” the demon replies. Willow is close to breaking down. “How…how is this natural?!” she demands.

“It is a human death by human means.”

Willow is still crying and her eyes are getting redder. “No, but she’s-” She is interrupted by the demon.

“You’ve raised one killed by mystical forces, this is not the same. She is taken by natural order, it is done.”

“No, no there has to be a way!” she begs.

Osiris is now obviously angry- “IT IS DONE!”

“NO!” Willow blasts Osiris with energy, making him scream with pain, and unwillingly unleashing the needed forces of life back into Tara, who now, unknown to Willow, is alive but unconscious.



Part Two

Buffy is lying in a hospital bed, having been shot twice by Warren. Xander enters the room.

Buffy: “Any answer?” Xander looks at her sympathetically. “No I guess Dawn’s not home from school yet.”

Buffy: “What about Willow and Tara, they should be home right?”

Xander: “Unless they were too busy ‘making up’ to answer.

Buffy: “I doubt it, they would have heard the siren. They’re probably at the Magic Box, you should call.”

Xander: “No, I’ll go down, I need the air.” Xander walks out leaving Buffy alone.

Anya is standing behind the counter in the magic shop. Suddenly the door bursts open and the lights crack. “What the…” She is cut off by Willow saying “Where do you keep the Black Arts books?”

Anya: “ What? Willow, no you can’t.”

Willow: “I need power!”

Anya is shocked. “Why, what happened, did Tara break up with you again, is that it?”

Willow- “Shut up!” Willow heads towards the stairs and every book flys onto the table.

Anya- “Willow, no, please.”

Willow- “Stop!” She waves her hand and Anya collapses. Willow puts her hands inside a book, and her hair and eyes turn jet black. “That’s better.”

Suddenly , Xander enters, “Willow what -” He sees Anya on the floor. “On God Will, what happened?”

Willow walks past him. He has Anya in his arms and she is starting to wake up. “Will, Will please wait!” he calls. Willow ignores him and sets off to find Warren. Xander has no idea what has happened. “Damn it!”



Warren is at his house packing a bag after finding out Buffy is alive. Suddenly, the door bursts open, and Willow is standing there.

Warren- “What?! What do you want?” Willow answers simply – “Revenge.”



Xander and Anya arrive at the hospital and tell Buffy what has happened.

Buffy- “Okay, Anya you go to my house and find Tara. Xander, you pick Dawn up from school. Don’t tell her about Willow, just bring her here.” Xander and Anya head off. Buffy pulls over the covers and looks at her bandaged leg. “I’ll just sit here helpless,” she sighs.



Anya arrives at Buffy’s house. “Tara, are you here?” She walks up to Willow’s room. “Tara, are you – OH God, Oh God, Oh God!” She rushes to Tara’s side. “Tara, Tara are you okay?” Tara’s eyes open. “Willow?” she says weakly. “No Tara, it’s me, Anya. Are you okay?”

Tara- “Sure, sure, I’m fine. I must have passed out or something. Where’s Willow?”

Anya- “She’s – we’ll go get her.”

Tara- “Okay.” Tara walks out the room. All Anya can say is “Your shirt?” before following.







Parts III and IV coming soon!





Edited by: WillowandTara84 at: 8/5/02 8:01:50 am
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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby snuggle79 » Tue Jul 30, 2002 4:42 pm

hm, huh? Interesting start! :) So, Tara hasn't been really shot? A little confused here...can't wait for more!



Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

snuggle79
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby WillowandTara84 » Tue Jul 30, 2002 4:45 pm

Sorry about the confusion. The fic is set at the end of Seeing Red/Start of Villians so Tara has been shot and killed and Buffy has been shot but not as severly as in the show.

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby LiangFeng » Tue Jul 30, 2002 5:14 pm

Say wha? Huh? What happened?

O-Mei Duei! JIA YOU!

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby WillowsSlave » Tue Jul 30, 2002 5:52 pm

Ohh, I think I get it. Please continue on. I'm curious as to how Tara and the gang are gonna stop Willow. I think you confused everyone though. *Shrugs* I caught it and I like the idea, but it's slightly underdeveloped. Anyway, More More More More

Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy
~`~`~`~
Tara: What about the (furrowed Tarabrow) "trio's evil skeem"?

Willow:(Grin) Well, I'm kinda working on my owwn...(Complete with Willowleer.) ~ In Seeing Red (duh!)

WillowsSlave
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby WillowandTara84 » Tue Jul 30, 2002 6:20 pm

Thanks for the comments, but please bear in mind that my 13 year old sister wrote this earlier this evening and I just typed it up for her.



More feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Edited by: WillowandTara84 at: 7/30/02 5:52:56 pm
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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Jul 30, 2002 9:05 pm

I'm a lil confuzzled, but i'm interested in seein wut will happen next! lookin 4wrd to readin more! :)

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby WillowsSlave » Tue Jul 30, 2002 11:47 pm

Well, than give your sister my complements. Like I said, I can't wait to see what will happen and eagerly await a continuation from her. :grin :bounce

Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy
~`~`~`~
Tara: What about the (furrowed Tarabrow) "trio's evil skeem"?

Willow:(Grin) Well, I'm kinda working on my owwn...(Complete with Willowleer.) ~ In Seeing Red (duh!)

WillowsSlave
 


First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part III

Postby WillowandTara84 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 7:02 am

Part three



Anya, Tara, Xander and Dawn arrive at the hospital. They get to Buffy’s room and Dawn throw’s her arms around Buffy. “You have to stop this. I think you must like dying!” says Dawn. Buffy smiles slightly. Tara looks confused- “Anya, where’s Willow? You said she’d be here.”

Buffy looks at Anya- “You didn’t tell her!”

Anya tries to defend herself but Tara interrupts her- “tell me what?”

Xander explains what happened to Tara, who starts to cry. “Why?” she asks, “Why is she back on magic?”

“Anya tried to stop her at the Magic Box, but she drained the place.” Buffy says.

Dawn, who up until now had remained silent says “You don’t think maybe she’d go after Warren do you?”

Buffy- “What? No, no, she wouldn’t, would she?”

Xander- “ Makes sense.”

Buffy- “But why? How did she know?”

Dawn- “She must have seen it happen.”

Tara is still in shock. “We have to find her!” she cries.

Xander- “All in favour, let’s do it!”

Tara heads for the door, Anya steps in front of her “Woah, hold on Tara!” she says, “WE don’t know where she is and we don’t know if we can stop her!”

Tara- “She’ll…She’ll listen to me.” Tara looks at Buffy “Where does Warren live?”



WillowandTara84
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part II

Postby snuggle79 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 7:09 am

Great Update! Ok, i gotta admit, i'm still confused...hm...please update soon! :)

Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

snuggle79
 


First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part IV

Postby WillowandTara84 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 7:46 am

Part Four



Warren is tied up. His mouth has been sealed shut and he has clearly been tortured. Willow is standing in front of him. “You know what the funniest part is, huh?” she says, “I didn’t even see you shoot her. I could only tell it was you because of the fear. The fear of what the slayer will do to you. You shot her too, didn’t you? Not that it matters, you didn’t kill her did you? No, instead of killing my best friend, you killed my girlfriend. INFLAMMRE!” A huge ball of fire appears in Willow’s hands. She puts it in front of Warren, almost touching him. He moans with pain, but Willow ignores him. She makes the fire disappear.

“Wasn’t that fun Warren?” Warren is pouring with sweat and his cuts are now deeper. Willow unseals his mouth.

“I said, wasn’t that fun?” Warren doesn’t look at her. He is terrified but is trying to hide it.

Warren- “PLEASE STOP!”

Willow smiles, “Hmm let me see, do I wanna stop hurting you? Um, NO!” Warren is close to passing out.

“I’m sorry, it was an accident. I did wrong, I know that. I know I’m a bad person, and I know you’re in pain and everything but if you kill me you become me. Do you want that? Could you handle that?”

Willow smiles “Bored now!” and with one quick hand movement, she burns off his skin leaving his body there. Proudly, she says “One down,” then disappears.



Xander, Tara and Anya arrive just in time to see the smoke and lightning from Willow’s disappearing spell. They see Warren’s body.

Xander- “Oh God, no!”

Tara looks catatonic- “What did she do…What did she do!”



To Be Continued…



WillowandTara84
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby Lola19 » Wed Jul 31, 2002 8:44 am

Oooh! More more!

I like this! Looking foward to see where you're going with it!

Well done to your sister, this is good!

Love Lola xxx :love

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby WillowsSlave » Wed Jul 31, 2002 10:26 am

Ohhh. I can't belive I'm going to say this but stupid Willow! I wonder if she's going to figure out that there's no reason to be enraged? Everyone is alive and well. Humm... *possible outcomes speculate in one W/T centric brain.* thank you Miss sis. Can't wait to see how this is gonna be solved. :grin .

Keep it up Miss Sis!!! :bounce :bounce :bounce .



Willow's Slave

Willow: Were more centered on the girl-on-girl action. ~ Talking with Anyaka in Entropy
~`~`~`~
Tara: What about the (furrowed Tarabrow) "trio's evil skeem"?

Willow:(Grin) Well, I'm kinda working on my owwn...(Complete with Willowleer.) ~ In Seeing Red (duh!)

WillowsSlave
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Jul 31, 2002 11:03 am

Oooo i want more! Its gettin more interestin!

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby the vamp nurd » Thu Aug 01, 2002 6:34 am

death distruction etc etc, sounds like a pretty normal day for sunnydale.

Tara find Willow!

The vamp nurd :devil .

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby DigificWriter » Thu Aug 01, 2002 8:41 am

I get what happened. When Willow magically slapped Osiris, she unwittingly unleashed the magical forces needed to revive Tara. However, she's not aware of it yet and is still on her crusade of vengeance. Nice idea, BTW.

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Aug 01, 2002 11:44 am

Cool update! They should find Willow very quickly!!

Tara:"Maybe we dreamed it."

Willow:"Right. Right. Wrong! (points at her head ) Different Brains." Tara:"Oh yeah."



Can we just skip it? Can...can you just be kissing me now?

snuggle79
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby WillowandTara84 » Fri Aug 02, 2002 2:54 pm

Part five coming soon!

WillowandTara84
 


Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains Part I

Postby Centauri2002 » Mon Aug 05, 2002 9:58 am

I see what's happened... interesting. Now that Willow's killed Warren I can see some tension coming between her and the Scoobies, especially Tara. But first, they need to save her from the black magic. I think this is a job for a beautiful blonde witch. :)



Caz

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Re: First Fic: An answer to Seeing Red and Villains

Postby Insanity » Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:20 pm

Oh Yes!

Like it. But poor Tara. I Mean, it´s very good, she´s alive. But to see what Willow has done...God, it must be horrible...



Where is the next update?



Insanity

"Nobody messes with my girl!" Tara, Bargaining

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