Her Eyes

[Ukwilltara]

Title: Her Eyes

Author: Ukwilltara (Lucy)

Spoilers: None

Feedback: Yes please but be kind, this is my first go at writing something for you!! (You can e-mail me, lucy.rees12@ntlworld.com)

Notes: I wrote this when I was trying to get to sleep, if it's not very good then I blame it on the lack of sleep I got that night!!



Eyes can tell us a lot about a person. They can tell us if a person is lying, hiding something or their feelings. When I look into her eyes I see her true beauty, a beauty that is real and honest. Her eyes show love, her love for me. They are kind eyes, that make you feel safe and warm. I melt inside when met with her eyes, I feel beautiful and happy. I can look into them for hours. As I look deeper into them I see her true colours. I see a friend, a lover and a soulmate. I see a special and wonderful person, I see MY TARA.

"I brought my pogo stick just to show her a trick she had so many friends" - Bounce by System Of A Down.

[wiltar]

short but beautiful. Well done!



Patricia

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W-what were they looking at?

-The hotness of you doofus!!!

[ninjitsugrrl]

Very nice. Sort of a mix between poetry and prose. Thank you for posting! And please do continue to share your creative work here.

"What you held in your hand,/what you counted and carefully saved,/all this must go so you know/how desolate the landscape can be
between the regions of kindness.." - Naomi Shihab Nye


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[AmberBensonRockzMyWorld]

Great Job, I liked it. You're very creative and I loved the MY TARA at the end. Oh, and yeah, Eyes can say sooooo much. Much Love to ya,

Lisa

This is our Last Embrace, Must I dream and Always see your face.~ Jeff Buckley "Last goodbye"

[hellmouthhottie20]

Thats so true. you write beutifully.

you must do some more.

And i love your sig, System of a down rule.

Caz

So what if my grades are lousy, you always said its not what you know its who you know.

[Ukwilltara]

Thanks for your replies. I'm currently working on a willow poem.

It should be up soon

Lucy

"I brought my pogo stick just to show her a trick she had so many friends" - Bounce by System Of A Down.

[Scout]

Oh, that was beautiful. I could see Tara's face while I was reading it. Looking forward to the Willow.

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"Tara's not dead at all - she just has a new group of writers." - Sassette

[SquishyTrishy]

LOL thats very cool. I love what you say about Tara's face. I am very glad i stoped by. I hope you are going to write Willow.



~Trish!~

[Thanatopsis]

That was pretty cool. Sort of a poem or prose or something. Either way, I liked it.

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