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Fic: Willow and Tara at Vermilion Sands

Postby Still Waters Run Deep » Tue May 28, 2002 12:31 pm

Title: Willow and Tara at Vermilion Sands

Rating: Haven’t a clue, but since there’s no real smut or violence…. [edited to add, err there may be some further along. Looks like the usual Kitten problem is raising its head again :)

Copyright Disclaimer:The usual..Joss, ME yada, yada, yada……. Oh and JG Ballard, of course.

Feedback: Please. Since this is my first effort I will need constructive feedback. Please be kind. :)

Archive: Whatever. I can't see it being so good you have to keep it :grin

Summary: This takes place in an AU, totally different from the Buffyverse and as such is more an exploration of the texture of the weirdness that is Vermilion Sands, rather than an adventure per se. The premise is that Willow and Tara are disturbed by some-one else in their rented apartment. It quickly becomes apparent that something is not as it should be.

Author’s Note: Sci Fi Buffs amongst you may have noticed that this fic is grounded in the collection of short stories by JG Ballard called Vermilion Sands [1971]. I hope I haven’t strayed too far into plagarism . as ever the further I go into the fic the more it changes from the original concept





Vermilion Sands



The spiritual home of Vermilion Sands is I suppose an arc of desert from Phoenix Arizona to San Diego, by way of the classier bits of Las Vegas and a soupcon of Atlantic City thrown in for good measure. It can also be said to exist at various times along the northern shores of the Mediteranean. But one thing is sure, it does’nt exist in any Mediteranean or Arizona we may have ever known of.



Vermilion Sands: strange, hedonistic, avant garde, an over-lit garish beach resort in a space time you could never have visited……………………





The Studio at Coral D….Setting the scene



X had wound up in VS in order to recuperate from a bad bout of frostbite, collected in the far north whilst surfing the cold waves generated by the ice storms sweeping into northern lands from the high arctic. His warm-suit had given up the ghost when the piezzo-electric circuit which stopped him from freezing to death had malfunctioned after a particularly heavy wipe out. If it had’nt of been for his buddies heaving him out of the snow drift he would have certainly ended up as a rather tasty snack for a passing polar bear. Luckily the only report of bears lately had been of a juvenile measuring in at only 5m or thereabouts.





So as a complete contrast, he had ended up here - outside the main drag of VS, out at Coral D, in an abandoned studio last used, by the looks of it by a mad glider builder. Subsequent enquiries from the rental company elicited the response that a group of cloud sculptors had lived and worked there for a season, until one of their numbers was tragically killed in pursuit of his art. The place had remained empty since that time.



Driving westward on the highway to Lagoon West one day he had stopped to have a look at the coral towers. Gazing at these immense towers stranded on the floor of this fossil sea, he heard music coming from a sand reef some two hundred meters away. Slipping and sliding on the loose sand he had found a shallow basin among the dunes where the sonic statues had run to seed beside a run down studio. Sand rays, disturbed, scattered in front of him screeching and wheeling like a group of demented swifts. As he approached a ripple of colour shimmered over the front of the studio, coalescing subtly from an emerald green through to a rose tinted paleness. This was the first time X had ever come across a psychotropic house and he was intrigued. He walked around the half buried structure and tried to get some sort of other response from the house, but to no avail.



Somewhat disappointed, X made his way back towards the car. As he neared the roadway a sand devil spun over him making the fine dust and sand swirl and billow around. On its passing he noticed something nearby. A battered sign, sand-blasted and more or less horizontal proclaimed that the studio was up for rent; contact E-Z Homes Inc at Lagoon West. On an impulse X keyed up the contact number on the car’s com unit and enquired as to the terms on the Studio out at Coral D.



Two days later he was ensconced in the Studio. The rental company was so keen to get someone, anyone, into the place that they had offered to clean the place up, no references required, just a months rental in advance. X jumped at it. The decision was made easier and the rental, low as it was, more palatable by the fact that on the first evening there he heard the unmistakable sounds of thermal rollers coming in over the salt flats. He looked forward to kitting himself out to go surf the heat waves which he now knew would be nearby.



So the days passed. He healed, fetched a new board and cool-suit and went surfing.

After one particularly intense session he arrived back to find a battered car of strange provenance parked, badly, outside his studio, one wheel firmly embedded into a sand drift, scattered sonic statues bleating plaintively. Putting his board away he straightened out the worst of the carnage and entered the house, peeling off his cold-suit as he went. As he neared the living area he sensed that he was not alone, the house was throbbing in a most sensual manner the rose paleness was being suffused with waves of mellow raspberry. Surprised he hurried forward; the house had really done nothing since he took it over and his skills with the sophisticated circuitry were minimal. So it was a case of leaving well alone.



Entering the living area, there was nothing to see except the vista, which the panoramic windows afforded the occupant. Puzzled he turned away, only to spin back suddenly as he heard a low chuckle, followed by what could only be described as a contented sigh. There was only one place it could have come from…the wide settee situated in the middle of the room.



Without thinking, he strode across the room to confront whatever was there and was met with a pair of emerald green eyes framed by a shock of auburn hair. The owner of the green eyes let out a shriek and promptly shot upright and disappeared to the other end of the sofa, hunkered down to hide her…….nakedness? Wha?



As he gaped at this apparition, no, vision he failed to realise that he was being coolly appraised. Sensing a presence he finally realised that there was another, blond, blue eyed, also naked but displaying a lopsided grin who had just sat there, without a care in the world……..why?



His jaw dropped…jeez she really was a….cool customer, and rather nice too ………….Argh! no wonder she was so cool, he’d stripped off his cold-suit on the way in and was standing there butt-naked and…………he hastily darted away and gathered a large towel from the bedroom nearby. Grabbing another, just in case, he told himself, back he went only to be met by a furious barrage from the redhead who was now clothed in a rather fetching wrap,



“ Who the hell are you and what are you doing here?” came the demand.



“Err, I was about to ask you that self same question” he retorted trying to make sense of the situation and regain if possible, the moral high ground “I live here, have done for at least 3 months now”



“Rubbish!” The blond interjected “ We’ve been here at least a fortnight and we’ve not seen you before, and what’s with this light show”



“ It’s a psychotropic house. It’s supposed to do this, although to be honest its not been this good since I got here. Emotions must have been running kinda high” said X cocking an eyebrow and finally, finally, registering what had been going down on the other side of the couch. “Oh well” he thought “ Old X, don’t bother trying those rusty skills out on either of these two, they’re taken.”



“ A psychotropic house?” exclaimed the redhead. “ No such thing, I would have heard of such a thing. I do science and computers, and…stuff. I think I would have read about it in Scientific American, or Nature or some other educational mag. Coz you know Research Girl and all that…that’s me…”



X gazed at her in something approaching concern as she rambled on.



“Will?” came a voice, curiously strained.



X turned to see the blond standing by the window, visibly shaking and holding onto a chair for support.



“What is it?” both X and the redhead exclaimed as one. The redhead turned and gasped, “ Oh my God, where’s the sea? “ she cried.



“Eh? “ X thought “ What the hell is going on here?”



Who were these girls, what were they doing in his house [although the ‘what’ had been pretty obvious at the time] and why were they freaking out all of a sudden?





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love and kisses


Still Waters


A candle is lit for Tara

See the flame, so small, so bright, forever

Edited by: Still Waters Run Deep at: 5/29/02 2:42:58 pm
Still Waters Run Deep
 


Re: Willow and Tara in Vermilion Sands

Postby shootingstar » Tue May 28, 2002 4:08 pm

Very interesting....I love AU fics! Would have loved to have had his point-of-view as well ;) hehe, everybodys naked!



Update soon?

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Fic: Willow and Tara at Vermilion Sands

Postby Still Waters Run Deep » Wed May 29, 2002 11:37 am

a little more, Oh and some slightly more smutty talk...yep its heading the way most Kitten fic goes.........



Part 2...



Tara sipped her hot chocolate appreciatively. After the sudden shock of finding herself and Will not in a place they thought they were dozens of scenarios had flashed through her head. Chief among them was the thought that she was schizoid and all this was a dream, much like Buffy’s traumatic experience of the previous year. But this chocolate seemed real enough, although it had a strange but pleasant taste. It was not quite chocolate she decided.



A sudden flash of thought came to her, only to be shooed away by Willow’s exclamation of delight.



“Wow, this is great chocolate, I’m big with the chocolate deal. Do you do chocolate, coz I do, although I suppose you must do chocolate, or you wouldn’t do such great chocolate….”



Sensing another ramble disappearing into incoherence, X smiled broadly at the redhead and broke in

“ Yes its good isn’t it. I dropped a little Irish whiskey into it, just to get you over the shock”



Mmmm thought Tara. Irish whiskey and hot chocolate. Ok so we’re not in a hell dimension, apparently, but where the hell are we? She looked out over the balcony at the shimmering desert. To either side were pillars of stone, similar to those that she had once seen in the Painted Desert in Arizona.



“ That’s it “ she exclaimed, “ We’re in Arizona. This is the Painted Desert. Somehow we’ve been transported here”



X looked puzzled. “ No, this is California. Lagoon West is about 5 klicks to the south and Red Wave some 20 klicks north east of here. Where did you think you were?”



“Santa Barbara” said both in unison.



“Never heard of it, “ retorted X. “Look lets try and sort this out, where are you from?”



Willow, “Sunnydale”.



“ Oh I know of that, a little place up north of here, up in the hills”



’In the hills’, but its got docks and a beach “



“Err no, it’s about a 150 klicks from the sea, in fact we’re closer to the sea than Sunnydale and we’re a long way off”



Tara’s heart sank. So she thought if X was right all that desert out there should be the Pacific Ocean, which had somehow disappeared, in between them coming back from the beach and, oh, dammit ……… Willows second orgasm.



Shit, it’s happened, at last. Their lovemaking had seemingly, once again transcended space and time and had shifted them into this place. Since that unpleasantness of last year, their relationship had soared to new heights, and it wasn’t just floating in the Bronze or 2 foot over the bed either. Once or twice, they’d come down from the thrill, and not just in a metaphorical way either, to find themselves in what could only be called ‘compromising positions’ like naked in the SunnyD mall.

She chuckled inwardly at the thought. It had taken all of Will’s hacking skills to delete that little incident out of the police records, the TV station archives and the news archives before it went to every library in the state. It was only through sheer luck that Willows parents were out of town at the time. Even so, Cordelia had phoned Willow to say she had caught it on the CNN evening broadcast … "but it was only a filler, so don’t go freaking out..” was Cordy’s typical comment.



And of course, that’s why the chocolate was not-quite-chocolate, even with a shot of whiskey.



Sighing, she turned to the others, now in an animated discussion about the relative merits of dropping a Baileys into the hot chocolate too.



“Will, it’s happened. Your second orgasm, or maybe the first, I don’t know, shifted us into this AU”



“Naw. Don’t be silly. How could an orgasm do that?” smirked Willow



“Remember the Mall?”



“Oh. Err…well that was your fault”



“Orgasm? Mall?” X sat there, totally fazed.



Tara turned to him, and told him about the Mall incident.



“ OK, I get it “ chuckled X “ so you two are some sort of super magicians who can levitate and do all that shit. Heh, I’ve heard some things in my time but this takes the biscuit”



“What, and surfing thermal waves is the most natural thing in the world” flashed Willow.



“Err Guys” Tara interjected “ I think the whole point is that we don’t belong here. This is an Alternate Universe, not ours and we have to work out what we are going to do about it”



There was absolute silence around the table.



****

Willow sat and pondered. And whilst part of her mind did this the other part was busy taking in the gorgeousness that was Tara MaClay. Her friend, lover, confidant and soul mate. Tara was so much stronger than she was, although you sometimes didn’t get that impression, she mused.

The way Tara, although totally shocked by what lay beyond the window, had soon pulled herself together, realising that something was amiss but that they were in no danger by being here. The big bear of a man who had ‘surprised’ them seemed gentle and welcoming in a somewhat laid-back and rather distant way, a bit like Giles as a Hippy, she thought happily, her mind wandering.



Willow was good at the research, the analytical, the sorting out of knotty problems through diligent and patient work. Once the legwork was done, her mind could compare, contrast and make intuitive leaps in order to come up with an answer. But she needed data. To work on. Which she didn’t have. Yet.



Tara was talking to the Man, X. She thought Man, capital M, why did I think of him like that. He was attractive in a way she supposed, if you liked older men, much older men, she corrected herself quickly.

Tara seemed to get on with him quite well. She was relaxed and smiling. Things had certainly calmed down since that early hysteria, helped in no small measure by the hot chocolate with whiskey, something she’d never tried before. Now what they were talking about?

Willow allowed herself to re-enter the conversation………



“………and that was shortly after he invented the concept of the psychotropic house” X said, in an explaining sort of voice.



“ But Arthur C Clark was a science-fiction writer” Tara stated, “ I don’t know whether he actually ever invented anything”



“2001 and all that” Willow interjected, keen to pick up the thread of the conversation.



“Oh, I wouldn’t know,” said X “ But I do know that he was one of the foremost thinkers of the 18th Century and it was a shame he died so young”



“ 18th century? “ Willow blanched “ err, what’s the date today?”



“September the 25th. Why?”



“No, no. It’s the same day for us too. The year, the year”



“Why, its 1824….and........ from the look on your faces its not that in your world is it?”



“ No,no it isn’t. It’s 2002 there. Tara, you know what this means, we’ve wandered into another time line as well”



****











-----------------------------------

love and kisses


Still Waters


A candle is lit for Tara

See the flame, so small, so bright, forever

Edited by: Still Waters Run Deep at: 5/30/02 3:21:07 pm
Still Waters Run Deep
 


Re: Fic: Willow and Tara at Vermilion Sands

Postby Lucy Moore » Thu May 30, 2002 2:07 pm

Okaaay...



Probably the Kittens have only heard of jg ballard through that David Cronenberg film 'Crash',so maybe you should explain a bit more of the background to this place,so that we have a frame of reference to work with...



Will keep reading to see what's happening...OK so far...



p.s. I don't think Willow would just say 'shit' in that context (maybe that's just me?)

fiat justitia,ruat caelum

Lucy Moore
 


Re: Fic: Willow and Tara at Vermilion Sands

Postby Still Waters Run Deep » Thu May 30, 2002 4:19 pm

Well, the concept for Vermilion Sands was based on what JG Ballard thought the future would be like. He actually stated in the preface to the book that ......

"it is a curious paradox that almost all science fiction, however far removed in time and space, is really about the present. Few attempts have been made to vizulise a unique and self-contained future...."



I interprete that to mean that most sci-fi offerings are really only extensions of present reality, but with ray guns and starships [space operas?] and in order to get away from that you have to make a jump across to fantasy where anything is possible. If you can do that and take the hardware with you then you have come up with a complete new Sci-Fi world.



Hence psychotropic houses, which sense the emotions of the occupants and mould themselves to that mood.

Sonic statues..hardware, metallic, but self-replicating

Surfing thermal waves, my own conceit, based on the premise that if you can surf ocean waves, why not ice storms, the wind, heat, fog, gravity waves

Some out and out fantasy items, of which more later



But I'm not talking fantasy as in the usual LOTR spinoffs, but total fantasy where the normal rules just do not apply. We're still on Earth, but a wildly different one where many of the present laws of physics are'nt quite the same, the landforms are alien, but the place names are sometimes familiar.



A world where many things are familiar, but there's enough weirdness to make you uncomfortable.



More of this will surface as I progress, but for now I am struggling with this story, and trying not to paint Will and Tara into the proverbial corner. I have to come up with a mechanism to get them back, otherwise they'll be stuck there, and we would'nt want that, would we?

-----------------------------------

love and kisses


Still Waters


A candle is lit for Tara

See the flame, so small, so bright, forever

Still Waters Run Deep
 


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