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New Fic - Red

Postby MisLissa02 » Tue Feb 04, 2003 9:49 pm

Title: Red

Author: Mel, hey thats me!

Rating: PG-NC-17... maybe, I've never written smut before, but hey there is a first for everything.

Disclaimer: All Characters don't belong to me. Joss, ME, Warner Brothers and such own them.. yadda yadda just don't sue eh?

Spoliers: None really.

Note: I got this idea while watching a movie and thought it would be an interesting story once i put it together. At this time i apologize for any and all mistakes. I don't have a beta reader and this is my first Fic to be posted. Feedback is more then welcome, since I don't know if I am a flop or not heh.I have got most of this written already so updates will come within a few days of one another. Anyhoo on with the show....Oh and thoughts are in italics









It was movie night at Casa Summers. Dawn and Xander had disapeared earlier to pick up video's and pizza, and upon there arrival back, they were greeted by hungry scoobies and Anya, who just couldn't wait to see 'Texas Chainsaw Killer 3'. However, thats not what she saw when she took the video out, and flung it across the room.



" Xander, if you think there is any way I am watching that cotton ball from hell you've got another thing comming."



" An, It's a cartoon, and its Roger Rabbit! How can anyone not like Roger, besides we agreed before I left no horror flicks tonight. We get enough of that already."



" Well then why did you get THAT movie? It's way scarier then most movies out!.It has a hell spawn on the cover! Besides Texas Chainsaw is a comedy...."



In the kitchen Buffy, Willow, Tara and Dawn were getting plates and cups, listening to the argument comming from the living room. Willow and Dawn were grinning evily at each other and trying very hard not to laugh but when they herd Anya threaten 'No more orgasms' that was the breaking point and both doubled over,clutching each other, laughing. Tara and Buffy looked at each other, then down at the figures on the floor struggling to breathe.



" Why do I have a feeling that this was planned?" said Tara, crossing her arms and raising an eyebrow at Willow and Dawn.



Dawn took that as her cue to go, since it really was all Willow's idea anyway. " Im just gonna go bring some stuff out, you don't need me in here right?" Willow started to speak but Dawn was already gone before she would get a word out. Willow sighed. She was on her own.



" Well see it wasn't exactly planned out. I just told Dawnie that she should really see 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit', because it was really funny and cute and had cartoons mixed with live action and a good story line.." said Willow, pausing to see if the babbling excuse was winning. From the look on Tara's face, clearly..it wasn't.



Uh oh.. this isn't good. It was supposed to be a joke. How was I supposed to know Anya was going to get THAT upset. It's only a cartoon bunny for crying out loud. Ok, have to switch tactics. I'll just simply tell her the truth. That will work. I better pull out a really good pout with it though, you know just to make sure.



Tara was well aware of Willow's internal babbling. The red head always had the same look on her face, talking or not. She smirked and stayed silent, waiting. She's just so cute when she does that



"See, I really did tell Dawn all of that, but I also might have mentioned it would be a hoot to see how Anya would react, and then maybe I told her to hide the video under all the rest so Xander wouldn't see it before they left the store." said Willow, looking at Tara and Buffy with a small smile.



Buffy smirked. She wanted to high five Willow because she had to admit, it was a good one. She didn't , when she caught the look the blond witch was giving the redhead, and she knew that look. It was the ' I'm really not happy with you right now' look, so instead of joining Willow in the not happiness, she decided to stop smirking, and just keep quiet.



" Willow, that really wasn't nice" said a frowning Tara. She just didn't understand why Willow had to push Anya's buttons with the whole bunny thing . She knew they didn't get along all the time, and bickered almost everyday but Anya was Tara's friend, Willow her girlfriend, so she hoped Willow would try and be nicer.



Great, she's mad at me. First the look, then the frown. Ok, now it's time for the pout. Geez, all this for some harmless fun. I wonder what Buffy thought. I caught her smiling before but then she was all seriously- like. Note to self: ask Buffy later.



" Sweetie, your right. I'm sorry. You know me sometimes I don't think, which is funny you know because I am all thinker girl, always thinking. Sometimes I think about things that would be funny, but I don;t think about what peoples reactons would be and that's bad and I'm wrong and I'll think about everything next time before I do anything." said Willow in one breath then flashed her best pout. " Forgive me?"



Tara had already forgiven her, sometime between witnessing her second trip into babble head land, and when she said ' sweetie' It's just so hard to stay mad at her. Then Willow flashed the pout and Tara had to stop herself, from chuckling. It was just like her to use that pout now.



" Pulling out the big guns I see." Willow nodded. Tara looked across to the counter at Buffy and smirked. " What do you think?"



" I'm a sucker for pouty face Willow. I say let thee live"



Tara looked back at Willow with her trademark half grin. Willow went over and wrapped her arms around Tara's waist lightly, flashing her a cheeky smile. Tara cupped Willow's face in her hands and lightly pecked her lips.



" Fine, just be good, and try not to horrify Anya anymore with bunnies. Cartoon or real ones."



" I don't understand why she is so afraid of bunnies. She was a vengence demon for hundreds of years and did things way more terrifying then a ball of fluff could do. How can she be afarid of even cartoon bunnies? Now that's just..." Willow was silenced as Tara brought her finger to Willow's lips and narrowed her eyes.



" Ok, I get it, no more bunnies, I swear. I'll be good" said Willow and kissed the pad of Tara's finger then moved to capture her lips. There kiss was shortend when Anya came into the kitchen tapping her foot.



" Ok, enough of the lesbian public display, lets go watch that horrifying movie."



" Hold it Anya, your actually going to watch it?" said Buffy



" Xander pointed out to me that Dawn really wanted to see it and he promised he lots of mphphhhh" Anya was cut off by a hand covering her mouth which was attached to a blushing Xander.



" Lets just say we made a deal kay? Now on with the yummy and video goodness!" said Xander and dragged a protesting Anya back into the living room.



" You know, I am really glad he came in when he did. I don't think I wanted to hear the end of that deal. Anyway, let's get in there before she starts telling my kid sister about ' deals' and such" said Buffy, who grabbed the plates and pizza boxes and headed into the other room.



" You do relize, we are in for a long night." said Tara, letting go of Willow and grabbing soda and cups, then headed in after the slayer " I hope you know what you got yourself into"



Willow smiled and watched Tara leave.



Little does she know, that besides the joke with Anya, I have something else up my sleeve. Yes Tara... I know exactly what I am doing.





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Thats all for now. Just a little teaser. Lemme know if I should go on!:grin



Edited.. because even though i checked it 2 times, i still messed up.. heh

Edited by: maudmac  at: 12/28/03 12:40 am
MisLissa02
 


Re: New Fic - Red

Postby willntlover » Wed Feb 05, 2003 12:31 am

Definently interesting. You could use a beta though. Just to check for mistakes, and like sentence structure. Also it'd a itty bit confusing as to who is speaking at first.



But it was really cool. I like it mucho.



-Will

"I think finding her soulmate would have made Tara a more confident and secure person" -Amber Benson

willntlover
 


Re: New Fic - Red

Postby MisLissa02 » Wed Feb 05, 2003 1:19 am

ah yes I know. I am in the process of finding a beta reader now. just waiting till someone emails me back saying they can take the job! till then nothing is beta read. sorry all!



i see how many people are reading this and i am worrying its bad because no feedback is being given...



oh well, good or bad, thanks for reading all. update tomorrow most likely

MisLissa02
 


Red

Postby Ten10239 » Wed Feb 05, 2003 2:01 am

I love it! The trick on Anya was just awesome! And who can resist the Willow pout, I ask you.



Leni

Ten10239
 


Re: Red

Postby willntlover » Wed Feb 05, 2003 2:57 am

it's not bad.



some peeps just don't reply if they think they don't have anything constructive to say. Wait that sounded bad. :) I mean that most people would post like "Cool fic!" or somethign similar.



your story rocks. I'm sure peeps love it.



-Will

"I think finding her soulmate would have made Tara a more confident and secure person" -Amber Benson

willntlover
 


Re: Red

Postby saule77 » Wed Feb 05, 2003 3:18 am

I have to agree with willntlover...

I've never been good at giving feedback when all I can say is "great fic"... But I definitely understand why people not giving you any would make you think your story's not good.

Fear not, my friend, it is.



The idea of having Anya watch "Roger Rabbit" is hilarious and should actually be quite fitting into HER concept of a "horror movie night", so what's her problem? :p



And can I say I've always loved Willow's evil streak when it comes to Anya? :wink



Anyway, please do carry on delighting us with this. I, for one, am awaiting impatiently for the next installment! (beta or no beta). :grin



"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart."

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

saule77
 


Re:

Postby chilled monkey » Wed Feb 05, 2003 5:13 am

Nice start.



I'm looking forwards to more.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Re:

Postby Tawilove » Wed Feb 05, 2003 9:59 am

Very funny :lol and i love Willow cuteness when she tries to get out of the hole she just got herself into and Tara raised eyebrow :eyebrow gotta love that too!!! :grin

I'm impatient to see what our red-head has up her sleeve :p



The earth is blue like an orange
Paul Eluard

Tawilove
 


Re: Re:

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Wed Feb 05, 2003 6:09 pm

HEHEHE



*giggles*



Well I for one..hehe I love this so far.. :clap I can't wait to see what Willow has up her sleeve.. :fallen



and hey... i can proof read for ya if you want.:read (ladyofblessedpain@hotmail.com) .although ..i'm not the brightest crayon in the box. ;) .hehe..(look at my fics..i'm sure there are some mistakes in them..) i hardly ever use beta... *shrugs* unless i let a friend peek at them ...





Keep up the great work!



~NICK~

"All fear is the fear of loss. And only through that fear, can we truly love."

SilverWingedNemesis
 


Sorry kittens

Postby MisLissa02 » Wed Feb 05, 2003 11:42 pm

Very sorry kittens, i had an update today but someone closed my laptop down when i was out and it erased everything. i should be able to post it sometime tonight, early tomorrow. thanks all!



toodles

mel

MisLissa02
 


Re: Sorry kittens

Postby Little M » Thu Feb 06, 2003 3:40 am

Awwwww that sucks! Take your time :)

------------------

'I go online sometimes, but everyone's spelling is really bad..it's depressing' - Tara



Amber Online www.amberbenson-online.cjb.net

Little M
 


Re: Sorry kittens

Postby TareBearRS » Thu Feb 06, 2003 12:58 pm

Well i like it so far.

You sure have the Willow babble down, that;s for sure.

And of course Anya and her bunnies are just too funny.

I wonder what Willow has up her sleeve for Tara?



Sorry to hear about your update.



R.

TareBearRS
 


Re:

Postby MisLissa02 » Thu Feb 06, 2003 2:51 pm

Well thanks to a case of insomnia, along with half a pack of cigarettes and a few cups of coffee, I finished the update last night. Good news is I found a beta so Im just wating for it to come back. :bounce



Thanks again. Kittens rock!





toodles

Mel





MisLissa02
 


Re: Re:

Postby BFR from Paris » Thu Feb 06, 2003 3:14 pm

Nice start, funny story :)

I'll keep reading!

BFR from Paris
 


Update

Postby MisLissa02 » Thu Feb 06, 2003 9:18 pm

Notes: See first posting. Also special thanks to Nick, my new Beta. you rock!:clap



" Red " Part 2

PG-13



The Scoobies gathered in the living room and assumed their normal movie

night positions. Willow and Tara snuggled together on one end of the couch

with Anya and Xander on the other, while Buffy and Dawn lounged on pillows

on the floor. As everyone settled in, Buffy pressed play on the remote and

the beginning credits began to roll.



The first 30 minutes passed by with light laughing and one outburst by Anya

who was only too happy when Roger was set on fire, but very disappointed

when Xander pointed out that since he was a cartoon, and not "real", he

would be ok.



Tara wasn't really paying attention to the movie. She was too busy glancing

at Willow. The blonde loved the expressions that would cross her face. It

was like she was listening to the characters talk directly to her. It was

one of the many things Tara loved about Willow. Just as Tara was going to

sneak a glance once again and list the things she loved about Willow in her

head, she noticed that Willow was actually staring back at her with a goofy

grin on her face.



"And just what are you staring at?" asked Willow, scooting closer to Tara so

not a whisp of air could get through them.



"The hotness of you, doofus." Tara answered back, grinning.

Willow chuckled and cupped Tara's cheek, kissing her lightly on the lips and

darting her tounge out to graze Tara's bottom lip teasingly. Tara snaked her

hand to the back of Willow's neck and pulled her closer, deepening the

kiss. Tara could feel that familiar fire start inside. As Willow was just

about to slip her hand under Tara's shirt to graze her stomach, they where

interrupted by someone clearing there throat...loudly. They both sighed and

pulled apart slowly, dabbing little pecks before turning to glance in the

direction of the sound and found Buffy looking at them with a smug look.



"If you guys aren't going to watch, can you take the smoochies upstairs so

we don't have to be subjected to kissing noises?"



Tara was about to get up when she heard Willow say "Sorry Buffy, we'll be

good."



Huh? Did I miss something? No, we are not supposed to be good. I wanna be

bad. VERY bad. Right now! Forget the cartoon bunny. Let's GO.
thought

Tara. She wasn't happy at this point and decided to have a chat with Willow.



"Sweetie" She whispered into Willow's ear, "Just out of curiosity, why are

we not upstairs?"



"Well, see, I haven't seen this movie since Xander and I were younger and I

know I can watch it tomorrow, but I really want us to stay and watch it with

the gang since it is movie night and I figured as soon as the movies are

over we can quickly say goodnight and head off to never ending smoochies, oh

and look, Donald and Daffy are all competitiony with each other and my

favorite part is coming up!" babbled Willow before turning her attention

back to the TV.



The blonde chuckled at the redheads words and mentally told her libido to

pipe down for the time being before joining the redheads attention back at

the movie. Just then, Jessica Rabbit came on the screen and three jaws,

belonging to Willow, Xander and Anya dropped.



"Buhh daa uhh...WOW." Said Xander, drooling at the screen. "Hey Will, I

don't remember her looking like that, do you?"



" Uh, no, I remember a shiny dress, but not THAT in a shiny dress. She looks

so..." Willow was interrupted by Tara's hand lightly squeezing hers and she

glanced up to find an amused Tara, eyebrow sky high.



"Red. I was gonna say red. You know, like wow, red dress and red hair and

red shoes... very, red" Said Willow, who by the end of her ramble was quite

red herself.



"THAT'S Jessica Rabbit?" exclaimed Anya. "She is married to that hell spawn?

Thats SICK! What's the matter with her? No gorgeous person would be married

to 'THAT'. She has to be under a spell, that's the only way. We must go and

find her and help break the spell!" Anya said, and started to rise. Xander

quickly grabbed her and explained to her again, that it was not real and

only a movie.



Willow wasn't really paying attention to Anya's outburst. She was to busy

picturing Tara as Jessica Rabbit; real of course, not cartoonish.



Tara in a red, shiny and short dress. Can we say hummna hummna? At this time

Willow starts hearing the 'Mission Impossible' theme in her head.



Willow Rosenberg: Your mission, should you chose to accept it, is to

get girlfriend, one Tara Maclay, into something like THAT.
Oh yeah,

definitely accepting this one. Question is, do I continue with my current

plan or skip right to this one? Hmm. Both have very VERY good end results.

I'm going to have to think about it.




Willow evily grinned.



Tara caught the strange smile that was playing on Willow's lips and decided

to tease her, thinking Willow was fantasizing about a cartoon character.



"What's with the smile, honey? Naughty thoughts about a cartoon? Should I be

jealous?"



"No, no, just thinking about some things." Willow replied quickly.



"Good things or bad things?" asked Tara.



"Extremely good things." Willow replied, her eyes dreamy and clouded over

with lust filled thoughts about Tara.



"Well, why don't you let me in on the 'extremly good things'" whispered

Tara, lightly nibbling on the redheads ear.



Oh god, she knows I can't resist Tara- nibbles. This isn't fair. If I

don't tell her, she'll stop, if I do, more loving, but my plans are ruined.

Ok Rosenberg, be tough, you can do this. Remember it will pay out very

nicely in the end. Just keep thinking that.




Willow gulped audibly and very gently pushed Tara away from her ear and

pecked her on the lips, stating "Not yet, but you'll find out soon enough."



Tara sat back and mock pouted, making Willow giggle.



"Sorry baby, not even that is going to work. Trust me, it'll be worth the

wait" said Willow wagging her eyebrows, then settling back to watch the

movie..



"Fine." huffed Tara and turned her eyes to the tv but she wasn't really

paying attention, her mind busy with other things.



I wonder what my little vixen has up her sleeve and how long is she going

to make me wait? Geeze is this movie over anytime soon?


--

I know she isn't interested in the movie anymore. She's trying to figure

out what i'm up too. Don't worry sweetie, soon enough. I think I have the

perfect plan too.




And with that last thought, Willow smiled.



********************************************

Thanks for reading! :wave

MisLissa02
 


Re: Update

Postby willntlover » Fri Feb 07, 2003 12:24 am

:lol



Anya's to adorable. Spazzing out :)



BTW what IS Will's fav part of the movie??? I can't wait to read about Willow's grand plan!!



-Will

"I think finding her soulmate would have made Tara a more confident and secure person" -Amber Benson

willntlover
 


Re: Update

Postby BFR from Paris » Fri Feb 07, 2003 1:43 am

:lol Excellent!



By the way, you should post in the udpate thread, it makes it easier for us readers to keep track of the updates (stating the obvious, I know :p )



And may I add : I love "Who framed Roger Rabbit"! :)

BFR from Paris
 


Re: Update

Postby AlteaThree » Fri Feb 07, 2003 3:02 am

That was great

Also, anything with Anya being freaked out is great...I just cant like anyone who hates bunnies!!!! :)

"Hey, did you go to Hollywood Upstairs Medical college too?"

AlteaThree
 


Re: Update

Postby xita » Sun Feb 09, 2003 11:12 am

Ooh, this is such fun. I am all caught up in Willow's schemes and I share her little fantasy , be fun to see Tara in that. And I am really curious about this scheme of hers. I look forward to more.

-----------------
Baby you make my love come down

Oh you make my love come down

Make it come all the way down
-
Evelyn Champagne King

xita
 


Re: Update

Postby singgirl » Sun Feb 09, 2003 8:18 pm

I love it! Anya is so funny! :)

:peace Pax! -Bev

singgirl
 


Re: Update

Postby BytrSuite » Sun Dec 28, 2003 1:30 am

This is new to the archive. You can leave feedback!



To the creator of this thread: If you ever want to add something new, just email a mod and we'll move it to the active Pens board.



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Edited by: maudmac  at: 12/28/03 12:42 am
BytrSuite
 


Re: Update

Postby amazonaa » Fri Jul 16, 2004 1:19 pm

I love this. its great and whats this grand plan that willow has huh?





well i guess ill wait.







brittney

amazonaa
 


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