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fic: >insert imaginative title here<

Postby Loco2 » Tue Jun 11, 2002 3:35 pm

Ok, if this is actually on the board right now, I have shocked even myself by posting it. :eek



ok,

author: steph

title: >insert imaginative title here<

spoilers: s4, I think. no important ones though

disclaimer: Joss owns them. I do not.

rating: PG I should think, sorry, no 18 stuff unless anyone wants to help me.

feedback: Welcomed gladly, good or bad, but if you think this fic stinks, please don’t hold it against me, I know I suck at this

summary: willow questions, sort of. Then they go out

notes: this is probably gonna be a big honking (unintentional) insult to w/t. sorry. And also sorry for any typos, there’ll probably be quite a few…





“Hey, Will, you O.K?” Buffy Summers asked her friend. When Willow Rosenberg, the cute redheaded hacker did not respond, Buffy got a little concerned.

“Hey Will?” She repeated a little louder, reaching over the table where Willow’s breakfast lay untouched and tapping the hacker lightly on the shoulder.

Willow jumped out of her reverie when she felt something touch her on the shoulder. Relieved to see it was Buffy, she apologised, “Buffy, sorry. I was just thinking.”

“About Oz?” Buffy asked, looking sympathetic.

“No!” Willow replied a little too quickly. She had been thinking about Tara, her new friend, just as she had been a lot lately. She didn’t like Buffy confusing the two of them; she was still hurt and a little angry with Oz for cheating on her. She didn’t like to think about him too much, the thoughts compared to the ones she had about Tara just confused her. Realising she had snapped at Buffy she offered an apologetic lop-sided smile to her friend.

Buffy was concerned. Her redheaded friend had been daydreaming a lot lately and she was sure it wasn’t about Oz. Every time she mentioned him the hacker got a little ratty. “It’s ok.” Buffy said in reply to the cute smile she received from her friend. “Ooh, Riley’s here!” She exclaimed, spotting her spanking new boyfriend walking over from the breakfast queue.

“Great.” Willow muttered under her breath, too quiet for Buffy to hear.

More to come



”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Edited by: Loco2 at: 6/15/02 3:47:44 am
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fic: >insert imaginative title here<

Postby Loco2 » Tue Jun 11, 2002 3:37 pm

Tara Maclay sat on her bed in her dorm room in a gaze. ‘Oh Willow,’ she thought to herself, ‘you are so cute. If only you knew the way I feel about you.’ She was obsessed with that girl. ‘And for good reason, too.’ She added to herself.

Picturing Willow in her mind, her pretty green eyes, the lips that she wanted so much to feel on her own, her gorgeous, soft…’Stop. Stop right there miss Maclay, you will not think these things about your friend,’ she scolded herself, ‘After all, she’s just broken up with her boyfriend, *Boy*friend.’

Just as her resolve began to fade and Willow’s features floated back into her head she had the initiative to look at the small clock on her desk, for when she started thinking about Willow she could continue on forages.

“Damnit, late for class,” she muttered to herself as she hastily picked up her books and a few pens. “Oh, well, it was worth it…”



I don’t believe I posted that.



ok, this is probably the style it’s gonna be written the whole way through, you guys want more or you want me to quit now before I hurt someone?





edited a lot later on to add: k, this fic does actually get quite a bit better, soon. please don't be put off by the exceptionally crappy start :)

”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Edited by: Loco2 at: 7/27/02 3:19:25 am
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Re: fic: >insert imaginative title here<

Postby Pudds » Tue Jun 11, 2002 4:12 pm

You'll only hurt us if you don't continue....So giddy up cowboy and get the updates goin'!

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Re: fic: >insert imaginative title here<

Postby TheWhiz » Tue Jun 11, 2002 4:50 pm

Please carry on :) Glad you posted, don't put yourself and your talents down!!!!

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

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keep going!

Postby Lynz » Tue Jun 11, 2002 5:34 pm

Yeah i agree, keep going! Don't be shy, I look forward to more ;)





Lynz

xxxx

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Re: keep going!

Postby pikescoob » Wed Jun 12, 2002 6:33 am

Yes I agree...please continue. I like it!! :)



--Michelle

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Re: keep going!

Postby Rocktoddy » Wed Jun 12, 2002 7:37 am

Ooh, I just love shorty short stories/updates...!!! Makes me curious for more, so keep going! I write W/T stuff all the time, but I have this fear of posting it... (could be because I can't take criticism :cry ...)

To know that there are people out there who have the guts :cool to do it... makes me a very happy camper!!!

:bounce :bounce :bounce



Rocktoddy

"They kill mice, hmmm..."-Crazy Brain-Sucked Tara, Tough Love
"You mean like a 'sexy' peanut butter sandwich?"-Willow, No Matter Where You Go by DarkWiccan

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Re: keep going!

Postby tommo » Wed Jun 12, 2002 8:03 am

There's some nice conflict here within Willow's own mind and you clearly have empathy for her character.



Why don't you try grabbing yourself a beta reader from the list at the top of the pens board, mainly for discussion purposes, not really for technique as it doesn't look like you need a beta reader for that. But they might help you to lengthen the parts you're posting so that each little chapter contains some plot advancement. :)


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beta

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:24 am

thanks for all the feedback, i have more but it's been suggested i get a beta reader first, a suggestion i like.



*tommo, how do i get one? do i just kinda ask nicely? do you know of anyone or could possibly help me yourself....please? :shy

”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Loco2
 


Re: beta

Postby xita » Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:33 am

We have a thread for available beta readers :)

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Willow and Tara Love

Truly and Forever

Edited by: xita  at: 6/12/02 8:33:33 am
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more

Postby Loco2 » Wed Jun 12, 2002 1:36 pm

ok, thanks to Ruth for agreeing to beta, more to come in a bit.:)

”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Loco2
 


Re: more

Postby Loco2 » Sat Jun 15, 2002 4:49 am

mm 'kay, here u go:

(i had to edit cos the italics didn't work: so thoughts are in*--*)





Bleep bleep. Bleep bleep. “Oh, Will, we gotta go, see you later, ok?” Buffy said hurriedly to Willow as she and Riley were called away for something demonic.



“Hmm, what?” Willow asked. She had once again started thinking about Tara when Riley came over. As a result she had missed Buffy and Riley’s pagers going off. She looked to Buffy for explanation but only got a rushed response as the Slayer stood up to go with Riley at her side. “Gotta go. Initiative stuff. Talk later.” By the time Buffy had finished speaking, she and Riley were halfway across the cafeteria.



“Ok, bye.” Willow said, though she might as well not have bothered. Buffy was long gone.

“Stupid little beepy friend stealers.” she muttered, not so impressed with Riley’s ‘Let’s give Buffy a pager so she can come fight with us and learn all the top secret info’ idea.



*I wonder what Tara’s doing right now*, she thought, her mood changing instantly to something somewhat lighter, floaty, even. She checked her watch, Scooby Doo’s arms pointing to her that it was 9:20. *She’s still in class, probably taking notes,* the redhead assumed.

*she’ll be out soon, maybe I should go to her dorm to wait for her.* She was pondering this idea when a beautiful vision filled her head, all other coherent thoughts forgotten. Tara had just walked in.



At the mere sight of Tara Willow’s insides squirked and a big dumb grin appeared uninvited on her face. *Now that’s not right...* she thought but then something else pushed forward, *She’s so beautiful!* Something in the back of her head told her not to go there and another told her it wasn’t right for her to think that way about another woman, but Willow pushed these thoughts back further to be dealt with later. Right now she didn’t care. All she cared about was this vision of beauty currently lining up to catch a late breakfast.



Tara was shuffling along with her head down, her face hidden by blond hair.



*Why doesn’t she look up?* Willow thought. *She’s hiding her pretty face.* Willow’s grin turned to a slight pout as the gorgeous blond managed to reach the canteen and get herself some breakfast without once lifting her head.



Her pout turned to a frown when Tara picked up her bagel and went to sit down – in the opposite direction to Willow’s table.

The redhead hastily picked up her own bagel off the plate and rushed to Tara’s side.



“Hey, Tara!” she said brightly to the blond.



Tara jumped a little and looked at Willow startled. When she saw out who it was, however, her heart skipped a beat. She opened her mouth to say something but found herself speechless.



When Tara looked at Willow, her mouth hanging slightly open and a comical look on her face, the hacker’s dopey grin reappeared full force. She tried to hold it back but could only succeed in biting her lip, trying to disguise it somewhat. It didn’t work.

The hacker couldn’t help it, though, her insides were doing flip-flops.



“Er, h-hi, Will.” Tara managed eventually, closing her mouth that she found to be open.

“Hi!” she replied.

“Um, do y-you think we could s-sit down?”

“Sure.” As she looked around, Willow realised there were rather a few people looking at them - they had been staring at each other for a while. She swallowed tightly, glad that Tara had said something to break her out of her trance or there was a good possibility she would have drooled on herself.



They walked quickly over to the nearest empty table and sat down.



“So, what have you been up to?” Willow asked, trying to make conversation. *God she is so lovely. I can’t get enough of her.*

“I, er, I found a new spell w-we could try.” *I want her so bad. If only she weren’t straight!*



“Oh, cool. What is it?” Willow asked, watching Tara as she took a bite of her bagel, chewed, swallowed…

“It’s a pretty one; show’s you people’s auras for a little while. I did it once with my mom, h-hers was beautiful, gold and sh-shiny.” She bravely fought the wave of sadness that threatened to wash over her when she thought about her mom. *I bet Willow’s is blinding.* She thought, putting down her now half-eaten bagel.



“Um Tara?”

“Yeah?”

“You have syrup on your face.”

“Oops, where?”

“Right here.” Willow reached out and wiped the drop of syrup off Tara’s cheek with her index finger. When their skin touched, Willow could practically feel the electricity between them crackling on her fingertip. It gave her tingles on her spine and a major squirk just below her stomach.



“Oohh.” Tara moaned quietly, her whole body left tingling from Willow’s touch.



Willow couldn’t herself believe what she did next, or how or why for that matter. Slowly, she lifted her finger to her mouth and seductively sucked off the syrup. “Mmm, it’s good.”



Tara was left in shock. *Did she just do that?! Sweet Jesus, I can’t resist her!*



Willow, embarrassed, and surprised at herself hastily looked at her watch, relieved to find that her class started in five minutes.



“Er, Tara, I have class right now but I’ll see you at one?”

“Sure thing,” Tara replied, wishing Willow would stay for a bit but also understood the hacker’s need to get out of the awkward situation. “I’ll be waiting,” she added, *for as long as it takes, but please don’t leave me here like this for too long,* she pleaded silently.



”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Edited by: Loco2 at: 6/15/02 4:13:38 am
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Re: more

Postby fidds » Sat Jun 15, 2002 5:02 am

ooh there's sparks between them *happy sigh*

great update!

can't wait for the next part :)



*Hannah*

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I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

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Re: more

Postby tommo » Sat Jun 15, 2002 6:28 am

:) This is looking really good. I like how you're exploring the beginnings of their relationship, complete with unintentional (or intentional) flirting. :lol



The italics should work if you do [ i ] (without the spacing) and [ / i ] when you're finished. Unless it's something to do with EzCodes, in which case I haven't a clue because I'm technologically challenged. ;)


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Re: more

Postby TheWhiz » Sat Jun 15, 2002 7:03 am

A great update! I'm glad you decided to continue! I love reading the fics situated around the beginning of their relationship :) Look forward to next part.

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

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Re: more

Postby Emily First » Sat Jun 15, 2002 10:08 am

I feel like going up to the both of them and giving each a good shake! Is this what they call dynamic tension...Whatever,I'm sure you'll solve it in your own time - you're the bard after all !



Liking the way you're writing this - looking forward to the continuation...

vive,valeque.

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Re: more

Postby xita » Sat Jun 15, 2002 2:02 pm

Oh this is so cute, they are in such crush mode. I love it. And the syrup incident, hee, Willow's got the touch! Thanks for the update.

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Willow and Tara Love

Truly and Forever

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Re: more

Postby MadeinNZ » Sat Jun 15, 2002 7:50 pm

Gotta love syrup. Look forward to the next instalment.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

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Re: more

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 16, 2002 9:17 am

just caught up with this fic and its very very very good if u didnt get that from previous replies lol. Like the syrup bit - syrup is good. Oh and *if only she werent straight!* - how much do I think that every day!!! Also, liked the *oh sweet jesus* bit - just cos it was funny lol. Update sooooon please! :D

love + syrup

Alyson

xxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

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here's summore

Postby Loco2 » Sun Jun 16, 2002 9:52 am

thank you all for reading and replying, and yeah, syrup IS good, ;) , anyhoo, more to the point: here's another update...



Willow sat in the lecture hall with her head in her hands. Confusing, difficult thoughts running through her head. How could I do that? Why did I feel the need to do that? Why am I sitting here trying to figure out my feelings towards another woman? I’m straight, I, Willow Rosenberg am straight. No I’m not, I want Tara! But I loved Oz. Oh god help me!



She groaned quietly into her wrist, completely baffled as to what it all meant. And what’s with those tingles and my insides going funny?!



Suddenly aware of someone’s eyes on her, she looked up to see a girl peering into her face.

“You ok?”

“Yeah, sure. I’ve just got…er…indigestion.” she made the weak excuse.

“Oh.” said the dark haired girl, clearly not believing Willow, and going back to taking notes.



Willow’s head might have been all jumbly but she was sure of one thing: spending time with Tara made her all warm and fuzzy inside and she wanted to get close to her in a way she never had with any of her other friends. Eventually she decided to simplify all of her thoughts and solve them like a mathematical equation.



Ok, so I like Tara. Oz is gone. I never really had a proper boyfriend before him. I’ve actually kinda been looking at girls differently lately. I like no boys at all the way I like her. She frowned, concentrating. I’ve only ever properly been out with one guy who I loved but there was always something missing. Now he’s gone. I notice girls a lot more than guys, hell, I even have problems deciding whether a guy is good looking any more. Now I cannot stop thinking about Tara. I get tingles just from touching her. I am also noticing certain body parts that never appealed to me before.



She frowned harder, blocking all sounds of her professor talking out of her head and concentrating intently on only this, after all, what was more important, one more philosophy lecture or actually figuring out her own life?



Right, so, I’ve always wanted so much to fit in so maybe it was just this incredible urge to be normal that made me long for Xander so much. Well, we all know how well that worked out. When I dated Oz I felt important, I was dating a cool musician, I wasn’t just alone, dull, pathetic Willow. I loved him of course, but then, I guess I love Giles in a way. I guess Oz was just like this really good friend in my head. But that didn’t work out either. Now I have become more confident and I don’t mind so much what people think of me, so it makes sense that now I am realising I like girls. I like Tara. I have sexual feelings for Tara. I love Tara. I am gay. I, Willow Rosenberg am gay.



“Holy Crap!” the redhead almost yelled, her eyes wide as her long, babbly train of thought came to a stunning conclusion. Lucky for her, though, the class had finished so her shout was drowned out somewhat by the bustling going on around her. All she received for her outburst were a few funny looks.



“Well, I’m gonna have to get used to that, now.” she concluded, speaking a lot quieter now as she grabbed her things to go.





ps. thanks ruth for beta'ing (at least i think that's a word...)

and to all: if the italics still didn't work, then thoughts are in the bits that look like i *tried* to put them in italics :grin



and i still had to edit cos i missed a grammar mistake.....

”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Edited by: Loco2 at: 6/16/02 8:56:35 am
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Re: here's summore

Postby ally02 » Sun Jun 16, 2002 10:01 am

yay! An update! Loved Willow's long internal babble and her *holy crap* when she realised she was gay. Funny stuff. Dont want to be a fanfic pig but - more soon please!!!

love + hugz

Alyson

xxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

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hey all

Postby Loco2 » Sun Jun 16, 2002 3:14 pm

ok, it's occurred to me that i should probably do individual replies (i've noticed they are useful in keeping people reading. :lol )



pudds: i don't believe you but the updates came and hopefully they'll carry on, :)



thewhiz: thank you and i'm glad you're glad.



lynz: well, i'm gonna keep going (try, at least if nothing else ;) )



pikescoob: thanks for reading and i'm glad you like it



rocktoddy: hey, if i can do it you can, too. go ahead, post. if they don't like it they don't have to reply, do they?:)



tommo: hmm, what to say? thank you for agreeing to beta, thank you for reading. and replying. and offering help. is that it? ;)



xita: thank you for reading and replying. i'm glad you like it.



fidds:thanks for reading, happy you like it.



emily first:don't shake 'em, i'm sure they didn't mean to frustrate you. and heh, i've never been described as a bard before....thanks



madeinnz: yep, who doesn't love syrup on some sexy Wiccas?;)



ally02: glad you like it, and the 'if only she weren't straight bit', well, me too. absolutely sucks doesn't it. ;) but, gotta say, you're not a fanfic pic. a fanfic whore, maybe, but not a pig. :lol





thanks all for reading and there should be more in a little while.

















”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Loco2
 


Re:

Postby mollyig » Mon Jun 17, 2002 1:01 am

Just found this.



I think its entirely typical of Willow to use logic to figure out her feelings for Tara.



Now all she has to do is tell her!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

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Re:

Postby Loco2 » Mon Jun 17, 2002 1:22 pm

heh, maybe she won't so much tell her as show her...



but then, yeah right, like i'm gonna be able to pull *that* off - so maybe the telling is a good thing:)



steph



edited to add: typical, would you look at that! - just when i fix my avatar it turns out the other one has fixed itself up...rude.

”What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"

Edited by: Loco2 at: 6/17/02 12:24:27 pm
Loco2
 


BunnyAnya

Postby shootingstar » Mon Jun 17, 2002 1:32 pm

I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next update...but i really posted to say I Love You Avatar! It's brilliant, BunnyAnya is so cool!



Luv Star x

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-Girl, Interrupted.

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Re: BunnyAnya

Postby Loco2 » Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:32 am

ok, first:

shootingstar: i like bunnyanya, too, heh: *What? bunnies are scary!* she's hilarious.



but, now, the point of this message, here's an update:





Tara sat at the small, two-seated lunch table waiting for Willow to arrive. Getting bored, she glanced at the clock on the opposite wall: 1:12. Where is she? Surely she isn’t still embarrassed about the syrup, The blond looked down at her cheeseburger and started to pick at the little brown sesame seeds covering it. She could hear laughter and chatting all around her. Everyone, it seemed, was having a good time but her. Maybe she’s ditched me. she thought glumly.



A few painfully slow minutes and a small pile of sesame seeds later she heard a plate coming in contact with the table and the scraping of a chair against the floor as someone sat down opposite her.



“Hey, Tara.” said a familiar voice, Tara looked up immediately when she realised who it was.



“Hi, Will. I thought you weren’t coming…” she said, taking in Willow’s striking features, the green eyes, the short crimson hair, the scent that belonged only to this woman.



“Well, I’m here. I mean, why wouldn’t I be here? It’s not like I have any other place to be, or like I would be by myself pining away over Oz or any other guy for that matter. Because I wouldn’t, I have no reason to…” Will, now would be a very good time to shut your big fat hairy mouth! she told herself, unable to stop the babble as she tried to explain to Tara that she wouldn’t be anywhere else.



Tara couldn’t help but giggle slightly at the cute babble coming from the hacker’s mouth, it was just funny, and sweet, and it suited her.

Willow found herself smiling, too. “Hey, you’re laughing at me, now I’m all offended.” she announced, a look of mock hurt on her face.



“I *snort* I can’t help it, *snort*” Tara regained her composure as she realised she was only laughing for the sake of laughing. It felt good to laugh. “I’m sorry. I wasn’t so much laughing at you as…well…”



“Giggling?” Willow offered, wishing she had ex-ray vision to see anything underneath Tara’s baggy, too-big sweater.



“Exactly. Purely innocent.” Tara agreed, smiling. By some coincidence, when she described herself as ‘innocent’, the clouds chose that second to move from the sun’s path and a golden ray of light shined through the window, engulfing the gentle-hearted Wicca.



The sight warmed Willow’s heart and gave her a tingle. She changed the subject to one which gave her the opportunity to look away, saving her secret before it became obvious as to just how the blond affected her.



“Nice little collection,” the redhead commented, pointing to the sesame seeds on Tara’s plate, before a worrying thought hit her: “Are you one of those people who collect stuff that looks like things?” she asked, looking a little anxious.



“I’m pretty sure I’m not. What did you say?” Tara answered, her face giving away her confusion, her eyebrows creasing together slightly, not quite understanding the hacker’s question.



“Hey, Tara?” Willow asked, changing the subject and lowering her face from the blonde’s view, a few strands of red effectively hiding her eyes.



“Yeah?”



“Do you want to go out for coffee sometime? I know we’ve already gone places together and we already know each other and all that. It’s just I would really like coffee. With you.” came the hacker’s nervous question.



“Sure, I’d really like that, too. But you still want to do that spell tonight, right?” the blond answered, majorly impressed with Willow’s suggestion. That would make it a coffee date, wouldn’t it? Then we would be on a kind of date?



“Definitely. It sounds like fun and you said it was pretty. How about we go for coffee tomorrow lunchtime?” the hacker assured her, remembering it was Saturday tomorrow. She said yes! She wasn’t freaked out by a coffee date at all!



“Ok, I’ll see you at the Espresso Pump?” Tara asked, knowing this was one of Willow’s favourite coffee places.



“Yeah, ‘bout two?”



“That’s fine.” now the blond was getting pretty damn hopeful. It was obvious to her Willow had been thinking about her sexuality and she just hoped her decision had come down on the side of girls, well, her, to be more precise, Now that sounded bad,.



Just as she had to suppress a grin, she saw the Slayer striding towards them with a plate full of French Fries and it happened automatically.



“Hi Will. Hi…er…Will’s friend.” she greeted them brightly, sitting on one corner of the table, not bothering to get herself a chair.



“I-it’s T-Tara.” The blond Wicca told her, intimidated by her for some reason, Huh, possibly the SUPER STRENGTH that could totally kick your ass?! she asked herself, annoyed that her stutter returned when talking to Buffy.



“Hi Tara,” she corrected herself, offering the shy Wicca a French Fry as she stuffed her own face.



“N-no, thank you,” the shy Wicca declined.



“What’s with all the pep, Miss Beaming?” Willow asked her friend, seeing Tara’s discomfort and suspecting that the Slayer had been making out with Riley.



“Nothing. Just in a great mood,” she answered.



“What?” she asked when the redhead raised an eyebrow at her. She can read me like a book she thought, suddenly thankful for a friend like Willow.



“Oh, nothing,” the hacker said irritatingly breezily. “What happened earlier by the way, with the beepers?”



“Oh, false alarm. No big,” Buffy reassured. “Sorry for ditching you,” she added, truly apologetic.



“It’s ok, I didn’t mind,” the hacker lied, finding the plain, cream-coloured table top to be an interesting thing to look at at that particular moment in time.



“Hey, do you want to go to The Bronze tonight? You, me, Xander, maybe Anya?” she posed the question to Willow, seeing her friend was lying and trying to make up for hurting her. Then realised she was being rude to Tara and turned to Willow’s friend, uh oh, that didn’t go down too well she thought, seeing the Wicca’s head was down, her face hidden by dark blond hair. Adding that to her exceedingly unrevealing clothing, you could see practically no human at all. “Are you free, Tara, you could come, meet the gang,”



Tara looked to Willow for support in declining Buffy’s offer. I hope she doesn’t change her mind about tonight…



“Um, we are kind of doing something tonight. A spell.” Willow intervened.



“Oh,” the Slayer was obviously hurt but her pout only lasted a few seconds before she perked up again. “Ok, then I guess I’ll just have to stay with Riley tonight...” Heh, not that I mind too much…



“Ok, sorry.” Ok, I felt bad when she ditched me earlier, now I’m doing the same to her. Oh well, I’ll just have to make it up to her sometime.



“Um, W-Will? I h-have some work to do. I-I’ll see you later?” Tara interrupted, feeling guilty for being the reason Willow couldn’t see her friends tonight and flat out pissed off with herself for stuttering so badly.



“Ok, see you later, bye!” the redhead called, watching Tara hurry away. Looking forward to that evening.



“Bye, Tara,” Buffy yelled after the retreating blond. whilst hungrily eyeing the burger the Wicca had left behind, having finished her French Fries.



"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Who sponsered career day this year, The Brittish Soccer Fan Association?!" - Xander - What's My Line?
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: BunnyAnya

Postby fidds » Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:51 am

great update!

poor Tara with negative feelings- you can write the characters really well!

can't wait for the next update :)



*Hannah*

********************************************
I just needed someone to talk to, you were just too busy with yourself, you were never there for me to express how i felt ,i just stuffed it down- *STAIND -FADE*

fidds
 


Re: BunnyAnya

Postby ally02 » Fri Jun 21, 2002 4:16 pm

Hi, its the fanfic whore lol. Wooohooohooo! You updated! **does a little dance round the room....then stops when she gets strange looks from the cat **



Anyhoo...great update! Willow is so Willowy - which makes no sense, but u know wot I mean! I hope : Ok think back to english class...oh yeah, good characterisation! Thats the word!



I do have one complaint though - ur leaving me waiting for the next part and I was to see the date! Grrrr! Remember - coffee is not a date, its caffinated beverage...unless its two wiccan lovers going for coffee!



More soon please! Feed the addiction! Leaving now!



love Aly xxxxxxxxxxx

You cannot have more catnip! You have a catnip problem!

ally02
 


Coffee Date

Postby tommo » Fri Jun 21, 2002 4:22 pm

Ah yes, a coffee date sounds exciting. Because you know, it's a coffee thing. But it's also a date thing. Just uh, with coffee. :)



It looks great, by the way. Thanks for posting this.


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Squish. Squish. Squish.

tommo
 


Re: BunnyAnya

Postby Loco2 » Fri Jun 21, 2002 4:28 pm

replies...cos i'm quite possibly the least patient person on this earth:



fidds: thank you, i, myself thought they were a little off. cheers for the reply, they are, like, this big fat hairy deal for me.



ally02: cats are rude, huh? mine gives me strange looks all the time. in fact, he's sitting on the sofa looking at me like: 'i'm better than you. you are strange' right now., heh heh, little does he know, it's worming tablet night....:evil the coffee thing, though, i'm afraid you're gonna have to wait a while for that, you'll see why though, i've written up quite a bit, i just have to get it betad.



tommo: i know what you mean. and of course the coffee is the whole point, not the date part at all...;)

i hope you like the changes. i tried!



steph



edited because while i was typing away this reply, tommo posted so i missed it.

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Edited by: Loco2 at: 6/21/02 3:37:18 pm
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