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FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby capricornmist » Mon May 06, 2002 2:15 pm

Title: Burning

Author: Capricornmist

Feedback: Sure just be kind, it is my first time!

Summary: Warm moments between are two favourite lovers.

Disclaimer: All characters are not mine, they are owned by Joss etc etc etc.

Rating: NC-17 maybe



Tara stood looking out of the bedroom window, gazing out at the perfect blue sky.

She had gotten out of bed with the intention of getting dressed, going downstairs and spending sometime with others. It was unusually quite at the moment, no beasties, no oogley booglies, as Dawn once said. She giggled to herself as she remembered Dawn spouting those words.

It was nice being able to just relax, well maybe relax wasn`t the right word. Everyone was kind of on edge, wondering why it was so quite.

As long as I get sometime to spend with my baby, that’s all that matters. She thought as a sexy smiled escaped her lips.



She heard the door knob go and the padding of tired feet. “hey baby, your awake” Willow said, with a look of excitement on her face. “hey, you want me to get you some breakfast” Tara said turning her body around to meet Willow`s outstretched arms.



Willow`s head was racing with thoughts. Well I would kinda like you for breakfast, lunch and dinner actually but we could start with pancakes and then maybe work from that. Hmmmm Tara pancakes, Willow and Tara sandwich. Oh stop it! Get a grip!



With that Willow let out a little chuckle, “erm yeah, pancakes would be swell” she said with a blush reaching her cheeks. Tara smiled, “You got it”. Willow felt like lighting had struck her. Wow she only has to smile and I feel like melting.



Tara turned around again to take one last look out of the window. “It`s a really nice day maybe we could out for a walk later, just you and me, some quality time?”. Turning her head slightly so she could see Willow. She saw the look of disapointment on Willows face, “Erm or we could just not….er go anywhere, it`s..erm, up to you” Tara said, alittle deflated that her lover didn`t agree.



Willow spooned Tara from behind, her hands sliding around Tara`s shapely waist. “If that`s what you wanna do baby, sure, but I was kinda hoping to spend some quality time with you in here today, you know”. Willow said with a small grin.

“What you wanna keep me in bed all day!” Tara asked with a very innocent charm. “Erm…….no, I knew that sentence was to short! I`m not saying that just…….you know, I wanted to be able to be close to you all day, all snuggly and stuff and we can`t really do that while were out”.



Tara greeted the tightening arms around her waist with her own, taking hold of Willows hands and interlocking their fingers.

“Although you know, the whole bed idea, all day, doesn`t seem too bad either”.

Tara whispered in a very low sultry tone. Willow let out a giggle.

“Huh, now who is being the vixen!”. Willow met Tara`s gaze and smiled as her blue eyes sparkled in the sunlight. Tara had that hungry look in her eyes, screaming her silent desire for her Willow.

“Well you started it”, Tara`s smile was wide and smouldering. “Well yeah….but if you weren`t so hot, well……I could control myself but you know you got the whole sexy babe thing going on and well………it`s drives me crazy!”. You always drive me crazy. Willow thought to herself.

“Well what the redhead wants the redhead gets”, “But first pancakes, looks like I`m gonna need my strength today”.



Both giggling.Willow gently lifted one of her arms up to meet Tara`s face, softly cupping her chin and bringing her face around to meet her own. Tara`s eyes close for a moment when the contact is made, a small sigh escaping her.

Willow meets Tara`s mouth with her own, a small, light kiss but she senses Tara`s desire for more. Willows tongue lightly brushes over Tara`s full lips.

Oh god. Tara thought. Kiss me, harder and never stop. Don`t let go of my body until…….. pancakes first, play later, come on Tara, concentrate……mmmmm…no, no not on that, breakfast you duffus!



Willow was now meeting Tara`s firm kisses, both their bodies crying out to feel one anothers heat. Then

“Hey you guys in there?”, “Come on, wakey, wakey”. Willow rested her head on her lovers shoulder, whispering under her breath, “Now what, can`t I just get some make out time with my hot gal over here!”. Tara gave a giggle followed by a rye smile, “Wait a minute Dawnie” Tara said, trying to rid herself of the hot flush that had started taking over her body.

“Well can I come in? or erm, or are you busy?”. A small, low voice replied.



Willows mouth opened to give her reply but was immediately silenced by Tara`s hand, “Don`t even think about it”, Tara whispered with a smile.

“Willow was just on her way to get some breakfast for us”, Willows browed furrowed, “Oh was I!”, “Yes baby you were”. Tara smiled.

Dawn opened the door tentatively, “Well there is no need, I got some right here!”, “I made it all myself” she said with a self satisfied grin. “Oh dawnie, that`s sweet. Does this mean that you made a `I made this myself mess` downstairs?”.

Tara said with a lop sided smile.



“Well I can clean up” Dawn replied a slight blush rushing her cheeks.

“I`ll leave you two to it…..erm the breakfast I mean, you know, ok Dawnie, time to exit!” With that the door closed shut behind her.



“Awwww, isn`t this sweet” Tara gestured at the incredibly overburdended tray. “Sheesh, Dawnie trying to fatten us up for winter or something?”, Willow said, her brow furrowed again. God she looks so sexy when she does that. Hell she is sexy anyway, oh god I wish I could just……… Concentrate on breakfast!!! Tara tried to push her desires to the back of her mind, but it was never going to work her body was already into overtime, every nerve in her body was now painfully sensitive. Longing to be touched and caressed.



Tara adjusted the tray so it was laid in between them, in the centre of the bed.

“So what do you fancy baby?”, Tara asked, feeling a sexy smile escape her as she guessed what Willows answer would be.

“Let me see……well I fancy abit of this on this”, Willow gestured towards Tara`s mouth and then her own.



Tara leaned forward, over the tray, her hand reaching forward to cup Willows chin. Then pulling it towards her, her mouth open in anticipation of Willows lips.

Their lips meet, interlocking. Willow let out a sigh of pleasure as her lover nipped and sucked her bottom lip. Willow could feel a wave of desire rushing up her body, making her skin tingle and the hairs on her neck stand on end. She felt completely lost in Tara`s caress, everything outside just falling away.



Tara could feel herself getting carried away in the moment as she leant in further to start kissing Willows neck, the skin smooth and inviting to her invading mouth. Tara took a deep breathe, breathing in everything that was Willow, her natural scent and warmth. She breathed out slowly, a long drawn out moan rising from the depths of her desire. She continued her ministrations now starting to trace a small line of kisses and licks down Willows neck, stopping every now and then to suck and graze her teeth over the supple, tender skin, until she met Willows collarbone. The shapely hollow inviting her tongue to lick and tease at the flesh.



“Oh, baby” Willow mumored under her breath. Willows body was now screaming at her, every part of it was aching to be touched. She could feel Tara`s tongue grazing over her skin at an achingly slow pace, leaving a trail of fire in it`s wake. Willows nipples were now erect and straining at her top, seeking release and attention.



Tara tingled at the feel of her lovers words, she could feel Willows chest rising and falling beneath her. Willows body trying to lean into hers, despite the blockade that the tray was causing. Tara hurridly pushed the tray further down the bed, but Willows impatience showed as the tray hit the floor with a loud thump.



Both girls look up startled. “Oops”, Willow said realising what she`d done. “Oh, sweetie!”, “Well there goes breakfast”, Tara said trying to look annoyed but only managing to come across as relieved that the object that was keeping them apart had now gone.



Willows eyes burned over Tara`s body, as she imagined touching it, feeling it pressed against her naked body. Oh God, I want her sooooo bad. Please let the world fall away so we can be together, alone. She is so beautiful, so sexy.



Willows hands slid around Tara`s waist, pulling her back down onto the bed.

“Now then, where were we”, “Oh yeah, I remember” Willows sexy smile piercing Tara`s heart and sending shock waves through her body. Leaning back in submission Tara greeted her lovers touch, using one of her hands to cup Willows face, the other searching around the base of Willows nightshirt trying to locate skin. Brushing her thumb over her lovers cheekbone.



“Oh, Willow I love you so much”, Willow leaned in to silence her lovers words with a kiss, a small moan escaped her lips. Tara had found her prize, Willows breast was now filling her hand as she caressed it with her fingers. Her thumb lightly rubbing over her lovers erect nipple. Rolling it around gently, teasing it.

Willow shifted her body so that she was in between Tara`s warm thighs. Her body ached to be as close as possible to the object of her affection.



Willows hands started to drift around Tara`s body, reaching down to lift the offending clothing out of the way. Knowing she couldn`t accomplish that without lifting her body off her lovers, she sat up. Her hips pushing down harder onto Tara`s, she could feel Tara`s warmth even through the clothing. Mumbling a few small words to encourage Tara to lift her body up. Tara sat up, eye level with Willows breasts.



Tara lifted her arms up so that Willow could remove her clothing, once free of her restraints she started to unbutton Willows shirt. Folding back the flaps of material to reveal two small round, pert breasts. God, she is so beautiful, so prefect Tara thought as gazed upon her lovers taught body. She looked up at Willow with a sexy smile before she started down Willows body, her tongue guiding her down the valley in between Willows breasts, her lips barely touching skin as she continued her sweet torture. She could feel Willow arching into her mouth, demanding more, needing more. She could sit here and tease Willow all day, she loved pleasing her lover and she revelled in the fact that she could drive Willow crazy. She strayed from her path to meet Willows left breast with her tongue, she flicked it over the hard nub before she sucked it into her hungry mouth. She sucked and nipped at it gently, allowing her teeth to graze over the hot nub.



Willow shuddered with pleasure as her lover continued to worship her body. She slid her hands around the back of Tara`s head, pulling her in closer, her back arching into Tara`s mouth. She started grinding her hips into Tara`s, seeking some kind of release. Her pace slow and sensual.



“Oh, Tara….baby. I want you….so badly” her voice deep and probing. Tara could feel the hair on the back of her neck stand on end as her lovers arms wrapped around her shoulders, Willows chest forcing itself into her mouth with urgency and desire.

“Shirt”, Tara managed to say in between licks and nips. Immediately Willow started to shrug it down her shoulders until it landed in a heap at the bottom of the bed. Tara`s arms now roamed freely over Willows bare back, clawing her hands down the valley in between Willows shoulder blades, until she reached the top of her lovers pajama bottoms. She slid her hands deep inside the fabric and gently cupped Willows bum, her fingers pressing and kneading into the soft flesh.



Willow gasped, she was so close to the edge she was about to fall over. No, no, no, not yet, easy girl, oh god. Does she know what she is do…..oooooohhhh…ing to me. Oh goddess don`t stop! Oh yes! She tried to find some words to show her appreciation, but whenever she opened her mouth, nothing would come out, apart from gasps and moans. She could feel her own wetness trickling down her thighs, she needed release soon, like now!



Tara could sense Willows need and she was more than pleased to take this to the next level. She released one of her hands from Willows bum and started to slowly guide it around to the front to meet Willows centre. She paused when her hand reached Willows hip, caressing and squeezing the flesh she found there. Her thumb gently rubbing over the surface of Willows skin. She continued down further until her hand was just above Willows burning mound. She could feel her own heartbeat getting faster as she was getting to closer to Willows desire.



Willow could feel Tara`s hand above her mound and tried to push her hips up to into the caress. Wanting to will Tara on Willow moaned loudly.

“Oh god….baby please…..I need you….please enter me…I want to feel you, god yes” She said in between jagged breathes.



Then without warning Tara pressed her hand down, cupping Willows mound. She could feel Willows clit straining into her hand, the hard nub pressing against her burning palm. She teased her fingers through the mass of red curls, hardly touching the folds of her lover. She could feel Willow starting to press down onto her hand with urgency, unable to take much more of Tara`s torture. She decided that Willow had waited long enough and plunged her finger knuckle deep into Willows sex. She quickly withdrew and brought the finger up to her mouth, she hungrily licked off her lovers juices. The tangy, sweet fluid mixing with her saliva as she swallowed.



Willow watched as her lover tasted her, making her loins burn with desire and want. God she is so horny!……..I don`t think I can take much more of this! By the time she hadn`t finished thinking, the invading finger was now hovering around her entrance. She could feel Tara`s finger slightly dipping into her, no more than a couple of centimetres. By this time Willow could wait no longer and thrust herself down onto the teasing finger, it slid easily into her wetness, a thumb pressing hard at first against her clit.



Tara grinned inwardly at her lovers impatience, she wasn`t angry in any way. She deserved it after what she had been putting Willow through. She concentrated on meeting Willows thrusts, she hadn`t really been thinking about her own need, until now.



“Take your pants off” Tara said, a sense of urgency in her voice. Willow was reluctant at first as she was so near to releasing, but she obliged. She slipped off the end of the bed and ripped her pants down, meanwhile Tara was doing the same. Pants and boxers hit the floor with a light thump.



Willow launched herself back onto the bed, straddling Tara`s hips again. She pushed her centre down onto Tara`s as much as she could. Willow could feel tara open her legs slightly wider to allow better access to her own desire. Their pussies were now grinding into each other, both their clits rubbing together, Willow arched her back, leaning back to rest her hands on the end of bed to gain more leverage.



Tara could feel her own heat building inside her, she was matching Willow thrust for thrust, their pussies grinding hard into each other. Willows position allowed their clits to rub over each other, their juices now mingling together in a river of pure love and desire. Tara rested her hands either side of Willows hips, guiding her and forcing her down on each thrust.



Both girls were near the brink, a sheen of sweat covering both of them. Willow felt her body begin give in, until her orgasm over took her. It shook her to the core, such pure sexual release. “Oh god….Tara….oooohhhhh” she moaned aloud. Her thrusts became more urgent as she tried to soak up every last sensation. A warm rush washed through her body, every muscle tensed as she allowed it to take over.



On hearing Willows pleasure Tara felt her own orgasm creep up on her, her body tensing under Willows thrusts. She felt a wave overcome her as she threw her head back, arching up into Willow body. She moaned loudly saying Willows name over and over again until she was completely spent.



Both girls collapsed in a heap on the bed, breathing hard trying to regain composure.



Willow landed on Tara`s stomach, her head finding a nook in her lovers neck. She could feel Tara`s arms wrapped around her, pulling her further onto Tara`s body. Their breathing was ragged and neither of them could speak, neither of them really wanted to, they just wanted to soak up the moment.



“I love you so much Willow”, Tara managed in between deep breathes.



“I love you too, very much”, Willow replied. Pulling herself up slightly so she could look into her lovers deep blue eyes.



They laid there for a moment just gazing at each other, pure love mirrored in each face.



“Did I mention wow?”. Willow said with a chuckle, her face beaming.



“Huh, I know, wow, that was definitely, wow”, Tara replied. “Oh, yes, wow”



capricornmist
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby Karzia » Mon May 06, 2002 2:38 pm

Hey cool I get to be your first feedback:) Well what can I say.... WOW that was hot. Man ME shows a new ep. with smoochies in it and the Kittens write lotso smutt:D Life is good. I sure hope this is part one of a longer story:cool

T: "I think we can safely say we've lost our Library privileges"

"Final Exam" by: Tommo

Karzia
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby capricornmist » Mon May 06, 2002 3:40 pm

Thanks, I know it is probably littered with typos but didn`t have time to check it through properly plus my eyes felt like they were going to fall out of my head if I had to read through it again!



Sheesh over 20 views and only one comment, god I must suck! Oh well time to hang up my pen and quit the fanfic thang!





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"Nothing like gettin your ass kicked, to make your ass hurt!"

Buffy Series 5

capricornmist
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby TrueXena » Mon May 06, 2002 4:11 pm

NO NO NO!!! I swear I tried to comment after reading this, and my browser went all wonky on me. : Please dont hang up your pen. We need your pen!



Great job. Very sexy, very needy, very (shall I say?) smutty! Please feel free to make this part One of many. :)

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Tara: "C-can you just be kissing me now?" - in 'Entropy'

Tara: "Its good to be a chicken casserole." -in 'Answering Darkness' By: Sassette

TrueXena: "Get a taste of Religion. Lick a Witch!"

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Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby sydneysilver » Mon May 06, 2002 9:50 pm

see, people like it. i commented, and i rarely comment. be happy. and no hanging up of the pen, please.

Lindsey

"Was there a camel?

There was the front of a camel, a half-camel."

sydneysilver
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby The Next Tara Maclay » Sat May 25, 2002 8:40 pm

OOH AHHH!!!!

The Next Tara Maclay
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby BethanyB3 » Sat Jun 01, 2002 8:02 am

Oh,no don't hang up your keyboard!



There have probably been so few responses because you caused so many keyboards to melt from the heat. Luckily I keep a fire extinguisher nearby while reading the board.



~"If I could turn back time, I'd go where ever you would go."~ The Calling

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Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby Sheridan » Sun Jun 02, 2002 5:50 pm

capricornmist don't be discouraged. Frankly you will be lucky if you get 1 reply in 50, 1 in 75 is common. Keep going and keep writing.

Willow: ...I have to tell you....

Tara: No, I understand you have to be with the
person you l-love

Willow: I am

Sheridan
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby Lynz » Sun Jun 02, 2002 6:51 pm

yeh i agree, this was HOT!! keep going with it!



Lynz :bounce

Lynz
 


Re: FIC - Burning Remastered Edition

Postby MadeinNZ » Sun Jun 02, 2002 8:31 pm

Oh, yes, wow.

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"When someone falls for Willow, they stay fallen" - Normal Again

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