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 Post subject: Re: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2004 4:14 pm 
:bigwave Hiya Jeanne!! My! my! - the best feedback-giver for my own fic has now posted a fic of her own. Yay!! - And you know what? - From the taster I think it's gonna be a great read!! I can never get tired of the love between Willow and Tara. So please continue.....



As you know I'm more of a lurker and I actually came on to check 'Witches and Vixens' - but 'Pens' is like a drug to me and I'm a 'Pens junkie' so I couldn't resist a peek.... and wow your fic was the 1st so I just had to show my support - please keep up the great work.



Oh and also thanks bunches for the last feedback you left for my own fic - RL is in the way again but I promise to get back to it asap - I was actually in hospital for 2weeks recently, but I'm happy to say I'm doing okay now.



So I'll stop rambling now and I can't wait to read more of this fic.



Take care

:love WFB







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 Post subject: Re: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2004 4:26 pm 
Happy, fuzzy W/T fic. My favourite! Can't wait to see what else W has in store. Keep it up!



*snuggles down with a mug of hot choc and a duvet to wait for more*



cheers,

mo.

No matter how short life may seem, it's still the longest thing you'll ever do.



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 Post subject: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2004 4:36 pm 
Title - Happy Birthday

Author - Kindagay (Jeanne)

Rating - PG13

Disclaimer - None of the people in this fic belong to me.

Feedback - it's good for the soul. Good, bad or indifferent, I'd love it

Summary - It's Tara's birthday & Willow has a few surprises for her love

Notes - I posted this a while ago on extra flamey, but it's not there anymore & my girl told me to post it here, so, here it is. It's completed, so update's will be frequent.

Dedication - This is just for my girl. I love you baby :luv2



Now, on with the show.....



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On the morning of her twenty-fifth birthday, Tara Maclay woke to the smell of freshly brewed coffee. She sat up in bed and looked over at the tray that had been placed on the bedside table. It was laid out with two mugs of coffee, a jug of milk, a small veil containing a single red rose and a neatly folded piece of paper. Lifting the note to her nose, Tara breathed in a lavender/cinnamon scent that could only be described as ‘Willow’. After a brief moment of drifting away in the good memories that the smell conjured up, the blonde read her girlfriends’ message.



Tara,

Good morning my sweet, beautiful Birthday girl.

Stay right where you are, there’s more to come. This is going to be the best Birthday ever, I promise.

I’ll join you soon.

I love you.

Willow -x-




Tara added milk to one of the mugs then sat back waiting for Willow to join her. A few minutes later there was a gentle tap on the door followed by Willow’s soft voice

“Are you awake baby?” The redhead enquired as she quietly entered the room.

“Yeah Will, I’m awake.” Tara noticed that Willow was carrying another tray filled with various breakfast foods, including waffles, heart shaped pancakes (made with just a little help from Dawn), toast, cereal and various syrups and jams. “You didn’t have to do all this.”

“Oh, this is just the beginning.” The smaller wiccan replied with a distinct hint of excitement in her voice. She joined Tara on the bed and placed a tender, loving kiss on the blonde’s lips before handing her a large pink envelope. “Happy birthday baby.”

“Thank you.” Tara opened the envelope; it contained a card showing two teddy bears holding hands, surrounded by red and gold glittery hearts and, written in curly silver letters, were the words ‘Happy Birthday to a Special Girlfriend’. The message inside brought tears to Tara’s eyes.



My darling Tara,

There are not enough words in existence to even begin to describe how much I love you and how much better my life is because you’re in it. You are the reason I wake up smiling, the reason my dreams are full of sunshine and sweet music.

I still find it hard to believe that I actually found you and every day I have to remind myself that I’m not dreaming, that my life really is this wonderful.

You are the most beautiful, incredible, amazing person I have ever met and just to know you is the greatest blessing I've ever received.

I know I’ve told you before, but you own my heart, you complete my soul, you give me reason to breathe. I love you Tara Maclay, and I hope I can make this Birthday as special as you make every moment of my life.

Your ever loving Willow

xxx




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Well, that was just a taster of what's to come. Let me know what you think okay?



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

Edited by: maudmac  at: 5/21/04 9:46 am


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 Post subject: Re: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2004 10:45 pm 
This is just a happy fiction piece. Looking forward to more willow and tarowy goodness!! :flower



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 Post subject: Re: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 12:01 am 
Wow i nearly had tears in my eyes too:p geez dont write so emotional:p jk keep on going, i love ur fic already:)



Ur girl has to be a "special" person, cuz u wrote such a great & emotional story for her! Wish u 2 luck and all the love in this world:love



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!



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 Post subject: Re: Fic: Happy Birthday
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 12:16 pm 
So beautiful..really and truely wonderful so far :love . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Replies to feedback
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 5:09 pm 
Thank you to everyone who read this & a :flower to all those who left feedback. Now, on with the individual replies.



WFB: Hi there :wave . I was so happy to see your name in my thread, thanks for taking off your lurkers hat to leave me feedback.



I'm glad you're liking this so far. There's lots more Willow & Tara love to come, in fact, this whole fic is packed full of it. (What can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic).



RL can suck sometimes can't it. Sorry to hear about your recent hospital stay, I'm glad you're feeling better now.



Modjadji: Yep, lots of happy, fuzzy W/T goodness & I'm sure (or, at least, I hope) that you'll love the rest of Willow's surprises almost as much as Tara will.



LoLC2: A happy fiction piece, I couldn't have said it better myself. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.



SoL: Almost crying already? Well, I guess I must be doing something right then. Just wait until near the end :wink



Thank you so much for your good wishes for me & my girl. She really is very special.



Sam: Thanks for your feedback, glad you like it.





Okay, stay tuned kitties, update coming in a few minutes



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 5:21 pm 
See 1st post for disclaimers, etc...



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While Tara had read the card, Willow had removed several brightly coloured parcels from where they had been hidden underneath the bed. She took a moment to wipe the tears from Tara’s crystal blue eyes and receive a ‘thank you’ hug before handing the presents to the blonde.



“Anya helped me wrap.” The redhead felt the need to explain. As far as wrapping skills went, Willow was fairly hopeless.

“I’m sure you would have done it wonderfully by yourself.” According to Tara, anything that Willow did was wonderful, whether it turned out how it was meant to or not.

“Everyone else in the world would disagree, including me. Now get with the opening, the suspense is killing me.”



Anyone observing the scene would have thought it was Willow’s Birthday, but the hacker’s child-like enthusiasm was one of the things Tara loved most about her. The blonde smiled a smile full of adoration before replying.



“Jeez Will, it’s my birthday not yours. Besides, you know what they are, you bought them.”

“I know, but I want to see your face when you open them. I want to know that I did good with the present buying.”

“Well, you’ve always done good in the past.” Tara commented, remembering all the wonderful gifts Willow had given her in the six years that they had been together.

“Here, this one first.” Willow presented a rather large, squishy parcel. This was the ‘safe’ present, the one she knew for a fact that Tara would love.



Infected with her lovers’ excitement, Tara ripped at the paper, disregarding the effort that Anya had put in (at Willow’s insistence) to make the gifts look perfect. Concealed in the gift-wrap was a stuffed black and white cat, dressed in a purple and silver cape and witch’s hat, riding a broomstick. The blonde remembered trying to win the cuddly toy at an autumn fair that her, Willow, Buffy and Dawn had gone to recently, but she had not been strong enough to ring the big bell.



“How did you manage to win this? You didn’t use magically enhanced strength did you?” Tara enquired in a mock stern voice, accompanied by a playful scowl.

“No, no magic. I used a slayer; it’s much easier. You looked so disappointed when you didn’t win, but I knew I wasn’t strong enough either. So I made Buffy go back and win it while we were on the Ferris wheel. Being best friends with a slayer has a lot more advantages than just the obvious ones you know.”

“Obviously. I’ll have to remember to thank Buffy for this then.”

“Oh don’t worry, I’ve been doing her babysitting duties for the last three weeks. She’s been thanked.” Willow grimaced at the memory of looking after Anya and Xander’s two-and-a-half-year-old son. Although she loved her nephew to pieces, Joshua Harris gave a whole new meaning to the term ‘terrible twos’.

“Three weeks looking after Josh for one teddy, I think you came off worst in that bargain Will.”

“Nah, Joshua’s a sweetie. Besides, to see that look on your face I’d look after the little rascal every day for a year.” Tara raised her eyebrows sceptically, she didn’t believe that Willow could handle a full year with the tot, no matter how much of a sweetie she claimed he was. “Okay, so maybe not a full year. But I’d do my best if it meant getting to give you something that you really love. You do love it don’t you?”

“Yes baby, I love it.” And to confirm the statement she leant forward for a quick kiss.

“Good, now this one.”



The next two presents were a gold chain with a blue topaz teardrop pendent and matching drop earrings.



“They match your eyes baby, I saw them and I just couldn’t resist.”

“They’re beautiful Willow, really, beautiful.”

“Just like you.” An affectionate, honest smile accompanied this compliment. “Then, I thought you’re gonna need somewhere to keep them, so…”



The final present was a small mahogany trinket box, with two linked hearts engraved into the top, red velvet lining the inside and a tiny lock and key to ensure all valuables were extra safe.



“Darling, you didn’t have…”

“You’re worth it.” Willow interrupted before her girlfriend could even think about refusing the gifts. “Besides, I’ve still got a few more surprises up my sleeve.”

“Willow?” Tara’s honeyed voice was curious and intrigued as she considered what else could be in store for her. Her thoughts however were interrupted by a tap on the bedroom door.

“Is it okay to come in?” Dawn had learned the embarrassing way why you should never enter the room of two very affectionate lesbian witches without knocking first.

“Yeah Dawnie. No hot gay love to walk in on.” Willow had been enjoying spending time alone with Tara and wasn’t too happy about it being interrupted, so she had decided to get an innocent little dig in (she did enjoy making Dawn turn that deep crimson colour, and it still worked after a year and a half). She received a small scowl from Tara for her trouble, but that faded when the blonde saw the look of guilt it had provoked.

“I just wanted to give you your card before I went to college.”

“Thanks sweetie. And thanks for helping make the pancakes.” Tara smiled knowingly.

“Hey, I never said Dawn helped me.”

“Oh honey, you couldn’t make heart-shaped pancakes if your life depended on it.” The blonde stated affectionately.

“Well, that’s as may be, but I only had minimal help.”

“She did try her hardest Tara.” Dawn backed the redhead up, then, remembering Willow’s earlier dig, decided to reciprocate. “It was very entertaining, watching her totally freak out ‘cos she couldn’t get them just perfect. She was like Josh just before he has a temper tantrum, I swear, I thought she was gonna cry.” The younger girl laughed as she recalled the memory, but quickly stopped when she noticed the same scowl that Willow had just encountered adorn Tara’s face. “Sorry.”



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So, am I still doing good?



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 5:38 pm 
It's it good?...It's great..I love this fic...it's so cute...but please no more downing of the Willow...I get sad.



I think it's so cute that Willow was about to throw a temper tantrum about the heart-shaped pancakes for Tara. She should definitely get rewarded for a good birthday...*wink wink*...Update soon..this fic is really good...I'd like to see where it's going.







Tisha:kgeek ....hee hee hee...I like this little thing...*plays with the kitty*









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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2004 6:01 pm 
Awwwwww very cute and lovely. I'm glad I'm not the only one that is grift wrapping challenged!!!!



Jill

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Willow - Say, you all didn't happen to do a bunch of drugs did ya?



My Home Page | Amber Powered | Alyson Powered



There is a little bit of Amber in all of us.



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2004 12:10 am 
:lol Dawnies and Willows interaction was so hilarious heheheh Ok but Dawn can go now and Willow cangive Tare her other pressies! What ever that might be!;)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti





Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2004 8:24 am 
Aww..so lovely :heart . Great update. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2004 9:53 am 
This is great. The cat with the witch's hat is so cute. Nice touch. Also I loved the fact that Anya and Xander have a kid an that he is mischevious, it's fitting. Can't wait for more!:bigwave



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 Post subject: Re: Part 2
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2004 4:14 pm 
I remember this fic from when it was on Extra Flamey, however, I never got to finish reading it. Thanks for posting it here. More soon, please? :bounce



~Mikaelah



~In Loving Memory Of Trish~

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


~~Truly and Forever~~



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 Post subject: Re: Replies to part 2 feedback
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2004 6:42 am 
Hi all :wave ,

Big thanks to everyone who's reading & enjoying this fic. & once again a :flower for everyone who left feedback.





Sapphos Dream: Wow! You're first ever post & it's feedback to my fic, I feel so honoured. :) Thank you



I'm sorry if it seemed like I was being down on Willow, it was just a bit of friendly teasing. But I promise I'll be nice to her from now on.



I'm glad you liked Willow's near temper tantrum. Just wanted to get the point across that Willow wants everything perfect for Tara's special day. Nothing but the best for Willow's girl.



WillowPowered: Glad you're enjoying it.



Yeah, Willow is gift wrapping challenged too. As I was writing about Tara's gifts I remembered the scene in No Place Like Home, when Willow attempts to wrap something for a customer at the Magic Box but she doesn't do very well.



SoL: I'm glad you enjoyed the Willow/Dawn interaction. Don't worry, Dawn's gonna go, but I need her to came back later because she has a very important job to do.



Sam: Glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for the sweet feedback.



LoLC2: I thought the witchy cat was cute too & it seemed like an absolutely perfect gift for our favourite blonde wiccan.

We'll get to meet Anya & Xander's son soon, & then you'll see just how much of a terror he is.



Mikaelah: Thanks for remembering this fic & for liking it enough to read it again.

Hopefully you'll get to finish reading it this time & I hope you feel that the ending was worth waiting for.





Okay, kitties, update coming up soon



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Part 3
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2004 6:55 am 
See part 1 for disclaimers etc.



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After Dawn had left, Tara had eaten breakfast while Willow drew her a relaxing bubble bath. The two witches had bathed together, simply enjoying being wrapped up in each other's arms; they had then dried each other and, reluctantly, got dressed.



Willow prepared a picnic feast in the back yard for lunch. While waiting for Buffy and Dawn to arrive, the Birthday girl sat on a sun-lounger chatting to Willow, Anya and Giles, while Joshua happily ran rings around an exhausted Xander.



“Auntie Tara?” Joshua, having got bored of tiring his father out, ran up to the wiccan and jumped into her lap energetically.

“Yes Joshie?”

“Time for num nums and presents?” It was the eighth time in the past half an hour that the small boy had asked the question. He didn’t understand why they were waiting when the food and presents were just sitting in the house doing nothing.

“Not yet baby boy, we have to wait for Buffy and Dawn to get home.” Tara patiently explained yet again.

“No fair, Josh hungry.” A pet lip and defiantly crossed arms accompanied this statement, a forewarning of a possible tantrum. Thankfully though, Tara knew just how to handle the troublesome tot.

“Well I’m sure if you’re very sneaky, auntie Willow wouldn’t notice you go and pinch a few cheese crackers.” Tara’s voice was softer than usual and, as Josh listened to the plan, his defensive posture was lost and replaced with a mischievous grin. “But remember, you have to be very sneaky.”

“Okay, I be sneaky.” The toddler promised as he slipped off his favourite auntie’s knee before tiptoeing towards the house.

“Where are you going young man?” Anya’s mock stern voice called after her son.

“Pinching some crackers.” The boy announced as he walked through the back door.

“So much for being sneaky.” Giggled Willow. “I thought you’d have taught him better than that Anya.”

“I tried, but he’s a very slow learner, and Xander insisted that we teach him to be honest. Honesty and sneaky just don’t mix. He’ll never make a decent demon.”

“Honey, our son is not a demon.”

“That’s debatable.” The slayer’s voice argued from the porch where she stood with the boy’s wriggling and screaming form slung over her shoulders. “Is he supposed to be eating already?”

“Yes, auntie Tara said. Put me down, put me down.” Buffy received several kicks and punches from her captive before Tara jumped to his defence.

After hearing the blonde witch back her nephew up, Buffy finally set him down and attempted an apology. Josh however, was having none of it and ran crying to his mother.

“Auntie Buffy’s mean. She said I lie, Joshua not lie mommy.” The very red-faced child screamed, whilst aggressively kicking Anya’s chair.

“I know you don't lie. Auntie Buffy is very sorry, right Buffy?”

“Oh, yes, absolutely.” The petite blonde agreed with Anya desperate to drag the little boy out of his bad mood before he got really bad. Unfortunately, it wasn't working, and Josh had now thrown himself on the floor, screaming and crying.



Once again it was up to Tara to come to the rescue, kneeling next to the worked up little boy she gently rubbed his back until he quietened down. Then in the softest tone she could manage she spoke to her nephew.

“Auntie Buffy's sorry Josh. It's just, you were doing such a good job of being sneaky that she didn’t know you were being honest. She knows now and she is really, really sorry. Tell you what, why don’t we get the picnic started? Now that everyone's here. Then you can eat all you want Joshie. And after that, we’ll do the presents.” Once again, Tara had succeeded in calming the toddler down. She even talked him into helping Willow carry all the food out by telling him he’d be ‘a very helpful little soldier’ for doing so.



“How do you do it Tara? He just changes instantly for you.” Xander asked in wonderment, desperate to learn the secret of keeping his son under control.

“I’m not sure, I don’t think it’s anything, really, just, umh p-patience and, erm…” The blonde turned a light shade of pink as her innate shyness kicked in.

“Magic?” Dawn suggested, seeing how much Tara was struggling.

“Oh definitely, my girl’s got the magic touch. Plus, Josh absolutely adores her, and I personally can’t blame him, she’s very adorable. Also, it’s absolutely impossible to stay in a bad mood when you see that gorgeous half-smile, or, oh, when she uses that really sweet, gentle voice.”

Everyone rolled their eyes as Willow launched into a babble-fest about her most favourite topic. Noticing the stares she was receiving the redhead muttered a quick apology then retreated back to the house for the last plate of food.



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Let me know if you're still enjoying it



Hugs

Jeanne



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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 3
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2004 7:40 am 
:party :party Go Jeanne! Go Jeanne!.... Heehee I couldn't resist doing that - this fic is so cool!! And that last update was such fun!! Willow is really so cute here and I love Tara's calming effect on 'Joshie' - Awww.... but then again it IS Tara after all ! Also :lol LOL at 'mean' Auntie Buffy. Heh.



Guess what Jeanne? - I too have read this fic before on Extra Flamey - but I only realised after your second update which had more detail than the taster..... BUT I'm still loving it!! - mostly because it's not until I read your updates that I remember more fully... so it's kinda like I'm reading it for the first time, thus making me VERY eager to read more. Keep up the great work please - you're doing SO good.



Did you post as 'kindagay' in Extra Flamey? I'm just curious.... partly because I feel like a dope over the fact that I've read(AND TOTALLY LOVED) 2 other fics you wrote without knowing it was you who wrote them!! Um, I doubt that made sense, I'll try again - The 2 fics were 'First Date' & 'First Kiss' which I read before I noticed you were a frequent 'feedbacker' of mine :bow - so it didn't register until recently when I visited the completed fics archive. Your fics rock!!



BTW thanks for your kind words in the reply you made to my last feedback.



Also please know that even if I don't leave feedback often - I'm definitely lurking and reading and surely loving this fic lots!!!



Hope to see another update soonest.



:love WFB



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 Post subject: Re: Part 3
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2004 10:30 am 
Awww..that was so incredibly sweet and wonderful, and I can't wait for more. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Part 3
PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2004 11:11 am 
Hahaha Willow is so adorable, when she is bubbling about her fav topic. And Tara is a great mom!;) She has that special something with kids:)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!



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 Post subject: Re: Replies to Part 3 feedback
PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2004 4:46 pm 
Many, many thanks to everyone who is reading & enjoying this little creation of mine. Another :flower for those who left feedback.



WFB: Hi there :wave ,

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic feedback. I'm so flattered that one of my favourite pens writers thinks that my fics rock. :stop

Yeah, Willow is pretty cute ain't she, & I'm glad you liked the Tara/Josh stuff, I had so much fun writing the interactions between them.



Yay! :bounce Someone else remembers this fic from Extra Flamey. I'm glad you remembered it & enjoyed it enough to read it again. I hope you like it just as much when reading it for the second time around.

& I actually posted on EF as 'vamp willow', I didn't become 'kindagay' until I joined this board.



It means a lot to know that you're lurking & loving this fic of mine. The update won't be long (just a few minutes actually).

So, any chance of an update to GROWW? :pray I'm having withdrawals.



Sam: Thanks so much for the kind praise, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Update coming soon



SoL: I have to agree with you, Willow is definitely adorable. Tara is a great mom (or, auntie in this fic) isn't she. I had so much fun with little Joshie, & I loved writing the Tara/Josh stuff.



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Update coming in a few minutes, stay tuned kitties



Hugs

Jeanne





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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 4
PostPosted: Tue May 18, 2004 4:55 pm 
This is just a short one, but I'm hoping you still enjoy. The next part will be extra long to make up for it.



See part 1 for disclaimer etc



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The rest of the picnic went smoothly with only a minor tantrum when Josh was told that there was no jelly left. He soon cheered up when Willow asked him to help her bring the presents out and he was even allowed to help open them, although most of them were rather boring (to a two year old anyway).



There was a new magic book from Giles, brought back from one of his trips to England.

Anya and Xander gave her ‘a custom made Harris original wiccans’ handy storage system thingy’ (in Xander’s words) or, ‘a spice rack that you keep spell ingredients in instead of cooking ingredients’ (as Anya described it).

Dawn, being the sentimental but poor college student that she was, had filled a scrapbook with carefully selected photos of the whole gang and spelled out the words ‘Tara’s Family’ on the front in green, red and gold glitter. At the sight of the first photo (her and Willow slow dancing at the Bronze’s last Valentines party) Tara had choked up and decided it was the most thoughtful gift she’d ever received.

From Buffy was a collection of smellies including; a bottle of Tara’s favourite bath oil; some vanilla scented shampoo; body lotion; several colourful soaps and four scented candles.

Finally, wrapped in blue and purple tissue paper, was a small plastic key fob in the shape of a witch’s broom.



“I sawed it when Daddy and Buffy were getting the yucky smelly stuff...” Joshua started to explain

“And he stood in the middle of the shop screaming until I agreed to buy it for you.” Xander jumped in, completing the story for his son.

“Well it was definitely worth screaming for. It’s great Joshie, thank you.” Tara chuckled as her nephew beamed proudly at her.



As two ‘o’ clock had approached Buffy announced that she had to get back to work. Anya and Xander left shortly after so they could take Josh to playgroup. Then finally Giles made some excuse about expecting a delivery at the Magic Box. Only Dawn (who had no afternoon classes to attend) and Willow remained, they cleared away all the rubbish and picnic leftovers whilst Tara disappeared upstairs to find homes for her new belongings.



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Like I said, just a short one, but still let me know if it's good, please



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 4
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2004 3:54 am 
Cute update..I love Josh..he sounds so sweet :love . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Part 4
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2004 5:25 pm 
Hey all, :wave

Thanks to everyone who's reading this, I hope you're all still enjoying it.



Sam: A :flower for your lovely feedback, thanks for reading this & always taking the time to leave a comment. Josh is kinda sweet it his own little way, I'm glad you like his character, I really enjoyed writing him.



& a :flower to all of you who are reading, I know there's quite a few of you. Thanks for sticking with my little story, I promise (I hope) you'll all like where it ends.



A nice long update (as promised) coming in a few minutes



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Part 5
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2004 5:38 pm 
Ta da! A nice long update just for you lovely kitties.

See part 1 for disclaimer etc



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“Time for a movie?” Dawn was slumped on the couch flicking through channels.

“Sure. You pick one I’ll go get Tara.”

Dawn went and retrieved Tara’s favourite movie from the video cabinet as Willow made her way upstairs.



“Tara, honey? Dawn’s putting a vid on, you gonna join us?”

“Yeah, just a second.”

“Whatcha doing?” Willow regarded her girlfriend curiously. She was sat on their bed, the photo album from Dawn on her lap, staring off into space.

“Just thinking.” A small smile graced her face as she turned to her lover.



Willow made her way into the room and sat next to Tara on the bed. She stole a quick peek at the page her lover had stopped at. Seeing a photo of Tara and herself holding an hour old Joshua in the maternity ward of Sunnydale hospital, the redhead smiled too.

“Who’d have thought he’d grow up into such a monster?” Willow joked.

“I thought you said he was a sweetie? I wasn’t thinking that anyway.”

“He is a sweetie, a sweet monster, if such a thing actually exists.”

“I’m sure it does.” A short silence as both women regard the picture in front of them.

“So? You wanna tell me what you were thinking?” Willow fished, it didn’t matter if Tara didn’t want to share, but the least she could do was convey her interest.

“Stuff.”

“Such as?”

“We kinda take it all for granted don't we?”

“What?”

“Everything we have, we never question it. We live on the Hellmouth, in a town full of evil, yet our lives are so full of happiness and love. How can you have that much good in a place that's so full of bad?”

“I guess it all just needs balancing out. 'Cos of the extra strong evil of the Hellmouth, there has to be extra strong goodness, otherwise the scales get all wobbly and everything falls to pieces.” Failing to remove the deep pensive look on her girlfriend's face, Willow hastened to add “Baby, I never take you, or us, for granted. I know how blessed and lucky I am to have you in my life. Tara, what we have, there are no words… I can't even begin to comprehend how precious, how… You're my everything baby, my whole world, you know that right?”

“Yes Will, I know. I love you so much. What did I ever do to deserve such a sweet, caring, amazing girlfriend?”

“You were born, and you exist. That's enough, more than enough.” A moment's silence as the two lovers just sat holding each other, both overwhelmed by how much love and happiness existed between, and around them. “You ready for a movie? I think Dawn's putting your favourite on.”

“Oh, the aristocats? Today just keeps getting better and better.”



It was almost half past five when the three girls had sung and giggled their way through The Aristocats. Willow realised that it was time to go and make a few more arrangements and preparations for Tara's big birthday surprise. After making her apologies and promising her girlfriend that a bit of time apart was a small price to pay for what was coming, the redhead made sure Dawn knew her part of the plan and promised to return at seven on the dot.



“You know what she's up to don't you Dawnie?” Willow's hushed conversation with the youngest Summers had not gone unnoticed by the blonde beauty and, as much as she loved surprises, she was more than a little curious about what was going on.

“All I know is my part of the plan, but if I told you, a bit of your surprise wouldn't be a surprise any more. You'll find out soon enough.” The younger girl chuckled as the wiccan began mock sulking.

“What's so funny?”

“Oh it's just, I thought what with you turning twenty-five, you'd be, uh, a teeny bit less like a kid? You're being almost as bad as your nephew at the minute, and your nephew, is Joshua Harris.” Dawn emphasised the young boys name as if he was world famous for sulking. Which, in all fairness, he could well have been.

“That's not a nice thing to say, about Josh or me. I really don't think you should upset a powerful witch on her birthday.” Although Tara's genuine threats could strike fear in most people (and a few demons too if they went near Willow); her mock-threats provoked more laughter than dread. So, of course, Dawn burst into a fit of laughter and Tara could do nothing but watch forlornly. Thankfully the episode was interrupted by a knock on the door which instantly pulled Dawn out of her giggle-fest.

“Oh, you should answer it. It'll be your dr…, erm, your surprise, I mean.”



By this point Tara was as excited as most young children are on Christmas morning. She rushed to the door and almost pulled it off its hinges in her haste to find out what her surprise was. Unfortunately, only a disgruntled Buffy stood in the doorway.



“I snapped my key, there was a demony thing that needed me to kill it on my way home. Who'd have thought you could use a door key as a weapon?” The slayer asked nobody in particular, mainly because no one was really listening. “Aren't you even a little bit happy to see me home, safe, after my encounter with evil?” She added when she noticed the disappointed looks of the two women in the hallway.

“Sorry Buffy, we thought you were the deliveryman with Tara's next presents. We're both very glad that you're home and that you, once again, stand victorious in your fight against all things bad.” The sarcasm in her little sisters voice was not lost on Buffy, but, even she had to admit that stories of defeating demons and vampires were getting a little bit boring nowadays, as they would if you heard them at least once daily for almost nine years.

“Present-S as in, plural? There's more than one present? What are they? Are they all from Willow? Why isn't she here to give me them?” Rather than noticing the sarcasm, Tara had picked up on Dawns use of an 's' on the end of the word present and her excitement level had risen to an almost unbearable amount.

“Okay, lets see. Yes. Yes. Wait and see. Yes they are. She's busy organising yet more surprises for you. And, before you ask, I don't know what exactly it is she's doing or where she is.” After living with three over-protective sisters (even if two of them weren't proper sisters) for the past four years, Dawn had mastered the art of answering a barrage of questions all at once and to anticipate what other questions might follow.



Thankfully, before Tara could think of any more questions, there was another knock at the door.



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& we'll find out who is at the door, in the next update



Let me know if you're still liking this; or if you want to make any guesses about what Tara's presents might be; or even to speculate about what Willow might be up to. :hmm



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Re: Part 5
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2004 5:58 pm 
Definitely liking this fic and more. That was a sweet moment between Willow and Tar. I was motivated to look up you first 2 fics in the Pens archive: First Kiss and First Date both were romantic and fun. I also enjoy Out of Character and Just Because. Please keep going! I love the idea of celebrating Tara's 25th birthday.



Now my guess as to what Tara's present may be are ... well... hmmm. I'm guessing that Dawn's remark "It'll be your dr..." ends in dream rather than surprise (course I'm rereading my Sandman graphic novels so I have dream on the brain). My guess as her final present is that Willow will find a way for them to conceive a child. I suspect that Willow is off preparing a special trip for the two of them. And I'm a really bad guesser.



Still thank for posting this fic. :pride



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 Post subject: Re: Part 5
PostPosted: Fri May 21, 2004 2:27 am 
So lovely :heart . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Replies to Part 5 feedback
PostPosted: Fri May 21, 2004 6:08 pm 
Hi kitties :wave

Thanks to everyone who is still reading & enjoying my fic. A :flower for you all.



Sam7777: Thank you for your kind feedback. I means so much to me that you enjoy this enough to seek out my other fics. I'm so glad that you like them all.



Those were some interesting guesses, I like the way you're thinking. I'm not gonna tell you if they were right or not though, you'll just have to keep reading to find out.



Sam: Thanks for the feedback, glad you're enjoying it still.



Okay all you lovely people, an update shall follow shortly



Hugs

Jeanne

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe



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 Post subject: Part 6
PostPosted: Fri May 21, 2004 7:17 pm 
Here you go, part 6, hope you enjoy

See 1st post for disclaimer etc



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Both Tara and Dawn’s faces lit up as they raced to get to the door which, once again was very nearly removed from its hinges. The slightly startled deliveryman was holding several boxes in one hand, and had a long black clothes bag draped over the arm holding his clipboard.



“Delivery for a Miss Tara Maclay, is that one of you two?” The blonde in question nodded her head. “I need a signature, just next to the cross.” As Tara signed in the space indicated, Dawn relieved the man of the boxes, then Tara took the clothes bag and gushed a quick 'thank you' before closing the door.



The Summers sisters were sat on the couch eagerly waiting for Tara to join them so they could find out what was hidden in the packages. Although Tara did walk into the living room, instead of opening her presents, she picked up the boxes and took them all up to her and Willow's room. Her two curious friends followed closely behind her, but as they got to the top of the stairs Tara pushed the bedroom door closed, preventing them both from entering.



“What's with the shutting us out? We wanna see what you've got.”

“Yeah Tara, you shouldn't open birthday presents alone, it's, um, it's bad luck. Yeah that's right, you don't want bad luck do you?” Dawn was proud of her little tale, Buffy obviously wasn't though because she just frowned and questioningly mouthed the words 'bad luck' to her sister, before shaking her head and rolling her eyes. At this point Tara's head appeared around the bedroom door, she smiled cheekily and poked her tongue out.

“I think these are the kind of presents that Willow would want to see before I let anyone else see them.” Tara explained. Both of the Summers girls knew that this was true and couldn't think of any decent reasons why they should be allowed to share the surprises with the blonde witch.

“Well if you're not gonna let me in there I'm gonna have to spoil your next surprise.” The youngest girl started to explain, but Tara's head reappeared before Dawn could say anything else.

“No, no spoiling the surprise. I have a feeling I know what your part of the plan is. Give me a few minutes to open my pressies, then you can come in and help me do my hair and make-up. Okay?” The blonde knew her girlfriend so well. Her little wicca wouldn't buy her new clothes if she didn't have somewhere special to wear them to, Willow wanted Tara dressed up in her presents ready for a 'surprise' night out. The wiccan was so busy thinking about what Willow could have planned, she almost completely forgot about the still unopened parcels. Only almost though.



She started with the boxes, deciding to leave the dress-length one hung on the wardrobe door until last. Firstly, there was a pair of pale blue, open-toed, ankle strap sandals. A small matching purse with a diamante heart at the press-stud fastening was the next thing opened. The final box contained a silk shawl that was a slightly lighter shade of blue than the shoes and purse, with silver edging.



“Now, lets see what we have in here.” Tara stated excitedly as she unzipped the clothes bag and feasted her eyes on what was hidden within. “Oh, wow.” She almost hardly managed to whisper; she was breath-taken by the garment that Willow had chosen for her and a happy little tear formed in the corner of her eye.



An ankle-length dress made of the finest, baby-blue silk was revealed to the over-the-moon blonde. It had thin double straps and a v-shaped neckline, with a diamante; heart, matching the one on the purse, just below the strap on the left breast. A slit from the ankle to just above the knee ran down the right-hand side and there was a shimmering over-skirt sewn in from just above the waist which was only slightly longer than the main skirt of the dress. The bottom of the skirt had the same silver edging as the shawl.



“Tara? Are you done yet, it's time to get you ready?” Dawn had tapped on Tara's door a few times but after receiving no response from its occupant she had decided to push the door open slightly and snap the blonde out of her awe-struck stupor.

Tara reacted quickly; zipping the bag back up before the curious youngster could glimpse a peek at the dress.

“Sure Dawnie, umh, make-up first?”

“Can't I see the dress first? So I know what I'm working with.”

“Nice try, but no. It's pale blue, that's all you need to know.”



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Hope you enjoy, let me know if you do.



Hugs

Jeanne



(Edited to make it a bit longer)

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Tara: “Let me guess – you want me to lie on your lap while you feed me grapes, but my sweet, shy, precious, honey you’ve been too shy to ask – yes?” - GROWW by WannaFriendsBe

Edited by: kindagay at: 5/22/04 9:30 am


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 Post subject: Re: Part 6
PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2004 9:22 am 
Aww..that dress sounds so pretty :love . Beautiful update. Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Part 6
PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2004 8:18 am 
:lol i wonder why Dawn isnt allowed to see the dress?! or have i missed something????:hmm m



I can imagine Tara in that dress and i bet Willow is wearing a green one, which is matching with her green eyes:love Oh oh that will be a great date:D



Cu:wave

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Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!



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